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Chapter57
Guest reviwer with lots of problems with our neighbouring country Pakistan, firstly CID fanfiction is not an individual site but part of , where there are shows of various country; maybe even some Pakistani show (though I'm not sure).
So you can't stop people from joining so first of all be clear about tha
Now you yourself can avoid them, be it Pakistani reviewer or writer- for that you must avoid this story. It's a joint venture with a Pakistani writer.
Then coming to your "patriotism" aap ki slangs apki khud ki culture ko insult ker rahe naki unlogo k
Aur rahi baat soldiers ki maut ki, please dont say they are killed they become martyr. Aur do desh ki jhagra mey yea hota hey, hume aur unhe dono ko loss hota he
Har country ko yea face krna part
I'm not saying ki kisi ek country ki dosh hey kisiki nahi.. maybe both are at fault maybe only on
But one thing, uss country ki common man kya sachmey usmey involved hote
Humare desh bolo yea koi bhi larai war political issues kya common man involved hote yea bas suffer krte? Fir us ek common man ko kyun judge kre ? Usko uski ideology per based judge kre to okay right not by her/his countr
Lastly about satam sir ki tweet, are you sure he used such language? Can you point us to that tweet
With full respect to my own country and its martyr, me too wish in every war we only win, every Cricket match we get the trophy but I can't think bad of every common people in that country
So i hope other friends also agree with m
And other reviewers, About abhijeet being in cid, only time will tell the fu
Aur baat krna, hum sabko pata hey baat krne se hal nikalta but kya baat krna itna easy hota? Itni misunderstanding ki bad? And our cops are never so good at expressing there emotions na, to unhe bhi bas waqt ka hi sahara.. kehte na ki time heals..
Nunca sera lo mismo otra vez
Daya entered the forensic lab found Dr Salunkhe looking something in the computer with the frown
He cleared his throat with: sir...aap kuch kaam ker rahe hey...
Dr Salunkhe looked up: oh...Daya tum...aao
Aap koi kaam kar rahey hain
Nahi...bas jo ongoing cases hain un sab k details waghera sab final kar raha tha..us k baad to...
Us ke baad kya sir...
Dr Salunkhe didn't reply directly but said
Tum bolo...tum to chutti per they...
Daya sighed: me bas...sab ko aik khabar dene aya tha..
Khabar?
Hmm...Daya replied looking down, me us post k liye maan gaya...me ne sign kar diya us document per...mujhe us kursi per...
He stopped feeling his throat getting choked
Dr Salunkhe smiled a little and shook his head with: acha hai...ye to bohat achi baat hay daya...congratulations..to ab tum ACP Daya banney waley ho..
Daya still standing with head down mode just said "hmmm" in reply
Or Abhijeet...wo resign kar raha hai?
Hmm..VRS le raha hai..aik hi baat hai...hai na sir?
Dr Salunkhe nodded with; ye bhi achi baat hay...
Sir...Daya looked up
Dr Salunkhe said: haan ye buri baat hay me ab kisi se jhagar nahi paun ga...koi mujhe Dr Sahab keh ke nahi pukarey ga..per us k liye achi baat hay Daya...jab kisi ka dil kisi kaam se ubh jaye...kisi la dil kisi cheez se thak jaye...us kaam ko zabardasti nahi thopa ja sakta...us se ghutan hoti hay tum...
Phirse Andhere Chha Gaye
Khoyee Ujale Ki Kiran
Daya cut his words in a harsh tone: or mere dill ka kya sir...or mere dill ka kya?
He looked quite embittered
ACP sir ko laga...sab k liye un ki maut zaruri hay wo chaley gaye...Abhi ko laga k wo thak gaya hai us ko is sab se chutti chahiye to us ne chutti mang li..us ko laga us ka or ACP sir ka sapna hai to us ne mujhe kaha ACP banney ko or me ne maan liya...per Mujhe kya laga ye kisi ne nahi poocha
Kal Raahon Mein Phool The,
Ab Hai Kaanton Ki Chubhan
He feels the tears are flowing down his eyes and he cried out saying; mujh se nahi ho ga..us cabin mein beth ke kaam karun ga...jis mein ACP sir ke baad Abhi ko hona tha...jab bhi koi decision dil se lun ga to koi aa k ye nahi kahey ga...k dill ke sath dimagh bhi diya hay tujhe bhagwan ne...us ko use kar...jab bhi mera dill dukhey ga to me ghussa nahi dikha paun ga...responsibility hai meri
His expression turned miserable to cynical
...me agar kabhie ghussa dikha bhi dun to koi mere kandhey per thapki de kar ye nahi kahey ga k tu fiqar mat kar me sab theek kar dun ga
Is Mein Dhuaan Na Chingari
Ho Na Ho Is Paar Kahin Koi
Khwaab Jala Hai Seene Mein
Dr Salunkhe was looking at Daya, seeing that old lad who had cried out loud when someone suspected him, who had cried when he was unable to deliver his speech due to numerous torture, who had cried when Dcp declared that he will not get the guardianship of the kid.
But during all those Abhijeet was there to console him, or else to scold him. But today or we can say from today onwards he will have to cry alone, he will have to console himself alone,
Zindagi Aik Banwas Hai
Kaat Kar Sab Ko Jana Parey Ga
but today he can do that, right?
Dr Salunkhe pressed his shoulder with: Daya tum...tum ye bhi to socho k agar tum ye na kartey to ye team...
Daya wiped his eyes with: haan sir...sab kuch sochna hai mujhe...
Raah Pe Kante Bikhre Agar
Uspe To Phir Bhi Chalna Hi Hai
He gave a harrowing smile
me nahi kar sakta kisi se shikayet...me jaanta hun...Abhi per kya beeti hay...me us se shikayet nahi karun ga sir...me kisi se bhi shikayet nahi karun ga...me to bas...ap ko to pata hi hai...sentimental fool hun...aap fikar mat kijiye bas or char din...phir us k baad me fool nahi rahun ga...acha me chalta hun sir..
Roz Meri Hasti Say Rakh Udti Rehta Hey
Kho Diya Jo Tujh Ko Toh Aur Kya Gawana Hey
He turned to ga when heard
Daya...
He turned again with: g sir?
Mere pass bhi tumhare liye aik khabar hay
Kia?
Chaar din baad yahan per aik naya forensic doctor bhi join kar raha hai...
Daya nodded with; haan...aap ka assistant?
Nahi...meri jagh per...
Sir aap bhi...
Nahi...mein retirement waghera nahi le raha hun..me central lab ja raha hun
Daya was looking at him in question, he clarified
Muje pehle bhi central lab se offers aii hain...per me jab bhi ye baat Pradyuman se karta tha..wo aik dam se naraz ho jata tha..or me chahey us se jitna bhi lar lun us ko chor ker kabhie central lab janey ka soch nahi paya...per...
Daya smiled sarcastically with: per ab to wo nahi rahey ab to aap ja hi saktey hain...chaley jaiye sir...promotion mila hai lena to chahiye hay na?
Yeh Kyun Hota Hey
Jab Yeh Dil Rota Hey
Roye Sisak Sisak Ki Hawayein
Jag Suna Lage
He gave a tearful grin, tried to carry on in cheerful tone
Congratulations...Aap sab ko ACP sir ki itni fiqar thi...un k janey k baad...aap sab log bhi sath chor rahey hain...ACP sir aap sab ke liye itna kuch they...acha lag raha hai...bahut acha lag raha hai...aap k liye...Abhijeet ke liye...wo itna...
Khilona Jaankar Tum To Mera Dil Tod Jatey Ho
Mujhe Iss Haal Mey Kiske Sahare Chodd Jate Ho
He stopped with: sorry sir...me shayad zada hi bol raha hun...aap team ko bata dijiega k naya doctor aa raha hai...wo log ready rahein ge...
Dr Salunkhe nodded and Daya moved out completely.
Dr Salunkhe sat down on the chair saying
Sab soch rahey hain...Abhijeet per kya beeti..Pradyuman ka kya hashar hua...per is bachey ke barey mein hum ne bhi nahi socha...me ye nahi kahun ga Pradyuman k tum ne jayant k bhai ke sath koi ghalti ki...crime kiya to pakra gaya...per shayad kahin kuch ghalat ho gaya tha...jis ki saza itney log itney din baad bhi bhugat rahey hain...
He sighed, there are somethings you can't change, there are somethings u cannot fix, something u cannot rectify and there is something you don't even know where it got erroneous
…
Daya was walking down the stairs, with a blurry vision, he wiped his eyes again
Me ye kya soch raha hun..Salunkhe sir ACP sir k barey mein soch yahan se ja rahey hain..akhir wo un k dost hain...or wese bhi DCP sir ne jo order jati kiya tha kaafi pehle...us hisaab se...forensics ko CID k under kaam karna hai...ab Dr Salunkhe mere under...acha lagey ga kya...nahi na?
He shook his head..
Is se behter hay k wo chaley jaein..or wese bhi un ki bhi to retirement ki age ho chali hai...central lab se retire karein ge to acha rahey ga un k liye...un k ander kitna talent hay...saari dunya un ko maanti hay...phir wo bas cid mein reh k kyun apna talent khatam karein...central lab mein to pura desh un k talent se faida uthaye ga...or mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai k sab mujhe chor k ja rahey hain..kiun lag raha hai k bachpan ki tarha me akela hota ja raha hun...
Gila Tumse Nahi Koi Magar Afsos Thoda Hey
Ke Jis Gham Ne Mera Daaman
Badi Mushkil Se Choda Hey
Usi Gham Se Mera Phir Aaj Rishta Jod Jatey Ho
He shook his head,
Mere bhi to care kertey they..ACP sir humesha mujhe le k partial they...Abhijeet se koi ghalti ho jaye to us ko dant dete they..per mujh per shak karney ki lakh wajah bhi mil jaye tab bhi sir mujh per yakeen kartey they...
He wiped his eyes
Abhi ne humesha mera sath diya...kabhie ye nahi kaha k sir...aap daya per to yakeen kartey hain mujh per kyun nahi...us ne apney pyar ko thukra diya mere liye...or phir bhi me ye sab sochney beth raha hun...kaafi swarthi banta ja raha hun...
He felt his phone ringing, he receives the call with
Haan Abhi...me bureau se nikal raha hun..
Acha suno..mujhe shayad thori deir ho jaye..tum lunch kar lena haan...
Nahi aisa koi kaam nahi hai bas mera aik informer ne call kiya tha mujhe us se milna hay..
Haan theek hay khayal rakhun ga..tum kar lena lunch haan...
Acha me rakhta hun...drive karney wala hun
He cut the call and moved forward, stopped a cab and got inside said to driver
Bhaiyya beech chalo...
His mind saying
Is waqt beech sunsaan hoga na...me abhie k abhie ja kar Abhijeet ko face nahi kar paun ga...drive karney ka bhi dil nahi kar raha abhie... bureau k parking mein hi to hai qualis...Abhi ko keh dun ga...kharab ho gai thi...garage de aya hun...
He is not ready to face abhijeet he wants to be alone
But even alone his mind reach its peak he seaks?
He is not so strong as he seems…but..
There are so many buts now in his life
Friends as you all know that this story is coming to its end….next chapter will probably be the last chapter and a long one but it depands on your response…otherwise it will be divided in to two… so we wish to receive more response as compare to previous chapters
Thanks
: AdityaRajatFan & Krittz