God must of spent a little more time on you

by No Fate 1990

Brooke and Julian have twins named Chloe and Caleb Baker. Caleb experiences symptoms of mental retardation. The poem is told through Brooke's point of view. Reviews are welcome.

20. A Time to Breathe and Endure Uncertainty

Time Period: A Flashback

Date: 8-14-2014

Place: A Hospital Delivery Room

Special Event: The Twins' birth

Brooke (panting as she reaches for Julian's hand): Julian

Julian (squeezing Brooke's hand): I am here for you and our precious babies

Brooke (drawing to an end to her long hard labor): The twins are coming. I must push.

Doctor (checking Brooke): You are fully dilated. You can push right now.

Brooke (grabbing ahold of the bedrailings): GRR...AHA..AHA..AHA

Doctor (placing a crying baby girl on Brooke's stomach): Baby A is a girl. Congratulations.

Brooke (crying tears of joy): I love you so much, Chloe Autumn Grace Baker

Julian (choked up): Chloe is perfect