I'm renaming Olivia to Hachi so that the character won't seem to be a copy of a character from Baki that he's inspired by. Also the name Hachi has more lore behind it.

Menma walked inside the house and saw Suigetsu leaving out the front door. Menma ran up to him and asked him, "Where ya going?"-Menma.

"Nowhere special, I'm just going out for a walk. So are you gonna spend your time looking at that gun today?"-Suigetsu. Menma was surprised by the word he used and asked, "Gun?"

Suigetsu shrugged his shoulders, "Well the guy who shot you kept on screaming I NEED MY GUN while he was burning. So that's why I said that."-Suigetsu.

Menma accepted that answer with a nod and answered his earlier question, "Well I'm just gonna spend my time on the gun today, I might stay in tomorrow too. I promised Minako that I wouldn't be acting so recklessly anymore."-Menma.

Suigetsu smirked and said, "Ya know you've been awfully close with her lately."-Suigetsu. Menma had a light blush and said, "It's not like that. We're just really good friends. We both have traits that we like about each other."-Menma.

Suigetsu put his hand on his chin and said, "Oh really like what?"-Suigetsu. Menma cleared his throat and said, "Well she her natural nature is to help other people even if it hurts her. Financially for example, how she feeds all of the homeless. And she's kind, welcoming, and"- Menma stopped his rambling when he noticed that Suigetsu was holding back a giggle.

"You sound like you're talking about someone you have a crush on!"-Suigetsu. Menma blushed more and accepted defeat. He smiled and said, "Whatever man, just go for your walk."-Menma.

Suigetsu turned around and started leaving out the front door but he stopped and said, "Oh, I almost forgot to say. After you were unconscious I went to the prisoners cell's and freed them." Suigetsu looked down, "There conditions weren't pretty. All of them had malnourished bodies they all looked dead inside. I initially thought the prisoners would be used as slaves but in the condition they're in they couldn't be used that way. So I'm not sure what they were there for, can you guess why?"-Suigetsu.

Menma thought for a minute and he remembered what he saw when he was held captive in Orochimaru's hideout before. "The only 2 things I can think of are torture or experimentation. But although Orochimaru is a gigantic sadist, he won't waste his time torturing people if he isn't gonna get something out of it. So they were most likely being held there so that he could use them in his experiments."-Menma.

Suigetsu nodded and accepted that answer. "Alright, that's all I wanted to know. See ya later." Suigetsu responded as he started walking away. Menma made up his mind for what he'll be doing until he fully recovers. Today he will spend all day home mostly looking at the gun, and tomorrow we'll go out to see the families of the multiple people he's killed like he promised. But he'll have to be careful because he doubts he'll be completely healed by tomorrow.

Menma heading back towards his room and walked down the hall. He glanced back into Nozomi's room and saw that she was still asleep. He continued walking and arrived at his door and opened it.

He walked inside and was half expecting to see Adonai standing in the corner of his room. Once he confirmed he wasn't there he looked at the gun on his desk and sat down in front of it.

Menma picked up the weapon and examined it. Menma tried remembering what happened when the man used the gun but couldn't remember anything. "Damn, the only thing I remember about the weapon is that it's the reason why I can't remember."-Menma.

Before Menma could dwell on his thoughts any further he heard a knock on the door and said, "Come in." The person who knocked the door opened and revealed them self as Mina.

Mina walked up to him and pulled out blueprints and a guide. "Last week I felt bad about not going with you so I decided to go to the hideout by myself. And once I went there I quickly realized that you and Suigetsu already left so I decided to go searching for anything you might've missed. And I found an archive room that had that information about the gun in them."-Mina.

Menma smiled and said, "Thanks Mina, was there anything else there?"-Menma. Mina nodded and responded, "Yes, I also found out the reason why people were brought there, they were"-"They were being used for experimenting right?"-Menma.

"It seems like you already known, but do you know why they're being experimented on? Or what they're being experimented on with?"-Mina.

Menma's interest was peaked and he asked, "No, could you tell me?"-Menma. Mina cleared her throat and said, "No one knows, you would think it's for his pursuit in knowledge but no one knows, apparently Kabuto asked him once and he just muttered about attaining divine knowledge and obtaining the golden eyes. It seems like he's been losing parts of what little sanity he's had in these past 2 years."-Mina.

Menma leaned back in his chair and said, "So he's still after me huh?"-Menma. "But, I do know what he's experimenting with." Menma signalled for her to continue and she said, "They are experimenting with 2 things. The first thing they are experimenting with is sage chakra. Apparently there's a clan that has a Kekki Genkai that let's them naturally absorb Sage energy. Although it seems like the majority of this clan is dead, but Orochimaru seems to have the last surviving member in his custody that he's using to experiment on the rest of the prisoners."-Mina.

Menma placed his hand bnb on his chin and said, "A Kekkei Genkai for nature energy huh? Did it say what the sage energy was like? Cause when I was with the toads in Mt.Myoboku he told me that there are all different kinds of sage energies."-Menma.

Mina shook her head and said, "No, that was all it said about it, but it did say his name was Jugo."-Mina. "Uh huh, well that's too bad but what was the other thing they were experimenting with?"-Menma.

Mina gained a reluctant look on her face and said, "The other one they did had to do with animals. The document described humans being tested on in multiple ways by mixing them with animals. Some of the ways they did this was... was by... sorry, I don't feel comfortable saying it."-Mina.

Menma understood and said, "That's ok, all I need to know is that it's bad and needs to be stopped." Menma stretched and said, "Is there anything else at all that you found out?"-Menma asked while taking a sip of water.

Mina smiled and said, "Well I found out where the Western hideout is."-Mina. Menma almost choked on his drink and had to regain his composure. After a few seconds he looked up at her and shot up out of his chair to ask, "Seriously?! Did you really find one so soon." After Menma finished his sentence he sat back down and rubbed his head to recover from the dizziness.

"Yes, in the archives it said that it was located near the Hachi tribute statue."-Mina. Menma had a curious look and asked, "The Hachi Tribute statue?" 'Where have I heard that name before?'-Menma.

"Yeah. What, you don't know who Hachi is yet?"-Mina. Menma shook his head and Mina responded, "That's surprising, you've been out in the village much longer than me but I know about the village hero." Menma was getting a little annoyed and said, "C'mon just tell me who he is."-Menma.

"He was the leader of the Hagetaka gang before they became evil. He was someone who liberated the sound village with just his Taijutsu alone!"-Mina.

"Taijutsu huh? That's interesting."-Menma. Mina frowned, "You seem to be acting pretty bland lately."-Mina. Menma rubbed the back of his head and said, "Oh really? I'm sorry, it must be a side effect of getting shot in the head. But I'll be back to normal soon...anyways, I'm glad that you were able to find out so much while I was unconscious, but I should get back to my work now."-Menma.

"Alright, well I don't have anything to do right now so I can sit here and watch for a minute." Mina stated as she sat on the bed.

Menma shrugged and turned towards the gun in his desk. He activated his sharingan and starting skimming through the documents and the blueprints.

Menma laid the papers back down on the desk and started talking, "It seems like this is the 1st successful model ever created. They attempted different designs for guns before this but they had problems like a lack of accuracy, or they were just too heavy. They managed to avoid the accuracy problem by creating a smaller barrel for the bullet, but sense the bullet is a lower caliber it does a lot less damage." Menma started rubbing his forehead. "Wow, I'm pretty sure if I created a spiral pattern inside the barrel that would fix the accuracy problem, but I'm glad they didn't think of that or else I would be dead."-Menma.

Mina pulled an ammo box and said, "Well they had a box filled with different kinds of bullets in it, so you can see which one of these goes with it."-Mina. Menma smiled and accepted the box.

"Just so you know there are only a few of each bullet in there, so where are you gonna get more? I could raid a warehouse if you want."-Mina. "That's not necessary, I can use my creation ability to make more bullets if I want."-Menma.

Menma resized the gun barrel and imprinted a spiral pattern inside of it. Mina had a confused look on her face and asked, "Hey Menma, why do you have your Rinnegan on?"-Mina.

Menma realized that his eyes were the steely purple rinnegan and also gained a confused look. He started thinking about how that could have happened, until he finally realized, "Hold on. My Yin Yang creation ability can only create things that are natural in this world, like rocks, water, and fruit. But this gun is a man made object." A lightbulb went off in Menma's head, "So that must mean! That the rinnegans 3rd ability is creating man made things, what an odd ability."-Menma.

Mina mocked him and said, "Ya know if you stopped wasting your time and read the rinnegan scroll already you would know all of the abilities."-Mina.

Menma pulled out the biggest bullet that said .500 sumisu and esson and loaded it into the gun. Menma aimed it outside and paused for a second. "In the documents it also said that it's extremely loud and they've been working on some kind of suppressor for it. But I wanna test how loud it is first before I make one."-Menma.

Menma felt an instinctive feeling that he shouldn't shoot it, but he ignored it and aimed at a tree. Menma used his thumb and pulled back on the hammer and his hand to pull back on the slide of the gun."Be careful, the document said that the first few people who tested the prototype broke their wrist when they fired the version with big bullets."-Mina.

Menma responded, "I know." And placed both of his hands firmly on the grip. Menma placed his finger on the trigger and pulled. The gun fired an explosion of smokeless powder and an extremely loud bang went along with it.

After a few seconds Mina recovered from the loud sound and looked over at Menma. "Yeah that was extremely loud, you'll definitely need to make a suppressor for it."-Mina. Mina looked at the tree and saw the hole in the tree that the gun left behind.

Mina got off the bed and walked towards Menma. "So what do you think of it?"-Mina. No response.

Mina asked again, "Hey Menma did you hear me?"-Mina. Mina still got no response and looked at him. His hands were shaking and he was sweating profusely. He dropped the gun and Mina caught it before it could hit the ground and possibly go off.

Mina hid the gun under the bed and got worried, so she called out to him, "Menma! Are you ok?!?"-Mina.

Menma did not respond and kept on shaking. Mina quickly figured out what was happening to Menma and took a deep breath.

She lightly grabbed Menma and guided him back onto the chair and pointed outside at all of the flowers. "Hey Menma, you see all the beautiful flowers?"-Mina. Menma lightly said, "Yes." "Alright that's good, now you know that you're safe here right? There's nothing here that can harm you. That's correct right?"-Mina.

Menma stopped shaking and he lightly said, "Yeah, that's right."-Menma. After a few seconds Menma blinked and it seemed like he returned back to normal. Mina gave Menma a towel to wipe off his sweat and Memma gladly accepted it.

Once Menma was done rubbing off his sweat he asked Mina, "What just happened to me?"-Menma. "Judging from what I'm seeing and how I brought you back to normal I'd say you just had a PTSD attack."-Mina.

Menma was silent for a second then looked down, "Well, I never saw the gun the day I got shot so it must have been the gunshot itself right?"-Menma. Mina nodded and Menma sighed.

"Out of all the things I could have gotten PTSD for..." Mina tried to cheer him up, "Well this thing was just invented not that long ago so it's not like a lot of people have it."-Mina. Menma smiled and said, "Yeah, you're right. But judging from how useful it is it will sell quickly if they ever get the chance to start selling it."-Menma.

Mina kneeled next to Menma and put her hands in his and smiled. "Well then that's just something else we'll have to work on together, if they ever start trying to sell them we can bust them. Or we could destroy all the guns so that they don't have a chance to sell them in the first place."-Mina.

Menma gave her a heart warming smile and said, "God I love how optimistic you are. Don't worry, in a couple of days I'll be back to normal and we'll be taking out the entire gang!"-Menma.

Mina's smile became wider and she sat in Menma's lap and hugged him tightly, "That's the Menma I know!"-Mina. Menma hugged her back and said, "I think I might start using the gun so I should start working on a silencer before anything else, where'd you put the gun?"-Menma.

"It's under the bed."-Mina. Mina sat there for a few seconds and Menma asked, "Can you go get it please?"-Menma. "This is too comfy. Can we stay like this for a few more minutes?"-Mina. Menma sighed and said, "Ok."

After a few seconds Menma thought about what she said earlier. "Ya know if you stopped wasting your time and read the rinnegan scroll already you would know all of the abilities."-Mina.

Menma looked over Mina's shoulder at the gun under the bed and activated his EMS. The space around the gun started to warp and it disappeared. Menma unwrapped his left hand from around Mina's body and had the gun reappear in his hand. He placed it on the table and pulled out the rinnegan scroll from the kamui dimension.

He opened up the scroll and it was separated into 7 different sections. The Deva, Asura, Human, Animal, Preta, and Naraka path. A few of the paths seemed oddly familiar to him and the first path he looked at was the human path.

'I can absorb the soul of someone within a 5 meter radius, the benefit of this is that I receive their memories and once I have their soul I can do nothing or give it to the king of hell. Ok, well I already know this one, but it's good to know this extra info.'-Menma. Menma read further down and the next one was the Preta path.

'The Preta path allows the user to create an invisible barrier around themselves that nullifies and absorbs all forms of chakra it comes in contact with. Hmm, I didn't know that I had a rinnegan ability like this but the God seal already does the same thing better so I'll just stick with the seal.'-Menma. Menma read down further and came across the words Asura path.

Menma read through it a few lines and thought ,'Wow, I can do a lot with this. I can have 6 arms, 3 faces, and a serrated folded blade around my waist??? Hmm... why would I want to have 3 faces?' Menma read further down the section until he reached the bottom and he thought, 'Ok. I doubt I'll end up using a lot of these but I'll keep them in mind, especially the one where I can turn my body into weapons. But what the hell is a missile?'-Menma.

Menma decided to ponder on the thought later and read further down the section. The next section was labeled Naraka path. Menma finished reading it and thought, 'Ok, this basically the human path but more stylish. Although with this one there is a chance that they could still live.'-Menma. Menma's eyes skimmed over to the next section and it read Animal Path.

Menma skimmed through it and thought, "Wow, this puts the toads to shame. Immortal animals 8 different immortal animals that can overwhelm opponents. And there's a dog that just multiplies into multiple dogs and gains more heads the more it gets cut off?' Menma smiled, 'This doesn't even seem fair.'-Menma.

Menma finally reached the bottom of the page and read the words Deva Path. Once Menma got done reading it he had a grin on his face. 'I can pull people and objects towards me by manipulating the attractive forces with a technique called Bansho Ten'in. And I can use a technique called Shinra Tensei which allows me to use a repulsive force that repels everything around me like people and ninjutsu. I can even repel something that's already stuck to me, but there is usually a 5 second cool down time between each use. And also...' Menma's eyes widened, 'If I charge up the attack with enough chakra, I can level an entire village'?!?-Menma.

Menma was getting excited and his legs started bouncing. Menma could hear some low moans from Mina and he realized she was sleeping. He tried to calm down and stopped moving. Once she stopped making noises Menma read the last power. 'Chibaku Tensei is an ability that requires me to make a small black sphere, and once it's created I hurl it into the sky and it will generate an extremely powerful gravitational force. Once that happens the sphere will attract literally everything in the vicinity until a meteorite of your desired size is created!!!'-Menma.

Menma thrusted up out of his chair and Mina woke up with a loud moan. Menma forgot that Mina was still attached to him and pressed their skin closer to each other in a hug while rubbing the scroll. "Oh your so glorious, how am I just now realizing how much I needed this?"-Menma.

Mina became extremely red and responded, "M-Menma!?! What are you s-saying?! T-this is e-embarrassing!"-Mina. Menma got over his joy and realized that Mina was still there. He stopped hugging her so hard and apologized to Mina, "Mina! I'm sorry I just got too excited while reading this scroll."-Menma.

Mina started to Blush more when she realized the position they were in and she asked, "Yes I forgive you, but can you let me go now?"-Mina. Menma noticed that she still had her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck and he started unwrapping himself, "You're right, this position is rather provocative."-Menma.

While he was unraveling himself Mina became lost in her thoughts and was thinking, 'Menma is really weird. Literally any other guy would have got an erection from being in this position but Menma doesn't even blush, he realizes his mistake and apologizes like it's completely normal for him.' Mina gained a mixed look and thought, 'How strange, I can't think of why.'-Mina.

After a few more seconds Mina realized Menma's lips were moving and she snapped out of her thoughts. "Hey Mina, can you unwrap yourself from around me?"-Menma. "Oh right."-Mina.

Mina separated herself from him and landed on the ground. She fixed her hair and asked, "So what did you get so excited about?"-Mina. "I decided to take your advice about reading the scroll and read it while you were sleeping."-Menma.

Mina gained a mixed smile and rubbed the back of her head. 'Well it wasn't really advice but alright.' Mina stretched and said, "Well I think I'm gonna leave now, is there anything you need from me?"-Mina.

"No, for the rest of the day I'll be perfecting a way to use the gun, then tomorrow night we can take care of all the guns being created."-Menma. Mina nodded and was about to walk out of the room but Menma stopped her. "And one last thing, don't tell Minako about my PTSD. If she knew then that she wouldn't let me touch another gun in my life."-Menma.

A small chuckle came from under Mina's breath and she said, "If I'm being honest I don't want you shooting it either. But I want to believe that you'll be able to perfect the weapon."-Mina.

Memna gave her his signature thumbs up and said, "You don't have to worry about me, have faith! I promise that I'll be able to perfect the gun by tomorrow, and if I don't then that's my fault! So don't feel bad about not stopping me!"-Menma.

Mina sighed and smiled. 'No matter how much people tell him to not blame himself... I guess that's just part of his charm.' Mina glanced over her shoulder at him and said, "Alright, I have faith in you that you'll be able to perfect it!"-Mina replied before leaving the room.

Menma sat back down in his chair and looked at the gun. He picked it up and analysed the aftermath of the gunshot. He realized that when the gun fired it released superheated and pressurized gas. Menma guessed that the fast explosion of gas caused the loud sound and decided he needed to create something that would make the gas travel more gradual while also spreading out the gas and cooling it.

Menma activated his rinnegan and manifested a small metal rod to fit on the end of the gun barrel. He realized that the silencer was too small and decided to make it slightly bigger than the barrel. Once it was on started getting to work on making a threaded suppressor.

Menma was about to start thinking about the science behind what he needed but he stopped when he looked at the silencer and saw that it was already threaded and all of the components were already complete.

Menma gained a perplexed look and reread everything on the Asura path section of the scroll. "It's as if this ability is based off of things that humans have already created, but when have they been created? It couldn't have been anytime around now because they still haven't found out they have to spiral the barrel of a gun. So maybe my rinnegan has a special ability."-Menma.

Menma looked down at his God Seal and saw the faintest of glows on it and remembered what Adonai said. "The God Seals ability is the power to defy fate itself."-Adonai.

Menma sighed with disappointment and said. "I should have figured it was the God seal. Menma elaborated for a couple seconds and came up with the hypothesis that he initially would have been destined to not be able to create a proper silencer and he would be doomed to not being able to use the gun. But the God Seal manipulated with the Asura ability so that it could use man made weapons from the future or possibly different realities.

Menma smiled and thought, 'Maybe the universe doesn't hate me.'-Menma. Menma picked up the weapon and examined it. The gun seemed about half a pound heavier and Menma frowned. The gun was 5 pounds now and Menma decided that he'll have to work on the weight later once he has perfected it.

Menma picked up the weapon and aimed it at the tree outside. He noticed the huge hole in the tree from his earlier gunshot and was impressed. He firmly grasped the grip, then brought down the hammer and pulled back the slide. He placed his finger on the trigger and started putting force on it.

But after a second he put the gun back on the table on rubbed the sweat off his brow. Menma wasn't completely sure that the silencer would work and decided to come up with a back up plan.

Menma brainstormed for a couple seconds and quickly came up with an idea.

Sorry if it sounds weird that he comes up with everything in a few seconds but about 2 seconds is how long it takes for me to come up with these ideas, so I made it the same or faster for him because I want him to be smarter than me.

Menma activated his EMS and opened the drawer. He looked for a hand mirror inside of it for a minute but ultimately couldn't find one. He was about to go ask Minako for one but then he remembered he could create whatever he wanted.

He tried to create a hand mirror and the object started forming in his hand. The object stopped forming and Menma frowned. The entire object itself was diamond but the part where the glass was supposed to be was absent.

Menma remembered that glass isn't a natural material and realized he would have to make sand first. Menma did just that and made sand in the palm of his hand.

He used fire chakra at an extremely high temperature in his hand which summoned blue flames. Menma was surprised and thought, 'I didn't know ninjas could make fire chakra this hot.'-Menma.

After a few more seconds Menma thought that it was heated for long enough it started becoming liquidy and started to resemble glass so Menma stopped heating it and cooled it down.

The glass was complete and Menma shaped it so that it would fit in the mirror. Menma looked in it and could see his reflection. Menma gave himself a sad look and realized he could have just made a shadow clone the entire time.

Menma made eye contact with himself and activated the genjutsu. Once the process was complete he manipulated with his chakra network so that a burst of chakra would automatically come out if he was put under a genjutsu.

'If I remember how PTSD works then someone can't just shake you back and forth to snap you out of it. But a big way to help someone is to distract them into thinking about something else, and visual genjutsu is the perfect way to do that. So in theory I should be able to snap out of a PTSD attack without anyone else's help.'-Menma.

Menma took a deep breath and picked up the gun again and aimed it at the tree. He checked if the .50 cal bullet was still inside and got back into position.

He placed his finger back on the trigger, and fired. Menma stayed still for a few seconds to make sure that nothing unexpected would happen and once he was sure that nothing would he remained the gun and fired again. He heard a small click happen when he shot it and fired again. He smiled and kept on firing until the mag was empty.

Menma looked at the tree he shot at and saw multiple holes in it of the same size. He smiled at his success placed the gun back on the table.

He wondered what he should work on next with the gun and thought about what just happened.If there was any problem with the gun right now then it would have to be the weight and the speed.

He decided to work on the speed first and summoned a shadow clone. He told it to go to the other side of the room and it activated it's basic sharingan.

Menma aimed at it and shot the gun. The clone easily dodged it and it had a disappointed look. "So what did you think?"-Menma. The clone responded, "It wasn't that fast, it was only twice the speed of sound. So the only people it would hit are people Chunin level and below, but I think it could still hit any ninja as long as they can't see it."

"Well not exactly, a seasoned ninja like Kuranai or Asuma would be able to hear the bullet cutting through the wind like a kunai. So even though they wouldn't hear the gunshots they would still hear the disturbance in the wind."-Menma.

The clone smirked and said, "Yeah but do you really think there's anyone in this village on Asuma's level?" Menma thought about it for a few seconds and smirked. "Yeah, you're right." And they both laughed a little.

After they were done laughing Menma said, "You're right, but this is a really fun weapon to use so I'll be probably be using it for awhile. So I want it to be the best it can be."-Menma.

Menma placed the gun on the desk and examined a bullet. "I could increase the force of the explosion of powder when the gun is fired but that would increase the noise. So instead of that maybe I'll try to add lightning chakra to it.

Menma looked at the smokeless powder inside of the bullet and decided to modify it into a chakra conducting gunpowder. Once he did he conjured lighting that appeared white in his hands. He thought that the color it presented was strange but he ignored it and added it into the smokeless powder mix. Once he did the powder started making tiny sparks and he repeated the process to the rest of the bullets.

Once he was done he put the new and improved bullet into the chamber and aimed it at the clone. He fired it and the clone was unable to dodge it. The clone dispersed into smoke and Menma was impressed at his own skills.

"Our reaction time is about twice the speed of lightning, and it seems that the bullet is even faster than that somehow!"-Menma.

Menma decided that the speed problem was solved and moved on to weight. He examined the silencer and started thinking about how gas worked.

After a few seconds he came up with a few ideas. First he put smalls all over the barrel of the gun and turned the threaded pattern of the silencer into a spiral like the barrel while also making it smaller since the spiral would make the gas travel even more gradually.

The design was wacky but Menma thought it just might work. The way gas works is that it is undefined when it comes to shape and mass, and it has little trouble passing through solid objects. So by making holes gas has even more chances to escape which will make it quieter while also requiring less weight.

Menma's goal was to make the silencer the size of a muzzle brake but for now he would see if this design worked.

Itachi And Kisame

Itachi was walking back to his hotel and reflected back on the conversation he just had and sighed. 'It seems like this will be a pretty convenient mission. Bee sure seems... like an interesting character. He knew we were Akatsuki yet he was too friendly about accepting my plan to fake his kidnapping.' Everything seemed basic about the plan but one more thing seemed to perplex him. For some reason Bee asked for him to come back and fake a kidnapping on him next month.

Itachi decided not to think too hard about it and entered his hotel room. Kisame looked up and asked, "So how'd it go?"-Kisame. "tomorrow morning he's gonna go train at the Unraikyo temple. That's where we'll go to capture him."-Itachi. Kisame nodded and got prepared for bed.

I'm wondering if you guys thing these chapters are too slow paced. Cause I somehow managed to make 5500 words worth of storytelling in one room.