Jaan Chapter 1
Hey guys, this is my one more new story...A story of a mission.I'm trying to write such story. It's my first try. Please forgive me for my mistakes but don't ignore them. Tell me about those mistakes by your reviews...
In a dark room:
Man 1: Dekho, tum dono well experienced officers ho. Meine hamesha tum dono ko apne bete se badh kar samjha hai. Is baar hamare department ki izzat aap dono ke hath mein hai mere jaanbaz sheron.
Man 2: Haan ACP sir, Har haal mein yeh mission ham complete kar ke rahenge.
Man 3 : Ji sir, mein wada karta hoon aapko, mein aur Daya aapko apna sar niche karne ka mauka kisi bhi kimmat par nhi denge.
ACP : Yehi ummid thi mujhe tum dono se Abhijit, yehi ummid thi. Par dekh lo, is mission ki bhanak kisi ko bhi nahi lagani chahiye Abhijit , kisi ko bhi nhi. Hamare department ke sirf 3 logonko is baat ki khabar hai, ek mein aur bache aap dono.
Abhijit:Yes sir.
ACP: Thik hai, toh kal tak yeh records check karo aur un logon ko chun lo, jinki aapko is mission ke liye jarurat hai.
Abhijit: Ok sir.
ACP: Aap CID se sirf ek officer chun sakte hai, sirf ek.
Daya: Yes sir.
ACP: Kal thik yahi, isi waqt, isi jagah par aa jana.
Daya: Ji sir.
Next Day :
ACP Pradyuman is waiting for Abhijit and Daya. He was walking to and fro in the room. And the door bell rangs. ACP took his gun in his hand and opened the door. He smiled.
ACP: Aao, itni der kaise lag gayi?
Abhijit: Sir, baarish toh dekho bahar.
ACP: Haan, baat toh hai. Toh, mere records dekh liye? Batao phir, kaun kaun se department ke kaunse officers chahiye tumhe.
Daya: Sir, meine aur Abhijit ne kaam baant liya tha.
Abhijit: Sir, CID se ek officer chun na tha hame, toh hamne Doctor sahab ko chuna hai.
ACP: Doctor sahab? Yeh apna Salunke?
Daya: Haan sir, kya hua, aap itne chauk kyun gaye?
ACP: Daya, jara thande dimagh se socho, Salunke sirf CID ke forensic department ka head nahi hai, woh Mumbai ke forensic department ka bhi head hai.
Abhijit: Ha yaar, yeh toh hamne socha hi nahi.
ACP: Toh phir! Meine tum dono ko 24 ghante diye the, aur aap dono milkar kuch nahi kar paye.
Daya: Nhi sir, ham Dr. Salunke ke alawa kisi aur forensic expert ko le jaayenge.
ACP: Salunke jaisa koi milega aaj raat tak?
Abhijit: Milega nhi sir, milegi.
Daya/ACP: Milegi? Kaun?
Abhijit show a photo of a tall curly haired girl from his cell phone.
Abhijit: Dr. Tarika Malik. India ke forensic department ke head committee mein Dr. Tarika hai, she is a truly helpful girl. Mana ki woh Dr Sahab se behtar nhi hai, pr desh ke kaii lakho doctors se jarur behtar hai.
Daya: Ohk. To inse baat kar lo.
Abhijit: Haan, abhi aata hoon.
He calls Tarika and went aside.
ACP: Daya, is mission ke liye aapko kai forests chaan ne padenge. Samajh rhe ho na?
Daya: Ji haan sir, yeh dekhiye.
He shows a photo of a beautiful girl to ACP sir.
Daya: Bharat ki one of the most honest forest officer. Miss Shreya Sharma. Aap kar lijiye baat.
ACP: Haan. Aur koi special insaan hai is mission mein?
Daya: Yes sir.
He shows a photograph of a dark but beautiful girl.
ACP: Yeh kaun hai?
Daya: Miss Ananya.
ACP: Kya kaam Karti hai?
Daya: Student.
ACP: Student? Ek student ko tum is mission mein lana chahte ho? Daya, dimagh..
Daya: Thik hai sir, mera dimagh thik hi hai. Sir do saal pehle mein ek mission ke liye Dehradun gaya tha,aur ek din raastein mein chakkar aane ke wajah se gir pada. Sir us waqt isi ladki ne meri madad ki thi. Aur usne un criminals ke kuch account hack kiye. Sir mujhe toh lagata hai, agar woh na hoti, toh woh mission incomplete hi reh jata. Usne mujh se wada kiya tha, ki yeh saari baatein woh kisi se nhi kahengi. Aur woh ladki aaj tak us waade ko nibha rahi hai.
ACP: Accha? Thik hai. Itna bharosa toh hai tum par. Lagao use call.
Daya: Sorry sir, call nhi kar sakta.
ACP: Kya matlab?
Daya: Sir mere pass uska contact number nhi hai, pr uska mail id hai.
ACP: De do, mein karta hoon mail.
Daya: Yeh lo sir.
Abhijit comes.
Abhijit: Kaha tak aayi baatein.
Daya: Meine mera kaam kar diya, ab tumhara karo tum.
Abhijit: Sir, ham chahte hai ke ham CID mein se senior inspector Rajat Kumar ko choone, is mission ke liye.
ACP: Aur woh kyun?
Abhijit: Sir ham dono ke baad Rajat hi senior hai, woh sharp shooter bhi hai aur use us area ki acchi khasi information hai.
ACP: Mission aapka hai, aap tay karoge.
Abhijit: Haan sir.
And he shows a photograph of a beautiful and cute girl to him.
Daya: Yeh kaun.
Abhijit: IPS Purvi Verma. Though she is an IPS, she has completed her B.Tech from NIT. She is an engineer. Uske dono knowledge ki hame jarurat padegi.
ACP: Haan.
Few seconds go in silence. Suddenly ACP receive a mail from Ananya.
ACP: Dekho Daya, us ladki ka mail aa gaya.
Abhijit: Kaun ladki sir?
ACP: Miss Ananya. Daya janta hai use. Woh bhi is mission ka hissa hai ab.
Daya: Haan, aur woh tumhein acchi tarah se janti hai.
Abhijit: Mujhe?
Daya: Haan. Dehradun mein rehti hai. She is international level chess player aur toh aur woh mathematics mein research kar rhi hai.
Abhijit: Kya? Woh Ananya. Woh thodi si sanwali hai.
ACP: Abhijit, kisi ke barein mein aisa mt kaha karo.
Daya: Haan wohi Ananya.
Abhijit: Nhi Daya nahi, mt lo us ladki ko, agar woh aayi toh mein is mission mein na rahunga.
Daya: Kaisi baatein kr rhe ho Abhijit?
Abhijit: Sach. Sach baat kr raha hoon.
Daya: Tumhe tumhare dost ki kasam Abhi. Tum isi mission mein rahoge aur ham dono mil kar is mission complete hone ki khabar ACP sir ko denge.
ACP : Aur us din ka mein besabari se intazar karunga. Chalo ab behes band karo. Us ladki ne hame Dehradun ke kisi jheel ke pass bulaya hai.
Abhijit: Hame? Ham kyun jaye?
ACP: Abhijit, kuch toh wajah hogi. Chalo chalte hai, waise bhi aap log aage jane wale the na. Toh waha se gujarte hai.
Daya: Toh sir is mission ke baki logonko ham bula lete hain wahi, us jheel ke pass.
Abhijit: Thik hai, jaisa tum chaho. Pr mein batata hoon, use is mission mein lena tumhari zindagi ki sabse badi galti hai Daya.
Daya: Chup kar Abhi.
Abhijit: Thik hai phir, chalo sun lo din bhar gane aur tane.
ACP: Tumhe tane dene ki sakhth jarurat hai Abhijit, chalo.
This is the end of the chapter...Please tell me is it good or bad...Should I continue it?Let me know it by your precious reviews.