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Chris, Johnson, Karin, and Newton arrived at the end of the river.
"I guess this is the end of the road." Newton said, looking at the rocks blocking their path.
"We still have to keep moving," Chris said. "Who knows if the creatures are going to catch up with us."
"You know, I have never seen the wilderness like this before," Johnson said.
"And where are we even going?" Karin said. "All I know is that we can't go back."
Chris checked his phone.
"We're in Utah."
Questions arose.
"Did we travel so far?" Johnson asked.
"It's only been a few hours!" Karin said.
"What's Utah?" Newton asked.
"Guys!" Chris stated, calming everyone down. "My uncle lives here."
"And?" Johnson said.
"He's nice and will probably let us stay with him."
"Where does he live?"
"Salt Lake City. It's not far from where we are."
The group walked off, not realizing they were being followed.
"I see them." A yellow earth foal with a bow on her head said.
"There he is..." A female orange pegasus foal added.
"And his accomplices..." A female white unicorn foal stated.
"Let's tail em."
"I feel embarrassed about this," Chris said.
Chris knocked on the door. His cousin came over to answer it.
"Oh, hello Chris." She said.
Chris's cousin then noticed Newton.
"Is that a unicorn?"
"Not a unicorn," Newton said. "I'm a hacker."
"It talks!"
Chris's uncle came out to see his nephew standing with his friends. After inviting them in, Chris explained everything.
"Tailing them was a success, Blossom." The orange pegasus foal said to the yellow earth foal.
"Okay Scooter, deploy the listening device," Blossom said to the orange pegasus foal.
"Beauty, get the listening device." Scooter said to the white unicorn foal.
Beauty gave Scooter the listening device. Blossom took out a blow gun and shot the device on the side of the house.
"..and we just escaped GTA style!" Chris said.
"That's how we're here," Karin said.
"We don't any of this Discord, but we'll be glad to help." Chris's uncle's wife said.
"But you must follow this.." Chris's uncle said. "You must stay inside or in the backyard at all times. We don't want anyone catching you out in the open."
"Got it," Chris said.
The writer awoke all alone in his cell. When no one was looking, he took out his phone and wrote a line on it. He was out of the cell.
"Hey!" A silver unicorn with a white mane named Misty Moonrise shouted.
The writer dodged a magic blast Misty shot. He wrote a line, getting the Dual Glaive in his hand. He emerged from cover blocking the magic and stabbing Misty on the head.
"That was too easy." The writer laughed.
Equesticles and Pegasisters arrived in the room.
"Take him out!" A Pegasister shouted.
The writer quickly wrote a line, forming a barrier preventing him from being shot by the bullets. He then ran for it.
"After him!" An Equesticle shouted.
Peter arrived back at Crimson Crusader's hideout.
"Good job, kid," Laura said.
"So what's next?" Peter asked.
"We're doing a big one. A prison breakout. We free the prisoners, we can have more allies on our side."
"Just point me in the direction," Peter said.
The writer found Unikitty and Newton in cells across from each other. He quickly freed them in no time.
"Let's get out of here." The writer said.
As the three ran down the halls, a female lavender earth pony with brown hair named Lucky Haze ambushed them.
"You're not going anywhere!" She said.
The writer tackled her down. She was met with a blow in the head to a wall.
"I wish we had our gear back," Unikitty said.
At the same prison where the three were being held, Peter, Dane, and Lazuli prepared the breaching charge.
"Okay, ready!"
A hole was blown into the wall. The pegasisters and Equesticles were met with Dane's shotgun blasts. Lazuli used a smoke bomb to flush the creatures out from cover. Peter finished them off with his pistol.
"Okay, move up!" Peter shouted.
The three ran up to see Newton, Unikitty, and the Writer running past them.
"Over here!" Lazuli yelled.
"Peter?" The writer said.
Newton and Unikitty embraced Peter.
"It's so good to see you," Newton said.
"I see them!" A yak stated.
Peter used his Riot Shield to block incoming bullets from Equesticles and Pegasisters. He then shot back with his pistol. A changeling surprised him from the side. The writer shoved him away while both Peter and the changeling scrambled for the gun. Peter got to it first and shot the changeling on the neck. Dane got to work freeing the prisoners. Lazuli covered for Peter while the latter was reloading.
"Is this everyone?" Peter shouted.
"Yeah!" Lazuli stated.
The group made their way to the exit.
"Escape helicopter's just ahead!" Peter stated.
The helicopter they were about to escape on exploded.
"What the?"
The group turned to find Pixie, the magician at Creature Con holding a grenade.
"You can't escape the great and powerful Pixie!"
Lazuli shot her semi-automatic rifle at Pixie, to no effect.
"What the?"
"You got to play a game!" Pixie taunted, forming multiple fake clones of herself. "Am I the real Pixie? Is it me? Or me?"
"There's too many of them!" Newton shouted.
Every time the group shot a clone, another one would appear out of nowhere. Peter surveyed the area around him.
"Dane! Turn on the sprinklers!" He said.
Dane ran off.
"What's your friend doing?" Pixie taunted. "Running like a coward?"
Dane activated the sprinklers. On contact with the clones, they disappeared, in contact with the real Pixie, she stayed there. Lazuli gunned her down.
"Laura, our escape transport is destroyed," Peter said.
"Copy that. Sending another one on your way."
It didn't take long to discover that Chris's cousin was an Equestranaut fan.
"What? Can I not enjoy the show?" She said.
"It's just that we were chased out of our homes by them."
"But I'm not one of them!" She defended herself.
"I know you aren't," Chris said. "But we have to make sure of that."
Scooter, Blossom, and Beauty were spying on the group from an open window. Thanks to the device they planted on the house earlier, they can now listen in on their conversations.
"He's here," Blossom said on the radio.
Back in Chris's uncle's house, everyone was sitting around for dinner.
"I hope you like chili." Chris's uncle's wife said.
Newton tried his best not to gorge down. He failed, taking large spoonfuls and quickly eating them.
"Whoa, slow down." Chris's cousin said.
Suddenly, Discord popped out of nowhere.
"What the? What are you doing here?" Chris's uncle said.
"I want him!" Discord said, grabbing Newton.
"Help!" screamed Newton.
The group tried to tackle Discord down, but Discord teleported all four of them away before anyone could do anything.
"What the heck just happened here?" Chris's aunt said.
Hacker Newton was thrown into a cell by a female cyan-colored pegasus with a rainbow mane named Angel Aura.
"Get in here." She said, locking the cell.
Newton still had his phone, but the cell he was in wasn't electronically locked. He was stuck in there.
"There he is, Discord," Aurora said. "The one who killed Shy Fly."
Discord appeared in his cell.
"You, Terror-Newt, have made me go on my bad side."
"Terror Newt?" Newton said. "Was that the first thing you came up with?"
Discord ignored that question.
"According to the gear you had on you, you seem to be some sort of technician or engineer. Is this true?"
"I don't build that kind of stuff, my friend Leon does for me."
"Last I heard Leon was in charge of the Storm Realm."
"That could be a different Leon."
"That's you being you. Denial of everything. Stella Diamond and Crystal Nova, keep an eye on him." Discord said. "I've got a date with the Warrior."
Stella Diamond and Crystal Nova were a black and white earth pony and pale yellow pegasus respectively. They were taunting Newton with his gear.
"What is this?" Stella said, looking at a spider-bot.
Newton took out his phone and activated the spider-bot. Stella screamed in pain as it latched itself onto her. Crystal tried to help her, but Newton activated another spider-bot which knocked out as well. He reached into the bars and got the keys from Crystal's body. As he unlocked the cell, he made sure to lock the bodies in his prison cell before leaving.
As with the previous chapters, more OC's used:
Misty Moonrise- Emylia Hawke
Lucky Haze- Centchi
Angel Aura- VioletRose13
Stella Diamond- Stella Diamond
Crystal Nova- Stella Diamond
