LairaPocus chapter 1 . Jan 25
Wow! That was something else for sure! I do believe that this Bella wouldn't be that angry at Andromeda for getting herself pregant with Ted's kid. I mean sure he's still a mudblood in her eyes but at the same time he was her sister ticket to freedom, which in turn turns him right back into an object and therefore exactly where she thinks he should be.
But regardless of that, I loved it, just as much as I love the rest of your stories! )
report review for abuseImmortal ninjaaa chapter 1 . Jan 7, 2019
So Tom broke her, I wonder if Andy will fix her in the other fic.
report review for abuseJames1996 chapter 1 . Dec 3, 2018
Great start, I look forward to reading more in the future.
report review for abusePrasje chapter 1 . Dec 3, 2018
I'm hooked. Please please please give me the fluff, I need it badly after all the hurt and suffering in the first chapter. Love your writing style
report review for abuseNauze chapter 1 . Dec 2, 2018
I liked it. I didn't get this vibe that Andromeda didn't actually loved Ted before they got together, I always thought it was friends first, then stopped being platonic and then they got together.
Its interesting because it shows that even though she ended up loving him and Dora, he was actually her escape, not her first choice, would've been freedom to do what she wanted, so instead of enslaving herself to Lestrange, she chose to not be free, but to be free from Lestrange.
report review for abuseBMS chapter 1 . Dec 2, 2018
Excellent
report review for abuseBy Another Name chapter 1 . Dec 1, 2018
I understand your Andromeda now. Thank you. Can't say I really like her but she's well drawn, and she makes sense in the context of the canon and then going into your story as the woman who knows she has to break Ted's heart as well as the mother of the Three Potter girls... especially Morwenna. Question for the other story: Does Harry know that it was quite like this between her and Ted?
report review for abusecameron1812 chapter 1 . Nov 30, 2018
Holy ever loving gawd this chapter is scary awesome, and, well, scary. The fall of Bellatrix is something else, as is Andromeda's choice. Wow is this bleak. Love it! Thank you.
report review for abusepetuniatc chapter 1 . Nov 30, 2018
Interesting - back story on the Black sisters so we understand how feared they were.
Also you're lumping the Lestrange brothers with the Carrows in their level of evil.
Also the icon of Princess Grace I assume is how you picture Narcissa?
report review for abuseDadycoool chapter 1 . Nov 30, 2018
And thus the most powerful trio to ever grace Hogwart's halls is broken beyond any hope of repair. He really is a monster, taking everything away from Bella.
report review for abuseBluewave9511 chapter 1 . Nov 29, 2018
Good story, characters who I always wanted to see a past story. cant wait for the future chapters. Please do read my story as well :)
report review for abuseObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . Nov 29, 2018
Wow, a bit of left field from your usual fics. Thanks for sharing!
report review for abuseYaw613 chapter 1 . Nov 29, 2018
Please write the next chapter already. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Thank you very much.
report review for abuseRoverMaelstrom chapter 1 . Nov 29, 2018
Wow. That was beautiful and brilliant and terrible and I love it so much!