REWRITE: STAR WARS - EPISODE VII - THE DARK RESURGENCE

by jlopes5000

The present fanfic is a rewrite of the first film in the sequel trilogy. This is essentially the result of a writing exercise to rethink and fix a story that has several inconsistencies and is lacking in character development. Some characters and locations are preserved, others are abandoned. Key scenes in the film tend to be preserved as well.

27. Chapter 26

The surgery room in the Aiwha - Yan Ko's hidden clinic ship - is packed with high tech equipment: tubes, valves, vents, computers, holograms, high precision tools and vials of colourful solutions as well as medical droids. Finn lies unconscious on the operating table with his head shaven clean and with a scar on his temple.

Yan Ma removes a petri dish from the computer with a collection of nerves in it. She inspects it closely. A medical droid speaks.

"The implant has a similar structure to those installed in the old republic's clone army to condition the troops for the execution of Order 66," it says, "but it seems to have greatly expanded functionality."

"I am aware. Whoever his proprietors might be," says Yan, giving Finn a brief glance. "They must be as resourceful as the Republic to make such developments."

"5-1C," calls Yan.

"Yes, madam?" responds the droid.

"Extract the recipient's information from the implant's telemetry nerve cluster. I wish to speak with this new Imperial Faction."