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Purvi and mohit were enjoying the shopping and people especially girls were shocked.. purvi was feeling proud.. soon some girls come

Girls - excuse me can we have pic with you..

Mohit - yah sure.. (to purvi ) come purvi

Mohit gave pic to the girls..with purvi suddenly purvi's eyes fall on abhi and ashia in another shop.. she was looking both looking at mirror abhi was keeping dress in front of ashia tk show her how she looks that was couple center

Purvi - mohit chalo na kahi or chalte ha..

Mohit - areh kyu nahi..

Abhi side..

Purvi came with mohit started seeing purvi was near ro abhi

Abhi - ashu dekho pink pink pink pink - pink

Ashia - no abhi concentrate, Salmon pink, Old Pink, carnation pink, hot pink, magneto pink..

Abhi (pov) - mene toh pink ko pink hi kaha ha pink ke itne naam hote ha..

Purvi - (mummers) mujhe toh ek kavita yaad agyai inki pinky ponky abhi ji is hiering a big donkey huh..

Abhi saw purvi at back through mirror

Abhi - vese ashia you will look hot in hot pink..

Purvi shocked to hear the wording..

Purvi (pov) - yeh abhi ji ne bola..

Ashia (smrike) - really abhi..

Abhi - ok then what about baby pink for my baby..

Ashia - come on abhi abhi shaadi hui nahi.. or baby

Abhi - but tum baby se cum thodi na ho.. you are also cute.. for me you are a

cute baby (he pulled her cheeks)

Ashia - ok let me try this.. (she took the clothes and left)

Abhi (pov) - kitna akward ha yarr purvi ab toh ajao app thoda toh hakkjata lo..

Purvi - (pov) yeh kya hai.. yeh mature harkate ha insan ki..

Voice - tum tum yaha kya kar rahe ho

Abhi turned found a girl

Abhi - oh shit.. margaya..

Girl came there..

Girl - what the hell you are doing here areh hell mein bhi tumhe jagha nahi mile gi you stone Heart person

Voice - ab tum bhootni kon ho..(all turned and found purvi)

Purvi - how dare you to speak like this with Abhi

She stands near abhi..

Girl - who are you? (Purvi thinks and hug abhi arm abhi shocked)

Purvi - i am is girlfriend..

Girl - girlfriend!! no he can't have a girlfriend because he doesn't have heart.. he doesn't have feelings he is heartless

Purvi (to abhi) - baat patte ki ki ha feel lete nahi ho.. app.. vese hai kon!!

Abhi - amyara naam ha iska kisi bhi ladke ke upar nahi tikti 6 ladko ko apne peeche lagaya tha daya ko pasand karti thi yeh mene mana kardiya daya bhi karta tha.. pasand wese vo bahut roya tha

Purvi - (to girl) oh miss chipkali ki punch ulte pair nikal jao.. samjhe.. warna kat dalu gi or esa katu gi ki baad mein dikhne layak nahi raho gi be a good girl and go.. go.. (amyara glare abhi and went)

But another shock was mohit had arrived

and seen everything

Purvi - mohit listen mohit humare beech kuch nahi ha faltu mein soch mein maat padho abhijeet ji problem mein the isi liye help ki

Abhi - mohit humare beech kuch nahi ha sachme..

Mohit (angrily) - purvi meri girlfriend agar tum jese awar bhawre ko as pass dekha na toh maar dalu ga esa ki 15 din lash antimsanskar ke liye tadpe gi..

Abhi down his head.. purvi shocked

Purvi - mohit sachme kuch nahi ha humare beech vo ladki ese tapak padhi thi

Mohit - agar nahi ha tab bhi warning yaad rakhna chalo yaha se purvi..

And both moved..

Abhi (pov) - calm down abhi !! calm down!!

Voice - abhi..

Abhi turned and found ashia..

Ashia - mene try kiya best ha i will buy this ab chalo tumhare liye bhi buy karte ha they paid the bill and moved out..

From otherside

Purvi was seeing how ashia was having arms in arms and getting excited..

On other sideAbhi eyes fall on a boy he saw a red lazer beam on his back.. he followed the path of bean shocked..

Abhi - my god..

Ashia - kya baat ha abhi..

Abhi removed ashia 's hand.. and ran.. he pushed the boy down bullet hit his back but not on the spinal cord it was aside.. listening the gun shoot all become alert

Goons - dam it..

the goons from different came out.. a panic spread.. all over..

Acp and other came out..

Acp -goli chalne ki awaz..

Daya - sir wo dekhiye..

All saw the goons were running after abhijeet and a boy..

Dushyant - uss ladke ke sath bhaiya bhi khatre mein ha..

Acp - ek kaam karo logo yaha se surakshit nikalo dushyant nakul vivek..

Daya - sir mein unka dhyan bhatka ta hu..

Acp - great idea..

Abhi side

Abhi - tum thik ho.. .

Boy - yes sir

Abhi - chalo mere sath..

he took out the gun boy shock

Abhi - mein cid se hu ghabrao matt or chalo

Purvi sideGaurds -sir app logo ki jann khatre mein ha aiye jaldi..

Voice - hey

Both turned and saw goon.. pointed at him but suddenly bullet shoot both saw it was abhi who shoot

Abhi (to gaurds) - inhe safe place par lakar jao

Purvi - app kaha jaa rahe ha.. apko chot ai ha..

Abhi (to boy) - chalo neeche.. or ghabrao maat team yehi ha..

Abhi hold hand both ran Abhi was beating the goon coming near.. Abhi just load the

on other side..Daya was giving a good reply... he reached near abhi.. both were giving punches and kicks to goons and talk reply to eachother

Daya - bhaiya yeh kya apko goli lagi ha

Abhi - daya mein bilkul theek hu foren iss bache ko lekar jao.. jaan ko khatra ha iski..

or foren mall khali karwao..

Daya - bhaiya app bhi nikliye plz or hospital jaiye..

Abhi - baad mein jaya ja sakta ha abhi bache ko bachao samjhe.. lejao isse mein dekhta hu..

Daya - (angry) app zidd kyu karte ha..

Abhi (angry and shouted) - its an order idiot..

Daya made irritated face and took the boy..

Abhi looked at other side.. a goon running towards other side.. abhi ran behind it..

In washroom..Abhi entered suddenly got a blow on his head the gun fall down from his hand and he fell down..

On other side..Purvi - mujhe tension ho rahi ha mohit najane abhijeet ji kese honge..

Mohit - areh yarr yeh cid ha unhe paisa milta ha paiso ke liye jann dete ha.. samjhi don't worry..

Purvi - mohit vo lalachi nahi ha.. plz hum safe place par ha apne gaurds bhejo unki help ke liye

On other sideGoons surrounded daya and pointed gun..

Goon - vo bacha kaha ha bata

Voice - wo toh tumhe marne ke baad bhi nahi pata chale ga..

Goons saw acp and team surrounded him including tasha..

Both goons and cid came face to face pointing eachother

Goon - bata de acp bacho ko marne ka contract ha

Acp - humara farz ha bache ki jaan bachana samjhe..

Voice - toh theek ha ajj dekhte ha tu apne

bete ko bachata ha yah kisi or ke..

goons got aside.. all shocked abhi was in semi counsious stage his hands were tired.. at back and mouth was tired with hanky purvi was shocked to see his condition

Ashia - (shouted) abhi

Acp - Vikram abhijeet ko kya kiya ha tumne..

Vikram - areh kuch nahi kiya bus sar par fire extinguisher ka cylinder mara ha.. or bolta bahut ha toh sar gun ki backside mar di.. bada kamzor ha officer..

Vikram thow it hom at front

Daya - bhaiya..

But acp stop as vikram pointed the gun at Abhi..

Vikram - bitha isse.. tadpa kar marna ha jab tak yeh log ladke ka pata nahi bata dete..