Hello, this is my first story and as i've always loved reading fanfic

I wanted to try my hand at it.

So i dont expect any gold material...or ever bronze on my first try,but hey i'll learn(hopefuly)

If you can tell me as you read on what i need to improve upon or aleast make better or more entertaining,please feel free :)

If you call recommended any stories with the following:

1)story structure so i dont make endless lines of scribbling,no spacing,grammar,ect...

2)inspiration so i have so clear thought of good fanfiction material

3)romance or lemons since i have...no clue how...i want to try...but idea where to start and i hate storys where any guy can go up to a woman and say" hey...your hot!...wanna bang?" And she says"wow,your hot and funny and smart and stuff,you must work out!,sure wanna do it your house,your car,or on the floor!"...i really dont want that...ever

4)make suggestion on how the story could go and i'll consider it. Like what world to go to or a power to acquire or a person to recruit to the Oc's side.

5) or some simply helpful tips would be nice and appreciate :)

Thank you ;)