I'm thinking of overhauling this story and in desperate need of a beta. I had a really excellent one who was just wanting to work on their thing for a while, which is cool and I am so happy for them. The other just tore into me and told me I wasn't a serious writer and come back WHEN I could take the time to actually write. I'm so close to saying forget it all together, so this is a last-ditch effort.
