UNEXPECTED VISIT

1:15pm

*Doorbell* Valerie Jones Apartment

Commissioner Valerie Jones walks towards the door with her black robe on sipping on her coffee.

"I'm coming! Hold your fucking horses!"

She opensits Sophia. Wearing a GOLD African robe, bare foot, braids down to her shoulders. She smiles, "Hi Valerie. Its been a long time"

"So...phia" she drops her coffee as Sophia catches it.

"Surprise. Are you going to invite me in?"

"Come...come in"

Sophia walks in. Valerie locks the door. "Can I get you anything?"

"There is ONE thing but its not coffee"

"Then what is it?"

The witch looks around, "Nice place you got here"

"Sophia, how did you know where I live?"

"Magic"

Valerie roughly turns her around, "I'm serious. I'm the Commissioner of this city. And I don't like to play games"

"You used to. What happened to you Val?"

She went in her kitchen, "Its none of your goddamn business"

Sophia stands in the kitchen, (sigh) "I can figure out what it is. After we broke up in New Orleans 5 years ago, you've met a dashing, handsome Latino man name Marco. You two were MADLY in love. You got married after 4 months. Beautiful wedding in Mexico"

Valerie close her eyes; gripping her fists.

"Had massive SEX. Because you two wanted to start a family. But you couldn't. The doctor said you couldn't have children"

Tears fall from Valerie's eyes

"For a while...the love you two had FADED out. Marco began to change. Drinking. Doing drugs. You couldn't take it no more so you decided to divorce him. But...after that, things got worse"

Valerie started crying, "Please...stop Sophia"

"One late night, Savanna club were ambused by GUN fire. Marco was hit 8 times. The bullets weren't even for him. The assailants were looking for a female Kingpin. A ghost. Called the WHITE ROSE"

"STOP IT!" she shouted

Sophia slowly takes off her golden robe. NAKED. She went behind Valerie and untie her robe; kissing her neck. Valerie stops crying, feeling what Sophia is giving her.

The robe falls to the floor. Valerie turns around and kisses Sophia passionately. They went into the bedroom.

Valerie lays in the bed as Sophia on top of her. Kissing down her neck, down her breasts; licking them one by one. Jones moans closing her eyes, "Oh...yes"

Sophia moves her lips down to her abdomen then gently opened her legs, kissing her inner thighs. She began to kiss, lick and eats her pussy.

Valerie let out a high sigh, "Oh shit. Oh...Oh...Oh...Oh..." gripping the sheets on the bed. Sophia massages Valerie's breasts while she sucks deeper.

The commissioners eyes went GOLD. She is possessed under Sophia's spell

Sophia rises up and kisses her, "You enjoyed that?"

"Y...E...S..." Valerie said with satisfaction

"I"ll give you more. If that's what you want"

"YES"

Sophia didn't want to do this but she had no choice. She turns into Marco. He smiles, "Hola sweet lady"

Valerie begins to cry, "Marco?"

"Its me baby. Its me. We can be together, forever. You don't have to feel sad nor bitter towards anyone anymore. I'm here"

"Oh Marco. I missed you so much"

"I miss you too my love" he leans forward and kisses her with passion. She responded. He engage himself in her; roughly thrusting her. Her moans filled the air as he grunts.

They look into each other's eyes. He leans his forhead with hers; thrusting faster and faster. She grips his back. It feels so good to her like she remembers in Mexico.

They both cum...then climaxed. Kissing. Tears fall down his cheeks.

"I love you Valerie"

"I love you too Marco"

"Close your eyes"

Valerie closes her eyes. He opened his mouth as a Gold light comes out of the Commissioner's body.

Sophia returns and Valerie's body is PALE. She's dead.

Sophia cries on her body.

20 minutes later...

*Door knock*

Sophia opens the doorits Jack.

"Sophia. My favorite gal. May I?"

He walks in. She closes the door.

"Where's the body?" he asked

"In the bedroom. Ready to go"

"Good. Now, you get to be in the drivers seat. Its going to be FUN! hahahaha!"

"Enough of the laughing Jack!" she shouted

"Woah ho...relax there Sophia.I..."

"Don't even say it! Do you know how much this hurt me?! Do you?!"

"It hurts a lot. I get it. But you...you shouldn't be upset with me. You should be upset with yourself. I mean...the true CARDS are on the table. Once Valerie left you for a MAN you tracked her down and made her life your fantasy"

"Pretended to be a MAN that doesn't even exist. She wanted to get pregnant but you made it where it didn't happen for her. After that you came up with this idea to have a tragic shoot out a club"

"A few years later, Valerie becomes a commissioner in Gotham to be the most bitter, most complicated woman on a police force" he started clapping, "Great job Sophia. You are a piece of work! That's why I hired you"

"Don't be ashame sweetheart. Be greatful. Being EVIL is who you are"

"Your right...but here's the thing"

Sophia turns into Valerie. The body disappears in the bedroom. Jack looks shocked.

"Wait a miunte...okay. I'm confused right now"

"As well as you should be Jack. You'll never figure it out. Now I'm the commissioner. Could you kindly get out my apartment crimminal"

Jack chuckles, "Oh...Sophia, your good girl. Keep up the good work"

Jack walks out as Valerie close and locks the door