Writer's Note:
Dragon Ball Jr Star is a sequel to Dragon Ball Jr taking place 1000 years after the Dragon Ball Jr Hidorika Saga, 1140 years after Dragon Ball GT and 1146 years after Dragon Ball Z. It was written as part of Dragon Ball Jr, but I split it when uploading it here since it's has a completely different story structure and main cast.
This is a fanfiction I started writing 2008 to 2010 so it's generally badly written like the previous story I posted.
My lack of proper grammar and English will show it's ugly head as well as grade school level writing. I had no idea what I was doing nor did I care. I wanted to write down what I hoped and wanted to see at the time. We all were desperate for more Dragon Balls and the AF rumors gave us going.
The story will evolve over time to be similar to stuff you see in Dragon Ball Heroes, only that this was made without me seeing Father of Bardock and 4 years before Battle of Gods came out. So don't come expecting Dragon Ball Super stuff in this. Also it's heavily inspired by animes I watched at the time like Yugioh 5Ds and Bleach. You will be able to tell these scenes as they come.
Star Saga: Chapters 1-18 + Movie 1 Judgement of Super Saiyan
Virus Saga: Chapters 19-34 + Movie 2 Dr. Zaigen and the Espra
Majin Ryu Saga: Chapter 35-47 + Movie 3 The sealed creator
Not Again Saga: Chapter 48-57
Espran Saga: Chapter 58-114
Season 7: Star Saga
After the disappearance of Vegoku and Hidorika were 1000 years ago.
The nobody knew what happen but the battle destroyed the dimension again.
On univers was a new organisation created to protect there time from the differend opponents from the different dimensions and times. Its the Star Fighters who worked on the earth. The planet was protect from the Dragonballs and two new fighters wanna be one of the Star Fighters.
1. Fight against himself
The earth looked like a hightech future world with flying cars. The planet was controled on the palast Kami's. Dende was alive but the Star Fighters protected the univers. Whenever a bad guy wanna be to the earth, the Dragonballs protect or gave alarm if the power is stronger.
The youngest grandson of Goku went to the palast to be one of the Star Fighters.
The Palast looked very big than before.
He went to the castle and met somebody looked a bit like Vegeta.
They looked eachother in there eyes.
Gokai: Bejeta.
Bejeta: Gokai.
They looked each other much seriouser.
In that moment came somebody to them.
She looked like a slime monster.
Slime Monster: Who is the next one?
Gokai/Bejeta: I am the next. NO I AM!
Slime Monster: Ok ok. Come on you two.
They looked each other there eyes and said „Grr".
They walked up to the room of the chief Mr. Mongon, an Earthling.
Mr Mongon: Interesting. You two are Gokai and Bejeta.
Gokai/Bejeta: Right.
Mr Mongon: On our organisation are only full blooded guys allowed.
Gokai: What do you mean?
Mr Mongon: You are earthling and saiyan in one.
Gokai: What is a saiyan?
Bejeta: Hahahah..you dont know your own race. Dont your family talk about your born.
Gokai: Grr..
Mr Mongon: You guys are very strong. We have a machine to make you to a full earthling.
Gokai: Realy?
Bejeta: I wanna be a full blood Saiyan.
Gokai: Huh?
Mr Mongon: You wanna your full power, right?
Bejeta: I am a king and as a King I must be different than the others.
Mr: Mongon: I understand you and you Gokai?
Gokai though about that what can be happen if he change to a Saiyan.
Mr. Mongon: Do you wanna an Earthling?
Gokai: I wanna be a Full Blooded Saiyan.
Bejeta: Hmm..
Mr. Mongon: You wanna be like your grandpas. Well the savers of the univers and the destroyer were the Saiyans. It gave differend part of them like the LSSJ Tornado and Potato. The strongest Z-Fighters Goku and Vegeta and the Junior fighter Goku Jr and Vegeta Jr. You see your grandpas are all saiyans. The battle between Vegeta Jr and Goku Jr isnt over but nobody know where they are. The battle destroyed the dimension and thats the reason why the we created the Team Star Fighters. Now come with me.
Gokai and Bejeta went with Mr. Mongon to be a full blooded Saiyans.
They were now on a generator which there cells part to full Saiyan.
Gokai and Bejeta were very hurt by the energy of that.
Gokai/Bejeta: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
After that, they came out the machine.
Gokai: What a power? I am stronger now.
Bejeta: Look we get tails.
The machine changed them to full blooded saiyans with every part of a real saiyan.
Bejeta focused his new power and made a bit wind.
Bejeta: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! What a power? I never knew how much power I have.
Mr. Mongon: You guys are now full Saiyan and one of the Star Fighters know.
Gokai: What will be happen to our earthling part?
Mr. Mongon: Dont worry. The machine will delete it. Huh?
The machine exploded after that and the parts of Gokai and Bejeta get form.
Gokai: What the hell?
?: I am Ekai, your evil and earthling part.
Mr. Mongon: How its that happen?
Ekai: Hahahahahhahaahahahaha.
Gokai and Bejeta were on battle position.
Gokai: Know we can use our new power.
Bejeta: Hahaha..Lets see what we can do.
Can Gokai and Bejeta defeat that monster?
Mr Mongon: If you defeat that monster, you did you first mision and can fight agains real opponents.
Find it out in another episode of DBJR
Italic text will be me adding footnotes to each chapter and mention stuff like.
Saiyajin is Saiyan.
Freezer is Frieza or Freeza.
Tsufurujin is Tuffle
Kaioshin = Supreme Kai
Yixinglong = Syn/Omega Shenron
These the following are completely new characters
Gokai =/= Goku
Bejita =/= Vegeta like in the Japanese
Piccoro =/= Piccolo
As you can see this too is written like a show. And likely what I imagined when coming up with stuff. So expect a lot of narration. I rarely got any constructive criticism nor did most of us even have enough basic English to understand what that was on the website Dragonball Neo Elite AFStadium.
Now that criticism is meaningless as I post this just as means so show my history and hopefully for people to learn how not to write fanfiction.
I intend to recreate these upcoming fanfiction with my improved writing for the modern era. I have no attachment to these characters, but I have a certain understanding what I wanted to do with them. So in case you are curious to what that story will be like, you can consider the old story as "spoiler". But be warned that it will get worse from here on and I can't tell if I improved much during those 2 years.
I only wrote to finish my story, and the consequences of having fun writing a story will be also displayed here.
