Let's get this out of the way first and foremost: I do not own Harry Potter and the universe it is in. That honor goes to J.K Rowling herself! This is a FANFICTION under the copyright law section 107. The fair use Act and the characters are used just for this story.
There will not be the normal boring information before you all jump in to this new Readers, Comments Concerns, Questions and Suggestions.
As of this date: February 26, 2021: This story has reached; 95 Reviews, 379 Favorites, 477 Followers, 81,881 Views and 3 Communities. This makes me smile and I hope this continues in the future.
This is 10 pages with a word count of 9,283 words after this section. I hope you all enjoy.
Reader's Comment's, Concerns, Questions and Suggestions III
Okay I haven't done one of these since after Chapter 10: Girl Talk. I have been slacking off in this department not responding to everyone's comments, concerns, questions and suggestions. Life gets in the way at times and it takes me a few days to write a chapter and sometimes a few weeks. For not keeping up with my Reader, Reviews and Followers I want to apologize to you all. As of Today Wednesday, February 24, 2021: I have 59 new comments, concerns, questions and suggestions. Since I am a bit stuck on The beginning of Chapter 30: The Quidditch Match and Hogwarts Rocks! I'm going to switch gears for a moment and answer everyone. There is a change since the last time I did this, and the change is that on this one I will be adding what chapter everyone has read. The Prologue, Reader's Comments, Concerns, Questions and Suggestions 1-3 are not chapters! I have only 29 chapters done and not 32 chapters, so I will have to change any chapter from 30 to 32. (SORRY!) If I ask a question in any reply, please send me a PM with your answer. It will help make me a better writer.
I noticed that some of the comments, concerns, questions and suggestions do not match up with the chapter title. However so no one gets confused I will add the correct Chapter Title to what is being said. Please let me know in the comments if you agree with others or not. I will be fixing grammar for everyone to the best of my ability so it is easier to understand. I am not going to be using what FFN has. I will request to my fellow readers, reviewers and followers; that if you leave a comment, concerns, questions or suggestion please let me know what the correct chapter number you are in. That way I can respond correctly to what you all have said. THANK YOU! This is how the Table of Contents should be:
0 Prologue: Marriage Contract
1 Chapter 1: Unknown Visitor
2 Chapter 2: Explanations Part 1
3 Chapter 3: The Gathering
4 Chapter 4: Horcrux Removed
5 Chapter 5: Explanations Part 2
6 Chapter 6: Family Talks
7 Chapter 7: Greengrass Manor Tour
8 Chapter 8: The Potter Playground Part 1
8.5 Chapter 8.5: Story Pause: The Potter Playground Layout
9 Chapter 9: The Potter Playground Part 2
10 Chapter 10: Girl Talk
11 Chapter 11: The Wedding
12 Chapter 12: Wedding Reception and Honeymoon Part 1
13 Chapter 13: Wedding Reception and Honeymoon Part 2
14 Chapter 14: Wedding Reception and Honeymoon Part 3
15 Chapter 15: The Trial of The Weasley's
16 Chapter 16: The Ousting of Cornelius Fudge
17 Chapter 17: The Trial of The Dursley's
18 Chapter 18: Summer Training Begins
19 Chapter 19: Summer Training Continues
20 Chapter 20: Meeting the Queen
21 Chapter 21: The Surprise for Kate
22 Chapter 22: The Birthday Boys
23 Chapter 23: The New Term
24 Chapter 24: Laying Down The Law, A Brand New Start
25 Chapter 25: The Changes Start
26 Chapter 26: The Three Schools Reunited
27 Chapter 27: The Trial of Draco
28 Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
29 Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubines
Reader's Comments, Concerns, Questions And Suggestions
Reader's Comments, Concerns, Questions And Suggestions II
Reader's Comments, Concerns, Questions And Suggestions III
With that said… Grab yourself a snack, a drink and enjoy reading what others like yourselves have said.
December 28, 2020: Chapter 16: The Ousting of Cornelius Fudge
Thomaspheasant says: please update immediately
SHADOWWOLF123: I am writing and uploading as fast as I can.
December 28, 2020: Chapter 3: The Gathering
Dannyderailed says: Ok I can't read any more of this.
SHADOWWOLF123: I am sorry to see you go. I hope one day you will take another look at this rough-draft.
December 29, 2020: Chapter 9: The Potter Playground Part 2
ChaosOmega98 says: What about Charlie as he wasn't mentioned at all
SHADOWWOLF123: I am sorry that Charlie wasn't mentioned. However, he will make his appearance.
December 30, 2020: Chapter 16: The Ousting of Cornelius Fudge
kent-jensen says: enjoying
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you I do try my best.
December 30, 2020: Chapter 15: The Trial of The Weasley's
Robert Green says: I'm really enjoying this story, It is well thought out.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you I do try my best. I do not use any notes and I write what I see in my head and what flows.
January 1, 2021: (Chapter 5: Explanations Part 2
Time313 says: I'd like to read your story but the formatting makes it unreadable. Please reformate. The italics have got to go.
SHADOWWOLF123: My apologies for the formatting and the Italics. This story is a complete rough-draft and there is not any corrections or formatting changes. However, I do have a Beta-reader who is working hard to get me all the chapters back with all the corrections and the formatting changes.
January 4, 2021: Chapter 0: Prologue: Marriage Contract
fvdv123 says: Great start, but if the will is hidden how can it be executed?
SHADOWWOLF123: Good question: The Wizengamot has both wills of Princess and Lady Lilly Marie Potter and Lord James Fleamont Potter. One of the wills is fake and that's what the Wizengamot has used. The Wizengamot has a copy of the real wills. The Goblin Nation has the main copy. However, the real wills are sealed until Harry, Hermione, Daphne, Cho, Fleur and Tonks are together. Once they are, the real wills will be unsealed by the Goblin King. Once he breaks the main copy seal the copy that the Wizengamot will break at the same time.
January 5, 2021: Chapter 18: Summer Training Begins
fvdv123 says: like
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you! what do you like about this story so far?
January 9, 2021: Chapter 15: The Trial of The Weasley's
firebird-fenix says: Hi… The sentence of Ronald's, I would put it a little bit more harsher given that he raped his sister and what is or was planning to do, not sure if the mind healers would help him, and I think in Hogwarts he would stalk Hermione and assault her. Not sure about Ginny's punishment with Dumbledore still free he could still manipulate both Ronald and Ginny somehow, and somehow free Molly Weasley and continue their plots in the hide. Great that the jerk Percy was dealt with, in canon he was the right hand of not just fudge and Umbridge, I wouldn't put past that he, being power hungry helped eagerly on raids when the ministry was taken (death eaters) or with fake documents to overthrow fudge adversaries. Moly Weasley I don't think mental healers would help her, with more time on the mines more hatred and desire of vengeance would fill her head and heart against harry and the girls… Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: Ron, Ginny and Molly Weasley's sentences were lite for plot issues coming up. I never liked Percy, so I wanted to deal with him swiftly. I figured that him attacking Harry would be a good way to behead him. Dumbledore has a few nasty surprises waiting for him. Let him plot all he wants. (Enter Evil laughter Here…)
January 9, 2021: Chapter 19: Summer Training Continues
fvdv123 says: like
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, I do try.
January 9, 2021: Chapter 1: Unknown Visitor
Pteaset says: I like it
SHADOWWOLF123: What do you like about Chapter 1: Unknown Visitor?
January 10, 2021: Chapter 19: Summer Training Continues
jeremiahkelley93: great chapter.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thanks, it was a real bitch to write this chapter because of so many things Harry, Hermione, Daphne, Cho, Fleur and Tonks had to do over the summer.
January 10, 2021: Chapter 4: Horcrux Removed
storp930 says: Well wtf... Not the weirdest thing I read but it's getting kinda weird
SHADOWWOLF123: I know it's a bit weird to read, but I do write off the top of my head and what flows as I see it. This story might get a bit weirder as the chapters move forward.
January 11, 2021: Chapter 20: Meeting the Queen
firebird-fenix says: A good chapter… I would like to see (read a chapter) with the trial for both fudge and Umbridge. It would bring them to a lot of trouble for Umbridge fudge and if Malfoy was part of their plot him too. Interesting way of awakening, somehow it was hilarious, all of them were uncomfortable with the bath and sex with the goblin maids present. I can't wait for the trial of the Dursleys all four of them Vernon, petunia, Dudley and marge, are they gonna be charged just be mistreatment and injury to Harry or theft too? Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: The Trial of Cornelius Oswald Fudge and Dolores Jane Umbridge will not happen for a while yet. Their trial will be sometime during Harry and his wives new school term.
January 11, 2021 Chapter 20: Meeting the Queen
fvdv123 says: it is a bit disturbing picturing goblins in french maid outfits. I like the story.
SHADOWWOLF123: It may be disturbing to see Goblins in a French-maids outfit. However, I must point out that not all French-maids outfits are of the sexy type. The Goblins are wearing long ankle length skirts and white blouses.
January 12, 2021: Chapter 19: Summer Training Continues
rb2312 says: Interesting version of a Weasley trial. Was surprised about some of the outcomes. Hope that Ginny can come out of it a better person. Not her fault her mum was brain washing her since she was in nappies. Think Ron may be a lost cause. Even after treatment Hope Arthur eventually earns his house back.
SHADOWWOLF123: Unfortunately that won't be the case for either Ron or Ginny. Things for them go from bad to worse. There will be no choice on what happens to them because of their actions. Arthur Weasley does get his house back, but it will take some time to do so.
January 12, 2021: Chapter 9: The Potter Playground Part 2
Mani23 says: Were you just fishing to making the word count bigger? I really can't think of a reason why you kept saying every characters full names when it wasn't absolutely necessary.
SHADOWWOLF123: No I was not fishing for a higher word count. I used the full names because of the formal greetings. There are other factors that the full names were needed.
January 13, 2021: Chapter 21: The Surprise for Kate
fvdv123 says: like
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, what did you like about Chapter 21: The Surprise for Kate.
January 13, 2021: Chapter 5: Explanations Part 2
OtakuSenpai5050 says: An suggestion from my side. So far the story is great and the plot is interesting. The usage of italics while speaking just seems unusual as normally italics are used to emphasize something in a sentence or user when it's a flashback normally. I think normalizing the usage of italics while speaking can be good?
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, as I told another reviewer; This story is a complete rough-draft and there is not any corrections or formatting changes. However, I do have a Beta-reader who is working hard to get me all the chapters back with all the corrections and the formatting changes. Once this Rough-draft story is done I will be putting up a reboot of this story with all the corrections and formatting changes.
January 13, 2021: Chapter 20: Meeting the Queen
raven886 says in Russian: Все очень интересно, автору вдохновения и произведению успеха. не понравился только один момент с Тонкс и Чо, это только мое мнение, но мне противно когда Тонкс занимается сексом с другими женами, а они только и рады. А в остальном все отлично)
Translated: Everything is very interesting, to the author of inspiration and product of success. I didn't like just one moment with Tonks and Cho, that's just my opinion, but I hate when Tonks has sex with other wives, and they are just happy. Otherwise, everything is fine.
SHADOWWOLF123: Okay, I can see where you don't like Tonks being with the other wives and with Cho. Tonks is bisexual do to her Metamorphmagus ability and her very high sex-drive. That being said, it also helps the wives and Harry Soul-bond grow stronger.
January 14, 2021: Chapter 21: The Surprise for Kate
MrKristoffer1994 says: It is sad to see such a lovely family as the Weasleys (Molly, Ron and Ginny are not included) broken and destroyed due to the actions of but a man and a single man alone. Albus too-many-fucking-names Dumbledore will pay for all his crimes with his own life. It is a muggles often say: power tend to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely.
SHADOWWOLF123: It is sad about the Weasley's, but there is always light in the darkness. They will have a brighter future after the dust settles. That is so true and I agree with the statement: power tend to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely.
January 14, 2021: Chapter 20: Meeting the Queen
rb2312 says: Interesting way you got rid of fudge and his pet toad. The bathing thing reminded me of a scene from Coming to America.
SHADOWWOLF123: Cornelius Oswald Fudge is a spineless Minister of Magic who likes to put his head in the sand denying anything that goes against him even when the evidence is staring him in the face. He lies, cheats and steals from everyone when it suits his purpose. He also takes bribes and steals from Hogwarts. Dolores Jane Umbridge is a muggleborn who hates children and is a weasel in her own right. She uses any means to take control of the Ministry. She wants to kill off every single witch, wizard that are not Pure-Bloods. Such examples are: Goblins, unicorns, centaurs, half-bloods, muggleborns, muggles, house-elves, Etc.… Why not nip these two in the ass before they make things worse for Harry and his entire family. The bathing scene was inspired by the movie Coming to America. It is a classic with Eddy Murphy and Arsenio Hall. It was a simple nod to them as actors. In this story you will find nods to books, movies, music, singers, actors and Actress's. Keep your eye peeled for the simple shout-outs.
January 15, 2021: Chapter 21: The Surprise for Kate
jeremiahkelley93 says: great 2 chapters.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you. Out of Chapter 20: Meeting the Queen and Chapter 21: The Surprise for Kate. What was it that you liked about them?
January 17, 2021: Chapter 22: The Birthday Boys
jeremiahkelley93 says: great chapter.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you. Out of Chapter 22: The Birthday Boys. What makes it a great chapter for you?
January 17, 2021: Chapter 22: The Birthday Boys
fvdv123says: it is a good story but for me, the text blocs are a bit too big, halfway through I have the urge to skip some lines.
SHADOWWOLF123: Okay, I can see where you are coming from. Here is three helpful suggestions. If you have a tablet or any way to download the FFN App. I would do so. On there is an audible function you could use. It would help read a lot faster. The another other suggestion is to slow down your reading so it makes sense. The last suggestion is to wait until the Reboot is up. As I told two other reviewers, This story is a complete rough-draft and there is not any corrections or formatting changes. However, I do have a Beta-reader who is working hard to get me all the chapters back with all the corrections and the formatting changes. Once this Rough-draft story is done I will be putting up a reboot of this story with all the corrections and formatting changes.
January 17, 2021: Chapter 22: The Birthday Boys
firebird-fenix says: Good chapter… Not sure about what Dudley get, it seems like he get it lightly. I can't wait for Dumbledore, Umbridge and fudge trials
SHADOWWOLF123: Dudley Dursley's sentence won't be for a while yet. Dumbledore's Trial will not happen until just after the Christmas Break. The trials of Cornelius Oswald Fudge and Dolores Jane Umbridge will not happen until sometime in Harry and his wives new school term.
January 17, 2021: Chapter 17: The Trial of The Dursley's
Clive54 says: Looking forward to the next chapter and the sentencing. Hope Dudley gets some consideration for his remorse.
SHADOWWOLF123: Dudley Dursley will get some consideration for his remorse. How much I can not say and I'll keep that under my hat as a surprise for now.
January 17, 2021 Chapter 17: The Trial of The Dursley's
rb2312 says: Nice conclusion to the Dursleys trial. Whatever sentence Vernon and Petunia get will be added to by the thought of how much gold they could have had, if they had treated Harry like loving relatives. Like the chat with Dudley. Looks like there may be some hope for him. At least he is showing some remorse and admits he did wrong. Who knows perhaps in time we could see the much improved Dudley on friendly terms with Harry and his family. Maybe even hooking up with a witch. Did read a nice one where Dudley meets Pansy after war. Cannot recall the name though. Think it was written by the same writer that did "HARRY CROW". Also seen him paired with Lavender, Cho, Katie; and I think I read an alternate 19 years later where he is also dropping his kids off. Really should have left the Dudley Harry goodbye in the film.
SHADOWWOLF123: Vernon and Petunia's sentence is a lot worse which will be in a future chapter. They did know about Harry's Family fortune, how do you think they got the Jewelry that belonged to Lilly? Dumbledore gave them the money and jewelry and yet they still didn't care because Harry is a wizard. Dudley's sentence will be a lot lighter because of his remorse. I have a plain for him and his future. (Witch involved…) "HARRY CROW" was written by RobSt. It now sits in my favorites and is waiting to be read. The goodbye in the second to last movie: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows Part One is iconic, and I might use that in a chapter, but I am unsure yet. Harry is already paired with Cho Chang as a wife, Katie Bell is a wife under a consort contract. Lavender Winnifred Brown and her step-mother Terra Katie Beamfrost are under a Concubine contract by their choice.
January 21, 2021: Chapter 19: Summer Training Continues
rb2312 says: Nice chapter… Obligatory Harrods trip. Always like those. Though think Hermione's mum's friend changed her name during her chat with Hermione about Harry's temper. Nice to learn why the samples were collected. Wonder if the old man knew about the other contracts or just did some magic to block anyone that wasn't Ginny.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you on the Harrods shopping trip. Yes Melissa's name was accidentally changed to Tiffany. That is a good catch on your part. Dumbledore didn't know about the actual marriage contract between Harry, Hermione, Daphne, Cho, Fleur and Tonks; he never checked. All he cared about was blocking everyone's magic and reproductive cycles because he wants to be the only one to be the most powerful. He illegally put Ginny as a wife to Harry in a marriage contract so he can continue to control Harry and that of his kids that him and Ginny might have.
January 22, 2021: Chapter 23: The New Term
mstar says: I would like that's even Lily comes back to Life that's she make an visit na Molly, Snape and Dumbledore to let them know how Angry she is , what they come to Harry. Nice would be also a visit to petunia
SHADOWWOLF123: When Lilly gets resurrected there will be hell to pay and Lilly will be on the warpath. No one will be safe from her vengeance. Haven't figured out how just yet.
January 23, 2021: Chapter 24: Laying Down The Law, A Brand New Start
firebird-fenix says: Good chapter… The question is, how are you going to deal with dark lord Dumbledork, (sorry Dumbledore)? I always thought that he was a dark character, always allowing Snape, the Dursley and many Slytherins and people like Malfoy and other dark families do as they please, but punishing the innocents (Sirius case or what he did to Harry) in the name of his supposed greater good. Speaking of the Dursley, are they gonna lose all the money they were paid to care for Harry (make them pay back with interest)? Dumbledork too. At any time was Harry a vassal to riddle or Dumbledork horcruxes? If so then take it out and destroy it please. I would suggest that all the money, properties, etc., from D.E's be confiscated and a part of it be handed to Harry and the girls, that would crumple the financial power they have. Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: I don't have a deferent plan for Dumb-Ass-Dumbledore yet. I do know when Lilly gets resurrected she'll be on the warpath. No one will be safe from her vengeance. There is an unspoken rule; Never mess with a child unless you want to be on the receiving end of one pissed off mother. Harry has been a toy to Dumb-Ass-Dumbledore since his parents were killed. Tom Riddle don't know anything about the connection between him and Harry. The Horcrux's will be dealt with by the Goblins themselves. Everyone that has wronged the Potter family will pay.
January 24, 2021: Chapter 24: Laying Down The Law, A Brand New Start
kent-jensen says: enjoying
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, is there anything in Chapter 24: Laying Down The Law, A Brand New Start you liked the best?
January 25, 2021: Chapter 4: Horcrux Removed
ShadowLord1329 says: Yeah so I guess I was correct in continuing it's not bullshit storytelling if it's just the beginning. So I'm sorry for saying you have shitty storytelling, it's just the beginning. it's like if you started a marathon with a face plant yet still end up winning. It's a bad start but what an amazing finish.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you I think. Honestly I don't know how to respond. I also do know if I should take this the wrong way or not. I am going to assume you mean it in a positive light.
January 25, 2021: Chapter 2: Explanations Part 1
ShadowLord1329 says: Wtf… I thought lily and the mothers club had precautions against Dumbledore's shit. A hidden will that he can't get ahold of AKA SEAL all the moms knew of it and the GOBLINS knew of it! The will alone should have shut Dumbles shit down this is bullshit storytelling but I'm enjoying this so far so I'm sticking with it hoping this is going to be my only negative comment
SHADOWWOLF123: Lilly and the rest of the "Mothers Club" did take those precautions against Dumbledore. Dumbledore however don't care what they did. All he cares about is taking all of Lilly and James's Titles, Land, homes, Money Etc… The Goblins have the actual copy of Lilly and James's wills. However because they were to late to save Harry from Vernon and Petunia, they had to bide their time. Through time they have tried to help Harry and so did other witches and Wizards. However, Dumbledore blocked their attempts every time. The Goblin King had to get involved and now things are in motion to take Dumb-Ass-Dumbledore down. I am sorry that you think this is bullshit storytelling. I just write what flows, what I see in my head and without using any notes. That being said, I thank you for sticking with the story.
January 25, 2021: Chapter 23: The New Term
firebird-fenix says: Interesting chapter.. Lets see who are going to be the consort to harry and his wives, it will be interesting to discover them. Very good, very good… Is there a way, that would make the I.C.W. goes against Dumbledore, i don't know maybe send an envoy to watch over his actions, reach and read everything in his offices both in Hogwarts, the Wizengamot and the I.C.W.? What about the betrayers (Ronald, Ginevra and Molly)? When is the charm, curse or whatever was put on Snape going to be released? About the D.E''s, how are you going to deal with them, I would suggest crimple their finances somehow, that would make difficult to buy their way out of Azkaban… Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: the Consort Contracts are set for Pansy Parkinson, Katie Bell, Susan Bones and Narcissa Black (Age: 16 for Narcissa Black…) Draco Malfoy and his cronies will not be a bother for a while, however they will make another appearance. The I.C.W. will go against Dumb-Ass-Dumbledore after Harry and his wives point some things out. Ron, Ginny and Molly will get a very rude awaking by Harry, his wives, Lilly, and so many more. Snape's spells that Dumbledore used on the entire staff of Hogwarts broke when King Stackman used the virgin blood on new Druid Rune Stone connecting Harry's magic to his home Hogwarts. The Death-Eaters will be handled when Voldemort is dealt with. (Children will be left alone.)
January 26, 2021: Chapter 25: The Changes Start
rb2312 says: Nice chapter… Love the ghost messing with the old man. Read quite a few evil dumbles stories where he helps himself to Potter family items. First time I can recall Fawkes being one of those items.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, I thought using the ghosts of Harry's family to scare Dumb-Ass-Dumbledore was a nice Laugh-Your-Ass-Off moment. I put Fawkes as Harry's first pet before Hedwig as a stolen. I used her because she is a beautiful bird and she is very fond of Harry when they first met.
January 26, 2021: Chapter 9: The Potter Playground Part 2
ShadowLord1329 says: I stand corrected again you didn't specifically say Stacy was the matriarch til later on the chapter you see this is why I love this fic once I got past the beginning
SHADOWWOLF123: Actually the name Stacy is a mistake. Her name is Tracy. Tracy is not the Matriarch, she is just a friend. Hermione Jean Potter is the Matriarch.
January 26, 2021: Chapter 9: The Potter Playground Part 2
ShadowLord1329 says: It's Tracy Davis but I forgive you they sound alike
SHADOWWOLF123: I want to thank you for pointing out the mistake and it has been corrected since this review and answers.
February 1, 2021: Chapter 27: The Trial of Draco
DemetriLover28 says: Great chapter. More, more. Lol. Hope you update a couple more chapters soon.
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, I am trying to write the chapters as fast as I can and post them as soon they are finished. I do send a copy of each chapter to my Beta-Reader so the corrections and formatting can be fixed and a Reboot can be put up.
February 1, 2021: Chapter 27: The Trial of Draco
firebird-fenix says: Interesting chapter… Could an charm, potions, hexes expert go and examinate the professors? What about Pince, is she going to stay? if so then she must get checked over charms potions like Snape, or get her act together and leave the pureblood and strict librarian act, and be a good teacher. Is Dumbledore going to leave Hogwarts, that way he can be found and tried It seems like both Ginny and Ron are up to something, please don't get Ginny as a concubine to Harry… Bye
SHADOWWOLF123: The Goblin Healers with two Goblin Guards went to check on the entire staff. Pince choose to stay as the Hogwarts librarian. Dumbledore leaving Hogwarts won't be by his choice, but by Hogwarts herself. Ron and Ginny are up to something, but I will not give that away. Ginny will not be in a concubine contract to Harry and his wives.
February 2, 2021: Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
firebird-fenix says: Interesting chapter… Let's see who are going to be the consort to Harry and his wives, it will be interesting to discover them. Good, good, Malfoy, his trolls, Zabini and flint were sent to prison, or at least to be judged for rape, they deserved. I'm not sure how to feel about Pansy Parkinson, in canon she was very nasty and a pureblood supremacist, let's see how that goes. Its intriguing the meeting between Harry, the girls and Mrs. Malfoy. A question, in many stories Bellatrix is or was put on a potion, charm, hex to change her personality, in this story happened that?, if so then she could be redeemed and become like an aunt to Harry, not sure about a consort or concubine, she may have many issues to deal herself and with others. It seems like Ron and Ginny are still plotting something against Harry or at least Ron, because Ginny is supposed to be on mental healer treatment (well both) but looking at Ronald's behavior I don't think he has changed his way of thinking… Bye and keep going
SHADOWWOLF123: Harry is already paired with Cho Chang as a wife, Katie Bell is a wife under a consort contract and Lavender Brown is under a Concubine contract. Draco and all of his goons will make another appearance and it may not be the thing Harry and his wives will like but Draco is rich, so think on what would happen. Bellatrix si not under anything, but Jealousy for her adopted baby sister Narcissa. No Ron has not changed and he will have many attempts to get Hermione. Ginny will be the same way for Harry.
February 4, 2021: Chapter 27: The Trial of Draco
rb2312 says: Nice chapter… Think all but one of the staff actually like the changes. As for the one who does not, think he is going to have to get used to people not following him blindly. The old man is probably throwing a toddler tantrum after Harry took HIS school back. Nice scene with Draco and Pansy. Cannot wait to see what Slytherin house makes of the new Snape. Wonder who will be the first to fall foul of the new video system. Should be interesting when Ron and Ginny blow.
SHADOWWOLF123: All the professors at first didn't like how Harry spoke and then new changes. However after they thought about it they calmed down and knew the changes are desperately needed if Hogwarts is going to survive. Dumbledore is throwing a fit because he is losing control of his favorite little toy, Harry Potter. The scene with Draco and Pansy is sensitive do to what happened to her. While writing the scene and the following chapter I was hoping to inspire anyone Guy or Girl to speak out about the sensitive topic of rape. The new professor Snape will shock Slytherin House. Ron and Ginny will really blow their tops in a later chapter, I do not know when yet.
February 4, 2021: Chapter 1: Unknown Visitor
Brightstone Keep says: That's not how titles work... You don't chain them like word salad. She is Lily Potter, the Lady Potter. She may be the Lady of X, Y, and Z, but the title with Primacy is her title outside of a letterhead.
SHADOWWOLF123: I see your point. However I chaining Lilly's name starting from the highest title which is Princess.
February 4, 2021: Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
rb2312 says: Nice chapter. And a very sensitive subject well handled. Wonder who else may join the family. Guessing Ginny will think she has a shot once pansy's new status becomes known. Can see Pansy getting to know more about the muggle world. Including the obligatory shopping trip and cinema visits.
SHADOWWOLF123: Rape is one of the more sensitive subject then I have ever written. I never have written about rape because I am a victim of it myself. My hope when writing the chapter that it would help both men and women speak out more about it. Statistic shows the annual number of males and females who were victims of rape or sexual assault in the U.S. each year from 2000 to 2019. In 2019, 406,970 women were raped or sexually assaulted while the corresponding number for men was 52,336. Pansy will slowly get used to the Muggle World.
February 5, 2021: Chapter 19: Summer Training Continues
Happy666 says: not sure if you are aware but the square footage vs the number of rooms means that the average room size is 111 square feet. that's roughly 10ft by 11ft. may want to rethink that.
SHADOWWOLF123: I get the square footage issue. However I just used that to help the imagination. Think on this: The bathroom alone has a bathtub that is twice as big as the Prefects bath. The prefects bathtub is described as a Olympic size swimming pool. Each bedroom has a sitting room, two walk in closets, secure jewelry closet and so much more. A lot of the Palace was built by magic. Each room is well over 15,000 square feet. (That should help spark your imagination) Please use your imagination on the size of each room because they are massive. Thanks for pointing out a flaw, it's appreciated.
February 6, 2021: Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubines
rb2312 Says: Interesting chapter… Not the first time I have read about Fate having a plan for Harry. At least this time, it looks to be a plan for his benefit, and not a case of him being a chew toy. Pansy forced to be nasty by Draco is a popular fanfic tool. One I quite like. Even read a few where her pug like features were a glamour. Either forced by the Malfoy's so no one would be tempted to take her from Draco. Or a defence, hiding her beauty against unwanted attention, insisted on by her farther. Can guess one of the brides death is going to resurrect. No clue who the other could be. Doubt it would be Helena, as she is his great aunt.. my guess is Myrtle. Guessing the mysterious 1000 year old wife is Hogwarts. Pity Tracy does not appear destined to join the family. Though I think she will remain close friends. Can see how Hedwig a Fawkes getting along. Especially as the large family will need multiple messengers. Cannot wait for Lily's return. Harry's reaction should be good Hopefully that will not be the only pleasant news Harry will be getting in the near future
SHADOWWOLF123: Fate is actually Harry's mother and he has no father. Lilly and James are his Earthly parents and Fate has never let Harry out of her sight. She would do anything for her son, but will not personally step in unless absolutely necessary. Pansy had to use a glamor spell because of her Marriage Contract to Draco. However, since the contract was broken she can now let her true beauty show once she fully heals from her attack. Nice Guess on Moaning Myrtle, but no dice. (Try again…) I am going to leave the last two wives under my hat and keep it a surprise. I did give a few clues in the story on one wife to be resurrected. Nope on Hogwarts herself, she is Harry's daughter to a point. Tracy love Harry but only enough to help her family gain more political power in the Wizengamot. She doesn't see how all of Harry's wives and consorts see him. Harry's wives and consorts just see Harry for who he is and not the Boy-Who-Lived or Famous, Rich or Politically Powerful. They see him as a caring, loving, understanding and family protecting man that he is. His fame, riches and Political Power is an afterthought and an added bonus. Fawkes is Harry's first pet and friend before Hedwig, Fawkes was named by Dumbledore Her real name is Solar. (As in Solar Flair.) Her and Hedwig will get along very well. when Lilly gets resurrected she'll be on the warpath. No one will be safe from her vengeance. There is an unspoken rule; Never mess with a child unless you want to be on the receiving end of one pissed off mother. Harry will react like anyone would when you haven't seen someone in years, in Harry's case 13 years. No this won't be the only good news Harry will get, Hermione and Daphne will have a surprise for him.
February 6, 2021: Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubines
fhl1234 says: wonderful fic, thanks for posting.
SHADOWWOLF123: Your Welcome, What is you favorite parts in this story so far? It will help me in the future as a writer.
February 6, 2021: Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubines
firebird-fenix says: Hi… Good and interesting chapter, the new wives is intriguing, I would think is Fate or maybe magic, it could be others like Morgana, etc.,… Let's see what happens. Ron and Ginny are going to be a real problem, how are you going to deal with them? On the tournament let's see Krum be crushed by Harry or maybe their guards… Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: Okay The wives and Consorts are listed. Morgana is not one that will be resurrected. I left a clue about one who will be resurrected after Lilly. Ron and Ginny will be a pain in the ass for now, but Harry and his wives will have enough and they will deal with them. You'll just have to wait and see when it happens in a future chapter. The Tri-wizards tournament will not take place. However the three school do come together to learn different ways of things. It will bring the three school closer together for the near future chapter. Krum will get his ass handed to him by Fleur and other witches and Wizards. You'll just have to wait for a chapter in the future until then.
February 9, 2021: Chapter 13: Wedding Reception and Honeymoon Part 2
Sakura Lisel says: Out of all the wives, the elf who snatched Hermione couldn't at least WAIT, until she got out of the tub, dried off, and GOT DRESSED? Or the elf couldn't have done those three things FOR Hermione in the few seconds it took the elf to do a snatch and grab with her straight out of the tub before dropping her off buck naked and soaking wet in bath suds in a room filled with people? *lol*
SHADOWWOLF123: In the chapter I wanted to embarrass Hermione a bit. She is known as a bookworm, and a-know-it-all. She is caring, loving, sweet, sexy and so much more. However, she is to serious way to much, so why not do a snatch-and-grab while she is in the bathtub relaxing in a bubble bath. Besides Dumbledore walked into the Potter Palace like he owns the place and there was no time for pleasantries when Dumbledore would be able to hear other footsteps. My hope was to get people to laugh a bit at the scene.
February 11, 2021: Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
firebird-fenix says: Hi… Krum is going to be a pain on fleur ass. It looks like Ron, Ginny and many others don't learn. It was fun to read this part. I would put some surveillance over Hermione and the other girls for their protection, not sure how many others has the same ideas of Ronald and Ginevra… Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: Of course Krum will be a pain in the ass to Fleur. He has only four things on his mind. Quidditch, his gold can get any girl he wants, fame and sex. He'll get his ass kicked by Fleur herself. No one fucks with a mated Veela. Ron and Ginny will also have their shit stopped in a heartbeat in a future chapter. Hermione sticks close to Harry with Rowena, but she does have her time away from him. There are already surveillance spells in place around Hogwarts.
February 15, 2021: Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
firebird-fenix says: Hi, Interesting chapter… It would be great to combinate all talent and have them all distributed between Harry and the girls (all having the same talents and gifts) be it muggle or magical. About Dumbledore yes he lose part of his magic, but knowing him he could use a ritual like Riddle to increment his powers and magic, and given that he has a more or less strong allies in Molly and some old friends, he could stole the magic and life force from a squib or a bound wizard or witch (he bound his/her magic) to increase his. Ron, Molly and Ginny are going to cause trouble again? Is going to be a confrontation between the girls and Krum, that would be interesting, or maybe other wizards or witches going for Harry or the girls, and Harry or one of the girls put a stop to it?... Bye.
SHADOWWOLF123: Harry and his wives have the same talent both Muggle and magical, however the only talent they don't share is cooking. That belongs to Harry himself. Dumbledore is to pissed off to even think of using a ritual like riddle. Yes Ron, Ginny and Molly will cause trouble for Harry and his wives. That won't be for a while yet in a future chapter. The confrontation with Krum will be between himself and Fleur. In a later chapter Krum will get his ass handed to him. I will keep that under my hat for now.
February 15, 2021: Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubines
LordNemesis says: great story waits for more
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, out of all the chapters you have read thus far, what are your favorite parts in this story?
February 15, 2021: Chapter 2: Explanations Part 1
Guest says: Story feels disjointed. Yet at the same time, the plot development is way too perfectly connected. Everyone is friends, everyone is perfect.
SHADOWWOLF123: Yes everyone is friends and it seems like everything is perfect, but there are things that are going to happen to the family. It will put stress on everyone, but mostly Harry himself.
February 17, 2021: Chapter 1: Unknown Visitor
kynan99 says: Thanks for the awesome chapter.
SHADOWWOLF123: Your welcome, what did you like about Chapter 1: The Unknown Visitor?
February 17, 2021: Chapter 26: The Three Schools Reunited
rb2312 says: Nice chapter…Something tells me that neither Susan or Katie will be waiting too long to jump Harry. Nice arrival of the other schools. Pity Ron had to make a scene.
SHADOWWOLF123: Pansy and Katie at this point are waiting for their time. They'll have their Harry and they won't be sleeping for that long once Harry starts with them. Yeah, Ron is kinda dense, but I hope everyone like how he got his ass handed to him. it's not all for Ron and Ginny, they try to be stupid a few more time during the story.
February 18, 2021: Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
rb2312 says: Like Harry warning off Dumbles in lion form. Once all, an interesting chapter
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, the inspiration for Harry to be a talking lion is from The Lion, Witch and The Wardrobe written by C. S. Lewis and the book was published on October 16, 1950. The loin Aslan in his story talks and that is what where the inspiration came from.
February 18, 2021: Chapter 28: The Hidden Talent of Harry and His Wives
rb2312 says: Nice chapter… Would love to know just how many of the old man's possessions he actually left with. I suspect it was not many, as most would have been 'borrowed' from others over the years. Nice trial. Though it was a little disappointed that Draco's lawyer did not at least put up a token defence. Though him conceding save pansy from further stress
SHADOWWOLF123: Hogwarts herself kicked Dumbledore out of Harry's castle with just a suitcase full of his clothes and no physical items since 98% of what Dumbledore had belonged to the Potter family. The rest will be returned to the rightful owners. Draco's lawyer was a slimeball. The only way he ever got Lucius Malfoy free was bribes and sticky finger. He didn't have to lift a finger to get paid 10,000 galleons. He never looked into anything since his days in college and even then he bribed his professors for passing grades. What choice did he really have to go against Pansy when he was staring down the political power of Harry's family and the Goblin Nation combined.
February 23, 2021: Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubines
Jadebookworm says: Tout story us quite addictive and I can't Wait for the best instalment to this already awesome and epic story
SHADOWWOLF123: Thank you, out of the whole story what was your favorite parts? There is still a long way to go before it's completely finished. There even might be a second story for this one, but who knows.
February 24, 2021: Chapter 29: Harry's Helping Hand and Concubine
firebird-fenix says: What going to happen to Krum? I would say use a goblins magic to castrate him (very painfully), and seeing the case goes to AMELIA BONES, he just be arrested for rape, and whatever you want. Interesting the development with lavender and her stepmother Let's see what happens to Ron and Ginny after the talks with Arthur… Bye
SHADOWWOLF123: What is going to happen to Krum is going to be left under my hat. Everyone will have to wait and see. The Goblins might take action against him. Amelia Bones and The D.M.L.E. will get involved. Lavender Winnifred Brown and her step-mother Terra Katie Beamfrost will have their time in the limelight. Everyone will find out what happened to Ron and Ginny after Arthur talked with them in Chapter 30: The Quidditch Match and Hogwarts Rocks!
Okay, that is all for now. I have read and answered everyone's Comments, Concerns, Questions And Suggestions. I hope everyone has enjoyed this. Now for a bit of a sneak peek at a new story in the works. Possible Story Title: Changing The Future
Prologue: Fate and A Son
It's been eight years since Voldemort was killed by Harry Potter. Now Harry a 25 year old Harry is sitting on the floor of The Weasley home with Hermione in his arms. Harry is bloody as tears are falling like a river down his face as Ron's body lay dead on the floor behind him without his head. Harry spoke rocking a dying Hermione in his arms. "Hermione you can't die on me. Your my best friend and I love you…" Hermione weakly smiled from blood loss after Ron beat her. She placed one of her bloody hands to Harry's cheek as she replied. "Harry…. I… love…. You… too. I… should… have… said… something… when… we… were… in… our… fourth… year… Things… might… have… been… different." She answered in a weak voice. Harry smiled litely before he spoke again. "Hush Hermione, save your strength." He told her before leaning down kissing her lips softly as his tears fell onto Hermione's cheeks. Hermione finally too her last breath in Harry's arms knowing Harry loved her.
Once Hermione died there was a flash of white light. Harry saw what looked like Kings Cross station. Harry turned to his right and he couldn't believe his eyes. Standing right next to him stood his best friend Hermione with not a scratch on her and breathing just fine. The two of them didn't notice a tall woman sitting in a chair not that far from them. she had piercing green eyes and black hair like Harry. She spoke making Harry and Hermione to Jump. "Harry Hermione have a seat please." She told them. Harry looked at the raven haired woman before he replied. "Um excuse me, but where? Who are you and where are we. It looks like Kings Cross Station." He told her. The woman gave a soft chuckle before she spoke again. "Harry on the couch of course." She said. Harry looked around again, but this time a couch appeared right in front of the woman.
Harry and Hermione went and sat down on the couch unsure what the woman wanted. She looked between the two of them shaking her head. She soon spoke after letting out a deep sigh. "Well shit, I didn't expect to do this at all. Well better late than never I suppose." She said. Harry and Hermione looked at each other wondering what the woman was talking about. They shrugged their shoulder before looking back at the woman waiting to listen. The woman let out another sigh before speaking again. "Alright here the thing Harry, Hermione. My name's Fate and Harry I am your mother. Before you go off the deep-end let me explain. Princess and Lady Lilly Marie Potter and prince and Lord James Fleamont Potter are your Earthly parents. I gave birth to you and made your wives from stars. Don't think about that to much. Anyway, Lilly gave birth to you on earth.
Again don't think on it to much. You and Hermione are with me in our home, and that's even harder to explain so I am not going to try. The reason you two are here is because of what happened. Harry no offence son, but your very stupid. You of all people should have known better then to marry that whore Ginevra Molly Wesley. You have seen her over the years just be a fangirl and now look what happen to the 30,000,000,000 galleons me and the rest of your family left you. She finally divorced your ass leaving you with only 3,000 galleons. She spent all your god damn money then left your ass after getting what she wants. Shit Harry the only saving grace is she never had sex with you giving you children. If that would have happened then you would have been fuck up a creek without a paddle.
Hermione your no different. You're the fucking brightest witch of the era. I didn't give you those brains and sexy curves to have you squander them away. Instead you married that asshole controlling freak Ronald Billous Weasley. Over the years of your life, you have seen what he is all about. He only thought of himself, quidditch and food. He constantly argued with you and ran away from things when shit hit the fan. Do I have to remind you on that when he ran away like a little bitch when you were hunting horcrux's? You knew in your heart Harry loved you even in your third year of Hogwarts, but yet neither of you acted on your feelings. Hermione look at you now, Harry watched you die in his arms no thanks to Ron beating you to death. Now you both are here because of your stupidity. I brought you both here to stop Harry from going darker then Tom Riddle. Don't you get it Hermione? if not then let me point it straight out to you both. You Hermione Jean Granger along with Daphne Victoria Greengrass, Fleur Francesca Delacour and one other are soul bonded to my son Harry for all eternity. Get your head out of your ass Hermione and do something." She told them.
Harry and Hermione looked at each other feeling like they were being scolded by their parents and it wasn't pleasant. They stayed quiet not knowing what to say to Fate. Fate sighed before she looked at them speaking. "Alright, enough getting your ass's chewed. Look both of you, I'm going to reverse time back to the summer just before your fourth year. Two weeks before your fourth year. You will have all the knowledge that you have now and I'll add in a spells, potions, movements, reading, occlumency, legilimency and other abilities that your fifthteen year old selves and the wizarding world don't know yet. Dumbledore will try and probe you minds like he does to everyone, but don't worry about him right off the bat. Now you have a jobs to do. Hermione, get to Amelia Bones the head of the D.M.L.E. and get Harry out of that fucking hands of Petunia and Vernon Dursley. Their son Dudley is kind, but forced to play the bad guy. Harry, once your free, head to Gringotts and speak with King Aboix. He adopted your mother and father into the goblin nation. He'll be expecting you. He'll know about the Soul bond between your witches. Dumbledore ignored the marriage contracts and forged fake wills of Princess Lilly and prince James. The Goblins have their real wills. They will unseal the real wills and the real one the Ministry has in their records.
Once you both have that in order seek out Daphne and Fleur once that is done the last wife will show up. She'll have emerald green eyes and raven black hair. You'll know her when you see her. Once all the wives are together then worry about Dumbledore. The five of you have to face down a lot of evil in both the Magical and Muggle worlds. First get rid of Dumbledore and Severus Snape. They took over your home Harry. You are the last heir to Myrddin Wyllt A.K.A Merlin, Peverell, Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, Slytherin, Black and Potter. Get their ass's out of Hogwarts, the faculty and students will be much better off. Then deal with the joke they call the Ministry. Don't worry about the Horcrux's, I'll help in that reguard. I'll point the goblins in their direction, and the one in your head son will not be there when you leave here. After the you deal with the ministry then go after Tom. He'll be at his ancestral home. Wait until the end of the tournament to take him down. He won't try to kill you like he did the last time. If you really want to fuck with the Ministry then wait until the last task of the Tournament. Grab Peter Pettigrew, kill Tom and then get back to Hogwarts with them. That should shut the Minister's fucking mouth.
Before I let you both go back in time, a few more things. Hermione, your family will know of what I have been saying so don't worry. Daphne and Fleur along with their families will know as well. I'll put 120,000,000,000 Galleons more in the Potter Vaults. Get your ass's married and have kids. The wizarding world is backwards. They still think they are in the 12th century. When you marry your classified full adults. So no worry's there. Harry your consort wives Katie Bell, Pansy Parkinson and Narcissa Black will know everything as well and there is already marriage contracts for all of your witches that are signed sealed and delivered. I'll speak with the entire family through telepathy or show up when no one else is around to give you advice when needed. The last thing is; I will be resurrecting Lilly, Harry. She'll have a few things herself that she wants to do to Dumbledore, Snape, Petunia, Vernon, Molly and a few others. Do not trust no one except for your families, Amelia Bones and her neice, Neville Longbottom and his gran, Minerva McGonagall, Filius Flitwick and The Goblins. They will protect you all. Now go so I can do what I have to do to help." she said. With that Harry and Hermione vanished in a bright white light knocking them out.
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