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Broly leaped forward and Punched Vegeta with a powerful haymaker, the prince easily pulled up a block, and countered with his own sending the saiyan flying through the air slamming into mountains. Kakarott stood before Paragus menacingly letting the fight take place. Broly's body was sent hurtling breaking open holes in one mountain and slamming into another, Dazed he shook his head and grew angrier, wind swirled around him as his power grew. He flew up and shot towards Vegeta throwing a fast punch, On the other hand feigned a punch instead kicking Broly, In response Broly dodged to the side completely out of range of any of Vegeta's attacks throwing a punch, though it was only after Vegeta was hit with a tail strike that the prince figured out it was a feint. He was then pummelled by Broly as the saiyan took full advantage.

Vegeta surprisingly impressed "Looks like you improve as you fight and learn fast. Alright then let's see how well you can deal with this"

Vegeta threw out his arms and legs sending out a blast of wind sending Broly flying, wind swirled around the saiyan prince, then the wind dropped and Vegeta shot forward throwing a sweeping feint kick one direction then Broly tried the same dodge only to be hit by a real sweeping hay maker on the other direction. Broly with his guard already up in a block could barely hold his block, but Vegeta didn't stop there, pummelling Broly eventually the block broke and the muscly teen was receiving heavy damage with audible breaking bones with each strike.

Seeing this Kakarott shouted "VEGETA, I ORDER YOU, DO NOT KILL, DO NOT KILL."

Vegeta grit his teeth at the order, with the prince slightly distracted, Broly got even angrier, wind swirled around him much more violently than Vegeta's before, rocks ripped out of the ground making a crater kilometres and miles wide, under his position, as his Muscles bulked up to ridiculous levels making him both taller, his shoulders visibly wider, and his muscles got as big as tree trunks, as he charged his energy, his bulked up muscles were ripping apart the hide keeping the armour together, everyone watching could swear they saw an Ozaru in his aura.

Paragus smirked "This is what I warned will happen, now with no collar the so called Prince will die."

Kakarott gave him the most intimidating gaze with just one eye turning to him. "We number so few, yet you still want your revenge, putting the sins of the father onto the son is not right. Since you truly wish him to die, you will wish that you were dead, with what I'll do to you."

Kakarott then knocked Paragus out leaving punishment for later and shot towards Broly. However Broly had Fired a mouth beam at Vegeta, who was struggling to hold it back, his arms and chest were covered in third degree burns. Kakarott powered up mid flight to her peak tapping into her own Ozaru power, focusing on her rage towards Frieza she pulled the power in her tail and slapped the attack away, Yelling in both common then Saiyanji "BROLY, STOP THIS WE ARE THE LAST OF OUR KIND, THIS PERSON HAS DONE NOTHING TO YOU BUT EXIST, SO STOP."

Broly roared and charged forward throwing wild yet powerful haymakers like a typical Ozaru, Kakarott easily dodged them and counter attacked kicking him to the ground again yelling in both languages "STOP!"

The mindless Broly roared as wind swirled around him raising his power even higher, making a much larger crater than before, his energy was more than what Kakarott was currently. Again she shouted in vain "STOP, PLEASE"

Broly fired a powerful mouth blast at her in response, she willed herself to keep up the power and sharply fired a blast that rocketed her away, changing direction she rocketed to Broly, and threw a rocket powered haymaker, it struck Broly in the Temple. Dazed Broly didn't know what to do, so Kakarott capitalised bulking up using the old mans technique doubling her power and threw more Rocket boosted attacks focusing on breaking his left and right arms.

Unfortunately now they were both on the ground as Broly recovered quickly and only his right was fractured, angry he Roared again, and the planet itself started to shake suddenly and violently making Kakarott fall over and tumble away, just as quickly as the tremor started it died down just as quickly, but it had sent Kakarott tumbling for a kilometre or about one point six miles. With her body pumping with battle lust she was extremely exited but Feeling the power she knew there was nothing to do but die, but then she got the craziest idea, so crazy but it just might keep her alive, and seeing Broly with all this power, his chiseled chest, six pack exposed and this battle made her exited in a completely different way, her body was telling her to let go and follow her instinct.

Her cheeks grew red with embarrassment as she threw off her chest armour that thanks to the elastin material acted like a bra, revealing her naked breasts that had grown to a C cup. This action shocked Broly even in his mindless state and returned him to conscious control losing his gained power.

Kakarott shot forward dropping both the Ozaru power then Roshi's boost, and wrapped her arms around Broly kissing him. Conscious Broly was shocked, he did not know what to do, but soon he too followed his instinct, forgetting that people were watching they began removing each other's pants and underwear, they kissed passionately as they made passionate and violent love in mid air.

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