SuperBossy chapter 1 . Jan 16

I like it so far. I'm curious to see how Sirius fares and if he can continue his budding friendships. More please!

report review for abuseSlytherin Potter chapter 1 . Jan 11

I'm well interested in this story hope you come back to this had me hooked instantly, your Sirius is remarkable.

report review for abuseSuperBossy chapter 1 . Dec 23, 2019

I'm all for finding out where this goes.

report review for abuseLuiz4200 chapter 1 . Dec 4, 2019

Sirius Black sharing a room with 'Snivellus'? I'm so looking forward their interactions!

report review for abuseDeadFish37 chapter 1 . Nov 29, 2019

Would have enjoyed more of this, but perhaps I'm too late to the party

report review for abuseSirius Fan chapter 1 . Sep 10, 2019

I wish you would continue this. I love a good Sirius story in which he saves the day. Please? This looks as though it would be awesome.

report review for abuseFyrefenix chapter 1 . Sep 8, 2019

This is an interesting concept and a good beginning. I would love to see it completed.

report review for abusepetalssunwards chapter 1 . Aug 9, 2019

Are you planning to explore this further?

It would be a great story!

report review for abuseFlowerPowder-Amara chapter 1 . Jul 7, 2019

I'm dissapounted it's only 1 chapter

report review for abusewotan2 chapter 1 . Jun 13, 2019

Interested in where you take this!

report review for abuseSmartKoala chapter 1 . Jun 11, 2019

You have to keep going on this story! I love the idea...it's so unique!

report review for abusePoppie chapter 1 . May 22, 2019

Yes yes yes~

report review for abuseJedi Jessic chapter 1 . May 16, 2019

Oh, this is a great start.

report review for abuseDuellist chapter 1 . Apr 28, 2019

I would like to see more. And I think it would be hilarious if he did, in fact, marry Bellatrix.

report review for abuseBlackstone4005 chapter 1 . Mar 31, 2019

Another new idea for world changing events. I just finished another story where Sirius was a Slytherin and was best friends with Severus. They bonded over their abusive home life. If James got himself sorted Slytherin as a prank, they could revolutionize the house from within. Lilly could go to Ravenclaw or Gryffindor with Remus but still become friends through her connection to Sev. Lots of possibilities here. I love your other stories too, so I hope this one gets time for updates later. Thanks again for another fun read.

heffronma5 chapter 1 . Mar 5, 2019

Interesting beginning to the story - I would like to see more of it - if it is possible.

Ever thought about writing a story where James Potter follows his mother into Slytherin - what would happen between him and Lily Evans? Would they get together?

If you could write this story I would be very grateful.

-Mark

report review for abusejeswin chapter 1 . Feb 15, 2019

More! More, more, more! I'd be more coherent, but this is such a novel concept and I'd love to read more of it.

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . Feb 15, 2019

It's great. Seriously.

report review for abuseNakedGrizz chapter 1 . Feb 8, 2019

I assume you have far too much going on to come back to this story, but I really enjoy the setup. I hope you can find the time to add to it. You have a gift for writing internal monologues.

report review for abuseOmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 1 . Jan 31, 2019

The sorting hat is right. The Black Family needs Sirius more than he realizes and cares to admit. I can't wait to see how Sirius redeems the house of Salazar Slytherin, and save the current and future generation from serving under Voldemort's cruelty and tyranny.

Show the other houses that there's more to the snakes than just what they know and learned. It's time for Slytherin to ascend beyond expectations and prove the entire wizarding world wrong about them.

report review for abuseSomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . Jan 17, 2019

Potentially great AU point. Of course that was the easy part...

report review for abuseenjoysullivan chapter 1 . Jan 9, 2019

I would love to read more of this story because I love the Marauder's Age and the Black Family! Hmm, maybe I love the Marauder's Age because that's when the Black Family was last active/most interesting. And I enjoy reading about Slytherins/the pureblood families because their characters are usually more complex or conflicted. I think you did a good job portraying a young Sirius in his interactions with his family. My favorite sentence/phrase was about Regulus: "despite his resentment for how easy Regulus seemed to fit into the pig-poop that was their society without becoming a terrible person himself." And I also really liked how Sirius described McGonagall as an "adorable kitten" lol. I would also be interested to read how the characters mentioned make it through the story alive. I especially wish things had worked out differently for Regulus in canon because Rowling gives him a mini redemption arc, and he obviously went through (or at least saw) terrible things growing up as a Black, but he never got a chance to live differently. Keep up the good writing, whichever stories you continue!

report review for abusegginsc chapter 1 . Jan 8, 2019

I hope you update this story soon.

report review for abusenkh1 chapter 1 . Dec 29, 2018

Glad I found your stories. This one needs No demands more!

report review for abuseCalmzone1 chapter 1 . Dec 12, 2018

Yes, poor Sirius. If he listens to the hat and opens his eyes to see why his family needs him, then things could get interesting. Especially if he takes James aside and tells him what the Hat said about family needing him. After all, James is family too.

report review for abuseJukedSolid chapter 1 . Nov 28, 2018

I like the prompt. I've read ETFA and I would love to see your style take this on. Do you have any plans to continue?

report review for abusekyrandiana chapter 1 . Oct 21, 2018

Dude don't stop I love this story already.

report review for abusebkerrmom1 chapter 1 . Oct 17, 2018

What a great storyline !

report review for abuseGuest chapter 1 . Oct 6, 2018

This is awesome! Please write more.

report review for abusekwrobes chapter 1 . Sep 21, 2018

I'd be quite interested in seeing more of this

Sindhuja chapter 1 . Sep 8, 2018

this is great!

report review for abuseJames chapter 1 . Aug 1, 2018

I'd love to see this continued

report review for abuseKuroHinata chapter 1 . Jul 17, 2018

the sorting hat of hogwarts destroyed more family or possible friends than anything in the wizarding world

report review for abuseLianneZ4 chapter 1 . Jul 3, 2018

This is a great opening. I really liked your Sirius in Easier than falling asleep.

Would love to read more of this :)

report review for abuseMagnificent the Destroyer Lord chapter 1 . Jun 22, 2018

I don't think you've written a story yet I would want to see less of. Please, if you can, continue this as it would be interesting, especially as I don't think I've seen a deeper look at Bellatrix that didn't completely ignore the lunacy from cannon in some form.

Good luck with whatever projects you're currently working on

M*T*D*L*

report review for abuseGreg36 chapter 1 . Jun 7, 2018

A interesting start for this story. I admit I never read a story with a such plot, It's pretty original. If this story end to be only half good as "The Disorder of the Phoenix" or "Easier than Falling Asleep", it will be a pretty good one.

I hope you will post more chapters in the future.

report review for abuseangelscatie chapter 1 . May 20, 2018

Interesting beginning.

report review for abuseLyraCarina chapter 1 . May 7, 2018

I hope you continue this story! I would love to read it!

report review for abusej.u.u.152 chapter 1 . May 6, 2018

thanks for the story. i am looking forward for the next chapter.

report review for abuseKutsuu Mugen chapter 1 . Apr 21, 2018

Okay, I read this earlier today and immediately added it to the list I am following. At the time I did not feel the need to review. However, I went back and read the author's notes, specifically the portion about potential mistakes. Now I have to respond, but not because there were mistakes.

In fact, I did not notice a single one. So, and I hope you do not take this as me being condescending or anything because that is not the way I mean it, here goes. Holy crap, dude! You admit to having a language disability, and yet your story is more grammatically perfect than many from fellow authors on this site who are also native English speakers without a language disability. I commend your efforts to produce excellence and other efforts to overcome what may have been a hindrance. From my view, you've taken an obstacle and turned it into an asset as your knowledge of your dyslexia issues causes you to take greater care with what you produce.

I do so hope my intent came across well. Also, completely ignoring the above comments, the idea for this story is freaking great, and I hope you decide to continue this story at your leisure.

report review for abuseWhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . Apr 21, 2018

A slightly interesting story, but not one I am interested enough in to read more of.

report review for abusedigbygreen chapter 1 . Apr 21, 2018

MORE!

report review for abuseAraytigre chapter 1 . Apr 19, 2018

Needless to say that this will be different, but somehow, in a good way (given the juicy clues rhat you've given us, lol). With Sirius in Slytherin, that'll put a damper on the Marauders being formed, as well as the future animosity with Severus too (at least canon wise). Thank You. TTFN

report review for abuseMeraHunt chapter 1 . Apr 17, 2018

An interesting start. I look forward to see how the story progresses.

report review for abusemooneysfate chapter 1 . Apr 17, 2018

looking forward to more. :)

omh0706 chapter 1 . Apr 14, 2018

Update soon!

report review for abusechc91776 chapter 1 . Apr 13, 2018

I think its interesting but itll be odd with no marauders

the only thing i dont look forward to is the years of Lilly kissing Snapes ass and defending him.. that always makes my tummy turn sour..

report review for abusesunsethill chapter 1 . Apr 13, 2018

I'm not usually a big Sirius fan, but I can actually see having to keep his ideals while being a Slytherin would cause him to develop differently. Not being a Slytherin in canon really did shield him from Voldemort's interest, which I really haven't thought much about before. This should be an intriguing story.

report review for abuseLiteratureSoccerEnthusiast chapter 1 . Apr 13, 2018

Wonderful chapter thus far, I am looking forward to reading more about Sirius and his journey in Slytherin. Thanks for posting!

report review for abusePenny is wise chapter 1 . Apr 13, 2018

Awesome first chapter. I love the idea.

report review for abuseBMS chapter 1 . Apr 13, 2018

Excellent Start!

I love stories featuring the Blacks. Nice Twist putting Sirius in Slytherin. Looking forward to seeing what else you change.

Let me put in a vote for Sirius / Lily right off.

Favored.

report review for abuseMugWhumps chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

AAAHHHH This is everything I've wanted in a story! I love Sirius so much. Please please PLEASE update soon!

report review for abuseotakumick chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

I don't know that I like it, but I can't help but want more of it. I also imagine that there was a Vader Nooooo! going off in his head when Bella welcomed him.

report review for abuseKagugu chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

thank you for your hard work

report review for abuseKat56 chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

Really great start! I can't wait to see what you have next for us. Storytelling is an art form and one I have far more respect for then the ability to write error free. This was engaging and dynamic and to be honest I was far too sucked in to see any mistakes.

report review for abusenadasnape chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

I love the plot already

report review for abuseThe Sinister Man chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

By any chance have you read "Stages of Hope" by kayly silverstorm? It's an AU (actually two AU's that sort of crash into each other) set in a world where Sirius gets sorted into Slytherin and bonds with Snape over their mutual outcast status and become close friends. The Marauders consist of Sirius and Snape plus Lily and Remus, and they all end up hating James for justifiable reasons. I highly recommend it, but I'm looking forward to your story as I've enjoyed all your others.

report review for abusered-jacobson chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

Be interesting to see, especially if James and the others decide to try and follow Sirius into Slytherin as well.

Red

report review for abuseArwengeld chapter 1 . Apr 12, 2018

very nice beggining ! I really want to see if Sirius can growing in Slytherin, leading a new path for slytherin students and obtain his mother's respect !

So he will have to fight Voldemort with slytherin allies too ?

He can change the faith of a lot of people and maybe snape and Regulus too ! Great !