jack sat there for over an hour waiting and hoping that Lisa was ok, he looked up as tim walked through the doors.

"hey jack, how is she" asked tim, concern in his voice

" I still haven't heard anything" said jack looking up at him

"oh and by the way the horses are back at heartland and Parker is with lou" noted tim

" thanks"said jack sadly

" she's going to be ok old man, just trust her"said tim

the door to the main ward opened and a doctor walked in.

"I'm looking for Lisa bartlet's family" he said

"yup over here"said jack

" hi I'm doctor walton I'm looking after mrs bartlet" said dr walton

" yes what can you tell us" asked tim

" well mrs bartlet has several broken ribs and had inhaled a lot of smoke she also hit her head pretty hard and was knocked out, and we have put her in a coma for at least 48 hours" said dr walton

" oh ok thank you, um can I please see her"asked jack

" yes you can"nodded the Dr


jack walked to Lisa's room as he got closer he started to feel guilty, but he didn't know what for. He opened the door and stepped inside.

He sat down in a chair by her bed and took her hand in his, his thumb stroked over her wedding and engagement rings he then raised her hand to his lips and placed a ever so loving kiss upon it.

"hey lise how are you, that's a silly question I know cause you can answer, god lise I am so so sorry I don't even know what it was that I did wrong but I'm just saying that I'm sorry, iv neglected you and I know how you feel and I'm really sorry, it's just that ty's death hit me hard and I felt like I lost a son, "

"but I never ever thought to ask how you were feeling and I'm so sorry for that"said jack on the verge of tears

" lisa I just want you to know that I love you so much, so much it hurts,and I will do whatever it takes to make this marriage work, just please don't leave me" cried jack he wept and put his head on her hand and cried and cried he didn't even notice lou amy and tim standing outside the door all had tears in there eyes ( well maybe not tim)

lou was the first to speak but just as she was about to say something the alarm went of on Lisa's heart monitor, jack jumped out of the chair, Lisa's hand still in his. Doctors came rushing in and Dr walton ushered jack, lou and amy out of the room where they stood looking in through the window wondering if they would ever see her again.

And jack felt a pain in his heart that he hadn't felt in a very long time.

Sorry for the clif hanger but I wanted to make it suspenseful. and don't worry jisa fans Lisa ain't gonna die. Not in this story anyway.