this is my very first neptunia fan fiction


ultradimension*

Croire is floating with a smile on her face the people of tari who once view their goddess Rei Ryghts as the saviour is now their most hated enemy on the entire nation the more Rei inflict punishment to her people the more angry they become which would lead to chaos,Tari would go down oh this would definitely record this , happily humming to herself she than notice a glowing light in the sharecite room "what the hell is going in there" now curious Croire floated forward the sharecite room 'hah it would be funny if a human break the sharecite the would put Rei in her but than again it would be far more fun to see how far can this nation go with all this chaos'.

reaching the sharecite room she saw no one ,Croire frowned at this the sharecite was glowing intensely and she couldn't figure why? it could be the people still have faith and obviously isn't the lack of faith ,otherwise the sharecite would have been long gone the sharecite glow more intensely "what the fu" she covered her eyes.

once the sharecite stopped glowing Croire uncovered her eyes "what!" she was shocked in front of her was a girl if she had to guess she must be around 17 or18 years old but what was more surprising is her resemblance to Rei ,blue hair only the reaches her shoulder she has also a horn and of course she is naked Croire was at loss of word "shit she is a candidate" being a tome gave her knowledge about about everything even candidates .

"I wonder how she would take this" now Croire was thinking what to do with the candidate on one hand she could try and turn her into a tyrant goddess like her older sister but there was a problem the time it would take make her the same as Rei 'fuck everything that has to do with a candidate is complicated ' Croire was very frustrated and than a suddenly she was realizing something she never consider 'what if she somehow change Rei from the arrogant goddess to something else' Croire was so deep in thought the she never notice the candidate was awake and staring at her.

the girl was slightly nervous "u-um hello" this made Croire stop and looked at her

"so you're awake " Croire said after a long silence the girl remain silent but nodded " are you going say anything or just gonna stay there quite" she was feeling the anger from earlier rise again and she realized since the candidate is naked the girl was feeling more nervous "look just stay here until I get you some clothes alright" without waiting Croire warped to the nearest store to buy some clothes .


after sometime the Croire return with a traditional maid outfit and pair of boots ,blue bikini "here use this" she drop them near the girl began dressing herself up much to the tome relief the candidate knew bup ic things after that Croire decided to address the main issue and it was naming her only to name came in mind to her Mikey and Suzy once she was certain what name to give "your name is Suzy" .

the girl now named Suzy was happy "that's my name thank you so much...um."

"it Croire"

"thank you so much miss Croire"

"yeah whatever let's just go so we can meet your big sister ,save your questions for her" Suzy nodded and two began walking out of the sharecite room Croire was thinking of many scenarios none of them were interesting but one manage to catch her interest she began smiling and stopped Suzy who was behind her was confuse .

"miss Croire..."

"you know Suzy I think your meeting with Rei is gonna have wait"

"huh?" Suzy felt like she was sinking by something she looked and saw what look like a black hole she tried to move but her legs were already stuck soon fear was overcoming she looked at Croire with pleading eyes "miss Croire please save me!" the tome turn around and gave her a wicked smile .

"and why should I your big sister said to me if a candidate shows up get rid of them" while it was a lie but it did work the girls eyes were overflowing tears .

"...b-big sis wants...me...gone?"

"but if you really feeling up for why not get revenge" said Croire

before being consume entirely Suzy heard Croire's word "revenge... I want..revenge" she than lost consciousness


soon Rei Ryghts was heading to the sharecite room after hearing a commotion but to her surprise she saw Croire there already "Croire what hell happened here "

"oh nothing it was just a bug nothing to worry about" Croire than notice Rei clothes were torn in some area "what the fuck happen to you"

"those bitches invented something call oopart which was made to harm a goddess...shit hurt alot" she glance around the sharecite room "are you sure nothing happened" she questioned

"oh for fucks sakes nothing happened here it was just a bug!


before people ask no Suzy is not dead Croire send her to another dimension

fun facts Suzy is the name of small chip of the Atari lynx that is close to Mikey which is the large chip