The Tyrant Returns

by ladyofthelake92

An old enemy haunts Martin the Warrior's dreams, yet how can that be when that enemy has been dead for many seasons? With the arrival of a young mousemaid connected to his past, Martin takes up his sword once more to protect the one place he swore never to return to. Takes place a few seasons after The Legend of Luke. REWRITE.

1. Author's Note

Foreword

May 10, 2021

Hello readers!

If you would rather start reading the story, you can turn the page.

I wrote this foreword to let you know I am doing a re-write on 'The Tyrant Returns'. It needed a lot of work (hence, only being the first draft). I'm posting a 'final draft' one chapter at a time. To those who have read my story and wrote 'amazing' reviews! Thank you so much again. I'm sorry for those in anticipation for Part Two. I'm working on it right now and polishing what I do have so it flows with this new edit.

I'm a terribly picky person and want this to be (somewhat) as perfect as I can get. Some chapters I wrote in a 'spur of the moment'. You know those moments when the words and characters 'speak to you' in a certain way that you feel is right? It's an exhilarating feeling! So of course, they're the ones that need the most work. I noticed there was lack of detail and character development. I want to write a story that I would be proud of and want to come back to.

Again, thank you for bearing with me. I'm sure I'm not the only one on this site who has wrote a 'forty' chapter story, deleted it, and started over. (uggh)

But I have grown to love the characters I have created in the past couple of months. I hope you have too.

Enjoy this 'final' draft of 'The Tyrant Returns'.

~ladyofthelake92