It's been over a year since I wrote this, and I wanted to see if my writing had improved somewhat. What do you guys think?
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"You said the farm boy has the lamp?" Cinder asked.
Neo nodded.
"Find him. Take it."
Neo stood up and transformed into Ruby Rose.
Cinder's anger flared up at the sight of the girl, but she stomped it down. "No," she said, angrier than she meant to. Then she breathed out. "We get what I need first. Then we get what we want." I need more power, she thought to herself. I need the Maiden.
Neo rolled her eyes. It was almost like Cinder didn't care about Ruby. But that couldn't be the case… right?
"So we just need to get the relic from the boy." Cinder continued. "He can't be that strong. You could defeat him in a fight.
Neo rolled her eyes again. Starting a fight in the middle of Atlas Academy was not a wise thing. But she had another idea.
She removed the Ruby illusion and began taking off her clothes.
Cinder stared at her. "Wh-what are you doing?"
Neo ignored her as she completely stripped down before walking off to a corner of the room and opening one of her special clothes boxes. These were selected specifically in case she did an infiltration mission that might involve physical contact. In a minute, she was dressed like Ruby Rose, cape and all. With a quick illusion, she now looked like the girl in question.
Neo usually didn't have to change her clothes for her powers, but if she was going to do this, she needed the clothes on her body to match the ones on little red. With one exception.
She picked up Roman's hat and put it on her head before hiding it with an illusion. She picked up Hush and disguised it as Crescent Rose. She turned to Cinder.
And let out a silent laugh at her gob smacked face. Good to know she still had it.
She walked up to the Maiden and snapped her fingers in her face, snapping her out of it.
Fingers snapped in front of her face snapping her out of her trance. "What?" she asked, surprised Neo had gotten so close.
A sign materialized in Neo's hand. 'Glad to see it works. Hopefully, the boy is less gay than you.'
Cinder blushed as the Neo put on more clothes. "Well, I guess that will work."
Neo turned winked and before throwing a towel at Cinder.
Cinder looked down at the pink towel, confused.
A few drops of blood fell onto it from her nose. Cinder groaned and pressed it into her face.
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Oscar paced up and down his room, thinking about Ironwood's reaction. He'd looked so betrayed when he'd learned the truth. He was calm now, but there was an invasion to stop. Would he be so friendly afterwards?
Not telling him the truth was a mistake, Oscar thought.
And then he heard the door behind him creak open.
Oscar turned around. "Ruby?" He asked.
Neo smiled seductively.
Oscar blinked. "Ruby?"
Neo slipped her hand to her cape and let it drop along with her weapon.
"Ruby?" Oscar repeated.
Neo took a step forward as she began undoing her belt.
Oscar took a step back, not liking the look in her eyes. Well that was a lie, he liked it, but it was intimidating.
In a few second, Neo had stripped down to her underwear and had backed to boy into a wall.
"What's happening?" Oscar asked, trying really hard to keep his eyes on her silver eyes.
Neo smirked as the boy stared at her hat. Ruby was taller than him and he was taller than her, but as long as he was distracted, he probably wouldn't notice if Ruby's size shrunk a few inches.
She dropped to her knees and began unbuckling his belt. As she did, she looked at the relic. She just needed to grab it. She began inching her hand towards it, unconsciously pulling Oscar's pants open.
And then something slapped her.
Neo blinked in surprised before looking at the offending object.
Wow, Neo thought. He's packing.
She looked up form the dick to the blushing boy it belonged to. Oscar was looking to the side, clearly embarrassed from dick-slapping her. He looked so adorable.
Neo looked at the huge dick attached to his hips before licking her lips, her decision made. This would be both fun and she could mess with this kid who so obviously had a crush on Ruby.
Oscar glanced down. "Ruby are-" He gasped as Neo licked the bottom of his dick, raising her head slowly and running through the entire length before stopping with the head resting on her tongue. She then pushed forward, taking his length into her mouth. It was too big to fit the whole thing, but she got a sizable portion in before she began bobbing her head.
Neo looked up and almost smirked at his squeezed eyes and contorted face before she went back to blowing him, enjoying the feeling of his length sliding into her mouth and to her throat. She could taste his pre-cum and knew that he was inching closer and closer to blowing his load, so she slowed down, moving her head less as she moved her tongue around his dick making him buck his hips in anticipation.
With a smirk, she slid back, releasing his manhood and making him whimper in surprise.
"Ruby?" He asked.
Neo smirked at how cute he was before she turned around and began crawling away from him on her hands and knees making sure to wiggle her ass a little more than necessary to signal what she wanted.
Oscar stared at Ruby's retreating ass, a wet spot dead center in her underwear and felt his almost painfully hard dick twitch in anticipation. Making his decision, he walked forward, fell to his knees, and grabbed her hips keeping her from moving before reaching forward and moving her panties out of the way.
Neo shuddered at the feeling of the gloved hand brushing against her sensitive pussy. Then she gasped, or at least, made her own silent variant of it as she felt a tongue run up and down the length of her slit before pushing in, sending a shudder through her body as the boy tasted her pussy.
Virgin or not, he knows what he's doing, she thought as he gave her pussy a few more solid licks before he stopped. And then she felt the head of his penis at her entrance.
Oscar slowly began to push into her, probably thinking she was a virgin, but Neo wasn't having any of that and slammed her ass back, taking in most of his length at once. And then she froze as a shock of pleasure shot through her body.
For the first time, Neo considered that she may have made a mistake presenting her pussy to her enemy's dick after so long a dry spell of hunting Cinder and then Ruby.
"Are you okay?" Oscar asked.
Neo, against her better judgement, nodded.
Satisfied with the answer, the farm boy began rocking his hips back and forth, moaning at the feeling of her vagina gripping his dick as he slammed in and out of the slick entrance.
Neo would have moaned if she could speak as she felt her body be filled in ways she had not realized it could, the boy's dick reaching parts of her she never imagined, making her pant from the feeling. She roughly recognized that she was losing control of the situation, especially when Oscar began pumping faster making her legs go weak.
Slow down, she mouthed, before remembering that she couldn't talk and he couldn't see her face.
At that moment, Oscar leaned down onto the girl, hugging her from behind as his hips went even faster, now including more of his body weight. It felt incredible and overwhelming as he pumped in and out of her and mind breaking speeds.
Oscar on the other hand was on cloud nine as he drove his cock deeper and deeper into the hole between the girl's legs, feeling even better than it had before. And then he pinched one of her nipples.
Neo let out a silent scream and arched her back as she was suddenly assaulted by an unexpected orgasm, but Oscar didn't notice and got even faster as he suddenly felt her pussy get slicker and squeeze even tighter on him.
Neo's body was rocked as she found herself being relentlessly railed by the boy she'd been teasing earlier unable to make him stop as he reshaped her insides with his cock.
He pounded her with deep yet fast stokes that made her
How long had it been? How much stamina did he have?
Oh wait… he was a literal farm boy.
Neo's hands began losing their strength and she began to dip down into a more submissive doggy-style pose. Oscar stopped hugging her and planted his hand on either side of her as she lowered herself, her hips staying in the air.
"Ruby… I'm close, Oscar said, the new position making him more and more excited. Neo nodded as she felt her second climax approaching.
It suddenly occurred to Oscar that Ruby hadn't said a single word to him since they'd started. However, this didn't stop his hips as he approached the edge.
Neo felt the pressure in her body build up more and more, her more submissive pose giving him even deeper reach into her body. All to soon, she felt the pressure hit the breaking point all at once as she came.
Oscar came as well, unleashing his load into the huntress beneath him as she arched her back from the pleasure of her orgasm.
They both collapsed, gasping for air.
"That… was…incredible." Oscar said, panting for air as he moved back off the girl. And then he realized that she was smaller than him. And cracking.
As soon as he pulled out of her, however, it was clear she was wasn't having it because she immediately spun around and grabbed him, pulling him into a hug on top of her as his dick slid into her pussy again. His slowly softening dick got even harder.
Oscar moaned as he used his hands to lift himself to get some leverage. And then he stared down.
"Who are you?"
Neo's eyes widened. Her illusion had broken once he'd slid back inside her.
More and more suspicion began to cloud Oscar's face.
Neo, thinking quickly, transformed into the Schnee girl.
Oscar stared at her, his dick getting even harder, before she wrapped her legs around him and he began unconsciously railing her again.
She gave the farm boy a smile and gave a small apology prayer to Roman, feeling his hat still on her head. She was not going to be getting any revenge in the foreseeable future.
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I might make more chapters if this gets a good reception.
