I'm new at writing poetry. I chose to practice this literature form with this amazing show and characters. Please feel free to give me a feedback about the structure, the rhymes, all of that. Also, leave a comment if you liked the poems. English is my second language. You can find these poems too in my AO3 account with the same user name.
For this poem I chose the "Spenserian Stanza"
A poem for Ivar
"The Boneless"
A child so helpless, fragile, Oh cruel fate!
sweet volatile temper, clever of all
still young, he had one of the greatest faith
travels through a wild sea, begins the fall
he grives for his lost, revenge in his crawl
once rejected now feared, Hail to the King!
blue and tempestouse eyes, with pride stood tall
a seed remained from "The Boneless", his kin
we remember the stories, his name we all sing.