Hey! Been a while since I've visited this story. I've been getting some comments about several things and so I wanted to address some things real quick.
To start with, I wrote this when I was, like 16, and also in some serious depression so this was my outlet for that...and I think it really shows. Because of that, I never really had any clue as to what I was doing with the story-just the marrow of a skeleton really, more like a femur. Point is, it kinda pandered, and wandered and tried but sort of failed. This is an excuse but it's also just saying that I'm aware of it and, as it's been years, I've had a lot of time to think about the story and actually-mentally-make a better road map for it and not just the idea it was then.
This was also my first, large story I tried writing so a lot of it was experimentation, I also had had no clue how to write stories on this scale either. But, as I've grown I've learned more about writing in general from doing 'research', it's research just not like the HS version-the kind you do when you're interested in something and want to get better at it. I've also realized the values of having a beta and have had someone that is willing to help me on this so I will probably take them up on that.
I initially thought about doing a sequel for this, which is still something I'd like to do, but I've decided that I'm going to rewrite this first. However, I'm not sure when that will be. I have a couple of other stories that I want to finish and get out of the way first, Loki'd, I Will be Your Everything so it will be a bit before I get around to rewriting this but it is in the plans.
Also, I'm just curious, would you like me to leave this story up when I rewrite this or just take it down and start fresh?
~Phaser