This is my first real-world Star Wars fan fiction. I haven't seen many ideas like this so I thought I should give myself a chance. I am asking readers for ratings, even one sentence will help me improve my skills and publish better works in the future! Thanks for each opinion.
My name is John and I am 19 years old. My life was not that interesting, I was actually an average teenager attending a nearby vocational school in the center of a large city, and more specifically in Warsaw, which is the capital of Poland, which is a fairly average country in central Europe, and it was certainly a country with a not very good opinion among the people of the world. I was quite short blond male because my height was about 173 cm, although I was not the ugliest, I was not too attractive to others. I trained a bit in the gym from time to time and mainly thanks to the work in the carpentry shop, I was muscular, I even saw the outline of a six-pack. Although I attended a vocational school which was despised by the society, I was intelligent, I chose this school for a lack of willingness to learn and a desire to go to work faster, not out of stupidity.
But what I would like to tell you begins when I first started meditating after reading some research on brain activity, better well-being and concentration after prolonged practice; in fact, I was just curious if it was true, and I didn't have much to do during the pandemic because I studied remotely for over a year, going 4 days to work and one day remotely, and in practice I didn't learn at all. So nothing prevented me from trying and the results surprised me. Before I started the first attempt at meditation, I had some concerns that I would not be able to relax and calm down properly, however, it turned out that I had some predispositions for this because the first session lasted about 2 hours, and then something amazing happened. It is difficult to say at what point in meditation I suddenly felt something; basically it's hard to describe something like some mystical energy stream that expands the senses, something like opening my eyes and seeing for the first time in my life. It's as if you were suddenly using 1000% of your brain's potential, I could sense things without opening my eyes within a radius of about 5 km - it was an amazing experience, but I wanted more and decided to investigate it. That's what I focused on and threw my curiosity into a whirlpool of energy that I later called power. The power gave an immediate answer and so not only was I able to sense people nearby, but I could sense their emotions, for example it turned out that my friend William, who used to go with me to the same class and to the same workplace, was depressed after mother's death. I could feel it as if it was my pain - my emotion. And at that moment my first contact with power ended, the courier who came with the package knocked at the house, after paying him I picked up the package, nervous that such a wonderful experience had been interrupted, but I decided not to be discouraged and use my emotions during meditation. After making sure that the door from the house is closed and then I returned to the room that was not too big, it was actually a rectangle in which somehow could fit a bed, a desk and a few pieces of furniture, so it was not too huge. In addition to my room, I had a kitchen, a corridor and a toilet with a shower, but I could not complain, although the apartment was not first-class, it was cozy and free from faults and, above all, I lived alone, which means that finally I had peace and my parents could not interfere in my life.
But going back to meditation, when I closed my eyes and let my body loosen up and rest I reached into this stream using anger, the response was immediate, I could immediately feel the beings near my neighborhood, their emotions and their exact locations, I thought to myself that this cannot be the effects of drugs because I did not take anything like that, but the emotional state of my friend on the other side of the street confirmed that I correctly recognized my feelings, when I focused on my friend, I saw what he was doing and it turned out that he was crying, I thought that he would need consolation and soon I will go to him to help him get through it somehow, but in the room next to him I also sensed another being .. Not a human, but an animal? I do not remember that he had a cat or a dog, but after the death of a loved one, he certainly had to take care of him, of all the creatures in the area his emotions were the strongest, thanks to which he shone with a very bright beam of energy, he literally shouted in power. Not only did I feel sadness, a sense of loss, but did I also sense anger? I decided that later I would try to talk to him about it, after all, we have been friends for many years and he will certainly need my help. Just feeling the beings was amazing, but that's not all. I was able to sense mow down the terrain, every wall and even every hole in it with some concentration. When my energy dropped and I had no more strength to focus, I decided to regenerate and the best way to do that would be to go to sleep because tomorrow I had to go to work and it was already the middle of the night. By the way, then I was afraid that maybe I had used some energy and would lose my newly learned skills, and so anxiously I started dreaming.
The first chapter ends here, in the next chapter John will discover new skills that will be useful for him at work and will surprise other employees.
