Badgering the Burrows

by Falcoloyd123

Life wasn't working out for the not so-successful Solomon Filch. Life for the badger had gone awry not only because he was a predator but because he was also somehow indirectly affiliated with that bastard, Madge Honey Badger, and he decided that enough was enough, wanting to go back to the peaceful, dusty trails of his old home town, the bunny burrows. Rated T for language mostly.

8. Good-bye Thanks for reading

This always happens, doesn't it?

At some point, a writer notices when something is deeply flawed with their stories.

A missing detail here, a character underdeveloped there.

Happily, this isn't me being resentful, or callous towards myself.

I understand how bad this story is, to me and possibly to others, but I want to do it justice.

Flesh out the characters more, or at least flesh out Solomon and his beginnings and how he got to the burrows and slow down his forgiveness of Gideon.

Or even, just expand on Solomon's insanity cause that just came and gone in like one-two chapters and that doesn't really sit right with me.

I made the character flawed but I was starting to go into torture porn levels of flaws.

I thought that if my character goes through the pits of hell he could be great, both flawed and strong.

But alas, that isn't what happened I want to redo this and make it better but also try and keep the same underlying story. Solomon and Gideon's friendship.

Thank you all for reading I'll keep it up until I put up the first chapter of the revised version. Probably make it unlisted like you would do a video on YouTube and just put a link to it if FanFiction will allow me. Thanks for indulging in my story. Good-bye.