Hello all! This is not an actual chapter, I apologize, but there were some things I felt needed addressing.
It has been brought to my attention Exuberant Witness' character was not accurate in the latest chapter, and I agree. I was focused on the Gen3 MJOLNIR's capabilities and not making it too OP, but also a considerable upgrade on previous iterations (come on, Sangheili been using that active camo for years and now that we're allies(ish?) I think it's about time it was adapted to the Spartans. Sharing is caring, Thel). I may go back and tweak Exuberant's dialogue at some point, but I have to be honest when I say that getting this story clued up is of far greater importance to me.
Second thing that's been mentioned is how Briar and John's relationship developed suddenly, or so it seemed. And from a reader's perspective, I understand why it seems that way. All along, I admit I was avoiding writing chapters from John's POV, because I was legit terrified of fucking it up. Because of this, you only saw Briar's thoughts and feelings, which did hint at her growing attachment to John, but left you with only half the picture obviously. I am sorry about that. I did become comfortable with John's POV, but too late I feel. I wish I could say I will go back and add chapters from John's POV In between some of the earlier stuff, to give a more complete picture of how things developed, but… the end is in sight. It's probably not gonna happen.
Finally, there are (I think?) 4-5 chapters remaining. I haven't written them yet, I've outlined some. These will take me some time, as I want to ensure they're written well. That and the fact the holidays are upon us here in Canada means you're going to need to be patient with me. I will conclude this story, I am determined. I've thoroughly enjoyed learning and researching Halo lore and hopefully in the new year I'll get around to reading the novels.
I appreciate all of your feedback and support. Truly. Stay safe everyone!