gauri20090 - here it is
Babli15 - karni ha mateshwari ji lekin pehle phone mew ajae mera
Guest - no both are not in gray shade.. sabke apne plan ha
Sanjana Gupta - daya dil se nahi dimag se bola ha is bar
Tania - mera cousin update de raha ha accident mein mera phone marr gaya bichara.. mein bhai ko chat par reviews ke reply dedeti hu or vo yaha copy paste mare ga abse.. and mein sabke reviews lapoy ke mail se padhtu hu...and you are right dear daya sir dil se nahi dimag se soch rahe ha apko nahi lagta ki acp sir or sabko nikalne ke liye abhi ki maut ke liye usne kuch socha hoga
jasmin - everything will fine
Abhi Admirer - yarr apna daya dil or dimag dono lagata ha
Shweta03 - i am ok now bus typing mein problem ha ass thumb use nahi ho sakta i have to use finger tip
Guest - thanku
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Story lover - thanku and daya ne dimag se socha ha is bar abhi galat le raha ha
so finally i got 14 reviews thanku all i am happy ki itne care ing reviewers mile and jab bhi mein lappy ooen kati hu na sabse pehle mail open karti hu yeh janne ke liye ki apne ajj kya share kiya hoga kya review kiya hoga kesa laga hoga mujhe bahut maza ata ha apko reply dekar.. love you all bye take care..
mere bare mein kisi ne usko bata diya ha mujhe bada karza dena padha ha usse ab mein nahi boluga sidha uske review copy paste maru ga..
NOTE - kafi painful ladai ha fighting scenes kafi ha agar meri story jo imagine kar lete ha wo pain kesa hoga toh shayad apko thoda lage dar sa.. wese itni aukat nahi ha meri itna acha likku gi but i tried
Daya - maff kardo abhi agar pata hota toh mein yeh sab na bolta (down head)
Abhi - lekin baat dil mein toh ai na jo mere dil ko lagi ha.. (daya saw him he was teary eyes) kash waha meri hi lash hoti kamse kam yeh sab sun toh na pata..
Karan got angry he turned the table and throw..
Karan (angrily) - band karo yeh drama or batao tum zinda kese..
Abhi - karan tumhari chal dhal.. or batte ek ki soch nahi badal pai.. tumhe kya laga sab jan gaye tumhe.. toh bahut bade bewakoof ho cid ke samne hi mujrimi ho ot wo pehchan na pae esa kabhi nahi hota.. tumhare harkat par nazar cid ke acp sahab ki...tum daya ki, akbar ki, or baki sabki nazro se bach sakte ho lekin ek bazz ki nazar se nahi
Acp - or tumhara har baat par ghamand mein ki jagha hum.. usi ne sochne par majboor kiya.. salim ko bhi sunte hue dekha ek admi ke sath jab vo abhijeet ko marne ko keh raha tha
Abhi - acp sahab ne mujhe ek chithi di jisme unhone plan banaya tha.. unhone maulana sahab ko pehle hi keh diya tha ki mein jab au mujhe sambhal le uske agge ka plan mujhe khud bana padha.. or samye isi liye le raha tha kyuki goli ke ghaw abhi bhare nahi the.. lekin ghaw bharne se pehle tumne or ghaw dediye (chewing) apni hadd paar karke jab khan baba maulana ke pass bhagte bhagte ae yeh sab batane tab mene sab kuch sunliya.. or phir bana yeh sab plan.. is plan se kawal tumhari hi nahi ork ki bhi dil ki baat mooh par agayi
both looked at eachother...having teary eyes
Daya (pov) - ab tumhe kese samjhau mein ki mujhe dar tha agar yeh khel har gaya toh karan hume gulam bana le ga.. uske sath akar uska plan janne ke liye tumhari burai ki thi mene abhi mein usse chori chupa marna chahta tha teri maut ka badla lena chahta tha.. isi liye yeh sab kiya..
both came out of the thoughts.. with voice
Karan (angrily) - giraftar karlo is khooni ko but he shock no one came..
Abhi - bhool ja koi ae ga kyuki tune hi apne hatho mujhe sonph tha..bhool gaya tu yeh sab kuch harr chuka ha karan apne ghamand ke krn
Karan - yeh gadari ha abhijeet tum sab itne sare or hun do..
Salim - sahi kaha isne..
Abhi - thik ha..
Akbar - tujh jese astin ke sanp ko salim mein hi katu ga..
he took out the sword..
Voice - yuvraj..
Abhi turned shreya throw the sword he caught it..
Karan - bhale ka bhar zayada hota ha yuvraj.. bhoolo maat mein tumse zayada experienced hu..
soon some gaurds came around.. them..
Karan - (smile) mere bhi kuch sathi iss mahal mein ha yuvraj..
All the gaurds came and surrounded abhi..
karan step back..
Karan - khatam kardo insab ko..
a man from back going to run towards abhi with sword.. but someone hold his collar and throw him back.. all saw it was daya.. daya and acp started fighting with gaurds.. abhi saw karan got disappear..
Acp. - abhijeet karan ko pakdo.. inhe hum dekh le ge..
Abhi ran.. here salim and akbar started the sword fight.. abhi went out in corridor
in corridor
Abhi was finding karan and here and there.. suddenly he received a kick from aside.. he fall down.. he turned and found karan.. karan took out the sword and attack towards abhi.. abhi hold his sword to act as a barrier.. he kept at slanting he also hold the sharp edge.. the blood started ozzing from his hand karan was applying his full force abhi kicked his abdomen he fall back abhi got up.. he started attacking karan was trying to defence him self abhi pushed karan to the pillar.. and tried to make cut on his neck but karan sword in mid was protecting him..
karan pushed abhi.. and ran.. abhi also ran after him
Abhi - karan tu ajj bach ke nahi jaa pae ga rook jaa..
karan ran and went inside purvi's room.. abhi shocked
in room
purvi shock.. karan came hold purvi from arm harshly..
Purvi - karan chodo mujhe.. karan
Karan - (angrily) chup..
he kept sword on her neck.. she was sweating with fear.. karan was breathing heavily he was waiting for abhi.. to use purvi as weapon.. suddenly he received a kick from back someone hold purvi 's hand.. she collied with him.. karan fall down.. purvi shock it was abhi she remembers the morning.. he was in same dress..
Purvi - adivy hi yuvraj abhijeet
karan got up with sword.. abhi started coming towards him he started stepping back due to fear and tiredness
Abhi - (angrily) teri himat kese hui us ladki ko chune ke uss ladki ki apne bannane ki jise ajj tak mene sirf saman ki nazaro se dekha ha.. karan..
he attacked him by sword but karan defend he pushed his sword.. and it fall..
abhi made a big slant cut on his body.. from right shoulder to left down he fall.. towards wall.. holding between center of the chest.. abhi came near he instantly throw vase which hit his forehead he fall on floor.. karan got up.. and ran outside.. Purvi ran near abhijeet
Purvi - (tensed) abhijeet are you ok..
abhi got up carfully
Abhi - ajj vo mere hatho nahi bache ga.. (to purvi) usse ajj mar dalu ga mein.. tukde kar dalu ga mein.. kyuki usne tumhe galat tarike se chune ki koshish ki
he started going but Purvi hold his hand.. he turned and saw her teary.. abhi down his eyes.
Abhi - (tear) mujhe maff kardo mene tumhare upar uski ki gayi harkat ke nishan dekh liye.. the..
a silent kept in between them
Purvi - (tear) apna dhyan rakhna..
he left her hand and ran out.. purvi covered her face and sat on bed with thud and started crying
on other side..
team was seeing the gaurds.. a man was going to hit knife from daya's..
Acp - (tensed) daya peeche dekho..
daya turned.. but shock shreya came in mid the man hit knife.. in her stomach..
Akbar - shreyaaaa..
daya gave a hard punche on his face and instantly hold shreya who got uncounssious..
Daya - shreya shreya ankhe kholo.. shreya..
All gathered near him
Akbar - jaldi isse lekar chalo daya kamre mein (to jas and khan) khan baba jakar jaldi se doctor ko le ao..
daya picked.. her acp saw towards door karan was running to save his life..
on other side..
karan was running.. to save his life collieding with walls he saw a javelin and picked.. abhi came with sword.. and found karan ready with javelin.. he ran and attack with sword but karan stop the attack with.. javelin he made sword on other side.. rolled inside and kicked his elbow with his shoulder which was already hurt with bullet..abhi fall down and sword also..
Abhi - ahhh
karan shock.. the blood started ozzing from his shoulder...Abhi kept hand on that..
Abhi - ahhhhh
Karan started moving towards him
Karan (evil) - oho goli lagi thi na tujhe yaah.. tere iss war ne mujhe bahut dard se tadpaya ha abhijeet or tune bhi mujhe yeh ek pura din tadpaya ha.. ab meri bari..
he throw the javelin.. hold abhi's collar and throw him towards the pillar started hitting his hurted shoulder with punch.. again and again listening abhi 's scream.. and his upper body fill with blood karan was getting more power..
Abhi - ahhhhh..
karan hold abhi's neck made him bend he kicked his knee hard on his wound.. he falls down..Abhi started breathing heavily..
Karan smile evilly took out the knife from pocket..
Karan - esi dard naak maut du ga na ki teri atma upar.. kampte hi jae gi..
he came near him hold his neck tightly from and throw him towards pillar again.. from one hand he hold abhi's neck and second knife he was going to attack..when abhi hold his hand from the hand that was hurt.. and other on his neck.. but his grio was weak due to injury.. karan started bringing the knife close to the wound abhi was trying fully but karan was more powerful then him.. he brought the knife sharp edge of knife touch his wound..
Abhi - ahhhhhhh..
on other side..
Daya and acp also shock to hear the scream
Acp - abhijeet bahut gusse mein ha kai wo karan ko marna dale
Daya (teary) - yeh cheekh karan ki abhi ki ha sir..
Daya and everyone shock.. all ran out leaving jas with shreya.
on other side..
Purvi - yeh yeh awaz abhijeet ki thi..
she ran outside..
On other side..
Karan was smiling evilly seeing abhi in pain.. abhi was trying his best to keep away hold his neck and hand but still karan was strong.. abhi 's eyes was getting shut his grips become weak his hand left karan started inserting knife slowly.. his half knife went inside.. his wound.. suddenly two - three bullets hit him from back.. abhi smile.. as he know whose bullets it was.. karan fall down and closes his eyes.. all shocked to see abhijeet 's condition and were getting afraid..
Daya - abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Daya ran..near him purvi also came all saw purvi after 2 days.. purvi was dumbstruck seeing abhi's condition
Purvi - abhijeet..
she ran near him
abhi close his eyes.. and was going to fall like a life less body.. but daya hold him acp's eyes also become teary seeing his condition..daya started patting
Daya - abhi abhi hosh mein ao abhi... abhi.. (he started patting his cheeks..) abhi i am sorry abhi.. abhi mujhse naraz ho abhi plz hosh mein ao mera irad karne ka nahi tha abhi..
Akbar - daya yaha mene doctor bula liya ah yaha hospitals nahi ha isse bed par leta kar khoon rokne ki koshish karo..
daya picked him and took up
Acp went to other side.. and dialled..
Acp - hello salukhe
Dr. s - kya baat ha boss sab theek ha ghabrae hue lag rahe ho
Acp - salukhe abhijeet (he controls his tears)
Dr. s - yarr kya hua agge bola ga
Acp (tearly )- abhijeet ko tadpa tadoa kar mara gaya ha yarr.. uska khoon bahut nikal raha tu tu ajj yaha
Dr. s shock
Dr. s - pradyuman ho kya raha ha batae ga
Acp told him everything... dr. s shock
Dr. s - pradyuman calm down tujhe daya ko bhi sambhalna ha mein aa raha hu..
and he cut the call dr. s turned and looked at abhi's pic who was smiling and attacing his head with horse.. he sighted clean his tears and went
