what if the factions didnt fall? a Tobias and Tris Fanfiction

by Lizbear7

What if The Dauntless never attacked abnegation. What if Tris and Tobias stayed in Dauntless. In this fanfiction there is drama, romance, heartbreak, and betrayal. My fanfiction is set about a year after Tris's initiation into Dauntless. Will Tris and Tobias's relationship last? I guess you will have to read to find out more!

20. Chapter 20

So, I kind of want to end this story.

but I will Try to write a sequel and yeah. hope you enjoy!

this is the last chapter in this story!

lizbear7

POV-Tobias

it has been 3 weeks of having Emily home, and Tris is about ready to jump into the chasm. I am trying to help, I really am. but Tris won't except help.

"OH MY GOD EMILY! why won't you just shut up!" Tris yells in frustration. While pinning Emily to the wall.

"Tris!." I say.

"what Tobias!" she replies. her hair matted, eyes puffy.

"Tris, you cant yell at your 3 week old daughter, or pin her up against the wall! she does not know any better." I yell.

"Tris, why won't you just except my help?" I ask.

"Tobias?! I can handle this on my own." she retorts.

I am about to lose it.

"Look at you Tris! Your hair is matted, your eyes are puffy! you are falling apart! you know if you just excepted a little bit of help, you would not look like this, and.."

"and what Tobias."

"you would not be treating Emily like that."

I don't think either of us saw this coming, but she was right when she said I was not going to become my father, because she is.