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Date: December 21st 2050
Time: 1845 hrs
Location: Alpha Centauri
"This is Alcuberie to Control, FTL jump successful. Over." I said through to the transmitter, with happiness evident in my voice.
"Copy. Make your jump back." Control replied.
" Sir, there is some unknown radiation detected. Something isn't right." One of the helmsmen alerted me.
Just then, a wormhole appeared out of nowhere, and begun sucking us in.
" This is Alcuberie, anomalous wormhole has appeared, we can't do anything!"
Then, we got sucked in.
"All hands, brace for impact!"
Date:?
Time:?
Location?
"Status report!" I said.
"Sir, Weapons report all combat systems working."
"Reactors are down, emergency power is on."
"Navigation, where are we?"
"Well Sir, you are not going to like this."
Background information:
Type: Light Cruiser
Class: Alcuberie class vessel
Length:1000m
Height:200m
Width:150m
Crew Complement
200 Soldiers
20 Special Operations troops
180 Security and Infantry troops
420 Crewmen
(210 men per 8h shift)
Engineering: 70 men
Weapons:30 men
Supply and logistics:20 men
Damage Control: 50 men
Bridge: 10 men
Cafeteria:5 men
Navigation:5 men
Administration: 10 men
Search and Rescue:10 men