hello everybody! This is my first attempt at a fanfiction so please tell me what you think and how I can improve. I can't wait to write more but I want to gauge the reaction of this chapter first. This is a naruto OC insert fanfic. This is mostly just setting the stage for the rest of the series. I hop you guys enjoy! I'm sure you can guess what his gimmick is by his heritage, but i plan to put a unique spin on it I haven't seem before.
Chapter one: the boy with the ghostly appearance
There used to be an unspoken rule in the leaf village of konoha that a person with red eyes and a person with pale eyes cannot marry as the clans were not very fond of each other and any marriages were forced out of the clan and had to adopt different names. Of course a situation like this never happened until one day a beautiful woman with the palest of eyes and dark black hair met a man with blood red eyes that had a pinwheel pattern on them. Their names were Shiroime and Akaime. The two quickly fell in love and they eventually married in secret so that their respective clans did not know. However, one day the couple was going out to eat when a buddy of the man found them eating together, he put two and two together and they were forced to reveal their love. The buddy quickly alerted both clans and both the pale eyed women and the man with the red eyes were banished from their clan. They decided to take up the new last name Aigoddo when they eventually married. One night a gigantic nine tailed fox attacked the village decimating houses and people alike, it took the fourth hokage's life to seal the beast inside a tiny baby's body. Three week later, Shirome and Akaime gave birth to a child. They decided to name Akashirome, a combination of their names and their eyes. The child grew a pretty normal life, he has yet to unlock any dojutsu. His father who was a rather great fuinjutsu user taught him some basics, and his mother taught him what his chakra natures were. When they did the paper test they found out he had wind and fire chakra. The kid had started learning some basic wind and fire jutsu like the fireball and gale palm jutsu. Then the day came, the day being the day AkaShirome was to enter the ninja academy.
"Goodbye mom, goodbye dad" the boy said.
"Goodbye honey" said Shirome. The father poked his child in the heart. This was a sign of love between them.
"Go show those kids what you're made of" said Akaime
AkaShirome was always bullied by other kids his age. It was most likely due to his extremely pale white skin. None of his parents had this pale skin, and he didn't know any other relatives. So the kid walked to school and along the way he saw a blond kid getting pelted by rocks by the villages. He didn't understand why but his parents didn't want him near him and all the other villagers seemed to hate him. He walked on by without paying much mind to him and headed to the ninja school. When he arrived at the school he was greeted by his teacher iruka
"Hi, you must be AkaShirome." The teacher said
"How'd you know?" Akashirome asked, already knowing the answer
"Ah. It was because of your pale skin. Your previous teacher told me about it" he said
"Of course. Everybody only ever sees my pale skin. It's all people talk about and see." The boy said. He hated his pale skin, everybody always made fun of it and he stuck out like a sore thumb.
"Oh hey. I know you. You're ghostfreak" said a boy in the back with a dog in his hoodie
"Oh hi Kiba. I have a name you know. It's AkaShirome. Ring a bell?" The pale boy said
"Man, that's hard to say. I'll just stick with ghostfreak due to your pale skin" the dog-like boy responded. Akashirome sat down at his seat quietly, not really responding. He knew that reacting would only really make things worse for him as Kiba never shuts up. He knows this first hand as his house was right next to the Inuzuka complex and Kiba would always find spare time to make fun of him. One by one all the kids would enter the classroom with iruka greeting them all. The last person to enter the classroom was a blond kid with spiky hair. He had a spiral symbol on his back that looked familiar but AmaShirome couldn't tell why.
"Okay class. Today we'll be doing a placement test to see where you stand in terms of skill. This is so I know what to teach you guys and what I can skip." The teacher said calmly. The class went outside the school training area in order to test their skills. First up was kunai and shuriken throwing. The class went and threw their kunai and shuriken. "Uchiha Sasuke." A black haired kid wearing the Uchiha symbol on his back stepped up. He threw the shuriken and. "9/10 very good Sasuke," said iruka sensei. All the girls immediately started fawning over him like he was some kind of pop star. "Next up, Uzumaki Naruto" the blond kid stepped up and threw the shuriken and somehow missed every single one.
"How did someone miss every single shuriken? What a moron" Kiba laughed. Now it was extremely obvious to AkaShirome that the boy was faking, almost like he was trying to get attention.
"Next up, Aigoddo AkaShirome" said the teacher. The moon pale boy stood up and took out a scroll. He then popped another scroll outside the scroll. Next up, he popped ten kunai out of the second scroll. The boy then launched all ten kunai. He used wind jutsu to sharpen the blades as well as to make them go faster. The result being 8/10 kunai not only landing but piercing straight through the targets. The other two missed though. "That was certainly impressive AkaShirome"
"Thanks, teach," the boy walks back to his place and takes out a book. This book was labeled basic wind chakra applications. He was currently reading a section on manipulating air currents. "This could be useful" he says as he starts jotting down notes for a future project. One by one the rest of the class did shuriken and kunai tests.
"Okay class, now it's time for the ninjutsu test." This was more for the clan kids as they were the ones who would most likely know jutsu at this young age. "First up. Uchiha Sasuke" now the same boy who got a nine out of ten was up.
"Fire style: fireball jutsu" the Uchiha kid said as a fireball spewed from his mouth. It completely burned the log they were targeting. Some more of the clan kids went and did their jutsu.
"Alright, next up AkaShirome"
"Aright teach" the moon pale eyed kid walked up. The boy started doing some hand signs and went "fire style: fireball jutsu." immediately after he started doing more hand signs and goes "wind style: gale palm jutsu," he uses the wind to push the fire ball even further. The fire also eats up some of the oxygen in the wind, causing it to grow in size. Completely destroying the target. Of course this almost completely uses up his chakra, but it was worth it to show off. He took a bow and went "thank you, thank you." he walked back to the rest of the class.
"Alright class, next up is the taijutsu test. You'll be facing off against my teaching assistant mizuki. The class went by one by one untl.
"Next up, Aigoddo AkaShirome." mizuki said
"Alright, but just so you know, I nearly drained myself with my previous jutsus. Not to mention my taijutsu isn't the greatest, so I doubt I'll do any damage," AkaShirome said honestly.
"That's fine, just do your best and fight me. Of course I won't be using my full strength against some children" of course he wasn't going to go all out against children. He did however, want to establish that he was superior to them. So he planned to beat each and every one of them.
"Alright, let's do this." The boy entered a gentle palm stance his mother taught him.
"Interesting. Are you perhaps of hyuga descent? It makes the pale eyes make a lot more sense, not to mention the gentle palm is a hyuga specialty." the curious sensei spoke
"Yeah. My mother was hyuga. I fail to see how that applies here though." The boy rushed forward and gathered chakra into his arms.
'It doesn't matter if you have a gentle fist stand or not. If you don't have the byakugan, it might as well be worthless' the assistant started to parry the kids blows. They weren't very hard to parry as he was already weakened and he was a 7 year old after all.
"See? I told you I couldn't hurt him at all. Oh well. I guess I can try that" he said, talking to himself like a 21rst century schizoid man. He then charged his palms with as much wind chakra as he could muster. "Wind style: gentle fist strike"
*one week ago*
"Alright, so for this technique you need to channel your wind chakra through your palms and strike with the basic gentle fist strike." his mother spoke
"I don't know if I can do this. I've tried and I've tried but I haven't been able to."
"You can't give up. Even if you don't have a byakugan yet you can use the gentle fist. This technique was made to compensate for that"
*back to present*
Getting past his cocky teacher's defences dThe white eyed boy struck the teacher's in the stomach as hard as he could. He tried to hit him as close to the chakra points as he could.
"Hah. you missed." mizuki said
"Did I?" Suddenly, Mizuki felt like a gust of wind hit his stomach. It was almost like his chakra points themselves were getting hit by a sharp wind.
"You" he coughed "planned this?' Mizuki weezed
"Not really. This was the first time I was able to pull off the technique. I probably just got lucky. Just like everything else" AkaShirome said.
'That wasn't luck at all. He really is skilled. It's a real shame he doesn't seem to believe he is' iruka sensei thought. After Mizuki recovered, the rest of the class did their taijutsu test. Most of them did mediocre at best, with a few standouts such as naruto and sasuke. Although for opposite reasons. Sasuke managed to seriously wind and hurt mizuki. While Naruto failed miserably.
*the next day*
The class did a written exam today. Akashirome did average as he often did.
Over the next year of ninja school, AkaShirome made friends with some classmates. This included Ino Uamanaka, Shikamaru Nara, and an upperclassman named tenten. Tenten taught him more about fuinjutsu as well as how to use different weapons. While AkaShirome taught tenten about an infinite storage trick. "Say you have a scroll that can hold any fifty items. Then say you have fifty more of those. You can fit fifty fifty items holding scrolls inside one fifty item holding scroll. Thus increasing your space up to 250 items." AkaShirome explained.
*the night of January first*
"Hey mom, I think I heard a noise downstairs." AkaShirome asked timidly.
"Okay, lets go check it out. It's probably your father as I don't see him in bed." his mother said soothingly. The two white eyed family members went downstairs and to their horror they saw an almost lifeless body there.
"D-dad?" the boy whimpered quietly.
"Akaime? Don't worry. We'll get you to a doctor straight away" Shirome said. Even though she said not to worry she was panicking pretty bad. The man was bleeding out badly. If they didn't do something soon he would die of blood loss
"No. don't call them. I think I'm a goner."
"Please don't go daddy" the boy started crying "I don't want you to go before I become a splendid ninja. You promised you'd be there when I did"
"Don't worry. I'll still be with you" *He reached out and poked his heart.* "in here"
"No! No! Please don't leave!" the mother cried out.
"Don't worry. Everything will be alright. The things we lose always have a way of coming back to us somehow. Here AkaShimore, take this scroll. Inside it was a gift reserved for when you graduated from the ninja academy. But since I won't be there, you can have it now." AkaShirome opened the scroll and out of it popped a hanglider of sorts. "That's a chakra infused hang glider. If you put some wind chakra into it, it'll glide indefinitely.
"Thank you dad. I love you" he was crying full blown tears now.
"Goodbye son. Goodbye Shirome. I love you both" his eyes started to glaze over
"His heart stopped, '' his mom said solemnly. Shirome put Akaime's eyelids down. "There. Now it's like he's sleeping" suddenly AkaShirome's vision started to get blurry as the nerves around his started bulking up. He could now see his mom's chakra points and chakra networks.
"Hey mom. I think I just unlocked my byakugan." that night became known as the Uchiha massacre. Where every single uchiha was killed by a man named Itachi Uchiha. All of them except his brother and AkaShirome.
So what did you guys think? I know there was a lot of run on sentences, I'm not very good at not making those. I wonder if anyone can guess where the pale skin is going to lead. I'm going to leave a link to a poll where you can decide the love interest for this series. I plan to rework the pretty much all of the female characters so that they aren't dead weight to the story. Please note that the girl you pick will gain even more attention then the rest so choose wisely. /pjpwjsq4v