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JameelsS3- I really like this series and I really hope you can continue although I'm not forcing you to continue I'm just suggesting if you don't want to continue that's your decision. I have to say that currently my favorite character is Dawn because she can definitely stop Mal even though I know he is going to get far into the game. I also kind of expected Dave x Ella to happen but I like the way how it happened. I also wonder how long it would take for Max to realize that he doesn't have actual money. The next episode is an aftermath so if I could ask a question it would be to Leonard. My question is now that you aren't trying to be a wizard anymore do you think you'll be able to make more friends? Also best of luck with your life in the real world!
Me- Thanks I'm glad you enjoy the series!
Sorry about the question but I finished the chapter before I saw your review. :/
gman5846- Man! That Sasquatchnakwa was really hard to beat!
Good job!
And I liked how you used Sam & Dakota as hosts for the aftermath for the season.
Me- Thanks! Sasquatchanakwa is a beast.
It made the most sense out of everyone who wasn't competing.
HayamiHinata- Nice way of doing this aftermath show episode, also the after credit clip was really good. Scarlett and Max are hilarious when they interact, and I really can't wait for more :)
Me- Thanks! I thought Scarlett and Max would make a good duo.
AnonBrowser- A very fun aftermath! Lots of great dialogue, and I literally laughed out loud when reading the part on Cameron "promising his mom he'll start wearing his diapers again". Glad you still have your talent of coming up with funny elements. I also got a kick out of the "Blind Love" responses Rodney got (aside from Staci continuing her obnoxious family bluffs). Getting tossed into the lagoon after finding out the Jamaican girls had boyfriends sounds painful. When he temporarily was attracted to Blaineley, am I imagining things, or was that co-host showing some sign of reciprocating that and being a cougar with the unexpected "Talk to me when you're eighteen" line when thirty-three herself? It gave me a feeling this could've been a "not yet" for legal concerns instead of an outright rejection and that she might've been willing once both were adults, and somewhat reminded me of another story (which has since been deleted) where Ms. O'Halloran accidentally let it slip that she had the hots for Lightning and found him sexy (though he was 19 there), which repulsed him and everyone else. Sha-jock called her "hella old" or something similar and had no interest in the lady at all (who called the guy "my sexy man" at one point).
Regardless, something else that shocked me is how Sugar actually was willing to give him a chance as long as he paid for meals out and would let him "get to third base"! Winning the farm boy over with that line showed a more perverted side to the guy that I don't think I've seen before. Based on his unzipped zipper, did they... actually touch each other's genitals when behind closed doors after some smooching O_O!? If so, then I would've never guessed he'd actually get that far with anybody or that she'd be so willing to quickly do sexual things with someone who isn't Leonard! Even a mutual kiss between him and anyone else wasn't something I ever expected. Quite a surprise how Mr. Delusional-about-love finally found someone who reciprocates his feelings so soon after getting eliminated and repeatedly having one-sided attractions to other girls.
Their hookup is either way a disturbing mental image that makes me cringe and I'm glad that nobody else approved of their actions. We're lucky nobody saw them do anything sexual. Whatever romance they might have will probably be short-lived given how easily the farmboy falls for girls just from simple interactions. It was funny how the chatterbox as well as Anne Maria and Scarlett were relieved to not be chosen as his date. Just not sure whether he and the Honey Boo Boo reject just had a brief fling or they plan to continue something non-platonic after this chapter. Here's hoping things don't last long between them, especially when no fellow castmates would respond well to them getting affectionate again. Side note: the guy has five younger brothers (as mentioned in a confessional during the first TDPI episode), not six older ones.
In any case, Leonard may have shown character growth by moving on from magic, but trying to tame animals here wasn't at all a smart move. He didn't have nearly enough preparation/training. I should've guessed the former wizard wannabe would still overall be a delusional idiot. Maybe getting mauled by them will teach him a lesson. Only time will tell what Scarlett and Max plan to do with those creatures.
Speaking of animal attacks, Topher should've known his cat would scratch him when trying to put a hat on that feline. Somebody didn't seem to think things through. Didn't think the teenage Ryan Seacrest would bring up Sierra in some sort of contest. At least he's not a creepy and obsessive stalker like her _. The fact that Sam and Dakota get higher ratings than him as an aftermath host is a fun touch. This couple in my opinion does a better job at it. Our gamer also had a fun line with the upcoming PlayStation 5 :P. Very in-character for him.
Getting into Jo, I'm not convinced this contestant was being honest when telling Ms. Milton she didn't feel too sad about losing her mother soon after birth. Same goes for the lady jock's father supposedly being fine by bottling up his emotions (who I guess we can blame for telling his daughter it's weak to show emotions when perhaps struggling to cope with losing a loved one and putting on a "tough" mask). Empathy and expressing one's vulnerability isn't as bad as she seems to think. Taking out some supposedly repressed emotions in the boxing ring with Brick (which didn't last long) only made my doubts stronger. Didn't think she'd lose so quickly to Sugar afterwards.
As for the fake money given out to raise funds, this leading to the remaining players stranded on Jamaica has to be the biggest surprise of this story yet! Maybe "I See London" will have to be renamed unless they somehow get flying again and can make it over to England before the chapter ends. Whatever might follow, I'm eager to see how things play out. Having three teams at this point instead of two is bound to be another major game-changer from canon!
Me- Thanks! I came up with that line when I was rewatching ROTI and I heard Cameron say that.
Blaineley did always give me cougar vibes. But there was a fic where Blaineley had a crush on Lightning?... Wow that sounds interesting.
Well after finding out Leonard isn't into her during the first aftermath Sugar's moved on with her life. I thought Rodney and Sugar would be a nice fit because they're both delusional and they both live on a farm.
Yeah I figured it'd be fun to stray from canon.
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated- An interesting deviation from TDW. How will the Aftermath Hosts, Peanut Gallery and Audience react that the 500K Dollars goal has not been reached? The bonus clip with Max and Scarlett was fun too.
Me- Thanks! Max and Scarlett do work well together.
Jss2141- Rodney and Sugar? I did not expect that but I can see them working together. Rodney would treat her like a princess and Sugar would keep him from annoying other girls.
Me- Yeah that's kinda what I was thinking. Sugar would get the undying love she wanted and she'd prevent Rodney from looking at other women.
~ Jamaica: Beach~
The contestants were currently relaxing on the Jamaican beaches. Lightning, Sky, Zoey, and Jasmine were playing a game of volleyball. Dawn, Beardo, and Charles were making a sandcastle. Georgia, Dave, and Ella were relaxing on the lounge chairs. Mal was taking a nap on the plane.
"Y'know at first I thought being stuck here was gonna suck but it's really not that bad." Dave said
"Speak for yourself. This is a competition and the longer it is postponed the longer my patience grows thin." Georgia said
Georgia huffed as she got up and went to the juice bar for another drink.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Pilot's Room~
"Alright Chef today's the day we get the money from the Aftermath crew!" Chris said happily
"Hooray.." Chef said in a deadpan tone
" You don't sound that excited." Chris said
" This free vacation in Jamaica is the most fun I've had on this stupid job and now I get to look forward to more back-breaking labor." Chef said
" By the way when am I getting my paycheck?!" Chef asked angrily
Chris whistled innocently as he tried to change the subject. He then heard a knock on the door he ran over to see who it was.
" Is this where Chris Mclean is staying?" The mailman asked
'Why yes it is." Chris said
The mailman handed Chris two briefcases. He smiled as he grabbed them and shut the door on the mailman's face.
" Hello money!" Chris said
He opened both briefcases and smiled in awe. Chef looked at the money and quickly realized something.
"Chris man half of this money is fake." Chef said
"What are you talking about?" Chris asked
Chris once again looked at the briefcase and noticed a problem.
" It is fake! Is this some sort of sick joke?!" Chris said angrily
"Well if we don't got the money I guess we have to stay here... forever." Chef said happily
" That is not going to happen! I won't let Total Drama die on my watch! I know well just keep on doing challenges in Jamaica until we get the money!" Chris said frantically
" Won't that get repetitive?" Chef asked
" I don't know Chef!.. I don't know what I'm gonna do!" Chris said
Chris then began to break down and cry. Chef feeling uncomfortable decided to leave the Pilot's Room.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: First Class~
Mal was taking a nap in the first class.
~ Mike's Subconscious~
Mike and his other personalities were walking aimlessly.
" Where are we even going?" Chester asked
" To my brain. Usually I can hop in and out of here but for some reason I can't. I can only assume Mal is the central personality at the moment due to having master control." Mike said
"Ay yo what's master control?" Vito asked
" It's a function in my brain that makes sure I stay up on top. It must've got messed up when that stagelight fell on my head." Mike said
" So wait your telling me if I get this "master control" then I can be in charge and make out with Anne Maria all I like?" Vito said
" Stupid Vito. Mike is in ze control for a reason. He is the only one that can handle with Mal in charge I don't know what fate awaits us." Svetlana said
" Thanks Svetlana." Mike said
Suddenly Mal appeared before them. Mike and the other personalities gasped in shock.
" It's been fun playing cat and mouse Michael. But I'm afraid you must return to your cell." Mal said
Mal snapped his fingers and everyone was tied up instantly.
"You won't get away with this!" Mike said
" I already have-" Mal said before he was interrupted
Mal suddenly disappeared.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: First Class~
Chris had just splashed an unconscious Mal in the face with cold water. He woke up and grabbed Chris by the shirt.
" You better have a really good reason for doing that." Mal said
"Report to the beach pronto. I have some important news." Chris said
Mal let go of Chris and he walked away.
"This isn't over Michael." Mal said to himself
~ Jamaica: Beach~
" Sha-bam!" Lightning said as he served a volleyball
The volleyball flew across the net, Zoey and Jasmine were unable to get it. Sky and Lightning cheered as they won the game.
" I did it! Sha-woo!" Lightning said
" I think you mean "we" did it." Sky said
"Girl please there's no "we" in Lightning." Lightning said
"... What?" Sky said confusedly
Lightning looked down as his new watch started to beep.
" Oh It's time for my daily training session! I'll catch yall later!" Lightning said
Lightning ran over to Dave and Ella who were still relaxing in the longue chairs.
" Can't we take a day off from training?" Dave asked
" Do you wanna beat the other two teams or do you wanna keep on losing?!" Lightning retorted
Dave sighed as him and Ella stood up.
" Now were gonna start off with fifty laps around the beach! Let's sha-go!" Lightning said as he ran off
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" I'm starting to regret making that deal with Lightning."
" I'm supposed to be on vacation right now with my hot girlfriend but he keeps on insisting on daily training sessions."
"By the time were done I don't even feel like doing anything."
END CONFESSIONAL
Chris arrived at the beach where the contestants where staying at. The contestants stopped what they were doing and stared at Chris.
" Bad news guys... The aftermath didn't make enough money for us. Were gonna be stuck in Jamaica for a little while longer." Chris said
Everyone except for Georgia and Lightning celebrated this news.
" So is the game cancelled?" Georgia asked
" Of course not! Well just have to do another challenge in Jamaica! So wait here for a bit while I think of something." Chris said
Chris left the area as the contestants pondered about what he said.
" You heard the man! Let's keep on relaxing!" Beardo said
The contestants went back to what they were doing.
~ Jamaica: Sea~
Max, Scarlett, Hans, Sasquatchanakwa and an army of evil animals were currently on a giant cruise ship as they headed towards Jamaica.
" Should be another fifteen minutes before we arrive at our destination." Scarlett said
"Excellent. I cannot wait to see the look on Chris' face when he sees me." Max said
" It'll probably be the same look everyone gives you; pure disgust." Scarlett said
" Oh Scarlett you flatter me. But save for it when we succeed." Max said
Scarlett rolled her eyes as the they continued on course to Jamaica.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Chris' Room~
Chris sat in his room as he thought about what to do.
" Something Jamaican.. hmm... Maybe we could do a challenge in Dunn's River?" Chris said to himself
As Chris continued to think someone tore a hole through the plane as several figures entered the room.
" We meet again Chris Mclean.." Max said
" Not now kid I gotta think of a way to save my show." Chris said
" Oh Chris by the time I'm done with you there won't be a show!" Max said
Max snapped his fingers and Sasquatchanakwa walked over and picked up Chris.
" Hey be gentle with the cargo!" Chris said
As Max and his associates were getting ready to leave, Chef ran into the room.
" Chris what the hell is going on here?!" Chef asked
" Greetings Chef your co-host will be going away for a little while. If you want to see him come back alive and well then you will bring the million dollars to this specific location." Max said
Hans walked over and handed Chef a map. Max and his associates then left the Jumbo Jet with Chris.
CONFESSIONAL: CHEF
" That creepy bowlcut kid done kidnapped Chris!"
' On one hand now that he's gone I'm free to do whatever I want."
"And it's not like he ever paid me anyways.."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Jamaica: Beach~
Chef was seen relaxing on a longue chair at the beach as Georgia approached him.
"Chef have you seen Chris? He said he was planning a challenge for us but it's been four hours now and nothing's happened." Georgia said
" Oh Chris? He got kidnapped by Max, Scarlett, His creepy exterminator and Sasquatchanakwa." Chef said
" What?! Why didn't you say so earlier?" Georgia asked
" The lack of money I've been receiving really doesn't motivate me to do things." Chef said
"But if you wanna risk your lives tryna save pretty boy then here's a map Max gave me." Chef said
Chef handed Georgia the map.
"Oh! And he also said to bring the million dollars." Chef said
"Where is that at?" Georgia asked
" There's a vault in Chris' room that has the money in it. You'll need the password to get into it though." Chef said
" Well what's the password?" Georgia asked
" I don't know he never told me. You'll have to figure that out on your own." Chef said
Georgia sighed as she left the beach.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Chris' Room~
Georgia and the other contestants entered Chris' room.
" I don't see why we have to go through all of this trouble. Why don't we just take the million and let Max kill Chris?" Mal said
" Because we all have a little something called empathy Mal. Maybe you should try it sometime." Zoey snapped back
Some of the contestants were confused by Zoey's statement.
" Um.. Why did she call him "Mal?" Sky asked
"Well tell you about it later." Dawn said
The contestants stopped as they saw Chris' vault.
" Alright now we need to think of the password. Does anyone have any ideas?" Georgia asked
Lightning raised his hand.
"Does anyone except for Lightning have any ideas?" Georgia asked
Lightning pouted as Ella raised her hand.
" Maybe the password is "SINGING" Since it is one of the themes of this season." Ella said
Georgia entered "SINGING" but it didn't work.
" We all know Chris is a narcissist. So try using his name." Charles said
Georgia entered "CHRIS" but it didn't work.
" Dang I thought that would've been it." Charles said
" We should look around his room for clues." Georgia said
" Were looking for clues? Lemme set the mood with some music." Beardo said
Beardo began singing the theme from "Scooby Doo" as the contestants looked around his room. Sky looked around Chris' drawer.
"Hair gel, Body spray, Cologne." Sky said as she dug through his drawer
As she was digging through she came across a picture. She picked it up and stared at it.
"Guys you might wanna look at this." Sky said
The contestants gathered around Sky and looked at the picture. It was Chris and a tiny venus flytrap. The picture had a signature saying "Me and my best bud Larry."
" Larry... Try using that!" Sky said
Georgia ran to the vault and entered "LARRY". The vault opened and the contestants stared at the million dollars.
"So what exactly is the plan here?" Dave asked
Everyone turned towards Jasmine.
"Why are you all looking at me?" Jasmine asked
" We need a leader right now and you have a pretty good track record." Sky said
"Alright here's what were gonna do." Jasmine said
~ Ocho Rios: Abandoned Hideout~
Max and Scarlett waited patiently for Chef to arrive. Hans and Sasquatchanakwa were playing cards while Chris was tied up.
" I'm hungry..." Chris said as he whined
"We don't care." Scarlett said
"You should care.. If I starve to death before Chef comes then your not getting any money!" Chris said
" Max go feed the man-child." Scarlett said
Max stood up as he walked to Chris and pulled out some baby food.
" Baby food?! Do I look like a-" Chris said before he was interrupted
Max took a spponful of baby food and shoved it into Chris' mouth. He continued to do so until Chris begged him to stop.
" Thhahsr wauauss disgusitng!" Chris said as he choked
Someone began to knock on the door. Scarlett went to go answer it as she opened the door. Ella and Beardo were standing there as they waved at the evil genius.
" Sup Scarlett? Long time no see." Beardo said
" Beardo and Ella? Where's Chef with the money?" Scarlett asked
"He couldn't make it. So we thought we'd entertain you with a song." Ella said
" Not interested." Scarlett said as she prepared to close the door
"C'mon it'll only take a minute." Beardo said
Ella began to sing as Beardo added in his beatboxing. Scarlett sighed as she listened to the duo's antics. Meanwhile on the other side of the abandoned hideout, Mal, Zoey, and Jasmine were attempting to lock pick the back door.
" I thought you said you knew how to pick locks." Zoey said
" I do! Could you shut up and let me concentrate?!" Mal snapped back
Zoey blew a raspberry at him as Mal successfully picked the door. Once inside the three hid behind a crate.
" If were gonna get to Chris, Were gonna need to take care of moustache guy and the yeti. Mal this is where you come in." Jasmine said
"And what exactly do you want me to do?" Mal asked
"Do what you do best mate. Act like a bloody psychopath and murder em." Jasmine said
Mal cracked his knuckles and flashed a sinister smile. He sprinted towards Hans and headbutted him. A confused Hans slid across the floor, Mal turned his attention towards Sasquatchanakwa. The yeti punched Mal in the face that sent him tumbling. He got back up and spat out some blood.
" You're not so tough." Mal said
As Mal fought Hans and Sasquatchanakwa. Zoey and Jasmine ran over to Chris so they could untie him.
" It took you long enough!" Chris said
" You're lucky we didn't leave you to die like your buddy Chef did." Jasmine said
" Chef's not in on the rescue?... Well he can forget about ever getting that paycheck!" Chris said
Max ran over to stop the two.
" Stop you insolent fools! Or I will be forced to unleash great pain on you!" Max said
Zoey and Jasmine looked at each other and then laughed. Max didn't like being made fun of so he pressed a button and all the crates were opened revealing all the animals now wearing Max's evil helmets.
" When did Max get a petting zoo?" Zoey asked
" I dunno but let's not stick around to find out!" Jasmine said
She finished untying Chris but as they got up they noticed that Mal was defeated.
"Er hat einen verdammt heftigen Kampf geführt. Aber ich habe mit Ratten zu tun gehabt, die härter sind als er." Hans said
" What do we do now?!" Zoey asked
Jasmine picked up a walkie talkie.
" We need backup! I repeat we need backup!" Jasmine said
Charles, Dave, Dawn, Georgia, Lightning and Sky stood outside of the abandoned hideout bearing face paint and weapons. Sky picked up the walkie talkie and received Jasmine's message.
"Help is on the way! Let's move guys!" Sky said
The group stormed in through the back door and charged at the animals. Just as a full on civil war was about to break out, someone stood in the middle of the fight.
"Friends please stop! I know a peaceful way we can resolve this." Dawn said
Dawn walked towards one of the animals and stared into it's soul. The animal was able to regain control of itself and Dawn took off the helmet.
" Take off the helmets and the creatures won't harm you!" Dawn said
The contestants ran towards the animals and pried off the helmets. As this was going on Scarlett was starting to get suspicious.
" What's going on back there?!" Scarlett asked as she turned around
"Wait!" Beardo said
Beardo grabbed Scarlett and pulled her into a big bear hug.
" Let me go of me you simpleton!" Scarlett said
"Beardo don't hug her too tight or she might pop!" Ella said
" Sorry it was the only thing I could think of." Beardo said
Scarlett squirmed as she tried to break free. As a last resort she raised her foot and kicked Beardo in the kiwis. Beardo fell over and made a Game Over Mario noise. Scarlett saw Zoey and Jasmine trying to leave the building with Chris.
" Hans! Sasquatchanakwa! Stop them!" Scarlett ordered
Hans restrained Zoey and Sasquatchanakwa restrained Jasmine. The other contestants surrounded Scarlett.
"Let our friends go!" Sky said
" I didn't want to have to do this but you leave me no choice." Scarlett said
"Max now!" Scarlett said
Max opened a crate and carefully put a helmet on very special animal.
" Hello my little friend go and poison the two mean ladies over there." Max said
A black mamba slithered out the crate and over to where Zoey and Jasmine were. It bit both of them in the leg.
"Ow!" Jasmine/ Zoey said
" What did you just do?" Dave asked
" That was a black mamba and it's poison starts to kick in after ten minutes. So unless you want your friends to meet an untimely demise." Scarlett said
Scarlett pulled an antidote out of her pocket.
" You will hand me the million dollars in exchange for the antidote." Scarlett said
The contestants didn't want Zoey and Jasmine to do so Georgia sighed as she handed the briefcase containing the million dollars to Scarlett.
"Excellent." Scarlett said
Scarlett handed Georgia the antidote.
" Our business is done here! Let's get moving!" Scarlett said
Scarlett, Max, Hans, and Sasquatchanakwa quickly ran out of the abandoned hideout.
" Wait what about your evil petting zoo?" Dave asked
" Keep them! They served their purpose!" Scarlett said as she ran
Dawn and Ella quickly administered the antidote to Zoey and Jasmine.
" Great! We don't have enough money to leave Jamaica and there's no longer any million dollar prize." Chris complained
"Don't worry mate everything went according to plan." Jasmine said
" If you used the fake money trick I don't think they'll fall for that twice." Chris said
" The million dollars is real, it's their getaway vehicle we messed with." Dawn said
~ Jamaica: Streets~
Max, Scarlett, Hans, and Sasquatchanakwa were speeding away in a jeep with the million dollars. Scarlett was closely examining the million dollars.
" It's real! We got the money!" Scarlett said happily
In a rare moment of joy, Scarlett and Max hugged each other. They quickly realized what they were doing and stopped.
" Mention that to anyone and I will hurt you." Scarlett said
" Evil doesn't hug." Max said
They noticed they were being followed by a police car.
" Hans I told you to obey the traffic laws. Were EVIL not monsters." Max said
"Ich habe dir gesagt, ich weiß nicht, wie man fährt." Hans said
They stopped their jeep as the police car pulled up behind them.
" Hey mon license and registration." Jamaican police officer said
Hans shrugged as the police officer narrowed his eyes.
" I'm gonna need you all to step out the vehicle mon." Jamaican police officer said
The four stepped out the vehicle as the officer searched it, he found nothing except for the briefcase. But as he opened the trunk he found several blocks of marijuana.
" How did that get there?!" Max asked confusedly
Scarlett thought back to when they escaped.
" They allowed us to leave way too easily... We were set up... RUN!" Scarlett said
The officer tazed Max several times as Scarlett made a run for it. Hans and Sasquatchanakwa stayed behind to help their master but the officer pulled out his gun. Hans and Sasquatchanakwa froze. The officer noticed Scarlett still running and he shot her in the leg.
"AAAAUGH!" Scarlett screamed as she fell down
All four of them were promptly arrested and taken away.
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Chris' Room~
Chris and the contestants stood in the room with all of the animals Max and Scarlett left behind.
" You did WHAT with my marijuana stash?!" Chris asked
" We found it in your vault next to the money. We stashed it in their jeep and hoped they'd be in a hurry and be caught speeding." Charles said
" Great no million, no marijuana, you might as well take away my hair care products." Chris said sadly
" Not so fast mate. I noticed one of Scarlett's critters was an endangered species. We can make some big bucks off that if we give them to the proper sanctuary." Jasmine said
" What are we waiting for?!" Chris said
CONFESSIONAL: DAWN
"We were able to find that endangered species a new home and we were rewarded quite handsomely for it."
" Chris said there's enough money for fuel and for the prize money."
"So I assume things will be going back to normal."
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Total Drama Jumbo Jet: Pilot's Room~
" We did it! We got enough money to get us back up off the ground! How do you feel Chef?" Chris asked
The camera turned to Chef who had to wear stuffy winter clothes.
" T-Tired.." Chef said
" Oh yeah Chef has to wear that as punishment for not coming to rescue me. I'll probably let him take it off when we reach our next destination. And what is our next destination going to be? You'll have to keep watching to find out on TOTAL DRAMA WORLD TOUR!" Chris said
~ Bonus Clip: Jamaican Jail~
Max, Hans and Sasquatchanakwa sat in a cell.
" You think Scarlett is doing alright?" Max asked
Sasquatchanakwa muttered something that Max didn't understand.
"Why am I talking to a yeti?" Max asked himself
The cell door opened and Scarlett was thrown inside. She hissed at the guards before she left.
" How's your leg doing?" Max asked
" I'll survive. We must find a way out of here immediately. I was meant to be studying at Harvard not rotting in prison." Scarlett said
" I know what you mean. My destiny is to take over the world! BWAHAHAHA!" Max said
...
" Don't compare your childish fantasies to my life goals." Scarlett said
"Sorry." Max said
That was Chapter Thirteen of TOTAL DRAMA WHAT IF? WORLD TOUR! If you enjoyed it then leave some reviews and slap some favorites on here.
Since the aftermath didn't raise enough money the total drama crew was still stuck in Jamaica. But now that they got enough money it'll be back to doing challenges. I thought this be a fun chapter to write and a good divergence from canon. If your getting sick of the Max storyline, I will say he won't be showing up for the next couple of chapters.
Elimination Order: B-19th, Max-18th, Sugar-17th, Anne Maria-16th, Jo-15th, Topher-14th, Leonard-13th, Rodney-12th