I'm rewriting the first chapter... I know I just wrote it but I didn't think many people would like that idea so I just wrote what came to my mind and barely detail anything really. So I'll rewrite it and make it longer and better detailed. It's still going to go about the direction I went last time but with a few changes.
An Otsutsuki prince was born. This one was special, with more potential than any other Otsutsuki. He was born with the Jougan that many Otsutsuki dreamt to have. As he was born his name was written on a special stone. This special stone chose the name of a newborn Otsutsuki and as such their fate was set in stone. This Otsutsuki's name was Naruto.
The Otsutsuki were born, unlike the humans. They give birth to children which to humans they would look like eight years old.
Naruto wore standard Otsutsuki clothes. He had pale skin and pale brown hair. Naruto had a pair of horn-like protrusions extending from either side of his forehead. His eyes were different from others due to him having the pure eyes also called the Jougan. The sclera was a dark gray while the pupil and the iris had a light blue color.
Due to Naruto having a lot of potential as an Otsutsuki, he was allowed to go eat planets with high levels of energy at a young age. Naruto fed the seedling with his partner's life which produced a Chakra Fruit. Every time Naruto came back from a planet, he was ordered to go back but this time with a more powerful partner which resulted in a more powerful Chakra Fruit. His partners however came back using Karma.
After eating thousands of Planets in just a few years Naruto started to change. Every time growing stronger and evolving, Naruto grew bored. He didn't care for anything anymore. If anyone were to annoy him even the slightest, he killed them. He didn't know what else to do. He grew stronger than anyone else and his boredom also grew with him.
He just went planet after planet, eating Chakra Fruit. With the help of his Jougan, he could go after planets even faster. Naruto grew a third eye which he kept closed. As the time passed Naruto questioned himself Why was I born? What even is my purpose?
Naruto had looked back into about a thousand years ago in the Otsutsuki history and had noticed something strange. Two Otsutsuki had gone to another planet with no return. He was curious as to why that was. Was there someone strong who killed them to protect their planet? When this question arose in Naruto's mind he grew even more curious. The two Otsutski named Kaguya and Isshiki were respected among the Otsutsuki clan and if there was someone strong enough to defeat both of them the something interesting might finally happen in his life.
At the age of ten without leaving a word, leaving no single trace of his life in the dimension that the Otsutsuki lived in, Naruto went to that planet. The Otsutsuki members were glad that he had suddenly disappeared. Naruto had broken the power balance amongst the Otsutsuki clan and they didn't like that and with him finally gone they were filled with joy.
His father, the king, however, was no way near being happy. He was furious, but someone suggested something that calmed him down a little. With the amount of Chakra Fruits Naruto ate and them all being highly filled with power, Naruto might've evolved to the point he ascended to heaven, ruling it. No one had eaten or grown so powerful as Naruto has in the clan's history so it seemed reasonable. He was still upset about losing a valuable asset to his clan but there wasn't anyone who can stand against the Otsutsuki clan anyways.
Naruto stood above the planet called earth. The planet which the two Otsutsuki probably resided in. He was however upset to find that Kaguya and Isshiki were nowhere to find. Naruto had sensed something strange. The humans on this planet didn't have that much of a high Chakra level except a few. Nine certain individuals had an exceptionally high level of Chakra compared to the others.
Knowing nothing of this world Naruto went to the human with the highest amount of Chakra. He stood above a village as he activated his Byakugan. No changes on his eyes appearance-wise except that when he activated it, his eyes caused the veins near the temples to bulge due to the increased blood flow. Naruto looked in the direction that the high amount of Chakra was and saw something interesting. The chakra was orange which was strange because the other humans had blue. He paid no mind to this and went to the building the human was in.
Naruto opened the door and saw the one with the chakra. It was a woman and next to her was another man. She was crying over something and the man also seemed upset but he went in nonetheless.
"Pardon the intrusion but I was looking for you," said Naruto in a calm voice while looking at the woman.
"Me?" she asked. She was confused since she had never seen this kid and the man next to her was also as confused as her. He looked strange too which they noted.
"Yes. I'm curious about that chakra of yours," said Naruto. He saw them change their facial expressions and stood up looking for a fight.
Naruto was confused as to why they were on such high alert at the moment they heard him. He wanted to test them, or rather their strength. Maybe chakra wasn't that important to them and they fought somehow else. With that in mind, Naruto just rushed in the direction they were as he did a light punch at the man's stomach. He noticed however that they were extremely weak and couldn't even follow him at this level of speed.
The woman turned slowly to see the kid right beside her and her husband pushed to the wall. It looked like the force of the kid's punch pushed him so hard against the wall that it injured his back and couldn't stand right now. She got mad and started attacking him furiously with some chains coming from her back.
'Interesting technique but still very weak' Naruto thought. He wasn't here to fight anyways. He wanted to know about this world first. Naruto flexed his chakra a little which seemed to stop her in her tracks. "Sit," ordered Naruto.
Nothing else she could do, she sat. "Look's like you got mad when I attacked that man so I'll heal him. I didn't come here to fight anyways," said Naruto. He went to the man and with his hand surrounded on green chakra, touched his back which had seemed to fully heal him.
'Medical Ninjutsu? It fully healed him?!' she thought.
The man hadn't fallen unconscious so he had seen everything. When he was healed, he stood up to sit on the chair next to the woman. The man was also curious as to what this kid if he even was a kid, wanted. "What do you want?" he asked.
"Who is your leader?" asked Naruto.
"I am," replied the man who had blonde hair.
"Alright then, what is that orange chakra in her?" asked Naruto as he looked at her.
'He doesn't know about the Kyuubi?' he thought. "It's the Nine-Tails," he answered.
"Nine Tails?" Naruto asked. He knew there was a beast with Ten-Tails and that was a seedling but he had never heard about a beast with Nine Tails.
"Yes. There are nine Tailed Beasts in this world and are all different to one another and all have a different number of tails, from one to nine," he answered.
"What about the Ten-Tails?" asked Naruto again.
The man looked confused and that confused face was all Naruto needed. Naruto then remembered that they were upset before he came in and thought he'd asked them what that was about. "You, woman. Why were you crying before?" asked Naruto. 'What is it that upsets people?'
She looked at him with a surprised face. "Oh, you saw that," she said and then paused.
"Yes, so answer," ordered Naruto.
She was annoyed at this but couldn't do anything anyways. "We have been trying to get a child but we are unable to. A few months after I get pregnant, the beast inside me kills it," she answered as she started crying again.
'The beast isn't allowing them to give birth?' thought Naruto confused as to why. "So why do you keep the beast inside of you? Or why did you have it in the first place?" Naruto asked.
The man then stepped in. "Because the beasts are a weapon of mass destruction and must be kept in check. Once a beast is sealed inside a human it must remain in it because if it somehow escapes said human. will die and it will continue destroying villages," he said.
'I'm guessing it can't be killed then...' thought Naruto as he got an idea. "How would you like me to get the Beast outside of you in exchange for something..." said Naruto.
"In exchange for what?" he asked.
"I live here with you," said Naruto smiling. He could gather information while also having a cozy place to leave in.
"You want to live in here? With us?" she asked.
"Yep," said Naruto.
The blonde man then thought. His wife would finally be free of a burden, they would finally be able to have a child and the Nine-Tails would be in his check. This was perfect for them.
"Give us a minute to talk please," she asked.
Naruto looked at them and said, "Fine," Naruto went outside as he waited for them to call him back.
After they made the decision they called him back. "So?" asked Naruto.
"How long do you plan on living here?" she asked.
"As long as I'm entertained but I'll probably stay here for a long time since I have nowhere else to go," he said.
"Alright, we'll take you," she said excitedly.
Naruto asked her to lay down. Naruto held out his hand on her stomach as he started to pull out the demonic chakra. When he was done, she had gotten weak and was on the verge of dying. Naruto was just staying there looking at her.
"W-what are you doing? Do something or she'll die" yelled the blonde man.
"Patience, human," said Naruto.
On her final breath, Naruto said, "Finally, she sure takes her time," Naruto then opens his third eye on his forehead.
The blonde man was shocked to see a third eye. 'Is he a god?' he thought. Naruto had two horns, a third eye and had displayed powers beyond his imagination. The third eye had a red sclera and iris, with a black pupil and black ripple pattern spreading over the eyeball and nine tomoe. It was similar to the Sharingan yet so different. More divine...
Using the third eye's ability he pulls her soul back in reviving her. 'Even normal Otsutsuki cant use this ability without consequences but he should appear soon,' thought Naruto.
After a second had passed Naruto looked around to see nothing but white. Everything around him had a white color and the place seemed like it had no end. A figure appeared before him who looked like the king of hell and said, "What human dares to revive the dead and refuse to give his soul as payment," came a voice from that figure.
"Don't you dare call me a human," said Naruto with an intimidating voice. "You're below me. I do what I want and you do as I say. If I want to bring back the dead you won't dare and try to stop me like you did this time. Do it and you will regret it. We've been through this before, do you want to try me again?" said Naruto as he raised his voice a little.
"P-please forgive me. I didn't realize y-you would be in this kind of place. I'll be more c-careful the next time. Please forgive me," the figure said as he realized his mistake. The Kind of Hell had met him before when Naruto revived someone for the first time to test his limits. He tried to take Naruto soul but suffered the consequences and he didn't want to take that route again.
"Good. This is the last chance you got," he said when everything went back to normal. Naruto seemed to teleport away and then back which confused both of them.
"Where were you?" he asked as he was holding the woman tightly inside his arms.
"Ah, nothing. The Reaper wasn't happy that I revived her but I dealt with," said Naruto casually.
"Reaper?! Am I going to hell now that I cheated death?!" she said worriedly.
Naruto laughed at how stupid she sounded although it did make sense. "Nah, normally you would've but because I did, he won't," said Naruto.
With all that had just happened right now, the blonde man was sure that the being before them was indeed a god. Both of them just knew it.
"Do... do you have a name?" she asked.
Naruto looked at her confused. "Of course I do-" Naruto then just remembered all that had happened but he didn't even introduce himself. Even though he considered himself a being above all else, he still had manners. Or so he thought. "Forgive me. My name is Naruto Otsutsuki. Nice to meet you," said Naruto. Naruto looked at them confused. With all that they had seen until now, they shouldn't really be shocked by something like his name. It annoyed him that they were looking at him like that just because of his name. "Human, why are you looking at me like that?" he ordered.
The two then looked at each other and then the woman answered, "Because... that's how we wanted to name our son..."
For the first time in a long time, Naruto was shocked. He had always questioned his name. What does Naruto even mean? 'Fate is playing a twisted game' he thought.
The two looked at Naruto, they noticed that he was also shocked. 'Does this mean anything?' they both thought. "What kind of food do you eat...?" she asked.
"Food? We only eat Chakra Fruits which is something complicated to explain right now. But why are you asking me that?" replied Naruto with another question.
"Naruto is an ingredient that is used in the food we eat here. His Sensei told us that name. How were you even named?" she said looking at her Husband.
"Food ingredient? I was named after food?! We have a special stone that shows our name when we are born. It is said that when it shows our name, it also sets our fates in stone. Now I know what they meant..." said Naruto. "Crazy how all this time it led me to you guys..." continued Naruto. 'Fine, I'll play along and see what you have in order. As much as I hate this,' thought Naruto.
The two looked at each other confused a little. Maybe they were meant to raise him which is why they haven't been gifted a baby... She looked at her husband and said, "Minato, let's do our best,"
Minato looked at her and his face lit up. "Hai, Kushina,"
"Kushina and Minato huh?" said Naruto.
They had shown Naruto around the house and the room where Naruto would be sleeping.
"Alright, dinner will be ready in a bit. You can stay here and get used to your room or come downstairs," said Kushina smiling.
"I'll stay here, gotta gather my thoughts," said Naruto.
Kushina nodded and went downstairs. Naruto sat down on the bed and closed his eyes. When he opened his eyes again, he saw before him a big nine-tailed fox. "The best of the beasts. The reincarnation of evil or whatever they call you," said Naruto looking at the fox before him.
"What are you? You just revived someone from the dead, there is no way you are human. Although you do look like my father which is strange..." said the fox.
"Father? Isshiki huh..." said Naruto.
"What? Isshiki? No, no idea who that is. My father's name is Hagormo Otsutsuki also known as the Sage of Six Paths," replied the fox.
"Oh? A male Otsutsuki on earth that isn't Isshiki? Interesting," said Naruto to himself. "You, foul beast. I heard there are others like you, do you know where they are?" continued Naruto.
"You... I'm not a beast you bastard. My name is Kurama and you better call me that if you want my help to find them..." answered Kurama.
"Kurama huh? Not a beast? Only beasts would cause pointless destruction and kill humans for the likes of it," said Naruto as he noticed that Kurama didn't like what he said.
"I didn't cause any pointless destruction..." said Kurama catching a little of Naruto attention.
"Oh? Do tell. I'd like to know more about you beasts who roam the world. Tell me about this Hagoromo and this world," asked Naruto.
Kurama then started telling about himself and about Hagoromo. Even though Kurama didn't like Naruto, he still felt something about Naruto that resembled his father. He just didn't know what.
"I see so that's why there are nine of you. Can't believe you got caught like that. It's hilarious," said Naruto. Kurama frowned at this as he looked away. "Well, for now, I'll stop making fun of you. I'll gather all of you tailed beasts together and then see what happens from there. I'll change the scenario in here since it looks pretty sad and have fun in here I guess," said Naruto and then went downstairs to the call of Kushina.
"What is this?" asked Naruto looking weird at the dinner table.
"Tonight we have Curry Rice and Miso Soup. Go ahead try it," said Kushina.
Naruto sat down and tried to eat the food but confused about how to eat it. "Do I grab it with my hands?" he asked.
Kushina and Minato looked at him and laughed a little. "No silly, grab it with this spoon. Here I'll show you," said Kushina as she showed him how to eat it.
It was an interesting way to eat. Naruto tried it too, struggling a little at first but he did. On the first bite, his eyes lit up. He started eating more and more. Each time faster than before. "This is so awesome. It's dangerous how tasty this is," said Naruto with his mouth full. Kushina and Minato looked at him smiling. Even though he appeared as a god, he was still like a little kid.
That is done. Obvious difference between the first time I wrote it and this. I'll try to update it every week same with my other fanfic. I might miss it sometimes but hey I have a social life. Now I have a few plans on what I want this to be and how I'm going to do it. Hope you enjoyed it and please leave a review.
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