Just a brief PSA.
I was reading back through the fanfiction, and it needs some work. I'm taking a few weeks to overhaul the dialogue and formatting of this fic. This doesn't involve changing the overall plot, as I feel that would be cheap. I'm just adding a few things here and there to add detail and expand where I see fit. In my opinion, the detail is the only thing lacking in this fic, and there won't be another chapter posted until I'm done.
This message will be deleted when the overhaul is completed.
- ProudHufflepuff42