Before I start, I need to get this off my chest. I'm trying to write an OC Story, as in a story filled with nothing but OC characters. However, it appears that OC Stories is not a thing here! The OC story I'm working on appears to be looked down on! I'm only one chapter in the story, and I still have FUCKING NOTHING! No Favs, no Followers, no Reviews, no nothing! This site is called FANfiction! It about writing stories based on your ideas. Not writing something down from just what you know the best!
My OC Story is based on one of the Transformations from Shantae and the Seven Sirens. But that's it. The rest of the story is about the main character I created name Sally Electron. Sally is a 15-year-old student who, because her body makes her look like a supermodel, is raped every day by the teachers and students. She is then kidnapped by strange creatures that try to turn her into one of them. She is recused and is also already been halfway transform into them. She spends a month with her rescuers, claiming to try to find a cure for her but in truth was study her because she could transform into a Mecha form of the creatures. Sally had enough and escape and went back home to her parents. She tells them everything and they move out of the town when no one does a thing to what happened to Sally. I cover half of Sally's origins in the first chapter and the next one was about Sally starting a new life in a new home and cover more of her origins.
However, no one seems to care. My idea is looked down on. I was even thinking about turning it into a series with the rest of the Transformations from the Seven Sirens, but if the first idea is not working out, then I'm not going to bother. Heck, I might just forget the whole thing and delete the OC Story. When you working on something and no one seems to notice the work you put into it then what's the point of trying to do more if they don't. That upsets me and makes me stop writing that story and never go back to it.
Let me say this again, this site is called FANfiction! If OC stories are not a thing here, then what's the point of writing one? The OC Story I work on is called Electron Power but no one seems to care much about it to even take notices. I have over 40 people that read the first chapter but they haven't said anything. If they are waiting for the next chapter, then they are too late. If the first chapter is not good enough to catch people's interest then there will be no second chapter! And that really upsets me! This story is a single-story, though it appears as a crossover over, and it appears to one of my most popular stories so far. My OC story? Nope, not good enough. I place it under the Misc Games section because it was using an idea from a game that turns into its own story. And that not the first time I wrote an OC Story!
So, Electron Power is not going to be work on anymore. If an idea doesn't work out then what's the point of continuing it. I said it once, I said it twice, and now I'll say it again, THAT REALLY FUCKING UPSETS ME!
There, rant is done. But I meant what I said if OC Stories are not a thing, then what's the point? Now on to chapter of this story. I asked you guys/girls if the next chapter should be about Danny's and Clyde's date or something else for now. I didn't get any answers. So I'm going to go ahead and write something different because different since I need some more time to plan out Danny's and Clyde's date. And since Sue needs more time to get her army ready, I'm going to have Danny and the girls spend time at Floody Waters, you know the Water Park from Unlucky in Love, I think it was called. It has been a while since I watch any Danny Phantom episodes. Anyways, let's get this started.
Danny flew over the town chasing after the Box Ghost who came to annoy him, for the 52nd time this week!
"Will...you...just...say...in...the...Ghost...Zone!" Danny shouted, firing each ectoblast at each word he said.
"Never! You will soon learn to fear the wrath of the Box Ghost!" He shouted before dodging a blast that was arming at his head.
"The only wrath I'll be facing is my girlfriends if you make me late!" Danny shouted.
"Beware!" The Box Ghost shouted before she flew into something.
He looks up and saw he crash into Clyde who was looking down on him. The Box Ghost flew back scare as Danny stopped.
"Clyde?" He asked.
"Hey Danny, we were wondering what was taking you and we figure another ghost had shown up. Turns out we were right." She said.
"Wait you know her?" The Box Ghosts asked Danny.
"She's is one of my girlfriends," Danny told him.
"HER?! But she'll beat you to the inch of your afterlife if you bad mouth her sisters! She's like the Ghost King, but way worst!" He shouted.
"He's the one you beat up when someone talks smack about your sisters?" Danny asked.
"Yeah, and I didn't beat him to the inch of his afterlife. I only threw one punch and he started crying like a baby." Clyde told him.
"Yeah, I get that," Danny said, knowing he does use the Box Ghost to take his anger out on.
"So what's he doing here?" Clyde asked.
"Trying to be scary and take over the world with "cardboard boxes of doom" again," Danny said.
Clyde sighs and shook her head.
"No wonder everyone calls him the useless ghost in the Ghost Zone." She said.
"The only time he did became a threat is when he got his hands on Pandora's Box," Danny said.
"HE DID WHAT?!"
Everyone turns and saw Blinky, Pinky, and Inky flew up shocked.
"How did he get his hands on that?" Pinky asked.
"He stole it." Danny answer.
"You stole from Pandora? Do you have any idea how serious that is?!" Blinky shouted.
"Stealing from other ghosts is just as bad as humans doing it!" Inky shouted as well.
"I end up finding Pandora and help her get her box back. The Box Ghost had to work for her to pay off what he has done." Danny said.
"Okay, at this point you might as well said you made friends with just about every powerful ghost because no one even thinks to bother Pandora!" Blinky said, knowing that Danny had met Frostbite and his tribe, as well as Clockwork.
"Well, I can't really say that. I have no idea how many ghosts are in the Ghost Zone and I don't think anyone bothers to count." Danny said.
Blinky sighs and took notices that the Box Ghosts was trying to sneak away.
"Hold it you!" She shouted and flew in front of him.
The Box Ghost flinch and back away from her.
"Now you listen here! It's bad enough that you bug mine and my sister's boyfriend every time, but stealing from Pandora is something we are not going to let you get off scot-free!" She said as her sisters surround him.
"Boyfriend?!" The Box Ghost shouted.
"Just let me know when you're done," Danny said and flew away.
"Wait!" The Box Ghost shouted and look at the four angry ghost girls.
"Um, Beware?"
Danny stood in front of the Girl's house and soon saw them flew down next to him once they knew the area was safe.
"So, how did it go?" Danny asked them.
"Let's just say that he won't be bugging you for some time," Inky said.
Danny just nodded. He knew better to ask any more.
"So, what's the plan you girls have?" Danny asked them instead.
"Well, since summer is started in a few days, we want to check out the Water Park in town," Blinky said, smirking.
"You mean Floody Waters?" Danny asked.
"That's the one. Just let us get our things and we'll be on our way." Pinky said.
"Um, Girls. I didn't bring any of my swimwear." Danny said, due to not being told beforehand.
"Don't worry. I brought you one." Pinky said and hand him a bag.
Danny looks in and pulls out a black part of shorts with white lines on the side. Danny notices it just like his jumpsuit a bit.
"Where did...?" Danny started to ask.
"Turns out Danny Phantom is still popular enough to have something being sold. Those shorts were made in the colors of his." Pinky said.
"I didn't approve of this," Danny whispered to himself.
"Come on, Danny! Let's hit the water!" Blinky cheer.
Danny signs and nods. He might as well seeing the girls in their swimsuits and get it over with.
Floody Waters Park...
Danny stepped out of the men's changing room wearing his new shorts and felt a little shy about not having a shirt on. He stood waiting for the girls to come out. He couldn't stop picturing the girls in their swimsuits.
'Come on Fenton. You're not a pervert! You had your fun doing that on your first trip and now you have done enough. Plus the girls won't forgive you if they found out.' Danny thought.
Soon the door open and Clyde step out. She was wearing an orange sleeveless shirt and an orange pair of shorts. Danny raises an eyebrow, but remembering Clyde wasn't girly like her sisters. She did give off a vibe of being a tomboy. Next Inky stepped out, she as wearing a cyan one-piece swimsuit, which surprise Danny. She didn't strike as a girl who would wear something like that. Before he could ask, Pinky step out next. She had a pink two-set swimsuit on showing her mid-section and belly. Her top had some blue on it to make it stand out. Then Blinky steps out and Danny blush. Just like Pinky warn him, Blinky was wearing a red bikini and luckily didn't appear to show off too much.
"What do you think?" Blinky asked him.
"Clyde and Pinky are what I excepted. Through Pinky warning me about your choice. It just Inky that caught me by surprise." Danny said truthfully.
"I can understand that. I'm not like Pinky or Blinky, but sometimes I do show off some of my skin. Just not as much as Blinky." Inky told him.
Well, glad to hear that you like these. I must say, you look so handsome without a shirt. I almost want to drag you underwater and have our "fun" there." Blinky said. licking her lips.
"Blinky. We are here to spend time with Danny and have fun the right way. Plus he still needs to go on a date with me and Clyde." Inky said.
"Yes, we had agreed to treat this as a normal day between friends," Pinky added.
"I know. Still, he does look good without a shirt right?" Blinky told them.
The three look at him and nodded. Danny sighs and soon they started to head to the places to find some fun to have. And not the type of fun Blinky was talking about.
Elsewhere in the water park...
Dash, Kwan, Paulina, and Star all enter the park and change into their swimsuits. Paulina lay in the sun, daydreaming about the Ghost Boy. Dash headed up to the water slide and Kwan and Star went swimming in the pool. Dash just exit the slide and hear Paulina moans. Dash rolled his eyes, know that Paulina was picturing her and Phantom making out and even sometimes picture them having sex. Dash like Danny Phantom, but Paulina can get to carried away at times.
He was about to go on the slide again when he spotted Danny, along with the four girls. He drools at the sight of Blinky and Pinky and was even surprised to see Inky. He raises an eyebrow at the sight of Clyde. He then smirks, thinking of a way to get back at Danny for everything that happens to him.
Danny took Inky to the water as Blinky lay down in a chair to sunbathe for a bit. Clyde went to grab some ice cream as Pinky sat at the edge of the pool and watch a few people swim as she let her feet in the water.
"Are you sure about this Danny?" Inky asked him once they reach the top.
"It'll be fine. The water below you will make sure you land safely. Just give it a try." Danny said.
"Okay." She said and handed her glasses to the staff member.
Danny helps her to the slide and she soon slid down it. Inky was shocked at how fast she was going and before she knew it, it was over. She climbs out and saw her sisters smiling at her. Danny came out a few seconds later and the Staff member handed her her glasses.
"So Inky? How was it?" Danny asked her.
"That's was so..." Inky tries to say as her face went from shock to excitement.
AMAZING!" She shouted.
"The way you move, the water, everything! I never felt something that made your heartbeat so fast! I want to do it again!" She said happily.
"If you do, you better leave your glasses with your sisters this time," Danny told her.
She nods and hands them to Pinky, before rushing to get in line.
"You better help her. Inky can't see very well without her glasses." Pinky told him.
"Got it. After I'm done with Inky, I'll hang out with one of you next." Danny said and rush over to help Inky.
"We'll be waiting." Blinky smiles.
After a few more turns down Water Slide, Blinky got Danny to land down in the sun with her. She reaches in her bag and pulls out a bottle of sunscreen. Due to being a ghost, she really didn't need it because she couldn't get sunburn but she been planning this ever since they got here.
"Hey, Danny. Can you put some sunscreen on me?" She asks in a flirting tone.
"Um, sure?" Danny said as he took the bottle.
Blinky rolled around and Danny place some sunscreen in his hand. With a gulp, he reaches over and started to rub his hands on her back. Blinky remain still, making a moaning sound as she felt Danny's hands travel up and down her back.
"Wow, Danny. You know how to make a girl feel good." She said.
"Um, thanks. To tell the truth, I never done this before." Danny said, trying to fight back his blush.
"You can do my shoulders too," Blinky said.
Danny reaches over and rubs her shoulders with the sunscreen. He was still blushing and try to keep his mind clean. This was a public Water Park, he couldn't let himself get carried away. Blinky moans a bit really liking how Danny was making her felt. She wanted to see how far he would go.
"You can do my legs next." She said.
Danny's face turns red and pulls away.
"No, Blinky. This is a public Water Park. It's one thing to help with the back and shoulders, but I can't go too far. If someone catches us, then we can get thrown out. You're are doing to have to do that yourself." He told her.
Blinky just smiles and nods. She was a bit disappointed but she understood. She took the bottle from Danny and plant a kiss on his lips.
"I'm sure Pinky won't mind some company. She wants to go swimming with you." She said before putting some sunscreen in her hand.
"Sure," Danny said quickly getting up as he saw Blinky rub her leg.
Blinky just smiles, knowing that he trying to keep himself together.
'He wearing down and trying to keep himself together. He just too cute like that. Don't worry Danny, I won't force you but my body ready whenever you are.' She thought.
Danny walks quickly over to Pinky and sat down next to her. Pinky notices Danny's face and sighs.
"Blinky is getting carry away again did she?" She asked.
"Yeah, she asks me to help put on some sunscreen," Danny said.
Pinky sighs and looks around.
"Danny, we're ghosts. We don't need sunscreen. Blinky was just looking for an excuse for you to touch her." She whispers.
Danny look surprised before looking away, his face still red.
"I like it." He said truthfully.
"As long as she doesn't get carried away," Pinky said and stood up.
"Come on, let's take a swim. Maybe the water can help that face of yours cool down." She said.
"That sounds like a good idea," Danny said.
Soon they enter the water and Danny started to feel a bit better. Pinky swam up to him and smiles.
"Better?" She asked.
"Much. Thanks." He said.
"Glad to hear." Pinky smiles.
"Oh great! Who let the loser in the pool?"
The two turn and saw Paulina standing at the edge of the pool looking at them as if they ruin her fun.
"Hello Paulina, surprise they let the Queen of the Brats inside," Pinky said.
It became clear that Pinky and Paulina didn't like each other. It was said to be at the same level as Paulina's and Sam's rivalry, but Pinky always came out on top. Even though she refuses to join the Cheerleading squad, she did change up their suits and their cheer, much to Paulina's dismay. The squad wanted her to be the new Squad Leader, but she turns it down saying Cheerleading wasn't her thing but she was glad to help them.
"Hmph! You change my squad, now all the talk about is you. And that new cheer, it horrible." Paulina said.
"That's because you didn't make it. I had heard from the others that your cheers lack charm. So I give them something that brings it back. It's a school, not a castle." Pinky told her.
Paulina just glares at Pinky who wasn't phased from the look at all.
"Also, you need to get a grip in reality. When everyone finally starts seeing Phantom for who he is, he might not settle down with you. He might already have a girlfriend waiting for him." Pinky added.
"The ghost boy is mine and no one else's! He saves me, it means we are meant to be together." Paulina said.
"He saves everyone, does that means the people he saves are meant to be together?" Pinky counter.
"Just leave him out of this. Me and Phantom will be together one day soon!" Paulina said.
'Too bad me and my sisters already have him.' Pinky thought to herself.
"Whatever, just be sure to be prepared for heartbreak when Phantom turns you down." Pinky smiles.
"He won't turn me down!" Paulina yelled and storm away.
"Heh, she has no idea." Pinky giggles.
"There was a time that she was interested in my ghost form and I was fine with that. But now? No thanks." Danny said.
"Glad to hear that. If you were, then we would dump you." Pinky told him.
Danny smiles sheepishly before he felt something.
"Um, Pinky? Did your sister turn invisible and follow us into the pool?" Danny asked her.
"No, she has been sunbathing since we got in," Pinky said pointed at her.
"Well, I know she can't make copies of herself, and Inky wouldn't do that. Plus Clyde is at the water slide trying it out for herself. And since it none of them, then who touching me?" Danny said.
Pinky eyes widen and put her head under the water. To her shock, she must have unknowingly pullout Danny's member and was rubbing with her hand. She quickly put it back in his shorts and surface, with a red face.
"Pinky?" Danny asked her, feeling something happened when she was under.
"I'm so sorry Danny. Rachel's words are still in my mind." She said.
"Wait, that was..." Danny didn't finish and his face also turns red.
"I think that enough swimming together. Why do you see what Clyde's up to?" Pinky said.
"Sure," Danny said and started to get out of the pool.
"And Pinky, I'm not upset. I know you didn't mean too." He quickly said.
Pinky just let herself sink underwater a bit her face fully red.
Danny found Clyde sitting a chair, try to relax after riding down the water slide so many times.
"Hey, Clyde. Taking a break?" He asked.
"Yep, I think you found a new thing for Inky to like. I had to stop her a few times from cutting in line. Luckily I got her to relax so she won't cause any trouble." Clyde said.
"And where is she now?" Danny asked.
"Sitting with Blinky." She said pointing at the two sisters that were laying down in the sun.
Danny watches Pinky walk over and join them. It appears that they were trying to spend as much time together as they can. Danny could only imagine that it would be hard for them to spit up after being together for so long.
"So, how are you liking the Water Park so far?" Danny asked her.
"It's really great! I think we are going to come here for the whole summer!" Clyde said happily.
"Well, that's great," Danny said before thinking about something else.
"Hey, Clyde? Have you decide where we should go for our date?" He asked her.
Clyde blinks and started to think.
"Not sure. Was never good at this dating stuff. I can't think of a place to take you like Blinky can and I'm not into what Pinky does. I know yours and Inky's date will happen after we stop Sue. But for me? Not a clue." Clyde said.
"Well I heard from my parents sometimes the best plan is to have no plans. Let's just walk around town and find something to do." Danny said.
Clyde smiles and nods. Soon their drinks was placed down in front of them and Danny raises an eyebrow.
"I order you a drink before you sat down. I figure after all that time with my sisters, you could use something to drink." She said.
"Thanks." Danny smiles and grabs his drink.
It was then snatched away from him and dump on his head.
"There you go, Fenton. I bet that felt cool enough for you." Dash laugh.
Clyde growl and then nodded. She got up and threw her drink in Dash's face.
"Hey! What's the big idea?!" Dash yelled.
"Sorry, thought you wanted to cool off as well," Clyde said.
Dash was about to yell when a bucket of water was dumped on him. He turns around and notices Blinky, Pinky, and Inky holding a huge bucket that they just dump the water. Dash growls and was about to give them a piece of his mind when Danny picks up a handful of ice cubes and stuff them into Dash's shorts. Dash started jumping around as the coldness was too much for him. Danny and the Girls laugh before they all sat drink and reorder their drinks.
The Sun was setting and the Water Park started to close up. Danny walks with girls back to their home talking about how much fun they had.
"We should go there again!" Blinky said.
"Just remember that it's a public Water Park, Blinky," Pinky told her, trying to push what she did to Danny to the back of her mind.
"It was fun, at least until Dash and Paulina try to ruin it," Inky added.
"Glad we had a good time. I think we have a plan if we all decide to date Danny at once." Clyde said.
Danny blushes at that. He knew he was going to see the Girls in their Swimsuits again during the summer, but he didn't think he was going to try dating all four of them at once.
"Let's not get ahead of ourselves," Inky said.
"Yeah," Danny said as they came up to the girl's house.
"Well, see you all tomorrow," Danny said and started to head home.
"Hold on Danny, aren't you forgetting something?" Blinky call out to him.
"Huh?" Danny asks confuse before Blinky walks over and kisses him.
"You should know that we are your girlfriends now, you should kiss us good night." She said.
"Oh, right." Danny blush.
He steps up to each girl and kisses them as well.
"Good night." He said to them.
Inky walks over to Danny and places a hand on his shoulder.
"Hey, Danny? Would you like to see our dance?" She asked them.
"What?" Danny asks shocked.
"Not now of course but we been talking and we want you to see it. Just the clothes version, Blinky!" She said and turn to her sister.
"Fine, Fine." Blinky smiles.
"Sure. Just let me know when it's ready." Danny said.
Inky nods and Danny was on his way home. It was getting harder for her just skip this whole waiting thing and just date him right after Clyde. She sighs and turns to the others.
"Guess we are having a hard time holding back." She said.
"Yeah, it close to that time of year." Pinky sighs.
"Should we tell Danny?" Clyde asked worriedly.
"I'm not sure," Inky said.
Blinky sighs knowing what her sisters were talking about. That was coming up and because they had been ghosts for ten years, the problem that some humanoid ghosts have, affects them so badly they act out on it. And since the were Human-like Ghosts, they too would be affected and start acting out on what they really what with Danny.
"I think we tell him after we show him our dance. We know it's coming up and it better if show him the day before." She spoke up.
"You sure?" Clyde asked.
"Yes, it been ten years since we became ghosts. And since we are human-like, we won't be spear this time. We all want to do something to Danny but at the same time trying to keep ourselves together." Blinky said.
They all sigh, they were hoping that the Water Park would help them fight the urge but it didn't work and they were slowly started to lose the battle.
And end, so how was it? Danny got to see the Girls in their Swimsuits and I did my best to match each Swimwear to the girl. And it appears that the Girls want to show Danny their dance and at the same time tell him about something they are fighting against. What is it? I'll tell you later. And now for the Reviews.
Determination4296: Thanks! I'm doing my best to make how each sister has their own thing while still being together. Danny is getting to see more sides to them and making more reasons for him to love the girls.
OechsnerC: Glad you like it. Sam's Parents always gave feel they really don't care about anything other than themselves. So Homeless people and shelters might not mean very much to them. They were warned and even if they try again, they better be careful.
Lord-Chrono: Thank you for reading this! There is still more to come.
KorevainsoLightshire: Thanks for telling me. Take all the time you need and catch up when you can.
AnimeGoji91: Thing you mess up a bit at the Beginning. You start to talk about the new Shantae Game and then turn to my story that I mention. I had a bit of trouble making out what you were talking about before I was able to make it out. How about this, the next time you want to know something, place your questions in number order, Like 1: This and so. 2, What about? And so on. Just so I can make out what you are said just a bit more. I already explain what Electron Power was about at the top of the chapter. Please read it carefully before you say anything about it.
Okay, Danny's and Clyde's date is still the works, but I did get something started for it. Sue's army still needs some time to build and she saying hush, hush for now. Don't worry, it coming very soon.