"Naruto gets put in a death-like state but what happens when a mysterious man and comes save him post Sasuke retrieval arc.
OP Naruto"
Jutsus/"tail beast speaking"
'Thinking'
Disclaimer: "naruto" and all the characters of naruto are the property of Kishimoto Masashi and I claim no ownership, however, this story is created by me.
With the sky being duller and darker than ever the rain seemed to become heavier and heavier each second go by we see a boy with blonde hair and an orange jumpsuit knocked out unconscious on top of the legendary shodai Hokage statue. In the distance, a black-cloaked figure is walking up to the unconscious blonde slowly.
In the forest:
"Naruto, Sasuke wait for me I won't fail again," said a silver-haired man with his headband covering one of his eyes hopping from trees to trees.
Back at the valley of the end:
The black cloak figure finally stood over the unconscious blonde and thought,
'Damn these people, naruto-kun I'll be taking you with me'
He sensed a presence closing upon him quickly, reacting quickly he grabbed the blonde
Disappearing into thin air. Not long after the black-cloaked figure left, a devastated silver-haired jounin stood on top of the shodai Hokage statue only thing visible is a slashed out headband a pool of blood and the so-called cursed necklace Tsunade gave to naruto believing that he'll break the curse
"I did fail, sensei, Obito, rin I'm sorry I failed, how am I going to tell this to Tsunade-Sama and Jiraiya-sama," the one-eyed shinobi said with tears flowing down from his one visible eye. The trip back home for Kakashi was bad no 'bad' was an understatement it was depressing he never felt this since the 9 tails attack.
In an unknown cave:
We see 10 holographic figures standing on top of an unknown creature's fingers waiting for the plant-like creature.
"Who do you think won Itachi?!" Kisame asked with a grin showing off his sharp teeth
".."
"Ah gosh I hate when you do this, you bastard!!" Deidara yelled out
"SILENCE" an orange hair man with 2 rippled purple eyes.
"Understood leader-Sama," Deidara said still angered by Itachi.
Suddenly a plant-like creature rose from the ground opening his little shell we see a half black and a half white creature.
"Sasuke won, the 9 tails jinchuriki is now dead"
All the Akatsuki members widened their eyes.
"Damn that Uchiha bastard you should've killed all of them!" Hidan yelled out
"Tch now we have to wait another few years!"
"SILENCE"
Soon the room was silent one again.
The rinnegan user looked at Zetsu and said, "elaborate Zetsu how did the 9 tails jinchuriki die."
The black half replied, "Orochimaru sent the sound 4 to capture Sasuke and bring him to one of his secret bases, after the Uchiha left the Hokage was informed and sent out a squad to bring the Uchiha back. Shikamaru, Kiba, Neji, choji defeated the sound 4 and were heavily damaged after; an ill Kaguya member arrived and interrupted the 9 tails brat from fighting the Uchiha. Not long after a brat named lee arrived and told the Uzumaki brat to bring Sasuke back and he'd stop this guy from going any further. After a long time chasing the Uchiha they both began fighting each other the battle was seriously one-sided with the Uchiha brat dominating and later on using Hatake justsu to pierce the 9 tails brat in the chest the Uchiha evolved his eyes to the mangekyo Sharingan and then quickly heading to one of Orochimaru bases we followed to find one of Orochimaru bases and when we came back to check on the Uzumaki his body disappeared leaving a pool of blood and the shodai Hokage necklace and my theory is that once a jinchuriki dies his body along the tail beast will turn into dust. Because I couldn't sense any tail beast chakra after I came back and soon after Hatake arrived and we had to leave."
"I see," the leader said
"That brat was a loudmouth brat anyway it wasn't like he was going to beat that Uchiha brat after receiving his stupid power up from that snake " Kisame sighed disappointedly in the outcome of the fight.
"It doesn't matter we are going to carry on with our plan and capture the 9 tails last" the leader commanded with everyone nodding.
Once everyone was told the meeting was done everyone started to disappear one by one, leaving Itachi behind.
"You did it Sasuke you killed your best friend you finally have the same eye as I do" Itachi smirked to himself.
Back at Konoha:
"HE'S WHAT!!!!" yelled out Tsunade smashing her desk in half.
"I'm sorry I wasn't quick enough" Kakashi muttered out.
"Kakashi-sensei Sasuke-Kun couldn't have killed naruto right?" Sakura asked trying to hold back her tears.
"Yes, Sakura unfortunately Sasuke did kill naruto" Kakashi replied with guilt in his voice.
Sakura couldn't hold it anymore and started to cry uncontrollably.
"No no no no I don't believe he's dead we're sending a team of an-" she couldn't get to finish her sentence off when someone interrupted her,
"It's useless Tsunade he's off the Toad contract meaning he's dead."
Shocking everyone on the news that naruto name has been removed from the toad contract.
"I failed sensei..."
"You damn right did, teaching that ungrateful brat an A-ranked assassin Jutsu and when I taught naruto his birthright Jutsu you started complaining about how unfair the treatment Naruto is getting. You even went as far as to completely neglect naruto's training and only focus on the Uchiha brat, that now killed not only your sensei's son but also killed off his legacy." Jiraiya said with disdain in his voice.
Sakura hearing everything stopped crying and looked to Jiraiya and asked, "Jiraiya-sama who is naruto's father?"
Jiraiya sighed he had nothing to hide anymore naruto was now dead and it wasn't like that the Iwa shinobis were going to come after the dead
Taking a deep breath Jiraiya said, "Naruto's father is one of the strongest Kage to ever live only behind to Hashirama Senju he was a proud young man when enemies were facing him during 3rd great shinobi war they only saw yellow flashes before they were sent to the afterlife, he saved this village and sacrificed his life he was the Yondaime Hokage Minato namikaze"
After hearing the news Sakura jaw dropped and quickly frowned and thought 'I'm such an idiot Minato-sama looked almost identical to naruto except without the whisker marks'
Whilst this was going on Tsunade was weeping like a baby, yet another person close to her fell into the curse of this stupid necklace
'I swear no one except for me will have this cursed necklace'
Council chamber:
"Tsunade-Sama why have you called this meeting," asked shikaku with his usually lazy tone, with everyone nodding.
Tsunade was quiet for a few moments until she finally decided to speak up, "In the retrieval mission we lost a loyal Konoha member"
Everyone was shocked at not only someone loyal to Konoha dying but the tone Tsunade was speaking she wasn't her usual calm self.
She was talking like a true leader.
"Who was it," asked Mebuki Haruno
Tsunade was fighting her hardest to hold back some tears.
"Uzumaki Naruto was killed yesterday by Sasuke Uchiha and according to the Nidaime Hokage's law any Konoha shinobi killing another Konoha shinobi intentionally will be placed as a missing-nin meaning the Uchiha will be placed in the bingo book as a B rank missing nin"
There were mixed feelings in the council chamber the shinobi section agreed with what their leader said, however, the civilian section went on an uproar saying that their 'precious Uchiha has saved them however Tsunade wasn't having any of it and threatened anyone that dared to oppose her would be stripped away from their rank. This made every council member shut their mouth.
Unknown to all of them there was the same black-cloaked figure he knew he made the right decision-taking naruto away from them.
A few days later the news was spreading like a virus of the death of the Prankster Blonde the rookie 7 along with Gai's team were the most devastated by the news. Hinata completely stopped stuttering and completely isolated herself, Choji didn't eat as much and the village itself was like they lost a Hokage again. Naruto's adoptive older sister and his grandfather figure closed their ramen store for a few days.
Unknown Underground:
In an unknown cave, a certain blonde was starting to wake up after being unconscious for several days. As he slowly opened his eyes he sees a black-cloaked figure sitting next to him, he finally snapped his eyes open and called out, "SASUKE!!!"
"Can you be any louder Naruto-Kun?" the mysterious figure asked rubbing his poor ear.
Naruto quickly scanned his surrounding and realized he wasn't in Konoha or where he fought Sasuke, he quickly turned to his right to see a black-cloaked figure sitting on a chair next to him, being afraid he quickly backed away and yelled out
"I'm sorry please don't kill me yet I haven't kissed Sakura-chan yet, I also haven't kept the promise to Tsunade-Baachan that I'll become the next Hokage."
"Naruto-Kun why do you fight for those foolish people I did it once and regretted it."
Naruto was speechless this man in front of him just said that he once did protect the leaf and that he regrets it.
"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!!" Naruto yelled out
The cloaked figure just chuckled and replied with "so do you want to see my face Naruto-Kun"
Naruto didn't respond but just nodded he dd as he was instructed and took off his long black cloak and his mask and said,
"Are you happy now Naruto-Kun?"
Naruto was beyond shocked he thought this was all a dream.
"Naruto hello are you still there"
"OH MY GOD!!!!"
"HOW THE HELL ARE YOU ALIVE OLD MAN 4TH"
The man now known as Minato namikaze grew a tick mark on his forehead, but let it slide and asked Naruto again, "why do you protect people that don't care about you my son"
Naruto was caught off guard when he heard the word "son"
"Wait what did you say Lord 4th" naruto asked timidly
"Yes Naruto I'm your father and the one that sealed the 9 tails in you and I regret these fools didn't take my word and never saw you as a hero forgive me Naruto" Minato said with guilt in his voice. There was a long awkward silence until Naruto started to tear up and tackled his father to the ground and cried out, "DAD HOW ARE YOU ALIVE!"
"I'm sorry naruto forgive me," Minato said while ruffling Naruto's hair.
After explaining everything to Naruto on how he is here and how long he has before returning to the shinigami once again.
"So you have 3 years before I go back to the shinigami belly," Minato said laughing off the pain that he'll be separated from his son once again.
"So dad can I go back to the village once I'm done," naruto asked.
"No" was the only thing Minato said
"But dad why everyone misses me an-"
He didn't get to finish when his father interrupted him, " Naruto are you that dumb they've treated you like garbage and held back your immense potential and can you name me 5 people that always been nice to you since the start that are currently alive"
Naruto put his head down he knew his father was right but he couldn't continue to think when his father spoke again, "Naruto I'm going to make you into the greatest shinobi and we're going to uzushiogakure I've set up a barrier seal where only Uzumaki and I can enter and no one can sense us and you may have noticed you don't have any whiskers anymore."
Naruto quickly placing his hands on his cheeks realising he hasn't got any more whiskers.
"So does this mean the 9 tails is gone?" naruto asked confused about how his father managed to extract the 9 tails without killing him.
Minato simply chuckled and said, "it wasn't me only, the shinigami helped me to extract Kuruma without killing you; I and Kurama made a deal I was going to give his other half back and he was going to be your personal summon hence why you have a fox tattoo on your left shoulder, and about your clan, I will activate the Uzumaki DNA in you balancing mine and the Uzumaki blood will allow you activate the Uzumaki bloodline instantaneous healing although your hair will turn Silver." laughing at the reaction his son gave him.
"Will I learn all my clans Jutsu and your Flying Raijin dad" naruto exclaimed almost jumping onto Minato again.
"Yes Naruto and you will also learn about your other clan Kekkei Genkai not many people know this except the old monkey but I came from a clan that has a Kekkie Genkai you may recognise this Kekkei Genkai because you've faced one of your family member used it on you" Naruto wondered who did he meet that was family to him other than his father but his father interrupted his thoughts when he continued, " I'm pretty sure during the wave miss-" Minato couldn't get to finish his sentence when naruto screamed out, " I'm from the Yuki clan so does that mean I will have the same Kekkei Genkai as Haku Nissan" Minato raised one of his eyebrows on the new suffix he gave his fellow clan member but continued to speak, "Yes and from now on as your father, I replace your name to Naruto Yuki and lastly Naruto-Kun I want you to help the rebels once I'm done training you, you have to avenge not only our clan but protect the future from Yagura and I believe Naruro you can do that and who knows maybe you can find a beautiful lady and maybe become Mizukage" Naruto was smiling but Minato didn't stop there and said, "don't ever forget your heritage Naruto-kun never forget your mother Kushina Uzumaki she loved you with all her life"
Naruto couldn't hold it anymore and started to cry uncontrollably he had a father that loves him and even willingly train him and a mother that always loved him.
'Dad I won't disappoint you, I'm sorry Pervy Sage and Ayame nee-chan and old man Teuchi but I won't ever return to that hell of a place that I called home and that bastard body can be taken over by that snake I couldn't care less I've got a new goal'
2 months later:
Konoha has always been a lively place especially when their former prank king used to prank the entire village but the last 2 months had been peaceful and yet depressing. Sakura has finally gotten over her depression and asked the 5th Hokage to teach her of course at first it was almost impossible trying to convince Lady Tsunade to teach her medical-ninjutsu of how stubborn she is but after a long time of persuading her she finally agreed to take on a new apprentice.
People in the Hyuga clan at the start were starting to fear on what Hinata became from being one of the nicest and caring girl they've ever met to becoming an avenger just like a certain traitorous Uchiha. But after a bit of convincing from Kurenai Hinata calmed herself down:
Flashback:
We see a blue Hyuga haired girl destroying the poor wooden trees not caring about the injury she's causing herself all she wants a certain raven-haired boy dead he ruined everything killed her crush killed the person she believed would change everything.
"Hinata you need to relax I know you're mad but do you think Naruto would want to see in a state that you're currently in, he hated people that are avengers," Kurenai said in her motherly manner but Hinata won't have it this time and replied with "WHAT KURENAI-SENSEI ARE WE SUPPOSE TO FORGIVE THAT BASTARD AFTER WHAT HE DID TO NA-" Hinata couldn't take it anymore and dropped to her knee and started to cry she just couldn't take it anymore her lover and saviour died by a man that is treated like a spoiled brat.
Kurenai saw her student /daughter figure cry and hugged her and whispered to her, "shh Hinata don't worry we are all with you but don't think about vengeance whenever we get to see that Uchiha bastard we will deal with him, train as you do but don't become like the man that killed your precious person."
"Thank you Kurenai-sensei I will never forget naruto and never become an avenger"
Flashback end:
After that incident, Hinata started to calm down and no longer be the cold-hearted person she was she was back to her normal self but with the stuttering disappearing, this made the rest of the loyal rookies happy.
Jiraiya went back to his normal self although he vouched he would never take an apprentice he's lost way too many students first it was Nagato, Konan and Yahiko then it was Minato and now it was Naruto.
Though Kakashi was starting to recover he started to train and promised to keep his last precious student safe and never allow the same thing to happen to sakura then he would lose everyone in his damn miserable life, he started to go on dates with Anko who was also saddened by the death of a certain blonde.
Lastly, the most significant change was Konohamaru he now lost all of his innocence and became what Sasuke was when the Uchiha massacre happened. He stopped hanging out with his 2 best friends and trained none stop vowing that he'll get strong enough to first kill the person that killed his Jiji and then the person that killed his nii-san many people tried to stop him or comfort him but he didn't care and simply replied with "hmm"
Sakura was the most terrified she saw Sasuke in Naruto's little brother.
"How are you doing Tsunade-chan," Jiraiya asked.
Tsunade just sighed, "I'm fine pervert what are you doing here"
"Oh can't I see my precious princess"
"Cut it Jiraiya why are you here"
"Look Tsunade I know you're upset about Naruto's death, you shouldn't put all the blame onto yourself imagine what your lover, brother and your grandson would feel like if they saw you like t-"
"Jiraiya, it's my fault you know damn well what happened to the people that wore this cursed necklace first it took away Dan-Kun then it took away my little brother and then when I thought someone would break this curse it took away my grandson other than blood no he is related to me we are both Uzumaki I need time to think but like I said I will never give anyone this damn necklace you and Shizune are the only people that are close to me and don't you ever dare get perverted things into your mind Jiraiya so please leave me alone."
Jiraiya nodded and left shocking Tsunade that he didn't bother her on longer.
Otogakure:
"Orochimaru-Sama I've found many secret bases we can travel for the next 3 year so we can train Sasuke-Kun," Kabuto said whilst pulling his glasses back up again
"Kukukuku great job Kabuto-Kun soon I will have the perfect body and soon Konoha will burn" Orochimaru chuckled maniacally was stopped when he heard a knock he wondered who could be this disrespectful so he yelled out, "come in!" entering the room was a raven-haired boy with black shorts and a black Uchiha shirt. "I didn't leave the village for you to waste my time when are going to start our damn training," Sasuke said with no emotion in his voice.
"I don't care who you are but you don't disrespect Orochimaru-Sama in front of me you understand" Kabuto yelled out quickly defending his master. Orochimaru just laughed it off and said, " Don't worry Sasuke-Kun we will start training and that Mangekyo Sharingan of yours" Sasuke widened his eyes now that his biggest secret is revealed, Orochimaru continued to lick his lips and said, "Now that the Uzumaki brat is gone no one will be coming for you Sasuke-Kun and soon Konoha will burn."
Sasuke clicked his tongue and left without saying another word but in the back of his kind he thought 'once I'm done with training this bastard will die'
6 months later In Uzushiogakure:
"Wind Style: great breakthrough," Minato said after finishing his hand's signs. Seeing no way out of this a silver-haired boy went through a set of hand signs and yelled out "Ice style: Glacial Dome" quickly freezing the area and creating a transparent igloo-like dome. After seeing his ice dome defended him he released the Jutsu and tapped the ground and whispered out "ice style: shattering ice spears" creating massive ice spears that are flying towards Minato and destroying everything on their way Minato knew only 1 way to get out of this and threw his kunai to a nearby building and teleported there, in a yellow flash but the boy now known as Naruto didn't stop his assault there and went through hand signs quickly condensing all the water he can gather in the air and said, " Water style: Water dragon jutsu" a yellow-eyed water dragon roared and started rushing towards Minato, Minato smirked and countered by going through the same hand signs and yelling out, "Water style water dragon jutsu" as the 2 dragons clashed Minato quickly flashed behind Naruto and held up a kunai to Naruto and said, " good fight Naruto you improved your ice Kekkei Genkai but you still need improvements." Naruto smirked and poofed into smoke leaving shocked Minato behind.
"Wind Style: Wind bullets" naruto yelled out Minato smirked at his son's improvements and quickly started to evade his attacks easily and decided that he'll use 15% of his speed and dashing towards naruto with his Kunai in his hands but Naruto getting used to his dad's speed grabbed his kunai to block Minato strike just in time both father and son had smiles on their faces this was the best time Naruto ever had yes pervy sage was fun but nowhere near as fun as his dad, his dad was teaching him new Justus and giving him all the care he wanted instead of peeping at women in the hot springs.
Minato decided to end his fight quickly and body flickered behind Naruto so quick that Naruto didn't even notice a kunai being pressed on his neck.
"You lose Naruto-kun"
"I guess so" naruto sighed putting his hands up admitting in defeat.
After Naruto regaining his energy he quickly asked his dad, "Dad when can I learn your Hiriashin I've got a new Jutsu I want to create although it would probably be done after I learn your Hiriashin"
Minato brought his hands up to his chin he was thinking about when to teach naruto his Hiriashin he showed to be a hidden prodigy that even Naruto was shocked about his Uzumaki bloodline quickly activated when he did the procedure and his Ice Kekkei Genkai js going perfect and he can now create a perfect Rasengan with only using one hand.
"Naruto I guess we can start your Hiriashin training next week but remember this Jutsu is dangerous you can never be allowed to use this Jutsu to harm your comrade I used this Jutsu to decimate an entire army in a few second but first you have to learn about Fuinjutsu that starts next week however it's time we get you new clothes and guess what?"
"What dad?"Naruto had stars in his eyes he was finally going to learn his fathers Jutsu soon and he had something else.
"Since you technically not from any village and you don't have a headband to determine that, how about I give you this" Minato took out a headband that represented his clan(Yuki).
Naruto eyes were wide open he was finally going to represent his clan "As the last Yuki clan survivor I hereby call you the head of the Yuki Clan my son" Minato said with a bright smile but got tackled to the ground by his son
Tears in his eyes naruto said, "thank dad, this is the best time I've ever had in my life"
Minato rubbed Naruto's he had a sad smile on his face.
"Okay little man it's time to get new clothes for my successor the Ice Flash and we are going to do a mission or should I say specifically you but I will be in the background to protect you if you ever need help"
Naruto nodded over the past 6 months his goofy attitude disappeared to a relaxed cool-headed young shinobi the only time he's goofy is when he's with his father quickly getting off his father they went on their journey to find new clothes for Naruto Yuki.
Time skip 2 days later:
"How nostalgic I think I'm looking at a mirror except your silver hair hahaha!" Minato laughed, his son now had silver hair and had 2 bangs that reached to his ears just like his father and a Yuki headband around his head and blue pants with a blue shirt that has an Uzumaki swirl on the back and the famous cape that his father once wore when he was alive except it now had blue flames instead of red flames on the bottom of the cape and had "Ice flash" written on his back instead of "Fourth Hokage" Naruto was glad that he got this outfit and can't wait for the name Naruto Yuki to be known around the world.
"Thanks, Dad, you did so much for me I don't know how to repay you"
Minato got closer to his son and hugged him and whispered to his ears, " No I'm sorry Naruto forgive me the only thing I want you to do is to help the rebels defeat Yagura once we are done with your training."
Naruto nodded and asked his dad, "Dad what I the mission by the way because I'm ready to finally show what I can do."
"Hahaha actually this mission is going to the wave surprisingly in 3 days I heard a man named Raiga one of the 7 swordsmen of the Mist and his army of 200 thugs with 50-60 genin-chunin ninjas will invade wave once he's done and I've heard from one of my shadow clones they've sent help to the leaf afraid to face one of the swordsmen of the Mist and I want you to eliminate him"
Naruto nodded feeling a bit nostalgic going back to Wave and fighting another legendary swordsman but he heard from his father this guy was a complete bastard, burying people alive he was nothing like Zabuza sure Zabuza attacked them but he was trying to eliminate that bastard Yagura.
"Understood dad I will do my best," Naruto said with full determination in his eyes.
Minato smiled and said, "I know you will my son and don't worry if you destroy your cape I've sent my shadow clone to bring more spare ones." Naruto let out a sigh that he doesn't have to worry about destroying his cape so it was decided he was going to take the mission and grabbed his headband and wrapped it around his head and pulled his cape(like Minato did during the nine tails attack) seeing this Minato had tears in his eyes and thought, "Kushi-chan I wish you were here to see this."
Back at Konoha:
"Tazuna it seems like you want our aid again and what do you want this time," Tsunade asked.
"Please lady Hokage can you help us in a week a man named Raiga and an army of 200 thugs will invade our country and if what I heard is true then I'm scared." Tazuna pleaded
Tsunade sighed and said, "very well at least you're telling the truth this time this mission will be classified as an A-rank Shizune bring in Kakashi, sakura Team 8 and team 10"
"Um excuse me Lady Hokage do you know where that loudmouth brat is he brought hope to Wave and without him, Gato surely would've destroyed Wave and is hailed as a hero in our village and our bridge is even named after him do you know where he is?" Tazuna asked
Tsunade eyes went wide at how naruto was seen in wave and held back her tears and said, "He's on another mission" Tazuna was shocked but couldn't say anything because everyone assigned to the Mission arrived
Sakura and Kakashi were surprised to see Tazuna again and at that moment sakura saw both of her teammates competing with each other tried her hardest to hold back her tears.
"Lady Hokage what is the mission," Asuma asked while lighting up another cigarette.
Tsunade replied, "you will protect Tazuna and wave from Raiga and 60 shinobis and an army of 200 thugs this will be an A-rank mission any questions?"
"THIS IS CRAZY THIS IS A SUICIDE MISSION" Kiba yelled out but was quickly interrupted by Tsunade, "You have Kakashi, Asuma and Kurenai 3 elite Jonin and a chunin Shikamaru"
"I understand lady Hokage" Kiba muttered out still afraid of the mission he has to go.
"Pack your stuff and meet me in front of the gate in 30 minutes," Kakashi said.
6 hours later in the Forest:
We see 9 figures walking in the forest quietly until one of the females in the group decided to speak up, "doesn't this bring back memories Sensei"
"It does it certainly does" Kakashi replied quickly not wanting to bring up the topic of his former student
"What do you mean Sakura-san" Hinata asked
"Do you remember when naruto always use to say 'I never go on my word that's my nindo'" Hinata nodded "Yes this is the place where Naruto got his nindo from" everyone was surprised until Kiba spoke up again, " no wonder why I can smell his scent it looks like he left a piece of his cloth here" Sakura and Kakashi nodded.
At Tazuna house:
"Hello welcome again Kakashi-san Sakura-chan an-" Tazuna daughter didn't get to finish her sentence off when a 10-year-old Inari ran to the group and yelled out " Your finally back Naruto-Nii-san" everyone felt guilty about how the boy's feeling would be so they decided to lie and say "Naruto is on another mission" Tsunami smiled and said, " I wish he came back Inari couldn't shut up to see his elder brother" Hinata couldn't take it anymore and decided to run away along with sakura it confused Inari and his mother but they let it go.
During dinner, they were working on a plan to take down this army "I will be fighting Raiga Asuma, Kurenai I expect you to fight the rest of you shall fi-" he didn't get to finish his sentence off when they felt a killer intent that instantly knocked out Tazuna, his daughter, Ino, Chouji and Kiba and makes the rest of them drop to their knee to see a black-cloaked figure standing there looking at them disappointed on what the leaf had become.
He finally decided to speak up, "none of you will fight them my student will fight all of them and you will aid him if he needs you." with that said he disappeared into thin air, "Kakashi sensei who the hell was that," Sakura asked feared of the man she preferred to fight Orochimaru in the chunin exam again instead of facing this man it felt like he could kill you in a flash.
"I don't know Sakura but if what he says is true then we have a powerful ally but don't let your guard down."
"Back in my anbu days, I could've done this mission myself but I've slacked off."
With that mysterious man being in everyone's mind they fell asleep.
Raiga's Camp:
"Lord Raiga when are we going to attack?" a thug asked
"Tomorrow shall be the day everyone will fall under my tyranny" Raiga replied with a wicked smirk. Everyone started to cheer for their leader.
"Yes Lord Raiga"
"We are invincible with Lord Raiga"
"His blades will destroy everyone and bury them"
"SILENCE!!"
Everyone decided to be quiet knowing what their leader would do if they disobeyed his order.
"Tomorrow all of you shall attack an army of 260 people if you survive I'll make you my successor." everyone started to cheer for the man again but Raiga mumbled, "foolish people" with an evil smirk
In the distance we see 2 figure looking at the camp disgusted.
"Naruto are you ready I mea-"
"Dad don't worry I'm ready these bastards won't attack this Village can you do me a favour for me dad don't allow no Konoha shinobis or wave civilian to enter the fight."
"But you do realise you have to kill"
"Yes but you also killed people and your not a monster in my eyes"
Minato smiled at Naruto ruffled his hair and said, "Make a name for yourself and don't worry me and your mom are proud of you soon you will destroy the yagura force and Akatsuki and get rid of this violence and remember the Jutsu you created its a powerful and very destructive against an army."
"Understood dad"
Minato nodded and decided to speak up again, "after this mission I think it's time for you to have your Dragon summoning contract after all you need to learn sage mode and practise your kenjutsu and begin our flying Rajin training"
Naruto smiled at his dad and disappeared into thin air.
Next day at the Great Naruto bridge:
Raiga army was starting to make their to the bridge and begin their battle on the other side civilians of the wave were standing there ready to fight to protect their home with Inari leading the small civilian army.
"Kurenai-sensei what are we going to do just watch this bastard's student fight all of them."
"Yes Kiba if he somehow defeats all of them we can capture this guy and extract information from him"
Kiba growled but still accepted his fate and went to prepare for the battle they were going to have.
"Is everyone prepared do not engage in this fight unless I say so understood!" Kakashi yelled out
"Hai/Hai sensei" everyone replied.
2 hours later there were noises of footsteps heard everyone understood what this meant they wanted to fight to protect their home by they were blocked by the ninjas one of them yelled out, "what the hell are you doing from blocking us"
"Shut up this for your safety," Kakashi said leaking out some killer intent soon everyone became silent. They saw the ridiculous amount of people they were facing many Rock, Kumo and Kiri missing nins.
The whole Konoha team were getting nervous they didn't wish to face this foe that got them on their knees but this apprentice of his took way too long to come here.
"Where the hell is that bastard's stud-"
He couldn't get to finish his sentence when there was a puff of smoke.
After the smoke cleared every shinobi especially the rocks nins were frozen on the spot and stared in horror at the man.
One of them even yelled out "we have to leave the 4th Hokage has returned!!!"
When the person finally became visible everyone let out a sigh but were curious about who this person was.
Coming out of the smoke was a 14-year-old boy with silver hair and 2 bangs reaching down to his ears with a headband tied around his head and blue shinobi pants and a blue shirt and the cape that was the same design as the 4th Hokage except instead of red flame it was blue flames and the word on his back said, "Ice flash" instead of "4th Hokage"
Many girls on the bridge were blushing at the sight they were looking at. Everyone was silent until one of the thugs in the army yelled out.
"Fool you think you can stop us a mere boy"
Disrespected at the fact that a mere boy was suppose to take him down.
"Let's just kill him off and carry on what Raiga-sama wants" a missing Kiri nin said earning a sound of approval by his allies.
"Let's start partying" Naruto said with a smirk.
Naruto didn't hesitate and ran towards the army engaging one of the thugs and quickly decimating him with a powerful round house kick then engaging in a taijutsu battle with a rock shinobi quickly ending it with a jab to his throat instantly killing him but he had duck a swipe from one of the thugs sword quickly swiping his feet he grabbed his kunai and slitted his throat. He was easily destroying the army of thugs until only 70 was left and wanted to carry until one of them yelled out "Water Style: Water bullets"
Naruto seeing the attack quickly had to flip backwards and prepare for the brutal death he was going to give them.
He tapped his feet on the ground and whispered "Ice style: killer ice spears" with that said a massive barrage of ice spikes were heading towards the army instantly killing 70 of them leaving only the shinobi section left.
One of the Kiri ninja yelled out, "you damn Yuki I will kill" as he blindly ran towards Naruto attempting to land a punch but was blocked and got stabbed with an ice sword that Naruto created out of thin air.
"Your one of the reason why my clan is destroyed, have a good time in hell, you bastard"
With the konoha shinobi and the wave:
"Woah he's powerful and his ice power is so cool"
"I want to know who he is"
"He looks so handsome I want to marry him"
"Kurenai-sensei thank you for stopping me to do any stupid stuff if this guy who's the same age as us can do this imagine what his sensei could do"
Kurenai couldn't say anything but nodded still dumbfounded on how powerful this kid is.
"Kakashi-sensei how strong do you think he is right now and why does he look so familiar"
"I don't know Sakura but he almost looks identical to sensei except he has grey hair instead of Yellow"
Back with the fight:
"It's time to test out the Jutsu I created on you damn bastard no one threatens civilian villages...especially this one" Naruto yelled out with the last part whispering.
Naruto then clapped his hands and closed his eyes and there was a blue chakra aura surrounding him suddenly the weather started to change.
People were looking up in the sky was starting
To change from being blue and cloudy into black Snow was starting to come out of the sky slowly and specifically towards the remaining survivors of the massacre. They were all panicking but they started to burst out in laughter.
"Nice game kid snow hahahahahha"
Naruto opened his eyes all of a sudden all the men from the army eyes went wide when all of a sudden they were inside a Crystal ice prison.
On the other side of the bridge:
"Sensei what the hell is this !!!" Ino yelled out
Asuma was shocked beyond belief to meet someone that can use Hyoton to that level.
"Kakashi-sensei this other kid Haku never had the control this person has what is he"
All the genins were starting to get irritated that their sensei's are ignoring them.
"We have to tell this to Lady Tsunade" Asuma finally muttered out a word.
"Yes and this kid's sensei," Kurenai said
Kakashi just nodded.
Back with the fight:
"You may be wondering what Jutsu this is. I call it "Ice style: Angels cry, " My sensei said it's a forbidden Jutsu, with this Jutsu I control the weather to create snow and every person that is hit by the snow quickly becomes a prisoner to me so I can do whatever I do to you whether to kill you or not if I want to kill you I can just throw any type of object to the ice prison and it will immediately be shattered killing the opponent instantly although I haven't mastered this Jutsu yet. However, I'm not deciding your fate it's up to those people(pointing towards the people of the wave)
So goodbye"
With that naruto disappeared from everyone sights as the weather returned to normal.
Everyone was quiet until one person yelled out,
"Damn it we don't even know his name"
Everyone realised that and let out a depressing sigh.
But they turned their sight towards the ninja that was still trapped in naruto ice prison.
They then decided to throw rocks, shuriken's and kunai toward the ice shattering it in an instant leaving a beautiful view.
With that said, everyone went back home believing that they were now safe and that this guy was going to defeat Raiga.
The Konoha shinobi were still dumbfounded on the person they met today.
Elsewhere:
"Dad I would prefer to take down Raiga now and let the wave could live in peace"
"Very well but I will help you a bit"
"Wait why I can do this on my own!" naruto yelled out but Minato responded with,
"Yes I know you can but Raiga has someone else with him and according to my shadow clone this person tell Raiga where his opponents are and you can't attack him from behind"
Naruto nodded understanding what his father meant.
"Okay shall we begin father"
"Yes let's go, son"
With that, they instantly disappeared and after a long time searching for Raiga they finally found him.
With the first part done I want you guys to tell me if I did good or bad and I don't what the ship is going to be so I'll leave 4 options I can't do any Konoha ships I'm sorry
Mei Terumi
Yugito
An oc Uzumaki
Temari
Tell me should they know naruto's identity or should I keep it a secret?
And the reason why I made naruto a Yuki is because I fucking love ice justsu they're so op if used right like the wood style and I'm a bit biased because Hitsugaya is one of my favourite anime character ever. And don't forget to tell me if it is bad and where I need to improve it and by the way English is not my first language sorry.