hii guys!!! how are you all??
hoping you all are fine.thanku guys for your support in previous os as well as previous story.
" guys TeMoR is a Spanish term which means fear... *
guys i have updated 'PaSsEe :past ' yesterday . please guys read and review it.
sorry guys if my os hurt anyone.sorry yaara ; sorry bhaiya :-)
sorry guys if i hurt you in any means
* guys read full os and then make your perceptions as half may hurt you *
again serious appologies.
in a room
a person is sleeping on bed ; his eyes are closed but his eye balls are continuously moving ; his forehead and his body is covered with sweat like he had taken the shower recently inspite of air conditioner working since last night..
suddenly the men gets up with a loud shouting voice of
'' nahin ; aisa nhi ho sakta meri wajah se usse chot lag gyi ; sir ko bhi goli lag gyi ''
men saw himself lying on bed and then he realised that he was seeing a dream... sorry not a dream but actually a very bad and terrifiing dream which really makes his goosebumps
he saw the time in his watch which is placed near his side table.
men :- subah ke saat baj rhe hain..
the men said himself in a little bot fear ' kehte hain ki subah ke sapne aksar sach hote hain..' he controls his fear ' nhi aisa kuch nhi hota ; sab theek hoga '
he starts thinking.. And after few seconds he said
ek kaam karta call kar leta hoon koi bahana bana dunga.. jisse dil ko tassali ho jaae
men took his cell phone and he dialled a number
other person picks the call(receiver)
men :- hello..
receiver :- hello ; haa abhi good morning
yess the person who was fearing fear few moments ago is none other than fearless and bravest cop of cid mumbai the senior inspector abhijeet shrivastav ..
abhi :- haan daya good morning yaar tumne wo sharma murder case ki file submit kardi hai??..
daya :- haa boss kardi hai ; yaar kabhi toh kaam ko baksho jab dekho kaam. -kaam maano tumhari shadi kaam se hui. hai
both the buddies started laughing
abhi :- aaja sath mein breakfast karte hain
daya :- done boss mein aata hoon aadhe ghante mein
daya cuts the call
daya :- yaar abhi tum kitna kaam karte ho . .chalo is sunday hum dono ghumne chalenge... tumhe bhi chutti mil jaayegi kaam se atleast ek din
daya smiles broadly on his plan which he made so that he can share his precious moments with his buddy.
where as at abhijeet home
abhijeet called the head of cid mumbai aka his senior not less than their father
acp sir picked the call
acp :- hello
abhijeet felt a relief listening his mentor's voice
abhijeet :- hello sir good morning
acp :- good morning abhijeet kaho kya hua itni subah tumhara call
abhijeet made an excuse
abhijeet :- sir wo aaj HQ mein meeting hai
acp sir nodded his head in disappointment
acp sir :- abhi meeting post-phoned ho gyi wo ab kal hai aaj nhi.. tum bahut zyada soch rhe ho kaam ke baare mein thoda rest lo
abhijeet (fakely) :- sorry sir mujhe laga
acp sir cut his sharp shine
acp sir :- haan.. haan... mujhe pata hai ki abhijeet sahab ko kaam ki itni jaldi rehti hai ki woh sab kuch bhool jaate hain.
abhijeet downed his head in embarrassment
acp sir : - chalo bureau mein milte hain
abhijeet :- jee sir.
acp sir cuts the call
acp sir :- mere is buddhu bacche ko kaam ki kitni padi rehte wo mere doosre bacche ko chutti ki..
he laugh remembering his two son which are the two best officers of his cid mumbai team but they both are not less than kid of age 4-5
at abhijeet home
abhijeet smiles a little
abhijeet :- acp sir aur daya theek hain ek baar bureau mien sabko dekh loon toh tassali ho jaayegi ki yeh sirf ek bura sapna tha naaki hakikat
abhijeet went to his bathroom ; he took a long half an hour shower and after that he get ready and made breakfast..
he is just looking at door as he wants to see daya as soon as possible and then he want to go bureau to see his juniors who are not less than a family to him..
though being introvert ; team members had developed a good relation and provided him a comfort zone in which abhijeet can now express his feelings without telling his words..
team is now familiar with abhijeet's behavior and they tried to make their senior more comfortable with them..
abhijeet's trains of thoughts got disturbed due to honking voice of Scorpio
abhijeet saw his friend ; bhai ; yaara aka senior inspector daya is coming towards him
a satisfactory smile came on abhijeet's face seeing his daya
daya is little confused to see smile on buddy's face in fact his buddy doesn't smile uselessly so he is little bit confused seeing that smile
daya :- boss kya hua yun muskura kyu rhe ho
abhijeet smiled vanished and he said
'aise hi '
daya(pov) :- aise hi... daya beta kuch toh gadbad hai...
abhijeet :- chal breakfast karte hain fir bureau jaana hai..
daya nodded and he got confused with his friend's behavior
daya (pov):- yeh boss ko kya hua hai..
abhijeet and daya have the breakfast together and after that both left for bureau..
after 20 minutes they both reached the bureau.
in bureau
daya went to park the car whereas abhijeet went upstairs...
he is seeing his all juniors like he is seeing them after many days..
he saw his sisters tasha; kajal ; his friends cum loving juniors Freddy ; vivek ; sachin ; his friend purvi
acp sir came inside bureau and he saw abhijeet and he is confused to see the way abhijeet watching his juniors
acp sir :- abhijeet
abhijeet :- jee sir
acp sir :- kya hua abhijeet kuch pareshan ho tum ??
abhijeet (lied) :- nhi sir..
acp sir nodded and moved to his cabin
all the officers are working on their pcs
abhijeet is also sitting on his desk..
he is doing his file work but he is unable to concentrate on his work due to that dream.. that early morning dream is giving him trouble till now that's why his head has started paining..
daya is looking at his buddy .. he saw his behavior a little bit different than the usual one.
he is observing his buddy's behavior and trying to figure out what's the problem his buddy is facing
whereas acp sir is looking at his son.. he is also feeling that something is wrong with his son..
the day passed .. in evening..
team got to knew that a drug deal is going to conduct at behind the bar so they all decided to raid.
during the raid team members successfully stopped the deal as well as they killed the goon
daya noticed a goon is going to shoot abhijeet he just pushed the goon due to which abhijit fell down on table this sudden force misbalanced him due to which his head started bleeding as he fell on mirror glass table..
abhijeet tried to get but due bleeding he fell unconscious .
while falling down abhijeet noticed that daya got injured by bullet on his arm
daya shouts 'abhi'
all attention got towards abhijeet..
they all saw him lying on floor
acp sir :- sachin car nikalo
all nodded and went to hospital..
in hospital
doctor bandaged daya and abhijeet
both are lying unconscious in one room..
acp sir :- doctor wo abhijeet aur daya
doc :- your both the officers are fine.. abhijeet fall unconscious due to bleeding and daya is under sedation as I have to bandaged
acp sir nodded.
after half and hour duo got conscious
acp sir :- kaise ho dono?
daya :- mein theek hoon sir
abhijeet :- mein bhi sir
acp sir and team are taking to duo
daya is giving replies but abhijeet just keep silence or just passed a smile
daya and acp sir found it wierd
after that all went to home
at daya's home
daya is sitting on bed and he is thinking about abhijeet
daya :- yeh abhi ko kya hua hai.. subah se itna ajeeb behave kar rha hai.. kuch toh hua hai..
at acp sir home
acp :-abhijeet... kya hua hai mere bache ko kuch samjh nhi aarha hai
time passes
in Mumbai all the houses are dipped in great silence as all are sleeping after getting tired due to thier hectic schedule
at abhijeet's house
he sleeping but anyone can tell that he worried seeing his face
suddenly he get up with a scream
abhijeet is dipped in his sweat... his head is paining
abhijeet is very tensed his emotions are overpowering him ..
due to overthinking he again saw a bad dream
abhijeet :- meri wajah se daya ko goli lag gyi.. nhi mein kisi ko kuch nhi hone dunga na daya ko ; na sir naa hi team ko.
he think for a while..
abhijeet :- haan mein aisa hi karunga
phele so jaata hoon
abhijeet picks up sleeping pills and he take 5-6 pills with water.
he fell asleep
next morning
it's 10 am
daya is continuously calling abhijeet but abhijeet is not picking the call
acp sir is also worried for abhijeet
after half an hour abhijeet enters in bureau
acp :- abhijeet kya hua tum late kaise ho gye
abhijeet didn't answer he just started doing his work
this act of abhijeet confused all the team
all back to thier work
after an hour
abhijeet came to submit the report to acp sir
abhijeet came back to his desk
acp sir is shocked to see the file
he came to abhijeet desk
all officers get up
acp sir :- abhijeet
abhijeet gets up and said yes sir
acp sir :- yeh itni mistakes
abhijeet (straight):- ho gyi jaan bhuj kar nhi ki
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this shocked team
acp sir :- abhijeet kya hua bacche?? agar tabiyat theek nhi hai toh araam kar lo
abhijeet gets angry
abhijeet(loudly) :- aapko mein harwaqt pagal hi lagta hoon kya jab dekho yaadaas ke naam par taane
acp sir ;daya and team got a 440 watt shock
daya (shocked) :- yeh tum kya keh rhe ho abhijeet
abhijeet :- ooh toh tumhe ab sir ki side leni hai...
daya (caring) :- abhi tumhari tabiyat theek nhi hai tum aaraam karo
abhi (angry) :- daya mein baccha nhi hoon apna dhiyan rakh sakta hoon baby sitter nhi chahiye mujhe aur tum. sab ko humesha mein ki galat lagta hoon
team members are feeling sad for their seniors
abhijeet leaves the bureau in anger..
daya :- abhijeet ruko
acp sir :- jaane do usse bahut gusse mein hai wo..
daya nodded in disappointment
in bureau
all are worried about abhijeet
the whole day pass
but there is no news of abhijeet
at last in night all move to thier home
in abhijeet's home
abhijeet is standing in front of his mirror he is feeling anger on himself for the act he did in bureau
in Anger he punch hardly on the mirror.. due to which his palm got cut blood started coming out..
he just sat down on floor with a thud
he is feeling guilty as he misbehaved with team ; sir and with daya
three days had been passed..
team is feeling bad for themselves
as well as abhijeet
abhijeet behavior has changed
on the third day
daya is waiting for abhijeet and he looking very tensed
acp sir :- daya kya hua bacche
daya(worry) :- sir wo abhijeet abhi tak nhi Aaya
acp(sad) :- haa daya ; mujhe bhi bahut chinta ho rhi hai uski.. uska gussa bahut badh rha hai naa jaane kya hua hai... sab par chilla rha hai... befaaltu ka gussa
freddy(teary) :- sir abhi sir ka behavior ek dum waisa hi hota jaa rha hai jaisa starting mein tha
daya :- haa wo kuch soch -samjh nhi rha bas chilla rha hai ; us din freddy ko dant diya sir kuch toh hua hai usse wo teen din pehle se hi pareshan hai
acp :- haa daya wo bahut pareshan tha fir do din se uska gussa maano saatve Aasmaan par hai
ek toh yeh pagal ladka phone nhi utha rha hai hai kahan yeh..
tasha :- sir aap aur daya sir unke ghar jakar dekh lijiye hum log yahan sambhal lete hain waise bhi shaam ho gyi hai
acp sir and daya nodded
they drove to abhijeet's house
in car
acp sir saw daya too much worried
acp (caring) :- daya bacche shant ho jaao
daya( cares):- sir aap bhi pareshan hai abhi ke liye bas jata nhi rhe..
acp sir sighed heavily
acp sir :- ha daya kuch toh hua hai abhijeet ko warna wo kabhi bhi aise battimizzi nhi karta
daya :- haa sir
both reached to abhijeet's house
they pressed the door bell but no use
daya opened the door with spare key
they saw the whole house is dipped in silence
daya :- abhi
acp :- abhijeet bacche
no response
both went to abhijeet's room
they are shocked to see the condition of room
all the clothes are lying on floor ;mirror is broken ; vases are lying on floor..
just like a devastating storm. came to room
daya and acp sir saw abhijeet sitting near the bed side his head is downed and between his legs and hands on his face
daya (lovingly) :- abhi..
abhijeet uped his head
suddenly daya saw beer bottle near abhijeet
daya :- Abhi tumne drink ki hai
acp sir also saw bottles both are shocked to see beer near abhijeet
abhijeet jerked and he gets up.
daya and acp sir shocked to see abhijeet condition he is crying and he is looking like is worried and a little bit unstable
daya tried to come near abhijeet
abhijeet :- nhi daya mere paas mat aana warna..
daya(angry) :- warna gya
abhijeet picks the knife present on table
he put knife on his wrist
abhijeet :- warna mein apne aap ko maar dunga
acp sir and daya are shocked to hear such comment
acp (order) :- abhijeet chaku chodo
abhi :- nhi mein nhi chodunga
acp sir signaled daya
acp sir :- hume batao abhi kya hua?
abhi :- n..
suddenly daya came near him from other side and he snatched the knife and slapped abhijeet
due to slap abhijeet fell down on bed
daya (angrily) :- yeh kya pagal panti kar rhe ho tum deemag kharab ho gya hai tumhara
abhijeet gets up
abhijeet :- haa mein pagal ho gya
hoon mujhe marna hai he put a step forward
but again a slap falls over his cheeks
now the slap giver is none other than acp sir his father
acp sir(angrily) :- tumhare deemag ka screw kahin gir gya hai... kya
abhijeet just remain silence..
daya (angrily) :- sir janab ko sharab peeni hai
acp (angrily) :- yeh buri adat kab lagi janab ko
abhijeet is not responding just staring at the floor and at knife
daya(softly ) :- abhi batao kya hua hai tumhe
abhijeet (angrily) :- jaao yahan se meine kaha
now this sentence raised the bar of daya's anger..
in anger daya just slapped abhijeet harshly
abhijeet face had turned red ; blood started ozzing from his lips..
acp (sternly) :- daya chalo yahan se yeh koi jawab nhi dega aur hum apna time waste nhi kar sakte
acp sir and daya started moving
they are climbing down the stairs
abhijeet gathers his all strength as he is still in effect of beer as well as headache and his poor health as these days he missed his food and all diet
he is walking towards the stairs
he saw daya and acp sir has reached the hall
abhijeet tried to run on stairs but his health raised up his strength
lossing energy.
abhijeet rolls down the stairs due to which his wound started bleeding again which just had healed up..
daya and acp sir turned listening the falling voice.
they saw abhijeet lying on floor he eyes are lossing conscious
daya and acp sir ran towards him
daya (teary) :- abhi..
abhi (fear) :- wo maar dega
daya (confused) :- kaun maar dega
abhi (pain) :- wo
abhijeet loose his conscious
acp sir :- daya abhijeet ko guest room mein le chalte hain uske room ki halat bahut kharab hai
daya nodded
acp sir called the doctor
in meanwhile daya changed abhijeet's clothes and made him lie properly on bed
doctor came and he check abhijeet
daya :- doctor abhijeet ko kya hua hai
doctor :- daya abhijeet ka bp bahut low hai maybe he his having a very bad headache kisi cheez ne usse bahut zyada trigger kiya hai due to which his health deteroid aur jaisa aapne bataya ki unka behavior so acc to me abhijeet ko kisi cheez ne bahut bura trigger kiya hai jis wajah se uska behavior change hua ; aur uski tabiyat kharab ho gyi.. khair meine injection de diya hai agar aage bhi kuch complications ho so call me
dhiyaan rakhiyega aur yeh medicine de dena
daya nodded
acp sir sir is looking at his son face
acp sir (caring) :- kya haal bana liya hai mere bacche ne apna... kya hua hai jo abhi aisa ho gya... humare abhi ko sharab se nafrat thi wo sharab pee rha hai aur suicide karne ki koshish
daya :- sir abhi keh rha tha ki koi hume maar dega.. matlab kahin aisa toh nhi hai koi abhi se yeh sab karwa rha ho
acp :- haan ho sakta hai
they saw moment in abhijeet's hand
abhijeet opened his eyes and he gets up
abhijeet :- aap log gye nhi
acp sir is just feeling to give a slap to him but he controls seeing abhijeet's health and his mental conditions
daya brings soup for abhijeet
daya :- yeh lo soup piyo
abhijeet :- nhi peena
daya is now fed up he just sat on bed and took out handcuff and tied abhijeet's hand
abhijeet is struggling to open it
abhijeet :- daya mere haath kholo mein tumhara senior hoon
Acp sir :- beta tum mere junior ho
daya :- tumhari harkate baccho wali hai
abhijeet made a face
daya forcefully feed abhijeet and then he made abhijeet to have medicine with his own hands..
and after that he uncuffed abhijeet
daya :- batao abhijeet kaun hume maarega
abhijeet Face colour turns whiter listening this
abhijeet remained silence
daya took out his gun and put the gun on his forehead
daya :- abhi yaa toh tum sach bataoege warna meri lash milegi dekhne ko
abhi :- nhi daya please gun neeche rakh
daya :- nhi tum batao
acp sir is still in shock.. he is just feeling to slap his both idiot sons
abhi (fear) :- mein batata hoon tu gun neeche rakh
daya puts his gun down
daya :- batao
abhijeet just moved near daya and acp sir as his fear is overpowering him.
abhijeet (lostly) :- daya wo na usne gun se tumhe maardiya
daya (confused) :- kisne abhi
abhi(fear) :- usne sir ko bhi maar diya
acp sir can feel his fear so he just holds abhijeet' s hand
acp (lovingly ) :- kisne maar diya hume
abhi (innocent) :- wo sapne mein aaya aap sab mujhe bachane aaye toh usne maar diya
saying this he started crying harshly
daya just hugged his buddy
now acp sir and daya gets the answer why abhijeet was behaving
harshly.. this is because of a bad dream
daya cupped abhijeet's face and said
hum sab theek hain abhijeet
daya (caring) :-idhar dekho hume kahin chot lagi hai
abhijeet nodded
daya :-.kahan
abhijeet :- wo us din mujhe bachate waqt.
daya :- wo sirf ek accident tha..abhi suno. meri baat suno tumn yeh ke sapne ke wajah se kiya.. hume khud se door kar diya
abhijeet nodded
abhijeet (innocently) :- haan tum sab log mujhse door ho jaao fir tumhe koi nhi maanega
daya eyes become teary
acp sir holds abhijeet from shoulder and shaked him
acp sir :- abhi hume koi kuch nhi karega
abhijeet just become calm
acp sir :- abhi bacche hum cid officer hai tum humare fearless cop ho agar tum aise daroge toh kaise kaam chalega. hmm
acp sir :- abhi dekho jab tak hum saath hain tab tak hume koi kuch nhi kar sakta
abhijeet nodded and smiled a little
acp sir just hug his child...
daya(dramatically) :-koi mujhe pyar hi nHi karta
abhijeet smiles and said aaja..
trio shares a hug.
abhijeet(feeling guilty of his act) :- i am sorry sir ; I am sorry daya
meine tumhe
acp sir :- sorry ki zaroorat nhi hai abhi kyuki hum sab jaante hain aap brainless idiot ho gye hain.. akal aaj kal ulte kaamo mein ladate hain
abhijeet gets embarrassed
daya :- abhi tumhe maafi ek hi shart par milegi.. wada karo ki aage aisa kabhi nhi karoge
abhijeet :- wada
both smiles
acp :- accha ab dono so jaao
both nodded.
acp sir sings a song for his both the sons..
Aa ri aa ja
Nindiya tu le chal kahin
Udan khatole mein
Dur dur dur yahan se dur
Aa ri aa ja
Nindiya tu le chal kahin
Udan khatole mein
Dur dur dur yahan se dur
Aa ri aa ja
Mera to ye jeevan tamam
mere yaar bhara dukh se
Par mujhko jahan mein
mila sukh kaun bada tujhse
Tere liye meri jaan
zehar hazaar main pee lunga
Taj dunga duniya
Ek tere sang jee lunga
Oo nazar ke noor
Aa ri aa ja
Nindiya tu le chal kahin
Udan khatole mein
Dur dur dur yahan se dur
acp sir saw his both sons sleeping peacefully
he took quilt and covers his both the sons
acp sir :- kya bhagwan saare mahan mujhe diye hai.. ek toh hai mera emotional fool toh doosra hai mera brainless idiot... waise kaam ke time par darwaza tod daya aur sharp shine aka sharp shooter abhijeet..
he smiled seeing his sons..
he thanked for these two precious gift.
so guys thats all.
hope u all liked the os
.its written to say sorry to my brother as well my sister..hope they will forgive me.. :-)
sorry yaara; sorry bhai
read and review guys
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bye
take care.. guys