AloneDarks- Mr.X - HUNTING 2
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CID obessed- tinu yaar thankyou!!!!...aur rahi baat personally ki toh maine bura nahi mana...yasebhi bachpan mein school mein kahin bar ladkio ke hato pit gaya tha fokat mein...hehe...they were my deskmates ...So kyahena ki main bohot nadan hu shayad...(laughing emoji)...jo bhi ho thanks for your adorable review... I hope you will love the entire story...
aur rahi baat bina padhe exams ki toh yaar uncase main , main bio ko prefer karta tha...wohi meri taqat thi chem ke bad...
Thanks to Babli15,Singlepiece,Abhidayaholic,Guest(AbhiFan)...
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Abhijit surrenders Mr Rohit to Acp and team...
Abhi- sir wo to bhag gaya...aap mr rohit ko bacha lijiye..main use dekhta hoon...
Acp - nahi Abhijit wo tumhare liye bhi khatra ho sakta hain...daya bhi tumhare saath jayga
Abhi(Pov)- aaysa nahi hona chahiye...warna insabko Kishore ke bareme pata chal jayga
Abhi- sir wo mere hatho se chuta hain...use pakadneki zimmedari bhi meri hain...aap chinta maat kijiye...main...main use dekhta hoon...
he runs...
Acp - Abhijit..abhijit...oh ho yeh ladka bhi na...zidd pe ada rahta hain
Daya- par ow ja kahan raha hain...sir kya main uska peecha karu ?
Acp- shreya ek kam karo mr rohit ko beureau le jao...daya tum abhijit ka peecha karo...dekho usko kuch ho na jay
Daya- ok sir...
Daya runs ..but he finds abhi is missing..
Daya- are abhi toh idhar daura tha...kahan gaya...
He opens his car and drives in a direction...
Abhijit comes out from behind a truck... actually he is hiding himself...
Abhi(pov)- sorry daya...par main tumlogo Kishore se nahi mila sakta... Chahein usne in gunheko kiya ho ya nahi main usko saja khate hue nahi dekh sakta...usko main hi pakrunga...
Abhijit runs and reaches his house... already he turns off his mobile cellular network...
Abhijit opens the door and shout-
Kishore... Kishore...kahan ho tum...main janta hoon..tumne ye sab khoon kiye haina... Kishore.. Kishore...
Abhijit- Kahan gaya ye ladka...
Suddenly knock...
Abhijit opens- are daya tum mere gharpar...kya hua..
Daya- kya hua...mujhe puchna chahiye...khooni ko pakadte hue tum ghar kyu aaye...kya ow tumhare ghar pe hain...
Abhi(pov)- kahin ise pata toh nahi chalgeya...no way...mujhe kuch karna hoga
Abhi- daya ow mein...paani...ha paani pene aya tha...pyass lagi thi...
Daya- Abhijit kuch toh baat hain...kya chupa rahe ho...
Abhi- kuch nahi...tumhe aaysa kuch lagta hain...
Daya- 20 saal se ek chahre ko dekhte hue bara hua hoon...dost mere tera chahera hi bata deta hain sab mujhe...jaldi bol..mamla kya hain...
Abhi- Daya ow...kuch nahi...chorna...chal chalte hain...
Daya- nahi Abhijit...jabtak tum bataoge nahi main nahi jaa sakta...jaldi bolo
Abhi - daya...mein janta hoon khooni kaun hain...
daya - kya tum khooni ko pahechantw ho...kaum hein wo
Abhi- Daya...yeh main tumhe abhi nahi bata sakta...mujhse ek wada karo
Daya- kysa wada...
Abhi- yahi ke..jabtak main khud use pakad nahi leta tabtak tum acp sir ko kuch nahi bologe
Daya- par abhijit...
Abhijit- wada chahiye mujhe
Daya - ok..thik hain...par tabtak acp sir ko kya kahenge...yehi ki wo mujrim hath se chut gaya..
Abhijit- no daya... please ayse words uske liye maat nikalo...wo nahi janta kya galat hain ya sahi...gotiya khelne ke umar main hi uska ant ho gaya...uske liye sab cheez ab rukhi si hain
Daya- tum bhi kamal ho Abhijit...4 chaar khoon kar chuka hain..aur tum use mujrim kahnese daar rahe ho...tum toh aayse nahi the
Abhi(emotional)- please daya...main hath jorta hoon...mujrim maat bulao.. please...
Daya- accha...tumhari jhooti kasam main nahi khata kabhi..mein acp sir ko bata dunga humhe wo nahi mila...par tum tabtak use pakad lo...main bhi milna chahunga tumhare us "Non Mujrim" se...dekhta hoon usne kayse tumhara dil jeet liya...
Daya leaves...
abhi(pov)- daya tumhari baatein main samajh sakta hoon...tumne kabhi apne peshe ke saath gaddari nahi ki...main bhi nahi karunga...par mujhe thoda time chahiye ...apne dilko tasalli dene ke liye...
SCENE CHANGE...
MR MANOJS HOUSE...
He is sleeping with her wife...
Glass breaking noise...
Santi- Manoj jake dekho na...awaz aayi...
Manoj- billi hogi shayad...so jao...
Santi- jao na...firse awaZ aayi...mere pith mein dard hain...tum jao
Manoj- tum manogi nahi..ruko mein jata hoon...
Manoj came in his drawing room and tried to turn on lights...
Manoj- Yeh lights ko kya hua...jal kyu nahi raha...
Suddenly someone beats in his head...he falls ...he becomes unconscious...
SCENE CHANGE...
A very high under construction building...
Roof...Edge side...
Manoj is binded like "Jeasus" on a () Shaped Plyboard...his hand and legs are bound tightly by nylon ropes...he is unconscious...
Masked man arrives near him...
Man- diwali ke din lok lottery katte hain...kahin agar 1st prize jeet jay toh balle balle...main bhi aaj ek lottery khelunga...human lottery...jiska ek hi laksh hain ...Agar nishana seedha dilpw laga toh tu mar jayga warna nishana agar chuk bhi jayga phirbhi tu neeche girke mar jayga...bol ..thakeke bhindi kuch yaad aya...yahi se kisiki laash ko tune fek Diya tha na...aaj teri bari...
Man tries to set the archery set... suddenly...
Voice behind - ruk jao...use chor do...
The masked man turns behind and finds that it is Abhijit...
Abhijit - ruk jao Kishore...tum aaysa kuch nahi karoge...khudko mere hawale kardo...sab khoon tumne kiye hain...
Man without saying anything opens his mask ...
its Kishore...
Kishore - Abhijit uncle...aap. galti kar rahe hain...mujhe nahi use pakdiye jisko apne bachaya hain...mr rohit ko...wo hain aapka mujrim...
Abhi - chup Kishore! tumse ye ummid nahi thi...Ye kaysa balda le rahe ho...kisi ek ki maut ke badleme tum itno ko nahi maar sakte...khudko surrender kar do..
yahi tumhare liye accha hoga ...
Wind blows...kishore and abhis hairs are blown in wind... perfect emotional Scene...camera focuses on that ...
Kishore smiles and little laughs...
Kishore ne apne hath mein rakha hua teer fek diya...
Kishore - Abhi uncle...main sachme aapko respect karta hoon...insab ke bad aur bhi apko respect karunga...apne apki peshe se gaddari nahi ki...lekin aapke kuch kahnese pahle main kuch kahna chahta hoon...yeh jagah bohot special hain...dhyan se suniye...
"15 farbari 2025 ki samko ...insp purvi ko phone aaya unke pati ke taraf se ki ek family meet hain...use ana hain...sabhi ke family wale husband wifes ekkatthe ayenge...purvi ready hone lagi...kya kare pati ki baat manni padegi...kyuki pati ki baat nahi mani toh uspar dande paregi...bechari purvi ready ho gayi...pohoch gayi bulaye hue pate main..Nisha Palace pe...usne dekha uska pati aur kuch aur mard hain owha...usne pucha baki family members yani unsab ki patniya kahan hain...Patidev ne kahan ki ow sab badme ayegi...bechari purvi ko itna bhi nahi pata tha ki koi nahi aanewala...1 ghanta beet gaya...sare mard nashe ke dhund mein gir chuke the... unhone palace ki main gate kar lock laga di thi..jisse purvi bahar na ja sake...purvi apne nasheri pati ke paas gayi ye puchne ki wo kab ghar lautenge ...par pati ne bola ~ kya hain..ghar jake kya hoga..jo hoga sab milkar karengw...purvi samjhi nahi...Purvi ne kahan Kishore gharpe akela hoga...unhe jana chahiye...Rahul ko gussa aa gaya...ek thappad...purvi gir gayi...rahul ne aakar...purvi ki saree cheez li...bechari purvi apna sharam bachane ke liye ladi...par nahi...rahul ne uska pura bastra cheen liya...uske baad...uske baad...nasheri sab mardo ne milkar jo kiya...bolne main mere hath kaap rahe hain ...par yehi sach hain...unhone sabne milkar use acchi tarah se mollest kiya...purvi bhagi uss halat mein palace ki dusri manzil par...par wo log nahi rukw...bhuke sher ki tarah chatte gaye chatte gaye use...jaise ki ow ek kabab ki haddi hain...Kya kuch nahi kiya...kiss,owsab,rape...saari hade par kar di...khoon bahena laga bechari ki...uske bad usko tadpaya bhi...aag ki sekh di...uski skin ko jaladi...iss manoj ne uski moo par acid pal diya...ow chillana aaj bhi gunjti hain mere kano mein...itno mein bhi janwaro ki bhook nahi miti...ow karte gaye karte gaye ...sabtak uski saas chalni na band ho jayi...Wo mar gayi...firbhi uske deadbody ke saath ow kiya baari baari se...phir is manzil se use neeche fek diya...taaki uska bigda hua chahera aur bigad jaye...Koi use pahechan nahi sake...College se bhuke the yelog ..bas uski body chahiye thi inlogoko...
Kishore ends his words...The environment is such hazardous...he is completely sweated...his hands are trembled...aansu sukh kar mar gaye hain kishore ki...
.Abhijit eyes ..Tears scroll down from his eyes...
Kishore- huh...ab ro ke kya fayda uncle...jo hona ho chuka tha...ek chote se bacche ke liye yesab kitna dardnak hoga sanajhna ..ke uski maaki natural maut nahi hui...khoon hua hain unka...khoon (shout) khoonnnnnnn! aur yeh owhi building hain jo anewali kalki Nisha Palace banegi...
Gun falls from.abhijits hand... Kishore falls on deep cry...Abhijit runs near him and hugs him..both crying... beautiful scene...Camera catches the scene ...
Abhijit - ro maat beta...purvi ke saath jo hua hain bura hua hain...par tum kyu apne bap ki tarah ek khooni ban gaye...bolo beta...kyu... unhone Chahein jitni berahemi se khoon na kiya hoga tumne us raste pe chalkar khoon kardiye...
Kishore- main was anewale kal ko mitana chahta hoon... please uncle madad kijiye meri...iss papi ko maar dijiye aur ye kissa khatam kijiye hamesha ki tarah please...
Abhis phone incoming...he received..
Abhi(teary voice)- ha daya
daya- kya hua ..ro kyu rahe ho
Abhi- kuch nahi...bolo tum
Daya- wo manoj ji ka wife ka phone tha...unke pati gayab ho chuke hain...humhe unhe dhundna hoga ..jaldi aajao
Abhi- ok...mein aata hoon...
Call ends .
Abhijjt- Kishore...main nahi janta mujhe kya karna chahiye ya nahi...kiska saath dena chahiye ya nahi...par mein ek baat janta hoon...tum thik nahi kar rahein ..beta unhe chor do..
Kishore becomes angry...he pushes abhi...he falls away .
Kishore picks his archery set and stabbes manoj by the archery...manoj died...
Abhijit- Kishoreeeeeeeee! kya kiya tumne...ek aur khoon..
Abhijit fires a gun... Kishore gets wound in his leg...he fells...
Kishore mouns in pain...
Abhijit comes near him and say- aysa hi dard hua hoga sabhiko jinko tumne mara hoga... sorry Kishore...ek onduty officer ke samne tumne ek khoon kiya...i have to arrest him...
Kishore (laughs)- kar lijiye arrest...par mere andar jo rooh hain koi use nahi rok sakta...main jab bhi chahu jahan bhi chahu gayab ho sakta hoon...hahaha
Abhijit picks his collar and slaps him...He snatches his wristwatch aka TimeGadge...
Abhijit(teary eyes)- Tumhe sharam ani chahiye...Purvi ko kitna dard hua hoga jab use pata chalega uska beta apne papa ki tarah ek khooni ban chuka hain...
Daya, acp , Shreya reaches there..
Acp/daya- Abhijit...
Abhijit comes near him with Kishore.
He looks at Kishore and says- Acp sir...yeh Raha manoj ka qatil...sabhi gunhe ka mujrim...ise le jaiye...
Acp - manoj ka laash kahan hain...
Abhi- neechs...isne neeche fek diya use...
Acp- Shreya le jao isse...good job Abhijit...ab ghar jao...bohot bara kam kiya hain tumne...kal badhai milegi dcp ki taraf se...all the best...
Acp left...
Daya- Abhijit abhi bhi pareshan kyu ho...
Abhi- ow kuch nahi... actually ow mera rishtedar tha na...toh owhi thoda bura lag raha tha
Daya- mujrim is mujrim Abhijit...btw congrats...chalo ghar jake sojao...Kal milte hain...
daya left...
Abhijit looks at the time travel watch...
Kishores words strikes in his brain...
"unhone use fek diya iss manzil se neeche..."
Abhijit hairs are again blows in air...
Abhi(pov)- I promise Kishore...gunhegaar o ko chorunga nahi...khaskar mr rahul ko...Main badla pura karunga tumhara...lekin gunha ke raaste nahi koi aur raaste ...
Rough Wind blows...camera catches the scene...abhijit on under construction building top floor...night Mumbai city looks beautiful from there...the tears on abhijjt ears...
Camera focusea on it...
POETS NOTE :
Life makes us to smile,
life Makes us to cry
But surprisingly life doesn't learn us how to walk on it ...
Sardi ke rookhe paattw bhi murjha ja rahe hain
kya October jaldi aayga...kya fir paate girenge...kya fir badal garjenge...in firangi hawao mein kuch baat hain...
Abhijit closes his eyes and enjoy the rough wind and pain insidw it...
