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From johnymike98 (Random-ish chapter 10):
Sorry abkut what i said abkut ashea of the past i guess to me it got cringe as it continued but i shouldn't puy it down
Seishin: *sweat drops* So that 'crinzy' was a typo of 'cringy'.
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From RT89 (Random-ish chapter 10):
Couldn't find the video recommended in this chapter, might be doing something wrong. Thanks for another laugh filled response collection! Typing at half past 1, so no need for painkillers this time.
Ohirume: *rubs back of head sheepishly* Yeah, sorry about that. Turns out that kind of YouTube link is designed for mobile devices.
Thankfully, I found a remedy that I'll be using from now on.
This format - www:youtube:com/watch?v=BBtPwuZgUAU
Remember to replace the colons with periods.
Seishin: And a little bonus since last time was a bust. Warning: weird! And that's coming from me.
www:youtube:com/watch?v=vWA4grEjZvg
From Guest (Trix chapter 54):
Why is there a four move limit in this story?
Seishin: *wearing space helmet and looking a Pokémon Trix cover image* Wait. There's a four-move limit for Pokémon in this story?
Yugo: *points gun at back of Seishin's head* Always has been. *fires a nerf dart that sticks to the helmet*
Omega: Memes aside, we're not joking. The "four-move limit" concept has always been a part of Pokémon Trix.
Ohirume: As for the reason, here's what was said to Tuck98 in the previous Comment Response when they asked the same thing in a much harsher way and then rage-quit from the story-
"But, in all seriousness, it's a limit. Something to keep things from getting out of hand.
Pokémon infinitely learning new moves while remembering old ones can get messy and complicated if not handled well enough. I am not an author who can handle that.
Omega: Feel free to call him weak.
Ohirume: If you want good stories that use the 'as many moves as you want' concept well, then "Ashes of The Past" by Saphroneth, "Pokémath" by A Hobbyist, and "The Trainer From A Far Away Land" by RenegadeWarrior are in my favorites.
Faux: One more thing, when was the last time Pikachu used Volt Tackle after learning Electro Ball? Or Electro Ball after learning Electroweb?"
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From Voltdragon7 (Trix chapter 1):
I saw this and thought I'd give it a try. So far I'm enjoying it. Pikachu's reaction to the watch are hilarious.
Seishin: 😊
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From Voltdragon7 (Trix chapter 2):
Nice. A few subtle changes, but not too much changed from the original episode. Keep up the great work!
Ohirume: *smiles with a thumbs up* I intend to.
Omega: *raises finger* With varying results on the 'good work' part.
Ohirume: *glances at Omega harshly*
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From Voltdragon7 (Trix chapter 44):
Great chapter. I've just been thinking that the Orange Islands would probably make a good location for any of the water aliens like Rip Jaws to make an appearance. Alola would also work. A flying alien would also work.
Ohirume: *shrugs* Yeah. I really have no reason to deny that as a possibility.
We'll see.
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From Voltdragon7 (Trix chapter 51):
Great chapter. *Yawns* I'm going to sleep now.
Seishin: Ha! It worked again!
Amber Mewtwo: *looks at Seishin in confusion* What?
Omega: *groans and pinches bridge of nose* The empathy test, remember?
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From Voltdragon7 (Trix chapter 52):
Great chapter! I just thought of something, if you have Ash keep Aerodactyl a secret from Gary until they have a Pokemon battle, Ash can use Aerodactyl as an edge against Gary.
Ohirume: *nods* Correct.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 1):
This looks interesting. It's well written and flows nicely. Even if it's a little fast-paced, it's probably important to get this done with early. The reactions seem natural and are hilarious (Pikachu faints, ha. Also last scene with Ash, Soot and Pikachu: Awww :) ).
Illavera: *smiles* Yeah, it really was cute.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 2):
Great job so far. Are you going to mention what happened to Soot's mom later in the story? Also, I'm wondering why Professor Oak lied about the starters. He probably could have done things differently and still have Ash leave with Pikachu.
Pike: Oak may be a genius in the Pokémon field, but we never said he was a good liar.
Ohirume: And we will get the answer to Yena eventually.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 3):
Great Chapter! Keep up the good work. It appears that Pikachu is still cursed to destroy bikes. (The Smog went boom. Best line ever.
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By the way, have you been watching Pokémon Journeys? Apparently Team Rocket has a base in Viridian City.
Faux: *raises brow* Well … yeah. Giovanni's the Viridian City gym leader.
Luke: I believe they are referring to the one under the phonebooth.
Laura: Oh, right.
Pike: I'm not really sure they had that hideout during early Kanto.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 4):
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Nice. So Pidgeotto has a crush on Ash, and of course Ash being Ash doesn't notice.
Faux and Gem: *sweat drop*
Omega: *glances at pair with a sly smirk*
Also, Samurai should know better than to sneak up on people. And what's with these gloves? I'm assuming something to do with Power Integration.
Seishin: Yeh!
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So, I'm assuming Faux is a doppelganger of Ash. Is Gem Brock?
Gem: *blinks in surprise* You thought I was Brock?
Faux: *scratches cheek while smiling sheepishly* Doppelganger might not be the right word for it. That would imply that we look alike.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 5):
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Great job! Wow. Samurai is really incompetent. You could have him go on a journey to get stronger and battle Ash at the league in either the first or second match.
Also, Ash's battle with Brock went better than the original. The Marionetter explanation was nice, but probably could have been smoother (not really sure how).
Seishin: I don't know neither. 😋
Speaking of the balcony scene, how did Ash survive that?!
Omega: *shrugs* It's like Soot said. Trix is tough.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 6):
Great chapter! I see Seymour is as annoying as ever. I'm wonder if he's still with the Clefairy in Mt. Moon.
Seishin: Would you believe that you're the first person to post a review for this chapter?
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Faux: *raised brow* Like to this day? I- *blinks in surprise* I'm actually not sure.
Pike: Though he wasn't there during the second visit to Mt. Moon.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 7):
So Clefairy joins Ash. Are there any other Pokémon Ash will catch that he didn't in the original?
Luke: *nods* Yes.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 8):
Great Chapter!, So, does Ash have some form of psychic/aura ability here? Also, is Ash going to battle AJ in the League?
Seishin: Would you believe that you're the first person to post a review for this chapter?
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Ohirume: The first thing has been indirectly answered in a later chapter.
Seishin: And we don't know for the AJ league thing, yet.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 42):
Please finish the whole story
Ohirume: I intend to.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 43):
Quick AttackDragapult
Stone EdgeStonjourner
Ohirume: … not sure how to respond to that.
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From Animus1 (Trix chapter 1):
I never seen Ash wearing the Omnitrix like device before
Ohirume: *smiles* Well, I am trying a new spin on it. Though I do have something else to thank for the idea.
"Another 10" by HVulpes2.0. Namely chapter 6. It was only a one-shot, but one that really grew on me. The idea just kept evolving into … well, this.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 53):
Why haven't the creator finished the story yet!?
Ohirume: *sweat drops* Because I'm still working on it.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 54):
Please finish this story.
Ohirume: …
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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 1):
For those who asking why the creator of this work hasn't uploaded a new chapter in a while, please stop and be patient. Writing a story, let alone a good one, takes a long time. He's working very hard on this story, and I should know since I've private messaged the guy. Trust me when I say that he's not giving up on the story as of righting this.
Ohirume: Thank you, Guy!
As he said, I'm not canceling or anything of the sort. I'm still working on it.
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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 55):
thanks for the chapter broo it's so much interesting
Yugo: *thumbs up*
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From Ohma flame (Trix chapter 55):
Nice chapter
Seishin: Sankyu. 🙂
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 9):
Great Chapter!
Luke: *small smile* Appreciations.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 10):
Great Chapter!
Mizuro: *smiles and gives a thumbs up* Thanks, dude.
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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 55):
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Overall, I'd say that this chapter over all is about a 7/10. One of those chapters that don't really have anything to special going on in it, but it's just enough to be entertaining. Plus, this is easily my favorite use of the OC's, since they're just thrown in as side characters and don't really impact the story too much. That was kind of the problem I had everything they took over, it felt like they could be taken out entirely and have the chapters edited to where they don't require them. Granted, this is my favorite out of all the OC's appearances, mostly because they didn't take over. I'd honestly be perfectly fine if they appear more like this.
Omega: *shrugs* Yeah, fair.
Faux: *small smile* Honestly, that's kind of a relief to hear.
Ohirume: But I wouldn't worry about them for the rest of Kanto. For real this time.
Like you said, the Festival cameo was a passive add-in that could've been written out, or at least made more subtle, without a problem.
Laura: *raises finger* Except the part where I blasted off Team Rocket.
Ohirume: Plus, it was their choice to do it.
Nuevo: *points to self* Overdeveloped OCs. Our author isn't the most sane.
Ohirume: *shrugs* The rest of Kanto doesn't have a reason -and I use the term 'reason' loosely- for them to show up.
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*starts to drink coffee, before realizing that Horsea evolved*...*spits hot, scolding coffee on Yukiro* HOLY S***, THAT'S AWSOME!
Seishin: *blinks in surprise while covered in steaming coffee* Huh. That hurt.
Gem: *wide eyed* Yeah but gotta be honest. Horsea evolving caught me off guard.
Shadow Pearl: Namely because that horsea still hasn't evolved in our world.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 11):
Great Chapter! I don't think you went overboard with Damien here.
Seishin: Would you believe that you're the first person to post a review for this chapter?
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Ohirume: Thanks. I was mostly worried that it'd be a little … intense.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 12):
Great Chapter! So the name thing is a running gag?
Seishin: Would you believe that you're the first person to post a review for this chapter?
Omega: *looks at Seishin; sweat dropping* How many times are you planning to copy and paste that?
Seishin: Until it stops being true for the older chaps.
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Omega: It was a running gag.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 13):
Great Chapter! I like Squirtle's character. It suits him. Also, is Krabby's character going to be a Large Ham trope? Also, what is with the cooks this episode?
Gem: *blinks in confusion* Large ham?
Mizuro: *scratches side of head* I don't really think that's the case.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 14):
Great Chapter! So, would the Dragonite be like a totem Pokemon like the ones in Alola? Again, Squirtle's character is hilarious. Also Clefairy's reaction to the Nurses is cute.
Omega: The dragon thing was answered in the chapter.
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From A Guest (Trix chapter 55):
Huh, I understand the limit thing... but there's still the option to use a 5th, typeless, weak default move that all pokémon know but don't normally use, right?
Ohirume: If you mean Struggle, then yes. That will be a thing.
The type-less attack Struggle is something all Pokémon are capable of using yet is never in a move set. It can never be forgotten, yet does not take up a 'move slot' and cannot be used freely.
Struggle will be an instinctual, fail-safe, last resort move that a Pokémon cannot use unless they've exhausted themselves that much.
'Exhausted', in this case, being the equivalent of 'PP', not 'HP'.
But this story is based on the anime, so don't expect that to come up regularly.
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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 55):
good chap
Ohirume: Thank-
Seishin:
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Ohirume: *flinches and looks at Seishin* What?!
Omega: *glares at Ohirume* Why do you keep making those for him?!
Seishin: *looks at readers* Hello everybody! Unless you've been living under a rock, you've probably heard that Animaniacs got a reboot!
*glares and points* And NOT like the Teen Titans did.
Illavera: *whispers to Mizuro* Didn't that come out like a month ago?
Mizuro: *whispers to Illavera* Yeah, just about.
Seishin: *smiles and gestures to the side* So, because of that THIS!
Everyone: *flinches as door bursts open and look back*
Yakko, Wakko, and Dot: It's time for Animaniacs!
And we're zany to the max!
So, just sit back and relax!
You'll laugh 'til you collapse!
We're Animaniacs!
Yakko and Wakko: Come join the Warner Brothers-
Dot: And the Warner Sister, Dot!
Warners: Just for fun, we run around the Warner Movie lot!
They lock us in the tower! Whenever we get caught!
But we break loose and then vamoose, and now you know the plot!
We're Animaniacs!
Dot has wit and Yakko yaks!
Wakko packs away the snacks, our careers have made comebacks!
We're Animaniacs!
Meet Pinky and Brain, who want to rule the universe!
A brand-new cast who tested well in focus group research!
Gender balanced, pronoun-neutral, and ethnically diverse!
The trolls will say we're so passé, but we did meta first!
We're Animaniacs!
You should see our new contracts!
We're zany to the max! There's bologna in our slacks!
We're animan-y! Total insane-y!
Dot: Have No Shame-y!
Wakko: Monitor's in flame-y!
Yakko: Uhhhhhhhhh…
Seishin: *slings arm across deadpanned Ohirume's back* Auth-y must be crazy!
Warners and Seishin: Cockamamie!
An-i-man-i-acs!
Those are the facts!
Everyone else except Mizuro and Illavera: *stares blankly*
Mizuro and Illavera: *smile and start clapping*
Nuevo: What the **** was that?!
Warners: *flinch*
Yakko: *kisses hand and waves at camera* Goodnight everybody.
Wakko: He didn't even try to cover it.
Dot: *shrugs and shakes head* So much for arguably child friendly.
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From RT89 (Trix chapter 55):
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Well, looks like Ash isn't the only character in Trix's universe to use forward thinking, excellent avoidance of a problem by realizing it might be one.
Yugo: *smiles* I'd say she's learning from a good example.
IF anyone hates on those four stepping in; it was a fun and amusing meeting between Trix's friends and daughter and the foursome,
Faux: *scratches back of head while smiling sheepishly* Well, we haven't gotten a bad review yet.
Illavera: *holds up crossed fingers* Here's hoping.
and a great way to fix a plot hole Ohirume knowing made by sidestepping the psyduck problem.
Ohirume: It pays to play out scenarios in your head. One alt was Seadra or Starmie sending them off.
The downside was the potential backlash from the judges, audience, and/or police.
Gem: *blinks in surprise* I don't remember that ever being a problem.
Nuevo: *glances at Gem; deadpanned* So, sending people into the stratosphere is somehow normal in your world?
Pike: *sweat drops* Well, when you put it like that-
Also, great use of the situational evolution that the Pokémon franchise is both loved and hated-on for.
Seishin: WOO!
To be honest, I had forgotten about this episode until the dolls were brought up, it wasn't the most memorable episode.
Omega: *looks over PokéSins clipboard* Oh, there are a lot of reasons to forget this episode.
Yugo: *raises finger* Most prevalent being that it's a victim of the Porygon crisis. It and the Kids Day episode aired out of order and their animation quality ended up ...
Seishin: 😝
Yugo: Yeah, pretty much.
Thanks for another great chapter and can't wait for more; I don't think Omega will rebuke that as he actually played a part in it...
Omega: ... *groans*
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 16):
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Great Chapter! The bit with Yukiro was confusing, but seeing Soot battle again was cool.
Seishin: Yay! Confusion!
Omega: No, that's bad.
Seishin: *sour pout* Says you.
Speaking of Yukiro, he mentions Arceus chose Ash. Does this mean that Arceus created the Omnitrix?
Seishin: Ha! That Normal-type wishes they could've made it!
It appears that Giovanni has some relation to Ash. I'm sure it'll come out as the story unfolds.
Mizuro: True, that!
Ohirume: Just, uh … give it some time for the full reveal.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 17):
Great Chapter!
Amber Mewtwo: *smiles* Thanks.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 18):
Nice Chapter. I think the OCs could have used some more backstory before throwing them in the plot like this. They did do a good job of not messing up the plot. Other than that, good job..
Faux: *pouts and crosses arms* Hey, we have plenty of backstory … *glances away* that you all haven't seen yet.
Omega: *sly smirk* I think Rob just got a little too inclusion-happy after Yukiro's cameo.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 19):
Great Chapter! Was that Dawn Ash's Sinnoh travelling companion?
Yugo: *smirks* That, it was.
Seishin: And we can say that without it being a spoiler because it's way too obvious.
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From Icewolf9879 (Trix chapter 53):
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Dame that really laid it into misty but it would be outside the realm of possibilities ohoh I just had a I thought your remember that episode where she thought her duck became a goldduck well what if will trying to impress her he also tries to put the moves on our Pokémon form,
Ohirume: *rubs back of head* Well, maybe. But I'm just not really sure how that episode would play out in this story.
Soot, Pikachu, and Clefairy can still translate -the last two through Ash's help- so I'm not sure he'd be able to trick them for long … if at all.
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That's so funny nidoking trying to be the Big strong father for his kids when in Reality his weak to medicine but I have a question what would happen if ash tried to scan a nidoqueen would it not work since there similar or would it be some male version like a transvestite queen
Yugo: Male vespiquen that looks identical to a natural vespiquen. Same for salazzle.
Ohirume: And the nidoking/nidoqueen thing is … well, that's under consideration.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 21):
Yay! Misty and Brock are in on the secret. So I see Quick Attack is XLR8, and Squirtle's as hilarious as ever. I wonder how Ash's other traveling companions will react (I know that is a long ways away from this point).
Laura: *smiles sheepishly and sweat drops* Yeah, it'll be a while.
Ohirume: *smiles* We'll just have to wait and see.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 22):
Great Chapter! I'm looking forward to part 2. Ashvee is hilarious. I'm curious about what will happen during the Ashachu episode since Ash can already transform into a Pikachu..
Ohirume: *smiles and holds hand to the side* That's actually why I had Pikachu touch the watch in chapter 1. I read a lot of Ashchu/Ashachu stuff when it was more popular.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 23):
Interesting. The first chapter mentions Marionetter is illegal unless the opponent says it can be used. Yukiro said he would see Ash at the League. Will Yukiro battle Ash there? If so, will he allow Ash and Soot to use Marionetter?
Omega: *raises finger* Fifth chapter, actually.
Seishin: *shrugs* And I don't see why not. *sly smirk* But don't expect me ta go easy on 'em.
Ohirume: That thing about Marionetter being illegal in sanctioned battles was mainly to show that it's been acknowledged by the league.
Yugo: The technique allows Soot to move in incredibly unnatural ways while under the control of her user. The limits on how she can move, dodge, and attack are slim-to-none. It's overpowered.
Trix and Soot have only ever used it offensively in situations that involved criminals (Team Rocket), something dangerous (Pewter's collapse), or unnatural (Arlequin).
They don't acknowledge criminals as being worthy of a fair fight and the other stuff wasn't a battle … well, a Pokémon battle.
Ohirume: *shrugs* But there are no restrictions if they use it leisurely or for training purposes.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 55):
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Thank you for answering my question. I honestly thought you would just skip over it,
Ohirume: *raises brow* Wait, really?
Omega: Anyone who reads the actual Comment Responses knows that Rob responds to every review.
Ohirume: *nods* Right. The closest I've ever come to even considering ignoring or deleting a review was when those spammers were trying to rush me to "finish the story." And not in an encouraging way.
I'd like to see any of them type up a 10,000 to 15,000+ word chapter in the span of a month.
Nuevo: Thankfully, JustSomeGuy777 shut them up before Rob did anything drastic.
but there is something else that I am curious about. Why/how did Ash and Co fall for James faking amnesia in the previous chapter when they were able to see through his cross dressing act? It doesn't make much sense to me.
Faux: In their eyes, he seemed really freaked out. They've never seen him act that scared before.
Pike: Or pull off that good of a performance, really. Fear can be one Yvel of a motivator.
Ohirume: And if that's not a good enough reason. Plot.
Also on an unrelated note, and if you already answered this in a previous chapter sorry for asking, do you take suggestions for any of the aliens that Ash gets in the omnitrix, if you do can the next one be a Appoplexian (rath) who gets naked outrage. It would be hilarious. Anyway thanks for answering my question.
Ohirume: We have partially answered both of those questions.
Omega: It's already been verified that if Trix gets an appoplexian form, it'll still be named 'Rath'.
Seishin: Because Rath named himself in every continuity of the Ben 10 series. All 2.
Faux: And the "personality glitch" will be Rath's natural personality.
Ohirume: As for having Rath next, I like hearing ideas and take them into consideration. And I've been getting a lot of Rath requests. So, I'll say this.
Will Rath show up in the story? Very likely at this point.
Will he be the next alien to pop up in Trix's watch? Not sure yet, but it's not off the table.
P.s if a Pikachu I had knew Volt Tackle, there would be no way in heck I would replace it with Electro Ball. (try to change my mind, I dare you!)
Seishin: *smirks* Pokémon Black and White/Best Wishes episode 20. "Dancing With the Ducklett Trio!"/"Pikachu VS Meguroco VS Koaruhie!" Depending on if you prefer Sub or Dub.
Ohirume: Just another reason to hate the Black and White/Best Wishes anime.
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From Red Mad Man (Trix chapter 55):
Definitly need more of this. Question: I don't get who omega, gem, faux, or any other one of your OC are. Could you explain?
Seishin: Thou shalt receive thy answer in due time, dear Red Mad Man.
Nuevo: Why the **** are you talking like that?!
Seishin: YES!
Ohirume: To clarify, their identities won't be revealed in the story. But I will say that there's something in the works.
Make sure to check the pre-chats and post-chats for the chapters. I'll place a notification in a future one.
Mizuro: Also, Omega and I do pop-up and reveal our identities in the johnnymikes98 collab in "Random-ish stuff on the side."
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From Guest (Trix chapter 55):
And make more me when the next chapter is email address is
Ohirume: Um … if that's you asking for my email address so you can keep up to date with the story, then sorry. I'm not doing that.
But I will offer this. You can make an account on the website. Fanfiction's sign-up process is completely free where the only requirement is an email address. And it doesn't even have to be your primary one.
I mean, the email address for my account is just one that I created for the sake of making the account.
Yugo: *shrugs* Either that or keep checking back every week. Rob posts new chapters at 12:00 A.M. Sunday … at least he tries to.
Seishin: Granted, which Sunday is usually in the air. Posts are about a month apart … usually.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 26):
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I don't like it at all.
Ohirume: *sad frown* Huh?
1. You create a story where Ash has omnitrix. Ok that's fine. But what about interrupting with spoilers. It just don't make any sense.
Ohirume: *raises brow in confusion* Wait, what?
2. Ash should not have much problem in defeating Sabrina because he has omnitrix and yet make him look like just some sort of joke. I mean seriously during the entire fight Ash could have transformed into something which can totally nullify all of Sabrina psychic powers.
Ohirume: Oh. You meant that you don't like this chapter and Yukiro's jump-in. *relieved sigh* Thank goodness.
Seishin: *angry pout*
Ohirume: Anyway, the whole 'nullify her abilities' thing is actually what Ash did. Mightyena was his only form -at the time- that was naturally immune to the Psychic-type.
Omega: And no, he was not going to use any of the aliens to battle. None of the five he had would've helped anyway.
Ohirume: Sabrina's poorly thrown-in Deus Ex Machina counter was force-evolving Abra and having him suddenly know Miracle Eye. A move that nullifies a Dark-type's Psychic immunity.
3. Ash over here is smarter than the one in cannon, but even still he is having hard time against his obstacle which should not have at the first place if it wasn't for your so called great spoilers.
Omega: *sweat drops* 'So called great spoiler'? You actually think Rob holds himself in that high of a regard?
Seishin: *sweat drops* Also, we're not sure what you mean by 'spoiler'.
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Yugo: *shrugs* Well Trix did have a contingency in mind in case he lost. Remember what he whispered to Soot?
Ohirume: *looks up thoughtfully* That and I don't really like the idea of Ash being completely unbeatable. He's smarter than the canon, but he still not perfect.
Also, he nearly lost because plot.
For now that's all, but later if I find something which is inappropriate I will notify you about that.
Omega: If it's about Yukiro, go nuts.
Seishin: HEY!
Ohirume: *nods* Yukiro's a nonsense outlet for me. He's insane and annoying. If you have a problem with him, I don't really take offense to it.
Seishin: *glares at Ohirume* ROB!
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Ohirume: Also, do note that I'm not perfect. The story is still being worked on and I'm in the process of fixing older chapters for spelling, grammar, and whatever else is necessary.
I am trying hard to fix problems, but not everything can be flawless.
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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 56):
thanks for the chapter broo it's fabulous
Seishin: *grins with double thumbs up*
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From A Guest (Trix chapter 56):
Thanks for answering :D
However I didn't exactly mean Struggle (but thanks anyway, the info is still useful :D), but "Basic Regular Attack" too.
It's a typeless move that (probably) was developed in the future (or whenever the PMD series happen) from Struggle. The move does not require PP and can be used any time (but it's usually only used when more powerful moves have been spent (like Struggle) or your moves can't deal any damage to the enemy), being the main difference with Struggle that it doesn't do recoil damage.
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Since the PMD series implies that there are still Pokémon trainers somewhere I believe it wouldn't be such a farfetch'd (forgive me for the chapter-related-pun please) idea.
Seishin: HA! Duck pun!
Omega: *sighs*
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Ohirume: *scratches back of head* I'm not so sure about that. That whole concept sounds kind of … difficult to rationalize.
It also makes it so shedinja are literally useless.
Seishin: That and it's a concept unique to the Mystery Dungeon series. Not the main series anime or any of the other games.
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From rome1453 (Trix chapter 55):
Amazing chapter.
Ohirume: *smiles* Thanks, rome.
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From Phaleon (Trix chapter 55):
Love the story so far, Always looking forward to updates. Speaking of which did a Chapter 56 get uploaded then deleted today? or is My Fanfic app being insane?
Ohirume: *sad sigh* No, it wasn't your- *eyes widen* Wait! It was affecting the FanFiction app too?!
Seishin: *frowns* Geez. It was worse than we thought.
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From Ohma flame (Random-ish chapter 10):
Yeah...also I am more then a simple multiverse traveler...(ignites spirit fire. The wailing of the damned can be heard) I am the one who burns hell to ash! I am the one who conquered the spirit realm! You already know my name...but, do you know the titles I hold? I am the fire elemental, the spirit king and lord of ultimate distraction. And believe me when I say...the multiverse is but the tip of the iceberg. Tell me, have you tried to travel the omiverse? (Just to Clarify. The omiverse is a multiverse of multiverses...just try to warp your brain around that)
Omega: … wow. Someone's drowning in ego.
Ohirume: *glares at Omega* … *deadpans* Actually, I think that was appropriate, for once. *glares at Omega again* But don't insult them again.
Omega: *nods* Deal. *points thumb to Seishin* But I'm getting this out first.
Seishin: *snaps as a sheet of paper appears in Ohirume's hand*
Ohirume: *looks over sheet before nodding* Okay, all but the last part.
Omega: *shrugs* Fair.
*Looks at Ohma Flame* Ohma, the term 'omniverse' is redundant in comparison to 'multiverse.' The concept of the multiverse in the more practical sense is infinite instances of infinity.
Everything that is possible, impossible, beyond comprehension, within comprehension, and more than our third-dimensional minds are capable of comprehending already has, is, and will happen in another dimension.
Seishin: *puts hands behind head* Yeah. Try imagining a dimension where every instance and definition of possible and impossible are switched. And I don't mean in a viewpoint sense.
It literally cannot be done.
Omega: *deadpans with raised hand* And before you argue, I know you got the omniverse concept from Marvel.
Ohirume: *crosses arms and glances upward thoughtfully* But I admit, they explained the concept incredibly well on the wiki.
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From Ohma flame (Random-ish chapter 2):
Also...just what is to stop me form simply shattering your weak, little 4th wall that is the protection between me and you? My power level is: 100000000000000.00000000000.0000000.
0000000.00000000000.0000000000.0000000000.000000.000000.00000000.0000000000.000.
000000000.00000000000.0000000.00000.000000.0000000000.0000x20000
...yes I know that's bullshit but so is life, so is death
Nuevo: Well I completely agree on the ******** thing.
Ohirume: As for what will stop you. My consent. Or, more specifically, a lack there of.
Omega: I call it the Origin Block. It means that one source of media can't interfere with another in the real sense. Those that claim to do so are just creating a copy with a similar premise.
Seishin: A.K.A. Fanfiction.
Ohirume: The exception, however, is a very simple one. An agreement between creators.
Every crossover is the result of the creators from two or more media coming together to collaborate a new idea.
Seishin: That or both sources have the same creator.
Faux and Gem: *raise hand/claw while smiling* Yeah!
Omega: *raises hand* Yup.
Ohirume: *looks at Ohma Flame* So, put simply, it is by all means impossible for you to force your way into my story without my okay. If you try it without my consent, then you're just making a copy.
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From Ohma flame (Trix chapter 9):
Ok I just remembered that ash got some of greymatter's I.Q. So-and I have actual reason to say this-what's to stop ash form getting some of rath's temper or some of zig zap's (buzz shock) energy?
Yugo: *shrugs* Well, nothing really. But Trix does already have that electric conductivity power from his pikachu form.
Faux: *scratches side of head* Also, I'm not really sure he would let the temper thing get out of hand. Trix always tries to be careful.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 55):
What's up with fanfiction it's all glitchy
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Klipper
Ohirume: *sad sigh* Yeah. I know. It was bugging me too.
Thankfully, whoever runs this site finally got their ******* acts together.
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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 56):
good chap
Mizuro: *in the other room* GIVE ME BACK MY BASS! That thing isn't a toy!
Yakko: Uhhh… come on. It's an electric guitar. What's the worst that could-
*massive guitar riff sounds out followed by explosion*
Yakko: *looks through hole in shock; guitar head pointing towards it* Woah.
Mizuro: *looks through hole before glaring at Yakko*
Ohirume: *looks at wall and sweat drops. Looks at camera* Yeah, sorry about that. Turns out the Warners are harder to get rid of than we thought.
Pike: *in the other room* One of them just ate the fridge!
Wakko: *belch that shakes the building*
Omega: *glares at Seishin* This is your fault.
Dot: *pulls out small box* Wanna meet my pet?
Gem: *looks at box and smiles* Sure. Are they a jolti-
Dot: *opens box as a full-sized Xenomorph pops out and roars*
Gem: AHHHHHH!
Seishin: *hand to chin* I may know something that might work. *whispers something to Omega*
Omega: *eyes widen before looking at Seishin in shock* Excuse me?
Seishin: Trust me, on this.
Omega: *glares at Seishin*
Seishin: I'm serious, this time. *calls out* HEY! Warner bros and sis! We have a surprise for you!
Warners: *charge into room*
Wakko: A surprise for us?
Dot: What is it?
Omega: *snaps as a portal appears on the ceiling and a large orange 'creature' falls through*
Baloney (not misspelled): Ha-hey there, kids!
Warners: *scream in terror*
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From Ohma flame (Trix chapter 56):
You know the more I think about it... the more it seems that no matter what James is gonna be the coolest team Rocket member, I mean he did kick a tentacrul in the face
Gem: I, uh … I guess you're not wrong by Team Rocket standards.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 56):
Please,another chapter.
Ohirume: *eye twitch* Okay, seriously. It is one thing to ask how a chapter's coming along or say you hope the next one comes up soon but stop asking for new ones when I've clearly established that I post approximately once a month.
It's. Not. Funny.
I know I said before that I'm not going to delete someone's review just because I don't like it, but these kinds of reviews are making me reconsider that policy.
Yugo: *steps in and raises finger* To clarify, he's considering deleting reviews that he sees as spam.
People voicing their opinions and ideas -no matter how harsh- will NOT be considered spam.
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From Dracoog101 (Trix chapter 56):
This story is great and will ash's aura ability apear in the story? Also will ash's daughter evolve soon? Also will there be any ash as an alien action scenes? Him interacting with tetrax or something? Will mewtwo or mew join ash when you get to that point.
Omega: … uh-
Ohirume: *puts hand in front of Omega* Don't.
*looks at Dracoog101* Well, most of those have been answered. And one was a question I, uh … never expected to read. We'll just go in order.
Yugo: First, Ch31.
Faux: Second, Soot's a mightyena. She can't evolve any further.
Mizuro: Third, that depends on your definition of 'action'.
Dangerous or difficult scenarios that he uses them in? Yes. There have already been fou- five.
Battles against other Pokémon? Not a chance in ****. That's been established.
Seishin: Fourth, the watch is from a different universe from the one this story takes place in. So, not completely impossible, but also not guaranteed at all.
Ohirume: And fifth, I have something in mind, but I won't say. Too heavy of a spoiler.
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From Phaleon (Trix chapter 56):
As always another great chapter, I'm wondering if you'd ever touch on some of the more ridiculous game concepts or ability's? (IE) Ash and company wonder why a Torchic is running around at Mach 7 due to speed Boost or some other rather insane mechanic, could make for a fun bit of Commentary. Either way I'd like to just sing you copious amounts of praise, For bringing us a Very entertaining story!
Ohirume: *kind smile* Thanks.
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Omega: *Shrugs* Eh. The Pokémon world's definition of 'ridiculous' is a bit … nonsensical.
Nuevo: Agreed.
Omega: I'll be using Gem to help with this.
Gem: *blinks and looks at Omega in confusion* Huh?
Omega: Just go with it.
Now, Gem. In your world, there is such a thing as organic lifeforms comprised entirely of ice, metal, rock, and even sludge. All of which are capable of growth and reproduction.
Gem: *shrugs* Well, yeah.
Omega: And among these are lifeforms who can control time, space, life, and death.
Mizuro, Illavera, and Nuevo: *flinch*
Gem: Duh.
Omega: … sure. Now, what would you say if I said that there are worlds where meat cannot be obtained without killing something?
Gem: … you're joking, right?
Omega: *looks at Phaleon while gesturing to Gem* See?
Gem: *looks at Seishin while pointing at Omega* He's joking … right?
Seishin: 😐
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 56):
Great Chapter! Looking forward to the next update! If Ash ever gets a Rock-type Pokémon form, will Brock want to transform into it?
Ohirume: *shrugs* I've thought of the same thing, really. Not sure.
Faux: *looks up thoughtfully* Brock may have been a Rock-type Gym Leader, but he's not really as much of a type fanatic as Misty is.
Pike: *nods* He focuses more on breeding. Closest form Trix has for that is Chansey and, uh- *sweat drops* would anyone actually wanna see that be a regular thing?
Nuevo: I know I wouldn't.
Ohirume: The pikachu form has mostly been Brock's go-to because he's used to it. It's easy to move around with, he knows how to use its attacks, and of course the built-in translator. Granted, the first and last can apply to any other similar form.
*shrugs* So, who knows? He might try switching it up if Ash gets a more humanoid Pokémon form or to just try something new … but anything that flies might be a stretch.
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From RT89 (Trix chapter 56):
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Outstanding chapter, sorry it took me so long to get to it this time, RL's been crazy.
Illavera: *raises brow* Ralph Lauren?
Omega: More likely 'real life' … I mean, unless they work there.
Great improvement to the original episode along with character development for misty.
Ohirume: *smiles* Thanks.
Omega: *sighs*
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Got to ask though, do you ever plan on any of the tRio finding out the real truth? They literally caught them transformed and only bought their story because they the tRio jumped to conclusions with an incomplete legend and admittedly don't know what 'The Phantom Pokémon' is suppose to be able to do.
Ohirume: *shrugs* Well, a full reveal isn't really out of the question. But it might not be that soon.
Seishin: Though, JJM's- uh, JJGM's?
Ohirume: *sweat drops* I really need to figure out what to do with that.
Seishin: Their reasoning isn't completely unjustified. Remember that Soot is publicly known as the Phantom Child and was allegedly gifted to Ash after helping the Phantom.
Ohirume: Y'know, the 'Ash comes across an extremely rare egg' concept. It's the premise to a **** ton of other Fanfictions.
Seishin: Scratchy only jumped to the "Da twoip's da Phantom" conclusion in the first place 'cause he heard Trixer talkin' in braviary form. Jessie and James just believed it because of course they did.
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James and Jesse are arguable, but Meowth isn't stupid; he'll catch them tripping in a lie one day and clamp on like a shelder to a slowpoke.
Seishin: *smiles* Right. Like the tRio's part(s) in the Dark City chapter.
Ohirume: Meowth has been noticing weird stuff for a while. Flashing when transforming, limited translation when human, and limited transformations.
Omega: But Trix has been careful in return. Never letting those four see him directly handling the watch, admitting to certain things -like timestamps- so they don't notice something out of place, and coming up with arguably believable lies for just about everything.
Ohirume: The only reason Meowth still thinks Trix is the Phantom is because that's the only conclusion that makes sense to him.
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From Orange Bloxxing (Random-ish chapter 10):
Thank you for responding to my reviews, and for clarifying dome things, I can't wait to see how Faux and Omega got their powers when you write their stories, and I can't wait to see where you take Trix's story as well!
Faux: *crosses arms* I'm actually kind of wondering when it'll happen, too.
Ohirume: *chuckles nervously* It, uh … it might be a while. I'm mostly focusing on Trix.
Omega: But, there is something until Rob figures out his … everything.
Ohirume: *glances at Omega sourly*
Mizuro: *grins* Random-ish chapter 7. The one with the title "Omega: johnymikes98 collab."
*slings arm over Omega's back and points thumb to self* Sat's and yours truly show up and reveal a **** ton of info.
Omega: *sweat drops* Bluntly, I might add.
Ohirume: That and there is something else in the works.
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From LeoGoldenheart (Trix chapter 1):
can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.
Ohirume: *smiles* Thank you, Leo.
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From Ohma flame (Random-ish chapter 11):
(Breaks reality wall. A flaming skeleton [whose left eye socket was replaced with a bigger hole] armoured within sci-if samurai armour walks in. Wisps flouting around him.)
Ohma flame: quite the cosy place.
Wisp: master...our unknowing hosts
Ohma flame: ah yes how could I forget about you lot (puts hand out. The fingers have sharp claws, sharper then anything in all reality) as you know my name is ohma flame. A Pleasure to make your Aquascience.
Everyone: *looking at a suspended monitor that's showing the place where all of that just occurred*
Nuevo: … did they just say 'aqua science?'
Shadow Peridot: I believe their intent was to say acquaintance.
Pike: *looks back at Omega, Ohirume, and Seishin while pointing at monitor* Should we be worried?
Omega: Oh, **** no. They're in an alternate version of … *waves hand* whatever here is.
Ohirume: And as long as I don't give permission or decide to go along with it, that's all they'll keep ending up in.
Gem: *perks up and looks at Ohirume in confusion* Wait, but what about when Wizzer stepped in and whenever Just Some Guy messes with Yukiro?
Luke: *looks at Ohirume with a raised brow* And johnnymikes98's OCs. They talk to us on occasion.
Ohirume: *looks at Gem* Oh, those may have started off one-sided, but their intent was more lighthearted.
*smiles* I went along with those because they were fun.
Faux: *frowns after remembering that* Define 'fun'.
Ohirume: *looks at Luke* And talking is something I don't have any problems with. Hence these comment responses.
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Ohirume: *looks at Ohma Flame* Yeah, sorry. But you haven't really made that many positive impressions on me.
After I attempted to deny the self-insert without trying to be mean, you responded by talking up your character beyond reason, threatening to break into my OCs' area by force, and then claimed to do so before I ever responded to the threat.
If it weren't for all of that, I would've happily allowed the interaction with my characters in these chats. Even with no background regarding yours.
Seishin: *raises hands* YA! *bucket of sludge falls on Ohirume*
Ohirume: … *groans; echoed by bucket*
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From Wickerstein (Trix chapter 6):
This story could have been much better if you didn't add in a lot of your own spins here.
Seishin: *scratches side of head* Um … people adding their own spins is basically Fanfiction in a nutshell.
Omega: Results in the sense of quality, believability, and everything else important may vary.
Ohirume: *shrug* You don't have to like the spins, but they're always going to be part of the stories on this site.
*stoic expression* Still, I did attempt to give my add-ins justification. Nothing abnormal about Ash and Soot are without reason.
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DragonTamer1 (Trix chapter 56):
If you were to add the Ben 10 Ditto, would his name be Double Team?
Seishin: *Fred Fredburger voice* Yes!
Ohirume: *shrugs* Double Team is the most likely choice for a splixson. I really can't think of a better Pokémon move.
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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 57):
good chap
Wakko: MAKE IT STOP!
Yakko and Dot: PLEEEASE!
Nuevo: *groans while rubbing temples* Why do all these songs sound like they're for infants?
Seishin: Because they kinda are.
Mizuro: Yeah, well I'm sick of it. *pulls bass off back* Sats.
Omega: Done. *holds out hand as portal appears behind Baloney*
Mizuro: *charges forward* CHAAAAANCE! *swings and bashes Baloney in the gut*
Baloney: WEEEEE! *flies back through portal before it closes*
Warners: *stare at space in shock*
Yakko: *looks at Mizuro and Omega* You could've done that this whole time?!
Omega: *shrugs* Pretty much. *looks at siblings* Now, I think it's about time for you to head home. *smirks* We can always bring it back.
Warners: *tense up and grimace*
Yakko: *waves hands defensively* Okay okay, fine. *perks up, smiles, and raises finger* But first, it's that time again.
Dot: *smiles kindly and puts hands together* To argue with internet trolls in a civilized way?
Illavera: *covers mouth while trying to hold back a laugh*
Amber Mewtwo and Luke: *share a confused look and shrug*
Wakko: *smiles and holds out arms* To do a Teen Titans Go crossover like Freakazoid?
Omega: *eyes widen* Excuse me?
Seishin: *whispers to readers; wide eyed* They're being serious. It actually happened and made the episode BETTER.
Yakko: *waves hands* No. It's time to learn today's lesson. *gestures to the side* And to find out what it is, we turn to the Wheel Of Morality.
*Wheel Of Morality rolls into view*
Nuevo: *stares in shock* Where did that come from?
Yakko: *grabs wheel and spins it* Wheel of Morality, turn turn turn. Tell us the lesson that we should learn.
*Wheel lands on 7 as a sheet comes out of the printer*
Yakko: Moral number seven. *tears off sheet*
Mizuro: Hah! Finally!
Yakko: And the moral of today's story is *looks over sheet before perking up and blinking in confusion. squints* According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off-
*flips page and eyes widen* Oh this keeps going.
Dot: Aw, that- *perks up and looks at Yakko in confusion* wait, what?
Wakko: *takes sheet and flips through pages* I think this is a movie script.
Omega: *looks at script before eyes widen* Oh ****, that's the Bee Movie script.
Mizuro and Illavera: *tense up*
Warners: *stare blankly*
Yakko: Wakko-
Wakko: Done. *rushes off to other room*
Everyone except Seishin, Mizuro, Illavera, and Warners: *flinch as various power tools sound out*
Wakko: *walks back into room with plate that has the burned script covered in cheese, whipped cream, sawdust, and more nonsense than I can honestly think of. Sits at a table, places plate down, puts out a full set of utensils, ties a kerchief around his neck, and grabs a fork and knife* … *tosses utensils, pulls out oversized mallet, and smashes table* And that's the end of that. *eats mallet*
Everyone except Seishin, Mizuro, Illavera, and Warners: *stare blankly*
Mizuro and Seishin: *burst out into laughter*
Illavera: *perks up in realization and looks at Dot in confusion* Wait a second, how do you know about that movie?
Dot: *looks at Illavera in confusion* Didn't you see episode 1 of the reboot?
Yakko: *Glares around angrily* Alright! Who put that thing in the wheel?!
Seishin: *whistles casually*
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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 57):
thanks for the chapter broo it's fabulous
Laura: *smiles* Thanks Vegito.
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From A Guest (Trix chapter 57):
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I liked this chapter. How curious that you added linked (combined) moves, a PMD mechanic (probably unintentional tho XD).
Laura: *raises brow* I thought Link Attacks weren't a thing in Trix's world.
Ohirume: They're not.
Yugo: Sorry to say A Guest, but Rob didn't get the concept of combining attacks from Pokémon Mystery Dungeon. He got it from the anime ... namely contests.
Ohirume: I honestly didn't know that that was a concept in any of the games.
Faux: *raises claw* But Link Attacks are a thing in my team's world.
Ohirume: And before you ask, I got the name of that "technique" from Future Card Buddyfight.
Pike: *smiles* You can see some examples of our world's type of Link Attack in the P1 Grand Prix chapter and Pokémon Land Omake(chapter 20).
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Also if I remember correctly Pokémon could stop evolution both in anime and in games without the need of an Everstone (in games it was by pressing B at the right moment during the evolution animation, if I remember correctly). However the everstone will come handy for not slipping and accidentally evolving.
Ohirume: *raises brow* Wasn't the only other example of that when Piplup refused to evolve? He was using Bide to cancel out the process.
Seishin: The rest were never explained.
Omega: *looks over PokéSins clipboard* The one thing Rob did right with this chapter was give reasons to all the unexplained ****. And there was way too much of that.
Ohirume: *perks up and looks at Omega in shock* Did you just-
Omega: *points at Ohirume* Shut it.
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Apart of this, I'm wondering... where this Omnitrix came from? Will there ever be some Alien in the Pokémon World?
Omega: ... *looks at Ohirume* Mind if I say it?
Ohirume: *glances away thoughtfully. Looks at Omega* Just point them in the right direction. Nothing antagonistic.
Omega: Fine.
Trix Chapter 33 - Halloween Special. Chapter 31 response to EmporerWolfGang.
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From Ohma flame (Trix chapter 57):
ok, quick question, will a Albedo like clone of ash (only with different colours) be in this
Faux: *raises brow* How would that happen?
Amber Mewtwo: *looks down thoughtfully before perking up* Oh! *looks at Ohma Flame* You mean during Trix's encounter with his world's mewtwo, don't you?
Pike: Oh, right. The cloning machines. *raises brow* But wait, that still wouldn't create a replica Omnitrix.
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From dragonnova7 (Trix chapter 57):
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Gem: *smiles* Thank you, 7.
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From Icewolf9879 (Trix chapter 57):
Wow did not see that coming with the hole his the elders hatchling but was cool still think ash should get the final form of the 3 starts to better help train his Pokemon and bond with them it would of been funny to see the the reaction of them when they found out that ash can turn into a Pokemon and they start treating him like a elder and going all "please forgive us elder ash" and stuff
Ohirume: *sweat drops* I still really don't think they'd see him that differently. Especially not to the 'all knowing elder' extent.
Charmander had the dragonite form to look up to when he needed that comfort. Charizard's become more independent but still respects Ash as a trainer/friend.
Bulbasaur never needed someone to look up to. Just someone to give him a better outlook on the human species. The fact that Ash had the Omnitrix at all was enough.
Squirtle would only really like a blastoise form because he'd think it's awesome and he'd be excited about the move(s) he'd be able to learn. The elder thing wouldn't even register in his mind.
Essentially, a new form wouldn't cause any of them to change their opinion of Ash, himself. The most prominent bonus would be the translator that the form would give.
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From RT89 (Trix chapter 57):
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Awesome chapter! To be honest, I never really thought about why Squirtle never nearly evolved.
Ohirume: *shrugs* Honestly, neither did I until I started writing that scene.
Two sort visits from the aliens and Evolution aplenty. This chapter Balbasoured passed my expectations. ;}
Seishin: *GIR voice* Yaaaaay!
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Looking forward to comment response update and your next chapter of this.
Gem: *blinks in confusion* Wait, but isn't this the comment response?
Seishin: *still GIR voice* Huh. Eh. Ah! AAHHHHHHHH- *face plants and falls asleep. Snores*
Everyone else: *looks at Seishin warily*
Nuevo: I think I've finally become numb to his ****.
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From TobyFreshCut (Trix chapter 57):
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Nicely done. I wasn't expecting Ash's Ponyta form to evolve.
Ohirume: *smiles* Yeah, I thought it'd be a nice add-in.
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So I was rereading the story and I noticed something peculiar about one member of your group. Just minor things at first, but it all came together when I believe another member shot him in the head and he kept talking. So I'm just going to ask. Is Seishin based off of Deadpool?
Seishin: Eh Deadpool, The Mask, Freakazoid, et cetera, something Rob can't think of while typing this, *belches*, whatever. Long story short - I'M NUTS! 😆
... oh and immortal, I guess. 😒 Snooze fest, am I right? 😴
Ohirume: Yukiro's my fourth wall shattering nonsense outlet. But, yes, Deadpool was part of his concept.
Seishin: Difference is that I'm morally grounded. 🙂
At least, after Rob stole me.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 57):
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This is one awesome chapter. You made Ash's Ponyta form evolve ,explained why neither Squirtle or Bulbasaur evolved which I don't really mined though it just wouldn't fell right if they evolved.
Ohirume: *shrugs* Yeah. I thought an explanation was due.
Omega: *flips page* For a lot of ****, by the looks of it.
You also gave Ash the bounce move and overheat move as well as giving Bulbasuar the move Solar Beam.
Ohirume: *smiles sheepishly* I've actually had Bounce in mind for a while. I just couldn't find a moment to bring it up.
Seishin: Overheat was mostly done because of Soot's response to Togepi. 😁
*dreamy smile* Pointless comedy directly affecting story writing. *sniffles* Oh Rob, I'm so proud.
Ohirume: *sighs*
Faux: *raises claw* And Bulbasaur did learn Solar Beam in my world.
Gem: *raises hand* Same.
Seishin: Twas canon.
Smart move on skiping the Togepi chapter it will be kinda pointless to add some like that into the story.
Yugo: *smirks* No kidding.
Is Charizard going to learn overheat cause while it is a powerful move it does have it's down sides.
Luke: *crosses forepaws and looks upward thoughtfully* I would assume either that or the nidoking form's Fire Blast.
Shadow Pearl: However, do not forget that Vulpix would also be a contender for tutoring of that nature.
Please make the next chapter soon.
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Klipper
Pike: *grins* Thanks, Klips.
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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 56):
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So as someone who never saw the original episode, I really wasn't expecting much from this chapter. After reading the chapter I felt like this was a better one that your average 7/10 chapters, mostly because the tRio is slowly but surly learning more about Ash's power, and Togepi finally hatching in the ending, which I quite liked.
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8/10
Seishin: *throws hands up* YEH!
Omega: *sighs*
Ohirume: *shrugs while smiling* I wasn't really sure the Togepi episode would still fit in the story. The group's gotten better at seeing through the tRio's tricks.
I even had a justified way to cut out most of those events thanks to Heat Body.
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Side note, here's an entry from the Crown Tundra.
Sword: Kabutops slices its prey apart and sucks out the fluids. The discarded body parts become food for other Pokémon.
Omni Force: *stare blankly*
Nuevo: *glances back Faux* Still think it's talking about berries and fruit?
Faux: *raises brow* Well, yeah. What else would it be talking about?
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From Just Some Guy 777 (Trix chapter 57):
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Eh, not one of the best chapters in my opinion. Maybe it's because the original episode was pretty average, but I feel like this chapter is missing some pizazz to make it a bit more interesting for me.
Omega: *smirks*
With that being said, I did like some parts in it. Ash's Ponyta form evolving was pretty cool, I liked the battle between him and the elder Venusaur, and the potential foreshadowing of 2 evolutions happening in the future was pretty neat.
Faux: *blinks in confusion* 2 future evolutions? … *perks up* Oh! You mean Onix and Hors- Seadra! *mumbles* Still not used to that.
That does bring up a question though. Bulbasuar said that he might change his mind in the future about evolving. Are you planning on following through with that and actually have him evolve at a later date or not?
Ohirume: *shrugs*
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6/10 Not bad, just not good.
Ohirume: Yeah, fair enough.
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Side note:
HOLY ONE WINGED ANGELS BATMAN, SEPHIROTH'S IN SMASH BROS!
Seishin: *excited smile* I know, right?!
Ohirume: *smiles* And don't forget that Cloud got a new Final Smash … granted it's dependent on which color variant you use.
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From Just Some Guy 777 (Random-ish chapter 1):
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(This is a continuation o the one below)
Yugo: *raises finger* To clarify, they're referring to Ohma Flame's Random-ish chapter 11 review.
Ohirume: The one where they claim to "break the reality wall".
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Just Some Guy 777: *blinks in surprise*…*chuckles, before turning towards the others while pointing at Ohma flame* Get a load of this guy.
Seishin: *snickers while looking at monitor showing where Ohma's group is*
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*Deleted Scenes
Princess Festival (scrapped idea) - Laura participates using Faux
Why: I'd been juggling with the idea for a while. Decided against it because I thought it'd be a bit much.
Note: Faux would've been illusion disguised as a Shiny Lucario
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(Omega's line for the "where are Tom and Laura" question): "Laura decided to participate in this thing and my rambling cousin said he wanted to help. If you wanna know what that means, your guess is as good as mine."
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Saur Garden – Ivysaur's failed argument
Where: Scrapped portion immediately after his leading the kidnapping team is revealed.
Why: The more I reworked the 'after Rocket' conversation, the less this made sense.
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Ivysaur started trembling before pointing a vine at Ash, "St- still! He could've cheated at any moment!"
"And I would've, if necessary." Ash said without hesitation; causing everyone to look at him in surprise. He looked at Venusaur, "If anyone tried to force Bulbasaur to evolve, no matter who won, I would've happily gone against my word. My friends come first."
Venusaur stared at Ash in surprise before he chuckled softly, "I see." He looked at Ash with a kind smile, "I concede."
Everyone in the group jerked and stared blankly. The surrounding ivysaur stared in shock.
"But elder!" Ivysaur blurted out.
Venusaur shot him a glare; making Ivysaur flinch, "What makes you think you still have a right to argue?"
Ivysaur stared frightenedly before he lied down and mumbled, "s- sorry."
Venusaur sighed before looking at Ash with a smile, "I concede the battle. You've more than proven yourself at this point. I feel it only fair after all of you helped save us." His smile turned apologetic, "And please tell your other hatching that I apologize for this hatchling's actions."
Ash smiled back, "I'll be sure to. And thank you."