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In the Jungle of Vietnam, a group of Americans is on recon.

James: Anything Out of order?

Green: No Sergeant!

James: OK MOVE!

As the team walked they spotted a fighter crashed

Green: Downed Fighter Repeat Downed Fighter

James: Let's rescue the pilot, NOW!

As the team move to the crash site and rescued the pilot a humanoid starts to wake up

Shaak Ti: Wh- where am I

James: You are in Vietnam

Shaak Ti: What is Vietnam

James: Just lay down and rest I'll call an evac. Private call an evac NOW!

Green: Sir Yes Sir

As the squad called for evac Shaak ti was thinking about James

Shaak ti pov:

I know that Jedi are now allowed to feel emotions, but I feel a Special Connection to James like an attachment or maybe a crush I Don't know but I'll ask him when I have time. My chest Hurt and James took care of me while the others guarded the area. About 40 Mins passed I heard bangs everywhere as I was about to be shoot, James grabbed me and pulled me behind a rock, and started to fire at the surrounded jungle

After 20 mins of fighting a Huey with a red cross they called arrived they put me in a stretcher and pulled me in the gunship they used and got out of there while we were being fired upon by the enemy.

1 hour later 3rd Pov:

After the Huey landed they brought Shaak ti was rushed to the medical center. while James was walking around worrying

James: How is She?

Medic: She suffered from a few broken bones but she will survive.

James: Thanks.

James feels like he has a sort of a bond with the Alien but he doesn't know why but he decided to ask her out to a private area of the camp area

A few Hours Later

As James helped Shaak ti to her room they talked for an hour and he leaves her to get some rest while. The Next night James took Shaak TI to His Private Area to talk to her

James: Shaak ti I want to talk about something

Shaak ti: Me too

James: When we first meet I felt like I have a crush on you

Shaak ti redden slightly and ask something she never said

Shaak Ti: I do to and I love you

As she gave a kiss on the cheek

James pulled Shaak ti into a passionate kiss they kissed for a while when they pulled apart James went to the tents and Shaak ti went to her room

Jedi Temple 2 hours later

Mace: Any word from Shaak Ti?

Ahsoka: No Master

Yoda: Find her we must.

Anakin: I suggest we send her troops to look for her

Mace: Who will lead the search for her

Aayla: I will

Mace: Are you Sure

Aayla: Yes

A Few Weeks Later

As Aayla along with Kit Fisto searched for the Missing Master they both secretly been dating each other when they have time. When they found the planet she was on they searched for her

Aayla: Kit!

Kit: Yes

Aayla: I found her starfighter

Kit: Is she there

Aayla: No

Kit: check the Fight Log

Aayla: Ok

When she active the fight log she saw Shaak Ti Knocked out then her Cockpit was prided open from the outside and she saw a Human in soft Green body Armor pull Shaak ti out of the pilot seat then it went static then she was shown something that gave he a sigh of relief she saw a wired looking gunship with a red cross pull down and the Master was pulled in and was taken away from the crash site

Aayla: I know what happen to her

Kit: what?

Aayla: she was taken to a nearby Medical center by the natives. and by the looks of it, they are in their own war

Kit: Do you know her location

Aayla: Let me check

10 Mins Later

Aayla: I found her location A hour away by air

Kit: let's go then

As Aayla Secura and Kit Fisto walked to the base Shaak ti and James were Portaling in the jungles alone together

James: So how are thing

Shaak Ti: it's been good lately how about you

James: Well it's been good for the Most Part of the war

Shaak ti: I don't know if I'll ever get back home

James started to hold her hand

James: Don't worry when we can go to my home if you want

Shaak ti: THanks

A few Hours Later

Aayla: SHAAK TI!

Shaak Ti: Aayla?

Aayla: we found you let-

Aayla saw that Shaak TI was Holding Hands with the human in the Flight Log

Aayla: Shaak ti you formed an attachment?

Shaak Ti: is More like my Soul Mate

James: My Name is James, Sergent James

Aayla: Well My and Kit Here were Secretly Dating For a few Years

Shaak Ti: That's Nice

Aayla: Thanks

Kit: SHould we Call the Council that we found her

James: Not Right No-

James was interrupted by loud Gunfire

James: EVERYONE TO BASE NOW!

As the Vietcong started to fire on the American and South Korean troops Station in the Base Aayla and Kit Fisto Grabbed the Katanas that were station in the area.

After the BAttle

As medics and troops collected the wounded and brought them to the Medical Center. Aayla and Kit Fisto COntacted the Jedi Council

Aayla: We Found Shaak Ti

Mace: Good Job bring her to the Jedi temple

Aayla: Sorry but we talked to her and she is staying on this planet

Mace: WHAT!?

Aayla: She Formed an Attachment to A Sargent on this Base

Mace: Tell her to break up with him and come to the Jedi temple

Aayla: Sorry No

Mace: WHY!

Aayla: I and Kit were Dating for a while now and we want to stay on this planet because They helped us

Mace: You 3 Broke the Jedi code and are deserting!?

Aayla: More like Moving

Mace You and Shaak ti should break whatever reaction ship you both have

Aayla: NO! the Jedi code is flawed and why are attachments are bad

Mace: It Leads to the dark side!

Aayla: NO it made me closer to the light more than ever.

Shaak ti walked into the room with kit

Shaak ti: I'm Leaving the Jedi order for good

Kit: Me To

Mace: All 3 of you get mace to the Jedi temple well talk Later

Shaak Ti: No I'm staying with James and you can't change my mind the End

as Shaak ti stormed out of the room to James. Meanwhile, Aayla cut the commlink and kissed Kit


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