Retiring JacobApples

by JacobApples

Hi everyone, this my backing up all my stories and the words of all the people who helped get me through as well as make me a better writer. So this is the archive of those reviewers, the good, the kind, the heartwarming, the amusing, the ones who gave me honesty that made me better and the ones who make you question the intelligence of humanity. Thank you all.

12. Natasha Romanoff andthe Secrets of Death

JacobApples: This fic is aviable on Archive of Our Own, AO3, under AppoApples, which is also my primary username on Fanfiction dot net

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Guest chapter 1 . Jul 10

My first thought is it sounds great. My second thought is,she's the Black Widow with a child and she doesn't kill Bellatrix and the others?

report review for abusecsheila chapter 1 . Jul 2

Coolness.

Looking forward to the chase for Harry.

report review for abuseHadami chapter 1 . Jun 21

Nice twist with James and Lily being alive

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . Jun 5

What!?

report review for abuseSiriuslyGryffindor63 chapter 1 . Jun 5

This is gonna be so much fun.

report review for abuseBlack Magic99 chapter 1 . Mar 6

will this story continue? i hope so, it is really fun

report review for abuseit's just another primate chapter 1 . Jan 7

Okay ill bite. This seems interesting and i wonder where your gonna go with this. Guess ill find out.

report review for abuseWhiteDragonWarrior chapter 1 . Nov 14, 2019

That's a whole lot of variable you got here. Live parents, but not-technically kidnapped... ish? Also Natasha now has magic, not that she's fully aware of that fact. Should be interesting.

report review for abuseHarrison chapter 1 . Nov 8, 2019

I don't know which idea makes less sense. Black Widow, a master assassin having a child around, or Tony Stark, a known party animal (at least in some continuities) having a kid. And the MCU made the second one canon...my God I need some Alcohol or something.

report review for abusepineapple-pancake chapter 1 . Sep 25, 2019

Why did they revive the potters after bringing a substitute mother for Harry? Was that a point to make Death more insane? Yet it does make this story more original and dramatic. After all the black widow could be treated as a baby robber or something.

report review for abusekanjichibi chapter 1 . Sep 18, 2019

A very different concept of crossover, I liked the first chapter.

report review for abuseCall me Lee chapter 1 . Aug 26, 2019

I had just finished binging all the available chapters of "Laughing All the Way to London" (absolutely loved it btw) and i got interested in what else you could be writing (I really fell in love with your writing style). I saw this as the first story in your profile after that one and thought "What the hell no fucking way this can be good" and holy shit I was wrong. Thanks for proving me that. I love Natasha and Harry's chemistry and protectiveness over each other. You absolute madman.

report review for abusemithrilandtj chapter 1 . Aug 22, 2019

Death should've dropped Nat at Privet Drive after Dumbles dropped off Harry

report review for abusebradplum chapter 1 . Aug 21, 2019

Is Natasha and Harry both magical?

report review for abuseLostWit chapter 1 . Aug 17, 2019

This story is amazing. One chapter and I'm already hooked.

report review for abuseGuilherme2103 chapter 1 . Jul 26, 2019

And the relationship between Peter and Aragog? They'll be best buddies?

How much they can scare the shit out of Ron?

Jokes aside, keep doing the good work.

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 1 . Jul 25, 2019

"Who dat?" "Witches, apparently."

I'm fuckin g

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . Jul 22, 2019

She just cast a spell with no training? Even if "Death" made her able to use magic, to be able to use a spell like Avada Kedavra like this should not be in any way possible. It's more than just saying words.

report review for abuseglenn1970 chapter 1 . Jul 8, 2019

I've only got thru the 1st chapter and I already know this is going to be a really cool story :-) Well, I can't stop here...I must keep reading.

Thanks

Layne

report review for abusepaintingrosesblack chapter 1 . Jul 7, 2019

I loveeeee it! I don't know where this ia going but i've enjoyed it so far.

I just have to ask, why are the new characters here? So Natasha wouldn't feel alone? Or are they all going to their home universe together at some point? I'm not complaining though, i love them

report review for abusen7kairos chapter 1 . Jul 6, 2019

Review- chap-10.

It was going so well. Until you decided to add another timeline in another dimension.

As of this moment, I'm no longer reading this. Time travel and multiverse. I'm tired of such fics. Feels like cop out to me now.

Your writing is good. Just not for me anymore.

I wish you best for your future ventures.

report review for abuseDullReign82 chapter 1 . Jul 5, 2019

It's the first chapter and I'm hooked.

report review for abuseViper5delta chapter 1 . Jul 3, 2019

Found this and read it all in one sitting...I didn't know how much I needed mama Natasha in my life until now...keep up the good work.

report review for abuseWrin chapter 1 . Jul 1, 2019

...you have my attention.

report review for abusePinkLemonadeChocolate chapter 1 . Jun 30, 2019

LOVE IT! Especially the skydiving scene, it was epic

report review for abusestorybook thumb chapter 1 . Jun 27, 2019

Nice beginning. I wonder tho? Why save James and Lily? And am I to take it that Natasha has magic?

report review for abusebadknight chapter 1 . Jun 26, 2019

Rereading your very well constructed story. It's just that good. Thanks for writing it. :D

report review for abusepaintingrosesblack chapter 1 . Jun 26, 2019

I love love loveee this!

report review for abuse6258489 chapter 1 . Jun 24, 2019

as I finished this chapter I'm watching a video on YouTube, and they start talking about Gothenburg, Sweeden. Weird

report review for abuseeaqs5 chapter 1 . Jun 18, 2019

congrats on the masters! I am enjoying this story alot! Keep up the great work.

report review for abusebigmeaty69 chapter 1 . Jun 13, 2019

Seems cool. I love how black widow is thrown into another world by death and she just rolls with it. "Oh I'm not dead and in another world and you want me to watch a baby? No problem." No angst, just an former assasin and her cute little magical baby with a hit on his head.

report review for abuseaSinglePancake chapter 1 . Jun 9, 2019

Digging this

report review for abuseAqua Lilly chapter 1 . Jun 8, 2019

Oh my gosh, thank you! Finally, sokebody understands the concept of a prologue and also understands that you can't just post said prologue as the first chapter! My OCD thanks you!

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 1 . Jun 6, 2019

Interesting first chapter

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 1 . Jun 5, 2019

Wow , that's awesome!

report review for abuseThe Jabberwock of OZ chapter 1 . Jun 4, 2019

SIDE NOTE

Does Harry know how to use magic like Doctor Strange, or is that brand of magic limited to the MCMU

(Marvel Comic Multi Universe)

report review for abuseAnimeA55Kicker chapter 1 . Jun 3, 2019

One point of contention, the AK causes an explosion when it hits a none organic object.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . Jun 3, 2019

i love this everything about this! cant wait for the next update!

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 1 . Jun 2, 2019

Excellent work! Natasha. And do magic!? And baby Harry is so cute! Update soon!

report review for abusealec-potter chapter 1 . Jun 1, 2019

Interesting start.

I am more of a fan of Harry x Nat pairing so this is different.

James and Lily should have been the first once to come after Harry. So not sure what you are planning.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 1 . Jun 1, 2019

am I here for this? absolutely

report review for abusePaddysAvianExpert chapter 1 . Jun 1, 2019

Well, I'm hooked!

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Not quite 5300 words (1st 2 chapters) and the next chapters will tell. But fun premise so far.

Lots of 'fridge-logic questions about what the Potters know about being dead - especially since Natasha knows for certain that Lily was dead at one point.

Also, how could anyone really bind Harry via the goblet. They don't have his signature, nor his blood, nor arguably even his proper name. The adults should realize that the "contract" is not binding to Harry.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Hahaha! James and Lily came back? That came out of left field. That should be entertaining when they all finally meet...

On a related note, amusing to see big bad Death Eaters go down with a little kick... /sarcasm off

report review for abuseDuellist chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

LOL! Magical gun! Of course it is, since she only knows one spell.

And of course, that worked.

report review for abuseLax21x chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Dope i am looking forward to more chaps but quick question what's up with "Broken Reflections" you still writing?

report review for abuseKingTut13 chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Alrighty my G i'm on board. as i am with all of them oh quick question i was wondering if we i a mean i can get some more of "Broken Reflections" chapters lol i am big fan lol

report review for abuseInspector Callahan chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

As with everything you write, I love this. Nat is one of my favorite characters to bring into the hp universe, because if anybody deserves having a BAMF like the black widow on their side, its Harry. Can't wait for more!

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Hi.

Lots of good stuff here, and i always say you shouldn't deny the bunnies, because they could turn on you and devour you whole :p

Anyways... Death and Death playing at being God seems a bit strange from a certain standpoint. I mean, if they aren't Gods, then what are they even? Sure, the MCU has sooooo many super OP characters that it's not even funny, but you'd think Death was up there right? I can just imagine the chaos all of this meddling will cause, and it does give you lots of options down the road (perhaps even Potter siblings?) :)

Then there is Natasha... It's nice that you give her new purpose after how Endgame ended (and shouldn't she be back once Cap returns the Soul Stone? A soul for a Soul after all...). A bit ironic that the first words she speaks are the same as Thanos' last words to Gamora, but it could be a coincidence :p On the other hand, Natasha with magic is going to be devastating... She was already dangerous enough as it was, but now she has a near-untraceable way of killing and the whole bag of kitties magic opens for. I wonder if she'll research the animagus transformation for infiltration, or if she'll stick with regular 'sneaky' spells and acrobatics though... She could even branch out and 'develop' her own tech (read: steal the designs from her original universe) so as to become a billionaire or something. The options are near limitless :D

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Interesting so far. Good luck finishing grad school.

report review for abuseKPX12 chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Really interesting so far. Hope there is more. Best of luck l.

report review for abuseLiteratureSoccerEnthusiast chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

I am loving this story thus far, I cannot wait to read more. Go Natasha and Harry!

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

One thing I absolutely love about you as a writer is that you let your bunnies out to play.

The opening discussion sequence with Death is so, so perfect you can just imagine it in a movie:) Made me laugh:)

Oh man, and then you go and make James and Lily still alive. Like setting Hedwig amongst the pigeons. Totally wasn't ready for THAT:) (But love it - I mean - if you're going to have Death play games, that's one heck of a game to play right?)

And then you go and give an assassin - no - THE assassin - magic - a killing spell that leaves no trace.

Oh gawd. Please. More. This is .good. Seriously.

Thanks for making my Friday morning. Work won't completely suck now:)

report review for abuseallie213 chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

it feels like you have plenty of plot lines to work with. how did Bellatrix find them? if it was through the ministry I would assume that Dumbledore would have been able to find them in the same manner

report review for abuseMyllinu chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

really like it so far. wasn't expecting James and Lily to get back up. who was the third Death, the one that dealt with dragons?

report review for abusewarlocktoungue chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

I don't hope anything out of this story... Rather you surprising me with your own ideas...

;)

Keep up with the good work!

report review for abuseJZuCuadra chapter 1 . May 31, 2019

Not quite sure what I think of it yet, but you haven't failed me yet in anything I've read of yours, and I don't expect you to start yet. Do you already have a chosen eventual pairing or not?

report review for abuseSuperbeda chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Love itttt pls update

report review for abuseFirearcher27805 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Really good so far

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Interesting but I think James and Lily coming back to life is just going to make a mess with the plot. Well you're a good author so you will probably prove me wrong.

report review for abusenoa chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Leaving Lily and James alive is the best part of this story. Looking forward to read what you do with them.

report review for abuseKX chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Consider me sceptical about reanimating james and lily.

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I like

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Ok so this is a great start, I love it. Just some simple questions and comments:

How come Harry immediately sees Natasha as "Mama"? I guess that by all descriptions her and Lily could look similar, but that alone doesn't explain it entirely.

Then what happened with that Avada Kedavra curse that missed but did nothing? In canon, when the curse hits an inanimate object, it will definitely have a magical effect, most likely an explosion or a green fire, or both.

report review for abuseJoeya12 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Great start to the story, kinda weird that you brought both lily and James back. I'm curious as to what roll they will play. Please keep up the good work!

report review for abuseJamalymal chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Sounds interesting, cant wait for mire

report review for abuseRazgriz0x chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

So Lily and James survive the Killing Curse (because Death played God) and I'm guessing Harry is assumed Dead.

Nat has Magic... so research and training in magic comes next for her.

And the proper masculine for the middle name is Alianovitch...

All in all, not bad.

report review for abuseLexarius chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Now, that will be a seriously badass Harry.

And Nat is not only trained to fight against much larger opponents and win, she is also a very good detective, if her first scene in Avengers is any indication. I mean, she got to the top echelons of a criminal organization in what seems to be a very short time...

report review for abusesnixxjuice214 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I absolutely loved it. I love the asshole deaths. I love bringing back James and Lilly. And I love the little fight scene. Please please please update again soon. I cannot wait to see where you go with us

report review for abuseRonin Kenshin chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

awesomeness

report review for abuseAlexSakurai chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Jake Crepeau is absolutely right; I confirm this as a native Russian speaker. I have to add: when mother and son have the same patronymic, and it's so rare, it can push people into strange thoughts. It seems like they have one father, but at the same time Natasha is Harry's mother...

report review for abuseMissLuffy05 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

OMG I LOVE IT

report review for abuseyrfgd chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I like it. And throwing in a surviving Lily and James plus free Sirius is an interesting plot twist. Is Dd going to be an MOF or an actual good guy? Enquiring minds want to know.

report review for abusetony549 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

A good start. I'll follow this. Thanks

report review for abusePortgazDAdz chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Really like the concept bt why keep james nd lily allive...

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I love it. More pls.

But seriously, this has some good potential and I like the idea of Natasha raising Harry. Plus I just like black widow.

report review for abuseJake Crepeau chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

This sounds interesting. One mistake, and this one you can't lay at the door of your dyslexia; it's simply that you don't speak Russian. (Neither do I, but it's similar enough to Polish that I can spot some basic things.) "Alianovna" is the feminine form; for Harry, it would be "Alianovitch." This is not a middle name as we know it; it's a patronymic. It indicates that Natasha's father was named Alian. But one could posit that she's been in Western society long enough to treat it like a middle name, but she would still change the ending to the masculine one, simply because Russian is her native tongue and that's the way it's spoken. ;D

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As for your dyslexia...What dyslexia? I've got news for you: Your grammar, spelling, etc., etc., are much better than that of people who *don't* have dyslexia. So, kudos! ;D

report review for abusethebehr247 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Sounds like a cool idea, looking forward to more.

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Awesome intro

Looking forward to more

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Awesome!

report review for chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

This is nice

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Great first chapter and wonderful story concept. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abusesnow fox2000 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

WOW it looks like Harry is going to have a good life keep up the good work

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Yes!

report review for abuseMi Vy chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Mate, it was a good idea, but James and Lily being alive is a little too much. Please don't make this a cliche bashing story, as it certainly looks that way, and you're a better author than that

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

...ok. I didn't expect any of this, but it sounds good. I'm excited to see the development, actions, and reactions to Russian assassin/spy!Harry. I'm glad I saw Endgame on Tuesday or I'd be a bit lost.

report review for abusekaiserfrost chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Sweet

report review for abuseSuperTroll567 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

This looks like it's going to be really interesting. Can't wait to see more.

report review for abuseDouggernaut chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Interesting start. Though having his real parents resurrected seems dumb to me. Just gonna create drama between Natasha and them down the road I guess its an original idea, but it just feels unnecessary to me.

But despite my apprehension, its a unique enough story that ill give it a follow and see how it goes!

report review for abuseOlly chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I shouldn't blame fanfiction's authors for this mistake since Rowlings made it in the first place but "Voldemort" does not mean "Flight from death" or "Flight of death", it doesn't mean anything. The problem is the word "vol", because in french it only means flying in the sky, there is no meaning of escaping, evading or outrunning in the french word "vol". I always thought it was pretty ironic how even Riddle's selfmade moniker failed at what he was trying to accomplish.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Kinda weird to have James and Lily alive, but that is a rather mean thing Marvel Death did.

Hoping that the story arc eventually ends with Nat and Harry going to MCU, after voldie gone for good, and Potterverse Death brings Tony back as revenge. Maybe when Morgan Stark is older?

Anyhow look forward to little Harry's life throughout the Hogwarts years. Will Nat tell him stories of the Avengers? Wonder who's gonna be Harry's favorite?

I always enjoy you posting the beginnings of whatever plots you think of, you almost always revisit to do it some justice.

report review for abuseMPPC chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

bunny, Bunny, BUNNY!

report review for abuseContinue chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Continue

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Amazing start, like all your previous stories.

report review for abuseHorusRa chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I almost though you were going to merge both souls Natasha/Lily ... Fear a redhead, and a magical trained assassins. Shivers

report review for abuseBMS chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Great start.

I especially liked the conversation between the two Deaths. I'm not sure I like the idea of Lily and James living too. It seems an unnecessary complication.

until next time

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

O gods I'm so exited. This sounds great. Also love the two deaths. Spot on charicterastion, actions like these are exactly why Marval death can not be trusted.

report review for abusesamics chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Lovely start! I just feel bad for James, Lily and Sirius.. Well not very bad for Sirius, presumably he didn't go to Azkaban here.

report review for abuseEzeakel chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I liked the chapter

I greatly liked him.

The only thing I disliked is bringing James and lily's back to life.

Why you did bring natasha if you'll revive Harry's parents.

report review for abuseronjon chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Oooooo! I do hope you continue this story. Talk about different! Of course, I don't know how this will work with James and Lily alive but at least Sirius won't be imprisoned for 12 years. And Harry will be well fed, normal height, and well trained before he's 11.

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Very good enjoyed it very much thank you for writing

report review for abuseKagey98 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Hey, Great opening! I'm looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing your talent!

report review for abusewolfecub1 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

This sounds FUN! I'd love to know how they found Natasha, and where/if she'll learn more magic. Plus, having Lily and James back is really going to cause problems for her later . . .

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseArthas Potter chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Very interested in where you will be taking this :)

report review for abuseTheUnfortunateHero chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

As soon as I got the email this story was out I immediately opened the chapter. There's been a lack of good Harry Potter fan fiction in the community lately but ever since I found your stuff your stories have been my favorites. I abosolutely LOVE this story concept and this chapter was so fun and cute and thrilling all in one. I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 2. Keep up the good work!

report review for abusemoriel8 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

XD

Me encantó

Por favor continúa la historia.

report review for abusepokemanik671 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I can't wait for more

report review for abuseProtoman 0 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I recall reading one fanfic where he was raised by Blaise Zabini's mother, now by Black Widow huh? While I'm not a fan of a high body count, best he learn to protect himself. I look forward to see what you come up with

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Good idea someone Who teach Harry how to deal with cretins.

report review for abusetripmight chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

Really curious where you are going with this storyline, especially with James and Lily.

report review for abuseDezzi95 chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

I'm so excited for this you have no idea lol

report review for abuseanimusand chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

*Spoilers?*

So is her magical-ness innate? It could be why she survived (you might say flourished in) the Red Room when so many others did not. They definitely got her young, possibly before any sort of accidental magic could occur.

report review for abuseNyx Muirinn chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

very, very excited for this. love Natasha but so few good fics with her, can't wait for more!

report review for abuseGhostisreading chapter 1 . May 30, 2019

So cute I love it! And i adore both Deaths :D

Hadami chapter 2 . Jun 21

Nice story.

I would have liked to see more of Harry growing up. It seems like a bit of a waste of a cool idea to skip 13 years.

report review for abusemattywilkss chapter 2 . Jun 12

the dumbest trope in all of fanfiction. that his name comes out of the cup even though no one has any idea if he's even alive, let alone where he is.

report review for abuseBrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 2 . Aug 16, 2019

It is fate, my dear Natasha. Hedwig was always going to be bonded with Harry.

report review for abuseMattywilkss chapter 2 . Jul 26, 2019

The most retarded trope in the entirety of the Harry potter fandom. HIS NAME CAME FROM THE GOBLET SO HE MUST APPEAR. Jesus. Harry appears and somehow isnt what they expected! The whole story is focused on how much of a cool assassin Harry is rather than actually giving a fuck about a story arc. So was my prediction correct?

report review for abusesunsethill chapter 2 . Jul 9, 2019

Hooray. Harry gets Hedwig. I really hate it when he doesn't have Hedwig. ;-)

report review for abuseDullReign82 chapter 2 . Jul 5, 2019

Thank God hedwig's in your story, I always have a smile on my face when I read about and imagine that beautiful snowy owl.

report review for abusebigmeaty69 chapter 2 . Jun 13, 2019

I think a Lily that hasnt gotten over Harry and had more kids is something I havent really seen before. I think it's nice. I hope Harry is able to accept her even if she cant replace Natasha.

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 2 . Jun 6, 2019

Hmm... He has a find markings of being The Librarian, or Daniel Jackson. Perhaps even Henry something from that show unnatural history (if i am not mistaken)

Would love it if they find a way back to Avenger-verse

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 2 . Jun 6, 2019

Fantastic chapter

report review for abuseBMS chapter 2 . Jun 3, 2019

While this is interesting you're doing what everyone seems to do in "someone else raises Harry" stories. Two chapters, one quick summary of accents, travel, etc and we're going to Hogwarts to see Harry take on canon events w/ amazing skills and a different attitude. Why does no one actually show him growing up? Learning the new skills and interacting w/ his "mom", "family" or what not. We know canon events it's the early years we want to see. At least in my case.

Good luck w/ the rest but I'm out.

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 2 . Jun 2, 2019

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Cool how James and Lily are alive and concerned. Hermione is good in Ravenclaw, and Flitwick is the MVP. Update soon!

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Awe yeah! Moooore. so,so good;)

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Very good story enjoy it

report review for abuseHoobs2 chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Ooo this is good it's a refreshing change to the Harry Potter Avengers crossover.

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

I like

report review for abuseagnar chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

You're unclear here if Harry knows any magic. He obviously knows about magic, and Natasha apparently was made a witch as she used Bella's wand. But not sure how they'd have found magic areas in the various countries without knowing to begin with.

All the martial arts and weapons training won't help him in a magical contest, if he knows no magic beyond talking to snakes.

report review for abusealec-potter chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Well interesting chapter and I am seriously disappointed that there isn't a third for me to watch the pandonium.

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Hi.

Well, this is a bit odd, but also quite nice. Lots of cliche's dodged here with no 'instant summoning ritual', 'unlimited magical tracking' or some sort. The way James and Lily are acting is also believable and a bit more humane than many other stories where Harry is lost, yet his parents live.

Then there is Hermione... I felt i should mention her, as it's a bit interesting that in many stories without Harry at Hogwarts she ends up in Ravenclaw. This could be because of her interactions with Harry on the train, since she is sorted before him then perhaps she was guessing which house he would most likely end up in? I wonder if there are other 'anomalies' when it comes to the storting... Did Neville end up in Hufflepuff for instance?

Lastly are the Romanoff's... Harry must have been an exemplary student if he managed to learn all the martial arts and weapons Natasha could offer. When you are constantly on the move you don't really have the time, room or the privacy to practice those things in peace, but on the other hand i could see how so much one-on-one time with his mother and traveling the world would make him very adept at languages, history and philosophy. I guess we'll just have to see when he gets to Hogwarts :)

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseMidnightFenrir chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

I will admit I didn't expect the 13 years time-skip at just chapter two.

I assume we'll get more background development as the story goes on in terms of flashbacks and such, but that was still a bit shock.

report review for abuseGhostisreading chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Love it! More please

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Very interesting, definitely a story out of the norm, as it would have been OK if Lily and James had remained dead (which at that time, Sirius would have chased after Peter, and then chucked in Azkaban, whether warranted or not, as at that stage, he wouldn't care). However, Death had to "Play God" and bring Lily and James back to life, which added it's own can of worms, although I'm curious if they captured Peter or not. I did find it interesting that Nat was able to use Bella's Wand to cast that AK, and obviously that did explore the Wizarding World to some degree, so it will be fun to see how much they have incorporated Magic into their lives. Naturally Hedwig would be able to find HER Wizard, even though He didn't know that at that time, lol. If they had really thought about it at the time, they KNEW that he was still alive, as if he wasn't, NONE of the tracking spells would have worked AT ALL, and nor would ANY of the Owls even try to deliver Any of the Letters. It did surprise me that Dumbles didn't try to use Fawkes to get to him. Also, in canon (and in Most Fics), the parchment that had his Name on it Was something that he had written on (which included His Magical Signature, which is what the Goblet uses to enforce its selection), so said magic should Key on whoever actually wrote and submitted his name. I look forward to more. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseMissLuffy05 chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

It's so cool

report review for .vanga chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Oh sweetheart, I so love you. More chapters please.

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah this is soooooooooo gooooooooood. Thank you.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

So definitely here for this

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

What a conundrum. So only 3 champions as the Goblet was intended for. Except, Harry Potter is Hogwarts' champion as chosen by the Goblet of Fire.

Cedric isn't participating? What a relief.

report review for abusePaddysAvianExpert chapter 2 . Jun 1, 2019

Thank you! I really wish more people jumped straight into where the story starts, instead of going through every single year rehashing canon until there AU twist actually begins. Anyways, really excited for more.

report review for abuseBoredoom chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Hi, your story has similarities to others, but even so it is of to a great start. The first chapter was so good at catching audience and the second teases so much with so little, I am already in love and very eagerly awaiting more.

Best Regards & a new (officially) follower

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Awesome story.

report review for abuseDuellist chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

This is clever, and I like it. Nat deserves to come back.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Still good

report review for abuseGuest chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Magic is all about intent, so if dosent show up nothing going to happend

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Interesting concept hope to see more soon

report review for abuseKeyofSolomon.M.E chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

... Okay you got my attention

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Dead parents now alive. What to do ? :)

report review for abuseShadowCree chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

I'm excited to see the reunion between Harry and the Potters. Love anything Black Widow!

report review for abuseSuperTroll567 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Good chapter.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseJake Crepeau chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Owls with pointers? They still haven't figured out how many licks it takes to get to the center of a Tootsie-Pop; none of them have managed to get past three! ;D Of course, if you're talking about magical owls, they ALL have pointers, as in, a built-in "point-me" spell! LOL

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Too bad the Potters aren't able to find any peace regarding Harry. At least Hermione found some friends in Ravenclaw.

I feel like the Tri-Wiz is almost the only plot that can get an elsewhere-raised Harry to Hogwarts. I wonder how he'll compare to Fleur and Victor.

You even managed to get him to have Hedwig. I do like how he's the only person she has any form of affection for.

report review for abuseLegate619 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

I find myself torn. On the one hand, i like that things are getting right to the meat of it but on the other I think i would have liked a chapter of two of vignettes showcasing Harry growing up with Natasha.

Maybe some interspersed looks at what's happening in the wizarding world in his absence.

Still and all, well done and immediately engaging. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

report review for abuseJKArcanus chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Wow...best of intentions Natasha made some rather poor assumptions (not even factoring in the faulty intel) that ended up with them not only them being on the run constantly but caused terrible heartache for a couple for a solid decade...I know Natasha is a badass an all, but I'm really kind of hoping to see Lily whip out some epic shit in her ass when the time comes.

report review for abuseallie213 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Hedwig!

report review for abuseSvenion chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

why are the Potters still alive. that's kind of a shitty thing to do. you could have manufactured plenty of drama without the eventual family reunion. I mean, really.

report review for abuseLexarius chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Cool.

I guess Harry's training leans to the Muggle Ninja-assassin side, so he would probably use those techniques in the tournament. And also to put a certain Ponce in his place once he runs his mouth.

"Why would I waste magic to face you when I don't have to?"

I see a serious and probably terminal case of underestimating the enemy in Voldie's future.

report review for abuseGreer123 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

I think this is a very interesting story so far.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Good chapter and what a terrible life for Sirius, James and especially Lily. Fun ending and thanks for sharing!

report review for abusevrtulka chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Just found this story and i must say its great!

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseExitPhillyLAS chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

I love me an Avengers Harry Potter crossover, and this is looking to be a particularly good one. Th is for the update, can't wait to see Harry and Natasha take Hogwarts!

report review for abuseSeikunaras chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Love it. I just hope that Lily and James wont become villains. I have see that trope too often. Keep them coming pretty please?

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Intriguing. Update soon.

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Awesome chapter

To be honest, can't wait to see the confrontation between the two mothers.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Hehe. Only Hedwig. This should be interesting. A fully martial-arted Harry showing up in a medieval society? Once he blends wand magic with that, he will be nigh unstoppable.

On an unrelated note, I have been thinking recently how Hermione fits every house, really. I like Hufflepuff Hermione, myself. Her loyalty is legendary. Her work ethic is ridiculous. And she would make friends in Hufflepuff, the only house that is likely to be free of the need to outdo others (by brains, by guile, by recklessness). The other houses are all about oneupmanship. She could actually relax in Hufflepuff and be happy.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Woop! Hedwig has joined the party! Wouldn't it be funny if Harry in his blonde wig ran into the Malfoys? Just a thought.

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 2 . May 31, 2019

Please write the next chapter already and have Harry dress up as a girl for his appearance at Hogwarts. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Guest chapter 3 . Aug 13, 2019

The story is boring. The writing is barely good enough to maintain the story-telling flow. The character's are robotic, the dialogue is artificial and the whole plot seems like a 1k one-shot dragged out into multiple chapters.

Thanks for writing but I'll skip this story.

report review for abuseqwertypous chapter 3 . Aug 5, 2019

guns not working because of magic is the most stupidist thing i ever read in HP fiction. seriously its so fucking cringy to read.

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 3 . Jul 25, 2019

Loved it! Fantastic chapter.

report review for abusesunsethill chapter 3 . Jul 9, 2019

Yep, that discussion is going to be an interesting one. I love that Harry succeeded basically by doing acrobatics.

report review for abusestylo1 chapter 3 . Jul 7, 2019

harrys name coming out of the cup couldnt of happend, they needed his signature for that.

why harry hasnt gotten a wand yes is a mystery.

guns dont work for magicals? how the hell can they even move around in the muggle world?

report review for abuse6258489 chapter 3 . Jun 25, 2019

She'd allow him to wear real glasses? I'd think she'd find them a weakness and at least get him contacts if not laser eye surgery, though, back in the 90's surgery want the best...

report review for abusebigmeaty69 chapter 3 . Jun 13, 2019

So Natasha didnt even know that his parents were alive. That makes alot more sense. Love the story

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 3 . Jun 12, 2019

Not a good idea to mention his biological parents. For all intents and purposes, Natasha is his one and only true mother. The one who raised him, cared for him, trained him and loved him.

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 3 . Jun 6, 2019

Great chapter. I'm glad they made it in time

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 3 . Jun 3, 2019

Hi.

Well, i guess that was interesting, what with the Potter Parents being aware of their own deaths and all... I guess that would make explaining things a bit easier for Natasha at least, and Lily does make a fair point about Peter (Although did they really try as many tracking charms as they did for Harry?).

Something that did surprise me was that they decided to hike all the way to Scotland, which would be a 650 miles trip in less than a month. It's hardly impossible, and i'm sure Natasha could do so easily (weightless packs also helps), but i'm less sure about a 14 year old who isn't on the Super Serum. They would have to travel at an average of over 32 miles a day despite wind, weather and common ailments like blisters and worn shoes (This is Britain we are talking about after all :p), and there should be more than some fatigue when they finally get there. Long distance tracking is no joking matter ;)

On a side note, i'm wondering why Harry doesn't have a wand yet, despite still having had time to learn magic? If they were able to buy magic books, then they should also have been able to buy a wand that at least was a decent fit.

You deserve some praise for making the task more enjoyable though. Parkour'ing a dragon is certainly a first for me, and it did seem like it was all done without magic too, which would be impressive against an apex predator who is protecting her young.

On the other hand, i think you should have glossed over the part with the guns more. Going into detail means that people will pick apart the argument, and Ron even got a muggle drivers license... With a muggle car that has way more mechanical and chemical components than any gun there is (although i guess a railgun does come close :p). Against the limited population of magicals Natasha wouldn't even really need guns (and she got the killing curse that works in 99,98% of all cases...), so i don't think it's a loss except for the convenience of sniping the bastards from 2 miles away.

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseBryan chapter 3 . Jun 3, 2019

Great plot With much potential!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

So guns misfire when exposed to magic? That's a ... weird interpretation. I know it's pretty much fanon that only electronics doesn'T work near magic, but it's a huge stretch to expand that to projectile weaponry. For that to work, magic would have to influence chemical reactions, which in turn would also change other things. How can wizards have fire, isn't that pretty much the same thing?

But that tidbit aside, I'm having great fun reading this story. I love the Black Widow/Harry interaction. Funnily enough they fit so well as mother and son, definitely better than any man/woman pairing I've ever read of them.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

good chapter

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

I like the chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Good Show. Thank you for sharing your talent.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Well this is going to be awkward...

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 3 . Jun 3, 2019

EXCELLENT CHAPTER! You wrote everyone so well, even Karkaroff and Snape! This will take some explaining about his parents. Also, I guess Cedric won't die then. Please update. ALSO! See if there is a way you can tie in the other Avengers somehow, like they know Natasha is alive somehow and try to find her. You can tie in Spider-Man Far From Home and the whole multiverse idea for this. Great work!

report review for abuseLostDragon49 chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

Not to sure about James and Lilly being revived but I'll still keep following.

report review for abusePheobe Arocis chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

Your story is brilliant! Will Natasha reveal herself? How will the Potters react? I can't wait! Keep up the good work!

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseJamalymal chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

Since you said please...More please...

report review for abuseChenillcam chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

That was awesome really, I didn't expect something this good when I clicked on this story. You are doing an amazing writing job and I can't wait to read the next chapter ! Congrats !

report review for abuseValiryo chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

Aw, I was kinda hoping Lily and James' marriage would fall through.. making room for the Lily/Natasha pairing so Harry could have 2 badass mommies. :

report review for abuseAria Dragoncrest chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

Great chapter! I'm excited to see how you handle the family reunion.

report review for abuseSsmickey123 chapter 3 . Jun 2, 2019

I am loving this story. Can't wait for Harry and Nat to meet James and Lily.

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Oh man you are setting up for the showdown of the century with Lily and James, especially after this chapter which could be seen as a giant prank, lolThank you!

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Where do we start with the level of awesome here?! I mean, this chapter is basically a giant prank on canon and the magical world while being quite realistic. But man oh man, Lily and James... Your are setting upf

report review for abusedoctor of supreme awesomeness chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

I was sooooo iffy about reading this story, but maaaaan does it hold up to your other work, if not better. Amazing story so far

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abusethebehr247 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

So are you planning on Harry continue to use wandless magic, or will he eventually get a wand?

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

whelp that's going to be interesting

report review for abuseAnFan-n-More chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Does begging for reviews work?

I guess it does to a point. I wasn't going to review since I didn't really have something to say about the story so far. Mostly it's "I like it so far".

I will say that I was pretty anxious here with this chapter that there would be too much 'DRAMA'. In other words, not an entertaining story of events, but angst and tsuris when meeting his old parents.

I wonder if you can throw in something like, "Well, I know it's not like a marriage or something where 'Till death do you part', but still if you were dead how can you be angry that my mother, who was pulled into this world by Death herself (and won't that be fun to explain) telling her to take care of the baby, did just that?"

Anyway, it was just a funny thought about that wedding vow that tickled my funny bone.

I look forward to the next chapter. And I guess I did have something to say after all :D

report review for abusecandinaru25 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

oh won't this come as a shock to find out that they managed to come back to life.

report review for abuseGreer123 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Severus is right about Lily ripping them all a new one.

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Amazing story, wish I could favourite each chapter can't wait to see how this will play out

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Ooh, real slick Harry. The faculty is in a really awkward position though lol. I look forward to the next update!

report review for abuseCynicArchon chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

you have my attention!

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Yesss this is gooood. Thank you.

report review for abuseFreeTraderBeowolf chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

That had to be one of the most unique first task in fanfiction.

report review for abuseHobbyfarmer chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Excellent

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Nice new chapter hope to see another soon

report review for abuseSuperTroll567 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

And so the drama really begins. Nice chapter.

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Well, this was fun. Not really any specific thoughts, just a sense of fun.

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Uh oh. Will they tell him? How will he react? Update soon.

report review for abuseJake Crepeau chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Okay, I get the whole thing with the magical creature preserve you keep in an alternate universe, but what in the world would you do with mother dragon *fire*? Maybe welding adamantium? ;D

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Fun chapter and I laughed when reading that they walked all the way to Hogwarts. The ending was great and I'm sure that Harry will be rather surprised to find his birth parents alive. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseMyllinu chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

well that's going to cause some confusion

report review for abusecupisti chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Hi,

It is my new favourite story. It is exciting. I hope Harry can build his own Magical-Avengers Team. That would be great, if he found some people/wizard/witch, how hase some special ability.

I hope Harry won't use wand, and insist his life before, and won't became a tipical good Hogwarts student.

report review for abusetripmight chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Mother Dragon Fire

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Love the idea still. Would love to argue with the guns thing electronics I can handle. That's cool even make a bit of sense.

But guns are purely mechanical. Hammer, hits head, ignites gunpowder and blows bullet out of chamber.

So I guess the idea that magic somehow knows to ruin this purely natural process kinda just... idk. Irks me.

Otherwise! Love it.

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Awesome chapter

The aftermath after this will be epic.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Meet the not so dead parents ?

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Good chapter; thanks for the update.

But why, oh why, would they not get Harry a wand?

Also, we know from HP1 that dragon eggs are kept at least fireplace hot. If Harry was really crawling around the nest, he'd be quite crispy. (This was also a flaw with HP4, but retcon apologists can *conjecture* that the golden egg was enchanted to not scorch people.)

report review for abuseEdocsiru chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

You know he shouldn't have glasses living a healthy outdoors life style right? He inherited the eyes of Lily, not James. No cupboard means no glasses.

report review for abuseEzeakel chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Pretty nice chapter.

It will be interesting to see the mating between Harry and his birth parents.

report review for abuseebarnea25 chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

I love this story! This is such a cool idea. Please keep updating!

report review for abuseNoirReality chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

*Claps in Glee at all the chaos left behind.*

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

I really like this story. It's and excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseWyrmridr chapter 3 . Jun 1, 2019

Veeeerrrrrrryyyyy interesting...

jjasonbornn chapter 4 . Jun 6

You did a good job with the parents. Too many of them don't realize the consequences of their actions to the child.

report review for abuseMosquitoesLoveMe chapter 4 . Jan 16

This. I think I have hit the holy grail amongst fanfiction. I didn't know how badly I wanted this story until I began reading it! Oh the feels in this chapter! I am super excited to see how this turns out. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'mma stay up all night to binge this thing.

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 4 . Jan 9

Great stuff! Excellent work

report review for abuseN7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 4 . Jan 6

Try co parenting? Natasha is going to feel horrible enough realizing you're alive.

report review for abuseCalmzone1 chapter 4 . Dec 10, 2019

At least they are both backing off and thinking. I loved how Harry pointed out that all they had to do was contact the Muggle police and they would have found them any time over the past 13 years.

report review for abusea prick chapter 4 . Nov 28, 2019

:(

great fic, good balance between lighthearted family fluff and seriousness

report review for abuseTraveler301 chapter 4 . Oct 11, 2019

You really are an extremely good author. All of the things that usually bother me, are absent in your stories. Your pace is brilliant.

Thanks,

Ron Pate

Traveler301

report review for abuseAuto Cerebral Star chapter 4 . Aug 23, 2019

I LOVE this so far! You've written Natasha beautifully, with the right amounts of craftiness, self-discipline, ruthlessness, pragmatism, badassery, adaptability, and, yes, empathy... I am so happy to have found such a spot-on depiction of her character in fanfiction! Add in a little Harry Potter spice and this is just DELICIOUS!

I will continue reading as soon as I get off work...!

report review for abusemithrilandtj chapter 4 . Aug 22, 2019

{Harry was taking stalk of the castle's layout}

taking STOCK of the castle's layout

report review for abuseWeisseHex chapter 4 . Aug 13, 2019

A REAL dilemma, to be sure. Poor Potter's!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 4 . Aug 10, 2019

Love the originality if this fic. You took like 6 tropes common to the Harry Potter (and Avengers crossover) fandom, twisted them together, and wrote something almost totally new. I love the way you don't fall into sappy fluff or over-the-top angst like 99 percent of alive!Potters fics do. This was both tasteful and totally believable. The irreverant way you dealt with Wormtail was a nice touch, too.

All in all a great fic so far. Thanks for writing this!

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 4 . Jul 25, 2019

I love love LOVE this story

report review for abuseWrin chapter 4 . Jul 1, 2019

You've done the family confrontation well. I was worried about that, as it's usually difficult for authors to get emotional moments like that to the point they're both fun to read and believable. Too many points of view and not enough thought put into the dialog, usually. Not so, here. Good job.

report review for abuseAriadne Venegas chapter 4 . Jun 30, 2019

But Lily was pregnant when she died, she miscarriages, if shehad a little brother or sister Harry could had wanted to get to know them more.

I don't understand why death make them live again if they had no purpose?

report review for abuse6258489 chapter 4 . Jun 25, 2019

your explanation with guns and just the fact that guns don't work in general bothers me a bit if for nothing else because of motor vehicles... wouldn't they have similar problems?

report review for abuseImaginativeFury chapter 4 . Jun 18, 2019

Normally I am all for having Harry or the OC in a House that isn't Gryffindor or Slytherin but now the problem I have is that it will start to look as if this will follow the obvious and cliche trend of being friends to Hermione for no particular reason. Will keep reading to see were you take this.

Another thing that I sort of like but at the same time find completely wrong is how you didn't give them other children, as a sort of way of moving on or just accepting the situation but wanting children all the same.

report review for abusebigmeaty69 chapter 4 . Jun 13, 2019

Its understandable that Harry was harsh because of how overwhelming all of it was. It just makes me kind of sad that you wrote such loyal and loving Potters just for them to get a kick in the gut when they finally find Harry. So good writing, but still hoping for Harry to give them a chance

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 4 . Jun 12, 2019

Woah! So tense and dramatic. Lily Potter is not happy that Harry Romanoff nee Potter recognizes Natasha Romanoff as his true mother. Sirius' lack of tact is absolutely infuriating, I want to punch him in the face.

Ravenclaw Harry for the win. Hurray!

report review for abuseAnna chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

I am LOVING this story. It's well written; the plot is so good and I absolutely adore mama Natasha. I can't wair to see more!

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 4 . Jun 6, 2019

I feel bad for lily and James. Good chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Love this doing a great job please keep it up

report review for abusemsile chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

update soon can't wait for more

report review for abuseLarkscope chapter 4 . Jun 5, 2019

Really loving this fresh take on an old trope.

report review for abuseThe Jabberwock of OZ chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Oh geez sorry

uhhhh

This was real sudden

I have read through your library ...bookshelf? of fics and i have not seen this til today

That aside

wow this is really interesting.

I do have to wonder how the meeting of the parents will go down

This is kinda of funny how death just got sick of ALL the multiversal meddling that humans do that they would just do it themselves, But Better; though what they did was absolutely messed up.

See you around btother

report review for abuseBeeeTeee chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

I really like the quick pacing of this story. With crossovers a lot of people tend to spend waaay too much time setting up the premise when we've read it hundreds of times before. It's much more engaging to just jump right into the meat of it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

report review for abuseYeTianshi chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Really interesting so far.

report review for abusealec-potter chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Nice chapter.

Not too sappy nor too emo, so good balance.

Hope Nat's reaction is in the next chapter.

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

I liked this chapter. Man it makes me want moooore

report review for abuseTheSphynx chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Love it. Will you introduce The Avengers at all

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abusetripmight chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

Great chapter, I loved how Harry meeting his parents went.

report review for abuseanimusand chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

I'm loving your ideas. One sticking point is you really need someone to proofread, it's quite distracting.

report review for abuseAnimeA55Kicker chapter 4 . Jun 4, 2019

I feel for Lily and James. Death really screwed them over. I hope now they might be willing to have another kid, and that this whole ordeal hasn't ruined their happy marriage beyond repair.

Love the fic btw

report review for abusespitfyre1 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I just binged this whole story. I love it. Keep up the good work

report review for abusescwatcher chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Fascinating start. I would have loved to have read about some of the Natasha/Harry misadventures before getting into the Hogwarts setting just to get a more rounded idea of your interpretation of these characters. But maybe I'm jumping the gun, you could have planned a way to address this already. I'm enjoying this read. Keep it coming, please.

report review for abuseLove it chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Love it:)

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

A very good chapter

report review for abuseBARON2462 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

really am enjoying this story so far looking forward to the next chapter.

report review for abuseThundramon chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I want to see Hedwig become Harry's familiar, can you please include a scene for it in the story.

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Again, just superb. Really enjoyed the "thinking persons" approach to the meeting in the officeboth Harry's thoughts as well as those of James and Lilyand their behaviour and control as each realizes things about the other, and about consequences to things they might say. 5 star awesome. Thank you for sharing your cunning and beautiful imagination with us!

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

very good, loved

report review for abuseSakura Lisel chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Harry should REMIND everybody that he ALREADY told them that he CAN'T use a wand so the whole 'lets get you a wand' thing is a WASTE of HIS time no matter what they say. *lol* I mean come on, he even told them that he had even been at Ollivanders in Diagon Alley just a MONTH ago, and NONE of Ollivanders 'picked' him. So if even Ollivanders wands won't work on him, exactly WHERE do they expect to find him a wand that WILL work on him? *lol*

report review for abuseHome of the Brave chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Thanks for the update. Pettigrew is dead. Rudolphus is dead. Anymore significant deaths or are they a surprise? By the way what about that other guy killed in the first chapter, was that just a nameless wizard or what?

report review for abuseAnFan-n-More chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Poor Lily. Caught up in terrible circumstances and he own hangups on having died and remembered death. Makes for a very heart wrenching situation. And could possibly pull Harry's attention away from the dangers he's stepping into with the politics of Hogwarts and British Wizarding World.

But, I trust in Natasha's training. I'm sure he's read about potions and they have investigated the methods that have been used to control people as much as they can without being aurors. But I'm sure they found some stories about speculation on the subject even if it was in literature in other countries. And I doubt any of the students are going to catch him off guard even if they send spells his way. His reactions now... that will be interesting.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

report review for abuseBigguns123 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

You're doing a great job with this story. It really is different but very believable in the Harry Potter/Avengers universes. Keep writing I am thoroughly enjoying this.

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Hi.

Hmm... So magic 'helping' isn't always helping at all? I wonder how you plan for that to be consistent throughout the story... Will they take a plane, and suddenly the closest engine will start stalling? Perhaps cars will get flat tires if they walk too closely to parked ones? I can only say that if magic works like that, then magic won't remain hidden from the world for long.

Anyways... The meeting between Harry and the Potters went quite well in my opinion. It could certainly have gone worse, and since everyone is still alive i'll consider it a success :p I still don't fully understand why so many people had to join the conversation in the headmaster's office though... Almost like a criminal trial in there :p

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Ouch.

report review for abusePyro-Neko-Isis chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Wow! This is getting really good! I'm looking forward to reading more

report review for abuseSpaceLegionnaire chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Fine. Just fine. Write another awesome story, deal out chapters that get me really excited, and then make me wait for me. It's not like I check my email several times a day hoping for a message that ANY of your stories have a new chapter.

I just need to settle into the fact that you're gonna write awesome stuff, and I'm gonna have to wait to read it all. Probably reread it again once the story is finished so I can get a feel for the flow of the entire story. I can wait. Just gotta hope you don't take up another hobby before you finish your stories.

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Nice new chapter hope to see another soon

report review for abuseyrfgd chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Glad to see that Lily's being smart. She's right he will run if they try to force him

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Great chapter; good character interactions all around.

›› You were a Hatstall," the Headmaster said, and Harry couldn't tell if he was pleased or not.

Why would Harry volunteer that info to the tight-lipped Bastard?

"Yes, I kept arguing for Durmstrang. The hat wanted me in Beauxbatons. We compromised on Ravenclaw."

Or just plain and dismissive: "Interesting."

report review for abuseShadeslayerX chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

With people assuming they know better, Mr Romanoff will most probably flip them the bird before making like a tree (leaving ofc)... this is what i hated in cannon: he was never told anything that would have kept him truly safe. No one allowed him to make decisions for himself, and his mental health was a worthy regretable sacrifice

report review for abuseOlly chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Ah, so that's why you put Hermione in Ravenclaw ? I was wondering...

On another note, I really feel bad for the Potter. It must be aweful to somehow survived Voldemort to discover your son is missing and when you finally met him, he doesn't really want to see you.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

What an amazing chapter. You can feel the emotions running high.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Ugh this was rough. Good chapter but ow. Dumbledore and Sirius were complete morons in there approach to Harry.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Awesome! I agree with Harry, biological connections does not necessarily make a family. He has a mother that loves and adores him in Natasha, Lily and James are given a chance and that is more than realistic based on the circumstances. I am excited to read more and to see where you continue to take this lovely story. Thanks for posting! ~LiteratureSoccerEnthusiast

report review for abuseGuest chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Great chapter! Thank you for sharing your talent!

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

You no as far as slitherans go, I'd imagine Harry would get along with Blaze. Close both of them were rased by black widows. Anyway, great chapter. Loved Harry's reaction to the professes. Thank you.

report review for abuseallie213 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I'm loving this story. it's capturing how the magical world(well British at least) thinks less of the muggle. Dumbledore and possibly the potters would have enough influence to at least ask the muggle government to flag a traveler whose visited the places they found but didnt.

I'm excited for flitwick being Harry's head of house. I loved their interaction in easier than falling asleep

report review for abuseossifrage chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I like how you have everybody acting reasonably, and it is still a horrid mess. It will be fun to watch people try to figure out what would be right things for them to do.

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Awesome chapter..

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

i get the Potters I really do but they are idiots and yes HP would run, he just needs to be there for the events other than that they can disappear

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Oh my. Will they meet Natasha soon? Update soon.

report review for abusecormag81 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

interesting premise though i kind of wish you'd had him return at 11 instead of 14. I hope Lily and Natasha are able to get along and are not constantly butting heads over harry cause the two of them together sound hilarious. International super spy and brightest witch of an age Voldemort wont know what hit him.

To be honest when this first came out i was probably one of the ones who wished it was a chapter of one of your other stories. Now I find I'm not sure what I hope gets published next, the next chapter in this or Laughing all the way to London. keep up the great work and i'll watch to see if anything else from you hits my inbox

report review for abusemoriel8 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Gran capítulo

Gracias

Esperaré ansiosa el próximo capítulo.

report review for abuseVeriseple chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Very interesting premise. I can't wait to see what Natasha unleashes on the wizarding world.

report review for abuseJukedSolid chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

It's funny, but Sirius has the right idea. He was pretty tactless, but Natasha is essentially a kidnapper. You would think a spy would stay pretty abreast of the situation when the events of a country could affect her. Gathering information about current events would be essential, and since The Daily Prophet would have material for weeks about, "Potters Attacked! Distraught parents search for missing son!" it's hard to believe she wouldn't have known they were alive. She has done a better job keeping him safe, but the Potters have suffered the most because of her actions. It's rare that I don't take Harry's side in a story, but the Potter's really got the short end of the stick. Hopefully they get some closure. Thanks for writing! It's pretty fun.

-JukedSolid

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Very good enjoyed it very much

report review for abuseBoredoom chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

This was brilliant, I love the characterization, description and flow of the story. The little part about the hiking and mischievousness from the mother/son duo is perfect. I also really love how you built Natasha from the dead at vormir angle. Furthermore the dragon part was great, please don't keep us waiting for too long. This is the most promising crossover I have had in a long time.

P.S it's also great technically and the background with Natasha raising him and the assassinations is something I would love to get some glimpses in during the story, perhaps some tidbits about both of their learning their individual magic as well.

- A fan of yours :)

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Awesome chapter

report review for abuseFreeTraderBeowolf chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Oh, that was very good.

report review for abuseGreer123 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I loved how the meeting between Harry and his birth parents went in this chapter.

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I absolutely Loved Harry's solution to handling the First Task, that Momma Horntail was not impressed, and as a matter of fact, She was Royally peeved about it. For Harry it was a good Combat Obstacle Survival Course run. Yeah, trying to push Harry now would not be a good idea, although the conversation that he and Natasha will be soon having, will be Very Interesting to say the least, as they were both blindsided by the revelation that the Potters survived. I know that Harry and Filius will get on famously. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseCrazyknight chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Well you've done it again. Two chapters and I'm hooked.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Two mothers and a father might work :)

report review for abuseTamara35 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I really love this Story.

report review for abusetiger0lily chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I really love this story, it's so refreshing from everything else in this website. My only wish with this story is if you don't pair Harry with Ginny. There's too many stories like that. Your writing is beautiful :)).

report review for abuseronjon chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Well, I have to say I am just loving this story. I feel sorry for all of them especially Harry. Blissful in his ignorance for 13 years, traveling around the world with his mother will seriously resent the backwards and muggle denigrating attitude of the British Wizarding world. I can't see his "mother" putting up with it very much either. I bet she snatches a knot in Sirius's pure blood tail, too.

report review for abuseCynicArchon chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

will we see any other marvel characters?

Other then that carry on with the good work.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Awesome chapter with some real life drama to complete it. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseLegate619 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Nice meaty chapter on this one; overall, I liked it.

I thought Harry's interaction with everyone at Hogwarts was well done, striking the proper balance between being considerate and not putting up with any nonsense; showing 'tough love' as it were.

The only jarring notes were the sudden swerve to Ravenclaw after being so evenly torn between Gryffindor and Slytherin; the Sorting came across as those two being the ONLY options, rather than the best ones, causing the Ravenclaw decision to feel out of place.

The other discordant note is how easily Harry and Natasha seem to have accepted being tied down to Hogwarts for a year (or even two, according to Harry) after doing so much traveling all their lives, I go mention coming out into the open after being in hiding for so long. Perhaps once Natasha infiltrates Hogwarts they could hash that out?

In any event the story continues to be engaging and interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next.

report review for abuseJannaKalderash chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

This is not going to end well for anyone. Harry is too independent, Lily is obsessed with having him, Sirius is an idiot; Dumbledore too controlling and manipulative, I could go on.

I shudder to think of how Ron is going to act around him, as well as Ginny.

Draco is fairly predictable; he'll approach Harry with all the subtlety of a flying mallet and make an enemy of him; especially once he insults Natasha.

report review for abuseEzeakel chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

The meeting was pretty good.

8 can not wait for the meeting between natasha and Harry's biological parents.

Good luck.

report review for abuseJake Crepeau chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I honestly couldn't think of an answer to that one, but Jordre came to the rescue. She suggests getting your dragons to melt down the shrapnel, then you can use it to make something useful! ;D

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Whew. Tough for Harry, to suddenly have all that dropped on him. Maybe Natasha will be the bridge builder, letting Harry know that he can have a relationship with his biological parents without betraying his relationship with her. Gonna be tough when Natasha and Lily meet, though.

I just realized that Lily became an Auror. Well, I knew it, because it was in the story, but sheesh. That's a bit of a right turn for her life.

Glad Harry stamped out Pettigrew. He handled himself well, overall, I think. Can't wait to see how Ravenclaw deals with wandless magic. Hehehe.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

I really like this story. It is an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

Can't wait till the next chapter, it'd amazing how you're putting updates almost every day, obviously I don't know your plans for the series but in my opinion I think it would be cool if Harry gets a staff rather than a wand and natasha teaches him how to use it as a weapon like the Japanese bo staff

report review for abuseVal'Hor chapter 4 . Jun 3, 2019

This is so awesome ! Keep up the good work ! Your story really flows when I read it.

I chapter 5 . Apr 30

I really like that you added "At least he knew she wasn't keeping her feelings bottled up." at the end, it was actually a bit funny to me (dunno why though). And your story is really amazing! I absolutely love it!

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 5 . Jan 9

I feel bad for the spiders

report review for abuselaraquick chapter 5 . Jan 3

Loved this chapter esp the wand shopping. Natasha really took out her frustration on those acromantulas. I wonder why the centaurs wouldn't tell Hagrid who did it.

report review for abuseWhiteDragonWarrior chapter 5 . Nov 14, 2019

Lol, that's one way to channel your anger.

report review for chapter 5 . Sep 29, 2019

Bo staff is probably the most overused, and the most overestimated weapon in fanfiction, not only the REAL use of it looks nothing like the dances performed for show, it is one the the most uncomfortable weapons to handle, not to mention it looks like a lame piece of shit

report review for abuseForksintheRoad chapter 5 . Aug 17, 2019

I am enjoying this story so much! Easily believable amount of muggle and magic. Love that Harry got through the first task like a ninja. Fun!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 5 . Aug 10, 2019

Hahahahaha! Remus... REMUS saying 'enough pity party'. That's absolute gold (when compared to canon). I love your version of Remus so much. "I ain't got time for this shit, get over it." w

report review for abusesunsethill chapter 5 . Jul 9, 2019

She wasn't keeping her feelings bottled up! Snicker. Just how many spiders were there, Hagrid? I bet the centaurs make Natasha an honorary member of the herd.

report review for abuseDullReign82 chapter 5 . Jul 5, 2019

She fights with the Hulk, so Natasha knows how to take care of big creatures.

report review for abuseRifful chapter 5 . Jun 23, 2019

The spider thing was fun.

report review for abuseLady Sunrise chapter 5 . Jun 12, 2019

Hello!

I enjoyed a lot reading this story (and I haven't finished it yet!);

I just found a little mistake at the beginning of the chapter 5 : when they're speaking French, Harry should've said "Enchanté" 'cause he's a boy and Fleur should've said "Enchantée" 'cause she's a girl.

That's all, thanks for sharing your work !

Bye

report review for abuseCount Jim 'tribbles' Moriarty chapter 5 . Jun 12, 2019

Just a nagging thought, but I think if you were on a volcano, in the places dodgy enough for the ground to open up under you and there be magma underneath, you'd already be very dead from a bunch of other local hazards.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 5 . Jun 12, 2019

Natasha is not pleased that Death failed to mention that Harry's biological parents were alive.

report review for abuseValiryo chapter 5 . Jun 11, 2019

Mm, not sure how I feel about the bo staff.. it's just not very wizard-y.. though I guess that means that he'll focus more on classes that don't require the use of a wand while learns to use the staff on his own?

report review for abuseGuest chapter 5 . Jun 9, 2019

hahahaha! the centaurs are probably like, "okay, this human is a keeper", especially if she pulled out the bow and arrows.

report review for abuseof Serendip chapter 5 . Jun 10, 2019

This Hermione is even more annoying than canon. Haha.

I love Harry and Natasha in this story. They are a good mother and son pair. I have never read anything like this. James and Lily were always dead in other stories. Also I like how Harry finds that the magical people are stupid I make no sense whatsoever. Please don't let Harry start relying on his bo staff. I like that Harry Can Do wandless Magic. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter. I want to know who entered him into the tournament. And I am also glad that the rat is dead. I cannot wait to read the confrontation or the meeting between Natasha and his both parents.

report review for abusegod of all chapter 5 . Jun 10, 2019

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

report review for abuseGouravsilentreader chapter 5 . Jun 10, 2019

Awesome story

Love it so far

Waiting for the next part eagerly

Please update soon

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

I like

report review for abuseWildWulfChild chapter 5 . Jun 9, 2019

HaHaHaHaHaHaHa well it's good she don't keep thing bottled up and let her inner monster out and play

report review for abuseShadeMystic chapter 5 . Jun 9, 2019

Loved the chapter.

report review for abuseFrozenWave chapter 5 . Jun 9, 2019

Okay, how the hell can they expect him to just immediately adapt to fourth year classes without any sort of preparation, testing, or even a damn wand? This whole first day of school made no sense whatsoever and almost made me stop reading this story. Sorry, but the they let Harry just stumble around was just dumb.

report review for .Wonderland.8510 chapter 5 . Jun 9, 2019

I love this. I would love to see a confrontation between the Potters and Nat. I would also like to see Sev, Dumbles, Sirius, and Remus go up against Nat. I think they might be very intimidated by her. I love this story! Update soon!

report review for abuseanime-death-angel chapter 5 . Jun 8, 2019

Ok I read your story, seems to me this Natasha is the one who sacrificed herself for the Soul Stobe/Gem in Endgame. Will Natasha,s past life be explained to the Potters or Dumbledore or anyone?

report review for abuseAnonymous Fan chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

So awesome! Looking forward to the next installment. :)

report review for abuseLucas Gaston chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Is there gunna be a pt. 2?))

report review for abuseGuest chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

So good!

report review for abuseJecnavychs chapter 5 . Jun 8, 2019

so great! keep it going.

report review for abuseNadieLee chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Buena historia. Esperando la continuacion. Saludos.

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

Go Natasha!

report review for abuseBlue Yeti chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Congratulations on your Outstanding! The Department of International Cooperation will be eager to meet with you!

I love Natasha's stress relief methods. And there's so much potential for raised eyebrows at the wizarding world, which is amazing. I really want to see more of Fleur, too, especially because it shows Harry as the third culture kid that he is.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Poor Nat. Not talking the news so well.

I'm glad Remix is thinking with a straight head at least. Lol.

Can't wait for more of this. I just love love love it!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Good chapter. Feel a little bad for Hagrid but they were a danger to everyone but him.

report review for abuseFangirlBookworm21 chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

Please please please keep writing! I love this!

report review for abuseOlly chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

I really dislike Hermione in this story. She had to know that Harry was a beginner at potions, he asked her if he was using the correct ingredient and she noded and he shield her from the cauldron's explosion. And despite all that she is still angry at him and acted like everything is his fault ? She should step down from her high horse because it was mostly her fault and Harry had nothing to apologize for.

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

Poor Natasha. This is really a sweet story with Nat being so maternal. I look forward to seeing more of her interacting with the Potterverse. Here's to hoping Lily uses her brain and isn't stupidly jealous when they finally meet.

report review for abusePater Richard chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

Holy shit! These poor spiders...be careful Spider -Man around the multiverse, you don't want to be killed and dismembered by this Widow, now that she tasted spider blood.(Wait a second, wasn't there more than 200 Acromantula in the Forest?! Damn)

report review for abuseuz97 chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

Hilarious. Cant wait for more! Loved it!

report review for abuseAIP Alexander chapter 5 . Jun 7, 2019

So very skeptical when I read the story description, but the story is amazing

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Nice new chapter hope to see another soon

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Hi.

Madam Pomfrey has no chills... Comparing Harry to a father he has only known about for hours and not even taking the time to explain. At least she's casual about students causing possibly fatal injuries to others :p

Thinking back to canon, i realize that all the teachers are horrible people. At least here, Flitwick seems to be somewhat levelheaded and likable. I'm saying 'somewhat' because i'm reserving judgement until i see how Luna is doing (I have a sneaking suspicion that Hermione is making life difficult for her). The others, and especially Snape can jump in front of a lorry on the highway for all i care.

With that said, i do enjoy the dynamic between Padma, Harry and Fleur so far. They seem to be on the fast track to becoming great friend, something that Harry really needs in this new environment he has been dropped in :) Hermione isn't making a good showing at the moment, and i'm unsure how her chances look for the foreseeable future... Perhaps they should ask if Hagrid is keeping some trolls tucked away near bathrooms (good riddance to the spiders btw. Couldn't happen to better people)? I'm honestly glad we haven't heard from Ron (and hoping it stays that way), but i like where you are going with Neville so far :)

Keep up the good work, and congrats on your thesis :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseWaka Metalbelly chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

A Harry Potter crossover? Ok, well, that's been done before. Oh a *Marvel* HPXover you say? Again, it's been done before. A Marvel/HP Xover that has Natasha, who was brought over by freaking Death to the Potterverse, as a Mom while Harry's birth parents are still alive? Who were also returned to life by death? Ok, now *that's* new.

I like that to start off you have Natasha. Take it from someone who's seen her character absolutely butchered more than a few time's in other stories that just having her in a fic done well is frankly an accomplishment in of it'self. And then add in a BAMF but decidedly chill Harry Potter. I can't overstate how important that is. I've seen people try to do a casually powerful yet humble Harry potter and they make him often times come off as either a Saint or a SAS (UK Special Forces) Badass. It's always a real pleasure when I get to see Harry done right. But what really gets me laughing is that this whole thing was started because the Marvelverse and Pottervers Death's were bored.

I really like this. I really do.

report review for abuseTorstenL chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Good chapter and work! *Thumps Up!*

For no firearms working what is with old single action colts and rewolvers? Ingrave runes in them and the rounds (cartriges) and they should work... And they are not so dangers then modern firearms!

Only a idea! The widow with out guns... !

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

227. Interested to see how the BWL legend happened. Yaaaay death to invasive species. Thank you.

report review for abuseSepar chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Not sure what you brought the Potters back for other than to make things awkward.

Otherwise, quite nice story so far!

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Hmm... Death better have some offering as apologies... perhaps leads on the Kaleidoscope... Or better yet, offers to open a doorway once Voldy is take care of for good.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Ha! Legless spiders! Have them. Have them all! I hate spiders, especially giant, man-eating varieties. I am immensely happy that Natasha cleared out that nest. (Sorry, Hagrid. :D)

And a staff should be good for giggles. Gonna be fun to see people make sense of that. And Harry. I imagine he'll just be making stuff up with such a thing.

And Remus, at least, got a fire burning under those other two. (Sirius being a help, as always.) I am still anxious for the meeting of Lily and Natasha. It's either going to go well or go poorly. I don't know which yet.

Gratz on your Outstanding! If the quality of your writing here is any indication of the quality of your writing there, it isn't that surprising that you got high marks. :) Glad we can be of help!

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Another fantastic chapter. The potters should be called the family who lived since they came back to life

report review for abusePlasseau chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

This story is great! I've loved pretty much all of JacobApples' works and this is no exception to that. I was kind of worried in Chapter One when Natasha suddenly had magic and was immediately able to cast the Killing Curse but its worked out well so far.

I was very happy wit the latest chapter, I really liked the slightly adversarial interactions and attitudes between Harry and his peers. So refreshing compared to the 'these characters are friends because I want them to be' which is so prevalent in fanfictions, not that I would expect something so crass from JacobApples. Generally I prefer single point crossovers but I'm honestly pretty confident that JacobApples can make a broader crossover work.

In all, this story is certainly going to be another entry in my favourites and I very much hope its going to continue (especially with the fast updates).

report review for abusejslee102 chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Okay, this story is awesome

report review for abusesamics chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Well, the spiders must have been pretty stupid too. I mean, how long does it take you to realise that your numbers aren't working and to run away? Especially when you are intelligent enough to speak a full language?

Looks like Hermione's attitude is going to need a few small adjustments.

And finally the truth is out, Natasha knows. I'm not sure if I want Harry to successfully find secret passages for her or for her to scale the walls.. Which scene would be better to read and imagine..?

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseSsmickey123 chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Just as good as every other chapter. Can't wait for more.

report review for abuseBeeeTeee chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

Fuckin' Russia.

report review for abusesleshachoksi chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

A very different story! Cant wait to see more family time!

report review for abuseHobbyfarmer chapter 5 . Jun 6, 2019

This is great :)

report review for abuseExitPhillyLAS chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

I love that these updates keep getting longer and longer. I get so excited every time an update appears in my inbox. Can't wait for the next installment! Will this be when Natasha scales the walls?'

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Poor Hagrid , but I do think the centaurs would be incredibly friendly to the person who eliminated the dangerous critters. I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !

report review for abusespitfyre1 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Lol, looking forward to more

report review for abusedeckman1234 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Most interesting story I have read in a little while. Like a guilty pleasure you cant put down. Hope to see more soon.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Solid chapter. I like you handled the various interactions, especially the one with Flitwick meeting Nat. I look forward to the next update.

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Just when you think the day can't get any better, a fav author throws down another sick chapter. Dang, and right after throwing down a graduate thesis, too. You won't be hard to hire, that's for sure. Adore how Dumbledore's plans don't go well, how Remus and Sirius make James and Lily realize they are still living in 1981, and Potions. Foodie culture, takeout, and potions. The Patil's and Hermione, Neville. So much to love! Thank you!

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseAria Dragoncrest chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Wonderful!

report review for abusedeathgeonous chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

You know, while this was both good and interesting... I'm not quite sure if I like it. I don't dislike it, but like it...? This is a strange feeling for me. I'm going to have to watch this fic just to see exactly how I feel about this one... so strange...

report review for abuseDylan-A-Friend chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Nice!

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Very good, loved

report review for abuseHome of the Brave chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

The entire colony? I knew Natasha cook kick human, alien and godlike being ass. Magical spiders the size of cars just made the list. Is there a pairing in the works, either Padma or Fleur?

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseAnimeA55Kicker chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Aw, poor Hagrid.

report review for abuseJKArcanus chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Harry's come across as rather a large asshole in this, honestly, in variety of ways..:but especially so about his parents. Natasha's reactions about his parents good make sense so far. And while his love and worry for Nat also makes sense in this situation, most all of his other reactions very much do not; they are much more in line with what one might expect had the Potters given him up and/or abandoned him rather than what he thought (them being dead) or the reality. He's acting as though even before he found out the truth that he actively disparaged his dead parents as if they were terrible people and he's glad they're dead and now resents that they aren't, above and beyond just wishing that didn't mean family drama. I was rather hoping that Nat would wallop some of the current insensitive dickishness out of him once she found out. We shall see, I suppose.

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

It's their own fault, "They" assumed that she was a free quick meal, of which she equally, if not quicker, disproved them of that idea, and they made the decision to continue their assault even though they were losing, when they should have withdrawn. Needless to say, she got to go "all out" for once, and was able to let off some steam too. Not surprised that he had trouble with Potions (and probably will with Herbology too), and Transfiguration, as they didn't train in them per say, they mostly trained in Defense, along with Charms, as well as anything they found in the Offensive department too. It will be interesting to see how his new Staff will work out for him. Him getting to know his previously Dead Family will take some time, and a Lot of patience. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

›› He held out her hand to her.

That's gotta hurt. At least Harry didn't "Dis-arm" her.

Sadly there are two big problems with this chapter:

(1) No one would know about Harry's scar unless they also knew about Natasha and maybe her even her chat with Death.

If there was some supernatural way that the public knew about the scar, then that would also be part of the legend. (At a minimum: "Your parents said you had the scar." - if Death had told the Potters for some reason (doubtful) but omitted other pertinent details.)

Unlike canon, no wizard ever saw Harry's scar.

(2) There's no way that Natasha could kill all the spiders, by herself, in one night.

(A) They have size, speed, armor, poison, webs, numbers, and human-level intelligence.

(B) If she somehow still mowed through them, many spiders would hide and/or flee. There would be survivors.

Of course, if the centaurs took advantage of the situation...

report review for abuseJake Crepeau chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Sorry, but I'm not into pulling legs, wings, or any other appendages off of bugs. I can send you plenty of whole spiders, though... ;D (This is fun!)

- Jake

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

This chapter made me very happy! I also like the fact Harry isn't some sort of god like most "Harry doesn't go to hogwarts" fics I've read, but can't wait to read the next chapter as this is quickly becoming one of my all time favourites

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Fun chapter and great ending. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Awesome chapter..

report review for abusePyro-Neko-Isis chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Love it! Thanks for taking out the spiders, I've never been a fan of the spiders. You noted about adding some marvel bits to the story?! It makes me curious if you are planning to have Death add more heroes from the marvel universe or if you are planning on having someone like Loki travel through the old pathways (like how Loki traveled to earth without the bifrost bridge)

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Sounds like Aragog met his match! Good one - I was not a fan of his.

So a staff instead of a wand - this could be interesting. Also I like this Neville, he's more confident and I'm sure he never had a hand me down wand either.

Sound like Black Widow will need to go to wizarding school as well. Can Remus tutor her please!

report review for abusesandmanwake chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Why are the students saying Harry is the only one to survive an A.K. when technically his birth parents did also? And why would they know about his scar when Natasha took him before anyone could see it? Plus, why are they calling him the boy-who-lived here when it wasn't certain he even lived before? Seems like there are a couple plot holes due to trying to bring things in from canon that no longer applies.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Good stress relif, the spiders ️

report review for abuseEzeakel chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Nice chapter.

For hermony, Harry didn't need ignorant fool as friends.

Also, it's important to make Harry visit the library to understand the rules of the Wizarding world better and to get more knowledge about magic.

I suggest making him read and begin to learn about the mind arts, at least how to protect himself from it.

Thanks for the update.

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Oh. Wow. Update soon.

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

dead spiders, not a terrible thing. thanks for the chapter, looking forward to more

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseebarnea25 chapter 5 . Jun 5, 2019

Love this story! Please keep updating!

MosquitoesLoveMe chapter 6 . Jan 16

Damn... Just. Damn. *sniffle*

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 6 . Jan 9

Great work

report review for abuseN7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 6 . Jan 6

3 way mairrage and parenting?

report review for abuseWhiteDragonWarrior chapter 6 . Nov 14, 2019

Great chapter!

report review for abuseDirt Rider 712 chapter 6 . Oct 28, 2019

Wow, you write these incredibly difficult scenes amazingly well. I am 100% convinced that that was Natasha in there with the Potters, and not just some OC wearing her name.

Thank you,

Dirt Rider

report review for abuseI Will Obey For He Is My God chapter 6 . Oct 10, 2019

I LOVEYour Story I Hope He Stays With Natasha

report review for abuseMarauder no. Five chapter 6 . Jul 15, 2019

I'll take an orca, please.

report review for abusesunsethill chapter 6 . Jul 9, 2019

Nice twist of the photograph proving to James and Lily that they really hadn't had a clue all these years. I'm glad they can begin to heal from their nightmare now. Natasha's perspective was also well done.

report review for abusestylo1 chapter 6 . Jul 7, 2019

learning runes because old magic books are written in it. thats gotta be the most stupid awnser for runes ive ever heard. if that was the case dont you think someone wouldve translated them instead of 1000s of years teaching ppl runes?

what about wards? or enchantments?

report review for abuseMMax chapter 6 . Jul 6, 2019

A few years ago, on the US TV Show Shark Tank. an investor was pitching the lion fish as a product to be eaten..delicious and at the same time, helping to save the oceans via their destroying the reefs.

But everyone thought that it was too early to invest. Anyway, good story so far.

report review for abuseBryan chapter 6 . Jun 25, 2019

Great story once again, I would be mad that you don't finish your previous story's but this is once again a great plot and you are a great writer

report review for abuseGuest chapter 6 . Jun 20, 2019

All your stories suffer major suspension of disbelief problems. It's as if you don't really understand this fundamental rule of story construction.

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 6 . Jun 19, 2019

Hi.

This chapter clears up some things, and hopefully helps mend some bridges. Luna seems ok, Hermione apologized and Draco and Harry shook hands :p All we need now is for Corner to take the wrong step on those moving staircases and all our problems will be solved ;)

On the other hand, Flitwick stepped up when it was required of him, so that's good. Still can't believe Dumbledore hasn't booted Crouch/Moody from the castle yet, and he's starting to scare me with his ominous words... It's almost unfair to have super old people in a story, because they always know (or seem to know) much more than they let on :p

Lastly, there was the meeting between the Potters and Natasha... I guess we should be glad it didn't outright turn into a battle (can you imagine all those scissor throws she would bust out? :D ). On the other hand, she clearly showed that she was the one in charge of the situation. I'm almost wishing the Potters will go to court over this, just so they could be shown how far from ready they are to take care of a child (but perhaps better not, since Natasha would be on edge for so long ;) ).

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseGreer123 chapter 6 . Jun 18, 2019

I loved the interaction between the Potters and Natasha in this chapter.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 6 . Jun 15, 2019

Oh this was just absolutely bloody marvelous! You have the prose of a professional author!

report review for abusekirashu chapter 6 . Jun 16, 2019

This is an amazing story so far, the way ou described Harry's, Natasha's and the Potter's feeling is awesome. Harry's interaction with Luna, great too... I really hope to read more of this story.

report review for abusepaintingrosesblack chapter 6 . Jun 16, 2019

I love this. Im so glad i found it.

report review for abuseMidnightWriterPhilosopher chapter 6 . Jun 15, 2019

I love this story. I liked Natasha's plan to keep James and Lily off-guard. The story of the orcas was a wonderful touch.

report review for abuseChevalierRadiant chapter 6 . Jun 15, 2019

i love this story

report review for abuseteaddicted chapter 6 . Jun 15, 2019

Definitely orcas. Also, I hate you. Just a little bit. But very passionately. I loathe reading unfinished stories and go to extreme lengths to ensure I never start reading a story, or series, until it is finished. I.e. if I see a finished fic I'll check the last chapter and author profile for any sequels before committing to reading it, no matter how interesting the summary blurb may seem. I tell you this so you can fully appreciate how rare and unusual it is for me to knowingly pick up a story that is still being written.

You write well, I like your characterisations. I can only hope that this gets finished one day, I look forward to reading the rest of this story.

report review for abuseRobin the Ylissian Grandmaster chapter 6 . Jun 14, 2019

this is just too good. I wonder what else you'll add from the marvel universe

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 6 . Jun 14, 2019

Wow. This chapter was packed. Lily and Natasha getting on like a house on fire. Or something like that. Albus being his usual inscrutable, foolish self. Filius beginning the rebellion. Fake Moody being an idiot and being slapped for it. Harry defending Luna (and rightly so - there are a lot of crazy things in the wizarding world). Whew!

But really, the realization that you didn't even know what look for, that you have spent 13 years and would never have succeeded anyway, no matter how long you searched? That's gotta hurt. Hopefully, Lily will be able to let things go and move forward from where they are.

report review for abuseeverpresent chapter 6 . Jun 14, 2019

Just stumbled on this. Wow. I really enjoy the characterization of Harry in this. It is a very weird and stressful situation that they are all in.

I admit I find it a bit tough to imagine that she managed to hide so well for 13 years, but I accept that it is a necessary part of the setup of the story.

Harry has a interesting mix of ignorance and huge abilities, which will be fun to work through in the coming chapters.

Oh, and your Snape is so oddly muted. I am curious about his story - having Lilly still around is one thing, but James also - has having James around (as a mature man and not the immature child that he clashed with) for thirteen years mellowed Snape at all?

And who is Alastor? Pretty sure that Natasha killed off Barty Junior back in the Lestrange confrontation, so who is wearing the face? Hmm.

report review for abuseimagelesssky chapter 6 . Jun 14, 2019

looking forward to more of natashaHarry's relationship

report review for abuseGuest chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Really orcas king of the ocean? I'm sure they feel all powerful as hell being tortured in captivity to amuse fat spoiled wankers worldwide.

report review for abusePortgas D. Potter chapter 6 . Jun 14, 2019

Naisu

report review for abusesonofthehills chapter 6 . Jun 14, 2019

Thank you for the gift of this story. I am very entertained thus far.

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 6 . Jun 13, 2019

orcas are great, love Natasha , the Potters need to compromise or they aren't going to be with HP

report review for abuseLilyRose9 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Fascinating story! Love Mom!Natasha and Harry as her son. This chapter with Harry versus FakeMoody was awesome. And the Potters/Romanoff confrontation was well written, I loved seeing Natasha's reactions after the fact.

report review for abuseKagey98 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Great story! Thanks for sharing your talent!

report review for abusebectouzel1 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Loved this take on the classic Harry Romanoff idea. The explanation for the crossover works pretty well (although I got the impression of a more comedic story based on the interactions between the Deaths). The ANGST of the Potters still being alive is so realistic! And Natasha's characterisation is very realistic. Your Harry is very well written and doesn't feel toooo unbelievably BAMF. I look forward to reading more!

report review for abuseLord Mortensen chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Cool! please update soon!

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Hard to even say what kind of genius this chapter is. Simply one of the most tragic, beautiful, careful, and heartbreaking things I have ever read of your work. A tightrope for surewhich you blow out of the park. So sensitive. Sensual. So much love and passion and obvious groundwork for future chapters perhaps? Possible that reconciliation and reconnection could come from this and Harry could have three parents in his corner, and Natasha could (getting to ideas now) convince them to leave Britain following the tournament and they could waltz off into the sunset...?

And you get a whole pos of Orcas... J-Pod from the Southern Resident Killer Whale population has a new writer in residence!

Thank you!

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Very good story enjoyed it very much

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

That ending was fantastic holy heck

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseNerfhearder69 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Hoooolyyy shee-it! Just found this and already love it! Finally a fic that won't pigeon hole the Widow! Keep up the great work!

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Oh man! Lily hates Natasha so much, I wasn't even sure if a fight would go down. Even James is devastated that he and Lily lost 13 years of their life with Harry. That those same 13 years were spent with Natasha as Harry's true mother.

report review for abuseYeTianshi chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Loved it, going down memory lane was nice as well, but I think I mainly loved Natasha's selfishness here. I may call it selfishness, but honestly it pisses me off when characters decide to do "what's best" for someone else, and LEAVE THEM. As if it wasn't the most asinine thing to do.

I absolutely loved how Natasha was true to herself, and that she's willing to hold onto Harry just as hard as he's holding onto her. Her worry about them asking for custody was cute, not because I don't think they'd be able to pull it off, but because Harry would soon become of age and quite literally cut all ties with the Potters.

Overall, the entire scene was a nice balance between fear, worry, love and rage.

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Good on Harry, and as we already know, Barty Jr is an Idiot, one that deserved everything that Harry did to him. In reality, the True Moody would have praised him for his defense, while berating him for thinking that his shield would have protected him from the Imperius, and he certainly would NOT have asked for his expulsion. I got a kick out of the Arithmancy, Runes, and Astronomy segments. Loved that with his vast knowledge of Languages, that he knew which one to use to communicate with Viktor. I do believe that Albus is losing what little of his Marbles that he has left, and also with his particular delusions... The Meeting between Natasha, Lily, and James went fairly well, and could have been MUCH worse, all of the pictures helped greatly, particularly that last one. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abusePhillies2 chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Well, This is a truly unique story that I'm glad I stumbled upon. Can't wait to see how harry adjusts at Hogwarts and his future dealings with James/Lily.

report review for abuseShizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Best look Scarlett Natasha ever had? Captain America Civil War, ever other time her hair looked fucked up and weird.

report review for abuseA Frozen Shadow chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Orcas, definitely orcas;)

report review for abusecagats chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

That was good really really good update sooner

report review for abuseArei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 6 . Jun 12, 2019

Beautiful story. Well written and draws you in. That last chapter had me in tears. Hope to see more when you have time

report review for abusespitfyre1 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Lol, looking forward to more

report review for abuseGuest chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

A shamoo worthy chapter

report review for chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Just have the three parents have the common enemy and goal. Hahah. They put their differences aside and work together soon enough.

report review for abuseBlue Yeti chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Orca animagus! So useless, so impressive, so ridiculous, om nom nom seals.

The scene with Lily and James was ace.

report review for abuseNadieLee chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Maldicion. Aqui esperando la proxima actualizacion. Saludos. Gracias.

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I have a Orca for you!

...

...not really but this was good. Really emotional.

report review for abuseJake Crepeau chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Sorry, I don't live anywhere near an ocean, so nope, no orcas. Can't help ya, Sundance. ;D

report review for abuseRakan chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Orcas!

report review for abuseLadyBurn.10 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

hermoso! asi se pelea mi reina natasha!

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Powerful chapter ! I think after all the explanations were given, they would have to realize how much they would be hurting Harry if they fight against Natasha. She did not do anything wrong in this situation .

I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Nice new chapter hope to see another soon

report review for abuseOnlyafraidoffear chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

You delight in crushing my heart don't you? Just give me all these feels and making me cry at the injustices?! This is the mark of an amazing writer, excellent job.

report review for abuseDdastan chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

You know, this is one of your best stories. In the beginning I had doubts thanks to the crossover, but then you showed how well you made it work. Natasha is well written, still the Black Widow, but this time with a Son to protect and it shows how it affected without taking away her traits

Lily and James are well written aswell, usually in this type of stories they tend to be Soo hateble for a reason or another, but here I only fell pity and sadness for them.

Harry is a masterpiece to be honest. You made him kind and honorable but like you can see that he isn't a goody two shoes with a black and white view not the world, he was raised by the Black Widow afterall. The fact that he's powerful but at the same lacks knowledge in some areas make him interesting to read aswell.

BTW fuck Dumbles, he's gonna mess things up, I hope Harry pisses off from Hogwarts at the end of tourney, he can still get in involved thanks to his friends.

Is there gonna be pairing? If yes I hope that it's Padma, she doesn't get enough love in this fandom, and it would be different for sure

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Moody's class went about as well as I thought it would, old Dumbles has gotten more stubborn as well as a bit senile in his age. That last part was heavy... I look forward to the next chapter!

report review for abuseShadowkragg chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Really enjoying this so far, you've managed to get a good balance of feeling bad for James and Lily yet also not wanting to split Harry away from Natasha in any amount. I like the idea that he is a kind of genius with a lot of the subjects at hogwarts yet some he is either too powerful for, so lacks the control necessary, or he simply has no way to understand certain things.

Keep up the great work, can't wait for more!

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Awesome chapter..

report review for abusecranegamer chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

This was whale done. The plot so far has been whale orcastrated. As a reader, it's certainly nothing to blubber about.

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Sigh... I can understand anger Lily but even so you had to know that your actions wouldn't be helpful here. I mean obviously I don't know what it feels like to finally find your child after nearly two decades of looking but at the same time regardless of how mad you are you still need to think. Harry deeply loves her and you know this. He doesn't need you and you also know this. So if you want to be part of his life then being on good terms with Nat is a requirement. Heck even if you hate her guts you need to at least pretend to get along or you'll lose him again. You know all of this so just act like a rational adult and not a tantruming child already.

As a side note, Yay Luna! And Yay Harry for being actually smart and at least considering Nargles might exist. I really like this version of Harry a lot.

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Oh my. Wow. Update soon.

report review for abuseaSinglePancake chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Loved this chapter! Mama Bear Nat came out to play with cunning schemes

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Good chapter.

report review for abusemooneysfate chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

frankly, i think harry had a better life with natasha than with his birth parents. :)

report review for abuseShanarchy chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I am really loving the story but I'm am curious what the pairing will be, if any?

report review for abuseEdocsiru chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Will you stop it with this nonsense? Why in hell would five years old Harry need glasses? He is living out doors with plenty of sunlight, and he inherited his mother's eyes. Harry without the cupboard would NOT NEED GLASSES!

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Interesting - so in this world it's James and Lily who are damaged, not Harry or Neville. Also James and Lily were near Harry in St. Petersburg but didn't recognize him as their son. That's got to hurt. Now can you have them see a mind healer or a therapist or whatever so they can heal? Also in this world Harry healed Natasha and she knows it. That will be significant going forward. Also can someone (Remus maybe) get her in touch with the Unspeakables please!

I like this Minerva. She and Filius are not going to let Mad Eye/Barty Jr. harm any students. Also they're going after that curse on DADA finally! Albus is clueless as well and just will not see that this Harry is not the Harry he wants to use as a weapon but his own person. I feel like the pure bloods or those totally raised and living in the magical world (which included Albus) all think they're superior but they are really at a disadvantage. They miss many things that they shouldn't. Harry and Hermione can see where the muggle world crosses over in the Hogwarts classes where the magical raised don't. That's going to bite them back soon - especially Tom Riddle.

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I really wanted to know what was death's plan here. Is it just a mere whim? Bringing Natasha is understandable... but bringing back James and Lily after Harry was given away? Plus, even Death cannot act soo freely. I wonder what price has been paid for James and Lily...

A bit too late for a custady battle, right? Harry is old enough and skillful enough to live by his own at this stage, no matter what the law says. But i think Nat still thinks like a mundane... custody battle are not such common and clear cut thing in Britain's Wizarding World. As shown by Sirius. He ran away to the potters... and it was all settled between families. The court were never even consulted.

Moody got owned. Huhu. Now if its really Moody, he would approve. If its fake Moody, I guess he got angry and frightened... hence his asking for expulsion. And Dumbledore still blind there...

report review for abuseTimothyB chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I really like this story. I kind of hope it's a happily ever after ending haha. Is there going to be a pairing? Keep up the amazing work!

report review for abuseEdocsiru chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

'Either someone in something most physical block it, but clothing and even army are not enough'

hasn't anyone told Flitwick not to speak with his mouth full?

report review for abuseDylan-A-Friend chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

NICE!

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

report review for abuseMissLuffy05 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I love it

report review for abuseNo Baggage Account chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

nice storyline. found it today and read pretty much all of it in one go. Keep going!

report review for abusesumireko chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Amo a las orcas xD

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

:)

report review for abusemadsperez chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Damn good work.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

to gostando dessa historia.

report review for abuseyrfgd chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

The picture from Russia of Haray & Natasha with Lily & James in the background is a very nice touch.

report review for abuseEzeakel chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Great chapter.

I greatly like especially the meeting between natasha and Harry's biological parents.

report review for abuseRonin Kenshin chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

awesome

report review for abusemiverse chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

My jaw dropped, the end of this chapter was achingly beautiful. Especially the part where James and Lily in a same frame with Harry but they didn't know each other.. it just... my tears won't stop.

I really can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the incredible work! Rest well, stay hydrated, take your time to make another amazing pieces

report review for abusesleshachoksi chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Loved it. The long chapter was worth the wait. Can't wait to see all four of them together.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Great chapter and I liked Harry's actions with Jr. Wonderful ending and perhaps Lily and James can come to a closing for all their lost time. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseossifrage chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I already said I like your characters didn't I? None of them are cardboard props, they are all doing work in the story and have their own brains, motives, and conflicts. I'll check again that I'm following you and your stories. Thanks for writing.

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseVal'Hor chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Thanks for the chapter ! I love this story so keep up the good work ! :)

report review for abusesandmanwake chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I don't know if I like the later part of this chapter. The reactions of the Potters and Natasha seems off to me. Considering they came back to life, they know something weird happened that night and considering both Harry and Natasha mentioned Death as a person and Natasha mentioned talking to Death, they should have asked Natasha more questions about that. I get the Potters are upset they lost their son and only recently found him again and it doesn't seem like he needs them in his life, but the hostility towards Natasha seems over the top, overly dramatic to the point of it being not believable.

It would make more sense to me if they tried to figure out what happened that night by talking to Natasha and why she took Harry and then arrange joint custody once they see evidence that Natasha wasn't evil and thought she was rescuing a baby from a murder scene with both his parents dead and with assassins still after the kid.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseRobyn1977 chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

That last paragraph is one the best I have ever read

report review for abuseThundramon chapter 6 . Jun 11, 2019

Woah, Natasha is a smooth operator, I can understand why she flirted with lily but damn it takes ovaries of steel to waltz up to a couple who think you kidnapped their son and then seduce the wife in front of the husband.

Milagro626 chapter 7 . Jun 6

Great Chapter! First time I am reading one of your stories, and the story intrigued me. This chapter has me excited to continue reading. Good job!

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 7 . Jun 5

Very good story so far enjoying it very much I like your plot line I'm not a very good reviewer but I do love this store

report review for abuseAkaDeca chapter 7 . Jan 9

Natasha's flirting is superb

report review for abuseCalmzone1 chapter 7 . Dec 10, 2019

Congratulations on achieving your Master' degree. I know it was a while ago, it it is still a major accomplishment. Well done. And especially since you still continue to write, and even more especially if you are dealing with dyslexia. I am so impressed

report review for abuseWhiteDragonWarrior chapter 7 . Nov 14, 2019

Her powers of deduction and understanding people have really come in handy.

report review for abusevmage2 chapter 7 . Aug 30, 2019

*spliced" and "Splicing" should besplinched" and "Splinching".

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 7 . Jul 25, 2019

Low key hoping that Natasha and Lily become a couple. Like a V shaped polyamorous relationship, Lily is with James and Natasha but James and Natasha aren't together.

report review for abusenightwing27 chapter 7 . Jul 25, 2019

james better watch out lesbians or bis likes stealing other guys girlfriends or wifes

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 7 . Jul 7, 2019

Things haven't gone completely bad. For the most part.

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 7 . Jul 6, 2019

Good, thanks.

report review for abuseof Serendip chapter 7 . Jul 2, 2019

I think it actually made sense. Totally not fair but kind of make sense. I read somewhere that when you make a good luck spell, you actually stole someone else good luck and that to balance it out someone else's luck turn bad. Good luck is not for free.

So in this story, for Harry to alternately have a happy childhood and good parent. Someone else has to be the price for it. They went through a living hell for it. Which was the exchange of fate. Death for them would be a rest and long sleep, not really and equal exchange. I think that's why the other death resurrected them. ( not just on a whim and wanting to play god.

report review for abuseWrin chapter 7 . Jul 1, 2019

Oh dear lord. Natasha with the Marauders' Map? The fecal matter has met the oscillating air circulation device at great speed. May it not land on anyone from on high... who doesn't deserve it. XD

report review for abuseaSinglePancake chapter 7 . Jun 26, 2019

Wouldn't the map have showed Harry spying on them too?

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 7 . Jun 26, 2019

s0o0o0o0o0o If we're going with Endgame, doesnt that mean Tony's around here somewhere? eh eh :D this is a great fic!

report review for abuseCharlie0925 chapter 7 . Jun 26, 2019

Wow, this is a BRILLIANT READ! Great writing here honey, I cannot wait to see what happens next! ;o)

report review for chapter 7 . Jun 25, 2019

Hi! I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait for relationship between Natasha and Harry is great. Also,congratulations on getting your Masters.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 7 . Jun 22, 2019

In general, I don't like any Harry gets raised by [insert crossover here] fics, but this one is really well done.

report review for abusesonofthehills chapter 7 . Jun 23, 2019

Thank you for the gift of this chapter.

report review for abuseBoika chapter 7 . Jun 22, 2019

Great begin of story, looking forward to the next part.

Congrats for your thesis!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 7 . Jun 20, 2019

Really wish there was more to this story. Love it.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 7 . Jun 21, 2019

Gratz on graduating! That's a big job. On to the doctorate now? :P

Hmm. Harry's in it for the long haul. And Natasha is going to make Lily's life so much fun. Especially when Lily starts plotting against Dumbles. With the Malfoy's no less. Heh.

Nice to see that staff working out. Heh. And doubly extra nice to someone out-sneak the twins. Wonder what they will think when they see the map is gone. Haha! That's mischief, all right.

report review for abuseGroggyFrog chapter 7 . Jun 21, 2019

I enjoyed this way more that I thought I was going to. You are crazy good at drawing people in with interesting plots.

report review for abuseKEB chapter 7 . Jun 19, 2019

Once again, a very enjoyable story. Well done! Excited for more; thanks for writing!

report review for abuseBlue Yeti chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I totally loved Natasha flirting with Lily, and I adore her logic on not judging them for their martial difficulties. I don't know if there's going to be a place for it, but I'd love to see Harry and the twins interacting.

report review for abuseGhostWalker chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

::::Chortling rumble:::: Keep up the good work. This is great. And no Petunia in sight! Gringotts needs to do a heritage test for Natasha. Romanoff is a royal name. And as far as any of her 'Red Room' issued health problems can be fixed/regenerated (ie ability to have kids if she wants if she finds the right guy).

report review for abuseGuest chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

This is such an interesting concept. Loving this story!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

That map is about to be used in ways the marauders never dreamed. Great chapter I really like this story.

report review for abuseNadieLee chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Gracias por la actualizacion. Saludos.

report review for abuseBryan chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Great job on another great chapter!

report review for abuseDaSalvatore chapter 7 . Jun 20, 2019

I love HP/Marvel crossovers but I still can't see where this story is going.

Bringing Natasha into the HP world and giving her magic so she can raise and protect Harry is a great idea. You can have her struggling with magic right up until the Tri-Wiz and then gain some allies to teach her magic. I'm disappointed in that the great Black Widow was somehow unable to find -anyone- in the world to teach her and/or Harry wand magic or even stuff like Apparition. As things stand, Natasha having magic does nothing for the story outside of allowing her to get into the magical areas.

Bringing the Potters back to life so they can raise Harry against Dumbledore's desires is also something that's been done and works really well. Instead, we get Potters who are brought back after their son is given away for safe keeping (but never told how/why) and who apparently can only think about the inconsistencies of that night once Harry shows back up again. I get the antagonism and that's great, but before chapter 7 they were almost entirely one-note characters. And now it's hinting at a seduction between Nat and Lily? Where the heck did that come from and why did James apparently know about it?

There's also the fact of Harry's magic being completely against everything that Hogwarts teaches. This too can work but it feels just like one of the other core plot points, thrown in there as a way of shaking things up and that's it.

Right now there's not nearly enough focus to tie them together in a satisfactory way. I'm sure that once the story is finished, it'll be a fun little read that I might come back to again, but it's doing nothing for me while it's being written.

report review for abuseAussiefan1 chapter 7 . Jun 20, 2019

I am absolutely loving this story. I've always liked a strong, confident Harry and your version is fantastic. I also really like his relationship with Natasha.

I hope real life is treating you better. Swings and roundabouts, I hope your good days outnumber the bad.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

God why is everyone in this story so unlikable?

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 7 . Jun 19, 2019

oh this is so much fun! Congratulations on your Masters! Just loving this and cannot wait for more Lily Natasha! Thank you for bringing us such joy!

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 7 . Jun 19, 2019

Ooh that map will be a great way to get intel!

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 7 . Jun 19, 2019

Hi.

Well, the staff works, and Harry is good at Charms... With that said, i do find that i enjoy him using the more 'mundane' ways learned from his mother a lot too. Sneaking, pick-pocketing and other stuff are so underrated in the HP universe where everyone uses magic for everything :D

As for the second meeting between Natasha and the Potters... Well, i guess the inside of an interrogation room isn't the worst place. At least they wouldn't get away with murder without having to resort to heavy corruption (can you imagine the 'good guys' stooping so low? :p ). I like that Lily is beginning to figure things out from way back then as to Dumbledore's schemes, and i'm so looking forward to the trip to the Malfoy's :D

Just a small thing i noticed this chapter, and that was you mentioning that the Weasley twins were pulling a prank on 'their older and younger brothers'. Percy is no longer a student, so i can't see how that would be possible (or is Charlie still visiting even so long after the first task?). I'd suggest replacing it with 'their younger brother and his friends', or something along those lines (i'm assuming Ron has some friends...).

PS: Love that someone spotted the 'Sinatra' typo and suggested a crossover :D Perhaps Hogwarts finally decided to drop astronomy and instead introduce a course for those wishing to learn how to sing and act?

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseRobin the Ylissian Grandmaster chapter 7 . Jun 19, 2019

Another good chapter!

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

And how! I got a kick out of Munch's reaction to having Bella's Wand in his hands, and I know that Natasha was having a ton of fun during the "Interviews", even so when Lily finally stepped in (and was completely honest with her too). I'm glad that Natasha feels that Harry should get to know them, even if he never thinks of them as his parents. ALL of those questions that Lily asked James, were not only pertinent and valid, but very important ones too. Gred and Forge only think that they are sneaky, they are beginners compared to what Natasha taught Harry. Filius is on the right track where Harry is concerned, and the Rose lesson was Epic. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Awesome chapter..

report review for abusebigmeaty69 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Congrats on your masters!

I like reading Natasha's point of view much more. I've read about angsty Harry quite a bit but I've never read about Black Widow trying to seduce Lily for the sake of her son.

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.

report review for abuseMidnight Angels chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Do I smell the beginnings of a menage a trois?

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Well, color me impressed that Lily (if only off screen sadly) seems to calm slightly and attempt to be nice. Only took her a few chapters to start using her brain. Speaking of which, hey they're on Dumbledore's trail now too, that's good.

I enjoy that we have the chance to see Frank and Alice actually be around and that Charms class was interesting. Too few stories bother with interesting classes like that and it's a shame.

Looking forward to seeing where we're going next with all of this.

report review for abusetymaxion chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

WONDERFUL! Amazing story so far and i can't wait to see more of it! I honestly hope Harry warms up to Lily and James and this isn't a story where they simply just become only friends. At the very least i hope they become a favored aunt and uncle.

report review for abusesnow fox2000 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I lost my internet for a few weeks so the first thing I did after it came back on was read your story loving it please update soon.

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

The mischief has only begun.

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Pretty fantastic chapter

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Still got a big plot hole about how anybody, Dumbledore included, managed to learn about the scar and Harry's AK and NOT also know that the Potter's are undead, or about Natasha.

Other than that, entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

And congrats on your Masters.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

:)

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Awesome chapter

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Intriguing. Update soon.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Very good

report review for abuseaboulhosncc chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I think James and Lily being alive in this story ruins it. I think all it does is just add un needed angst about two people searching for a kid.

And honestly even then you didn't really devote any time to it. It is just casually mentioned here and there but not really. In fact all of Harry's childhood is is a brief mention

Overall I liked it as a time waster but I think it could be much better. If you had made the parents back alive part as a decision one death had done or maybe fate or destiny and had death on the other dead with Natasha and there could have been conflict between the two sides.

Some more scenes of Harry learning from Natasha and them exploring the world would have added to the story as well. Maybe some scenes of Lily and James traveling the world and actually searching because it seems like all they did was just use some charms and be mystified when the location changes.

I think also having Natasha use magic was unneeded as well. I think a harry potter who did not know any formal training with magic and had to seek it all over the world would have been an adventure.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

XD. Nice. The trouble that they will get into shall be LEGENDARY!

report review for abusetw33k chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Sinestra not Sinatra, unless this is some sort of odd crossover

Also splinching not splicing

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusehergrace44 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I'm a little surprised Natasha didn't bring up the shared interest of loving Harry as the foundation for her potential friendship with Lily. Friendships are built on shared experiences and interests and loving a child is a pretty powerful interest.

Still loving this story and can't wait for more :)

report review for abuseKagey98 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Bravo!

Thank you for sharing your talent!

report review for abuseTimothyB chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Another great chapter. The whole seduction of Lily is kind of confusing that it's working but I'm interested to see where it's going to go. Keep up the amazing work.

report review for abuseMidnightWriterPhilosopher chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I LOVE this story! If you do plan any romances for Natasha I think Remus would be great, but I do realize that Harry will always be her top priority. I can't wait to see the next installment.

report review for .Wonderland.8510 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Wow...this Nat is really deep. I can guess that she learned from being a mother but also seeing Clint and Laura be parents. I truly love this story. I still don't think that Lily is treating James or nat fairly. Personally I would have thought that James would have divorced her long before Harry came back.

report review for abusewanderinghawk1 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Great start!

Is this story going to have pairings?

Do you plan to take Harry and Natasha sometime later to the Marvel Universe?

report review for abuseallie213 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

congratulations on finishing your Masters!

I'm liking all the perspectives you're providing. is James ok with Natasha flirting?

I'm feeling sorry for Harry. It ultimately would be good for him to have more family and friends, but the sudden transition from moving all the time to having to stay is finally came.

I'm loving your story. can't wait for more

report review for abusebadknight chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Cannot wait for the mischief to start. :D

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Ok, while I know a lot of readers don't buy into the evil Dumbledore idea (I can tell from some of the reviews), I'm leaning that way. Who knew about the scar, that Harry lived or that Voldemort was gone? So Dumbledore had devices to spy on the cottage in Godric Hallow - that's the only explanation I have but it's your story so go for it.

Natasha flirting with Lily - well I guess in whatever world she's in her training kicks in. She was trained to spy wherever she is and to exert control so she goes for what will get her the information she wants and needs to survive. Makes for an interesting dynamic.

Good one.

report review for abusehelkil chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

really hope you are not going for evil/bad/dark albus because as much as i like harry i believe what Dumbledore did was correct

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Nats a good person, should be a lot of fun, poor Albus in bit of a sticky wicket wot

report review for abusebectouzel1 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

It just keeps getting better and better! Mumma bear Romanoff vs Mumma bear Potter...hard to tell who won when Natasha plays the long game. Interesting to see Lily thinking through the hidden agendas of Mr High and Mighty (I don't always agree with Dumbledore being evil, but he definitely always had a plan for the greater good- you've written that side well). Keep up the great work!

report review for abuseBeeeTeee chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I know you're intentionally giving us both perspectives as a way to make the Potters seem more relatable, but I can't help but find their possessiveness extremely irritating at times. Fun story though and I can't wait for more.

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abusePortgas D. Potter chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Nice chapter

report review for abuseRonin Kenshin chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

awesomeness great work

report review for abuseossifrage chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Congratulations! (and thanks again for the story)

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseRegis JN chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I forgot just how good Natasha is at seduction. Stupid considering her codename, but it happened.

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

The adventure continues as epic as ever

report review for abusestevefocus chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I think this is your best story yet. Can't wait for the next chapter.

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Nice new chapter hope to see another soon

report review for abusesleshachoksi chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

this story is a delightful read.

report review for abuseAunknowntimelord chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Can you please write in some of Natasha thinking about her past with the avengers and stuff

I absolutely love this story

report review for abusepaintingrosesblack chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I really like this story! Lily started to question the headmaster, finally! James looks confused.. Are we going to see Natasha, James and Lily together? As in a couple? That's the vibe i got.

I don't know what you are planning but when Lily started talking about the headmaster, i started to imagine ways for them to see the other timeline. It would be cool if they could see the what ifs. I mean, they should at least see that Natasha wasn't lying, that Harry really would have gone to live with the Dursleys and that he would have been raised as a pig for slaughter. And that it was all the great Albus' fault.

Anyway, again your story is awesome! I love it, keep it up

report review for abuseVukk chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I have four thoughts for your chapter. Does Natasha still have Bellatrix's wand? Does Lily and James hate Natasha less now? Will they train her more in the future? Who, if anyone, will she get into a relationship with?

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Fun chapter and Natasha is just awesome with her ways of understanding and dealing with people. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abusesaint21 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

I honestly don't know why Natasha keeps flirting with Lily ... does she find Lily's reactions funny? Is she seducing her so that if the wizards try to take Harry she'll have an ally? If so, why not James instead of Lily? Lily is clearly more invested but James is the pureblood and would have the advantage there.

report review for abuseAlyssJocelyn chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

i am really enjoying the story...i can't wait for the next update

report review for abuseGreer123 chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Natasha just became the most deadly women in Hogwarts with that map.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Yikes things definitely aren't great in the Potter household. Nat is a great mother.

report review for abusetripmight chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Great chapter, I am really liking the dynamic between Lily and Natasha so far.

report review for abuseArei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 7 . Jun 18, 2019

Beautiful chapter. Love how natasha is flirting so much with Lily. Two wonderfully stubborn reds heads fighting and then making up *happy smile then frown* oh I hope they team up and kick this Dumbles arse

NazgulBelserion chapter 8 . Mar 16

I love your James and Lily their not puppets they feel like real people well done

report review for abuseconceptualthread chapter 8 . Feb 1

Have to say I am seriously loving this story, so different to anything else that I've read and soooo Damn good. Keep it going

report review for abuselaraquick chapter 8 . Jan 3

Enjoyed Natasha's flirting with Lily to throw her off center and the way she handles Dumbledore's attempts to be in charge. He's NOT and will never be esp over Harry.

report review for abuseTheForgottenSpartan chapter 8 . Dec 19, 2019

I haven't stopped laughing for last half an hour.

report review for abusenavnit chapter 8 . Dec 17, 2019

It's a weird thing for a sentient ward to not allow people to magically come inside the school but if they want to walk right in? Then nothing stops them. Voldermort, Pettigrew, Moody, Death Eaters and Voldermort again!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Nov 10, 2019

Love Natasha

report review for abuseTraveler301 chapter 8 . Oct 11, 2019

Another great chapter. I hope before you complete this story, that you have Harry and/or Natasha put that MOF Dumbledore down HARD, very HARD. I have never liked him or his greater good.

Thanks for a great chapter,

Ron Pate

Traveler301

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Sep 3, 2019

Did you just have her apparate in Hogwarts? Really?

report review for abuseddsurvivor chapter 8 . Sep 4, 2019

Totally badass. Love this. Natasha has a mother to Harry Potter.

report review for abuseBrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 8 . Aug 16, 2019

I really like the way Romanoff sounds when it is used by Natasha and Harry

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Aug 10, 2019

**Looking at him with luminous eyes, she dipped her head in a sort of bow and slipped on the shoes. Thankfully not the trainers he went running in this morning.

"Thank you, Harry," she said, voice small.

He hugged her, and she hugged him back. "We'll find your shoes," he promised.**

Truly, Harry, you are indeed a master of Charms ;D

report review for abuseunlikely2 chapter 8 . Jul 26, 2019

Albus Dumbledore as Sir Didymus. :)

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 8 . Jul 25, 2019

Absolutely fantastic chapter! I'm kinda shipping Harry and Padma, tbh, and I don't usually ship het ships. Also I am DYING for more Harry and Luna interactions, they have the cutest sibling-like relationship! I love it.

report review for abuseGuestinator chapter 8 . Jul 16, 2019

Sorry but this chapter lowered my thrill of reading this story. I suppose it is because I am a grown man but why would they stop there when Albus did that? Not go to anyone in the DMLE? File an official complaint? Remove Harry? Ask the other two heads of schools that are quite easy to reach at the moment about a transfer?

This... This reads like a "He can do anything with only very minor blow back for plot sake, nothing will be explained." To me, at this point in my life, that is simply bad writing.

I hope this doesn't become even more of a thing, because they never even bothered to check if Alastor could in fact get in legal trouble for doing as he did. You honestly think any even semi-decent parent wouldn't go through all channels to get their child safe from such a person? To have the head of the teacher that did that?

Genuinely unsure if you don't realize that or are just ignoring it for plot sake. Even more so when you realize how little Natasha knows and as such should be going through every motion until it is horrifically obviously Albus and Alastor would not ever get in trouble.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 8 . Jul 7, 2019

I'm glad it's been established that Natasha's mind has an amazing resistance against Legilimency. Dumbledore should not mess with a Black Widow.

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 8 . Jul 6, 2019

Very good, thanks.

Chaotic bearing orcas? lol

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Jul 6, 2019

I miss the Avengers. Maybe you could do a thing where Nat and Harry can visit? Like it turns out they're kinda like the Spiderverse where they can travel to alternate dementions with technology? I mean I love this fic, but Nat is just so much more serious and a bit depressing without her team to bring out her relaxed good humored more human side.

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 8 . Jul 5, 2019

oh gawd Natasha Romanoff tweaking and threatening Albus Dumbledore is just awesome. Lily and James agreeing with her in Dumbledore's face. you write this so well. Gleefully enjoying this! thank you!

report review for abuseof Serendip chapter 8 . Jul 2, 2019

Harry was forced to compete in the tournament against his will. They still can't tell him who put his name in the goblet of fire. They didn't even start investigating. ( and if James and Lily like to think themselves the best of the aurors, why didn't they ever even question it?)

Harry is right. There's something wrong with the adults there. And Mcgonagall had the nerve to say it's tradition to attend the ball. Like, lady that's the least of your concerns.

report review for abuseWrin chapter 8 . Jul 1, 2019

OOOOoooh. That, I like. They're finally starting to see just a glimmer of what Harry and Natasha are capable of.

report review for abuseanzofathyn chapter 8 . Jun 30, 2019

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. This chapter was amazing! Superb writing, I literally feel like I should reread it again already!

report review for abuseMimi chapter 8 . Jun 29, 2019

Yes such a great chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

I really like this story keep up the good work

report review for abuseTork01 chapter 8 . Jun 29, 2019

It is always good to see Albus rendered superfluous. And to laugh at him and his injured pride

report review for abuseGabriel2015 chapter 8 . Jun 29, 2019

I love this, this is gold, haha. And with the way things between the Potters and Natasha are going, it would'nt surprise if at one point they end up in a three way relationship.

report review for abuselunadream13 chapter 8 . Jun 29, 2019

good story, hope to read more.

report review for abusegod of all chapter 8 . Jun 29, 2019

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

report review for abusehoudini2015 chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

I absolutely love this book! Natasha and Harry's bond is so strong and yet you have incorporated the Potters as well without them being evil etc. Well done! This is an amazing piece of work!

report review for abuseSpaceLegionnaire chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

Great fun. Really enjoying this chapter. Well, I've enjoyed all the chapters but you get the idea. Can't wait to see what comes next.

report review for abuseBYoshi1993 chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

I didn't think I would love this story this much, but I really, really do love it. Your characterizations are spot on and I really enjoy Harry and Natasha's relationship. You also made sure that Harry wasn't amazing at everything, which was a welcome surprise from the norm/cliches. I look forward to more!

report review for abuseSiaLaa chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

I absolutely love this ficyou balance very well the action and moments to breathe and I'm so impressed. I cannot wait for more chapters. Thank you so much for the chapter!

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

Hi.

I really enjoyed this chapter, and it touches on something that most stories i have read has gotten backwards. In canon, James changed from his earlier school days of being a mean prankster. Lily didn't have any noteworthy change in either personality or attitude (except coming to like the more mature James in time). Yet in those stories, it's always Lily who is the levelheaded one. I think you are doing good letting James have the role he was supposed to have if he had lived, and i'm hoping you are building on that as the story goes on (not that i would be against Lily also growing as a person, but baby steps ;) ).

I also like that Harry denies he has friends at school to his mother. I think it fits with the teenager that he's denying how much he's actually enjoying the steady company of people his own age (especially since he hasn't really had any friends previously). I'm looking forward to him and Natasha spending some of the Christmas holiday with the Potters :)

Lastly is Dumbledore... I'm not sure, but it feels like he doesn't fully understand how dangerous Natasha is yet. I mean, he probably got the report stating she has killed in defense of Harry in the past, but with how controlled she is in public he might have believed it as exaggerations or something. That, or he deliberately provoked her by trying to read her mind, hoping she wouldn't outright kill him if he failed to glean any information from her. On the other hand, i find it a bit strange if he can't read the situation when he basically demands that the Potters should take back custody of Harry. Or is this manipulation as well? Old people are tricky when they are clever.

PS: I really liked the idea of Ironsct about bringing Tony along. If you did, though, it would probably be for the best if he didn't get magic, since it would drive him nuts :p

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseKhatix chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

Despite the few grammer problems this is a very interesting fic, looking forward to reading the next update!

report review for .9081323 chapter 8 . Jun 28, 2019

Great story thank you for sharing looking forward to the continuation

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Dumbledore is such an idiot, and was quite foolish in even attempting to look into the mind of a person the he has no clue of their capabilities. He was literally an inch away from death, had she wanted it, and there would have been absolutely nothing that he could have done to prevent it. His statement of "You are Dangerous" can be said about most Witches and Wizards too, as they ALL carry a Lethal Weapon with themselves ALL the time, and on that matter, there are a great many No-Mage that can be placed in the same category due Military, Law Enforcement, even Personal desire in the Many forms of Martial Arts, or any combination of training thereof. Glad to see that the Potters are more than willing to meet the Romanoffs half way, and that Holiday plans were jointly made too. This "Meeting" went quite well, even with Dumbledores f-up, and gave the Potters a lot to think about, as well as Hope in continuing to get to know Harry. It is fortunate that Severus wasn't there, as if He had tried what Albus did, He wouldn't have survived. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseMadYak chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

You're really nailing the characters and their interactions. Natasha, Harry, Lily, and James are all really good. And the supporting cast is good too. Keep it up.

report review for abuseFangirlBookworm21 chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

I am absolutely obsessed with this story :D it's so exciting and I'm really enjoying it

report review for abusestorybook thumb chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Very well written. Love it so far. I want a lesbian lemon between lily and nat. Super hot

report review for 7 chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Here's my chaotic bearing Orca :)

But seriously, this story is great, keep it up!

report review for abuseeverpresent chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Really loving this... Natasha is delightful. Harry is confused about magic and yet powerful. Albus is being sidelined. Filius and Minerva are seeing somethings that could lead to uncomfortable questions. Snape is the same. And Moody is a puzzle.

Keep up the great work!

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

OK, here's how I see these characters. While Sirius lived to break the rules and tick his family off (a little bit like Tony Stark), James and Remus were in many ways not rule breakers. Remus didn't want to attract attention or give an excuse to exclude him (a bit like Banner in Avengers) while James really didn't want to disappoint his parents (like Spiderman doesn't want to disappoint Aunt May or Mr. Stark). So some school boy mischief but nothing too bad. Lily was a "good girl" (a bit of Hermione in the previous generation), made her parents proud and her teachers happy. But good girls usually know or suspect what the bad girls are up to and often wonder if they could get away with it. So Natasha makes Lily uncomfortable but also curious about how the other half lives so to speak. Also I'm with Filius, Hogwarts likes Natasha and sees her as not a threat to the school but a defender. Plus if James and Lily spend more time at Hogwarts they may catch on to Moody not being Moody. Just some thoughts.

report review for abuseMidnight Angels chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Too bad Snape wasn't there to be properly intimidated as well...

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

A very good chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Loving this. I wonder if you'll add Tony too seeing as he is also gone. Natasha and Tony's meeting would be a hilarious thing to read if they are the only ones that know about the Avengers Universe. Will the other Avengers be making an appearance?

report review for abusefayth03 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Just read thru this whole thing and I love it! This is a brilliant fic

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Yay you're back! With a great chapter too, lucky us.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Why did Romanoff not hit Albus in the shoulder insted

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Nice Loki reference. Hope your network troubles Get sorted out. Have a nice whatever time your reading this.

report review for abuseTempest S chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

So is Natasha going to be the only Avenger? And what happens when the Avengers undo what Thanos did? Does she just get snatched away?

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

weeee Dumbledore doesnt like it when he isnt the one in control; love the tale

report review for abuseCureCaligraphy chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

and here we have dumbledore being a manipulative git (i love that word) and the romanoffs decidedly Not Liking It.

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseJumpingToaster chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

This is turning out to be a good fic. The whole Natasha messing with Lily seems like unnecessary fat (not really bad but seems pointless).

report review for abuseIronsct chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

Dear JacobApples,

Sweet day in the morning, this story is good. Please excuse me if I am brief, but I just read all 8 chapters, and it is 3 AM. I loved the line where Natasha was said she was going to kill Death, both for the hilarity and that if anyone could, she could.

The first scene with Moody was brilliant with him confused that Harry didn't know his family (because he is secretly not Moody). Widow's flirting with Lily is interesting, especially as I usually picture Lily being played by Karen Gillan and Arthur Darvill as James. Also, have you considered having Widow build a Iron man armor using magic?

She was spying on him during the second movie and could have easily seen the plans for the suit, if not the reactor. "Some parent's buy their kids a car. Mine? Mine hands me the keys to a fly war suit, with magic.""

"Are you complaining?"

"Nope."

Thank you for letting us read your work and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John

PS: Since Tony is dead as well, are you going to bring him in?

report review for abuseChevalierRadiant chapter 8 . Jun 27, 2019

dear lord i love this

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Awesome chapter..

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Ayyyye Romanoff taking no shit

report review for abuseSuperTroll567 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

nice chapter

report review for abuseuz97 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

awesome

report review for abusesonofthehills chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Thank you for the gift of this new chapter!

report review for abuseCharlie0925 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Another awesome chapter here honey! As always, I cannot wait to read more! ;o)

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

OMG absolutely brilliant chapter ! I love the confrontation with Dumbledore ! I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

i LOVE this fic!

report review for abuseyrfgd chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

I like how James is adapting to the fact of Natasha in Harry's life. DD seems to be pretty heavy handed, and the way the Potters are not allowing him a say with Harry is encouraging. Natash being able to teleport from within Hogwarts is an interesting plot twist.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Good chapter and great ending. Too bad Hermione wasn't there to witness her breaking "Hogwarts, A History". Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseArtur Hawkwing1 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

LOVE IT! LOVE IT ALL!

report review for abuseLostDragon49 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Oh dear lord, more please!

report review for chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

GREAT CHAPTER! KEEP GOING! I LOVE NATASHA AND HARRY.

report review for abuseRavenclawLovegood37 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Can she explain the whole story, infinity stones and all, to the Potters? I want to see the reaction. Love this story, and I'm excited for more!

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Awesome chapter

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

I really like this story. it's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusecrankypants16 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

I love everything about this. Natasha flirting with Lily is great, and taking no shit from Dumbles is just exactly what that asshole deserves. Great update

report review for abuseVukk chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

You have orcas? Can I have one too?

In regards to the story, you said that Natasha invested very well, and she had found magical places in the past. So why didn't she buy more magic books? Is it because that wasn't something she knew so she didn't think it was worth it?

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

In the words of Ronald Weasley that ending scene was wicked. Excellent chapter 10/10

report review for abusefinkarhu chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Thanks for the chapter

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Very very nice. Good job all around (aside from Albus of course but then that goes without saying). I want to apologize if my previous comment came off too strong against Lily's reluctance/slow acceptance of the situation. When I'm picking at a character as if I'm talking to them it isn't so much a critique of the author's writing (because you're entirely right that Lily hasn't had a ton of time to accept her current situation) and in many cases it's simply me kinda giving a mental commentary of my thought and feelings and just reliving tension/annoyance I might be feeling toward the character (which isn't necessarily a negative on the story).

With that out of the way, I'm loving Nat in every scene of this story, you do her so well. Likewise Jame is surprisingly a character I find myself warming to (usually I'm rather anti-James by default so this is saying something). While we haven't gotten a lot with her yet I'm liking Luna's scene's so far and am morbidly curious to see how this Harry reacts to her abuse. Will he get angry or simply take a calculated approach to the situation? I'm leaning calculated but I suppose that will probably depends somewhat on how well he gets to know her before the full extent of the issues (and what they end up being in this story) come to the fore.

I'm also interested to see what you end up doing with Voldemort given how strong Nat (and really Harry too) is here. Sure Albus wasn't expecting the attack but Nat still could have killed him. Voldemort might not be taken so off guard in a face to face confrontation but it's not like Nat has any moral hang ups on taking him by surprise. Harry lacks the brother wand but is infinity ahead of his canon counterpart in most every other way (his weakness in transfiguration not being nearly enough to counterbalance his overall skill). Not to say I expect Harry to beat him like I would expect Nat to but anything Canon Harry (even in 7th year) managed I should think this Harry could fully match. Anyhow we're likely far from dealing with any of that (if it even comes up in this story) and we still have plenty of juicy family bonding and friendships (maybe even love?) to go before it so I'll stop speculating here and get back to reading this wonderful story again.

report review for abusemysweetkat chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Awesome chapter. Natasha could rule Magical Britain when she's fully trained.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Very good, loved

report review for abuseSakura Lisel chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Wait so during DADA dueling, exactly what did the spell Harry 'accidentally' fired at Fake Moody do to him when it hit him instead of its intended target? If it hit Padma what would have to her?

report review for abusegraynavarre chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

I love Natasha and the Potters are coming along nicely. Albus needs to be dunked in the lake - repeatedly.

report review for abuseMissLuffy05 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Hola, soy hispanoamericana y se leer ingles, sin embargo no lo sé escribir por eso mis comentarios podrían ser en español. Esta historia la he seguido desde el primer capítulo y me cree una cuenta solo para poder comentarla, realmente amo la manera en que manejas la relación de Harry y Natasha, me parece adorable , la inclusión de James y Lily es muy buena y va a una velocidad que me parece tranquila. Desde que leí el primer momento de Dumbledore yo ta sabia que lo iba a odiar con toda mi alma. Esta novela me ha llegado al corazón y realmente espero por ella casa día. Sigue así y no te presiones lo estas haciendo magnífico. Besos y abrazos

report review for abusecormag81 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

thank you so much for keeping this interesting and managing to make Dumbledore adversarial without making him antagonistic. I know its a fine line to walk and I'm not even sure your doing it intentionally but It's refreshing to see a version of Dumbledore who is avdocating for what's happening, but also not plotting to take over the world for some greater good.

report review for abusecandinaru25 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

oh JAmes this is a good thing. He will be able to defeat the death eaters before they can even blink.

report review for abusestevefocus chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Brilliant chapter.

report review for abuseCount Jim 'tribbles' Moriarty chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

I'm really enjoying that the Wise Old Wizard is becoming a proper villain. It's a nice change both from those who make him obviously mad for the sake of bashing him and from those who make him too namby pamby out of rejection of said obvious madness. If this escalates it would make an excellent counterbalance to Harry Romanoff's OP aspects. Thanks.

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Amazing as normal, only slight issue is where in the movie the headmaster can apperate in the books nobody can even the headmaster as if one person can others could too, but as that very loop hole is *presumably* used here I quite like it

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Wow! Update soon.

report review for abusehergrace44 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Such a delightful story :)

report review for abusedonnacheer11 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

One of the best stories I've read . Please don't take too long to update, looking forward to the next chapter.

report review for abuseArei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Loving this story! So amazingly well done! *sighs at snape* chill the fuck out dude. Are you planning any interactions with him and Nat? That would be awesome if they became frenemies. And Alll the flirting with Lils! Woo!

report review for abusebigmeaty69 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Pretty cool chapter, I really like your character interactions. I think Dumbledore is acting within a believable level of stupidity for being as caught off guard as he is. Maybe a bit on the higher end, but not on the level of bashing. I'm glad Harry is opening up more.

I'll never really understand why people put so much emphasis on the word muggle like it's equivalent to a racist or derogatory word. To me it's just another silly made up word like mugwump or quidditch. I know the purebloods use it in a derogatory way, but they would do that to any word synonymous with muggle.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Orcas! Have piles and piles of orcas! All stacked up on each other, vainly flopping to get back in the water. Haha!

I knew Natasha was going to be a bridge between Harry and J&L. It's hysterical how she keeps pissing Lily off, though. What a flirt. :) And I'm happy to see J&L reconnecting. Perhaps everyone will get a good ending to this. Funny to see James as the one with a level head, coping with things and all. Usually that falls to Saint Lily. I am very glad you aren't taking that route. Makes it more interesting.

I think that, given the timeline, people in the story are generally handling all this fairly well. :)

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abusedarthapprentice chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

So many good stories and ideas are wasted over attempting on antagonizing and bad protrayal of Dumbledore, it doesn't make sense. Why don't writers get simple fact that Dumbledore wasn't a bumblebeeing idiot. When you protait him like that the story loses it's appeal.

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abusemadsperez chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Job well done my friend..

report review for abuseAstrakahn chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

I don't leave reviews often, but just wanted to say that I am really enjoying this and your other ongoing stories.

report review for abuseShadowTomes chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Hell yeah. I love how bamf Natasha is.

report review for abuseEzeakel chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Chapeau

report review for abuseRaven0900 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Nice new chapter hope to see another soon

report review for abusepfkman23 chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Very interesting. Gotta be fun to how Natasha, Lily, James and Harry deal with each other going forward

report review for abusetymaxion chapter 8 . Jun 26, 2019

Woot woot, can't wait for the next one! Can't wait to see who bumbles next!

Hadami chapter 9 . Jun 21

I think I would have liked this story more if the Potter's had stayed dead.

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 9 . Jun 5

Very good chapter enjoyed it very much I like Lily and Natasha finally getting a little bit together James has finally learned that he can't force Harry so it makes a lot of fun thank you

report review for abuseMosquitoesLoveMe chapter 9 . Jan 17

The feeeeeels! But in all honestly this was an adorable heartwarming chapter. And I love the way Natasha is messing with the Potters!

report review for abuselaraquick chapter 9 . Jan 3

Another great chapter of Lily and James and Harry getting to know each other.

report review for abuseCalmzone1 chapter 9 . Dec 10, 2019

Lol

report review for abuseRealmsmith chapter 9 . Nov 11, 2019

What do the hindi characters mean?

report review for abuseDevoted Fan chapter 9 . Oct 1, 2019

This is completely and utterly amazing. Will give a better review when I finish.

report review for abuseForestor chapter 9 . Sep 30, 2019

:)

I'm really liking how the Potter's are being gradually, but still visibly, growing into their relationship with the Romanof's. While Lily and James are broken they are not terrible people and they are pulling the pieces together one at a time.

report review for abuseAuto Cerebral Star chapter 9 . Aug 23, 2019

Thank you for the clarification about DumbledoreI'm not a fan of canon!evil!Dumbledore in fanfiction, because I'm not a fan of bashing, but I can get behind alternate-universe!evil!Dumbledore. (Yes, I know he's not actually "evilprobably), but in this case "manipulative" isn't specific enough, seeing as Natasha is in this story...)

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 9 . Jul 25, 2019

Lily is so bi, she's just not admiring she's attracted to Natasha on principle XD

report review for abuseMarauder no. Five chapter 9 . Jul 15, 2019

what was the translation? google didn't help a jot when I copy and pasted in: नहीं, लेकिन मैं भारत से प्यार करता हूं। खाना बहुत अच्छा है।

report review for abusesunsethill chapter 9 . Jul 9, 2019

Maybe I shouldn't have let go of the broom! Ya think, Harry? LOL

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 9 . Jul 7, 2019

lol Oh man. Poor Potters there. Harry's gonna give them heart attacks.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 9 . Jul 7, 2019

I'm confused. Is Natasha still flirting with Lily, considering she's getting a little touchy feely. And James is enjoying his bonding time with Harry too much to even notice. Of course the Potters would have a heart attack with Harry skydiving off his broom, even if it was for a brief moment.

report review for abuseB chapter 9 . Jul 4, 2019

I love this story.

At any point of time, will the Avengers meet Natasha again ?

And is Bellatrix alive ?

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 9 . Jul 5, 2019

oh such awesomeness;)

report review for abuseNo Baggage Account chapter 9 . Jul 5, 2019

love this story. keep going

report review for abuseZyanadryn chapter 9 . Jul 5, 2019

Wow! Fantastic story!

report review for abuseninjamonthu chapter 9 . Jul 4, 2019

Great story, I hope you write more soon.

report review for abusebadgerattak chapter 9 . Jul 4, 2019

that was amazing

love what you've done with Natasha's character

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 9 . Jul 4, 2019

Absolutely brilliant chapter ! I would have freaked out as well! And I love how you handled James and Harry's relationship !

report review for abusekyella14 chapter 9 . Jul 3, 2019

I love that exchange between James and Lily at the end. I do hope Harry lets them in soon; they're trying so hard. Keep up the good work!

report review for abusejslee102 chapter 9 . Jul 3, 2019

Great chapter. I love the ending of it.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 9 . Jul 3, 2019

XD How dare he nearly give the Potters a heart attack. how rude.

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 9 . Jul 3, 2019

Found this today. Read it, liked it, will wait for more.

report review for abuseMike COVID-19 chapter 9 . Jul 3, 2019

Hats off to you. This is indeed a masterpiece.

report review for abusesonofthehills chapter 9 . Jul 3, 2019

Thank you for the gift of this chapter.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 9 . Jul 2, 2019

Lovely. Natasha is doing a great job of being a bridge, even if she does infuriate Lily. She makes an excellent point about trust: Harry trusts her implicitly; the Potters have to earn that trust. Hopefully, she will be able to move them closer together without too much angst. :)

And yes, boys do ... things. Gotta trust Harry, though. He isn't going to do random stuff - he isn't that kind of boy.

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 9 . Jul 2, 2019

That was really cool... I love skydiving.. And do bungee jumping often... I can understand the thrill which harry must hve felt...

Love it...

It will be fun if potters and Romanoff start threesome.. Hahaaa... Harry can hve all his parents happy and with him...

Waiting for ur next update eagarly

report review for abuseWernnon chapter 9 . Jul 2, 2019

The idea is interesting and I like the interactions between Romanoff and Lily. There's a lot of things that had been waylaid, such as 13 years of Harry's life, that I would like to know about more but hopefully, there will be some flashbacks or snippets later on. I also wonder how Harry would fare in a fight to the death against Voldemort, probably not that bad but not great either. I haven't been skydiving in all my life and I'm somewhat afraid of heights so no free falls for me. :x

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 9 . Jul 2, 2019

Hi.

Been working night shifts this week, so i apologize that my review will be somewhat lacking compared to my usual standard (i'm really beat right now, and that's after sleeping 7-8 ish hours).

I'm glad that Natasha, and especially Harry is able to learn some new stuff from his birth parents. Christmas is going to be an interesting time for them :)

On a different note, i'm hoping you aren't skipping out on showing the meeting with the Malfoy's. I've been looking forward to it, and would be quite disappointed if you skimped on the details :p

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseD C JoKeR H S chapter 9 . Jul 2, 2019

OMG! XD

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! XD

(And, LOL, Natasha and Harry are Awesome XD)

(Also, if there is any future Natasha/Lily/James, I'm gunna Fangirl Hard XD)

(Else they'd end up as semi-mutual sister, and this is all just awesome and hilarious, LOL X'D)

report review for chapter 9 . Jul 2, 2019

Just don't stop, this is awesome.

report review for abuseMarilynT chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

I do hope Harry lets them and Sirius in his life.

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

OK, Harry got the danger junkie part from Natasha I think. I think James was daring rather than reckless at Harry's age. After loosing Harry I think he and Lily became reckless in their grief.

"Children are hard" and "Boys are walking heart attacks" - I think both comments say something about the Evans and Potters parenting experience.

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abusejustareader21 chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

Nice one. The characters are fantastic.

report review for abuseWrin chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

*snrk* Of course he'd do that. He'd have done that in the original books if he was introduced to flying at that age, but it would have been more his lack of self-worth than experience and confidence pushing "adrenaline junky" into "looks suicidal" territory. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing and posting!

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

Awesome chapter. Is Lily going to let herself get seduced lol, James, Natasha and Lily lol would make an interesting pairing.

report review for abuseChevalierRadiant chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

holy shit, that was the coooest scene ever!

report review for abusewarlocktoungue chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

Sooo... Was just me, or what Natasha mentioned about a country and its people was a quote f rom Thor Ragnarok?

report review for abuseSsmickey123 chapter 9 . Jul 1, 2019

Great as always. Can't wait for the next chapter.

report review for abuseFangirlBookworm21 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I wish I was able to favourite a story multiple times on here

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abusecrankypants16 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

that was all great. Love how happy Harry was to be flying

report review for abusesasy39 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Your work is always good but this was brilliant

Cant wait 2 c where u take this next.

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for 7 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Man, that was daring. The mom comments at the end totally made me chuckle.

So, what exactly did Harry do?

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Tony, Tony needs to pop up somewhere b/c that would be awesome! I cant imagine James and Sirius dealing with Tony. and Tony would have to be like some weird bedtime hero for Harry she's he's all star struck by him and not scared at all. that's be awesome!

report review for abuseLivininCorsets chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I wonder what Harry and Nat would say when it came to the animagus transformations

report review for abuseuz97 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

love the chapter

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Thanks :)

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Oh harry. So harsh. But I love it. So very in character.

report review for abusemooneysfate chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

harry is scared to let his other parents in, isn't he? and maybe they're trying too hard? :)

report review for abusehergrace44 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Poor Lily and James; Harry really is going to give them heart attacks. Loved the whole chapter so much I was at the end before I realized it :)

report review for abuserobert32514 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Lol

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

hysterical, Potters are much like any other family, Natalia is something special

report review for abuseHiro97 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Absolutely fantastic chapter, loved the interaction and dialogue between each group!

report review for abuseGuest chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Great chapter.

report review for abuseLija chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

James is described as being a tall man in the books though. And by book 7, Harry was as tall as James when he called his parents spirits. I think its Daniel Radcliffe that influenced fans into thinking that Harry was still short by the time the series ended.

Movie Harry was even shorter than Movie Ginny.

report review for abuseOlly chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I'm not surprised that Harry had an easier time connecting with James than with Lily. Harry has been with only his mother so James isn't trying to replace anyone from his life by being a father to him, Lily however...

And concerning Dumbledore I actually like what you did with him. In so many stories he is just some cartoonish villain randomly mumbling about the Greater Good and how Harry should learn to forgive others. I find the idea of Dumbledore not being the epitome of goodness interesting but I don't like how it's generally done in fanfictions. Here we don't know what he wants and why so we are suspicious of him, trying to understand what's his endgame is. It creates more tensions than if you had already told us everything about him. A little mystery can do wonders to a story !

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I like the chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

This is a great story. Don't mistake this for a flame. But I think I'm having a problem with Natasha at this point but only when she's dealing with the Potters. She always has an answer or she always falls back on flirting. One time even if only briefly I'd like to see either Lily or James rattle her.

report review for abuseAriadne Venegas chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

If he let go off the broom it had fall out and he wouldn't catch it, it is physics his hands in freefall can make magical movements

I still don't get why death had the Potters live again? It had no purpose.

report review for abuseStormCrownSr chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

This chapter was such family friendly sweetness.

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

At the end of the chapter, in another place closer to Harry, Minerva Macgonagall suddenly had an urged to smirk in amusement, as if the voices of karma had come and delivered amusing news to some of her most troublesome students...

report review for abuseShadowkragg chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Really enjoyed the character interactions here, it's nice that Harry is starting to open up but they still have a lot of issues. James and Lily being able to get through to him on their subjects is also really enjoyable to read.

Keep up the great work.

report review for abuseRiddle-Snape chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Even tho I get Potters... I sooooo hope Harry eill stay with Nat, she is far better than them

report review for abusexiongmao03 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Loved it!

report review for abuseAnimeLover229 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

LoL, love the new chapter

report review for abusedrkprince chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Man I absolutely adore this story...I just blitzkrieged through this. Absolutely lovely and at times hilarious..thanks for your great working..xoxoxo

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Pretty fantastic chapter

report review for abusePyro-Neko-Isis chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I liked it. Question, didn't you note down that you were going to add another marvel character to the story? Still looking...

report review for abuseof Serendip chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

That was such a fun chapter! Thank you!

I am glad, the reunion and get together didn't fill with angst.

Glad to see Lily smile and James and Harry goof around together.

report review for abuseCureCaligraphy chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

(snickering) Oh, you ain't seen nothing yet, sweethearts.

report review for abusewanderinghawk1 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Good chapter

I like the improving relationship between Harry and his parents. The Dive was also funny

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Damnit, I love every bit of this chapter. The bonding between the Potters and Harry went pretty well!

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Yeah, maybe he pushed it a little too far, 'cause only He and Natasha knew that he was Safe, which in the process probably took say 10 years off of their lives, lol. Although I do agree with their sentiments, Children are hard, but we Love them anyways, I know I do My three, as well as my seven Grandkids. In time, it will get a little easier, the more time they spend together, the better it will be, and already, Harry has learned quite a bit from them both in Potions and Transfiguration. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseJayManAryan chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Hahahaha Oh this was brilliant!

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

nice.

report review for abusestevefocus chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Brilliant chapter.

report review for abuseGouravsilentreader chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Amazing update

Flying scene was fantastic

Love it

Waiting for the next part eagerly

Please update soon

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Great chapter and wonderful that Lily and James are getting to know just how difficult it is to raise a child. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseCrimson Reiter chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I'm grinning so hard right now xD

report review for abuseVal'Hor chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I loved this chapter ! This has to be one of the best Harry Potter/Avengers crossover I've ever seen, keep up the good work ! :)

report review for abuseYeTianshi chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Lol, I FELT Lilly and James' oncoming heart attack. That was hilarious, and I did quite like the small bonding moment Natasha had with Lily, I hope there's more of that. Mainly because Lily obviously needs some more help when it comes to understanding Harry, unlike James who's willing to ride the waves at Harry's pace.

I do like how Natasha put it though, that Harry's afraid they'll simply die again. After all if something happens once, it can happen again (even if death is supposed to be final), and I'm sure with all that he's seen Natasha do, she seems like an invincible mom that'll never die.

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Awesome chapter

report review for abusemiss nique chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Hahaha that was awesome... Please update again soon

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Intriguing. Update soon.

report review for abuseInkwell Archive chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I want the moment we're Harry realizes that he called James Dad and be like "huh shit, whelp we can be in Bangladesh in about two days if we leave now and do the Pops."

That aside I'm really impressed with how well this story is shaping into. Like this could have very easily been one of tHOsE fics YaKnow.

I honestly like how stubborn and angry you're portraying Lily. Those are probably her two main defining personality traits in the canon yet a lot of authors tend to ignore that.

Can't wait for the next update man!

report review for abuseDragonsBC chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Nice chapter, ending with cliff-jumping instead of a cliff-hanger was great. Keep up the good work.

report review for abuseHome of the Brave chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Thanks for the update. Really enjoying it. What's Hermione's problem?

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Every part of this was fun.

I have a headcanon that the ability to fly is a genetic Slytherin trait, like Parseltongue, but can be learned by anyone sorted into Slytherin (read adopted into the family). True Slytherins can do it instinctively, like Lily and Harry (ended up on the roof when running from Dudley). Eh, it's just fun conjecture that goes against what Rowling has said outside the books, but that honestly just makes it more appealing. If I ever get around to writing down the crazy!Harry story I've got bouncing around, that's one of the things I'll include.

As an aside, I feel like flying without a broom is comparable to running in that it's not as good/fast/easy as flying with one but you're more maneuverable, just like running isn't as good/fast/easy as riding a horse or vehicle. More exhausting, too.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I really like your story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusepclauink chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

Love that Natasha is teaching Lily to understand Harry better ...

report review for abusedmusings chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

I'm really enjoying the last couple of chapters. A lot of good emotional beats.

report review for abusehekpup chapter 9 . Jun 30, 2019

shit makes me cry tbh man

flying-octopus chapter 10 . Jun 28

Would have been fine to first establish the world and settle the relationship of the characters instead of introducing Spiderman. I think it will just add unnecessary complexity at this point of the story.

report review for abusea prick chapter 10 . Nov 28, 2019

o h

report review for abusewilliamhaysjr chapter 10 . Nov 19, 2019

Seriously, you decided to add Spider-Man to this mix. Bad enough you've made both the Black Widow and Harry Potter thieves but now you go in add Spider-Man. How are you going to dishonor him, going to make him a murderer?

report review for abuseWhiteDragonWarrior chapter 10 . Nov 14, 2019

LOL! I wasn't expecting the crossover to become more entangled. This will be funny.

report review for abuseJestersky98 chapter 10 . Nov 10, 2019

Oh for the love of god

You couldn't just keep it simple could you, just had to ruin this good attempt of a crossover, you just had to ruin whatever you had achieved with this bullshit?

report review for abuseTraveler301 chapter 10 . Oct 12, 2019

Okay, here is where I am beginning to get lost. It is not your writing that is causing my condition. It's my age. I still like your story, but I'm getting lost because of all of the different things with different people and different universes, and believe it or not, back in the sixties I read Spiderman, but didn't really like him much. I thought he was a wimp. I'm still reading your story, but at age 76 I admit that I'm getting confused and I don't know how ask you for help. I apologize for being dumb.

Still trying to get it and still thank you,

Ron Pate

Traveler301

report review for abuseJacob chapter 10 . Sep 3, 2019

I like this story but people constantly underplay how powerful and talented Albus Dumbledore is in fanfiction. Natasha Romanoff, even with a bit of magic, would be utterly destroyed by him. Not that he would, given his almost pacifist nature about the more extreme magics he could easily use. Take the duel in the order of the phoenix with Voldermort - he first walked into the veil room and incapacitated every death eater still standing, but also easily dealt with Bellatrix Lestrange, and then quite confidently defeated Voldemort without the intention of killing him.

report review for abuseAJ Granger chapter 10 . Jul 28, 2019

Okay. I was not expecting more Avengers characters to make their way into the Potterverse. And more people from the future as well.

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 10 . Jul 25, 2019

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 22, 2019

In my opinion, you made the mistake many authors fall into: You built a setting—in this case, one MCU character in a Harry Potter world—and built a story around it, and it worked great. But then, after a while, you changed this formula, and started adding more MCU characters. This breaks the promise you made to the reader and it upsets the balance you'd built.

To me, it comes very near to ruining an otherwise very interesting story, and that's without even knowing what you plan to do with them.

As I said earlier, this happens very often in fanfiction, and is generally a sign of the writer not really understanding the concepts of story-building very well. For many, this addition will be a betrayal to what you promised; it will be a breach in trust, and it may very well run off quite a few readers.

If you want to do things like this, it should at the very least hinted at, at the beginning of the story. You should make it clear that such a thing may/will happen, so the reader is prepared for it, so it doesn't conflict with what they've immersed themselves in.

report review for abuseLuxEterna1 chapter 10 . Jul 14, 2019

so the gps is working good enough to place peter and mj as being in scotland without signal but fails just as they are looking for a way out of the woods? how much more convenient can you get...

report review for abuseUni-Corniness chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

The Spider-Man parts feel a bit forced or "shoehorned" in.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

Not sure how I feel about the new characters. I guess we'll see.

Thanks for writing!

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

Hi.

We didn't get as much of the Malfoy's as i truly wanted, but they are in on the action, which means there will be more of them later :D The fact you had James and Sirius act rationally by wanting to bring Natasha along was pure genius, which seems to have payed off. Not sure what James will say about not getting the cloak back, but perhaps he'll see it as a necessary sacrifice down the road?

Then you go ahead and bring Peter and MJ along for the ride. It came out of left field if i'm hones, and probably means that Tony isn't coming back... But we get more Avengers characters in the Potter-verse, so that's overall good in my book :) Not sure about the Reality 'Stone' warping them across universes though, since that would mean it was the HP universes Reality Stone that was used to do it (and without prompting to boot?)... Either way, since Peter and MJ bumped into Natasha i figured everything will turn out all right in the end :D

Lastly, there is Fred and George... They are acting like bullies throughout all the interactions we have seen so far, and the Map was sort of Harry's birthright... I think Harry did well in de-escalating the situation in such a manner, although if we follow bully mentality then i'm guessing there will be retaliation?

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

Huh? But how?

report review for abuseGreer123 chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

Are Spider-Man and MJ appearing in this world cannon after the Spider-Man Far from Home movie?

report review for abuseTheNewJeniferChurch chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

{evil cackle} I love it! This is definitely going in my favorites! The Sorting ought to be interesting. Peter's incredibly smart, but he has a lot of Gryffindor tendencies. MJ I would almost say is pure Ravenclaw. She likes knowledge for the sake of it and doesn't care about much else. Either way, it's all going to be a lot of fun!

report review for abusebectouzel1 chapter 10 . Jul 7, 2019

I adore this MJ! She and Nat will be badass together lol

report review for abuseMMax chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

time travel..mmm (smiles)

report review for abusestarboy454 chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

excellent story so far

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

OMFG hahahahahahahahaha I LOVE you Mj

report review for chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

I liked this story up to this point - I considered it to be one of the best, certainly unique.

I hope that it has a plan, a concept in the background with these new characters pulled in out of the original framework: the many faces of Death did not get involved with the stones (assuming they did not carry that much power after all), could push soul between worlds...

report review for abuseElsieCarter chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Amazing chapter! This book is honestly so good. 11/10 love it

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Very good

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Yyyyyeeeeesss! Thank goodness! Maybe now the MCU can shine some color onto this dark dimention! Lol. But seriously tho I love this fic! Nat's flirting feels a little OOC tho. If only because her character developed into something more than a deadly protective seductress with good intentions by the time End Game came around.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

have absolutely no idea why you'd want to add this complication to the story, but willing to see if it works out. Will keep my fingers crossed but...

report review for abuseDunken chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

I loved your story but I honestly disliked the addition of peter Parker and MJ. I was happy and thrilled with the slight crossover with Nathasha and the background info she brought to the story but I am not really looking forward to the rest anymore. I'm sorry to have to admit that. I will probably read the next chapter to see where you take this but i'll most likely ignore this story and wait for the updates in some of your other stories which I find brilliant

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Interesante giro de los eventos

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Wow

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Why?

report review for abuseNadLee chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Y la continuacion. Saludos. Gracias por la actualizacion.

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

I like the chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

I didn't expect Peter and MJ to drop in magical Britain, but I love it

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Okay, introducing Peter and MJ in that fashion is... Kinda weak. Unless someone/something else is manipulation the reality stone... but why?

Though I think Harry would find a best friend in Peter. After all, they are both extremely competent for their age.

report review for abuseA Frozen Shadow chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Love having MJ and Peter thrown into the mix;)

report review for abuseAlexanderRaven chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Ok, it's official I absolutely love this story. I mean I might have been slightly drunk while reading it but I was thoroughly entertained. It didn't occur to me how promising this type of crossover could be. Most of the ones I've read have been boring or repetitive at best. I adore the relationships your building and the character reactions are rather genuine from my point of view.

I'm actually second guessing myself quite a bit when it comes to the story and possible outcomes. Which I find rather refreshing, like I'm reading an actual novel with characters and stories that evolve as you read.

I've got hopes for certain pairings, ones that I see possible hints in your writing but also I'm certain I'd be happy with whatever occurs. I've got questions but at the same time I think I'd rather wait and see if they're answered in your writing rather than spoil the experience.

Like the whole Peter thing, I absolutely love it. He's my favourite comic book hero of all time. So of course I'm interested in what type of version of him you'll create but either way I'm happy to wait. Please continue this story, it's a joy to read and I can't wait for more.

PS. Sorry for the tipsy rambling review :D

report review for abusesasy39 chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

This just gets better

report review for abuseAria Dragoncrest chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Awesome chapter!

report review for abuseInspector Callahan chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

YES! Ive been hoping you'd bring more of the MU into the story.

report review for abuseFwoosheye chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

Nice. It's almost a pity this take place in GoF, cause if it had been CoS I would've begged you to let Peter encounter the Basilisk.

report review for abuseChevalierRadiant chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

...yay hahahaha

crossover time!

report review for abuseallie213 chapter 10 . Jul 6, 2019

yes! Spidey! can't wait for what you have in store for us

report review for abusefunctionderivatives chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

What just happened I'm—

report review for abuseFreeTraderBeowolf chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

I loved the part with Peter and MJ. pure comic gold.

report review for abusehekpup chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

no thanks

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

whaaaaa?! ok This was completely unexpected. But I love itI meanmagical mary-jane (a Mary Sue lol?!) plus my (personal bias) single favorite marvel universe hero, and Natasha, and HP universe? hells yes! looking forward to seeing where you take this! thank you!

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Wow. Update soon.

report review for abuseAunknowntimelord chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Yes yes yes yes yes please update really soon

report review for abusexiongmao03 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Loved it!

report review for abuseTony McNucklz chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

very much NOT happy you thrrew more Marvel into the story. you had a setup. a concept that sort of worked. but now that a second character randomly transcends the impossible to switch the the EXACT SAME universe as ANOTHER reality bender from the SAME ORIGINAL UNIVERSE... the rest of the story is just going to be waiting for you to toss more Marvel characters in. I think this was a mistake, and worse that you implied that MJ is magic. it feels like you're just tossing random blah blah in now rather then trying to write a coherent story. I hope you delete this chapter and go back to what you had before. adding peter and MJ means you now have to waste an inordinate amount of time incorporating them into the story, establishing them in the new world and yak yak yaking instead of actually progressing the plot of the intriguing qnd enjoyable story you had going.

i hope you delete the peter and MJ bit. I've read a coue stories where new universe jumpers come along after the original character and it didn't work well. maybe you can be an exception, but the balance of probability is not in your favor.

report review for abuseSuperTroll567 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Curiouser and curiouser. Interesting chapter.

report review for abuseGouravsilentreader chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Amazing update

Love it

Especially like the new entrys

Waiting for the next part eagerly

Please update soon

report review for abusestevefocus chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Good chapter but I will admit to skipping the Spiderman parts, I'm waiting for End Game to come out on 4k so avoiding spoilers.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Have a spider!

That's the problem with never moving on. You don't really have any chance at starting over. The only thing J&L have going for them is that as wizards, they will live longer. Presumably, then, they can safely start having kids in a few years, after they have recovered from their broken state.

Now bringing more people back, hmm. Where will this go? And MJ is likely a witch. The soup thickens...

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseHome of the Brave chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

okkkkkkk

report review for abusetripmight chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Interesting chapter, not sure how I feel about Peter's inclusion, but I am looking forward to how it will go.

report review for abuseMissLuffy05 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Ay madre mía, literalmente acabas de hacer que esta historia sea mi favorita, eres increíblemente talentosa. I LOVE IT

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Wow.. Peter in potterverse... Superb... I suppose MJ is magical one to see the castle... It will very funny to see voldy wrapped in web.. Hahahaaaa...

What happened in malfoy home... ?

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Haha what the f... OK I'm happy to read it. Thank you.

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Coool. So is prayer not magic because of the spider powers?

report review for abuseRaltol Lotlar chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Nope, sorry.

I wanted to see a development of Harry growing diffently and how Natasha deals... or more like how the wizards would deal with Natasha.

Now we have more characters that will have more development as they are new to this story when the Potter family was finally making progress.

Maybe will comeback in futere chapters to see how it develop and continue reading it, but for now (even if Spider-man (the comic one!) is my second favorite Marvel character) I dont care about all this new development.

Thanks for the awesome story so far anyway.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Its out of the blue but tbh after watching FFH I just want more of Tom Holland-Spidey and Zendaya-Mj and you work wonders with keeping characters in-character so I am 100% here for this

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseAnimeA55Kicker chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Is this MJ the mcu one, or the comic version?

report review for abuseRaviran chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Thanks for the chapter, although I do not know if I will continue to read.

I was hoping the story would focus more on the relationship between Harry, Natasha, the Potters and the wizarding world.

report review for abuseVukk chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

While Spiderman is my favorite avenger due to watching his cartoons as a kid, why bring him in? And why is MJ a squib/witch while Peter is a muggle?

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Interesting chapter but the inclusion of Peter and MJ was rather surprising. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseMike COVID-19 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

That took me by surprise. Well done.

report review for abusefallendemon248 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Ah shit it's about to go down

report review for abuseViper5delta chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I'm very leery of throwing additional crossover elements in 50k into the story. Generally, it's a sign that things are going to go downhill fast. I've really loved what you've written so I'll keep reading, just...be careful with it, please.

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Best ending line.

report review for abuseBeeeTeee chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Is this mcu MJ or the actual redhead MJ?

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

I didn't expect this at all good chapter

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Awesome chapter.

So this Peter and MJ come from a AU FFH right?

report review for abuseSakura Lisel chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Wait so why wasn't Peter able to see Hogwarts except MJ did? I'm guessing she has magic as the reason she could see it through anti-muggle charms as the reason Peter couldn't see it, but even then Peter should have still been able to see Hogwarts shouldn't it? *lol*

unless its a fanfic thing, I think supposedly muggles, who come across the area for some reason, CAN see Hogwarts but because of centuries of spells on the castle and anti-muggle charms, I think Hogwarts has wards around it that make it look like a decrepit broken down old castle that NOBODY lives in when a muggle looks at it, with the anti-muggle charms messing with the muggles minds and making them 'see' warning signs around Hogwarts telling them how unsafe and dangerous going into the broken down castle would be, with compulsions to make the muggles decide to NOT be interested in investigating the so called 'castle ruins' anyways. *lol*

report review for abusealec-potter chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Getting too complicated.

Will wait to read more before I decide whether I want to continue

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Nature abhors a vacuum, and the lack of the Infinity Stones would be quite the vacuum. Technology that becomes plants can be rather reality-warping, so it's rather understandable that it came from that. Or because the Stones were destroyed, the Universe became unstable. Either way, the status quo is being altered and it's fascinating.

report review for abuseKhatix chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Looks like MJ is a witch which is nice, kinda suxs peter is affected by the anti-muggle wards seeing how he isn't standard mudane.

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

As I'm going to watch far from home in a few hours of writing this chapter has just made me more excited to watch, can't wait to see how you develop the story

report review for abuseMAJORMATT1234 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Yay I love the spiderman! Didn't see it coming, but I'm all for it

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

Wow, now that's a twist I didn't see coming. Will more Avengers be making an appearance?

report review for abuseGoldenfightergirl chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Does that mean there's a chance that Natasha could go back to Earth 199999 with Peter and MJ at the end of this story? Maybe with Harry and the Potters too.

report review for abuseof Serendip chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Lily and James like her romantically?

Poor Harry lol

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

spidy interesting...

report review for abusetiwari2041 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Why., why would you do this? But as I have no right to question or order the author, I will simply state my opinion. To me this story always felt like it was Natasha's and harry's, adding peter and MJ into it kind of feels like it's not respecting her sacrifice, it was always Natasha and harry, spider will change things way too much

report review for abuseMecaldar chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

reactions? evil laughter! thoughts muhaahahah more evil laughter ideas popcorn for the chapters that going be coming

report review for .master chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

For all that I ship natasha with the potters, because yes!, I'm not really feeling it with having spidey here.

Cool with mj being a witch or squib.

Hmm, I;ll see where this leads.

After all, I'm a firm non believer of the concept of giving harry a light saber to give voldemort a death star. I hope voldie here doesn't get anything from the mcu, much less a freaking infinity stone.

Still, peter and mj were adorable as heck.

Thanks for the chapter and have a nice weekend. tah.

report review for abuseElementaryDrW chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Great chapter! Looking forward to seeing how Peter and MJ fit.

report review for abusepclauink chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

hahaha great we died!

Great chapter!

report review for abusesaint21 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

... why are there so many redheads in this fic?! Lily, Natasha and now MJ, I'm not complaining but siriously why?

report review for abuseCrimson Reiter chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

...why do I have the feeling that Peter and MJ in the Potteverse is HP!Death no so little vendeta for the bullshit MCU!Death pulled after 'Tasha escaped with baby Harry?

Oh right, 'cause antropomorphic enbodiments of high cosmic concepts such as Death are petty as hell.

report review for abusecrankypants16 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

that was cool, though I am confused (don't mind me; I have not seen the last several of the films). Will more people make their way to this reality, I wonder?

report review for abusehergrace44 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

I'm not going to lie, I'm worried how adding more Marvel characters seemingly randomly is going to develop the story. However, this is not the first time one of your stories took a turn that made me worry for the development and quality of the story and then have it turn out wonderfully. Here's hoping for another mind-boggling success :)

report review for abuseTarheelGrey chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Look. I enjoy a good cross. You have a great idea here and have neatly fit natasha into it, but pulling 2 more from the same universe in can be too much if you aren't careful. There already is enough conflict and drama in the world you have built. There is no need to bring in more with 2 more clueless mcu characters.

report review for abuseVal'Hor chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

WHUT ? If that isn't a curve ball I don't know what it is. I certainly didn't see this coming ! :P

Keep up the good work ! :)

report review for abuseStar Iron chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

What the heck? Also the Bio Tech Armour did not seem very obvious to me in the trailers.

report review for abuseMaverickHunter-00 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Well, you lost me as a reader.

report review for abuseHikari Nova chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

*falls over laughing* I wonder why marvel characters are getting dumped into the HP universe I mean I get our favorite spy Black Widow but MJ and Parker? I wonder who else from the marvel multiverse will eventually find themselves in the HP universe

report review for abuseNariem chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

'Reality itself was undone.' so MCU reality was destroyed? or MJ and Pete were simply transported to Potterverse?

Great chapter overall!

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Ooooh. Spider in Hogwarts and he isn't a Wizard! MJ however is! Oh this is going to be interesting

report review for abuseAzure Lightning Emerald Cloud chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

well that's a twist. damn, i wasn't expecting that to happen, I can't wait for these two goofballs to interact with the insanity of this new world .

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Good :)

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseachus93 chapter 10 . Jul 5, 2019

i'm feeling Nat isn't too pleased with their circumstances.

lying-octopus chapter 11 . Jun 28

The intoduction of Spiderman and MJ kind of ruined the flow of the story. I am not against additional characters showing up but too many characters too soon breaks the easing in into the universe of the crossover. Also, there are a lot of sublots currently in motion: Harry's opinion about his parents, aversion to people (yet show Spidey and he immediately connects with him), among others. At least some of these should be fixed first before moving forward with multiverse shenanigans.

Will try to read one more chapter but I don't think, with the progression of the story, that the focus can stay im the relevant points. Because at the current point of the plot, introducing Spiderman may be interesting but it is fundametally irrelevant.

If ever, it would be such a waste as the fic had a good start and great execution... Until Spiderman.

report review for abusemddomene chapter 11 . Jun 11

This use of the AK, is the best and most nonevil one I have ever found. This and using it for killing animals without pain for their meat.

report review for abusenavnit chapter 11 . Dec 17, 2019

Okay this thing with Lily writing exactly what is needed in the diary to suss out Riddle is kind of unbelievable. Other than that, loving this story, don't listen to the idiots crying about spidey being included. I was actually a little disappointed when I thought that it was only going to be Nat in the HP Universe. Because if that was the case than any old OC with Nats traits would have done fine.

Here's to hoping that more Avengers get over to Nats side of the Multiverse, I'd like to see how contrived the methods become for each of them to cross over.

Bummed that Pete isn't a wizard though. That kind of sucks for both teens.

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 11 . Jul 25, 2019

That's why they call her No-bullshit-Natasha!

report review for abuseyodavm chapter 11 . Jul 25, 2019

hurry up and update!

report review for abuseAiyaKnight chapter 11 . Jul 22, 2019

excites to read a new series. been really wanting to rea story in a harry pitter world where she is his protective mom. altho that fierce ness has gown down this chaoter and the last few. the NR Lily moments are so gold, wondering if she will fall for her. i could see that happening. glad james hasent become a dick vilian yet. i enjoy the potter reconnecting moments but i dont know where they harry class moments are or his building friendships is going. the marvel inyroduction with mj felt weird but im sure you are just setting the srage for whats going to happen. i personally hope to see some kind of romance for harry or his moms idk. cheers

report review for abusetommyboynv chapter 11 . Jul 19, 2019

I've been reading your stories over the last year and have totally loved both them and the interesting perspective you have. I am really enjoying this AU take on Avengers in the Potterverse. Very awesome...just wanted you know.

report review for abuseBryan chapter 11 . Jul 17, 2019

Great chapter to a great story once again

report review for abuseAaronD1 chapter 11 . Jul 19, 2019

This needs to be either a James/Lily/Natasha paring, with Harry/Fleur, or a Natasha/Harry pairing. Yeah, I know, but they aren't biologically related so...

Endgame's Natasha is my favorite Natasha. In the first Avengers film she was really nothing more than eye-candy given ridiculous poses - In Endgame she appears to have been a leader for the 5 years after the snap.

I would bump this up to an M-rating and go back and change a few things. There are plenty of small grammatical errors throughout the story that you should be able to catch by going back and reading it slowly.

The whole scene with the diary and Lily writing the same exact thing as Harry did was over the top and honestly doesn't match up with the tone for the rest of this story.

MJ and Peter's inclusion was unexpected. I was hoping for something like that to occur, but I had expected it to be Clint, Steve, and perhaps Tony - despite him having died. Natasha died as well, but look at where she is.

If I were in Natasha's position, I probably would have quite a bit of skepticism over whether or not MJ and Peter were from the same exact muli-verse as she was. Sure, the same events happened, as far as they can tell, but when it comes to the multi-verses the difference could have been that Hitler shaved his pubes.

report review for abuseY-T3cH chapter 11 . Jul 18, 2019

This story is really good. Though i am a bit worried abt some things. Like pace of the story for example. Second and most imp, introduction of peter n mj in the story. I know you dropped a hit that u will be introducing marvel characters but i hope you didn't do it on a whim and do actually have a plot plan for the characters. I am guessing peter is going to be ur tech guy creating magic resistant smart phones for u to start as a business. Don't know abt mj though. Still i will stay tuned.

~Till the next time!

report review for abuseAndy2157 chapter 11 . Jul 17, 2019

good chapters

when's the next update?

report review for abuseFangirlBookworm21 chapter 11 . Jul 17, 2019

I'm really really enjoying thispls keep writing!

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 11 . Jul 15, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 11 . Jul 15, 2019

Another Horcrux bites the dust. I wonder if Peter brought his "gear" with him, if not he'll need tomake a new set, and fortunately here there is a wider variety of materials that he'll have access to, particularly for the suit, than what he started out with in the other reality, although it would be difficult for him to replicate his Stark Suit, not impossible, as he would literally have to invent the tech for it, which would probably take a few years to accomplish (at least). Being a Muggle-born in Slytherin will be particularly challenging for MJ, especially so due to the Ferret. I thought it was funnier than all get out, that the First spell that we are aware of that Natasha used with her new Wand, was an AK! Thank You. TTFN

report review for abusedawnknits chapter 11 . Jul 15, 2019

Wonderfully done! Look forward to the next update.

report review for abusekyraboo chapter 11 . Jul 14, 2019

I love the inclusion of peter and mj! I think they are going to make it interesting a different! Plus they are some of my faves.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 11 . Jul 12, 2019

Ha! His own favorite spell is going to ruin him! Take that moldy shorts.

report review for abuseanimusand chapter 11 . Jul 13, 2019

I love it! Oh, what's that, is there a problem? Zap! No more problem.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 11 . Jul 11, 2019

shit

report review for abuseMarilynT chapter 11 . Jul 13, 2019

What is going to do to Dumbledore. Can't wait to see

report review for abuseTheUnHolySmirk chapter 11 . Jul 12, 2019

I read this overnight. I was amazing!

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 11 . Jul 12, 2019

Poor Peter and MJ.

Very good, thanks.

report review for abusejustareader21 chapter 11 . Jul 11, 2019

That was fun. The new add-ons should liven things up. Great work

report review for abuseCheerfullyMorbid chapter 11 . Jul 9, 2019

This is so much fun!

Yeah, I thought the Infinity Stones being taken through time travel and also destroyed would cause some trouble.

report review for abusehi chapter 11 . Jul 9, 2019

i freaking love this story and i can't wait for the next update

report review for abuseBabieDove chapter 11 . Jul 10, 2019

Omg how interesting ! Can't wait for more!

report review for abuseSpectrer chapter 11 . Jul 10, 2019

I'm cracking up so badly, this is hilarious.

report review for abuseDavid12leca chapter 11 . Jul 10, 2019

magnificent and time for work uuhhhhh

report review for abusejmw03u chapter 11 . Jul 9, 2019

This story is hilarious! I love how Harry and Natasha are so self-assured and know what they are doing, but everyone else just runs around like 'you did not just do that!'. LOL. Thank you for writing this.

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 11 . Jul 9, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Ooh this is gold. Is tony in this world too seeing as he died too?

report review for abuseGuest chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

You either have to flat out tell us why you brought them into the story or hurry and get to that point in the story. Because them being there only makes since to you right now. This story started of good but these last few chapters haven't really fleshed out Harry or Natasha in a overall positive light and has been pretty bash heavy on James and Lily.

report review for abuseglenn1970 chapter 11 . Jul 9, 2019

Love this story!

report review for abuseDraaIzilUss chapter 11 . Jul 8, 2019

oh, god! I'm loving this story! Please, keep updating, Your sense of humor in your writing has got me all but rolling on the floor!

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 11 . Jul 8, 2019

Really? Why would you get negative reviews for bringing in Peter? I mean I know it says somewhere in here that you were planning on involving more of the Marvel universe so it was only a matter of time before something happened. I don't know if the Reality Stone was the best choice for dimension hopping (I think I would have chosen the Space Stone) but that's like super nit picky and arguable in any case.

Anyhow, it's interesting to see characters like these added because, while MJ might get thrown into the Hogwarts meatgrinder, Peter is totally hanging out in limbo atm. He doesn't connect with the HP world in any way (aside from simply living with Nat) and doesn't have Nat's excuse or reason to poke his nose in (wanting to keep an eye on MJ maybe but Nat probably plans to put him in normal school making his free time limited). Of course when the garbage hits the fan, having Spiderman helping out will be great but I can't imagine how he fits into the story till then... We'll have to wait and see.

Finally I'm interested in how the Horcruxes will be dealt with. It's nice to know that Lily is so smart and can flaunt it when dealing with the Diary but one does wonder how she came up with the story of a second year Harry dealing with the Chamber of Secrets being open and all that. Quite a shot in the dark if that's what it was. Then again since Nat quickly killed the thing (I like the initiative even if I wonder at the like of forethought it shows... I would have thought she would have liked to look into options to find out more about it/from it first but whatever *shrug*) so in the end it doesn't really matter... I wonder what Hagrid will be able to tell them (side from that he was framed which I expect they really should already know) and how this will lead to them finding the other Horcrux but again, we'll just have to wait and see.

In any case, I'm enjoying read the story and I'm glad to hear you're enjoying writing it. Till next time!

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 11 . Jul 8, 2019

OK, I disagree with the skeptics on this one. I think MJ is an excellent choice for this situation. A smart NYC girl who isn't going to take guff from anyone is just what the house of the snakes needs. I do worry about Peter. What point of contact do they have in the muggle work? Could Sirius put them in touch with Andromeda's family so Ted could help? Does Remus still have any muggle family left on his mother's side? Also I really want to see where Natasha is making her money. Did she get in on the ground floor at Apple or something?

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 11 . Jul 8, 2019

One world carrying tortoise coming right up, with a side of First Nation creation/origin legend. Find the CBC Massey Lecture with Thomas King (Canadian First Nations author) as he starts out talking about the legend of the turtle. Hysterical and so warm and beautiful.

It is so much fun to be adding people from the MCU and linking it up with Thanos and the stones now (so much more can happen hereI meanTony died too, right?) AnywaysoooMJ in the house of snakes. Natasha vs Snape. this will be gooooodLove it! Thank you!

report review for abuseExitPhillyLAS chapter 11 . Jul 8, 2019

I can't wait to see Peter and MJ become more incorporated into their new world! Every chapter I like Natasha more and more; arrive, AK, leave, honestly iconic

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Haha, that's something to build on. Looking forward to more. Thank you

report review for abusemizzrazz72 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Lily is finally taking off the rose colored glasses to see Dumbledore for who he is.

report review for abuseLivininCorsets chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

There are only so many spoilers you can put in here that I haven't already heard. Thank you coworkers. But I also don't have the money to see things in theaters so no point in whining about it *shruggs*. I bet Peters sport sence was going off because of the basilisk.

Ooh I read a fan theory about how making horcruxes included canniblism. Would make since since it's about the transference of a bit of soul and why it would be so foul that most dark lords won't even go near it.

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Hi.

Whelp, Peter and MJ are settling in, or, you know... Not sure how far along they are at accepting their situation, but MJ might see the beginning stage of anger by her outburst with Malfoy, so there is that. Also, the fact she and Natasha now have distinct wands is interesting. Combine that with MJ being sorted into Slytherin and we are on a roll :)

Then there is Harry and his ongoing teenage struggle of fitting into school... Not sure about Firenze ambushing him in the woods like that, but at least he brought good news, so he's sort of forgiven. Also, Harry is planning to get inventive with those who have been steeling Luna's shoes, so i'm now actively looking forward to that as well :D

Lastly is the Horcrux... Talking to it does seem the right thing to do if it is able to divulge secrets on its own. And it's unlikely that an adult would be ensnared in the same way a child would (although, there is Dumbledore, but Deathly Hallow...)... Involving the whole gang was nice, but i liked Natasha's solution of just killing it :D A shame that wouldn't have been possible in canon because of the heroes having too positive karma :p

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abusewarlocktoungue chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

So MJ is a witch, a Slytherin and has Voldemort's sister wand...

Now I really wonder what kind of role she's bound to perform...

Also, if Peter still has his spider abilities, does that mean he'll still be Spider-Man?

Like the UK version?

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Very good, loved

report review for abuseSiSiren chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

*me currently screaming because I haven't seen Endgame because I am broke af to go watch a movie**also screaming because I don't like spoilers and I thought it was just in this story that Natasha died**screaming becausd this is so well written that i want to say "screw my no-spoiler" rule and just read on*

All in all, this is fantastic so far and i will come back to this story when I watch Endgame and die from watching Endgame. i applaud you on this story, it is beautifully written and I love it :3

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

interesting chapter, looking forward to more.

report review for abuseGon Freaks chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I am not sure why you are bringing Spidey and MJ to this universe, but I guess that will be explained later as the story progresses.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Fun chapter and seems the kids are adjusting reasonably well. Great ending with the killing of the diary. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseCureCaligraphy chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

(delighted laughter)

report review for abusefunctionderivatives chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Is Death somehow related to the Infinity Stones? I mean, did Death have something to do with Peter and MJ accidentally going back in time?

I'm also sad that MJ and Peter had to go to different schools. The "they lost everything except each other" part got me.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Nice :)

report review for abusestarboy454 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

excellent update

report review for abuseT-Biggz chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I'f I were there I'd be laughing too.

While it is a surprise to see Peter and MJ in the 1990's he does have the mind to make the most of it and get a head start on Technological advances like what Natasha did with investing. I'm just really interested in see how he copes with this.

report review for abuseRavenclawLovegood37 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Could this story include some romanrodgers stuff? Maybe? Possibly? Hopefully? Anyways, love the story and I'm hoping for an update soon!

report review for abusedoctor of supreme awesomeness chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Awesome! Are you gonna get a love interest for harry and if so, I do hope it's someone from the marvel series

report review for abusePyro-Neko-Isis chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Wow! It's good, I was just not expecting Peter and MJ . Not sure why though I'm looking forward to reading more

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseTimothyB chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Interesting turn to the story. I wonder how Harry's relationship is going to be with MJ and Peter. I can't wait for the next chapter.

report review for abuseViper5delta chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Still leary of the Spiderman cross, but still sticking with it because I liked what came before. Ther aren't enough momma Natasha fics so I really hope this turns out alright.

report review for abusetripmight chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Interesting with them having magic, keep up the good work.

report review for chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Please, promise: You did not put Lily into the diary that She could be possessed by Voldemort ...

report review for abuseElementaryDrW chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

An interesting chapter overall, and I'm curious as to who could be wielding the infinity stones..

report review for abuseillerayn chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Loved this chapter. I think that Natasha had one of the best reaction I've even seen concerning the Horcruxs. "It's alive and it's evil, an Avada later, it's no more a problem !"

Thanks for writing

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Ahh, the simple solutions are often the best ones. Diary is alive? Evil? Kill it. Now, Sirius needs to let her know about the locket. Gotta say, though, after Lily's Widow-esque finangling of the diary (it's always about Harry indeed), I was expecting a convoluted plot point. Thanks for surprising me! Great first run for this new wand... :D

Poor Harry. Speaking as a profound introvert, I know how he feels. Can't wait to see what he comes up with to deal with the missing shoes. And poor Ginny. I usually don't feel terribly sympathetic to her (thank you book 6...), I winced at that oh-so-blunt no. Talk about being shot down. Ouch.

As for negative reviews, it's their loss. I agree, this story keeps getting better. And since you are writing it for fun, if you are enjoying it, then that's really all that matters. Can't wait for the next chapter!

report review for abusestylo1 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

im not to found of pulling spiderman and mj into this, i just feel they dont add anything other then chaos to the story.

peter parker going to school? the kid is a genius 30 year from the future from a universe that is at least 100 years ahead in science, he needs his own company amd start developing not go to school.

i like the story and its very impressive for a dyslectic, small mistakes but easily ignored. dont really agree with much of your magical theory though

report review for abuseRori Potter chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Wow! What unofficial job does she have?

report review for abuseThe Jabberwock of OZ chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Hmmm...

I wonder who summoned the Reality Stone to Peter and MJ

I would 'assume' that it was due to Peter making BioTech(?) and reality just not having it, but it could be 'Death' doing this for some reason.

Man that does suck though, losing everyone they ever knew and loved. Hopefully they get to go back, or learn why they were sent to this dimension

report review for abuseTianYi chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Hopefully you can start something meaningfull here with MJ and Pete, it was an out of nowhere in Far From Home.

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Just like that dariy problem over... Hahahaaaa... They should bring locket too and nat can AK it...

report review for abusesamics chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I had to go back and read the reviews when you said they were negative for the last chapter. I liked it though, mostly. Peter and MJ's arrival was a bit "out of nowhere," but why not..? If one person is transported by death and co to another universe, why not some more? The execution of the diary seemed too impulsive. I would think thay Natasha would at least ask some more questions and contemplate some interrogation before deciding on an AK. But still looking forward to the updates!

PS still waiting for some your HP stories like Found in the Ashes. No pressure though

report review for abusesamics chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I had to go back and read the reviews when you said they were negative for the last chapter. I liked it though, mostly. Peter and MJ's arrival was a bit "out of nowhere," but why not..? If one person is transported by death and co to another universe, why not some more? The execution of the diary seemed too impulsive. I would think that Natasha would at least ask some more questions and contemplate some interrogation before deciding on an AK. But still looking forward to the updates!

PS still waiting for some your HP stories, like Found in the Ashes. No pressure though

report review for abuseTony McNucklz chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

wasted. mj and peter are unnesessary blah that took up an entire chapter just to half-ass a background. it was to fast, chopped and all around not well written. you forced their inclusion detrimentally and now have to forge relationships so they aren't complete non sequeter characters. you seriously hurt your story by throwing them into the story. i literally could not enjoy this or the previous chapter. please re write them out of what was a good story.

report review for abusexiongmao03 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I loved it. The more I read the more I love it! I absolutely love all of Natasha's interactions with anyone from the magical world.

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Hahaha. Black Widow. The soul of expediency. Now that is competent.

So, Pete and MJ is 16. Perhaps Peter will assume Tony Stark legacy in a more literal way here. After all, he is quite the competent engineer too. Stark Tech, woohoo!

MJ, from the latest movie, hinted at a not so nice background, i think. And now a new loss. Why do I have a feeling both Peter and MJ is the type to keep things within... I hope Nat can keep both straight. But MJ surely needs to learn fast to keep the Slytherins on their toes.

report review for abuseGouravsilentreader chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Amazing update

Love it

Ending scene was awesome

Waiting for the next part eagerly

Please update soon

report review for abusemrpietan chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

this keeps getting better and better

report review for abuseAunknowntimelord chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I really like where this story is going it keeps getting better if that's somehow possible

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

O gods and little fishes this chapter had me rolling in laughter. It was just really good. Hope you go see Far from home. Love getting peter/MJ. Also you realize there are now two M Jones's at Hogwarts. Also Peter not only nose future tack, he nose stark level tech not to mention that he made something worthy of tony stark with the invention of his web shooters. This story is just so exiting and thank you.

report review for abuseWhiteKnightofHyrule chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I'm interested in seeing where you take this. Adding Peter and MJ is weird but can turn out good jury's still out on it. Also I curious because it seems like you are in a position to start a love triangle. If not I can expect some relationship drama from this at least and a decent amount of Rebellion from Peter

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Oh boy!

report review for abuseGoldenfightergirl chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Awww, you spelled Steve Rogers' name with a 'd' in it. There's no 'd' in Rogers. XD I think there might be a sex joke in there somewhere.

report review for abuseYeTianshi chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Not sure where you're going with Peter and MJ, I just feel really sorry for them at this point. I mean for Natasha life only got better, she was dead, technically she didn't lose anything she wasn't prepared to lose. Those two however had a full life ahead of them, friends and family who they would miss.

Still, it was a nice chapter, I'm looking forward to more interaction between the Potters, Natasha and Harry.

report review for abuseRobin the Ylissian Grandmaster chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Great to see more mcu characters in this

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Still here for it. Honestly Im gonna get a kick outta MJ knocking down purebloods a few pegs. I look forward to the next chapter!

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Pretty interesting turn of events good chapter

report review for abuseCrimson Reiter chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Hahahahahahha 'Tasha is enjoying way too much having the chance to show off xD

I think you rushed up MJ's magic potential, but aside that, I love the chapter~

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

oh can Sirius be her Clint but in a love interest-not-brother way? and I'm still holding out hope for Tony!

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

This story really has gotten much more interesting. I don't watch previews, but what I know about MJ from Homecoming tells me that Slytherin is perfect for her. So's the match between Natasha and her wand.

report review for abusestevefocus chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Ah balls, as you said don't' read if you have not seen End Game, I guess I will continue this story after End Game is released on 4k. On the plus side there will be a bunch of chapters to catch up on.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

XD. One way to deal with a Horcrux. Just abracadabra them l.

report review for abusecrankypants16 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I loved the chapter. Feel badly for Peter being separated from MJ for schooling. I do like Natasha not screwing around and just handling the problem.

report review for abuseBeeeTeee chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I can see why people would complain about Peter and MJ being added, it does seem a bit out of the blue, but I supposed I'm willing to stick with it.

report review for abuseCarol145 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Love it! (: Love Natasha's wand. Can't wait for the next chapter.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseedboy4926 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Good chapter.

report review for abusetiwari2041 chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

damnm great chapter, though i guess giving spider magic will make him a bit OP, overall great chapter

report review for abusepclauink chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Love Natasha!

report review for abuseAlexanderRaven chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Lol, love the chapter title. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see more Peter and MJ shenanigans.

report review for abuseDuellist chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

"Now it's dead and not a problem." Oh, my pancreas! I love your Romanoff. So funny!

report review for abuseblueEyre chapter 11 . Jul 7, 2019

Natasha is BAMF!

Heeroh chapter 12 . Mar 22

Harry bluntly tells his birth mother that she needs to "get over herself" like he's on the spectrum, James has no real urge to defend his wife of like 15 years, and Lily rationalizes in her head that she deserves it and Harry is 100% in the right. Wow... I know you want to punish James and Lily for their attitudes (which you created by the way), but Harry is acting like a tool with barely any consequences. Hopefully his ego deflates a little soon, because I don't think I can handle the Potters groveling at Harry's feet to get his acknowledgement anymore. Why did you even bring them back to life if you were going to do this lol are they going to be (or already are) the villains or something?

The Potters should really get over this seemingly borderline autistic child and make a new happier kid. You couldn't have made it any clearer how fucked up they are for worrying about Harry too much. It's probably better to just completely forget Harry for their mental health because he seems to just want to cause them pain. It's not healthy.

Sorry, had to get that off my chest. Can't believe Harry told his birth mother that's gone almost crazy looking for him for 13 years to "get over herself", Jesus fucking Christ... I was really enjoying the story and giving Harry a break up until then even with all the asshole stuff he's been doing. Hopefully goody two shoes Peter (and even MJ to some degree) will help Harry learn to act normal.

report review for abuseMosquitoesLoveMe chapter 12 . Jan 17

*Whistles* To be fair, it was sometime coming. This will be... Interesting.

report review for abusea prick chapter 12 . Nov 28, 2019

o h [2]

report review for abuseViper5delta chapter 12 . Aug 17, 2019

Catching up with the chaps I missed. So far still not caring about peter ad MJ and still really enjoying the rest.

report review for abusePanthertwat chapter 12 . Aug 13, 2019

Fantastic story.

If avoids many of the tired and re-used dialogues found in many HP fanfics.

James Potter has an actual personality, and isn't just mentioned in passing. He actually is a well thought out and mature man, something harder and harder to find in literature, and missing from TV and movies since practically the 80s.

I am in love with Lilly Potter, and her strength in this as well.

Also, a fresh, and new take on magic. Not only how it works, but comparing it to other avengers fictional magics is a nice touch.

report review for abuseZeru'Xil chapter 12 . Aug 6, 2019

Pardon me while I die laughing

report review for abusenhbuvtcyrtxdgfh chapter 12 . Aug 2, 2019

i was actually enjoying this story so much...up until those last two paragraphs...wtf?!

report review for abuseJada chapter 12 . Jul 31, 2019

O.O... Saw it coming but that's not what I expected...

report review for abuseGuest chapter 12 . Jul 29, 2019

Ohhh ending on a cliffhanger, mean but amazing

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 12 . Jul 30, 2019

Hi.

Things are progressing nicely, i'd say. Malfoy and Potter coalition trying to overthrow Dumbledore, Peter and MJ going shopping (looking forward to what Peter can achieve when he lets his mind work) and some more family bonding :p

What i'm wondering most at the moment is how the rest of the magical world is taking the Potter's allying with the Malfoy's in trying to take down Dumbledore... It seems both parties have a certain amount of 'pull' in their respective faction, so it should be interesting to see who is left trying to defend Dumbledore :)

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseGuestinator chapter 12 . Jul 28, 2019

Am I the only person that is disappointed when Albus is always an idiot in stories? That he, forgive the pun, magically got to where he is by being so massively complacent and idiotic? So simple minded?

Know it is just because otherwise the story would rightfully be under his full control, no one would ever grow further than what he allows, but it is getting mildly tiring reading the same old thing with him.

If you can't make a self made ruler and political powerhouse competent then why use them at all? Just have them die off screen in some heroic battle and some new OC take their place.

report review for abuseLord Damon Darkfyre chapter 12 . Jul 29, 2019

Well damn, that's one way to end a chapter! Looking forward to an update!

report review for abusePyro-Neko-Isis chapter 12 . Jul 29, 2019

I like it but, isn't Natasha the neglected butterfly?

report review for abuseRobin the Ylissian Grandmaster chapter 12 . Jul 28, 2019

And this is where I drop this story.

report review for abuseAJ Granger chapter 12 . Jul 28, 2019

I get that flirting with Lily throws her off her game, but I cannot decide if Natasha actually wants to start a relationship of sorts with Lily and James or if she's only using this to exert some kind of control over Lily. I will be curious to see where you go with this.

I liked the meeting between Peter and Harry. It's odd that MJ is magical and Peter is not, though I suppose his different physical make-up and love of technology makes Peter a better no-maj than a wizard. I am curious to see how MJ does in Slytherin. Also, it's interesting to see the other differences in this world and with the Potters and others.

report review for abusetiwari2041 chapter 12 . Jul 28, 2019

you know, i dont know why but that was hot, like this is new territory, which i dont think i have ever read in a harry potter fic,

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 12 . Jul 28, 2019

Wow, I can't wait to find out Lily's reaction to that Kiss, it should prove interesting... At least Harry is being civil with his birth Family (even if he did step a bit too far with Lily). Things are going to be interesting with all of Dumbledore's dirty laundry being let out, on top of the appearant Potter/Malfoy alliance. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseGuest chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Huh good chapter but looking forward to the fallout

report review for abusecygnet411 chapter 12 . Jul 27, 2019

Great chapter! Are we going to see other avengers in the future? Pls update soon.

report review for abuseEmeraldGuardian7 chapter 12 . Jul 27, 2019

Just found this story today and it is amazing! I wasnt sure at first how much I would like the having James and Lily alive after Natasha already took him... thinking it would create unneeded drama, but it's actually worked out better than I thought. I'm curious where your going with this whole Natasha/Lily flirting thing. It seemed like an act at first but now... I have no idea. Especially after this last chapter. I keep waiting for Harry to almost ask Fleur to the ball or something.

Lol. They seem to get along well. Anyway, the story is really good. I cant wait for more.

report review for abuseOlegGunnarsson chapter 12 . Jul 27, 2019

Of the possible reactions on the part of our interested third party, I'm not sure which I'm rooting forYou WHAT?!" or "Finally!"

Either would be fascinating.

This is a great story and I look forward to more.

report review for abuseCount Jim 'tribbles' Moriarty chapter 12 . Jul 27, 2019

Unless the trio were running sideways, they would not be communicating non-verbally with warm smiles all over the places. They can't possibly see their faces at the right angle and in the sufficient resolution, what with inevitable motion blur, even if they jog at a snail's pace. That's just a tad too much belief to suspend.

Also, the first time the family is seen at the store, I don't think MJ's "mood" comes across sufficiently low for it to make sense to speak of a drastic improvement in the next segment. For instance, the very last phrase of that bit references a stern look undercut by a smile. That's not mood to be improved, that's self-wry awareness.

Apart from that I'm warming to the whole Peter & co coming in. It's interesting to see Harry be a bit of a fanboy with Spiderman, although I think you could push that aspect a bit further still.

I'm also enjoying Dumbledore as a Potential Bad Guy. After all, what do you do when the actual most powerful wizard actually becomes malicious? It's interesting to see him succumb to his own prejudice concerning the willingness of the Potters to associate with the Snakes. He can't conceive of it being just a technical move against him and not an indication of deeper rot within.

report review for abuseOrigamiGuyII chapter 12 . Jul 27, 2019

that's right, destabilize the broken woman some more LOL can't wait to see the reaction.

report review for abusewarlocktoungue chapter 12 . Jul 27, 2019

Was bound to happen sooner or later...

report review for abuseMarauder no. Five chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

I'm not sure how freaking lily out is going to help matters between them but...okay. natasha did point out to cap once that PDAs make people uncomfortable, so that might wrongfoot Lily. Unless Nat actually likes her like that.

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

OMG what an ending ! Brilliant chapter ! I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !

report review for abuseTimothyB chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Uh oh. I have no idea where this is going. I honestly can't event guess what's going to happen next.

report review for abusecrankypants16 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

figured that was coming but it might have been James first. Great chapter

report review for abusekyraboo chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

YES YES YES! I love this fic so much and am so glad of the inclusion of Spider-Man and MJ because it makes it new and different then the boring someone else raises Harry storylines that sadly often happen. I hope the demons don't throw anymore tea. Next time perhaps make it ice tea?

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Natasha is bold great chapter

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseuntoldpleasure chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Wot. Not that she kissed Lily, but that she kissed the 'mother of her child.' Excellent turn of phrase.

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Hmmm, that's very interesting. I happened to look over the comments before reading and saw some people freaking out about the kiss at the end and I have to say they're seriously jumping the gun. There isn't any clear sign what Nat is really going for or how this will end up so freaking out about it right now is pointless. As for my thoughts on the kiss, I'd be fine regardless of how far you take this. If Nat really has some kind of thing for Lily then sure, why not? I'm not against unusual relationships. If this is just Nat pushing boundaries and/or flustering Lily then that's fine too. It certainly an interesting tactic that's for sure in that case. I look forward to seeing this aspect of the story develop.

The other major thing we learn from this chapter is that Peter is not in fact being sent to a new "normal" school and is going to effectively be this world's Tony Stark. Cool, still largely separate from the normal Harry Potter-verse, but cool all the same.

Finally Dumbledore is firmly against them now but what exactly he'll try to do is up in the air. Looking forward to seeing more. Till next time!

report review for abusedl-o-lb chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Yes just yes

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Woooow... Interesting cliff hanger... Hope u update soonner...

report review for abuseHorusRa chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Finally red on red Pseudo Yuri... How bad James Will be if Lily abandon him for Natasha... And when Harry finds His two mothers have a thing dirección each other

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

brilliant, looking forward to more

report review for abusejustareader21 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Fun chpt. Hope for more Parker. Nice as always. Guess it's hard to hate someone your kissing.

report review for abusepaintingrosesblack chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Also! Peter and Harry best bros? Hell yeah!

report review for abusepaintingrosesblack chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Wooooooow. Omg i was waiting for that last line! But now that i read it i don't know how i feel about it. I guess i'll have to wait and see what happens between them..

report review for abuseOlly chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Hum... Was it really a good idea to kiss Lily ? Because it seems pretty irrational to me. Lily already dislikes if not hates Natasha and with such a poor opinion of her when it happens, wouldn't it be logical for Lily to assumes the worst of her : that Natasha is either trying to manipulates her with sex or that she is just a slut ?

Not to mention that Lily is married and her marriage's poor state is already indirectly link to Natasha, with that in mind, how could Natasha's action have any positive consequences for her ? It was clearly an attempt to manipulate Lily but it wasn't done either at the correct moment or the correct way, if Lily didn't hated Natasha (yet) I don't see how she could feel anything else for her than hate now.

But I'm ready to give you the benefit of the doubt because I have read your other works (all of them) and I know you are a skilled writer especially when it comes to emotional interactions between your characters. I have never felt that it was forced, artificial or only done to make the plot moves on. On the contrary I have always found what you write to feel real, to feel like how a real person could act and/or feel in the situation you describe.

And I mean if you have a fantasy about Natasha and Lily making out, there is nothing wrong with that ! Have fun and go wild ! I'm sure a lot of readers will find that hot (because it is) but you can't blame some of us for raising a skeptical eyebrow tho.

There, my rant is over, I hope you didn't felt offended because it wasn't my intention and I'm not trying to say that you "ruin" the story or anything like that and maybe I'm even wrong and everything will make perfect sense next chapter.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

A Natasha/James/Lily pairing is a really, really bad idea. Why does Natasha to be involved romantically?

Feels like you've made quite a lot of questionable decisions these past chapters.

report review for abuseMar91 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

I like

report review for abuseMajorChaos13 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Ngl fully on board with lilyxjamesxblackwidow. That shit is cool. Also sirius' reaction will be hilarious

report review for abuseYeTianshi chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Uhmm... Lily better slap her because that's just crossing clear set boundaries. I'd call it cheating, but I'm still not sure if Lily was simply stunned or actually willing to go along with it.

Jesus, she's married, people get divorced for worse reasons.

Anyway, other than that it was pretty epic seeing Peter and MJ getting settled into the world, the little byplay between Harry, Peter and Natasha was also fun to read even if it wasn't very long.

Overall, had fun reading the chapter, though the end gave me mixed feelings because I have strong negative reactions to infidelity in general.

report review for abuseMs-Fleur chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Ignore the taters/trolls, you can't please anyone. Big fans of your fanficiton and to honest this was building up. However, whether Lily kisses Natasha back, who knows, she might just supress her feelings. But not sure why Natasha kissed Lily, yes she was flirting with Lily, was a kiss to shut her up or something more. I think it would be cruel for Natasha to play with Lily like that but I think she does feel something for Lily. Whatever happens next, I am glad this happened as the signs were there and this was the result.

I am excited how you take this forward, but with James/Harry involved... But whatever the case, ignore the haters and write the story, you want to write it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

report review for abuseNotRob chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Why are you having Natasha flirt with James and Lily? It's a little uncomfortable and now she is straight up kissing Lily? I really don't get it and I'm not a fan of this part of the story and wish you would drop it or something.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

0_0 WHAT?

report review for abuseBorek Hiam chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

I've more'n a few issues with the fic so far, but most are subjective. My issue is with this chapter, the article reads like some transcript of a wizarding Fox/NBC morning news segment.

I know there ain't as many people buying the paper these days, but outside of grocery rags and editorials you just don't see such writing.

report review for abusePete chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

I'm getting the feeling Peter didn't tell Natasha about Tony's death. Why?

report review for abuseGuest chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Cringe.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

Very good

report review for abusehojosatoko chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

I guess this is the moment people clap in the theaters :)

report review for abuseBookNinja93 chapter 12 . Jul 26, 2019

If you heard of the show Siren, it's possible to do a thruple relationship with Lily/Natasha/James. Just saying ;) lol

report review for abuseNoirReality chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Um...

I...don't know how to swallow this.

Eeeeehhhhhhh!

report review for abuseluxcurious chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

YES YES YES! NATLILY NATLILY NATLILY! MY SHIP BE SAILING! Hnggg I can't wait for the next chapter!

report review for abuseDragonsBC chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Two red-heads in a corridor kissing, please add MJ as the third wheel! Great chapter dealing with Peter. Please keep up the good work.

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh. Peter Peter Peter Parker. Thank you.

report review for abuseAria Dragoncrest chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Awesome chapter!

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

I really like your story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Natasha pulling off some big plays gheeeeez

report review for abuseInheritance1990 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

James is jealous and turned on at the same time.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Fun chapter and awesome ending. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abusestarboy454 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

excellent update

report review for abusemad thought chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Kinky. Also time for Dumbldoor bashing, and breaking his throne. Update when you can.

report review for abuseGhostboy138 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

I FUCKING CALLED IT! Holy shit this is everything I wanted. Nat/Lily/James OT3.

report review for abusemizzrazz72 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

It's about to go down. Harry is trying but he can't make up for lost time.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

WTF :)

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

It's nice to see the beginnings of adjustment for Peter and MJ. It's also nice to see the beginnings of "something" between Natasha and Lily.

Also, when having your demons over, try blood, human hearts, or essence of misery/other negative feelings. Maybe with a side of anxiety-induced sleepless nights. I think they would prefer that over human stuff.

report review for abuseBlackDragonDevilGod chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

One might think, James would be pissed at seeing someone kiss his wife.

But, seeing a hot redhead kiss his wife, i think he might pay to see that

report review for abuseKhatix chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Bet Sirius and Snape would of jizzed in their pants if they saw that kiss! Wonder how long before peter makes his web shooters again, should be the first thing.

report review for abuseGon Freaks chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Thanks for explaining Spider-Man, I do admit it will be nice to see how Peter may advance the science's with Romanoff's ideas.

report review for abuseMaleivius chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Excellent chapter, totally didn't see that ending coming haha. Looking forward to seeing what Dumbledore's move will be following this chapter. Can't wait for the next update!

report review for abuseAnimeA55Kicker chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Mom on mother action. Kinky.

report review for abuseKira007Goddess of Chaos chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Oh God! She is seducing them! Lilypad and Jimmyjam are lost.

I love how you get Natashas character. Reading your story is like watching an actual Marvel movie.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Oooh. Stuff is getting steamy. I wonder how Lily will react to the kiss?

report review for abuseLord Mortensen chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Cool! please update soon!

report review for abuseDdastan chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

For some reason most fics that m reading now, are in a chapter where the MCs are fucking up the world around them to the point of pity to the ones caught in the blast. This fic is the same, and then you had to though 2 red-heads, separate mothers of the same child kissing... Jesus Christ I can't wait for more, Lily and James gonna blow a fuse, something tells me that Harry is going to have a laugh

report review for abuseTony McNucklz chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

to far. incredibly over the line. that kiss is so incomprehensibly inappropriate i can barely wrap my head around it. she forcably restrained and physically overpowered her target, threatened her, then kissed her. a married woman on top of it. just because natasha is a woman doesn't make this anything less than malicious sexual assault. imagine if natasha was a man, forcing a woman up against a wall, restraining her, then kissing her. it doesn't matter if the woman doesn't fight at the end. in fact, lily fought being restrained and verbally demanded natasha stop touching her. both were ignored. by any measure, it was sexual assault. all that previous flirting could be percieved as harmless, it could also be argued that due to lily feeling uncomfortable and verbally expressing such, it was in fact sexual harassment. this on the other hand was clear cut outright assault, and lily having that forced on her should react with nothing less than rage, and be right for it. as should james when he learns someone, regardless of the persons gender, physically forced themself on his wife. even harry if he hears about the details of this should find it what natasha did disturbing. this left me absolutely disgusted with the natasha character and if this is played off as anything less than monumentally indefensible will ruin any credibility for this story.

report review for abuseCrimson Reiter chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

James' brain is going to be a giant mess xD

report review for abuseElementaryDrW chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Well, color me intrigued. I'm very curious to see how Lily and James, and even Harry react to that kiss.

report review for abuseJannaKalderash chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

That's not going to go over very well; at least when Lily's brain recovers from the shock.

report review for abusepclauink chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

what a way to end the chapter!

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Oh damn. Hysterical. Butterflies around my place are never neglected - we grow flowers for them - gotta support the annual monarch migration, and we have a ton of Papilio canadensis around (gawds they're gorgeous).

Ok. So so much going on and that's such a clifhanger without more Albus/Potter/Malfoy action. Ahhh! Love Lily's introspection when Harry compares her to Natasha. It's that sort of genius that (apologies) I've rather come to expect and anticipate from your writing and which makes me shiver when I see a new chapter coming down the pipe! So yeah, you continue to set the bar pretty high there. Thank you so much. This is such an awesome, spicy chapter. MJ's shopping for Hogwarts, we've got Natasha encouraging Peter to become this universe's Tony stark, A war brewing with Albus, Politics in Hoggywarts, James realizing that he used to be funny and might be able to be again, and realization that instead of looking for their son they've got time to do other stuff (like take on Dumbledore. And THEN the flirtation of Lily and Natasha gets real.

You don't let the grass grow green around our feet, do you? Dang. This is awesome. Thank you.! #hugelyimpressed!

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Excellent story thank you for keeping grinding

report review for abuseMachcia chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Is this the beginning of a polyamorous relationship?! Oh boi!

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseHikari Nova chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

*falls over cackling* the ending of this c hapter is really going to cause Lily a lot of confusion towards Natasha XD

report review for abuseanzofathyn chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

HOLY SHIT!

That last scene was so worth the wait! I knew Natasha was having fun teasing her but NOWHERE did I think she was going to kiss her!

report review for abuseShadowed S0ul chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Interesting chapter looking forward to more,so i know she has been teasing the potters for a lot of the fic so far but is the pairing natasha/lily/poss james? Or is it some different agenda cause i cant see her kissing lily not causing more confusion and stress into the whole situation of them getting to to know each other with harry kinda in the middle

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Welp. That's gonna blow a mind. Popped gears and gaskets rolling all over the floor. I don't even know what to say. Natasha is as devious and manipulative as they come. Hehe.

I still think it is hilarious that James is being the reasonable one here. Hehe.

report review for abusesnixxjuice214 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

Awesome chapter. Love love loved it.

report review for abuseshapelybutts111 chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

yASSS I SHIP JAMES/LILY/NATASHA SO HARD I need it

report review for abuseSpectrer chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

If Sirius and James could look at Natasha and Lily kissing from before Harry was taken, they'd probably have collapsed laughing.

report review for abuseTheUnHolySmirk chapter 12 . Jul 25, 2019

chapter 12 dude, not 13

mddomene chapter 13 . Jun 11

Well, they are still of age to have children, more so with mage aging. It would make sense that the viable fertility period be longer if one ages slower.

report review for abuseN7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 13 . Jan 6

To be honest James, Lily, and Natasha would be an awesome pairing.

report review for abuseBryan chapter 13 . Sep 11, 2019

Great chapter to a great story

report review for abuseViper5delta chapter 13 . Aug 17, 2019

The Potters heart to heart was nice, a tad dramatic for my tastes, but I can't say it wasn't deserved and the ending was just cute as all getout.

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 13 . Aug 13, 2019

Oh that's fun.

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 13 . Aug 7, 2019

Knowing Natasha, she Let Lily punch her, if only so that she could feel as if she were still in control (which we all know that she wasn't, Natasha was). Glad that Harry had fun with the Potters, it was something long overdue. Also glad of James' unconditional support of Lily. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 13 . Aug 6, 2019

Bwaaahaaaahaaa this was a great transition from the overwhelming anger towards a type of reconciliation.

report review for abuseBioHazard82 chapter 13 . Aug 4, 2019

Great story so far. Please update soon.

report review for abuseSquarekiddo chapter 13 . Aug 4, 2019

I quite like this story, less focus on Andromeda for once.

I just wish I could let myself go more reading it, I keep holding myself back from liking alot of your stories because I have real problems leaving a story unfinished. Ive simple been burned to much to really love this story, wish I could tho.

report review for abuseeyann85 chapter 13 . Aug 4, 2019

Natasha/James/Lily is my new OT3 ... seriously love their chemistry. Thanks for the awesomeness

report review for abuseM chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Me likey- most of the fic that is, but more thematic elements of it come across as crazy immature

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 13 . Aug 1, 2019

Hi.

Nice to see that Lily and James are on the road to recovery. Not sure about slugging Natasha, but perhaps she too needs someone to keep her on her toes? With that said, it seems like having Harry back in their lives is a tremendous help, and is slowly returning their humanity, one Cleese sketch at a time :p

Anyways... Then there is Remus. I have often heard that life is what you make of it, and it seems Remus has latched onto the first person to give him a chance at a better life. It would be interesting to see if he remains 'Dumbledore's man' until the end, or if his vision of the great leader ends up being tarnished.

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 13 . Aug 1, 2019

Yep, you handled that well. Lily's reaction was more than believable and James's response was mature and loving. I'm generally not a fan of James (in fact usually a greatly dislike him) but this version has certainly been a stand out character. Calm, observant, rational, kind. Really I'm quite impressed.

report review for abuseTalaxin chapter 13 . Aug 1, 2019

Okay, I've read the story till here and the premise is both engaging and brilliant. You've woven a beautiful tale. And it could be one of the best HP/Marvel crossovers.

I said 'could be' because you do need a beta reader. Badly. If you already have one, you need a better one. The number of misspellings and grammatical errors is staggering and it takes you out of the story. Case in point: Chapter 7, where you misspelled the chapter title.

report review for abuseTalaxin chapter 13 . Aug 1, 2019

Okay, I've read the story till here and the premise is both engaging and brilliant. You've woven a beautiful tale. And it could be one of the best HP/Marvel crossovers.

I said 'could be' because you do need a beta reader. Badly. If you already have one, you need a better one. The number of misspellings and grammatical errors is staggering and it takes you out of the story. Case in point: Chapter 7, where you misspelled the chapter title.

report review for abuseNemhain2009 chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

I've enjoyed reading your story!

report review for abuseTork01 chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Lily tagged Natasha? that's like Master Chiun saying 'no', something nobody else has ever seen!

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abusekyella14 chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

I'm really enjoying James and Lily's relationship. It's laughably far from the fairytale perfection, but it's better because of it. It feels real, complicated and broken at the same time, but they still love each another enough to make it work. I don't love everything you're doing with this story (thought it's still quite good imo) but James and Lily's relationship is fucking gorgeously done.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

More chaos and mayhem!

report review for abuseMarauder no. Five chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Nay! Venture not into the lair of the white bunny-rabbits, lest you meet your doom!

I'm enjoying it. I like your character development. James and Lily are going to be far from the emotionally stable parents a lot of writers make them. they lived through and fought in a war, their baby was taken and they don't have the best jobs for avoiding PTSD. you've done well.

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Character development, the good stuff

report review for abuseSomeoneWithTasteDoA chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Shame. I thought this story was okay, but now you've got Lily cheating on James.

It's honestly terrible that you've stopped working on your other GOOD stories to work on this thing. Lost a fan, I think.

report review for abuseallie213 chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

I'm loving your story but nervous about the direction it'll take. Peter could definitely find a way back and would Natasha go? Is Natasha seducing Lily as a way to integrate with the Potters. Natasha currently seems like she'll do anything for Harry, and getting with the Potter's is one path to that. I like the Harry and Natasha interactions and would hate for them to separate when Peter finds a way back home.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Not quite a slap, but a broken nose makes sense. To Lily for making the hit!

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Smokin' indeed. Ah, the fantasies.

Remus, still too bound by gratitude, huh. I hope tis only gratitude, not a bond by black magic forced upon him, as in some 'evil albus' stories. I hope he realises that now he really has to choose his heart, or his gratefulness. Else he would one day realise how much he has loss...and it will be all on him.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 13 . Jul 31, 2019

Very good

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Remus was always an off.. Not because he is a were but he is self-centered ass...

Nice liners of MJ and peter... Lets see how Harry deals with MJ...

Waiting for ur next update eagarly

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Awesome chapter..

report review for abuseRakan chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Ni!

report review for abusemizzrazz72 chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Remus has some good points but he's blinded by Dumbledore letting him go to school there.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusednck chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

why is harry so angst ... I understand lily and crew ...just wondering because harry has not really stated on how he feels about the whole situation yes he declared Natasha as his mom but not how he really feels about finding out his parents are alive and still looking for him ... their anger is justified ... then why did the entity bring them back too life

report review for abuseGuest chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Well. The start of your story was good.

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Why did James give her permission to chuck him. Kinda going on a weird direction I didn't think you would 0/10

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abusetiwari2041 chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

loved this it was cool, it was well written and was funny as hell, loved the last part. i think the dinner scene was really good

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Wondered how that would go down. It's nice that Lily was able to impress Harry and that he's comfortable enough to spend an evening with them and without Nat. Not so nice that Remus is such a fanatic, but it's only natural. Canon!Harry was similarly fanatical for very similar reasons.

Of course James wasn't jealous of Lily and Nat hooking up. Two badasss green-eyed redheads viciously going at it, especially when he's married to one of them? He probably fantasized about it from the moment Nat started flirting.

report review for abuseReeSnowflake chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

she's smokingD

report review for abuseNinelotus chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

This was really good until you let your libido bleed into the fanfic and had Peter and MJ join this dimension for no reason.

report review for abuseTony McNucklz chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Well done. Very well done. satisfaction all over the opening. not a fan of james being open to sharing because the reality of humanity is that we are protective of what we cherish, but it wasn't done badly. still, it would clearly hurt james so i am hopeful lily won't step out.

seriously, well done on the opening response. positively, no GLORIOUSLY cathartic for this reader.

report review for abuseanzofathyn chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Awe I'm so happy with how this story is progressing!

report review for abuseDarkw01fie chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Giant spiders would most likely eat rabbits, without the spiders hogwarts may soon see a rise in flesh eating rabbits now their prey has been killed?

report review for abuseAaronD1 chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

I like the direction this is going. It would be awesome to see another story with a Harry/Natasha pairing though. My favorite version of Natasha was in Endgame, so it would be cool to see Harry, maybe 17 or 18, displaced into her universe at around that time before the movie starts. You could make it so that the Resurrection stone is actually the soul stone from his universe, so no one has to sacrifice themselves to get it.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Fun chapter and great ending. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseLord Mortensen chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Cool! please update soon!

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseThe Disturbed King chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

I like the ending of the chapter, making them admit that they lost a large part of themselves along the way. Makes them seem more human than the great Albus Dumbledore.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 13 . Jul 30, 2019

You know, Natasha is turning out to be one heck of a marriage counselor. Especially for that duo. They'd chew up any other person who tried it. Heh.

And Remus. Yep. Dumbledore's man all right. Can't say it surprises me, tbh. That is probably going to shatter the Marauders. Don't know how that divide can be overcome. And neither James nor Lily will choose Remus over Harry. At least Sirius is a crazy idiot who just doesn't care about anything because Monty Python. Lol.

Guest chapter 14 . Sep 10, 2019

Great chapter as always

report review for abusesaashi samy chapter 14 . Aug 26, 2019

Very funny end

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 14 . Aug 17, 2019

Great!

report review for abuseBoomoo chapter 14 . Aug 16, 2019

This gets worse by the chapter, reminds me a bit of your H/T fic that way. Which really sucks because these are the two premises I like/liked the most.

report review for abuseCjkinght chapter 14 . Aug 14, 2019

Love it!

report review for abusekirosyamcha chapter 14 . Aug 16, 2019

this story is quite entertaining :) so far love it!

report review for abusemalinkody chapter 14 . Aug 15, 2019

Loved this story. Looking forward to more chapters.

report review for abusemoozga chapter 14 . Aug 15, 2019

This story is brilliant, thank you! I Love Natasha in this story, you made her truly interesting, deadly but caring person. Can't wait for more- when she will hear about prophercy, from Potters? Dumbledore? Will she stumble upon departament of mysteries in some boom, or interrogate A person?

report review for abuseKzintiKiller chapter 14 . Aug 14, 2019

This is an interesting piece. Well written, but I'm sort of puzzled about Natasha's seeming reticence to take James and Lily into her confidence about what she was and how she came to be there. It's not like they're going to fail to notice Peter and Michelle.

Of further thought...Peter and MJ disappearing will cause certain people in the Avenger's universe to go batshit. People who may have the skills to reason out what happened and why...and come a lookin'.

report review for abuseWeisseHex chapter 14 . Aug 14, 2019

Ok just love your Harry Potter! And Natasha is a kick-ass wiitch!

report review for abuseAJ Granger chapter 14 . Aug 13, 2019

So Harry asks Padma and not Luna. Suppose I can see that since he's been friends with Padma longer and they do seem to get along. MJ is an interesting difference in this, not sure how to deal with her yet. I found the dream thing odd, but loved Natasha's thought process to be harder on Harry and Peter to train them to be more.

report review for abusesassy973 chapter 14 . Aug 13, 2019

Loved it hope you update soon.

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 14 . Aug 13, 2019

okay so something i'm hoping for is a small moment from Death or The Deaths, b/c you've brought this dream about, and when everything is said and done they are characters, and i kinda want to know what's going on with HP Death and MCU Death. Like are they one a Beach right now? is Death Almighty about to knock their skulls together and be all FIX this! In MCU there are Nors, are their Nors in HP? What about Thors and Loki's? We never see them in HP but they MIGHT be there, like can the bifrost go second star to the right and straight on til Potter?

NEXT TONY! He's MCU's Death's Merchant, surely he's GOT to be able to come back some how, and if anyone could get them back it's be a Tony/Peter mixNmash.

Those are my random thoughts. I love this, i kinda want to slap Lily, and I'm not going to lie i kinda want it to be a James/Natasha pairing b/c I like James.

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 14 . Aug 13, 2019

Oh yeah, that's the ticket.

report review for abuseMarcus Rowland chapter 14 . Aug 12, 2019

Just found this in someone's recs and enjoying it a lot, hope to see more. You have a very interesting dynamic going with the Potters and Natasha, I'll be interested to see what happens. Wondering how Peter will eventually fit into this universe, and if Harry will take MJ to the ball.

report review for abusedippytrippy122 chapter 14 . Aug 12, 2019

Brilliant story. I adore their interactions together. Keep it up!

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 14 . Aug 11, 2019

Hi.

Whelp, i guess it's avenger time for Harry and Peter... Or at least training to get there. Glad Natasha decided to step up their training, as there is no such thing as being overly prepared :) I do wonder about her and Lily's dream though... Could it be a result of the soul stone, as she did 'give her soul' for it in her original universe? But then it doesn't make much sense that Lily has the same dream...

On a different note, i'm wondering what you have planned for MJ... At the moment she seems to be content with learning magic at a slightly accelerated pace compared to her year mates. Unless she fully specializes in magic, i don't see her being a viable candidate for the Avenger program (at least not as a frontline fighter, and it will take a while to catch up to Harry and Peter). However, i think it's a bit strange that now that she has a way of standing beside Peter, she would instead choose a supporting role... I don't know much about MJ, however, so it could be that i simply don't understand her character or her motivation at this point :)

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abusetiwari2041 chapter 14 . Aug 11, 2019

Loved it

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 14 . Aug 11, 2019

As interesting as them having the same dream at the same time is, and that they correctly surmised that it was of Harry in a world without either of them, the question remains, who sent it to them, and why? Natasha is correct that Peter could probably take Harry under normal circumstances due to his enhanced strength, speed, reflexes, and "spidey sense", but it would probably be different in a no holds barred situation now without his Webs. At least now, Luna has her shoes, and it will be fun watching Marietta dealing with Her new situation, lol. Now Harry has a Date for the Ball in Padma. I got a kick out of Snapes reaction once he realised that he docked points from his own House. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseHadrian Eveningshade chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

report review for abuseBoika chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

As usual, your story and chapters are awesome. Please keep giving us such good time. ;-)

report review for abusePoor Lee chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

Straddling the line between boring and- yeah just can't bring myself to care enough to criticize this. A rare miss for your writing.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Like the story. Gj

report review for abuseOlly chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

I have never really understood why so many people used Cho as the person who bullied Luna, is it something J.K. Rowlings had said at some point or just a fanfiction cliche ? Because from the few things we know about Cho in canon I have a hard time believing she would bully other students. After all during fourth year, even while dating Cedric she didn't wear a Potter stinks badge, something a bully would have done in my opinion.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

This story died a long time ago in a fiery hell of ridiculous plot and character "ideas" which made zero sense. Seriously, you have zero control about what you're writing.

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

Oh I love this so much. But I don't think sending you a lonely tiger is a good thing, unless it's a lonely tiger who wishes to partner up with the scary tiger and the scary tiger is receptive. And I think you already have something set up for scary tiger.

Wow. I just jump for joy whenever you post a new chapter of this. And the added elements you're pouring in here - the dreams of "Other/Canon Harry," MJ, Luna, Peter and Natasha having the moment where Peter explains End Game, etc... Just wow. Gorgeous! Thank you!

report review for abusedeckman1234 chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

I have been enjoying your story very much these past few weeks. Thanks.

report review for abusemizzrazz72 chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

The dreams give a reason for them to band together and fight for Harry.

report review for abuseDuellist chapter 14 . Aug 10, 2019

Tiger momma is a scary tiger.

report review for abusetony549 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

I enjoyed this story so far and look forward to more.

One comment, modern guns typically don't have gears in their mechanisms. In this story I would say that magic gums up the lubricant used to facilitate sliding or rotating actions used in firearms and renders them unreliable. This would apply to all repeating firearms. In this situation single shot guns would be most reliable.

report review for 7 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Yeah, I join the previous reviewer in requesting Tony join HP universe! :)

I wish you luck.

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

That was smooooth! I am looking forward to seeing what happens when they go to the ball. I love this story !

report review for abusepetalssunwards chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

This whole story is absolutely brilliant!

I didn't think I could love it more and then you introduced Slytherin MJ!

Kudos!

love it love it love it!

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Awesome! Thank you

report review for abusewarlocktoungue chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Eh... For a sec there I thought Harry would invite Luna...

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Very good, thanks.

report review for abuseanzofathyn chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

I'm literally dying at Snape!

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Quite a strange event were Lily and the Black Widow share a dream of another life. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseMurkglow chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Hmmm, Padma ended up getting the ball invite eh? Interesting. She certainly was the most forward and obvious person in pursuing Harry's attention, I just wasn't sure how effective that would be with Harry. Then again this Harry isn't broken like book Harry so a girl showing interest probably works just fine. I guess she also gets brownie points for helping him with Luna's possessions. I would have preferred Luna but that's 100% my personal bias talking, and given their interactions so far (not a ton), probably not reasonable in any case.

Otherwise not much to say here so till next time!

report review for abuseBarbara chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Having not watched Far From Hone, I have no idea what the world was told about the battle, but Tony didn't bring them back. Hulk did. Tony's snap destroyed Thanos's forces and him so he couldn't destroy everyone again to remake the universe.

Of course, Peter didn't see that snap so no idea what he was told.

report review for abuseYaw6113 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Haha! I laughed when Snape realized he had taken points off of Slytherin. What a maroon.

Interesting that Natasha and Lily had the same dream. That is all kinds of weird. Who's sticking their finger in the pot and stirring. Poor Harry. His training is going to be ... interesting now.

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Very interesting chapter.. Characters of Peter and MJ was up to T... Very matching them...

So any chance Tony joining them.. Since all dieing by infinity stone.. Ended up Harry verse...

Waiting eagerly for next update...

Yule ball Hurray

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

nice

report review for abusestylo1 chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

scene not seen. and i still call bullshit on the guns, if such a mechanical process doesnt work with magic how can you travel or use a bike or a toy hell 90% in the world works with gears

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

Excellent chapter. Thank you.

report review for abuseChevalierRadiant chapter 14 . Aug 9, 2019

i adore this story!

report review for abuseLord Mortensen chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Great chapter! please update soon!

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuselistohain chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Its a good chapter, i liked it.

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Love the story

report review for abusesamics chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Good writing as always. The dream felt like an easy out though. Like a convenient way of reducing hostility between Lily and Natasha..

On a side note, I have entirely too much time counting the number of zeros and trying to figure out if there is any pattern to them.. unsuccessfully.

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Harry/Padma is cute good chapter

report review for abuseMaleivius chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Excellent chapter as usual, an interesting development with the glimpse of how things might have forward to seeing further development been Natasha and Lily, that is a very interesting relationship. Can't wait for the next update!

report review for abuseBioHazard82 chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Another great chapter.

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Hahaha. This chapter is one of the best yet. Just the right touch of humor, terror, grief, action, etc.

First of all, James was not at all 'moved' to see Natasha kissed Lily? What a man... Haha.

MJ potion class. Hilarious. I've read a lot of MJs... But I have to say, this new MJ (both in movies and here) is one of the best yet. Both in intelligence and bearing...and humour of course. Wednesday Addams would have found her... tolerable.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

:)

report review for abusepclauink chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Love Natasha and Lily little moments ;)

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 14 . Aug 8, 2019

Awesome chapter.

The Shadows Mistress chapter 15 . Jun 18

yea so sweet love the story and well Luna :)

report review for abusergjflood chapter 15 . Dec 31, 2019

Aww Harry being a protecter

report review for abusenavnit chapter 15 . Dec 17, 2019

Find it a little implausible that four Hogwarts gratuates like Tonks, Lily, James and Sirius don't know who Moaning Myrtle is. Still love the story though! Can't wait to see what happens next.

report review for abusesaashi samy chapter 15 . Aug 26, 2019

Very sweet

I really like this chapter

report review for abuseGuest chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Terrible

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Good chapter and interesting curse on Tom. I was surprised that Hagrid didn't know that Tom and Voldemort were the same person. Great ending with the conversation about being a protector. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abuseAJ Granger chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Lots of good stuff in this chapter. Not sure I like the idea of friend zoning Luna, but she is young and you play that up in this. Personally, I think it's crazy that wizards and witches who live into their hundreds would meet someone at fourteen and be settled for life. It's not really very realistic relationship wise. I do like MJ and Peter and their conversation. It's good for them to deal with things.

Love the training between Peter and Harry. And Harry's answer to Natasha was perfect.

The interview with Hagrid was great and I love the details that they got there.

report review for abusehakon2feb chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Hi.

Huh? i think i see far too few stories that actually follow up on the 'cursed unicorn blood' thing from book 1. Great that there are actual consequences for defiling a pure creature in the magical world :) On the other hand, it means that Tom has the actual philosopher's stone, which is bad.

Then there is Peter and MJ... Glad they could clear the air somewhat, as i'm sure it must be lonely as a muggleborn in Slytherin. Almost a bit strange that some of the more 'progressive' of them haven't tried to befriend her purely because of her obvious skills with magic though.

And then we see another clear difference in Harry's behavior due to his different upbringing. In canon, Harry would shy away from violence and only act when it was absolutely necessary (or because he was goaded/forced into it). For lack of a better term, i'd call canon Harry world weary. However, this Harry wants to be the hero. If there is danger he wants to be there so others don't have to. I'm glad he grew up this way :)

Keep up the good work :)

hakon2feb.

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Well, I mean, don't we all miss Orcas! An entire pod of Southern Resident Orcas has just been discovered and the scientific community has named the pod the Romanoff pod.

I just love so much the love that Natasha has for Harry and Harry for Her, and how they both realize it. MJ and Peter as well, and I loved this chapter as you don't shy away from how Peter has already experienced Trauma like this, but MJ has not, and it is very present in her character. The love of the fairy tale vs the feelings of loss and the guilt there, too.

Thank you. I am fully under your spell.

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

awww...

report review for abusedoraemax chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Wow... I didn't expect the ending. From the mouth of babes, indeed. Natasha Romanoff... redeemed in her own eyes. Beautiful scene.

Peter... have you decided on the directions Peter will go? For now its just training and acclimatization. But soon Peter too, will need to be unleash to make a mark in the world, just like MJ. Because of Harry, I'm guessing Peter will start making his mark in London. How, though? That, I am most looking forward to see.

report review for abuseKEB chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Great job! Thanks for writing!

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Splendid!

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

I once gave an old girl friend a ceramic double orca music thing for her birthday. Or was it Christmas? Honestly it doesn't matter. Your story is awesome and I'm always ready for another chapter.

report review for abuseArei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 15 . Aug 17, 2019

Loving this story. So sweet and amazing in all the right ways.

*digs up copy of free willy and hands it over* more orcas for more chapters? Lol

report review for abusemomsquared chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Great chapter and good luck with the orcas. Not sure how you would get orcas in but I would definitely give you kudos for getting them in and having it make sense.

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

A virtual orca just for you! I love the chapter as always !

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for .master chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

I have a feeling that the memory of that last scene would be enough for harry to power an obscenely powerful patronus. Natasha too.

Nice chapter.

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Awesome !

report review for abuseRasi10 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

This book is amazing! Can't wait for more!

report review for abusespirouFr chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

thanks for the new chapter

report review for abuseGeovanni Luciano chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

I'm not really all that excited about Peter and M. J. in the story. They're really not adding much to the story. In fact, I think the detract from the plot, but that's just my opinion, so far, of them. The rest of the story aside from them has been great, and I look forward to see it further develop. Honestly, I'm missing that some of your other stories have fallen into neglect, lately.

report review for abusemoriel8 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Buen capítulo.

Mi escena favorita fue la interacción de Harry con Natasha.

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Very good

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

This was a real good chapter. Thank you.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

OK, first - Sirius, technically the entrance to the chamber is in the bathroom, not the chamber itself. But yes, your parents would not have liked that!

Second, so the dreams are to bring Lily and Natasha up to speed on what Harry would have been thru in his other life. They know about the things up to this point in his life so they don't know Tom Riddle is Voldemort, at least not yet.

Yes, Hagrid should not be allowed to breed spiders or anything else. But maybe he could get an orca to live in the Black Lake. Not sure what the squid or the merfolk would think of that but if you want it you can make it happen.

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abuseEmeraldGuardian7 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Another great update. I'm really loving this story. I like that Natasha and the Potters are somewhat working together now too. Great job. Keep up the good work.

report review for abuseTimothyB chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

I love this story. Keep up the amazing work!

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Pretty excellent chapter great heart to heart. Hermoine is getting jealous of Harry. I love the Padma/Harry relationship. Ron messes it up for Harry in canon cause he's a bad bro and complains

report review for abuseSpectrer chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Harry is smart, but unlike most smartHarry fix's, there's a good reason for it. In which year do they learn how to transfigure a desk into an orca?

report review for abuseBioHazard82 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Another great chapter.

report review for abuseTork01 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

"She made a sound between a dolphin squeak and a seal honk, and made it sound adorable..." Absolutely great line, totally Luna-esque. Anyway, this world hasn't made the connection between Riddle and Voldie.

report review for abusebectouzel1 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Oh gosh I love this story! What you've done with Natasha and Harry is just incredible and so so realistic! I was a bit skeptical about Spider-Man and MJ joining in but they've been written in so seamlessly. Well done!

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Huh. Never thought about what Moldyshorts would have done after a Harry-less first year. Also, I think it is hilarious that he is living a cursed life after, you know, murdering unicorns and drinking their blood. Not sure how he dodged that bullet in canon.

Tom Riddle busted for the lying psychopath he was in school. Fingers crossed.

Nice to see Harry getting some choices in his life. Seriously, he was pretty much kicked around by Fate in canon. Well, Fate and Dumbles...

Oh, and have some orcas. Dump trucks filled with orcas. Orcas raining from the sky after being airdropped and/or launched from cannons. Orcas plunging through the plumbing and coming out the sinks and bathtubs! Orcas everywhere, squeaking and flailing as they flop around the floor! More orcas, so many you can swim in piles of orcas! :D

report review for abusemalinkody chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

This chapter was great. Love your writing style. Especially the interactions between the charachters. Keep up the good work.

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Tom, being in the condition that he is, drastically curtails what actions the he personally can do, which is a good thing. Sadly, he still has his intellect, and a few of his minions floating around too. Hermione will figure out how to at least keep up with Harry and MJ in time, even though it is frustrating right now. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

MJ and Peter.. Sweet sweet love...

report review for abuseBerserker chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

This is a good story so far and I will wait eagerly for the next chapter.

And just for you JacobApples... ORCAs, a whole pod of them, playing ping pong with a seal or two.

report review for abuserswknight chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

This story is so really fun, and fascinating. You've done a hell of a job making them live and breathe. Great work so far, looking forward to more

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 15 . Aug 16, 2019

Solid, sweet chapter

Ashkan Dehno chapter 16 . May 23

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

report review for abuseSammyboy94 chapter 16 . May 12

Love it

report review for abuseJOHN0713 chapter 16 . Apr 21

Great story with plenty of plot twist.

report review for abuselonestar40k chapter 16 . Apr 16

Love love love this story, hope it continues

report review for chapter 16 . Apr 12

daaaaamn. i fell in love with this story, had an insomniac night due to that little "just one more chapter" too

report review for abuse1989bronco4x4 chapter 16 . Apr 12

So I've read your story so far and while I like it alot. I don't get why you had to go and include mj and Peter. To me it doesn't seem to add anything to the story other than an extremely ridiculous plot hole that makes absolutely no sense. I wait to read more and see what happens.

report review for abuseZigzagSyzergy chapter 16 . Mar 30

I was pleasantly shocked when the Aurors figured out how Voldemort was. Are Harry and Padma a permanent pairing? Will Harry be an assassin when he grows up? I'd honestly like to see him juggle being an assassin with having a girlfriend/wife and explaining it to Padma.

report review for abuseNazgulBelserion chapter 16 . Mar 16

Ok so first I love it the characters feel so real don't give a weird harem to James I won't like that my cons plot is too slow with random stuff adding mj and Peter was dumb imo not a fan really love how their gonna spank Voldemort together

report review for abuseTheDragonPrince99 chapter 16 . Mar 14

Awesome story, I hope you continue.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 16 . Mar 11

Omg this is such a fun story! I hope you'll continue writing at some point

report review for abuseSeleneMoon21 chapter 16 . Mar 9

This story is awesome! I love it!

report review for abuseCerue Leanne Dawn chapter 16 . Mar 1

Please do continue

report review for abuseIncantations7 chapter 16 . Feb 21

How is Harry going to get through the second task, and whom will he have to save? MJ is the only one who he has a real connection with, other than Luna, and he hasn't even started trying to figure out what the clue is yet.

Congrats on your Master's, and I look forward to further updates on this one!

report review for abuseconceptualthread chapter 16 . Feb 1

Updates?

Pretty please with a cherry on top?

report review for abuseSpaceTime1969 chapter 16 . Jan 17

One of the best Harry Potter and Marvel crossovers I have had the pleasure of reading. Looking forward to the rest of the story!

report review for abuseMosquitoesLoveMe chapter 16 . Jan 17

This is one of the best crossovers I've read involving Harry Potter. I only have one thing to say, please continueee! (If only for poor James' threesome)

report review for abuseO'ConnorsGambit chapter 16 . Jan 15

An amazing story. Can't wait for more

report review for abuseBridges7 chapter 16 . Jan 9

So... I kind of love this! Sorry I didn't review for every chapter, I just couldn't wait to keep reading.

report review for abuseimgonnadie chapter 16 . Jan 5

Excellent story so far

report review for abusekat1316 chapter 16 . Jan 4

Love this fic! Can't wait til the next update

report review for abusesassy973 chapter 16 . Dec 29, 2019

Loved it hope you update soon.

report review for abuseIamtheonlytruejoker chapter 16 . Dec 28, 2019

Great story, you got. meine hooked

report review for abuseDidIStepOnYourMoment45 chapter 16 . Dec 26, 2019

Please, Please, PLEASE, update! This story is amazing and I just simply NEED to know how it ends! Keep up the amazing work!

report review for abusetammgrogan chapter 16 . Dec 22, 2019

Like always, I love your stories. PLEASE update soon, until then take care and Happy Holidays!

report review for abuseCalmzone1 chapter 16 . Dec 11, 2019

I always wondered why no one ever tried to track back Voldemort. Or even ask Ollivander, after all, he sold the brother wand to Harry. So he must have known Tom Marvolo Riddle.

report review for abuseMugglebornMe chapter 16 . Nov 12, 2019

Woaah.. Just found your story love it!

report review for abusexxPercyRoxxx chapter 16 . Nov 9, 2019

Can't wait to read more.

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 16 . Nov 4, 2019

Eventually they will learn the truth around MJ, Peter, and Natasha, including Peter's unique abilities. Now that they found out just Who Tom and Voldie is, now they need to figure out not only how he Survived, but to find him, and put him down permanently. The trip to Russia should be fun. Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseTetradical chapter 16 . Nov 4, 2019

Awesome!

report review for abuseDirt Rider 712 chapter 16 . Oct 28, 2019

I am loving this story!

Thank you,

Dirt Rider

report review for abuseJavaman777 chapter 16 . Oct 28, 2019

Finally got around to reading this story and I love it. Really like your portrayal of Natasha. Great job.

report review for abusenaughtylittlesuccubus chapter 16 . Oct 27, 2019

You're such an amazing writer. I absolutely can't wait until you update.

report review for abuseMistressOfDeath09 chapter 16 . Oct 13, 2019

I LOVE IT!

Update soon. And is there a possibility that Tony Stark might end up here too but living under a disguise? he died too! I would love to see how things would turnout if Tony was in fact alive in potterverse and got to meet Nat's son.

report review for abuseN chapter 16 . Oct 1, 2019

This is the best crossover I have ever read! Please continue ️️️

report review for abuseRichard6154 chapter 16 . Oct 3, 2019

Just found this great story. Recommended.

Thanks for sharing and looking forward to more.

report review for abuseNerfhearder69 chapter 16 . Sep 29, 2019

Love the patronus guardians and like what your doing withe the trouble twins of Harry and Peter. A little curious how MJ ended up a bookworm, but, oh well. Your character development for your main protagonists is exceptional. I cannot wait to see further developments!

report review for abusemkoepp63026 chapter 16 . Sep 22, 2019

Love this although I really hope that Dr. Strange finds Peter and MJ so they can go back. Maybe Tony could show up and I am totally lost with the books becoming blank. Did the stones hijack the idea that Death and friends came up with?

report review for abuseLovegoodRavenclaw chapter 16 . Sep 21, 2019

Omg MUCH LOVE FOR THIS STORY. HAVE A COOKIE FOR YOUR HARD WORK 3

report review for chapter 16 . Sep 19, 2019

Really like this story, I hope they use the info they found out about the snake in the school to get Dumbledore canned. I hope Peter gets into making a new suit for himself and also learns to start mixing tech and magic would be fun.

report review for abusenpetrenko chapter 16 . Sep 16, 2019

Great story. More please!

report review for abusebub23453 chapter 16 . Sep 15, 2019

Wow what a story so far! Just found it and couldn't stop. Wonder if we'll get a more detailed explanation later on about why the potters were both resurrected apart from Just Because we could

report review for abuseBlack Magic99 chapter 16 . Sep 14, 2019

damn i hate catching up to stories, now i have to wait for the greatness to continue

report review for abuseFyrefenix chapter 16 . Sep 13, 2019

I love this story! I always like Harry & Natasha but this is the first time I have seen such a scenario with Death being involved in the story. I like the idea of the Bo stick for a wand and that Harry has been working windlessly for years. Your explanation of Arithmancy and Runes is an interesting approach. Looking forward to more and, by the way,

CONGRATULATIONS on your Masters! Well done.

report review for abusestevefocus chapter 16 . Sep 12, 2019

Well I watched end game, now I have continued reading this story. I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

report review for abuseRake1810 chapter 16 . Sep 8, 2019

Fantastic story and beyond anything an amazing job writing Natasha.

report review for abuseTanathar chapter 16 . Sep 8, 2019

Amazing story. Love your plot and your characters and particularly their interactions. Thanks so much. Look forward to more :)

report review for abuseJojoLoud chapter 16 . Sep 7, 2019

I think you didn't watch far from home but still included it you must improve the peter tingle to what it was in the movie

report review for abuseddsurvivor chapter 16 . Sep 4, 2019

More please. I'm addicted. Thanks for the wonderful novel.

report review for abuseMatrixskater chapter 16 . Sep 2, 2019

More Orca's please :) other than that wonderful story seeing spidey and harry share a story :)

report review for abuseAce of Hate chapter 16 . Aug 28, 2019

Can't wait for the next chapter. This story is awesome.

report review for abuseBoika chapter 16 . Aug 26, 2019

I really like what you are doing with this story. Thanks for the update. :-)

report review for abusesaashi samy chapter 16 . Aug 26, 2019

Fantastic chapter

I love this story

report review for abuseDaniel T. Gualnam chapter 16 . Aug 23, 2019

a Ll/HP sounds good for this FF but i really hope its not ntr or f/f/m...

report review for abuseBlazeb79 chapter 16 . Aug 22, 2019

This story is damn good. Having peter and mj there is confusing and so far pointless. Regardless of that. I really like the story.

report review for abuseMari Wollsch chapter 16 . Aug 22, 2019

great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

report review for abuseVirodeil chapter 16 . Aug 21, 2019

Quite an entertaining read. Believable characterisation and interaction, too. I enjoyed it all, although I haven't watched anything past the 1st Avengers film. (:shrug: Just not interested, and not fond of Thor the character.) I love Peter Parker, though, despite never watching any Spiderman film or reading any Spiderman comic (when I could still see), so thank you so much for involving him in this. The interactions between the Deaths made it sound rather cracky, at first, but I soldiered on, though I usually don't like crackfics, and I was rewarded handsomely... :) Now, I'm looking forward for the next installments!

Rey

report review for abuseAnna chapter 16 . Aug 19, 2019

This chapter was amazing! It had so much information in it without being overwhelming. I literally can't wait for more

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 16 . Aug 20, 2019

Wonderfully done! I love how you have them search for the answers as so many stories the answers just supernaturally fall into line. This is brilliant as always !

report review for abuseNemhain2009 chapter 16 . Aug 20, 2019

I always wondered why Dumbledore never exposed Voldemort being Tom Riddle in the original books. It would have stopped many of the purebloods from supporting him.

I'm glad that you have this group figuring out his identity.

report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 16 . Aug 19, 2019

Tonks sat on the floor - completely missing the chair. I love Tonks!

so they know who Lord V. is - now they have to find him.

You reversed the patronas for James and Lili. He's the stag and she's the doe.

report review for abuseKagey98 chapter 16 . Aug 19, 2019

Lovin' it! Thank you for sharing your Talent!

report review for abuseflyboy38 chapter 16 . Aug 19, 2019

Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the next chapter.

report review for abusesantarelserpico chapter 16 . Aug 18, 2019

Come sempre grande capitolo

report review for abuseThundergil chapter 16 . Aug 18, 2019

love this story so far keep up the good work.

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 16 . Aug 18, 2019

This has been an excellent story I really enjoy it look forward to more

report review for abusegod of all chapter 16 . Aug 18, 2019

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

report review for abuseForksintheRoad chapter 16 . Aug 18, 2019

Having Natasha as a stepmother would be scary. Awesome! But scary.

report review for abusekirosyamcha chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

love it :) keep the goodness coming! i always feel bad for lily and james somewhat, they always seem to get screwed overly, whether they are alive or dead. this story is somewhere in the middle and moving toward them being friendly which is rare in all the stories i have read! keep up the good work!

report review for abuseKorlan chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Oh yeah, nice work on the crane. Always found it funny that a complete ass and a book worm were always written as wonderful people. There's always flaws and you've written the potters well.

report review for abuseYaw6113 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Please write the nextchapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuseEmeraldGuardian7 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Another great update. I'm excited to see the Potter's reaction to finally finding out that Natasha (and Peter and MJ) are from another world. Keep up the great work. I cant wait for more.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Great chapter and I really enjoyed how cool headed the four were while killing the basilisk. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abusecrankypants16 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Ooooh, I love it

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseBioHazard82 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Another great chapter.

report review for abuseElementaryDrW chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

The Potters are banging the war drum it seems. I can't wait to see them in action.

report review for abuseSugar0o chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

i'm so amused by the Deaths! Like Do the Death's have a boss? b/c if they do I imagine they are going to get their asses handed to them. on a Crack note, What if the Death's boss was Harry from ANOTHER universe/demintion? He's eventually Master of Death after all. that might make an interesting OMAKE.

I'm a big fan of this fic, i literally cracked up at Tonks taking Sirius out. like it's so likely to happen, and his reaction to just laugh it off. like i imagine his eyes got all big and then he's just horrible amused.

I'm still holding out hope for Tony. B/c it's Tony and i adore him. Even if he'd be sad without Morgan, it'd be a thing to help him want to go home, and help Peter/MJ get there.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Thanks :)

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Mmmm. A crane. Now, that is different. I think old Moldy Shorts is in for a rude awakening. James and Lily don't seem like the Dawlish standard Auror. Interesting how Harry sympathizes with the snake, but ultimately, realizes that it is an insane, ravening monster that needs to be put down. And gotta love it when Fate gets bamboozled by infinity stones...

report review for abuseAaron Leach chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Awesome chapter.

report review for abusemizzrazz72 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

MJ needs to calm down and think before she acts. Lily need to keep the green eyes envy down. James need to grow a pair. Harry and Peter should just sit back and enjoy the ride.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abusestylo1 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

the interaction between deaths was enoying as fuck, and most certainly not funny what what what what what that ohh

report review for abuseof Serendip chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

I was hoping to see Harry's a killer whale pratonus.

report review for abuseKzintiKiller chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Tigers and cranes...and welcome to them.

I'm a big fan of exposition. I'm hoping to see how James and Lily react to The Widow's story. And how The Widow tells them. Getting chills at the idea of Nat sharing memories of New York in a penseive. Or Peter of the final battle.

Let them see the face of Thanos.

report review for abuseRichard Lovelace chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

A most excellent chapter. Thank you.

report review for abuseTork01 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Tommy, looks like the obsessive Potters are after you now! Still a very interesting relationship between the Potters and Natasha, the tension over how Harry was raised. Cool.

report review for abuseThe Nameless Scribe chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

The Potters found Voldy! Yay

report review for abuseadafrog chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Very good, thanks.

report review for abuseOrigamiGuyII chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

hrm... tigers and cranes... reminds me a little of crouching tiger, hidden dragon from the crane iron pentalogy... coincidence?

report review for abuseSof1a chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Here is a tiger for you

report review for abuseLoke13 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Very good

report review for abuseViper5delta chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

For the mpst part, really enjoying the story.

report review for abusemalinkody chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

This is getting exciting. Love every moment. Looking forward to the next.

report review for abusemoozga chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Great chapter, thank you!

report review for abuseThe Jabberwock of OZ chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Now that i saw the most recent Spider-Man movie (Far From Home)

Does that mean that Peter and MJ were secretly together seeing that {Spoilers from the movie that people should know}

I wonder how much they told Natasha about Europe then.

I love how they are finding out who Tom is,

I do have to wonder WHAT is bringing these universes together

This chapter mentions fate...hmmm

great work

report review for abusemyafroatemydog chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Pretty crazy chapter

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Super mom Nat dealing with MJ... Hahaaa.. Tony was big teenager.. Natesh was dealing with him.. She can easily tackle MJ...

Peter is adjusting better then MJ... Does this mj has brown hair like in home far away or red hair like Spiderman 1...i am imagining her like in Latest movie Home far away...

Second chapter of talking abt Russian winter holiday.. Hope its something super fabulous which will make potter couple mouth drop open and Mj becomes romantic with sweetheart Peter...

But next is yule ball... Ooo! I am waiting for Padam's revenge on Harry... Plese open the box of romance...

Ps- no plans for money mine dead basliks ..hope Nat takes it and sells... It will fun to watch lilly face swell with anger.. Hahaa

- If possible some sence of MJ in slytherin doms.. Her putting them in their place...

Waiting eagerly for ur next update...

report review for abuseCharlie0925 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Another great chapter here honey! As always, I cannot wait to read more! ;o)

report review for abusea guy1013 chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Ok and why isn't Peter trying to make super tech so he can have a mansion

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 16 . Aug 17, 2019

Only Fate brought them this far. Thomas Marvolo Riddle Junior will pay.

Hadami chapter 17 . Jun 21

I love that Hedwig goes along with the rest of them

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 17 . Jun 18

oh this was brilliant loved it

report review for abusemddomene chapter 17 . Jun 11

Well, aside from harry having no siblings this was neat. And since there is more it seems fun.

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 17 . Jun 10

Hurry! The threesome... Very cooperative husband hahaaa... James is hving fun of his life... Rocks!

I don't mind ur speed up... Atleast u took time to finish it instead of leaving incomplete like 3/4 of fanfitions present on this site...

Stay safe and update when u can...

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 17 . Jun 9

I love it. And yeah, your Rey piece is the best thing you have ever written that I have read, but this book is gnarly. It's a. personal fav lol;)

report review for abuseKyunin9 chapter 17 . Jun 7

Well... thats one way of fixing writers block and burn out. Not sure how I feel about this yet. Ill read 18 then make an opinion.

report review for abuseN7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 17 . Jun 7

Oh dear...and thats how Thanos becomes obsessed.

report review for abuselunadream13 chapter 17 . Jun 6

thank you for not abandoning such a wonderful story. I greatly enjoy your fan fictions.

report review for abuseThe Jabberwock of OZ chapter 17 . Jun 6

Wait...WHAT

What's going on now!?

Did...did we just go to another universe now?

Holy smokes ... so wait is this Peter and Michelle from after Far From Home then?

Wait NVM about that

Death and Lady Death just 'fixed' contiuity so...

Imma keep reading

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 17 . Jun 5

Very good story enjoyed it much

report review for abuseddsurvivor chapter 17 . Jun 5

LOL You come back and with a dramatic twist. so now Harry and family, and the 3 marvel characters are now in the Marvel verse.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 17 . Jun 5

Hahahahahahahahahaha

report review for abuseGuest chapter 17 . Jun 5

OMGGG when I got the notification this was updated, I almost cried. Your writing never fails to disappoint. Your characterization is beautiful as always. Thank you thank you thank you!

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 17 . Jun 5

LOVE IT!

report review for abusedawnknits chapter 17 . Jun 5

I just read your story. it's wonderfully imaginative, and one I won't confused with other FFS I've read. the last story was my favourite so far. it anyone complains, tell them it is post-modern.

report review for abusemithrilandtj chapter 17 . Jun 5

I hate the ending.

This last chapter was so chaotic... Did you get tired of writing this story?

I liked it until THIS chapter.

It's disappointing the way you entirely fucked it up with this chapter.

report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 17 . Jun 5

Fun and funny chapter. Thanks for sharing!

report review for abusejthorpe423 chapter 17 . Jun 5

well at least you made an attempt to wrap it up. did not leave us hanging. I would like more, but I have no talent for it so good job on putting pen to paper as us boomers would say

report review for abuseJWolf28 chapter 17 . Jun 5

I enjoyed every second of that chapter and I can't wait to see where you take this!

report review for abuseWiseSilver chapter 17 . Jun 5

I honestly have no idea what happened in the second half of this chapter.

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 17 . Jun 5

Well, given that you are doing this for free and being so kind as to share it with us, you are certainly entitled to write whatever catches your fancy. HP burnout is a real thing. Sucks to be struggling with depression, though. I'm happy to read what you write.

And better a summary finish than no finish at all. Nice to know how it all turns out. I had to laugh at Hedwig. My personal headcanon is that she was left behind and had to use her special mail owl/familiar powers to tear a hole in space and time and follow Harry to a different universe, which is why she was miffed. :D

report review for abuseYaw6113 chapter 17 . Jun 5

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

report review for abuselonestar40k chapter 17 . Jun 5

I really like that they made it to the marvel universe. Sad that you are having trouble getting back into the HP groove. But I do look forward to them all rampaging around the MCU

report review for abuseDragonpink chapter 17 . Jun 5

I hate it when a story just gets dropped. That being said the way you wrapped the story up was thoughtful and funny. It was nice of you to not leave your readers hanging indefinitely.

report review for abuseStormCrownSr chapter 17 . Jun 5

April fools sure came late this year.

report review for abusehanmotan chapter 17 . Jun 5

From my point of view this was a "Sorry, I lost intrest in the story, this is what would have happend if I had continued the story" I think that as the author its your decision if you want to continue or not, but this chapter was felt really sloppy and killed my excitment for the story. I think you can make way better time skips (note I personally really cant write. So I try to not be a condescending asshole, but this chapter really rubbed me the wrong way and I think you could do better).

report review for abuseGoldenfightergirl chapter 17 . Jun 5

Soooo, Peter's company is now left without a founder? Sounds like he really is emulating Tony a bit haha. How will the two Natashas work?

report review for abuseShnabS chapter 17 . Jun 5

Bye bye!

report review for abuseDant3 chapter 17 . Jun 5

If doing an exposition salad like this gets you out of a part of the story you find boring, I'm all for it, to be honest.

report review for abusegladitsover chapter 17 . Jun 5

I am glad I dropped this when you said you were going to stop updating this story when you did. I only saw the posted chapter tonight and hoped it was something great again. But no, despite your best intentions, it lacks, severely. Kinda glad you are dropping this as this chapter was terrible in every sense of the word. Sorry for be harsh, but you should have just posted abandoned or even removed it.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 17 . Jun 5

That... was an intense 4509 words

report review for abusemr. bumpity chapter 17 . Jun 5

Don't worry if you can't write for a certain story. Somedays the itch to continue comes other days it doesn't. God your fics always put a smile on my face anyday, especially in these unusal times. Now lt's pray Kevin Brady is finally kick out of the white house once and for all. Wondering who he is? he is the seneor of Texas who almost had the NBA cancell the finals due to his racial and hanish bills. Stay safe you great and lovable joker!

report review for abuseZigzagSyzergy chapter 17 . Jun 5

YESSSSS . I died from badminton, this made my day

report review for abuseteruin42 chapter 17 . Jun 5

I like the detail heavy, slow build stories, but the quick version is entertaining too sometimes. Using the Deaths as a framing device gave it a slightly Pratchett spin.

report review for abused8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 17 . Jun 5

So much Chaos... Good crack ending.

report review for abuseAaronD1 chapter 17 . Jun 5

Eh, I was hoping for some kinky relationship where Natasha got with Lily and James but also with Harry as a separate thing.

report review for abuseYellowSedan chapter 17 . Jun 5

personally for me, this marks a second part of the story with the first part just ending. Loved the work so far!

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 17 . Jun 5

WTF :)

report review for abuseyomunot chapter 17 . Jun 5

Imma just not read this chapter in case you come back to fluff it out

report review for abusehelkil chapter 17 . Jun 5

fuck you i would have rather it stayed dead than this

report review for abusefallendemon248 chapter 17 . Jun 5

So confused like really really confused

report review for abuseBlack Magic99 chapter 17 . Jun 5

man its a shame we couldnt see that play out, but at least you told it in a creative manner, even if things got crazy and ooc towards the end of that

report review for abuseZoltan-Atreyu chapter 17 . Jun 4

loved it please keep going

report review for abuseTheManTheMythTheMeme chapter 17 . Jun 4

if I'm being completely honest, I'm a bit disappointed. I understand your plights and respect your decision to time skip your story, however, im simply disappointed by the outcome. i hope you do get better, and perhaps flesh out the rest of this story.

sincerely, me 3

report review for abuseMiloWaffles chapter 17 . Jun 4

Well, everything up till this point was very well done and you should be proud of it. Thank you for the story as it stood.

report review for abuseTichePotato chapter 17 . Jun 4

That was shit. The story being abandoned, never to be updated would've been better than that.

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 17 . Jun 4

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for chapter 17 . Jun 4

Did you take your meds before you wrote this? Or are you just wanting to see how many people you can piss off ? Having the mando blow Palpatine in the course of the story is one thing. Giving us chapter 1-17 faithfully and then having Death jumping ahead to 27, 37 and 57 and then 97 and then effectively flushing the story down the toilet altogether for Thanos sake?

report review for abusefireball900 chapter 17 . Jun 4

Who were the four people Death killed?

Also, I'm glad you did this. I always prefer a final synopsis instead of just abandonment.

report review for abusePhoenixFireII chapter 17 . Jun 4

An ending I think? Well written, if a little surprising. I'm looking forward to seeing you "fluffing" it out. It looks like there's a lot to work with and I'm definitely intrigued by more than a few of the sub plot points that you built in. I really enjoyed this story though, so I have no doubt that when you're ready, you'll "fluff" it out pretty well.

-PhoenixFireII

SlytherinToNyx chapter 18 . Jul 27

Loving this and loving them back in avengers realm!

report review for abuseAdonisx chapter 18 . Jul 14

omg this is amazing. It's truly wonderful. I hope you come back to it one day and give it the ending it deserves!

report review for abusegeorge17 chapter 18 . Jul 11

Of course you can write what you want but people are equally free to tell you it sucked and the last chapter pretty much sucked ass. Your choice to do it but you can't be so big a fool that you didn't expect people would hate it, so why act offended or surprised when you did get that reaction?

report review for abuselistohain chapter 18 . Jun 29

Next Great Chapter i want and you write will it, Yoda style:)))

report review for abuseMoonshine Queen 88 chapter 18 . Jun 28

Can't wait for your update!

report review for abuseBoika chapter 18 . Jun 26

Thanks for continuing this story. :-)

report review for abuseHarrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 18 . Jun 24

Not a bad transition.

report review for abuseHorusRa chapter 18 . Jun 23

Those Last two chalets I Did not see them coming, also how are you going to upgrade Tony's suits whit año the crazy ideas of Bruce and Peter, some runes and a diferent, magical enhanced power source?

report review for abusemoozga chapter 18 . Jun 22

Can't wait to read more :-)!

report review for abuseChefMae chapter 18 . Jun 19

update soon the story is addictive.

report review for abuseThe Shadows Mistress chapter 18 . Jun 18

nice chapter looking forward to more

report review for abusedarkpegasuzz chapter 18 . Jun 15

Nice story

report review for abuseTheManTheMythTheMeme chapter 18 . Jun 14

ok I'll be honest. as much as I didn't like the time skip. this made up for it. althpugh, it was really fast but i cant really complain about that now can I?

report review for abuseLord Redmoon chapter 18 . Jun 12

I understand why you time skipped so damn much in the last two chapters I just don't like it . that said in eagerly waiting for more.

report review for abuseAJ Granger chapter 18 . Jun 12

Love your stories even the odd mash ups like this with the dimension hopping and time travel and glimpses of events. I am amazed you can keep it straight.

report review for abusedrucifer000 chapter 18 . Jun 12

great story! the only thing is I kinda wished you had spent another chapter or so resolving what happened in the potterverse before going back. great work though!

report review for abusemrpietan chapter 18 . Jun 10

A bit 'rushed' in the last two chapters, but all in all, very funny

report review for abuseGuest chapter 18 . Jun 10

Since you're saying hey canon die, why don't you introduce she hulk as Harry's love interest after she gets hurt in the invasion, so Bruce gives her his blood

report review for abuseRoostertheking chapter 18 . Jun 10

Omg... I laughed so much... I think how funny it going to be... When Tony finds out abt the threesome... Hahahaaaa...

report review for abuseKagey98 chapter 18 . Jun 10

Good Show! Thank you for sharing your talent!

report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 18 . Jun 9

I absolutely love how Natasha says Lily-pretty. I can hear her say it off the page. It's sexy and sarcastic and cute and beguiling all at the same time. She is one scary woman! Love her! And Sirius and Bruce? omg the world will never be the same. And Uncle Ben dying? And Peter going to school to meet his Aunt? And Mary Jane and Luna and Hedwig taking care of the kids? Yeahahaha awesome! Tragic and awesome.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 18 . Jun 8

I hope you are feeling better, haven't read this and last chapter yet, because I had to reread first. Depression sucks. Mental hugs...

report review for abuseGuest chapter 18 . Jun 8

I don't like it. That's no doubt not the constructive criticism you were looking for, but hear me out before you quit reading mid-sentence. I like HP/Marvel crossovers and stories where Harry in some form travels to the Marvel verse. Without a general dislike for the fandom or the setting, what I actually meant by not liking it was the way the story jumped so unpredictably. With some kind of transition that hadn't skipped over years of plot and personal development, I would not feel so much at sea right now. I guess the issue is that I don't know what I don't know, but the chapter feels like I ought to know. No doubt all that information is somewhere in your brain but never made it onto paper, or the screen.

Anyway, I wish to thank you for keeping up with this story nevertheless. Natasha and Harry are both lovely as a mother/son duo and I'm looking forward to what they can get up to in Natasha's old world.

report review for abuseMarilynT chapter 18 . Jun 7

thank you for update and ignore the trolls!

report review for abuseBabieDove chapter 18 . Jun 7

Quarantine do be hitting different tho

report review for abuseMosquitoesLoveMe chapter 18 . Jun 7

I'm just glad this is back! Back to binge-reading this from the beginning I guess

report review for abuseN7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 18 . Jun 7

Oh I absolutely love the chaos in this. *giggles*

report review for abusedeckman1234 chapter 18 . Jun 7

This continuation is far better then just letting a story die. Glad to see you are still interested in this and I hope to see more of it when you finish your current projects. Cheers :)

report review for abuseMistressOfDeath09 chapter 18 . Jun 7

This was not a twist i was expecting. Nuh-uh. But amazing, it is. Great job. Update soon

report review for abuseYaw6113 chapter 18 . Jun 6

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.

report review for abuseIncantations7 chapter 18 . Jun 6

I understand that this is your story, and I'm happy for the updates, but man, talk about one hell of a few twists being thrown into the mix.

I look forward to future updates...

report review for abuseBlack Magic99 chapter 18 . Jun 6

dude i have no idea what you are on but i am loving it! Sadly i cant take these changes seriously yet, but as of now it is a mixing bowl of absurd, crack, with a hint of stupid... but not in a bad way if that makes any since.

I am guessing this is now a fix it story and with all the added stuff here i think there will be more chaos than fixing but hey im here for it if you are leading.

all that said could you make a list of characters, there relations, and age. Im pretty sure it might have been stated last ch but i have know id where the characters are at age wise

report review for abuseSmokeing chapter 18 . Jun 6

I really like this story I wish I can help you to write about 30 Chapters at a time but I know it takes a little time I'm not a very good reviewer but I love your story thank you

report review for abusedadscooking chapter 18 . Jun 6

I really appreciate the way you closed the last arc. Many would have just abandoned it an started a new story.

Great story beginning.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 18 . Jun 6

Thats really funny! Keep 'em coming!

report review for abuseSpaceTime1969 chapter 18 . Jun 6

I didn't see that coming, but I certainly did enjoy it. Props for writing an ending!

report review for abuseTony McNucklz chapter 18 . Jun 6

this jumped the shark for me. best of luck in future endeavors.

report review for abuseAliceCullen3 chapter 18 . Jun 6

LOVE IT!

report review for abuseghostcrab311 chapter 18 . Jun 6

Well, since we are back in the Marvel Universe, I will just say that they massively dropped the ball in not making Black Widow the central, headline character of the MCU. They made boring, explodey movies with everyone else that I didn't bother to watch because there was nowhere to go with their characters, really. They have all headlined in their own extensive comic series, and their stories have been told over and over. It's old, and there is nothing new to be said about them.

But Black Widow is new. She was introduced into the MCU, although she was a fairly minor character in the comics. Because she was a minor character in the comics, there was a lot of space for her to grow, lots of room to tell new and interesting stories. From the beginning she was set up as the MCU answer to Batman: a tough, clever spy who could outplay Loki, a literal trickster god. She could have been the driving force in the MCU, an unlikely (and probably unwilling) leader, which would create some interesting tension with Cap. Especially since Hawkeye was sweet on her. Watching her outplay the Hulk would be entertaining as all get out.

Such missed opportunities.

But having a bunch of wizards around to add chaos, combined with future knowledge? That just makes things more interesting.

report review for abuseWolfbloob09 chapter 18 . Jun 6

Cool chapter are they going to get trained by The sorcerer Supreme

report review for abuselonestar40k chapter 18 . Jun 6

This chapter was a rollercoaster. Really enjoying the new direction

report review for abuseIori Angel chapter 18 . Jun 6

please continue this, it's rad!

report review for abuseThe Jabberwock of OZ chapter 18 . Jun 6

Dude when it comes to uploading schedules at least you are still working on your stuff.

Just a minute ago, roughly around the time the 5 chapter of the Queen Does Not Need to Know, i would have said you should have focused on finishing THIS story, but things happen and you gotta back away from some things to have a fresher mind.

You do your magic for we love to read your work.

report review for abuseAnubis Cloudly chapter 18 . Jun 6

So excited to see this story back!

report review for abuseJazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre chapter 18 . Jun 6

I've been on AO3 too long I keep trying to hit the nonexistent kudos button. Lol

report review for abuseOlegreyowl chapter 18 . Jun 6

Don't worry about the angry folks. They obviously skipped your note at the top of the previous chapter and then complained that it seemed you were wrapping up too quickly. Yes that is what the author clearly stated, "not inspired anymore but here's some closure because I'm a nice person". So you ignore the whinging masses and their entitlement and do what inspires you. Love your stuff.

report review for abuseArei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 18 . Jun 6

You take care of you darling. Love what you've written.

report review for abusePhoenixFireII chapter 18 . Jun 6

I really enjoyed this chapter. Always nice to see Nat and Harry get back into the fray (I am in love with the Nat/Lily/James pairing btw). A really great chapter and though you'll be focusing in on your Star Wars stories I am really looking forward to seeing the next chapter and what you have next up in store for these folks.

-PhoenixFireII

report review for abuseDarkRavie chapter 18 . Jun 6

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

report review for abuseAMidsummerknightsSlumber chapter 18 . Jun 6

This is going to be very fun! I am a big fan of Agents of SHIELD so I'm REALLY hoping some of them will turn up. Like Daisy(currently known as Skye), and Fitz/Simmons. Grant Ward you can feel free to feed into a blender. Peice by peice. I do have one request. Can you somehow save and/or possibly redeem Ruby Hale? And can Yo-Yo get hit by a bus? Just some thoughts to consider. Yo-Yo annoyed me constantly. And Ruby seemed seriously underutilized.

Also, can we get some clarification on people's ages? I'm guessing that Harry is in his late 20's by now?

There's also Netflix Marvel to consider.

And finally, please continue to ignore all the "Negative Nancys" dear Author! This story is awesome! Out of curiosity, due to your Author pseudonym, have you ever considered the tag line "How about them Apples?!" I think it almost sells itself.

Until next chapter dear Author and fellow readers, take care!

report review for abuseteruin42 chapter 18 . Jun 6

A nice action sequence, your characters are vivid as always. Poor Uncle Ben, there are things in the time stream that can be changed, there are fixed points, and then there are planet sized stone anchors like Uncle Ben dying.

report review for abuseJWolf28 chapter 18 . Jun 6

I always need more Harry Romanoff in my life and I'm thrilled to get an early update. Now, because I'm a hopeless nerd, I'm going to go peep your Star Wars story.

report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 18 . Jun 6

Last chapter felt like the kind of chapter where the author has given up on the story and basically Hail-Marys an ending, just to give it a conclusion. I've seen it before. I'm glad that it was more a transition chapter that avoided half a year of filler, instead. This has been a good story and I'm glad to see it continue.

report review for abuseDuellist chapter 18 . Jun 6

Well, it's become even more crack-fic, but still very enjoyable.

report review for abusebahnannah chapter 18 . Jun 6

I laughed at the glossing over exposition.

Snape should have followed Moony years ago if he wanted to be naughty with a werewolf. Lol. Couldn't resist. Hopefully Moony taught him how to use shampoo and maybe pull a Hermione and reduce the schnoz.

I like the Tasha/James/Lily ménage a trois.

report review for abusemarlastiano chapter 18 . Jun 5

Funny and confusing ;)

report review for abused8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 18 . Jun 5

When you think the story's over but it's really transitioning: everyone reading the fic.

Me: Haha suckers!

report review for abuseLord Mortensen chapter 18 . Jun 5

Cool! please update soon!

report review for abusepclauink chapter 18 . Jun 5

great chapter!

Glad that natasha is with lily and james...