Hello, StraphoSphere here, you may be wondering what happened to chapters 1 and 2. Well basically, I've read the reviews and I wholeheartedly agree. I myself cringed from my writing, a lot of the stuff was rushed, a few grammar mistakes. Jaune's interactions with others were cringy, and the fight scene was subpar. That's why I've decided to rewrite the story. I won't be rewriting the whole chapter, just adding a new backstory and changing a few things in the chapters.
Another thing I saw with this story was if this was gonna be a Multi-Crossover because I added things from other animes, the answer is no, the main crossover is with RWBY and Fate. If I decide to add things from other animes, it won't be of any importance, think of it as a filler. It doesn't really matter to the story.
That's all really, Ja Ne