Readers,

This story is under revision, it will be torn down, rewritten, and then put back up in a (hopefully) better version of itself.

My hope is to make this story:

More interesting to read

Flow better

Straighten up some facts that were not accurate

Make some things more concise and to the point

Draw other things out

Build up the story a bit and enrich it

Thank you for your continued support

-S