Okay...First Off, I Wanna Thank Those Who Love My Story So Far. But...Wheres The Actaul Criticism? Ya Know Like, This Story Sucks, Or You Need To Improve Your Writting, Either That, Or Something Horrible...Can Anyway Atleast Be Honest With The Story. i Am Greatful With The Two Possitive Reviews I Recived, But Some Negative Reviews(Or Atleast Something Like That) Could Be A Bit Better. Cuz I Just Hope People Will Like The Story And I Hope I Can Point It At The Right Direction. Also, Sorry That I Haven't Done Anything Else For The Story So Far. I Just Need To Know How To End It, Or Atleast Improve On It. I Would Love To Do A Reboot Or Sqeual To This, But For Now, I Just Have To Go With It.

Alrighty Then, Hidden Author Out