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on other side
purvi enter in the room
Jas - baat hui maharaj se
Shreya - kya kehte vo.. kya faisla lene ja rahe ha
Purvi - pata nahi
Jas - pata nahi matlab?
Purvi - maharaj apne kamre mein aram kar rahe ha acp sir ne bola ki unse apne sawal puchna theek nahi kal raaj tilak ke baad jo sabha hogi vo hi faisla hoga
both shocked.
Shreya - humare bhaiya yaha fase hue ha or vo aram kar rahe ha yeh kya baat hui
Purvi - shreya shaant ho jao acp sahab ne kaha ki daya gaya ha chanbeen karne gaye ha..
soon a lady gaurd came with clothes..
Gaurd - yuvarani raaj mata ka kehna ha ki kal apko bhi raaj tilak mein maharani ke pad par namaza jaega isi liye app yeh vastr dharan kar lijiye ga
Purvi looked at jas who was tensed and then shreya who started looking here and there..
Purvi - (to gaurds) kehdo unhe ki humne maharaj abhijeet se nahi senior inspector abhijeet se shaadi rachane ka faisla kiya tha abhi hui nahi toh maharani ka pad mera nahi hoga raja ko agar insab ke baad bhi Maharaja ka padd sambhalna ha toh vo khushi khushi sambhale lekin mein nahi..
gaurd left
In abhi's room he was alone moving to and fro
gaurd came
Gaurd - maharaj yuvrani ne vastr or pad ka tyag kardiya (abhi shock)
Abhi - kya kaha unhone (gaurd narrated what she said abhi sigheted)
Abhi - ekant..
gaurds left
Abhi - mein chahta tha ki sab iss khushi mein shamil ho lekin yaha toh sab akela hi chod gaya.. hey bhagwaan akbar ki izzat ab sirf tere hath ha..
Next morning
abhi got ready in goden sherwani he looked at the mirror and felt odd..
Acp - abhijeet abhi tak taiyar nahi hue..
Abhi - bus hogaya..
Acp - nahi nahi nahi abhi kaha ek chizz ki kaami ha abhi bhi
Abhi - kya..
Acp - khushi tumhare chehre par nahi ha abhijeet
Abhi - sir mere chahete yaha nahi ha toh mein kese khush ho sakta hu daya yaha nahi ha purvi bhi shayad sath nahi de rahi..
Acp - abhijeet bache hota ha lekin ab kya kar sakte ha halat hi ese ha ab yeh sab chodo or chalo.. yagy ke liye or muskan rakho praja mein bhi khushi rahe taki..
On other side..
Abhi and acp came ...abhi looked at shreya who just joined hands in his respect but didn't saw him abhi also joined hand jas shook the hand
Jas - all the best and congratulations
Abhi shook hand and nodded
He went near purvi who downed head he sighted and was going to movie
Purvi - all the best and congratulations..
Abhi stop and turned purvi forward hand with a small smile a smile came on abhi's face to.. both shook the hand..
Abhi - thanku
Gaurds came
Gaurds - brahman ne apko or yuvraj kaushik ko anne ke liye bola ha..
Abho looks around but didn't found daya he downed his head acp patted his shoulder with smile
Acp - jao bache..
Abhi smile nad nodded and went
in yagy area
Brahaman -Om Namo Narayanay
both yuvraj sat near havan kund the brahmans lighted the kund
[Shlok]
both yuvraj closed his eyes and joined hands
Abhi - Maano To Bhagvaan, Na Maano To Paashaan
Dekho To Paashaan, Jo Pujo To Bhagvaan
Kaushik- Maano To Bhagvaan, Na Maano To PaashaanDekho To Paashaan, Jo Pujo To Bhagvaan
Acp was also waiting for daya but he was absent
Abhi - Maat Aksharo Ke Aage To Badh Nahin Sakta Paach Akshar
Gyaan Ki Aankhein Band Hai Jiski Dekh Sake Na Sach Ki Dagar
Kaushik - Maano To Bhagvaan, Na Maano To PaashaanDekho To Paashaan,
Jo Pujo To Bhagvaan
brahman - [Shlok] Om
brahman gave a big spoon to abhi abhi put the ghee hawan
Abhi - Jhooth Ke Aage Kabhi Na Jhukati Sachchaayi
Paap Ki Aandhi Bharosa Na Hila Paayi
Kaushik - Laakh Kar Le Virodh Koyi,
Mann Se Shraddha Nahin Jaaye
Raat Dishaahi Subah Ki Roshni Rok Na Paaye
Abhi - Vishnu Ne Barsaaya, Laxmi Ka Gharbaar
Mujh Mein Hai Samaaya Dono Ka Sansaar
both add the things and ended the hawan ceremony
Kaushik - Laakho Raajao Ko Jaane Ye
Lekin Rang Raajan Se Na Koyi Mahaan
Brahman - [Shlok]
both got up and made the way towards the hall kaushik was holding the kings umbrella after
Maar Na Paaye Kabhi Bhi Nyaay Ko AnyaayNa Bujhe Saanson Mein Praan, Jyot Jalati Jaay
Abhi was really missing akbar and daya for this moment he took the crown..
Maar Na Paaye Kabhi Bhi Nyaay Ko Anyaay Na Bujhe Saanson Mein Praan, Jyot Jalati Jaay
he sat on the throne the elder brahman came and put water throw in his head thraw a shell with mantras
Ek Jhonka Hawa Ka Aaye, Deep Ki Baati Tham Jaaye
abhi said something in brahmans ears who nodded
Par Wahi Jhonka Chaah Ke Bhi Chand Ko Na Bujha PaayeGhumi?
brahmans - maharaj apna raj tilak unke pita pradyuman ji ke hatho karwana chahte ha (acp shock he looked at abhi gave a small smile)
Woh Ramaayi,
Laagi Woh Lagan
he closes his eyes acp applied tilak on his forehead and made him wore the turban all showers the flowers
Vishnu Ke Alaava Jaane Kuch Na Mann
Haal Hogi Teri Andhi Aankhon Ki Mushqil
Abhi open his eyes and his eyes fall on ronak who was angrily talking with the gaurds
Gyaan Ki Aankhein Khol Ke Vishnu Se Tu Mil
large trumpets and drums were blown and banged indicates of the happiness
People - maharaj abhijeet ki jai maharaj abhijeet ki jai...
Abhi - sandhya ki sabha arambh karne se pehle or mirazpur ke sahensha akbar ke khilaf faisla sunnane ke liye.. hum praja kuch mangna chahte ha..
People looked at eachother and started gossiping abhi got app become silent
Abhi - dekhiye kal sabkuch shighr honne se hum apne vichar nahi rakhpae kintu ajj rakhna chahte ha.. hum chahte ha apse ek uphar.. ek vachan ke roop mein or vachan yeh ki ajj se app jat patt, dharam ke bare mein bhed bhav karna bhool jaiye anytha kuch bhi bura ho sakta ha yaad rakhiye ishwar ne hume sirf ek hi dharam dekar bheja ha vo ha manavta app log ussi dharam ki pooja kare.. usse hi adda kare.. yeh sab chod de.. admi ko dharam se karam se yaad rakhe
All down his head
Abhi sat down
Abhi - Akbar ko bulaya jae diwan sahab
diwan lookes at mayur indicates gaurds who brought akbar the metal chains were in his neck hands and feets..shreya eyes become teary seeing
Abhi (angrily) - mera hukum tha ki inhe sirf kaid kiya jae lekin bediyo mein nahi
Gaurds down his head
Abhi - kholo inhe..
Gaurd came and open akbar who was very angry..
Diwan - faisla sunaiye maharaj..
Abhi helplessly looked at acp.. who also got worried now..
Voice - ruk jaiye maharaj..
all turned abhi's heart become happy and relaxed daya came holding one mens neck..
Daya - faisla sunnana ha toh ispar sunaiye akbar par nahi yeh ha asli doshi.. uss ladki ha.. (indicates the girl standing aside teh same girl)
Abhi (shock) - yeh toh din e ilahi ka gaurd ha jo mere katghare ke agge tha..
Akbar - areh ha
Daya - maharaj yeh gaurd nahi salim ka right hand ha...
and he throw in front of abhi the man was crying..
Daya - isne yeh kabool kiya ha ki ladki ke sath zabardasti isne ki ha or pariwarr walo ko bandi bana liya taki ladki akbar par ilzaam lage or gurudev ko bhi isi ne mara tha..
Abhi hold the collar and picked him..
Abhi (angrily) - kiske kehne par kiya yeh sab bol
Abhi (shouted angryily) - bol..
he slapped him the man falls from the stairs.. all gather and trio girls including akbar trembles but acp and daya know it was his daily avtar..
Gaurd - s... s.. sardar ke kehne par sahab sardar salim
All shocked.. all remember the attacks of abhi entery of karan
Daya - kaha par ha vo
Ahhhhh..
abhi fall down on floor..
Daya - abhijeet..
Akbar - maharaj..
Daya and akbar ran acp kept abhi's head in his lap
Acp - salukhe dekh..
Salukhe took out the arrow from abhi 's shoulder abhi was controlling his shout due to pain.. suddenly abhi looses his conscious..
Acp - abhi abhi..
Daya - a.. a.. abhi ankhe kholo abhi..
Mayur (to gaurds) - phail jao har jagha dhundo prahar karne wale ko..
Acp - daya abhijeet ko uthao or room mein lejao..
daya picked abhi in lap and ran salukhe looked at the arrow
Dr s - pehle chithi thi ajj yeh saffed saffed powder.. kuch toh gadbad ha..
on other side
Dr. s checked abhi.. and came out
Dr. s - boss abhijeet teer ki wajha se nahi powder ki wajha se behosh hua ha thodu der mein hosh mein ajae ga..
All looked at eachother..
Dr s - abhi usse aram karne do esa lagta ha kal puri rata nahi soya..
In room
Daya - is salim ko jaldi pakad na chahiye hume..
But acp was busy in his own worl
maya jaal bich chuka ha..
teer kaman se nikal chuke ha..
Samye phir wahi ghoom kar aa raha ha... phir dohrae ga
cheeku ko sambhalo pradyuman
Akbar - mujhe samjhna chahiye tha maharaj ki majboori ko praja ke karan vo bandhe hue the raaj dharam se
Daya - ek bar yeh sba theek hojae pheer sab mumbai chale ge abhi ko lekar haina sir..? (but he didn't reply all looked at him) sir..
Acp - (dreamy tone) samye ka pahiya phir chala ha, maya jaal bich chuka ha abhi phas raha ha addhe teer abhi ko lag chuke ha jesi hatya meri hui vese abhijeet ki hogi..
all shocked..
Daya - yeh kya bol rahe ha sir app..
Acp - yeh maharaj aditya ne bola tha unse..
all got confused
Akbar - jesi hatya maharaj aditya ki hui.. (suddenly akbar shock he remembers something..
isme maharaj ki koi galati nahi ha... uday garh se phir natta jodho
Akbar - hay khuda (to all) maharaj.. and he ran out side.. all ran after him
on other side
kaushik was going to enter in room
kaushik - pata nahi bhaiya par hamla kyu ho..
but he colled with man.. he saw the sword..
Kaushik - talwar yeh toh sirf mere bhaiya or akbar ke pass ha..
man understand he started running.. ae rook.. kaushik took out the sword.. ronak came out and looked and shock
Ronak - hey bhagwaan kahi yeh mooh na khol de.. pakde jane ke baad..
he started running towards other side..
on other side
Akbar open the door all shocked abhi was not there
Acp - abhijeet yaha nahi ha..
Akbar - unhe jaladi dhundo..
all started searching but didn't found abhi..
Akbar remembers
jesi hatya meri hui vese hi abhijeet ki bhi hogi
Akbar - jaladi chat par chalo..
on the terrace..
Abhi step one and stand at the edge of the terrace.. and looked down.. spread his hand closed his eyes and left himself losse.. he fall down his foot slipped but before he went directly to the ground one hand hold his hand...
Daya - abhijeet yeh kya kar rahe ho..
akbar came and hold his second hand.. both pulled him up..
Team also came and shock..
acp herd a voice
mere sath ao pradyuman
acp shock he was none other then aditya-s
on other side..
Ronak ran down the corridor.. basment he was going to enter in room but suddenly collied and fall down.. suddenly a metal chain came on his neck and started dragging him...he shocked no one was there..
Voice - ese hi ghasita tha na mujhe jab ilaj ke naam par iss kamre mein laya tha..
Ronak shock it was aditya's voice.. he pushed teh chain and got up..
but recived a kick on his stomach.. and falls down..
Aditya - mere bete ko hath lagane ki koshish ki..
he punched his face..
Aditya hold his collar.. and pulled..
Aditya - meri hatya ko atmhatya ka roop diya tunne
he throws him towards pillar..
Aditya hold his collar
Aditya - (chewing tone) dil toh karta ha tujhe yehi gad do lekin kya karu mera beta tere khoon fass sakta kanoon tujhe khud saza de ga..
he punched his cheeks tightly.. ronak fall near acp's feet who had just came he was shocked to see aditya.. both looked at eachother aditya 's eyes become teary
Adi - mujhe mera insaf mil gaya pradyuman.. mujhe mukti milgayi ha pradyuman mere chiku kya dhyan rakhna.. har waqt usse sahi raste par lana..
Acp 's eyes become teary..
Adi - (tearly) agar tumne usse kabool karliya na pradyuman samjho mein jaha kahi bhi hu khush hu.. mein jeete ji apne bete ko kabhi bada hote nahi dekh paya pradyuman marne ke baad mein harwaqt uske sath tha jab vo hospital mein maut se ladhta tab, jab tum arop lagate tab, jab vo raaj singhasan par betha tab, jab usne meri bahu se sagaii ki tab bhi mein har pal uske sath lekin ab nahi hounga mere lautne ka waqt ho chala ha pradyuman..chiku kya dhyan rakhna pradyuman.. (acp nodded he step back closed his eyes and weny away with sunlight.)
on other side..
Abhi came into counsious and looked around.. he tried to got up
Daya - aram se..
Daya helped him
Abhi - mere kandhe par abhi bhi dard ha..
Akbar - apko yaad ha ki app atmhatya karne jaa rahe the
Abhi shocked
All herd the voice
Voice - chal andar
Kauhsik came draging one person and throw him on floor.. his cover open..
all shocked
Akbar (angry) - salim.. tu akhir kar mil hi gaya..
Daya - or kon mila ha tere sath (shouted) bol
Salim - r... ronak..
suddenly ronak fell down near him.. acp came
Kaushik (shocked) - dad apne
Ronak - (crying) ha mene hi abhijeet ke mata pita ko alag kiya (all shocked) mene hi mara maharaj aditya ko..
Acp - (shouted) kyu mara tumhe
Ronak - pata chal gaya tha unhe ki unka beta mumbai mein sab kuch bechkar uske sath zindagi bithana chahte the chain se apne bete se doori sehn nahi kar paa rahe the..
(abhi closed his eyes tears slip from his eyes)
Ronak - Akbar ke pita ke baad vo batte sabse pehel mere sath bantne lage..mein chahta tha ki maharaj aditya ke baad mera beta raja banne lekin Abhijeet ka naam maharaj rozz lete.. mene unki hatya ka plan banaya.. or baad mein atmhatiya dikha di.. 23 saal ke baad hi raaj singhasan mil sakhta tha ronak badha nahi tha kahi se Raaj mata ko bhi pata chap gaya ki Abhijeet zinda ha.. unhone gaurds lagwa diye..
Acp - or jab abhijeet aya toh usse marne ke plan banne lag padhe
Daya - agar esa hi tha Kaushik par apne bete par humla
Ronak - taki shakk abhijeet par jae
Akbar - or salim sathi kese bana
Salim - mujhe udaygarh ki dosti manzoor nahi thi.. akbar ke pita ko yaha badnaam kiya gaya tha chor ke roop mein jese ajj akbar ko kiya gaya baad mein achanak yeh baat unhe pata chal gayi mene phir kheer mein jeher mila kar unhe khila di or unhe bhi marr dala..
Kaushik - (tearly angrily )dad mein khud pairo par khada hona chahta tha layak tha mein khud nahi chahiye thi yeh raaj singhasan ek kursi ke peeche apne bhaiya ko anath kardiya kaka ko mar dala nafrat ha mujhe apse.. nafrat..
Acp - tum dono ke sare hisab kitab ab kanoon kare ga (to gaurds) lejao...
Gaurds took ronak.. and salim
Abhi - e.. e.. ekant..
All understand he needs a time.. to disgest the sour truth..
Acp nodded that he and daya will stay.. purvi stand on door with all
rest all went out.. acp came near abhi who had hide his face in his hands.. acp hug him abhi hug his waist and hide his fae and brust out crying daya 's eyes become teary.. trio share a together hug..
Soon abhi calm down.. daya forward the water...abhi drank.. it..
Acp - abhi uss ainne ki taraf dekho.. tumhare dad tumhare andar hi hmm sab kehte ha ki tum apne pita par gaye ho..
Abhi - m.. m.. mein ek acha beta nahi ban paya..
Acp - abhi tum unke ache bete hi ho or rahoge tab jab tum muskurao ge.. maharaj aditya ko apne chiku ki muskurane bahit pyari ha (a smile came on abhi's face)
Daya - yeh chiku kon ha ?
Abhi - c...c.. chiku.. k.. k. kon chiku
Acp smile..
Akbar - yeh chiku mene sunna ha..
Kaushik - ha mene bhi sunna ha yeh chiku..
Shreya - mene bhi pata nahi kiske mooh se..
suddenly trio saw each other and brust out laughter
Shreya - hey bhagwaan hum kese bhool gaye daya and other got confused
Abhi - bus karo yarr (abhi got embarrassed)
Daya - areh batao ge bhi..
Akbar - daya maharaj chiku tumhare samne bethe ha..
all shocked.. kya!! abhi felt embarrassed..
Kaushik - bachpan mein bhaiya bahut chidte the or cute the toh kaka ne inka naam chiku rakha tha..
Daya - shukar ha yeh naam permanent nahi ha..kesa lagta log abhi - daya ki jagha chi-daya kehte..
Acp - esa lagta ki daya ne cheek mari ha
all laughed on it
P. F - sahi kaha samdhi ji apne meri kya izzat reh jati london mein ki great Malhotra ki beti ki shaado cheeku se hui ha
Purvi - sahi kaha dad card mein bhi kya chapwate purvi weds chiku.. ewe kitna ghisa pita naam lagta abhivi badiya ha chivi nahi
Abhi - areh kaha train leja rahe ho abhijeet hi naam mera..
Kaushik and akbar - lekin humare liye toh maharaj chiku hi rahe ge
Akbar - maharaja chiku ki jai..
Abhi - ruko tumhari toh..
Akbar and kaushik rana.. abhi ran after them..
Daya - areh abhi kya kar rahe ho chot lagi ha tumhe..
daya ran after them
And after some time the officers came and sign the bond with the government the left for the mumbai for abhivi and dayareya marriage kaushik also proposed jas and settled with R. M in London.. the palace become visitor side mayur handle the security and diwan as the manager of the palace
HAPPY ENDING
ending mein bada ronna aya likhne waqt mere according ajj emotional hogaya chapter nahi?
