Years of Sin

by Craving Remains

On that day of summer, a fated meeting with no possibility took place. The fate of the world, the shadow war of the wicked, a continuous struggle for power, forever continuing; and its participants continued to fight for victory.

2. NOT A CHAPTER, CANCELED STORY

Alright… where do I begin?

Well, I guess that first and foremost I am deeply and truly sorry, all of you waited three months and yet, all you've been given is this. I understand that perhaps some of you were somewhat excited for this story, and to see it go nowhere must be a disappointment. For that I am sorry, I planned this story for over a year, I was ready to write it, but midway through the second chapter, I lost steam, I couldn't write, I just… lost all my investment in this story, and for some time, I fiddled with the idea of coming back, but… I just couldn't, really couldn't.

So, I decided to officially cancel it. However, I thought that I was being awfully selfish. That was all because of me, and the people that got exited and would never see the end of the story were paying the price for my own selfishness. Therefore, I decided that while I couldn't bring myself to write it until completion, even if it wouldn't help all that much, I would publish my notes to the public. It isn't much and can't properly pass the thoughts and ideas I had, but I believe that I should offer if only a bit of closure to all of you. I both apologize and thank all of you from the bottom of my heart, even if it was only one chapter, you all showed great support, and for that I'll be forever thankful.

While I apologize, I fully understand if you loath or even hate me, feel any sort of discontent, or indignation, and want to express it in the reviews, be it through guests or actual accounts. Feel free to do so, even if they are all spiteful words, I believe that I have no right to complain.

These notes are, as one must expect from an author's notes on the story, a complete mess. I tried to make the story section (plot) be as cohesive as possible (however I failed in properly describing the first arc, it is a bit of a mess to read the summary of events, although I believe the second and third arcs are properly topicalized.), however my notes in the lore section (which includes prototypes for scenes I thought off, descriptions of many things, lore, character motivations, character powers, personalities, how their arcs were supposed to progress, etc.) is a complete jumbled mess without beginning nor end, there's no proper topicalization and is full of text walls. However, this presents pretty much all I thought of allotting in the story, and some extras that wouldn't have made to the final cut.

As a final few notes: Please, understand that I've been planning this for over a year, the story went through many phases (at first it would happen in remnant, then the earth, then I flirted the idea of remnant again, rewrote the earth script, changed to remnant, and then completely rewrote it on remnant.), there are many plotlines that were recycled or passed from a character to the other, and ideas that didn't make the final cut. While I made my best to make sure only the material pertinent to how the story would've gone had I continued to write it (ergo: the cannon), it is possible that some remnants of notes from the previous versions remain, so please, if you notice those, I apologize in advance.
You'll also have to apologize to me in other front, since this is all notes, there's a huge amount of grammar errors and swear words, alongside some unhealthy amount of irony in some parts of my notes. I tried to eliminate these as I went through what notes would be posted, but I'm sure there's still many.
Also, my many notes into nasuverse systems are not present in here, merely the ones that directly connect to this story.

Finally, If any of you (for whatever reason) wishes to ever write this or use something present in these notes, whatever you may want to do or use for, feel free, no need for crediting, nothing, its free real state.

To follow through with at least one promise, I'll put my answers to the reviews that were laid out before the posting of this chapter in the end, alongside my notes to what should've been in my AN'S.

[Plot/Sequence of Events]

Timeline:

-A scorching Summer Day.

Ramifications:

· Ironwood orders the creation of the 5 g black hole bombs.

· Summer and Raven begin to work together by tricking Ozpin and preparing his downfall. Summer has a child (11 Y.O. named Vermilion.) Very weak yet constantly pressured by Summer to be like Ruby.

· Ozpin begins to lower Beacon's standards each time more. However, when he sees the Fang going violent, he sees the opportunity for fear, he uses Summer to terrorize the Fang, while refraining from ending them. With this he raises a generation of aspiring huntsman that wish to obtain power and end the fang or prevent that something like it ever again. Glynda says that that year (Jaune's) would be the last one they would need to accept fodder, for the first time in a decade.

· Blake still joins the Fang, but does not leave it. Instead, during the operation where she and Adam highjack a SDC train, the operation is itself highjacked by Summer, who cuts Adam's arm off (and kicks one of his horns out.), which triggers her affection for him, making her stay.

· Leo begins to undertrain his students.

· The boundary field erected around Vale to prevent Raven from using her semblance in there was erected. (in itself it is a boundary field which prevents from ripples being made in space.)

· Raven develops her RM; trains Yang in magecraft, though the girl still hasn't achieved perfect control over her (Yang's) Reality Marble.

· Jacques begins to slowly assassinate all the other branch members of the Schnee family, to ensure his and his immediate family's undisputed control over the company. He begins to work on passing a bill, one that allows for mandatory stay of workers, in case said worker is in debt, or required to do so by contract, in a set place designated by the Patron. Essentially, for Jacques, all-out slavery. If this passes, Penny's favorite place, a garden (closed off, and only blooms in Summer.), will be replaced by a Schnee stay center.

· Ironwood begins to secretly buy a lot of gravity Dust from Jacques, making him vulnerable to the Schnee's demands, which allows for the quasi-slavery law to exist.

· Leo begins the construction of the underwater tunnel, it is extremely bad quality and has lot of problems. Secretly, the council begins to plot against him.

· Cinder's mother marries, as a result she gained an older brother. They were poor, but very happy. Eventually, the parents died and she is left to fend off for herself alongside her brother. Eventually she is asked in marriage by an elite mistralian. The existence of Salem has been leaked off to him, so he and his fellow nobles concocted a plan to destroy her; Cinder was chosen to marry him, because she was a no one (a plain girl from the slums), for the sake of public appearance (a happily married couple, a love story between a rich man and a poor woman.) For the sake of appearences, he took everything away from her, even her purity, and eventually her own brother, her only comfort died because of them, this was the last nail in the coffin, she began to hate humanity (Remnant.) Together with the spider Mafia, she took down those who made her suffer. In the end, she was alone again, a monster who killed many and would keep on doing so, until the world was destroyed, in the end, she was only one girl, not a monster, she couldn't bear that amount of sin. Until, as she cried alone, she was found by two people who were around Aoko and Shoko. They both housed her damaged form, and took care of her. Even after she declared she wished to destroy that world they didn't care, they were, after all, magus, it was natural for them to see people wish to become mass dictators or cruel monsters or wish for supreme power, she was just another one to count for, though they said they would end her if she got too dangerous. In the end, it was thanks to them that she was able to keep moving, because of them, people she considered from other world, since they were not from Remnant (at least she didn't consider Shoko so.), she didn't have to hate and kill them. Because of them, that little saveable grace, she was able to keep on going, as long as she cared for, and they cared for each other, she could keep on going, something not to hate, a little excuse of humanity for her sin. Though Aoko never came to really care for her (not more than 'that troublesome girl she should kill someday.'), Shoko considers her to be her first love (they go share a bed, years later, as a means for Shoko to gain information.). Eventually, since her relationship with the spider mafia was damaged from the end result of the death of nobles, she went to the most reliable source to destroy the world, the one she came to know by the ones she hated... Salem. (Although she admits to also plan to kill Salem, whose existence indirectly caused her pain.).
Note: her bethrored constantly said it was his fate to end Salem, and used that to excuse his actions. She therefore, hates fate.

· Winter becomes Ironwood's specialist like before, but now she completely scorns Jacques and consequently Whiteley.

· Tai begins to focus solely on being a good teacher and husband.

· Pyrrha is just like normal.

· Penny is created as the daughter of Pietro Polendina, she hates him and life itself, but acts as he wants her to.

Arc one- Animals.

· Jacques initiates discussions about his bill with Ironwood, who is forced to reluctantly agree to it, for the sake of the gravity dust. However, they both agree that as long as the Fang is around, the bill cannot pass, as even as much as mention of it in the news caused more activity, and even an attempt at stealing a Schnee train.

· Through an agreement between both Jacques and James, Whitley is to serve as one of Penny's personal tutors. At first Ironwood insists on her being a purely military project, but ends up having to accept it, as Jacques threatens him again with the gravity dust, while promising not to alter her programing in any way. In truth, he is using Penny as a hostage, full control over a military project until James passes the fucking bill.

· Blake and Adam's plan to highjack a Schnee train fails, as it is interrupted by no one other than the White eyepatch, Summer Rose, who takes one of Adam's arms away, alongside one of his horns. Seeing the damage done to him, Blake has her emotional affections for him triggered, which makes her want to stay with him. She ends up regretting later, as she wanted to leave. She goes to see Adam. They talk a bit about what happened and she decides to stay after they have a heart to heart, with Adam breaking down about all the injustice the faunus suffer. The scene begins with Blake outside a room, she talks to Illiya a bit, about how nervous she was, then when a bunch of members of the Fang leave the room, she is asked to enter. She talks to Adam about the morality of it all (the whole theme of Animals, how conflict brought more conflict.) and Adam gives his speech, about how terrorists were always wrong, until they won and turned the defeated ones into the wrong ones. In the end, a world where slavery was about to be legalized against a species, was no right world, and they needed to rise up and fight, to make them suffer for all they made them go through. He talks about how he once told Blake no one would judge her if she left (back when the Fang was going violent.), he says he was lying, about how he wished for her there, and would judge her for being a deserter. But in the end, he couldn't stop her. He told her, that if it was painful, she should just give up. And merely copying the way he spoke, she told him everything was okay. They decide to move on together. (She admits, in narration, she doesn't know why she stayed, she just freaked out when she saw his arm beign cut by the white hood, and then his horn was kicked off.), in the end, she feels sad when looking at his injuries, tried to touch them, but he didn't allow her. The whole scene, he stays without mask, to show that was his humanity, who he truly was, and then he puts it on again, to show he became the monster again, when he decided to continue forward.

· Shoko gets into a fight with her mother about her not being named the heir of the family, so she runs away from home to become someone so great her mother would have no chance but to give her the position of heir. She, of course, has no idea of how to make this, so she just decides to take away the Fang, (A scene with her getting out of the shower, as all her physical appearences are described.) since they were a terrorist organization. However, she has no idea of how to do so. In the end, she is left wondering just what she should do, while going to Menagerie, to get better information.

· Summer returns from her mission and talks to Ozpin about the current situation. Ozpin and Glynda congratulate Summer on a mission well done, and tell her they finally achieved their objective with the Fang. They could now dismantle it, and would proceed to raid their hideout in Vale as soon as possible, which, admittedly, would take some time, so they tell her to go home and rest a bit. They would finally be able to focus solely on the war against Salem. They also talk about how hunting Raven was difficult, which is why Raven hasn't been attacked by Ozpin yet, because he would like to reiterate just how hard is to find a woman, who's camp is protected by bounded fields, literally untraceable unless you are near them, and the only point of reference you have is a whole continent, and doing all that while being both a council member, director, teacher, coordinating a shadow war, and making researches on magecraft so he didn't grow obsolete. Not only that, but Raven also had tons of decoys and loved to give them complicated and false leads. They talk about how the existance of the Fang and the butcher postponed the drop of the students for a bit, but it was only a half-measure, and unless they beat Salem soon, this process would have to repeat again and again.

· They decide that they allowed the Fang to live for long enough and now it was time to eliminate them. He sends Summer home for her to spend some time with her family, since organizing a raid against the Vale Branch of the Fang, and soon after, the main headquarters, might take a while.

· Yang is waiting outside Junior's bar (She explains why she was doing all that, that having Summer Rose's daughter running away from home would just prompt them to use the CCT, and bust her. Equally, if Summer did not show any interest in having her looked after through the CCT would just be far too risky and suspicious. She needed them to believe her, and not keep monitoring her 24/7, so even if it was a bother, she needed to do this. Roman just happened to be the best choice, he had had previous trouble with the Branwen, so it was a win for them, he was an international criminal, so it was good for her image, and she knew she was going to need it in the future, and it was good to be in other's good graces, and more than anything else, his face was just so punch able. It also served as a test from Raven, to make sure she was ready, to be able to guess his semblance and fight according to it. Really, the poor man just happened to be at the wrong position, at the wrong moment in history.), she is looking at the moon, inpatient, wishing to end this part of her assignment as soon as possible. Out pops Roman himself, followed by a few of Junior's goons, and he is ready to steal a dust store. He passes right by her, without truly noticing her. She calls out to him in a seductive voice, he notices her and gets really scared. She knows the reason why, she knows he knows, that he, two years ago, cheated the Branwen tribe. So, she was there to do two things. The first one was to deliver punishment for what he did, and the other was to ride on her original intent, and just deliver him to the police, she needed Ozpin to trust her as a 'good person' so he would believe her when she told him she was going to roam the world in search of Hazel. He tells his goons to beat her up, but she just beats them up instead, she admits that it is bothersome, not being able to use magecraft, but she can handle herself just fine. She begins combat with him, to which she notices, it is completely annoying, he is a balance type huntsman, and manages to hold himself against her, however as she seemed to be getting the upper hand, and moves in to deliver a semblance powered blow, he utters 'gamble', and one turns into many, she just punches randomly, and gets it wrong, as only one of them was real. In fact, this is Roman's semblance, atomic super positioning, in which he was and wasn't all those Roman's at the same time, until someone laid eyes on him, so he became that one true Roman. He runs away, but she pursues in her motorcycle, after some time he tells her that his semblance is the true gamble of life. She notices he is running towards a flying bullhead and gives pursue. She thinks about what he said, the one true gamble of life. If his semblance was about gambles, therefore his origin must also be, so through that connection it was safe to assume Roman Torchwick was a gambler, which fit well into his criminal profile. Therefore, that phrase too must've been a gamble, in which she could either get his semblance right from that phrase or not. In the end, it was all one big gamble. So, she thinks about gambles… not as a magi, with the knowledge she had, but as a normal person, as she knew most likely Roman was… she ignored the pretenses of magecraft, and thought through the common knowledge of a human. Nothing in the universe is truly a gamble. From the moment it all started, everything is moving in tandem. It is oft said that everyone is the hero of their own story, but that was worth for the entire universe, everything since the beginning was living its own story, and interacting with other stories, therefore few things were actually gambles in life, most were different actions that came from the effect of two stories crossing. Therefore most things had a reason to exist, deriving from something's story, which influenced its eviroment in such a way, that interacted with the existence of something else's story. To put it simply, if two people knew each other, one needed to buy bread, and the other owned a bakery, wouldn't it be a coincidence? No, you could relate it to their childhood years, where one of them chose to become a baker after many outside stimuli which molded and affected his whole life all around, and going further you could also say that them even meeting is something surrounding the effect their parent's had on them based on their own life, in the end you can point out to so many infinite variables that one would be surprised at how unrandom things were. So, if nothing was a gamble, then what was…? She thought harder… the true gamble of life… harder… harder… she reaches the conclusion. Atomic superposition, the effect where one subatomic particle would be two types of particle at the same time, however when put into observation, it would change and become a single one. To say the truth, that was the most pure form of random gambling in life. Therefore, his semblance must be something like that. His many Romans that appear for a single second, if she thought well about it, if it is all based on observation, then he was all those Romans at the same time, however when someone looked up on him, he must become the Roman the person looked at, it would all be a gamble if the person would be able to hit him and understand the semblance or not. It would be even more of a gamble with multiple people around, as it would all depend on what the first observation of him was, and there was no telling if that person would be the attacking one, or even if the attacking one would get things right. So, she smiles, knowing that would all be too easy. When he is jumping to the bullhead, she accelerates her motorcycle, jumping over a ramp, her motorcycle flying in the air, she jumps out of it, throwing the thing to the ground (she laments it, telling herself she would've loved to have gone in a road trip with it.), she flies right above Roman, and delivers a punch, he tries to use gamble, but she murmurs to herself, inside her head 'ignore your head, ignore your heart. Follow your guts, ignore everything else, just punch the first thing you see.' So as soon as Roman uses his semblance, she punches him. He falls to the ground, his aura broken and him laying in a crater. She looks at the remains of her bike and sighs. She then looks at him again and smiles. 'I think people call that a triple seven' she says and laughs to herself, loving her own jokes. Roman only groans. The police comes around, and she smiles, grabbing out roman and raising him to the officers, saying to his ears 'smile to the cameras Roman' and gives her best smile.

· Whitley meets Penny. During their first meeting, Penny says Whitley is weird, since most rich kids like him would be pretty pampered. Whitley just thinks back to his life with Jacques, and the utilitarian thought about going through displeasure (Being with Penny, at first.) in favor of future pleasure. (Jacques' acknowledgement.) (Dear reader, as you might expect, there was supposed to be one (scene of them both) every(or one every two) chapter, it would be just the two of them discussing and spewing philosophy.)

· Yang meets Pyrha, Ren, Nora and Jaune in the Beacon initiation tests, and fails on purpose.

· Weiss decides that she should become a huntress, hoping that the name and status it brought would be enough to bring about enough support and convince the actionist board to replace her father with her, if they attacked fast enough, they should be able to do it, with no counter from him. Unfortunately, she is captured by Blake and brought to Adam. She is kept captive with the 'aura suppressing' pins (There are no such thing as 'aura suppressors' or 'aura enhancers', always hated the idea of those being a thing. Instead, to suppress one's aura, people just pierce their shoulders with three barbed nails, and tie them there with metal. They change size with the temperature, and truly hurt. Since they are constantly hurting the person, they are unable to use their aura, as it is always being wasted to heal, of course, they can just not heal themselves and die from hemorrhage, or manage a perfect balance between being completely still and lucking by having the temperature not change much, managing to take out the pins and fight their way out (or try to). Or in other cases, if the person manages to use their aura, it will heal around the spikes, causing the arm to bleed even more, canceling the healing. The only way for them to use their aura is to completely ignore the healing factor and focus solely in defending and attacking, overpowering through the pain. That never lasts long, and they are always soon caught, or they just go crazy before that happens. If there are some truly dangerous prisoners, that can't be trapped like that, they are either just killed, or pinned down to a wall while impaled in non-vital places, kept alive by just enough.)

· Raven meets up with Summer as she is in her house. She manages to overhear Summer scolding Vermilion for not being as cheerful as Ruby, but other than that, ignores the household drama. They talk about what their next step is 'have a valid excuse for Yang to come to their side all the time, and serve as an extra mole.' And how they should just move along with ending the Fang, and how she would prepare to help and beginning to get ready to attack Ozpin and take over the Mistral government. They end up visiting Ruby's grave, where Summer confesses that it had been truly difficult to live without her. Raven is all the while impatient, knowing Summer did all that many times in a row now. All because once she told the woman that perhaps Ruby could've become a wraith or an apparition, only to hype up the woman, but now, she gave the same speech every time, in hopes that it would somehow awake a past spirit of the young rose. Sadly, she should already know, if Ruby was going to become one of those two, she would already be awake. Summer then nags to Raven about them attacking Ozpin and Salem, and why it took so long, she explains she needed to train a whole force, convince people, and train herself to be able to beat Ozpin, but she is now confident she can beat him up. Raven says that she won't enter the fang plot unless some really interesting development happens, which does, when Shoko's existence is discovered by her.

· Shoko takes a train ride to get a boat and reach menagerie. She ends up in an accident, a robbery, in the train, however it is stopped by one of the Spider mafia, setting up their existence. However, she got involved when the runaway collided against her invisible form in the crowded train, making them both fall, and cancelling her invisibility (her cloak falls off her head), and a camera sees it. At this point she is noticed by Oz and Glynda (hadn't noticed her before because she was constantly using the cape to hide herself and go by for free in trains, and stay for free in hotels, and steal a scroll… yeah, she isn't the most moral person out there.), they don't know how she managed to escape their eyes for so long, but seeing as she had magecraft, they decide to hold the knowledge of her life from Summer, for now at least. They decide to send Qrow out to seek her.

· Shoko gives Menagerie a quick visit, she wishes to catch signs of the fang in the home-land of the faunus. She gets into a boat and travels to the place, there are many Grimm being attracted to her (boat), but she just saves the people by using her eyes whenever a Grimm appears, of course she is covered by her cloak, to prevent her from being found out (sneaking in on the train and the secrecy of magic), she says that she wanted to be a world-wide hero, but it would all be for nothing if she exposed magecraft, so she needed to do it all pretending to use that world's combat system, which did not involve using shining eyes. She also gives more insight into her and Aoko having trained her using her eyes, and tried to figure out what they were. (here, she discovers that many grimm were attracted to her.

· Weiss begins to talk a lot with Adam and Blake, discuss with them the validity of their actions, develop real strong racism, and Adam and Blake begin to hate her more. She begins to ask herself what Jacques would do in her situation, and thinks about how to set herself free.

· Yang tells Pyrrha she would just become a wandering huntress, regardless of her passing or not at Beacon. She just uses that as an excuse to go the Branwen tribe in Anima, where she had planned to go for a long time now. Though she would skip by home really quick to say hi to her father and brother. However, as she leaves, she is approached by Ozpin and Glynda who ask of her motivations, and how she could've failed after taking down Roman(as in: How could someone able to beat Roman Torchwick not be able to pass the initiation test); she answers by saying that she couldn't really fight Grimm very well(lie), she trained her whole life to fight people, all in the hopes of one day killing Hazel, or as she calls him, the dark giant that attacked her family alongside the Grimm, and killed her sister(coincidentally, dear reader, this is, in fact, her motivation, she considers that her life after the prologue was awful, Ruby died, Summer soured up, her father became a bit of a cripple, her new brother was awful, Raven was cruel, and learning magecraft basically made her whole personality and feelings become distorted. She blames it all on Hazel, and wants him to be dead.). She says she would stop at nothing. Ozpin decides that she could be useful to them in another manner (although Glynda asks if he wants to break her too, mentally, of course. To which he denies.), he offers her a deal, that he and Glynda had tried to keep that man's position in track throughout the years, and they had reached somewhat of a conclusion. He offers her that info, seeing as she would not stop at her search for Hazel, so as long as she helped them by helping to catch Raven, the info would be given to her, he tries to use suggestion in her, but her mental fortitude (prowess as a magus, the circulation of mana in her body, her conceptual weight, her RM) manages to tank it all, and she just gets a mild migraine and some irritation, he then congratulates her fortitude. He asks her about her mother, she then pauses and thinks for a second, and answers 'yeah, she just came back from a mission about a week ago, didn't she?', and at that moment he and Glynda know she is lying (the pause, the tone she uses, the way she words it, her body language). He clarifies it is all about Raven and tell her that, if she finds her, she should just deliver a note of paper to her, he claims that it is a message to Raven, one he wished to send after she broke contact with him. The note in itself, Ozpin just delivers to her. It is, in fact, a paper that is encrypted with a message, but it is encrypted magically, so one must pump their magical energy to see it. The message in itself is just a "Fuck you", but it is the true meaning of the paper that matters, when someone pumped magical energy into it, it would contact the main boundary field in Vale, and would mark that magical signature as hostile. In other words, whenever that person set foot inside the boundary field, they would be constantly tracked. The boundary field itself contacts other fields, other two in fact, one in Mistral and one in Atlas, which he set up in his latest political visit in there, so that if the person set foot inside those cities, they would also be constantly tracked. He says it was meant for Raven, but now it would serve to tell if Xiao-Long was working with her birth mother or not, and it would help them track her.

· Pyrrha tries to get along with her team, and has classes. (asks herself why jaune got chosen as a team leader when it makes no sense at all, for all she knows, she should be the leader. She is thankful that she isn't, don't get her wrong, but there was nothing in Jaune to make him leader, surely, he found an opportunity and used charisma to achieve it, but being a leader is much more than that, he really shouldn't be the leader, in the end it was up to her to discover the why of all that, and try to support him the best she could. She tries professor Port, but not knowing it himself, he goes on a tirade about how they should trust Ozpin and a bunch of stuff about Ozpin knowing the truth, and they should trust him, and how kids their age shouldn't try to think much of themselves because they achieved much. Pyrrha reaches the conclusion that he doesn't actually know why. It is revealed to the audience, when in the chapter 'birth/day', we discover that Ozpin's next heir always suffers a lot in his birthday. And then we cut to Pyrrha having similar feelings to Shiki when he is being possessed by Roa, we end the part of her narration by describing how she could see lines all over Jaune. This happens near the Vale Raid.) (so, huh, this isn't well formatted or organized, but hear me out, dear reader, it was in fact, supposed to be a Pyrrha scene per chapter, every chapter she either talks to a teacher or has classes/talks to team, like that I'd balance abusing her character for lore dumps while progressing on the mystery of her trying to discover the truths behind Beacon and herself. Not all that is in this paragraph at once.)

· However, upon arriving there, she (Shoko) is met with bad eyes from the people. She manages to meet Ghira, sitting in a stone bench, atop a hill in what seemed like a Plaza, they talk for a bit, they discuss the fact of whether or not what the Fang was doing was right or not, and whether what Shoko was doing was right or not, they both disagree with each other and leave it at that, that doesn't mean, however, that they hate each other, they are rather friendly and as Shoko leaves (after being told by him that there were no Fang operatives in his island (it would just bring about far too much political problem, the island given to the faunus at the end of the faunus wars, housing terrorists? Despite it being their homeland, they couldn't risk that sort of thing happening.)) and goes to the boat she came from, and gives Cinder a quick call, asks her about how she could beat the Fang, and the only answer she receives is to (Come to Vale), Shoko/Ruby does not say her contact's name in the phone, nor anything overly suspicious, only how she could deal with a Terrorist organization, so Ozpin and Glynda don't look too much into it, besides sending a familiar to tail Cinder for a bit, which doesn't result in anything, as she is properly keeping away from dangerous activities to prevent being discovered.

· Qrow meets her up when she arrives at shore of Anima. They have their fight, and she manages to run away. This prompts him to look after her past. is met by Qrow, who already knew she would be there. He teases her a bit, and gives her the option to just join him, and go to Ozpin quietly, or not, and go to Ozpin with a fight. She chooses to fight, but soon discovers that he is in another level. She had her magecraft, her combat abilities, and her mystic codes. He could see through her codes, her dagger had no effect unless he used aura, her combat abilities were good, but nowhere good enough to deal with him, and her magecraft only barely allowed her to get on his level. She is led to a desperate run after she realizes the kind of monster he is, and the things he did to become a crow. She manages to discover his name is Grey. They embark a train, fighting their way through. Luckily, the Fang got involved, which triggered Qrow to get serious (use aura enhancements.) and kill them with a mere flare of his semblance, but that distraction was enough to make Shoko run away. (which prompts her to create code:repeat) (this is one of those things I said would be more detailed in the 'lore' section)

· At one point in time, when Penny and Whitley are talking, they talk about selfishness. Penny says that since for her, being selfish it the only way of existing, she can't give it up and become selfless. She compares it to sin, once you taste it, you cannot go back. They reach this topic when talking about eternity and immortality (what triggers Penny into turning off her backup/immortality), Whitley asks himself if humans keep on progressing because they fear death, or if their egos force them to continue towards immortality. He doesn't know if losing death will stop humanity or embolden it, but to understand humans, she must also fear death like them. (Penny asked about it.)

· Blake and Adam begin to notice the new wave of movement on the Council's part, and begin to fear they were compromised. They begin to plan how to launch an attack, on the police station and delay. They begin to talk more to Cinder and Rowan about subtracting their offenses and begin a retraction plan. But they were confident in their chances of victory and decide to keep on pressing forward.

· While Whitley and Penny talk, there are in her special place (closed off garden. I do believe I detailed it more in the non-plot section) She looks into the sun, and says she followed his advice and turned off her immortality. She says everything is scary now, even the tiny actions. He simply covers her with an umbrella, saying the heat would be bad for her. She asks him if he would cry if she died. He says he wouldn't, because he would never cry. (allusion to Jacques and how he was raised.)

· Shoko crosses the poorly made train that connects Anima to Sanus. On her way out, she bumps with Yang, who was going to Anima. The older sister asks if she knows Shoko, to which she says 'no', and then Yang just looks into her dull red eyes and apologizes for the trouble.

· Pyrrha, during Ozpin's birthdays, feels the same things Tohno Shiki felt when Roa was trying to possess him in Tsukihime's Ciel route.

· There's one time where Whitley is with Penny, they are walking through the busy streets of Mantle, they suddenly enter a narrow alleyway where Whitley begins to breath heavily. They discuss about how bad the people have there, and how the bigger the crowd, the more forgivable they were. So even with Whitley's piss poor disguise, he could still go by unnoticed.

· Whitley begins to like staying with penny and begins to learn about the common folk and how their lives would change if the bill passed. (Yes dear reader, what this bill is, is specified in the other section)

· Ozpin and Glynda talk about the attack that will be directed at them, and decide to simply wait for it and counter it, they knew the date and place, it would, after all, be easy.

· Weiss begins to question her father's actions after discovering the minimal influence of the Fang in her family's deaths. Eventually, she just ignores it in favor of her hate for the animals. She begins to focus on how to ignore the pain, to maximize her aura, the most effective ways to fight. She begins to train in her cell while imprisoned.

· Adam and Blake conduct their attack to prevent the task force from beating them. However, as they were already being expected, they are met with strong opposition, and Summer fights Blake and Adam again. In here, they confront each other in a more direct manner, and have time for a chit-chat, as Adam is incredibly mad, and asks her why she would oppress the faunus if she praised herself a hero like the huntsman, but instead, she merely shrugs and says she doesn't care about any of that, she only cares about her own personal goal (I know this seems a bit OOC for everyone's favorite depiction of Summer as this super heroine that was never properly characterized in RWBY, but remember, this one lost a daughter, this was meant to represent how she changed after that, how she noticed that no matter who she saved, she could never fill the hole left by Ruby, about how she was better thinking and protecting only what mattered to her, than protecting others), to which Adam is disgusted, he preaches that if you're not doing things for someone, if you do not have a cause, you're merely a monster, and Summer preaches the exact opposite, and then tells him he is a terrorist. This, in turn, turns Blake more against the huntsman and turns Adam's already fragile mental health into a further mess (as if it wasn't before.). (I do believe this scene is also better described in the 'lore' section.)

· Yang reaches Raven and accommodates herself in their camp, while preparing for their future trouble.

· Whitley begins to seriously doubt his relationship with Jacques.

· Leonhart discusses with Salem whether they should save the Fang or not, and eventually decide to let them die, and support their downfall.

· Qrow finds Shoko's house, but doesn't manage to get in because of the bounded field. He says that even his semblance wouldn't be able to break causality enough to allow him in. He ends up meeting Aoko instead, who gives him a good beating, before giving him a letter to deliver to Ruby.

· Shoko arrives in Vale, immediately goes to Cinder, discusses a long conversation with her, gains the information on the spiders, and how they would be able to help her (Cider says that she doesn't care about the Fang, they were about to be extinct, and it wasn't like Shoko would actually be able to do anything, and even if she did, the kingdoms would've just ended it.), and sleeps with her (no, not sexually, just crashing on Cinder's place… what, oh yeah, you don't know why they are so close, well I believe Cinder's backstory is more detailed in the 'lore' section, although at this point in the story, you, dear reader, was also supposed to be questioning why Cinder and Shoko were so close in the first place, and if I'm not wrong, I only planned to reveal it near the end of the story). They are woken up in the middle of the night, by a panicking Emerald, screaming that the attack on Vale had begun. Cinder goes out, and gives Shoko a glass sword (Shoko can't use magecraft and has no aura, so she only has the glass sword and her martial ability (which is admittedly little) to deal with people stronger than her/have aura.)

· The battle happens in the course of one night. As they noticed Shoko had arrived through the CCT, they devise a special team to capture her in secret. Shoko is constantly overwhelmed and forced to run away. She tries to get into motorcycles, and ride her way through, but doesn't manage to get all the way. Meanwhile Blake and Adam try to hold themselves on the battlefronts, and Summer battles away all the members that come after her, eventually reaching and battling Adam and Blake again, this time the fight is more even, but she still wins. Cinder tries to give cover from afar, with her bow, while covered by NEO's semblance. She ends up in a fight with Glynda, whom as soon as they are alone, completely overwhelms her, and forces her to run (also managed to resist Emerald's semblance.). When everything seems lost for the vilains, they managed to escape (Blake, she takes Weiss with her.), and Shoko hops in the confusion and gets away, knowing they were also after her, but not before trading looks with her mother, whom she properly ignores. (I believe this is all better detailed in the 'lore' section)

· Adam dies in his final confront with Summer, ratifying the message that committing atrocities, and living for people other than yourself is meaningless. If you do not live for yourself, then the actions you took have no effect, if your life is dedicated to others, with no bit of selfishness, if you do not change, then it is all for moot, and all the people who died, died for nothing. If you do not change and grow, obtain something with those deaths, if someone else does, then all you are committing is slaughter. (Oh yes, I believe I have this in the more detailed version of the scene, but Illyia dies while trying to protect Blake, must seem a bit contradictory, but those actions are born from Illya's own selfishness and are meant for self-sacrifice rather than taking from others)

· After the battle, Roman runs away to Patch (although this remains as a surprise up until Heirs), alongside Neo.

· Cinders decide to stay and continue the operation to get the maiden power anyway.

· Summer gets enraged with Ozpin as to why he didn't tell about Ruby sooner. He explains they only discovered her recently, and didn't want to alarm her with false hope, one that could prejudicated her functioning in the mission. She tells Raven about it, which prompts her to begin getting involved in the whole thing.

· They begin to plan for the attack on the main HQ, and receive a lot of international support. Atlas, whom already had exterminated their branch of the Fang before it even begun, and the SDC, who's the CEO wanted the rescue of his daughter. They both sent reinforcements in the form of troops, mechas, paladins, dust, money. The leaders of menagerie denounced the attack as an act of terrorism and crime of war, which led to them being not well seen by the international community.

· They begin to march down the kingdom, a large banner of war. Stopping at every big settlement of Vale, putting up a big show. For their PR image, they help the poor in the streets, bring them to their armies, help the faunus. A big show, most of the Fang has run away, or has been snitched by those living in there.

· Pyrrha only managed to watch from afar, in the window of her dorm, and begins to grow restless.

· Blake gets back to HQ. She is berated by Siena, who completely destroys Blake's fragile mentality. Weiss, after being brought to her presence, is beaten up, and tries to attack Sienna, with the objective to kill. But fails and is imprisoned again. Blake is assigned a team to take care of the perimeter.

· Shoko, reaches the first city of Anima.

· Most of the forces of the world close in on Anima. They will attack soon. (However, they also hope for a bloodless take down.)

· Raven moves in with Yang to make sure they have routes to help beat up the Fang. (Reminder, she is only on this because Ruby is alive, and seemingly capable of magecraft, a rare find, and something to hold over Summer and Yang.)

· Qrow continues to search for the lost Shoko.

· Summer is being pressured to do something.

· Blake is having a breakdown.

· Weiss is almost ready, she is just waiting for an opportunity to kill her enemies. She spent so long just thinking about how much she wishes to kill them, how much she will savor it, and the many techniques she will use for it.

· Blake sets out in an excursion to monitor the perimeter.

· Shoko finally found the spiders, and in change for being shown the way to the Fang, Shoko gives them nothing, she pretends to be teaching them the basics of magecraft (just the most basic thing, such as the separation between body, mind and soul) but will just use suggestion so they beat their heads against a rock until they forget everything. She has finally developed code:repeat.

· Things in Atlas begin to behave more animatedly, as signs of the Fang coming down incentivizes the people to fear what will happen to them.

· Sienna prepares herself to the all-out conflict in their doorsteps.

· The kingdoms stay at the borders, hoping for a peaceful resolution, no blood, just surrendering.

· Shoko meets up with the excursion set up by Blake, they launch a surprise attack and kill the spiders. However, Ruby survives, and due to her looking like Summer, and having attacked them in the Vale fight, Blake has a panic attack and orders the Fang to attack her. She (mad as fuck, because this is the second time being confused with a Rose got her in trouble, first one being with Qrow.) merely takes out her glasses, uses her eyes as a flashbang, and uses code:repeat(gandr) to neutralize everyone else other than Blake, as she was satisfied with the results, and exhausted from using code:repeat, she retreats with a good knowledge of where the Fang HQ is. She plans on resting for a day or two, making sure she is ready to attack.

· As Blake returns, everyone is filled with dread, the attack is to happen soon, Shoko's presence announces. They move out, their troops filling the forest, covering the perimeter, preparing for war.

· The kingdoms see their move and decide they were trying to pull something up. All pretenses of peace and bloodlessness are over. They attack.

· Two days later, the assault begins. Fire dust bombs are thrown in the forest, alongside poisonous gases. The ground troops have no chance. Paladins are dropped to the ground with thousands of troops, giant cruisers surround the air around the mountain. Summer leads down the attack. The bandits of Branwen attack by the secret entrance, pincering the position of the White Fang soldiers. Shoko manages to get in through the confusion, she is the one to find Weiss and free her. She follows Weiss, who claims to know where the throne of the Fang is. Shoko gets thrown to the side by Weiss, and the Weiss against Sienna fight ensues. Paladins all over the hideout, blood splattered as both sides had losses, Weiss killed Sienna, only a handful of members had escaped. While looking out for the escapees they discover Blake Beladonna was one of them, and initiate a search party for her. Shoko is pulled aside by Raven and Summer, she is told to join their side of the fighting against Ozpin for the things he did, as a promise of companionship, Raven gives Ruby a few papers on runes, as Aoko had forbidden her from learning them. Weiss is escorted back to Atlas, ready to use this whole thing to her political advantage. Yang tries to talk to Shoko but only receives the cold shoulder, soon after she goes back with Raven to the camp, seeing as their next objective would soon arrive (taking over Mistral.). Shoko denies the invitation to go with Summer, and said she would be on her way soon enough, as she had one thing to do. Blake runs to Mistral, and hides in there. Shoko just sits around until Qrow finds her, and she says she accepts his offer. He questions what made her change her mind, but she doesn't say anything, other than I reconsidered, it is all very awkward in the end, as they hate each other.

Arc 2- Heirs. (alright, from here on out it gets better to read, as it is all way more topicalized and numbered)

· The Fang has been taken down, the Atlas council begin the process to pass the bill.

· Whitley is asked whether or not he managed to make Penny a servant of the Schnee, hoping to have more time to spend with her, he denies, but after being told, that with the intent of keeping aggressions with the general at a minimal level, he is to be separated from her. He begins to panic, but doesn't say anything, with fear of being reprimanded.

· Weiss arrives in Atlas, she goes to the mansion, where she receives the cold shoulder from both Winter and Whitley (butthurt mad he lost PENNY), there she begins to notice, that even though she got power, they were not afraid of her. She felt bothered over that, and begins to give the favor back to Whitley by being mean to him too. She, with her newfound personality, manages to become Jacques' definite heir.

· Shoko arrives in Vale with Qrow. Ruby arrives in Vale. She is taken straight to Ozpin, who gives her his objectives, asks hers how she got magecraft, tells her about Salem's powers, the relics, gives her aura, and asks for her allegiance in place of an apprenticeship (in his mind, the daughter of a magic user from another timeline is impossibly valuable.). After learning of his power, she says she is ready to accept. She doesn't care about their previous grievances, as they were understandable, neither does she care about Summer Rose and her side in the war. They sign up a self-restraining geiss, preventing them from betraying or lying each other. Though, they let an 'out' of that contract, since Ruby planned to leave Remnant once she achieved the heirship to Aoko, and live in Earth instead, so not to carry over any weight, the contract would be undone when she left Remnant. She begins her apprenticeship under Ozpin. She is also offered a position as a maiden, they consider the spring maiden, currently Raven, whom they planned to take out, which is when she rats Summer and Raven out, cementing her position as a member of the inner circle. They say that the fall maiden would be Ozpin's next incarnation, and Ruby could freely chose between Winter, Spring and Summer, seeing as their respective maidens were either in their possession or in their reach, or soon to be killed.

· (From Glynda's POV) They get Summer into their workshop under the school, completely chained up. They alter her maiden crest, and put a seal on her eyes. Ozpin wanted to kill her, but Glynda reminded him of all her uses, being used against Raven, to trick her, her bountiful womb. And in the end of it all, they didn't need to kill her to give Shoko a crest. They put a Geiss of complete obedience on her, she was to obey their every order. He puts the following orders into her 'do not betray the inner circle' 'do not show any sign of anything being outside the norm to Raven Branwen, during your reports.' 'Obey every single order.'

· Vermillion gets another scene, one where he professes his hate for Ruby Rose and his duty to become her replacement. He says he hates his life.

· Whitley begins to break down under the weight, as the bill begins to go through the legal processes, and Weiss begins to be more and more conflicting with their father, and Winter just looks in disgust towards them.

· Yang (seemingly irritated beyond belief) begins to go after the Spider Mafia agents. She slowly takes them down with her magecraft. (just burns everything down by breathing volcanic smoke into the surroundings.)

· Blake begins to hide away in Mistral. She is lost and scared, she doesn't know what to do, and is still in the high of running away. She doesn't want to die, she doesn't want to give up, she is scared to be caught, of her parents, of everything.

· Shoko discovers that Cinder was infiltrated in Beacon, and decides to have a little talk with her. They discuss Cinder's next plan, about how she was going to destroy beacon, about how she would destroy the world, Shoko just scoffs at that, and says that for the meanwhile everything was okay, but the time where they became deadly enemies was soon to come. As Shoko leaves, she meets up with Jaune, whom she uses to get some talk with Pyrrha, so she is taken to the JNPR dorms (note It's been at least a month since Heirs begun, and at least three weeks she's been in Beacon). There she meets up with Pyrrha (whom she already knows to be Oz's next incarnation.), she doesn't get along very well with them, but she resurrects the doubt in Pyrrha's mind about her true reasoning to love Jaune, after calling him pathetic. She gets out after a while.

· Pyrrha is soon after called by Ozpin and told about the maidens, and how she was fated to become one of them. He says he planned to tell her sooner, but just seeing her go after the clues was impossibly amusing.

· Whitley and Penny say their goodbyes, when they meet, in a high building, Penny is standing in the edge, and gives a slightly suicidal speech "My... life's meaning... The meaning... of being born... Merely destroying life will not win me approval... But if so... what use am I to the world...? It is painful... So painful. Why is life... so painful...? Why won't anyone... help me...? I don't need... this world... To eliminate all others and reside at the pinnacle of existence! Yet the battle never comes! This cursed cycle of duty and selfishness! No one loves me in this world! This world has no need for me! There is only one solution..." she pretends to jump, only to balance herself just in the right moment, stopping Whitley dead on his tracks, and she begins to laugh. He tells her it is not funny (she says it is a joke.), but she doesn't understand why he is mad. She asks for his secret (he likes her, and wants to spend more time with her… be with her, forever, but he isn't able to say it.), and then gives him hers, she tells him about her dream being 'to kill Pietro Pollendina'.

· Vermillion decides he can't take it anymore after he sees a photo of young Ruby Rose. He decides it is his fate to run away and become his own self.

· Jaune hears about Pyrrha being offered a big duty and honor, about her being something's heir, destined to be something great, he talks to her about her so called 'goddess powers' and gets into a fight with her, about why she wasn't using her whole power, the power he would've loved to have and use, the power he would use if he had the chance, and yet, she never used it, merely kept it secret (she fears she will hate herself if she uses it, becoming something far too far from humanity, unaware that she will hate herself regardless.), he doesn't speak to her anymore. His origin 'transfer'(also detailed in the 'lore' section) acts up, and he begins to believe he is the one destined, after all, his family tree was big enough… he begins to have dreams about destroying all his enemies with a shining sword and armor. Mere delusions.

· A celebration party is put up by Jacques, for when his bill is going to be approved, and he receives his unconditional win. Whitley begins to break, as the thought of Penny's special place being destroyed encloses his mind.

· Yang, with a little help from Vernal, talks her heart out, about how discovering that Shoko/Ruby didn't even remember her, didn't care about her, was destroying her. How she didn't know what she wanted, how she needed to be the next head of the Branwen, how she needed to continue this life she hated. But it would be all okay, because in the end, that man had still taken her sister from her, even if her carcass was alive. She would be okay as long as she got revenge.

· Shoko hears about Jaune, and begins to project her feelings into him, and tricks herself by thinking that she is just believing that since his family comes from the old huntsman, and the sword was never wielded by anyone, he might have something to do with it. She tells him about how she might know something about his dreams. She (all this in the same chapter, but this following part is from Glynda's perspective, while the initial is from Shoko's) goes to Ozpin tells this to the inner circle, all agree is pure bullshit, but Ruby, projecting her feelings of becoming a worthy heir into Jaune stands her ground, and demands to at least go to Vacuo to prove herself wrong, seeing as Summer was the Summer maiden, they could do it. They all agree in the end, if only because it would be fast and easy, and they could at least rule out a theory, as unlikely as it was. Jaune gets convinced after Glynda spills the beans on why Pyrrha actually loves him (which just serves to damage his already damaged feelings.)

· Pyrrha herself, when she hears Jaune was leaving, is left dumbstruck. She is to be made the next leader of her team, a team of three. She wants to tell him not to leave, not her, but she couldn't, because her feelings for him were not as strong anymore, and her own feelings of self-loathing just increased tenfold. She wants to disappear, she doesn't want to die, to disappear, but she knows she will, it is not her choice… or it is, she could after all, kill herself. Should she end everything on her own terms, as herself, or should she follow through her destiny, becoming something else, losing everything she is, and living an unhappy and unfulfilling life? She manages to perfectly hide this from Ren and Nora.

· Raven tells Yang to prepare to their mission on the following day, while everyone would be busy with the Schnee party.

· Shoko gets ready to set sail (it is faster by boat, seeing as the railroads of Vacuo were… and bullhead was just not a good idea, seeing as it could not last long, and big ships would just attract too much attention, meaning they needed to take the boat, the fastest way there while also being secretive.), and gets on moving with Jaune and Summer.

· Blake moves closer to Haven academy, she is more lost than ever, what should she do, what should she do, what should she do. Should she go back to her father? Should she give up? Should she be more like Adam? Should she try and be some sort of guide? She doesn't know, she is scared, no direction, full of fear.

· Weiss begins to talk to her mother, after she ignores Weiss for too long, focusing solely on her drinks, Weiss gets a little too hot headed, and tries to attack her, believing that the power she achieved would make her mother fear her, and in turn adore and treat her well. She fails, as Willow merely sneers at her. (day before the night)

(beginning of the chapter 'a night to be remembered')

· Whitley suffers even more in his bedroom. The party begins, Whitley grows too restless and tells his father that he should rethink his actions, because when he becomes the head of the family, he would destroy all those things and build her special place again. Jacques merely slaps him, tells him Weiss will be the heir, and he could never be one, because he was a parrot, while Weiss was someone that could succeed him.

· Qrow gets dispatched to Mistral to keep on looking after Raven.

· Vermillion packs his things up, ready to run away.

· Penny spends the night away in her garden. The winter of Atlas was coming, the day and night cycle had finally, for a brief while, returned. The narration talks about her true feelings of hate for herself, about how she misses Whitley, about how she doesn't want to lose this place, her selfishness and herself.

· Pyrrha spends the time alone, thinking about what she should do, give herself up, hate herself to an unbearable extent? What about Jaune, wouldn't he miss her? No, he wouldn't… he hated her. What about her mother? Wouldn't she miss her? No, if it was for honor and glory, surely her mother wouldn't care. Ren and Nora were friends, but recent ones, they would look at her, and say 'shame', she would never be anything other than a sweet memory in their happy life with each other. She decides she needed to talk to her mother a bit, and goes to the CCT tower.

· Cinder prepares to strike.

· The night comes.

· Raven gets into Haven academy with Yang. She knows where the vault is, and easily reaches it. (she claims not to reach for the others: The sword of destruction is literally unwieldable, the Vale relic is guarded by Ozpin, and the Atlas relic was so well guarded that she would end up triggering so many people, Ozpin himself might have an official reason to hunt her down.

· Cinder infiltrates.

· Vermillion waits for his father to sleep.

· Shoko, midway through the sea, talks to Jaune about how she came to be (with Summer being a bitch to her, and peeping in.), about how she destroyed her own self in the objective of surviving. He makes a joke that she is basically 'Ruby Rose Alternative' and talks about everything Summer said about young Ruby, an amicable, cheerful, smiling girl, in contrast to Shoko's grumpiness, sassiness, and quick to anger attitude, which prompts her to say 'Say that again, and I'll kill you.' This later gets used.

· Blake follows in after Raven and Yang.

· Weiss allows herself to drink just a little bit of alcohol, just for that one night, for that one moment in time.

(chapter break)

· Weiss passes out from too much alcohol.

· Pyrrha meets Cinder, and their first fight ensues, however, from her emotional instability, she fails to capture her, and Cinder is able to install the Queen virus.

· Shoko's boat is attacked by an aquatic Grimm from below, Jaune comes out screaming 'I didn't make the joke, I swear!', as the boat sinks down. The silver eyed warriors easily kill of the Grimm, but they are left adrift to the heavy currents.

· Vermillion runs away.

· Yang and Raven reach the Vault, they use Raven's RM to open it and have the relic at their doorstep, instead of having to cross an endless desert. They pick it up, and Raven begins to prepare her silver eye to destroy the gate (since it was being powered by perpetual motion engines, moved by Gandr, he wouldn't notice, as it wasn't connected to him.).

· Blake, enraged from the time she met Yang in the Fang, crazy, in her frail mental state, attacks her from behind, however, the blonde sidesteps and is hit by Raven's eye blast midway through the portal. She disappears. Raven asks herself what could've happened, she should've been there when the portal was undone, but since she was midway through, and the portal was connected to magecraft to the age of gods… no, better not think of it.

· Since Yang was in Mistral city, the tracker Ozpin put on her finally acts up, and they finally discover she was working with Raven, and was in Mistral. They warn Leonardo about it.

· Whitley goes crazy, he begins to mutter to himself again and again, how much he wanted to save Penny, how much he hated his father. End, end, end end endendendendendendendendend, he just wanted it all to END! Whatever it took, whatever was needed. He gets possessed by a demon, and uses penny's lesson during that time they went out to the city disguised (the bigger the crowd, the more forgiving they are.) to sneak a knife in and kill his father. (gets away from his room, goes to the kitchen and grabs a knife, sneaks into the party and kills father.).

(End of 'a night to be remembered part 2')

· There's a lot of turmoil in Atlas about what happened, there's an investigation. Weiss is distraught at what happened, Whitley is being kept captive but tight lipped, and when Winter discovers from Ironwood, she just breaks down in a fit of mad laughter.

· Leo contacts Salem about Raven, and she sends out Hazel.

· Blake wakes up somewhere weird, the reverse. After a bit of walking, she finds the goddess of faunus, the one they all preached. She is taught the basics of the reverse, discusses faunus history for a bit, and is given the seed of the prophet, which would allow her to manifest her own conceptual weight and evolve as she progressed through it. It takes form of an antler that grows on the right side of her head, while her eye and manifestation of that power (fire, the eye is lit on green fire, the antler is lit on green fire, the part of her body is lit on green fire) is green. (The goddess claims not to know, what created the universe, was it the big bang? Creating the universe, and then a big pile of rocks came together and formed the earth under the perfect condition of the Solar system? Or was it one of their creationist myths? They all happened, the creationist myths, in case, but didn't the gods only come because they were believed in? In the end humans came, and believed in gods, which in turn, came to exist and created everything because there was no causality to prevent them from doing so. But in the end of it all, they were still their children, and they cared deeply for them.)

· Vermillion begins living in the woods as a lost boy. Glynda and Ozpin know about his position, but decide not to do anything about it, besides, they now had Shoko on their side, of course, that didn't mean they would merely leave their work to go worthless, but that doesn't mean they would put their effort into making sure he was safe, at the moment he was pretty okay. After all, he was safe. He doesn't know what to do, he didn't think past the part of 'running away from home', but if he wanted to ever become something, he needed to find something to do.

· Shoko wakes up, she is in the beach with Jaune and Summer. They decide that it would be faster (after looking up their location.) to just go to Vacuo and get a boat back rather than just walking back of waiting for rescue.

· Yang begins to get frustrated over the lack of fruition her path-less research is leading her to.

· Pyrrha talks to Ozpin and Glynda, as her last feat of strength and prowess, she was to catch Cinder Fall. They would give her intel, the title of team leader, and she should do all in her power to achieve that objective. She begins to hate herself even more after that, because, as you know, not only she took Jaune's place, but she got into an upper position in Society, meaning she was even more at the top, more of an extreme, more reason for her to despise and want to repel her own self.

· Shoko, Jaune and Summer walk up to a town-y, they all talk quite a bit. Shoko had decided a day or two ago to teach Jaune magecraft. Despite his seemingly huge magical energy reserves, he doesn't have any talent whatsoever, except for what his semblance gives him, the power to transfer powers around. She decided to teach him magecraft because to be a great magus you needed to have many disciples They take up a train, wishing to get there (Vacuo) as soon as possible.

· Blake walks around in the reverse, pursuing a shadow of Adam. She enters the domains of the goddess of love.

· Yang begins to pursue down the last remains of the spider mafia, down to a volcano in Mistral.

· Qrow meets up Hazel in a bar, in the middle of Mistral. They fight, Qrow's semblance not killing him, merely giving him some infortunes, that's how it looks. However, the truth is: Lines of death are everywhere, whether you see it or not. Normally, your own innate luck would prevent you from ever having them cut by an accident, but since his powers negated that luck, he could just cut away Hazel's lines, which put the Giant to run.

· Blake has been living in the domain of the goddess of love, with her normal appearance. She doesn't know she isn't on remnant, she is on a small wooden cottage with Adam, and that is all she cares about, as long as she can be with him. She doesn't remember her mission, she doesn't remember what moved her to that place, but she will keep there, living happily. We are latter shown a scene at the end of the night, where she is crying on Adam's chest, because she felt some awful emotions, he just accepts and comforts her.

· Vermillion is somewhere in the suburbs of Patch, stealing away some food and money, living on the streets, disposed to become something. Obviously, it is not working.

· Pyrrha, Ren and Nora collect enough info around town to get an accurate guess at where Cinder and her cronies could be. She gets ready to hunt her down.

· Shoko and Jaune begin to talk about their feelings and the validity of his claim to the relic (. He talks about his feelings for Pyrrha, how he regrets what he did, and he wishes to apologize once it was all over. He talks about how the mere idea of having all that responsibility being put into him was going to kill him. Shoko talks about how she needed to do what she was doing, to obtain power, to become like Aozaki Aoko, a worthy heir, to become someone that could fight and act like her, a daughter.) they are in a train, going to Vacuo.

· Weiss discovers that Winter is the one being put in control of the SDC, not her, as Ironwood managed to use the situation to his political advantage and put Winter on power. This makes her mad, impossibly so, which makes her want to take out her satisfaction with the sister, which just gets her to hate herself more, as Winter gives her the cold shoulder.

· Whitley gets tired of all that shit and runs away. He immediately gets Penny set up on him.

· Weiss starts to drink more and more.

· Vermillion begins to steal more and more, he was determined to become more than just Ruby Rose's heir. Tai is crazy worried while searching after him.

· Yang begins to rage more and more as she talks to Raven.

· After hearing some things about the fact that Ironwood had a massive superweapon, and some sort of secret weapon, Watts decides to go to Atlas to check it out, make sure it is nothing that can make them lose the war.

· (Special, a Blake-only chapter.) Blake is living on that domain, happily. She doesn't notice any pain, doesn't notice any happiness. Only love, the life where she is able to happily live with Adam. She lives a peaceful day with him, she admits she is scared to face the night, to the point when she would need to face all those awful emotions again. He merely smiles and hugs her, telling her sweet nothings, about how it was all okay, how she should cry as much as she wanted. He would be happy no matter what. They live a normal day, she commits many blunders, is caught shaking and thinking something was wrong many times, but as she begins to break down in cowardice and fear, she is hugged by Adam, he tells her how it was all okay, how fear was a good thing, it told her she was alive, it guided her through hard times and made her survive, it was okay to run away, it made you survive. She gets a weird, gut-wrenching feeling at that, of pleasure and happiness, she laughs and cries, she is so happy she can feel pleasure out of those things. At night, when they are doing each other, madly, she can't stop having the feeling of something being terribly wrong, yet it all made her feel guilty and pleasure, a feeling of hate and love, she couldn't stop herself from feeling good, but feeling awful, and Adam merely smiles at that. He tells her it was all okay, he would always be there for her, he would always be at her side, he loved her. She begins to embrace him, to tell him all her love, to say how much she wanted to be by his side. It was all so bright and beautiful, she wanted to be by his side, now and forever, she didn't want to ever leave him, no matter what. She begins to breath heavily; her consciousness starts to dim. She is okay, she doesn't care, she is ready to break, to be by his side forever, she is scared but that's okay, she is ready to be by his side, she feels pleasure and guilt over all that, an infinite cycle she is ready to lose herself on. Yet, as she begins to completely disappear… she notices, how many decades did they spend together? How much time did they spend together in that cottage? Months, years, decades, centuries? She wasn't sure, it seemed like it all happened at the same time, yet nothing happened, it seemed like she was trapped. She notices, that from the moment she noticed the time they spent together, Adam and everything stopped. She wants to go back, into her own worthlessness, to have it all become pleasure, but that's when she notices… 'why does she want that'? She begins to panic, who is she? What does she want? Her despair beckons for a sweet laughter. Her own worthlessness is shown to her, her disgusting time in there, those sweet nothings, her despair. At that moment, Adam hugs her, he tells her, those feelings of her, they are not that… they are love. She feels disgusted as she notices the true depravities of that thing's love. It wasn't a real love, it was a mere process; meaningless words, meaningless nonsense. She begins to remember, the annoying weight on her head, it wasn't there, the plight she forced herself through, the challenges of before, that she needed to keep moving forward. Adam tries to get her, love her, force her into depravity, but she just kills him, brutally. As she cries, the green flames of the goddess of faunus shining, Adam dies on the ground, brutally murdered. (she realizes, the real Adam would never act like that, this thing was a mere copy, a shitty copy.) The goddess of love comes down, smiling at her, laughing at her own suffering and depravity. She grants Blake the leave to keep going, after acknowledging her failing in corrupting the girl completely, and her also having the powers of the faunus goddess. She admits it had all been done for her own fun, a small test of resolve, but mostly fun. Blake moves on.

· Vermillion gets in a robbery gone wrong, and is caught by Roman and Neo, who plan to use his kind little face to go by. He accepts, believing to be able to become something.

· Breaking News in Atlas, the number of murders increased by a ridiculous margin. Over fifty dead bodies were found, and the number of people riling up for war has been increasing more and more.

· Pyrrha attacks Cinder. The woman and her cronies are taken by surprise. Ren fights against Emerald, and Nora fights against Mercury. Cinder herself fights Pyrrha. Normally, the both of them would be equal in hand to hand combat, however Pyrrha's degrading mental health prevented her from truly beating Cinder, however, they do speak a little of destiny. Cinder ends up spewing a bit from her motivations, about how she would kill Emerald and Mercury in the end of it all, and about how she would kill everyone and everything in remnant, she says it would be too much to bear, but as long as she has those people, those tow otherworlders she didn't need to kill, then she was happy, because even a monster such as her wasn't completely evil. Ren and Nora are also unable to beat off Mercury and Emerald. However, the disaster trio manages to run away, as it seems they are receiving the losing end. Ren and Nora end up receiving the idea of questioning what they want, and why they should stay with each other, what was the meaning of everything. What they wanted in life. Mercury wanted to kill for the kicks and giggles, Emerald wanted Cinder, and they consider NR to be weak, because they had no true goals, and because of that, they could never beat them.

· Cinder hides away with her cronies in Junior's, she knows they already know what she looks like, and are most likely going to come after her, so she needs to do her job and get the maidens before they come for her, fast. (she adds that she didn't have Neo's semblance anymore. It had been useful to cause illusions for the cameras, but now, with Emerald, they could do nothing but trick people.)

· Hazel attacks the Branwen tribe camp (manages to pinpoint their location due to the tracker. He destroys almost everything, and only Raven and Yang survive. She discusses it a bit with Hazel, amidst the flames, about Leonhart's betrayal, about how he sold Summer. Hazel complains about that being 'their strength', about how they were all weaklings, that that was the true power of the strongest species, Raven just claims that it was all about their collective power, and that a creature that far away from humanity like him would never understand. However, as they are about to take it all out, the sun begins to rise, and Hazel runs away.

· Shoko, Jaune and Summer's train suddenly stops when they pass through a town. They suppose it is just because the train tracks are a mess, and leave the train. They go exploring through the town, at night, and it is completely empty, all the town abandoned, and yet, the sand hovers were all around (all the while Jaune is completely oblivious and keeps on talking about how he feels over his family.). They notice how it was weird, how no one had left the train. When they finally notice, a scorpion walking in the ground. That is enough to warn Shoko, she notices its characteristics as a dead apostle, and warns everyone. They run back to the train, but the station is filled to the brim with walking corpses. And there, standing at the top of the train, is Tyrian Callows. He laughs and attacks them. As they fight, Tyrian repeatedly screams "off with their heads~!" and tries to cut their heads off. They manage to kill all the dead, but seemingly are going to lose to Tyrian, and he notices how interesting Jaune was (high magical circuit count and quality.), and when he is going to win, the sun comes up. He borrows himself in the ground, but doesn't give up, he tries to snipe them away, trying to take them underground, and getting into covered houses, so he can snipe them away. Shoko orders Summer to find the sand hovers from before and tie them together in a triangular circulation through chains. After she does, Shoko tells her to hold off Tyrian, while she does the final touches. The messes around with them a bit, and notices they ran on fire dust, she sets up a system and links it to Summer's crest, making it so she would be constantly providing the fire needed to keep them running. After complete, she sets off to run with them. With summer taking the hover on the top of the formation, and being the only one actually using her hover, as the other two were merely dragged along. She uses spells from her crest to keep herself awake, allowing for Shoko and Jaune to just be carried along in the trip, while Summer spends the whole time driving. They decide that while they were safe as long as it was day in the middle of the desert (and they kept moving.), the same could not be said about the night, so they had to watch out. (she is under orders from the Geiss 'do everything I tell you to.', and 'don't cause me any harm'). Shoko was assigned a scroll with connection to the CCT (secret function included.), so she is able to use GPS to guide them. The way GPS works (it sends a signal to the towers, and they send the signal back. This transference serves as a good way to measure location.

· In the middle of all the murder cases, Penny is sent to analyze the situation. She meets Watts, who fucks her mind up, about how he is better than her, for he is a human turned machine, while she is forever a machine, worthless. He is the next step on evolution, while she is a mere facsimile on life. Meanwhile, Weiss, who flaunted her position as the girl who killed Sienna Khan, and a bunch of other titles, gets a permit to hunt Whitley, they manage to set his location in Mantle, and go after him, she manages to easily overcome his deranged form, but at the moment to kill him, her resolve weakens, and she notices herself unable to finish him, he runs. Back to Penny and Watts, In the middle of their fight, Whitley shows up, half deformed, his whole body was dirty, and he seemed ragged. He attacks watts, and puts him on the run after noticing 'a demon… rather interesting.' And wanting to see how he would develop on his own to collect data. Penny is left flabbergasted at what happened to Whitley. She tries to talk to him, but he is completely unstable, ends up screaming and rages at her, and ends up running away.

· Weiss fights with her sister (Winter.) but fails to do anything. She ends up discovering that Watts was in town and terrorizing things up. (happens after the whole Whitley disaster.) She goes after him (uses authority to go hidden away, she finds his hideout by thinking outside the box 'where would I want to hide in the most militarized and monitored city in the world? Well, of course, in the one place outside the city that doesn't get monitored by them (levels of radiation)'), and is welcomed into his lab. They talk a bit about his objective (he doesn't really want to kill everyone, merely understand everything, so as long as she doesn't rat him out, he is fine.), and she asks for a position on the SDC. He denies her, saying that maybe, if she killed her sister and brother, she would be able to achieve those things, he tells her his objective, about wishing to become the most powerful thing in the world, the one to understand everything, and asks her wish, what she was willing to give everything she built up until now, she is unable to tell him, because she didn't know, the word of 'power' gets stuck on her throat, because killing Whitley, the demon would surely put her in a position of power, yet she couldn't… when she saw his frightened eyes, his hateful face, she felt so weak. But there was something, there was definitely something that made her move. He tells her to leave, because he had no time for those with no aspirations. He may be a psychopath, but he isn't crazy, he tells her he could tell them about his position, he wouldn't bother, he would survive no matter what, but he would appreciate if she did not tell them, it would, after all, be less people to kill. (Ironwood talks in the council, and considers declaring martial law. Watts was involved, this was already a federal problem, and moreover, it was a hint to what was happening with Salem, and a kid was going mad, this could all be connected, and he couldn't let it all slide. However, after an intense discussion section on the council, he decides not to make a move just yet, the consequences would be too large to be overweighed, he would need to slowly and secretly move on his own.)

· Ren and Nora talk, and Pyrrha eavesdrops. They discuss about what they wanted to do in life. They admit they are confuse, but they didn't want to go through their whole settlement being destroyed again. Because some nobles thought they could live a happy life without the kingdoms.

· Blake meets up the god of war.

· The murder investigation in Atlas continues.

· Shoko admits they had no contact with Tyrian in the last day and a half. They are beginning to grow fearful. She talks with Jaune about his feelings about never becoming the Arc heir, the son his father would've wanted. She reiterates that as long as he gets the sword, everything would be okay. She also talks about why she didn't like Pyrrha, or Tyrian (Summer debriefs her in this scene.), because she couldn't take prodigies, because she was such a failure, she couldn't bear the thought of someone managing it all… because in the end of everything, it brought envy, if only she was that powerful, she wouldn't have to worry about not being like Aozaki Aoko, not being as strong as her, not acting as her, not being worthy of being her daughter.

· Yang is trapped in a Branwen cell. To prevent her from taking the rash actions that Raven knew she would take. She wants revenge, to kill Leo Leonhart, to kill Hazel, to kill everyone. Yet she is forced to stay on her cell.

· Vermillion starts to get some uneasy feelings about Roman and Neo.

· Blake meets the god of Wisdom.

· Ozpin and Glynda refuse to give her the outright answer to Cinder's location (hoping she would tap more into her Oz side to het the answer.). She does as they hoped, and manages to close in on the woman's location. She is unsure of herself, she is scared, if even a single touch into that thing was already enough to make her break, was she even herself anymore? (through these scenes, her mental state is clearly deteriorating, she is already walking by supporting herself in the walls, her head is imploding with headaches, she has dark circles under her eyes, and she is seeing lines in people more frequently than not.

· Blake meets the god of wisdom.

· Interlude (don't call the chapter that): Characters that don't usually have a voice get a POV. We get to see that Qrow is currently working on something, he criticizes Ozpin's incapability of seeing treachery, even when it is right in front of his face, because, after all, he was too arrogant, failing to even consider that someone that 'fell into his charms' could ever doubt and betray him. He was betrayed again and again, yet he refused to learn his lesson. Leonhart is worrying about what he should do, and tells Hazel that when the night came, he wanted his blood drank and to become a vampire (Hazel is hesitant, only Salem could make someone jump from human to vampire without before having them be zombies and ghouls. He, however, accepts the preposition, believing that is he tricked the man, he would gain his courage and power back. We get to see a scene of Summer complaining about the fact that she hasn't been able to communicate with Shoko well, even if as a mere slave, the girl needed to see she was her mother, it was the one and only salvation for Summer Rose, and overall agonizing over that fact. Willow, meets up with Weiss over the corridors, they talk a bit, and eventually argue, but this time is clear, after her deal with Whitley, and her talk with Watts, and finally this talk with Willow, she seems to finally notice what she craves so much. Blake meets the sun god, and after talking to him, she is told (and refuses to accept), that no matter how disgusting, the thought was true, power was what ruled the world. She wasn't powerful, so she couldn't talk against him, she was alone, and by herself, she couldn't defeat any enemy.

· In the middle of walking through the desert, they end up finding an ancient huntsman structure. Built on a giant canyon, both of its sides covered in immense rock-like structures. Bridges connecting both sides, and thousands of entrances. It is empty, as it was deemed too risky to become excavation grounds, both in infrastructure, and too overrun with Grimm. They decide to go around it, but all of a sudden, a strong tremor in the ground. And out pops a forty-meter Grimm, ready to kill all of them, one of Salem's beasts, used to kill the ancient huntsman thousands of years ago. Salem herself manifests in the consciousness of that Grimm, and controls its body, (Jaune fight ensues, more details in the overall notes), they run to a random corridor, looking after shelter. The entrance ends up collapsing, and they look after escaping that place. However, after casting a spell to illuminate things, they notice, there are writings on the walls. Using magecraft (because this would be 100% possible for anyone to decipher, the walls are filled to the Brim with writing. It just would take (mainly for someone that doesn't know about those sorts of things) a few thousand years, but thanks to magecraft, they manage to do it in a second. They discover that that tunnel led them to an underground tunnel used by the ancient huntsman. It could lead them to an area nearing Vacuo. They consider, however, that they were underground, on a narrow tunnel, with limited oxygen, and Tyrian could pop out of the wall any second, without any sort of sun limitation. They open some holes on the fallen rocks for air, and decide to run the risk with Tyrian (hadn't followed them up until now, even in the nights. Since her sword broke in the Tyrian fight, in the middle of the tunnel, she found a katana, in the arms of a dead body, and decided to take for herself, she claims there were some angry spirits (search for the correct term later.), but nothing Summer's crest couldn't handle. The sword itself had a strong stench of regret all over it, and had some mystery ingrained in it, after hundreds of years like that.

· Weiss goes around town, looking after her brother, she wanted to capture him, as she finally understood what it was she wanted. She finds him, but so does Penny, they try to help him, but he rages and fights them instead. They find themselves incapable of killing him, both being deeply hesitant to do so (even though she is incredibly mad, and unable to fight properly, due to the demon's properties), they discuss a bit, and Whitley confesses his love for Penny, in the middle of his enraged stupor, although he admits he needed to keep on doing what he was doing, to end it all, to end Atlas, so they could be together, he would kill Pietro, and Ironwood and Winter, and everyone else, there would be no one to stand in their way (clearly the demon thinking for him.). He runs away, Penny unable to reach to him. Watts appears, claiming that to be quite the interesting situation they found themselves in. He tells Weiss he didn't want to kill her, but, if she did insist on being on his way, he would not hesitate on doing so. The three of them (while Watts just flaunts his powers around.), discuss, and are overall unable to beat each other. They discuss about the validity of life, wishes and desires, feelings unable to be comprehended, and the meaning behind all that (Weiss hints towards already knowing what she needed.), Penny understands what she needed to do, and Watts leaves, after being too approached by the kingdoms.

· Yang finally manages to breach her own cell. She, leaving a trail of fire behind her, follows through the path to Mistral, wishing to kill Leonhart, and she is stopping at nothing, she is mad, circles under her eyes, her form hunched over, and she is barely able to say anything, other than incoherent grunts. She is stopped midway by Hazel, the one who hated humanity. He explains his backstory, about how after Gretchen died, and no one mourned, how the world moved on, how humanity was completely uncaring for someone else's suffering, and how it could move despite losses in its ranks, he decided he didn't want to be part of it anymore, and so, jumped boat to Salem's. However, he tells her, he wasn't unkind, he was murdering humanity, because them, as a group, were the worst monsters, who destroyed a world full of wonders and care, and took it for themselves, and Ozpin was the one to be blamed there, he was being kind, for ridding the World of such rotten existence, humanity. He tells Yang she wasn't all too different from him. She too could never fit in human society, she too could never have a peaceful life. He knew how much she hated Leo for his betrayal (trying to go after him, as she discovers that he was the one to rat out her family.), so he promises to let her kill the man, as long as she gets on his side. She just gets impossibly pissed over, about how everyone was trying to tell her how to live her life, about how to grow up; she already didn't know how to live correctly, about how to find happiness, and yet, people were trying to destroy even her last hopes (killing Leo.), so she completely internalizes her marble, and begins destroying everything around her. Evrerything is lit up in flames, the earth in itself is instantly vaporized, and its materials turned into gas, the quick change in temperature, messes up the pressure, causing strong gales of wind, everything riles up in a hurricane of burning gases, nearing plasma. The maidens try to act up, alongside Gaia itself, but she keeps strong. Hazel is being burned through it all. However, seeing the strong disturbance, Raven sweeps down to stop that madness. She turns Yang unconscious, and talks to Hazel a bit, about the worthiness of humanity, but he just runs away, too damaged. She picks Yang up, soon their coup would begin.

· Manufactured Gods happens. (The true tragedy of the brother gods surrounds the fact that, they were manufactured. Every god is manufactured to a certain extent, but they were all born from faith, belief, need, given a reason, and powers to mold their own legends and control over their own layers. In contrast, however, they were created from the beginning with the sole objective of being created, they had no free will, the actions they believed to be theirs had already all been dictated from the beginning, two cursed beings whose very existence spelled the beginning of the end for their whole age, whose only actual free action was to be tricked by a witch. Taking away everything from all the others, being hated, having no control over their actions, two puppets with no free will, isolated to a small part of the reverse, left to Suffer as they saw their creations killing each other. Note: In Manufactured Gods, Blake not only discovers about the gods and their tragedy, but she also decides to move on, to ignore hardships, the pain she had to deal with for everything. She decided to stop crying and move on. (What gives her strength to move on when she is being crushed by Salem, when she notices everything, it is those words that make her want to move forward, accept the fact she isn't as good as Adam or her father, but she still needed to move forward, to keep on fighting.) They hate Ozpin, because they did not wish to exist, they took everything from everyone, they are monsters created, they never took many actions of their own. The actions they took were all part of the legend Ozpin created, so even if they chose those things, it is just things that already happened. As gods, they do not wish for the Age of Gods to return, because the Old Gods will not exist anymore, and they will be the only ones around, when they really just want to disappear. The God of Light is like a nebula of light, with white spots for eyes, and the dark one is like a wave of purple sludge. "There is that which destroys/creates, that which knows and orders destruction/creation, and destruction/creation itself. For no matter how many times those who destroy/create and who orders them are destroyed, as long as destruction/creation exist, so will them." She tries to fight them, and they humor her. She wants to destroy them, as it doesn't matter whether or not they suffered, it was still their fault for existing. In the end (as stated above), her resolve gets finally set, and she decides to move on, to kill Salem, as she is left with that riddle.

· Vermillion decides to run away from Roman and Neo, he is done with them, he hates them. However, he is caught and tortured by them. He feels helpless, being kept captive, worthless, helpless. He hates it, all of it. He hadn't been able to achieve a single thing, not a single thing. (not using his clothes, so no Oz and Glynda protection)

· Pyrrha joined by Nora and Ren (she is able to hide everything with a smile.) attack Cinder, Mercury and Emerald. The fight ends in a ton of people getting killed, Nora is truly hurt, and Ren runs after her, to comfort her, regardless of all the fighting. In the end, Cinder is talking about Pyrrha about her fate, about how it was the fate of all in the world to die by her sword, and it was her fate to kill all in the world. Pyrrha snaps after hearing all that talk about Fate. She uses her powers and immediately kills Emerald. Mercury tries to attack her, but he is hastily killed to. She is completely off, and as Cinder begins to run, she throws a tantrum. A shit ton of things in the room are heated, condensed, transmuted, attracted, lightened, changed. But Cinder is still able to escape. She runs away, as Pyrrha is left crying, she did it, she used her powers, the ones she swore to never use, she sealed her fate, she was meant to be forever an Oz, she could never be human again. She hates herself, and can never be anything worth it. Meanwhile, as they dig their way out of the rubble, the sun shining down on them, Ren and Nora look at each other, and confess, how they wanted nothing but themselves, they were each other's worlds, and couldn't live without the other. They confess to care not for the whole 'huntsman' thing, they just wanted to live happily, one with the other.

· There is a chapter where the characters finally prepare for their final missions. Weiss is assigned a duty to kill Watts, after she claims to know where he is. She is threatened a bit by Ironwood, for hiding that information from the government, but she says that if he does anything against her, she would make sure he got the wrong info, and as a certainty, she makes him trust her without giving him locations, she is the one to guide the army. Yang talks to Raven, their plan is finally ready to flourish, all the arguments have been collected, and they are ready to move, of course, she wanted to kill Yang a bit, for the tantrum she throwed, but they were going to work, and win. After this scene, as Yang witnesses the remains of the research she made, trying in vain to be a magus, like her mother wanted, she snaps, and destroys her table. Shoko, Jaune and Summer arrive in the city of Vacuo (emerge from a secret exit in the underground tunnel), they discover the place is in more ruins and chaos than it should be, it is in a fighting state, and after running to the academy, to demand help in the situation, they discover the dead remains of the old school principal, dead in his chair, rotting with flies by his body. They go to the vault, and prepare to get the relic. Vermilion notices a small slip up in how the chains around him were dealt with, and manages to escape, happy he finally managed to do something on his own.

· We begin by focusing on Weiss' character, it will be two whole chapters solely dedicated to ending things on Atlas. She advances to kill Watts, and Penny advances against Whitley. She, with a team of the military, storm the nuclear plant, where they find countless monstrosities, Synthetic Beasts, created by Watts himself. She manages to get ahead of all of them, and reaches Watts. He fights her, claiming he would not be stopped by anything, much less someone as pathetic as her, who couldn't even have a proper wish and desire. She, in turn, claims she would never be defeated by someone as worthless as him, uncaring to the things he did (she claims that at least she had knowledge of the things she was doing against Siena, and just chose not to care, in rage, but she wasn't a mad beast like Watts.), in the end, she manages to overcome him, and claims she did have a desire, one which was all but destroyed now that she saw Whitley's state… she wished to be loved.

· Whitley is cornered in Penny's special place, her little garden. As he is threatened, he begins to get more and more irrational, more and more angry, and begins to manifest more and more, until the whole place is covered in the white part of his arm (the part where it manifests, a big ugly Manus-like arm), completely filling the garden. They decide that the populace was in danger, and despite having evacuated the provinces, they needed to make sure the situation didn't get out of control. Ironwood prepares to give the command to shoot that thing up, hoping it would kill it. However, Penny, noticing this, acts faster, she turns to him, and says 'did you know my father deactivated my immortality? He thought it would make me more alive' (pinning the blame on Pietro), as Ironwood is left flabbergasted at that, she uses hacking capabilities and locks all of Atlas' military weapons (the ones near the vicinity at least) she runs ahead, cutting at the entrance, and entering the sea of limbs. Ironwood screams for her to come back, but she doesn't listen, and he is left, having to choose, risk a superweapon and contain the situation, or trust in the superweapon, and risk the situation. Penny, as she runs ahead, cuts her way through the sea of limbs, monologues, about how she finally noticed… not everything needed an answer. She didn't have to think of a why, or a how, she just needed to accept. She accepts her selfishness, and even as Ironwood tries to hack into her, the voice in her system blaring inside her, she moves forward. Because to kill Whitley and obey her orders would be the same as giving up her own desire and becoming a machine, she admitted it was the right thing to do, but she didn't care. She didn't care about the humans, or any sort of code inside her head, she was a terribly selfish girl who only cared about herself, she only wanted to live by herself, and no one else. But she knew, after this was all over, Whitley would die, and she would be left alone, to become a new Penny, devoid of emotions. She would've been happier without any emotions, but now that she has them, there's just no way she'll let them go. The things she achieved… a human heart… she wanted to live that to its most extent. She grabs five swords from her back and detaches them from their cables. Throwing them all to the air, she kicks two to the ground pinning away some pieces of limb from Whitley, she grabs another two and double wielding, cuts away more, but the swords get stuck in there, finally the final sword falls down on her hand, and double-handing it, she cuts the final limb keeping her away from Whitley. She jumps at him, throwing her sword away, and hugging him, as he destroys her body. She confesses her love for him, while dying, and he realizes his mistake. Turns into a big monster and destroys everything. Luckily her garden was at the suburbs, so it doesn't take long to lead evil Whitley away, to the middle of the tundra, where Winter can use her new crest to kill him. However, on the way he destroys countless Jet fighters and military personnel sent after him.

· Yang goes with her mother after the academy (dead set on betraying her mother, so she secretly has the relic with her.), her mother marches into Leonhart's office and claims it to be hers, they put out the investigation against him being corrupt, officially taking him out of charge as headmaster and the council, leading to an unanimous decision to have Raven Branwen as the next headmaster (and later on, have a council meeting where the six of them agree on making her the de-facto ruler of Mistral.) However, Leonhart is ready, and attacks them with his full power, and Hazel gets out of his hiding and tries to fight them. Raven manages to make the councilors survive, and fights Hazel, while Yang intercepts Lionhart, angry for a kill. Yang fights Leonhart, they discuss about betrayal and hypocrisy, the fact that he was a coward that was given too much power, and the fact that she was a bitch who betrayed everyone, looking for a means to stay alive. They fight over the fact of who was in the right, and if she had any right to be mad at him for betraying her family, if she herself was betraying her own. In the end she wins, because regardless of hypocrisy and the differing situations, nothing can deny one's pain, for everyone is allowed to suffer. (she gets way too exited during the fight, with Leo easily breaking the sound barrier and dealing some impossibly strong blows. They talk about the Butcher of Branwen, and how it was during a fight with him that Leo got so close to death he became a craven. She tells him how he killed her family, and when she is ready to unleash the attack she had been waiting the whole time to unleash, the one she was keeping to use at him. She tells him a little story, about 'how a long time ago, when the world was just recently formed, it was a big ball of rock and magma, Vulcanic eruptions all around, filled with toxic waste, the image of that place became imprinted in the genetical material of all living things in earth, and from that image, they created it, the concept… they call it', and the narration swoops in, to say how, differently from Raven, she was so skilled with her Marble, she didn't need any sort of chant. 'Hell.' And she summons hell, Lionhart dies instantly as he is engulfed by it.

· Raven fights with Hazel, he defends the fact that, Humans has no right existing. As the closest who shared an ideal with Salem, he defends that humanity was a curse. While Raven defends that Humanity was not a curse on the earth, but rather, the planet itself created them, now it was its duty to bear their existence, regardless of their sins that made humans hate themselves, the right was theirs to keep progressing, as they were the strongest race (he did taunt her about it back in the tribe, saying "is this the power of the strongest species?" After killing everyone else.) In the end she wins, for it was the fate of humans to overwhelm its planet, and become a space colonizing civilization. When Raven is about to kill Hazel (explains the true power of her RM to him, just for the sake of it.), he is on the ground, unable to move, she just puts her hand over his face and utters "Glory to Mankind"

· Yang runs away with the relic, completely manifesting her RM. Yang, is because the blond has her marble fully and completely internalized, making her almost as if a hole in the reality known as the World. Of course, it made her shine like a sun, and her body to burn like a wildfire, but she could not be teleported to, as Raven needed a stable connection to the World to do that.

· Blake meets Salem, in her own space in the reverse. Initially she is completely lost at what to do, and what was happening. She is ready to give up to all the bad emotions, she knew she had to move forward, but not how. Until she has a vision of everyone she ever cared about (Adam, Gyhra, Kali, Illiya), and she realizes, she had, all this time, moved forward, for the sake of faunus, and she needed to keep doing so, it was her duty. Even if she could never be like Adam of Gyrrha, she would move forward, and try anyway. That's when all the pieces of the puzzle fit in her head. The conversation Shoko had with the spiders a long time ago, about how the body was divided into "body, mind and soul" and how both mind and body could not exist without a soul. About how the anchor must rise for the ship to set sail, about how creation/destruction must be destroyed for those who think and act upon it to be destroyed. About how the reverse had ties to the World, how Salem had seemingly infinite magical energy. She discarded her body and mind, fixating her soul in the reverse, and claiming a whole chunk of it for herself. What she used on the outside was a mere flesh puppet, it would never be able to be killed (except for MEoDP which can just terminate her existence), because it was not her, but a mere puppet. You could do whatever, and it would keep growing back. She was in Salem's soul. After Blake regains her strength, she manages to open a space large enough for the gods, using her own divine authority. One by one the gods came in and fought her (already thought off gods: Goddess of Faunus unleashes her beasts. The god that molded humanity unleashes a Golem as big as Salem is and fights her off, managing to reach a certain balance. The god of war opens a rend in there with his sword, and plunges it deep into Salem, having the god of Wisdom bind it to her, through his mighty authority. The brother of darkness manifests through the Golem and absorbs the darkness Salem stole from him(Grimm), finishing it by opening a space for the god of light to unleash his attack on her.), in the end, with her golden hair and red eyes, kneeling in the ground, a sword on her back, chains binding her, Blake runs to her, her fist covered in purple flames, her own power and soul, and she plunges it deep into Salem.
It is said she died after the attack, forever unable to manifest truly again. Though she did try to possess Cinder, the woman's body was not perfect, so even with Crimson Moon's power, she was still mortal.

· Shoko enters the vault with Summer and Jaune. They travess it and reach the place of the relic (I describe this tomorrow.) Tyrian appears and gives his lines about why Salem's a goddess. He fights them, and when they feel cornered, Jaune runs to the relic. He fails, dies. Shoko fights, and dies. Goes to her mental Space. (proceeds to see small Ruby looking at her and saying 'welcome, usurper.), (When Shoko is fighting Tyrian, in the vault, after Jaune died, she loses, and is stabbed by him in the heart. She falls to the ground, dead. Well… dying, but she spends most of her time on the ground, and her brain spends a few seconds without oxygen/dead. Meanwhile all that happens, she is inside her own mind, talking to herself. She dreams about her childhood home, where mother is awaiting her, but she cannot reach her mother, she never could. She meets up with Ruby, and they talk a bit, about how she usurped her place, about how Ruby is dead, and the little girl is just a figment of her imagination. Ruby manages to show Shoko, that she was worth something, she gave all those people lots of trouble, through her own wit and capabilities she was able to defeat many enemies, not by being Aozaki Aoko, not her heir, not her next coming, but by being herself, she should stop trying to live like Aoko, and live like Aoko told her to, by what she thought to be right, and always stay true to herself. She reminds Shoko about the pendant Ozpin gave her when they were leaving, how she could still survive. She makes sure Shoko would live for the two of them, how that life of theirs was not still over, how she should use those eyes of hers, and cut the world. Shoko just says to leave it all to her, finally confident in herself. She opens her eyes, and is healed on the outside world, her body complete, she rises and with a single swing cuts Tyrian's arm off, her newly awakened mystic eyes of death perception doing the work. he asks her what she is. She is not the genius Aozaki Touko, she is not the god Aozaki Aoko. She is herself, she is Shoko. She goes back to Vale with the seed of the Sword of Destruction in her imaginary numbers space, she is still mad at summer for believing her to be Ruby Rose. Vacuo shatters as a kingdom soon after. (This only happens for two reasons, one: Silver eyes are a manufactured mystery that involve both the preservation of life through severing all links, (the original name being "the cruel eyes of light that protect life" they surrounded a man who wished to become the greatest hero, so for that, he severed ties with everything and everyone, so he could follow through on his duty, fully and completely. He was rewarded by the old gods, those eyes that symbolized his true nature, the eyes that severed all bonds. As that legend spread, some children began to spontaneously be born with those eyes, under the pretense they were descendants of a man who never existed. Since they were all extremely powerful, after a lifetime of being oppressed for having those eyes, they changed the legend.), the second was the world egg mixed into the portal sealed with magecraft from the Age of Gods. Since the world itself was isolated from that area of existence, Alaya could manifest even if briefly, to support Shoko, make sure she was still alive, give her the MEoDP, and make sure she didn't get migraines for it, though she receives them back after she leaves, as she is no longer under Alaya's. She only had a predisposition, not a hard-wired brain for that.)

· A chapter focused on Vermilion, he runs and runs from Roman and Neo, he causes all kinds of confusion in the end. Failing miserably, he gets punched again and again, reminded of his own worthlessness. He manages to run to Ruby's grave, but when he gets there, the spells Ozpin and Glynda made sure were there activate and kill Roman and Neo. He begins to cry, and as Tai appears, rushing to hug him, Vermillion misinterprets the situation and considers it to be Tai coming to visit Ruby Rose's grave, not him. In the middle of his self-loathing, as he accepts he would be nothing more than a replacement for her, he promises to destroy the world.

· The final scene of the arc, Shoko and Summer go back to Vale in a boat. Shoko is clearly more confident in herself right now, as she looks up to the blue sky. She discusses a bit with Summer about no matter how much she dreamed about it, she would never be the woman's daughter. She considers the fact that she kept the relic of destruction in her imaginary numbers space, and goes back to the boat, to prepare for the end.

Arc 3 -War

· Yang meets up with Qrow, and they both explain to each other the side of the war they are on. They talk about how Salem must be planning something, since she made all the Grimm of the world disappear, and it was something big.

· Ironwood tries to invade Vacuo as a means to restore them after their breakout. Other nations don't take that well, and there's a strong resistance from the uprising group, Neo-fang, a group of huntsman trying to preach for the old ways and powers they had to be brought back.

· Raven attacks Beacon, kills Ozpin but he is still alive in Pyrrha, Vermilion and Tai are captured by Oz. Qrow defects from Oz's side.

· Shoko talks to Vermillion quite constantly, about the shadow of Ruby Rose, larger than it had any right to be. He tells her about how he wishes to end that world, and how he hates her. How he plants the doubt about Aoko truly loving her as a child.

· Ozpin decides to retaliate against both sides by capturing Atlas using the crown of choice, changing the mind of all in there and making them obey her/him.

· Blake forms a new group of followers, as she proclaims herself to be the messiah of the next phase of the world. She came out of one of the Grimm pools in Salem's territory. They are called the Neo huntsman, and after driving out Atlas from their territory by using Blake's newfound goddess-like powers, they demand their acknowledgement as an external force from the kingdoms, rights over the four academies, and the holy shrine of the huntsman, Vytal. They claim that the world is corrupt, and it is their duty to deal with it.

· Raven begins to prepare the army, and the world fears another great war is incoming, as all nations begin to move.

· Ironwood drops a black hole bomb in Argus to show the world his power, and stop the wars, as all were in fear of it. Ozpin moves to Oscar, Pyrrha left to wander.

· Weiss sees this, and after confronting Ironwood, she finally goes into her final arc, of noticing the corruption of power, the dangers of strength. The power of fear, and what is needed to stop it.

· Oscar is possessed by Ozpin, however, since there's no previous preparation, he ends up fighting with him for the power over his head. He runs away from home, in fear of hurting his family.

· Raven begins to announce that she is strictly against the Ironwood administration, and a cold war begins to form in Remnant.

· Vermillion runs away with the possessed Cinder, forcing Shoko's yet in development plan of betrayal to be fastened, forcing her to kill Glynda with the eyes, and cut across all the bounded fields of the workshop, allowing her to dump everything into her imaginary numbers space. She then kills her curse (although she had already killed its effects on her, on the vault.).

· Yang and Qrow meet up with a dying Oscar, they know it is an Oz, yet Yang can't bring herself to kill him. They keep on going through a world filled with fear and conflict, tons of moving conflicts and people wishing for war. The themes of war, war is an awful thing, yet sometimes it is needed, not all conflicts can be solved through words. This is the truth of human condition, their unrequited wish for peace, yet their unwillingness to abandon conflict. In the end, victims like Oscar end up suffering.

· Shoko runs away from Vale, ready to go after Vermillion. With her, come Ren and Nora, who were running away, seeing as the situation was becoming quite bad in Beacon and the world.

· Yang and Qrow see Oscar be dominated by Ozpin once, they manage to suppress it, and they become fearful, knowing that they needed to make their plan come true as soon as possible, during their discussion, they end up talking about the people killed along the way, and how Ozpin justifies that, and preaches he was right all the way through, Yang in her hand, feels disgusted by his actions and claims that the utilitarist way isn't any good. But in the end, they all agree that they needed to kill Raven. Ironwood was a problem no doubt, but he could be reasoned with, Raven on the other hand, would bring about destruction for all.

· Shoko helps Ren and Nora buy themselves a house. They were going to be left alone in the coast of Vale, when suddenly, they see a figure in the horizon, standing atop a cliff. It was Pyrrha, since Ozpin left her body before the bomb exploded, it triggered the Ciel effect, and she was left immortal. After fighting for a bit, Shoko manages to use her eyes and kill the vectors of Pyrrha's attacks (the movement of the electrons), and Ren and Nora managed to make her stop fighting ("you don't have to fight anymore"). Pyrrha falls down crying and asking for apologies. The following day, they just clean her up, she is in her Ozpin form. She refuses to answer properly to things. Shoko says it was because she lost her self and wished not to recover it, that is, if there ever was something like a true self to Pyrrha. She says that even if she recovers it, she would be a facsimile of what she once was. Shoko also realized a weakness in her fighting style, since the eyes relied on people's capabilities to comprehend things, and she was forced to just look into everything, she was left up with terrible headaches, so she needed to have more knowledge and understanding so she could take looking into things and comprehending their true meaning. In other words, she needed the relic of knowledge. She quickly goes to her home, and spends some time there, remembering the times of childhood and how those times with her mom were good. She also says she doesn't care if Aoko doesn't see her as a daughter, and only took care of her because of a quirk of her personality, she would always be her daughter.

· Blake decides that the only way to bring about a new world and age for Remnant is for Ozpin and the remaining die first, she wishes to capture him as soon as possible, and through her connection to the gods she manages to pinpoint Yang as the one carrying Oscar, the next Oz.

· Weiss tries to stop Ironwood, as he can't see his decisions will destroy the world. She looks into his computer before, and finishes discovering everything about Salem (what she didn't know before from Watts.). She is incapable of truly defeating Ironwood and retreats for the moment (not before stealing a scroll.) She also learns that he used the relic of creation to create an infinite amount of black hole bombs (winter is the Winter Maiden.)

· Qrow and Yang contact Shoko (whom they know, because of Qrow, has the relic of destruction.), and offer a trade between their relics. They also end up in contact with Blake, because they wish to talk to her about her actions as the neo huntsman, and while trying to contact Ironwood and tell him to stop his madness, they end up talking to Weiss, who reveals Ironwood's unwillingness to cooperate.

· They all discuss their plans. In the end, they tell each other how to beat their enemies, and set on to do their tasks. Weiss to kill Ironwood and Winter, Yang to kill Raven, Blake to kill Ozpin with the help of the gods and Shoko to kill Cinder, who was trying to end the world with Vermilion (use his eyes (Silver) to cut the world apart, breaking the connections between the realities of Gaia). Yang suggests on a team name, to which Shoko has only one answer, the little girl whom she saw on that dream, she took everything away from her, so this was little in compensation, but it was still something. She gives their team, the name of Team Ruby.

· Shoko and Yang trade their relics, she also gives Blake the Cane, in case they end up needing it, or figure how to use it (only Oz and Glynda knew.)

· Blake with an unconscious Oz arrives at Salem's, she needed to be in the domain closest to the Reverse if she wanted to have a chance at killing him for good. Ozpin emerges and their fight begins. The revenge for all he made suffer.

· Shoko meets up with Vermillion and Cinder at the small island of Patch. It is completely devoid of people, as Cinder and Vermillion killed them all. She says they are disgusting. Cinder reveals the true extent of Salem's powers, her true self as TYPE-Moon! Shoko is surprised but not afraid, she managed to use the relic of knowledge, and now could see everything with no headaches. Vermillion decides to take her on, and tries to remember her about how Aozaki Aoko didn't love her, and she too was alone. In the end, however, his plan did not work, and she remained strong. They fight over the fact that they were pathetic, dumping their problems in the world like that. Vermillion himself says that the world is wrong, and the people living in it are worthless. Cinder says nothing, as she is already dead inside, consumed by her sin in the moment she came face to face against Shoko. In the end, as their battle commences, she asks for Shoko to give her all to kill her.

· Yang invades Raven's place at night, and tries to use her powers to kill Raven in her sleep. She fails and their battle begins. They fight for each other's free will, the price of their actions, breaking free. (Qrow is killed in the beginning.)

· Weiss manages to reach Winter and Ironwood, and takes them on. They fight over whether or not those bombs are worth having, for in one side, the fear of them prevented the world from entering in war, on the other… everything else.

· Ozpin reveals his true self (using the cane), a two-kilometer aberration that encompasses the powers of all his lifes into one point. Blake pulls out the true powers of the gods and reveals her true nature as a vessel. They begin to fight at their fullest.

· Weiss advances against Winter and Ironwood, she manages to kill Winter, who was easily guilted into falling apart. Gaining the powers of the winter maiden and strengthening her significantly. But she risks the danger of Ironwood exploding the bombs.

· Yang fights Raven, but the tide of battle is suddenly turned when she activates her Reality Marble.

· Shoko suffers a lot to kill cinder, who was a literal TYPE at this point.

· Blake manages to show Ozpin the true price of means justifying the ends, and the price he needed to pay for all he did. She kills him with the combined powers of the gods and incinerates his soul.

· Weiss manages to carefully kill Ironwood, in the end, she is left looking above, wondering if any of it was truly worth it.

· Yang manages to use Slash Emperor (Raven didn't collect because they couldn't use it anyway), and sucks the Marble Dry, killing her mother with a swing. She was free to live.

· Shoko manages to overpower Cinder. And kills Vermillion with a quick stab.

· The last chapter is the overall ending of everything. Shoko waits for Aoko in the balcony and have their talk, Weiss deals with the legal repercussions of her actions. Blake manages to build the NEO-Huntsman, and they try to influence in Weiss' trial, and to make the world a better place. And Yang wanders around, forever wishing for a bit of peace.

Don't forget about the themes of the story.

While each character will have a certain thematic and ideal they will proclaim, discuss and stand by, the story needs overarching themes.

Through this story we are trying to pass the following themes:

-When the Lords and the powerful play their games, the true losers are the people. When the idealistic powers look forward for their achievements and wishes, people are mere pawns, the one's used, and the ones who suffer.

-The path of utilitarism is a trap, the more one leans towards it, the more one becomes sinful and excuse their own actions for the sake of the greater good, at which point, you are the one committing all those crimes, and everything became muddled.

-Heirs had a theme of coming to yourself, and becoming your own person beyond what is expected of you.

-About our own wishes of peace, our wish for people to drop their weapons, so we can evolve. Yet, we are unwilling to drop our swords and weapons. The old argument 'Let's abandon our barbaric ways, and become civilized, solve this through discussion. But you drop your weapons first.' The human wish for peace, yet our unwillingness to abandon conflict.

[Lore Section]

-There has been a point where he (Ozpin) and Salem could equal each other in magecraft, nowadays he is sure that due to her nature as a Dead Apostle, she is a being of mysteries higher than his.
-There exists actually, two of each maiden, well perhaps that is not the accurate description, it is easier to say that one is [real] while the other is [true]. The [real] are the ones created by him a long time ago, after a lot of research and sacrifices he managed to create four identical magical crests, each filled with one-hundred high quality magical circuits, and loitered with all sorts of spells. Those magical crests are special in the way that they are bound by magecraft, so that they will go after the person their last user wished them to.
While the [true] ones are spirits born from human folklore and traditions, in itself the [true] maidens of the seasons, spirits that act as a the World's sense of touch, in itself they are not considered elementals, as the later is "power" granted form using human imagination as a container and they don't need human "faith" in order to exist. They have however, no physical body, pertaining to the nature of spirits, acting simply as the World's sense of touch, they did however, become spirits of such great qualities and power that they inhabit and Posses the World in itself, allowing for the nurturing of great magical capacities and materials such as Dust, similar to the Area around Albion's corpse. (which is why dust is a renewable material, it just keeps growing where there are maidens. Also it is very dangerous, a misstep while mining it might set the maidens off, causing a cave in)
-Original huntsman were homunculi created by Ozpin, eventually, people saw them and grew inspired to become huntsman themselves.
-Has five boundary fields across Vale:
-One serving as a means to detect the use of any sort of spells, it checks all people within except himself and some very specific pawns. Every spell used recorded and analyzed, if the use of anything other than aura is noted than the Bounary field will immediatly activate the defensive fields.
-The second one being an impregnable barrier that covered the whole Vale, once activated by the first one it would make it impossible to enter or exit Vale.
-The third one was something that would just bring about the ice age into the Vale area. By controlling the heat in it, he would make an eternal winter inside Vale.
-The fifth would make any and all magical energy in the air, generated by the winter maiden (has strongest, due to having a whole continent in constant freeze, therefore when the 'Ice Age' came to Vale it would receive a boost in magical energy.) would be redirected into his workshop, taking away all the magical energy in the city.
-The fourth redirected the energy from the leylines Vale was built above to Ozpin's workshop.
(Note: it is common knowledge that only a boundary field that lets others notice the abnormality is only third class. To be first class, it has to be hidden until it is activated. Therefore, he makes so that two boundary fields are constantly active and noticeable. He knows that Salem warned her lackeys about the Boundary Fields, but not explained a single thing to them, just for them to be wary. By allowing them to identify the fields as soon as they reach Vale, not noticing any abnormality or atack on them, they are lured into a false sense of security, thinking he is arrogant or a terrible magus, allowing boundary fields that don't even do anything to be noticeable, making them lax and prone to committing more mistakes, or, as he wishes them to do, use magecraft as Salem certainly instructed them not to unless necessary, to prevent him from noticing.)
-Has various boundary fields around his workshop, from protection against his own boundary fields across Vale, to the most simple of them.
-Guarding his workshop he has all kinds of magical traps, boundary fields, high quality Golems and a plethora of evil spirits.
(Note: He assures that due to his boundary fields, it is impossible to walk in undetected on his workshop, not only that, but due to all the years and centuries of its existence, the whole continent could be destroyed, but due to all the charms, traps, magical defenses, curses, golems, Homunculi, bounded field, and various others, his workshop would remain untouched.)
(Note in Maidens: The only notable and important difference in the four maiden crests, is that each of them possesses an exclusive spell, one spell for each door locking the powerful artifacts known as relics. Of course, being the creator of the spells, Ozpin has the spells on his own, and can use the relics whenever he wants. He also notes that now that Salem took one of the Maidens, she probably scourged the Magical Crest and knows which spell can unlock the door, making it so that she or whoever can do whenever they feel like it. He would have to replace the lock on that vault, though it would take years to create another powerful enough spell to rival the one he used. He was already working on one.)

(Note: Glynda is his familiar; when he originally found her, she was a tiny, tiny thing, dying, her breathing so raspid, of course, so, seeing as he wished for a competent one, he turned her into a familiar, of course the magical burden would be too much for anyone else, but for him, it was barely noticeable.)

(Possesses a Reality Marble, and so does Salem.)
(Retcon: It's not that the logic of physics and etc change in Remnant, the reason why huntsman are so strong lie in aura, more specifically, in the semblance. Being the actualization of the origin into the World, one's origin must be active, however, on the danger of being overwhelmed by it, Ozpin made it so that when using aura, you are constantly synchronizing yourself to your origin in a manner that while not specifically awakening it, brings forth all the benefits of one following their spiritual origin, such as the ridiculous physical feats, and of course, the notable part of the semblance, its actualization upon the World, of course when the aura is suppressed or broken or the weaker it is, the weaker is the artificial synchronization between the mind and the origin. Basically what it does is force the mind to accept the origin, while inciting it, without the aura, the mind does not follow the origin and the origin is not manipulated to act, the strength of the aura highly affects how effective it is, as it tells how much it is capable of manipulating the self. Of course, if a huntsman naturally follows their origin they might recieve that insane strength and more, perhaps with the acquired practice from using semblance they might be able to actualize their origin by themselves, without any semblance support.)
(The explanation to how aura works again: people have knowledge of it but not of magic, they believe in it but think it's a natural phenomena, not magic, therefore magic is safe while everyone believes in aura. All to do is to keep its true nature a secret.)

Maidens: Four special magical crests Oz created long ago to create legends and make an artificial rise of the mysteries of the world. They are not special in any way, besides the fact that they grant the four users with a hundred high-quality magical circuits, and a plethora of spells ingrained into them.

Note 1: All four crests are essentially the same.

Note 2: Oz had to harvest a lot of bodies to manage to get over a hundred high-quality magical circuits.

Aura: Ritual created by Oz, it is conjured by making the one with circuits flare the other person's circuits in a certain manner so that aura is activated. After activation the newfound user would train to manifest their circuits in the same way as it was originally done, making it second nature. The ritual is a bounded field that uses the soul as the starting point, it blocks everything except kinectig energy (some level of it. Actually, it is an 'absolute defence' that depends on the people believing in it, if everyone believes like in remnant then it will be the absolute defense, only one person believes? Shity aura that will barely hold anything.).

Note 3: The 'amount of aura' one has is not relative to the strength of their aura, but rather the amount of od they have to keep it up, each hit will not damage the aura, but rather will need more od to sustain it afterwards. The power of the defense itself is handled by the faith of the people. Currently in Remnant, it is night impregnable, however if let's say, 7 billion people were to believe in it, the power would be able to compete with Avalon itself.

Semblance: The actualization of one's spiritual origin into the World.

[Occult Artifact]

"A catalyst which stores ideas and history.

In essence, a sacred treasure.

They are usually something like staffs and swords, jewels and masks: conceptual weapons that can be used against nature itself."

-Essentially, the relics.

The relics are occult artifacts, storing away legend and myth, even if it didn't happen, the legend that it is based came true. The brother gods that created the four concepts of humanity, creation, destruction, choice and knowledge.

The relic of knowledge is bound to the depths of human knowledge, it may not go beyond that, it may not answer the future, nor anything surrounding it, for it is beyond humans.

The relic of choice is bound to force upon human the choice, thanking away their free will. In essence, whatever order is given by those wearing it will be absolute. (which is why Ozpin chose to keep it so close to him, while knowledge is useless because it will kill the user, and he doesn't even know what destruction does, while creation is somewhat limited and the user can indefinitely defend itself with it, creation is just an insta-win. Also another reason he doesn't just spam the relics, he wants to keep them as safe as possible, meaning they are just forever tucked inside their vaults, far from Salem's reach)

The relic of creation may create anything with its unending power, but it is bound by human capability, it may not create that which cannot be created by human hands.

The relic of destruction is the embodiment of human consumption, taking away from the planet, and cutting away everything. However it took the form of Knight Eden's Slash Emperor, as it too represented that, therefore it assumes the form of a Knight Arm, requiring true ether to work, one may utilize its fake and weaker version "ether" however unimaginable amounts would be needed, and the weapon itself denies to work, only giving itself the right to be used against a TYPE or something of equal power, at which point it would just drop knowledge from the Akashic archives of how to use it into the user's head.

They're essentially can only realize that which humanity is able to, only cutting all corners.

However, since the Age of Gods happened, and so did the brothers in their own weird way, the relics are in fact things created by the gods, and aren't at the same time. They never managed to become divine relics, but are in fact occult artifacts, they represent the belief of people in the God Brothers, and the four basis for human creation.

Grimm: At the Age of Gods, when the Brother of Darkness created the Grimm, according to the myths, he used them as beings of destruction, in the eve of the world, before they created humans. Eventually, however, as the coming of the brothers symbolized the eve of the end of the Age of Gods, he was bound to disappear with his creations, but Salem was a bitch, so as the gods flew to the Reverse side of the World, where mystery still ruled, she had already established herself, and took over the world of the god of darkness, having a very strong conceptual weight. She kept the Land of Darkness in the surface, and took all the power to herself (she is able to do this, since she is the one that killed and absorbed Crimson Moon.), she is, with her power alone, capable of keeping beings that require age of gods amounts of mana alive, by the millions, suppress Alaya, and be a very strong fighter all the while. Though you could give all this up to her feeding her soul out of a whole territory in the reverse, and being a brunestud. It is believed by Ozpin that instead of taking the territory for herself, and using it to create Grimm, with the pools serving as a direct connection to the Reverse, where she creates them from, she uses a technique similar to the Soil of Genesis, through means she got from the God of Darkness. Since she is merely projecting into the surface, she can posses and control any and all Grimm.

Grimm lands: The once territory from the Brother of Darkness in the Age of Gods. Just like all gods had their own territory, this was his. As all mystery begun to end, and gods moved to the reverse, he went to do the same, however he was tricked by a cruel woman, and got majority of his powers stolen, his form deformed, and his dominion was taken by her. She established her soul as a territory on the reverse, while projecting her body and mind into a puppet in the World. She still manages to keep the Grimm Lands afloat and uses it to summon the Grimm, beings that require Age of Gods levels of magical energy. Of course, it is all spread very thin, so if something (or someone) that can deny magic or break connections appears, it will immediately kill the Grimm (if they are truly big or strong, they might resist and become stone)

Silver eyes: Silver eyes, true ability, serves to severe the magical connection of mana, such as disrupting contracts between familiars, zeroing them of mana, or slightly damaging magical crests, can be healed naturally, but it is painful as hell as magecraft (Also called 'Mystical Eyes of Severing Bonding' on the Mystic eyes cathegory)
the original name being "the cruel eyes of light that protect life" they surrounded a man who arisen to save his nation, which was going to enter a war with a neighboring one, an onld story from the age of gods, surrounding the old gods, before the advent of the Brothers. Their location is estimated to be on the border of the Vacuan desert. He prays for the help of the god of war, to end this meaningless war, and spare the life of many, hadn't the sacrifices being? However, the god did not answer his prayers, the reason for that was because the god of war had been tricked and locked up by the god of wisdom, tired of the many wars people took in the name of the god of war, thanks to that, no war was ever finished, for no sacrifice was enough for the god, as none could reach him, no war could end nor begin, for war was trapped. In the hopes of obtaining the blessings of the god of war, that hero set out in search of him, as fast as he could, so his kingdom could win. After going through many tribulations and challenges made by the god of wisdom, he managed to accumulate the support of many gods, interested in his plight. In his journey, determined to achieve victory and save his people, to surpass the tribulations of the gods, he had to sever his ties and betray many allies, for a hero must be able to sacrifice anything for his objective, in the end, with sorrow in his heart, he killed even his beloved, severing all ties with her. He managed to use the severing sword of the god of war to cut through his chains. As a reward, the gods gave him mystic eyes that symbolized his pledge, the 'Mystic Eyes of Severing Bonding.'. In the end, the god of war blessed said war, and the war ended with the victory of the hero's side.
However, this is a manufactured mystery in the age of gods. Back then, Ozpin created this myth, but it is hard to say it existed and didn't exist. Because in the end of it all, if you were there, at that time, back in those days, then no, such a legend never existed. But if you were to look back now, it definitely happened. It is rather convoluted, but to put it best, in the age of gods, things didn't obey the laws of physics, but rather the laws of mystery. So, the effect of causality is broken, and two things happened at the same time within the same reality. In other words, since in the age of gods, we don't see and theorize, therefore we recollect and believe, we rather recollect and believe, therefore we see and theorize. So, since that event was widely believed in, it ended up becoming reality. So, it overpassed reality, as a layer above it, so in that time, while none of that happened, all of that happened, that hero definitely existed, but didn't at the same time. If, somehow you managed to talk to the old gods they would definitely remember those events and tell you about it, but at the same time they would be able to tell you about something completely different that happened at the same time, since the laws of causality didn't need to be obeyed back then, things did not need to follow the concept of 'thing A happened, therefore thing B happened as a result', but rather 'Thing A happened.' Regardless of it being in a time long past.
After the legend cemented itself as a mystery, kids spontaneously began to be born with Silver eyes. That was under the pretense that they were his descendants (during his legend, the hero went through a mad period where he spent a lot of time in a brothel, doesn't make sense because he had a woman he loved very much? Well, first off, his beloved was one of the prostitutes in the brothel, who with love managed to heal him from his madness, and second, did you forget who wrote this legend, and with which intent? What, it doesn't make sense that the kids were born with the silver eyes if they were conceived before he got them? It is hinted at the original text that his descendants would all have them, again, did you forget who wrote the text? It was all just Ozpin fucking about with the whole 'mystery governs the world' in the Age of Gods)), even though they weren't, since he didn't exist, but at the same time they were, because he existed, in the end, those kids who were never his descendants, were forced to conceptually be his descendants, again, causality wasn't a thing back then. They were mostly shunned by society, believed to be signs of bad omen, people who would betray everything and every one to obtain their objectives, and signs that the gods would throw many problems in the way of those who carried the eyes, and the people around them. After growing tired of all that, the silver eyed warriors united, this was at the dusk of the Age of Gods, when the brothers had their layers above all else, they destroyed all previous versions of the legend, and preached that silver eyes warriors were sent messengers of the god of light, all those born with those eyes were the ultimate protectors of life, who would protect everyone. In the end, since it was already an established mystery, it didn't change its fundamental principles, or so Raven believes, furthermore, it happened at the closing moments of the age of gods, so it couldn't really do much.
Silver eyes are a manufactured mystery that involve both the preservation of life through severing all links, (the original name being "the cruel eyes of light that protect life" they surrounded a man who wished to become the greatest hero, so for that, he severed ties with everything and everyone, so he could follow through on his duty, fully and completely. He was rewarded by the old gods, those eyes that symbolized his true nature, the eyes that severed all bonds. As that legend spread, some children began to spontaneously be born with those eyes, under the pretense they were descendants of a man who never existed. Since they were all extremely powerful, after a lifetime of being oppressed for having those eyes, they changed the legend.)
-Ruby has: Physical capabilities of a normal human, severely enhanced with magecraft.
-High number (25) of slightly above average circuits (B+)
-Elemental affinity: Imaginary Numbers)
- Ruby's semblance has been explained as her breaking her body apart into petals, negating her mass, from there I managed to come with a good origin. Her origin is far too subjective to be described in a single word, it's better thought of as a statement or phrase. "Destruction and Reconstruction." Though it is stated that calling it that is still wrong, as it is not properly destroying, but rather unfurling, even more so, the reconstruction factor cannot factor in as well, as she doesn't properly reconstructs herself as much as she assembles parts of herself. In a way it can be said that "Deconstruction and Reconstruction" is the base, while "Unfurling and Assembling" is the more accurate meaning, however that's still not spot on. This allows her to make new mystic codes with surprising ease and speed, it manifests in her personality as someone that can easily create new bonds and end previous bonds.

Raven's powers:

-Over a thousand spells within her magical crest.

-Finn Shot

-decay: a spell that will speed up the process of celular metabolism, making it so that the person will age years in a few seconds. Of course, most die before that due to the lack of nutrients, as all they have is consumed almost instantly. (This was once supposed to be her signature attack, but eventually, as the story is now, I don't think it would be used more than once, at the very best) (Dead Apostles are immune to decay, as something that overdoses the multiplying of cells, allow for mass consumption of nutrients and aging, it is meaningless against a dead apostle, and will not hasten the decay of their bodies, the type of decay that is required to kill them (the one hastened by sunlight, and the one that requires them to constantly resupply their genetic material wouldn't be affected by this). Ergo: Hazel.)

Reality marble: one that represents selfishness in its most pure form. A world of pure red, the ground covered in red lilies. In this space, all the powers and strength one possesses belongs to Raven, and no one else. No exceptions.

Outside of the marble, this can be utilized so that in a small area after a pulse, all the powers of the inhabitants become hers for a small amount of time, however her challengers do not lose their powers, unlike in the reality marble.

-「real」 maiden powers.

-Right eye is a silver eye. (Raven actually has a silver eye in her right eye. By using taking away one of Summer's eyes, she recreated a silver eye and implanted on herself. However, it is heavily imperfect. A silver eye is in a manner similar to a MEoDP, one must have the latent power and capability to use them, the correct mindset wired from birth and a bloodline capable of utilizing them, besides the modification on the circuit of the eye. For Raven that had none of those things, even though she managed to recreate it after five years of research, it is heavily imperfect. The eye will only show itself after a high amount of concentrated magical energy is focused on the circuit, so that it bleeds through and burns the organ (eye) with magical energy, followed by an activation that requires the user to patch away the damage to the magic circuit while also utilizing the eye while the eye is still under its effects. It is completely unusable in battle, and each time it is used, it burns and blinds her right eye each time more.)

Yang's reality marble is described by Raven, to be at its core and most raw form, a reversion of time.

"The planet was originally formed by molten lava and gas, life not emerging until the inhospitable rock cooled and settled. The infernal landscape of the Earth before genesis has become part of the genetical memories of all creatures on Remnant, and humans drew from this imagery when they created the concept of hell."

Yang's reality marble is to summon this infernal landscape of rage and fire. (Yes, her Reality Marble is hell)
Yang's spells mostly revolve around her reality marble. She can bring forth casts of lava from underground, turn the air around her toxic, burn whatever she chooses, as long as it is from her marble. And she is very in-tune with it, since it actually sips into her semblance. Yes, Raven claimed it was just her elemental affinity sipping in, but she was wrong, it was actually her reality marble interfering.

-Sea of Flames - Sea of Flames can create a thousand-degree conflagration. No animal can survive that heat; the temperature is high enough to reduce any common solid object to nothingness.

"Go away the shadow. It is impossible to touch the thing which are not visible.

Forget the darkness. It is impossible to see the thing which are not touched.

The question is prohibited. The answer is simple.

I have the flame in the left hand. And I have everything in the right hand――――

"I am the order. Therefore, you will be defeated securely――――!"

"Repeat…"

"Repeat!"

"Repeat!"

"Repeat――――!"

"Be gone, shadows. Thou of the unseeable.

Fade back into oblivion, if of darkness. Be returned to the immaterial.

Ask not me, my answer is clear. In my hand is light. Know that all is in this hand.

I am the truth of creation, In face of all things, thy defeat is certain.

"I am the truth of creation, In face of all things, thy defeat is certain."

"Again!…"

"Again!"

"Again!"

"Aga—"

(Although, thanks to the long chant, she doesn't use this, merely using as a surprise beginning attack in her fight against Raven during the ending.)

Salem's reason for fighting: Humans as a species are strong, even if as individuals they are weak and need to prey on other things to survive, but as a race they are the strongest, the only ones capable of killing the supreme being known as the "World". They can't protect themselves if a race as strong as vampires enter their group, so they create rules that prevent that, they made a defense mechanism that eliminates all threats to their own existence. Alaya. Yes, that's why vampires hide the bodies of their victims, that's why vampires don't want their existence to be discovered, because they will die of such a result is reached.

They are a race that base themselves on the rule of the strongest, for them whether it has intelligence or not, for humans everything is fair game, they kill everything in the search for food, because it is the fault of the pray for not being able to protect themselves. Therefore, it is their fault that they are too weak to protect themselves, and such they created a defense mechanism.

The most selfish creatures, they took for themselves a beautiful world, full of life and mystery, they "colonized" the solar system forcing their logic and comprehension into the planets that inhabit it.

That's why she kills them, because it is the reason of her existence as a vampire, because she refused to live in a world where those beings existed, for the sake of the planet they were destined to use and kill. She wished to bring back the age of gods, she wished to exterminate humanity and allow for the world to brim with life again, as in the age of Gods.

And what irked her the most was the existe of aura, she knew Ozpin had created aura as more than just a spell to allow humanity to fight, it was a message, simple and clear, that humanity was the strongest race, that its combined strength as a species had no equal, that's what the defense based in faith meant, the combined strength of humanity made into a supreme defense mechanism, even after she worked so hard to hide the world from Alaya, humanity still created another mechanism of defense against those that oppose them.

The white fang never killed Weiss' aunties and uncles, that was all Jacques, after all, if there was only the main branch of Schnee, he wouldn't have to put up with the requests and whims of the family, nor would he have to worry about the inheritance going to someone else.

We are first hinted this when Adam tells Weiss that despite wishing for it, he wasn't the one to kill all those Schnees.

We are later confirmed this by Jacques, as he admits this to Whiltey.

Ozpin says he just can't comprehend why he hasn't unlocked the mystic eyes of death perception just yet. In the end, it might as well be just a legend.

The places the relics are hidden are conceptual spaces created by imaginary numbers, given form by the World Egg theory, and connected to the doors, locked by magecraft from the age of gods.

None other than Raven knows magecraft in the Brawnen tribe, though hey all know about it's existence, and have equipments reinforced trough runes and everything, even some protection charms sometimes, and a geiss that forces them to never reveal anything from the tribe to anyone, meaning that even if they were captured or tortured, they wouldn't be able to say. Vernal managed, after lots of questions, to some answers about magecraft from Raven.

When Yang spars with the Brawnen tribe is isn't allowed any rune equipment, aura or spells, just herself against opponents that have runes and aura. Since Raven actually followed previously established RWBY lore in here, she actually taught every member of her tribe how to counter Huntsman (remember when her and Qrow's reason for becoming huntsman was to learn how to kill them?), so thanks to that and the magical equipment, many huntsman fear an encounter with any member of the Branwen tribe.

Jaune's spells is based on the flowing and transferring of power. He is constantly transferring magical energy to his sword. But first, I guess a bit more context is needed. He has no talent in nothing, all he can do is a basic flow and transfer of power. He can only do one thing, so make sure he becomes the best at that thing. Abusing his high levels of magical energy, Jaune constantly transfers it to his blade, a force of magical energy strong enough, it can be seen by the naked eye, an outrageous amount of heat and a raise on the sword's range. Also, if the spell is simple enough, or mere magical energy, he could probably absorb it (however remember, there's only so much someone can store before they broke)
-Jaune's origin is to transfer. (Also, alter so that Jaune doesn't really have any elemental affinity.) This comes from his canon semblance, how he constantly transfers aura to someone else. This affects his personality in a weird way, as it makes him constantly try to project his feelings into others, and project other's feelings into him.

Ozpin's boundary field at Vale actually manages to allow the lay lines and spirits to enter, due to the barrier only interrupting physical matters, not spiritual ones.

-Dead Apostle Bees (死徒蜂, Shito Hachi), familiars that use poisonous stingers to increase the number of Ghouls under his power. Considered to be very dangerous, he brings destruction where he travels, having wiped out a town once.

(Tyrian can do this, but with scorpions.)

-After Raven takes over Haven, she alters the CCT tower there so that it stops sharing data with the others.

-Pyrrha's semblance is just magnetism, but the way that this affects her personality is that she will act like a magnet. She will easily attract and be attracted by people that are in different standings than her (the more different, the better), and will feel uncomfortable around people similar to her, at times deflecting them.

Qrow is a womanizer, and with his luck, surely, he would've gotten a woman pregnant by now, right? Here's the catch, since his DNA has been damaged by the whole Crow thing, none of the fetuses actually finish developing and they all result in miscariages. And if they somehow managed to develop, they would end up as a monstrosity that humanity would see no other option but to kill it, even its own mother. He meets with Hazel in a Haven bar though as he senses Hazel approaching he goes outside to meet him (saying "well, well, well, if it isn't the vampiric cunt."), they engage in a fight, Qrow fights like he is a drunk man with extremely bad luck, tripping all over the place, over swinging and the like, but somehow he still managed to fight on equal footing with Hazel, what's really going on is that his combat style is centered around fighting like a drunk, each failure and mistep is used to his advantage, he constructs momentum delivering devastating blows, swinging and tripping, he counts on his semblance so that it will give his opponent bad luck and make them miss. (Qrow is only alive because he has many, MANY, protection charms all over his body preventing his organs to fail from his own semblance. His semblance works like a bounded field, his origin is constantly active and the "bounded field" around him takes everything's luck away, if a normal human were to fight him, they were sure to die of organ failures within a few minutes. All his equipment is drenched in magical reinforcements, allowing him to compete with Hazel even though he only knows a few curses. Talking about them, he is constantly chanting the rhymes of curses when in combat, to curse everything around him with a Gandr-like effect. Though he can fight and somehow almost beat Hazel, it's a matter of compatibility. Raven's spells can't instantly kill Hazel, which makes fighting him difficult, meanwhile her spells can obliterate Qrow before he can do anything. Qrow's curses and bad luck allow him to fight and win against Hazel, but he cannot win against long range. Hazel's lack of spells force him to deal with Qrow on close combat, which leads to him loosing, but against Raven it's manageable.)

Hazel is really unlucky and one of Qrow's attacks cut his arm out (he cuts tough Hazel's line of death, they are always there it's just that only MEoDP users can see them. Cutting through them allow the user to ignore aura.) (though Qrow can cheat out and cut other's lines of death, that increases the chances of his "point of death" being hit by tenfold. The reason for this, is because under normal circumstances, everything has a certain amount of luck that allows them to live, that same amount is what denies the possibility of someone's lines of death begin cut by accident, however, since his semblance is based around having that number drop to zero, it is just a matter of time before he cuts someone's lines in combat.) Hazel seeing he couldn't heal and needed to remake his arm from zero runs away(he is still going to Haven.) (Extra note: It is never stated that you can't cut a line of death without the eyes, just that you can't see them… but that's a bit of bullshit, so, you know how humanity (in the Nasuverse) has this secret luck attribute that prevents them from just instantly dying from Organ failure? Yeah, basically that also prevents people from having their lines cut, which is why there haven't been accidents with people cutting each other's lines without meaning to.)

(As a note: If Shirou Emiya fought Qrow?

If they had context of each other's powers and capabilities, Shirou could just snipe Qrow away easily. But if they were put in a room, in front of each other without foreknowledge and told "fight to death." Qrow would win. Once again, a matter of compatibility.)

Qrow's semblance is even worse than one might expect. When he activates it, a bounded-field like area is surrounded and without exception, all those inside it receive a loss in their luck... the luck one requires to live. when his semblance and aura are inactive, his semblance isn't in effect, right? Well... kinda. Due to the nature of semblances, Qrow's origin... misfortune... when his aura was awakened, his origin was agitated, and he ended up resonating far too much with it... one might say it was bad luck, so while one might say that his bad luck doesn't affect an area surrounding him, it deals a permanent damage in him (constantly supported by his origin)

The councils work on a very simple manner. They are constituted by a total of six people.
-The headmaster of the academy (secretly chosen by Ozpin every time.)
-The general of military.
-The representant of the people. (chosen by popular vote. Only replaced when: Dead, deemed incapable by most of the other council members, resignation.)
-The chief of finances.
-The chief of Police.
-The Secretary of State. (takes care of affairs with other kingdoms.)

There's no real commander-in-chief of the army. The general is often mistaken for one, but that is not the case. The general, while holding control over the army, it can only control it, not order it. It still a subaltern to the actual commander-in-chief, the entity known as the council. While the general can take full control over a war, for the sake of speed and ability to handle difficult situations, it cannot make wild alterations in the army, nor willfully replace its structure or more important members, nor can it declare war, or take away large amounts of the army. The only one that can decide that is a majority vote in the council.

The council is restricted by the laws set in the universal declaration of human rights set in the treaty of Amity at the end of the Great War. They are also tied by their own constitution, made in the eve of the council.

After Ozpin created the original huntsman, a bunch of people decided to copy them and their aura. So, it was created, the order of huntsman.

It's political structure was similar to our world's religious orders, with the grand-master being (of course) Ozpin. The order did not posses only fighters, it possessed all sorts of people, doing all sorts of duties, economics, trades, hunting, fishing, tending to weapons, research, everything. They became a symbol of hope, fighting Grimm, estabilishing territories, settling disputes, and preventing wars. Mostly, they declared themselves as neutral in the conflict of the nations, but if it came to something too close to war, they would, in fear of the Grimm, dismantle whole armies and perhaps nations.

With time, even the holy shine of might and honor they represented became muddled. The organization was weakened, its rankings corrupt, leaders of the world grew weary of their influence and power, and their previous deeds. With this, they decided to end the order once and for all, and with a sudden onslaught of Grimm helping them, the Huntsman were no more.

It is not precisely known how the nations of the time managed to purge them from existence, it is theorized that their numbers added to the surprise element of it, alongside the lack of organization on the huntsman order are what led to their downfall that day, although some believe that there was heavy Grimm interference that day, which led to their loss.

The huntsman of the order possessed many sub-factions, some representing their beliefs, their specialties and their methods of fighting. However, one in specific is important when talking about them. That is, the lack of one. Huntsman, once joining the order, could never leave, as their vows lasted to their deaths. The ones who left, went around the world helping whomever they could, free of orders, chains of command, anything, they were called 'wanderers', no home to call their own, and no family to share their pains, remaining forever alone. They were, despite their very needed help, considered threats, and eliminated by the order. They preached neutrality when dealing with nations, and a wanderer could put that in jeopardy… you see, a huntsman back then was so infinitely stronger than his peers, having even aa single one was game changing. Having the order in the side of a country was the same as saying they could conquer the world if they wished as much, which would promptly trigger all the other nations to go against them, fearing what would happen to them. So, a wonderer, if decided to align to someone, or stayed to much in a country, would attract weird eyes, and due to the way negotiations and news went about in those times, just a mere suspicion was enough to trigger war… so to prevent that, the wanderers were eliminated.

Of course, years later, after the great war, the huntsman were once again created. This time wishing to bring back the symbols of hope they once were, something to spire generations and protect a post-war word. This time, under the guise of the kingdoms, to protect their borders and people, to prevent the massacre of huntsman. That's why students need to learn something like History… as the huntsman in the past, it is their duties to aid in disputes and the distress of kingdoms. They needed to know the mistakes and duties of the past to make the present right.

In the Faunus wars, that attack made by that general indeed occurred, but in his class, Oobleck discusses it differently. He says about how the mistake of attacking faunus at night, when they were at a clear advantage, was in fact, not a mistake. Someone tasked with a rank as high as his, against such an important position, would not make a mistake as basic as to ignore common knowledge about the enemy. Furthermore, the fact that he lived, coupled with the fact that he showed no surprise in his war reports, and the eventual crashing down of the kingdoms in the faunus came with that defeat as a main factor, it is believed he purposefully failed the attack.

Not everyone has aura, as not everyone has the capability to 'materialize their souls'. In other words, not everyone had magical circuits. If everyone could unlock their auras, everyone would. The reason Aoko decided to investigate with Zel was because they wanted to analyze some of the more 'weird' phenomena of that world.

Ruby survives through a combination of her origin and affinity.

The origin to {destroy and recreate}(and whatever that complicated shit I made was) and he affinity to imaginary numbers.

To destroy oneself in a sea of imaginary numbers, that was what instinctively saved her. She stopped being an existence, and recreated herself, canceling the fall, and preventing herself from being eaten by being destroyed and recreated repeatedly.

This, in turn, would activate her origin, something she says would be disastrous. However, when she met Aoko she finished being {destroyed} and was {recreated}. In essence, the being known as [Ruby Rose] was destroyed and rebuilt as [Shoko] therefore her origin calmed down as the process of rebuilt oneself negated the previous experiences. She also says that that is the reason as to why she attached herself so fast to Aoko, she relates it to the first thing an animal sees being its "parent", the most trusted thing. This way, since [Shoko] didn't have such an experience, unlike [Ruby], she assimilated Aoko, the first person she saw, the first person that helped her, as the concept of [Mother]. Though at other times, she claims that when re-building herself she just happened to add Aoko to the vacant concept of [mother], as part of the process of rebuilding herself.

[Ruby] and [Shoko] are nothing as cute as a multiple personality. While they both inhabit the same body, they cannot co-exist. They are not the same person, but rather the same being/existence. [Shoko] is better off being described as an Alter [Ruby]. The same being, but shambled. If the being [Ruby Rose] was a puzzle, then [Shoko] and [Ruby] are different ways to solve it, resulting in different images, but the pieces are still the same.

Other characters (Ozpin) theorize that due to the end result of denying past experiences, it is conceptually impossible to activate her origin.

[Place Holder Name Dagger] A dagger created by Shoko throughout her many years of life. It's made out of finger nails, fallen teeth, a bone she once lost when she had an open fracture as a kid, and some hair she cultivated throughout the years. Its effects are basically inflicting her origin on those she cut. Basically, it transforms a normal person into a glob of organs and limbs. While it is a Hit Kill if it hits the aura, and is very sharp, it is also very fragile (even when reinforced with magecraft) and worthless in combat, so she only uses it when she is sure to hit (pairs well with the signal ability of her cloak.) (As you might see from the plot notes, I excluded this from the end version of the story, but decided to keep it here as a little bonus for you, dear reader)

[Cloak]: Originally made as an experiment to abuse Aoko's wind element (and Shoko's lackthereoff). When activated it enforced a spell that used refraction of wind and light to give the impression of invisibility. Of course, the spell is limited to the area of contact on the outside of the cloack. So while areas like her feet can be cloaked by the length of the cloak, her face, albeit covered by the hoodie, isn't completely invisible. However this pairs well with another disadvantage; eyes can only see by the refraction of light hitting them, so obviously, if she covers her face, light will be taken away, and she will be left blind. So her face (albeit darkened by the hoodie), can be seen, thought she says that through moving fast and slight trickery, she can conceal herself. Another weakness, is that she is manipulating the wind around her, so if someone looks closely, or knows where she is, they might notice the distortion, not she her mind you, but that there's a distortion.

During their first meeting, Penny says Whitley is weird, since most rich kids like him would be pretty pampered. Whitley just thinks back to his life with Jacques, and the utilitarian thought about going through displeasure (Being with Penny, at first.) in favor of future pleasure. (Jacques' acknowledgement.)

At one point in time, when Penny and Whitley are talking, they talk about selfishness. Penny says that since for her, being selfish it the only way of existing, she can't give it up and become selfless. She compares it to sin, once you taste it, you cannot go back. They reach this topic when talking bout eternity and immortality (what triggers Penny into turning off her backup/immortality), Whitley asks himself if humans keep on progressing because they fear death, or if their egos force them to continue towards immortality. He doesn't know if losing death will stop humanity or embolden it, but to understand humans, she must also fear death like them. (Penny asked about it.)

While Whitley and Penny talk, there are in her special place (closed off garden.). She looks into the sun, and says she followed his advice and turned off her immortality. She says everything is scary now, even the tiny actions. He simply covers her with an umbrella, saying the heat would be bad for her. She asks him if he would cry if she died. He says he wouldn't, because he would never cry. (allusion to Jacques and his creation.)

There's one time where Whitley is with Penny, they are walking through the busy streets of Mantle, they suddenly enter a narrow alleyway where Whitley begins to breath heavily. They discuss about how bad the people have there, and how the bigger the crowd, the more forgiveable they were. So even with Whiltey's piss poor disguise, he could still go by unnoticed.

Note: Jacque's idea of Keeping the people under his care, in his centers, might seem bad, as he would have to maintain the hotels. However, if you consider that legally he doesn't need to pay for their expenses, but rather have them live on the designated work spot, he can still charge them for using his facilities, making it so they basically never recover financially, and the profit be worth the expenses (even if someone were to become suddenly rich, they would probably have to spend enough paying the debt, they would probably end up working for in the mines again.). This wouldn't crash the economy like in 1929 EUA, because only the Schnee's are doing this, furthermore both the huntsman and the government are overpresent market. Not only that, but the prices and people in poverty are the only ones affected, but there are no big changes in the overall market.

The Branwen camp, is, in fact, located in the same fort where the attack made by that one general at night was made. It is described as night unpenetrable. The Branwen tribe set camp in there, each of their members capable and specially trained at beating huntsman.

There are no such thing as 'aura supressors' or 'aura enhancers', always hated the idea of those being a thing. Instead to suppress one's aura, people just pierce their shoulders with three barbed nails, and tie them there with metal. They change size with the temperature, and truly hurt. Since they are constantly hurting the person, they are unable to use their aura. Or in other cases, if the person manages to use their aura, it will heal around the spikes, causing the arm to bleed even more, canceling the healing. The only way for them to use their aura is to completely ignore the healing factor and focus solely in defending and attacking, overpowering through the pain. That never lasts long, and they are always soon caught, or they just go crazy before that happens. If there are some truly dangerous prisioners, that can't be trapped like that, they are eighter just killed, or pineed down to a wall while impaled in vital places, kept alive by just enough.

Qrow's real name is Grey and Raven's Vermilion. Their parents, bandits, believed in the new freedom more than anyone. And you didn't think they would actually have such convenient names, did you?

Weiss beats Sienna by making Shoko stay to the sides. She fights all on her own, giving up on defensive and healing aura, focusing all her resources into her semblance.

Using the large aomunts of dust she collected through the hideout as she escaped, and her recovered myrtenaster, she fights Sienna. At first it is like an elaborated chess game, with Weiss using her abilities and thinking much about her next move, carefully using her gylfs to slow and accelerate time and fight with Siena.

After that, she begins to just madly summon, and make godly show of command of her semblance. Transforming the whole ground around her into runes and using a fire dust vial to transform it all into a big firestorm, use the lighting dust to keep shooting lighting from her fingers, use a mix of gravity gilphs, her solid gilphs and ice dust to create ice chains and control them. She slaughters Sienna and with it the Fang.

Raven says that she won't enter the fang plot unless some really interesting development happens, which does, when Shoko's existence is discovered by her.

Pyrrha, during Ozpin's birthdays, feels the same things Tohno Shiki felt when Roa was trying to possess him in Tsukihime Ciel route.

We need to give characters more personal motivations to why they are fighting in this war. So here's how it is going to happen:

-Yang will fight Leonhart, because of what he did to her family. However, it will not be an easy fight, since he things he became a Vampire (Hazel drank his blood, but didn't allow any of his own into Leo's body. Lying that Leonhart was now a vampire.). Now, he believes himself to be immortal, and his courage is back, with that, his semblance "Lion's heart" activates, and he becomes extremely powerful, powerful enough to overwhelm Yang in physical combat. He fights attacking, so he denies himself the defences of aura, focusing solely on his strength and regeneration. So even when Yang manages to burn him by contact, thanks to internalizing her marble, he just regenerates it without second thought. Of course, Yang manages to discover his power and kill him in the end.

-Raven will fight and kill Hazel, using her RM to succ his life force, to count for the lack of her lifespan due to the raven transformation. She has a more powerful connection to him, because he was the one who attacked her camp, and destroyed it. She wishes revenge.

(the fights above happen during Raven's coup on Mistral.)

-Tyrian used to be a prodigy with no equal, but he only took the huntsman classes, and left to become a mad serial killer. Eventually he was caught, and freed by Salem. He first meets Shoko, Jaune and Summer when they go through a settlement, and they discover it is completely overrun with 'the dead', as Tyrian used hundreds of scorpions to turn everyone there into his dead, he then proceeds to fight them, but retreats once he had his fun and notices the sun was about to rise. Then, after him killing Jaune, he goes to fight Shoko, initially he seems to be dominating the fight, but after he complains about how troublesome Shoko was, she notices. When Shoko is fighting Tyrian, in the vault, after Jaune died, she loses, and is stabbed by him in the heart. She falls to the ground, dead. Well… dying, but she spends most of her time on the ground, and her brain spends a few seconds without oxygen/dead. Meanwhile all that happens, she is inside her own mind, talking to herself. She dreams about her childhood home, where mother is awaiting her, but she cannot reach her mother, she never could. She meets up with Ruby, and they talk a bit, about how she usurped her place, about how Ruby is dead, and the little girl is just a figment of her imagination. Ruby manages to show Shoko, that she was worth something, she gave all those people lots of trouble, through her own wit and capabilities she was able to defeat many enemies, not by being Aozaki Aoko, not her heir, not her next coming, but by being herself, she should stop trying to live like Aoko, and live like Aoko told her to, by what she thought to be right, and always stay true to herself. She reminds Shoko about the pendant Ozpin gave her when they were leaving, how she could still survive. She makes sure Shoko would live for the two of them, how that life of theirs was not still over, how she should use those eyes of hers, and cut the world. Shoko just says to leave it all to her, finally confident in herself. She opens her eyes, and is healed on the outside world, her body complete, she rises and with a single swing cuts Tyrian's arm off, her newly awakened mystic eyes of death perception doing the work. he asks her what she is. She is not the genius Aozaki Touko, she is not the god Aozaki Aoko. She is herself, she is Shoko. (This only happens for two reasons, one: Silver eyes are a manufactured mystery that involve both the preservation of life through severing all links, (the original name being "the cruel eyes of light that protect life" they surrounded a man who wished to become the greatest hero, so for that, he severed ties with everything and everyone, so he could follow through on his duty, fully and completely. He was rewarded by the old gods, those eyes that symbolized his true nature, the eyes that severed all bonds. As that legend spread, some children began to spontaneously be born with those eyes, under the pretense they were descendants of a man who never existed. Since they were all extremely powerful, after a lifetime of being oppressed for having those eyes, they changed the legend.), the second was the world egg mixed into the portal sealed with magecraft from the Age of Gods. Since the world itself was isolated from that area of existence, Alaya could manifest even if briefly, to support Shoko, make sure she was still alive, give her the MEoDP, and make sure she didn't get migraines for it, though she receives them back after she leaves, as she is no longer under Alaya's. She only had a predisposition, not a hard-wired brain for that.)

-Salem will be part of the problem, part of the creator of the two brothers, who brought about the Faunus wars, by excluding faunus from their creationist mythos, and making them seem demonic. Which makes Blake have to evolve and become a true representant of the Faunus kind to defeat her.

-When Summer and Adam fight, they discuss about who was right between them. Him, for doing the things he did for the sake of the faunus, or her for doing the things she did because of herself. In the end, summer wins, as in the end of it all, Adam was a terrorist. So he dies, and Blake is left alone to report to the fang. When she comes around Ruby, she is the one to fall to her PTSD, and no one dies in that meeting, they just receive a bunch of normal Gundrs, but the butterfly effect is still the same.

The riddles Blake hears from the gods.

"A ship can only set sail to the infinite sea once its anchor has been risen from the depths."

"There is that which destroys/creates, that which knows and orders destruction/creation, and destruction/creation itself. For no matter how many times those who destroy/create and who orders them are destroyed, as long as destruction/creation exist, so will them."

When Cinder fuses with Salem, she states that it is impossible to kill her, since she is anchored to her body and Salem, and Salem is anchored to her body and herself, if you kill one of them, the other is still there to maintain the other. The only way to end this would be to kill both of them at once… what a coincidence, Shoko has the MEoDP.

Raven says that the reason she took over a decade to act is very simple. Magecraft was a science, it needed to be researched, it needed to be experimented with, it took time to make it stronger, not only that but she needed to prepare and train her tribe, she needed to make sure they were well trained and everything she needed was prepared, and the intel she needed from Summer was ready. She says that the fate of a battle is already decided before it even begins, it is all based on information and preparation, she knew herself, and she knew what kinds of enemies she could take on, now she knew, they were prepared.

Shoko takes a week and a half to cross the space between where she is and where the underwater train is, then another day in the train, then another five days to get to Vale.

[[[[[There are three utilities to aura. Them being attack, defense and healing, anyone with an aura unlocked could use the three of them in combat, but… wouldn't you agree that for some people that would be a waste? Let's suppose, someone that simply tanked all damage with their aura, wasting energy by making sure your aura is healing you, when you're not even taking damage is worthless?

This is where the divisions come in. First, we need understand how the three sects work in tandem. For the beginning we have 'attack', it is a fancy word for Semblance. Of course, not all semblances are offensive, some are utility based, or defensive based, however, if someone was born with a semblance like that, then they are eternally forced to a non-attacking role. To be blunt, most semblances were combat-aid like. So, most of them could be considered 'attack'.

The second is defense. One must remember that aura is impenetrable, and as long as it is held up, you are not going to receive any damage.

Third is healing. Let's be blunt here, most people believe this to serve merely to heal injuries post aura. But the truth is not quite like that. Let's suppose, sometimes the damage to be caused by an attack is small enough that it can be healed by aura with little to no energy wasted, but it would take a lot of energy to hold back, wouldn't in that case it be better to just lower your defenses and take the healable punch?

Also important to note, is the fact that, aura is what gives you the supper-human capabilities of a huntsman. Lose your aura, and you are completely weak and defenseless. So you must conserve energy as much as possible.

However, some people have different ways of fighting than others. So, to accommodate to their fighting styles, some people prioritize some uses of aura more than others, so it isn't uncommon to split huntsman into groups.

The first we are going to talk about is 'slashers'. They are focused on attacking madly, and mostly they are very agile. They take healing and attacking, mostly having an offensive semblance. Their best defense is a strong attack, and they are able to dodge most things, so they really only heal rarely, and most of it are small cuts. Their weakness is that, while they can dish out massive amounts of damage in small amounts of time, they can also be taken down rather quickly, and tend to be fragile.

The second one is the 'tanks'. They are focused in fighting to the end, they will take on as many oponents as they want and dish out the most amount of damage. They take attack and defense. Basically, fortresses that move around, they have large amounts of vitality, and can dish out the most amount of damage per blow. However, they usually are not able to deal many of those blows in fast speed. So it is power in a single hit, and taking on all damage, while not being able to deal with multitudes of enemies, and very quick enemies such as slashers, which can wear them away without being hit. Conversely, tanks can also dispose easily of slashers, by being able to resist their onslaught and get rid of them with a single attack.

The third ones are 'walls'. They are focused in being the last ones standing, and are the most resistant of the three. They take healing and defense. In essence, walls are annoying because they don't attack per se, their objective is to wear out the opponent, using large reserves of aura to resist most blows, and taking all the hits that are more cost efficient. They are some of the ones that know best how much aura each hit will take, and are able to use it perfectly. They are focused on wearing out their oponents and waiting for them to tire out and be weak enough to be easily defeated.

We then have the sole classes, those who focus on only one aspect.

The 'casters', as we call them. They are those who use solely their semblance. Either because it is very good at support, and can help a lot its team members, or because it is so powerful it can simply take car of most threats by just using it with no worry in the world.

There are also the 'shields' which are people who just use defense. They can only defend, most of the time, and are mostly looked down upon, after all, there's nothing they do that a wall can't do better, even protect the team and take hits is better assigned to a wall. In the end shields are not very common, because you only become one when you fail to become a wall.

As you might imagine, there's no one that actually goes as a mere 'healer', they can do nothing except be vulnerable and heal themselves from small attacks.

At the end of it all, we have balance. Those that know the perfect moment to heal, attack and defend. They can fight in the most cost efficient way possible… or not. Most balances are just spamming all three effects in the hopes that their fight will go ever successfully, without much care. Some are more adept and fit well into the class. And then there are one in a million prodigies that fight like Pyrrha, she who fights by not using any of the three and the three at the same time. She only gets the bonus of super-human abilities from aura, and then uses her needs according to the situation, she will defend, but only when strictly necessary, she will rise her aura a second before the attack connects, she will expertly know which attacks are better taken and healed, she will only use her semblance at rare moments, but that small use will grant her giant advantages in battle. The perfect fighter who mastered all the types of fighting, by only using them when strictly necessary to their maximum capacity, being able to last the most in the most cost efficient way. Few could actually have the mental estability to pull those tricks in the middle of battle.

All huntsman must follow one of those classes, the one that fits them the best. In case your semblance is merely a support semblance, then you are better off as a caster, or if it is a defensive semblance, then you're better off as a wall, or perhaps even a useful shield.

Pyrrha is the one to spew out this expository dialogue to Jaune, when he asks what all that talk about 'walls' 'slashers' and 'balance' was. She claims to know all that because she fought a lot in the arena, but it was invaluable knowledge for a leader, and he should know all that. She says he really is weird, for being in Beacon and not knowing all that, even not knowing something as simple as aura.]]]]] (you're probably already expecting this, but, this was not in the final version, I didn't think it could be properly implemented and would just be convoluted, so as it is, I only left it here for extra knowledge from my notes for you.)

Pyrrha's/Ozpin's MEoDP's are similar to Roa's in a very special manner. After years of reincarnations and finally developing a version of it, it is not the complete mystic eyes. She is able to see the place where things break the faster, because she deals with atoms, protons, electrons, neutrons, she is able to see the places she must cut to atomically undo a person. She can only see these things in people and organic matter though, as she can only do that in things that she can actually comprehend and are of somewhat similar structure to her. Unlike Shoko's which are just the standard MEoDPs, and since only Shoko possesses the true eyes, both can coexist.

While at the end of Heirs, Shoko finally manages to accept her own self as powerful, and stop following after Aozaki Aoko, and becoming her heir, in War, she is forced to confront the fact that she wasn't really her daughter, and her not being the heir proved that. She never had doubts about that, but Vermilion plants them there, and she allows them to fester. In the end, she reaches the conclusion that even if she isn't Aozaki Aoko's real daughter, even if the woman herself never called her daughter, they would still be mother and daughter. In the last chapter, when Shoko is back at her house, she talks to Aoko, they talk about why she couldn't be the heir, because Aoko didn't want to force her to the same things she was forced, the curse of true magic, the hateful heritage of the Aozaki. Shoko says that it was all okay, because thanks to that, she managed to grow a lot. She tells her that it was okay if she didn't consider her a daughter, because she forced herself into Aoko's care, because she would forever love her as a mother, and be thankful for everything. Aoko simply gets up, Shoko gets up, wondering what she was doing. Aoko slaps shoko with incredible strength, a red mark over her face. She(shoko) falls on her knees, and her eyes begin to water, Aoko kneels down, and hugs her, telling her she could hate her, but someone needed to beat the stupidity out of her. Shoko things of the worst case scenario (Aoko didn't love her a daughter), but she merely says 'I don't care if I didn't birth you, you are my real daughter.' Shoko just hugs her back and begins to cry.

When Qrow is talking to Ruby and going to Ozpin with her (in the train, from Anima to Sanus), they talk about how he met Aoko. He was looking into her house, she was there, she asked what he wanted, he talked about Shoko and how he was looking for her, and how Aoko would end up in trouble. He got beaten up so hard that he was still getting better. He says that he thought she was going to kill him, resurrect him and just kill him again, rinse and repeat. Shoko says she could have done that, if annoyed enough. In the end, Qrow delivers a letter that Aoko told to deliver to her if they ever came to meet. It is basically Aoko telling Shoko that she knew what she was doing, knew about the size of her pride, and how it was all meaningless, as her getting the heirship wouldn't happen and would be waiting home once every month, so Shoko could come back. Shoko just throws the paper into Qrow's face and begins to cry, saying Aoko didn't understand, because if she didn't get the heirship, she would never be Aozaki Aoko's daughter.

Just to clarify one thing. Ozpin and Salem are interdimensional travelers. Once they entered in conflict, and fought, destroying the whole world around them, however due to the Quantum Locks, they knew their world was ending, so… they jumped boat, Salem to try her luck and bring the Age of Gods in another world, and Ozpin to avenge his old world. In time, Ozpin began to care for his new world, and begun to fight not to avenge his old one, but to protect the new one (due to resurrecting in the new one.), the process repeated itself again and again, with Ozpin repeatedly having his worlds destroyed by quantum locks, and Salem repeatedly trying again. Until they arrived in Remnant, the world which was in the age of gods. The Old Gods were the ones in place at the time. Salem took care of the reverse side of the world, and stored her soul in there. Ozpin began manufacturing mysteries, and created the god brothers. Their creation however, signified the beginning of the end for the Age of Gods. They hate Ozpin, because they did not wish to exist, they took everything from everyone, they are monsters created, they never took many actions of their own. The actions they took were all part of the legend Ozpin created, so even if they chose those things, it is just things that already happened. As gods, they do not wish for the Age of Gods to return, because the Old Gods will not exist anymore, and they will be the only ones around, when they really just want to disappear. The God of Light is like a nebula of light, with white spots for eyes, and the dark one is like a wave of purple sludge.

The gods claim not to know, what created the universe, was it the big bang? Creating the universe, and then a big pile of rocks came together and formed the earth under the perfect condition of the Solar system? Or was it one of their creationist myths? They all happened, the creationist myths, in case, but didn't the gods only come because they were believed in? In the end humans came, and believed in gods, which in turn, came to exist and created everything because there was no causality to prevent them from doing so.

Retcon: It wasn't Ozpin using the Beacon tower as a super weapon to destroy the moon. Rather, after Salem killed Crimson moon, and he activated his cane, they ended up destroying the moon in their fight.

The cane: the supreme mystic code of Oz, it can only be activated and used by Ozpin himself. It transforms him in a xenomorphous creature (with not at all different from the Alien from 'Alien' and TYPE-Mercury/ORT). It is actually all of his previous lifes' power combined in a single being, the strength of thousands of humans, their speed, endurance, vision, hearing, all their magical prowess, everything is added into one being, which grows stronger every time. It is comparable to a crown phantasm, and spews out inconspicuous amounts of True Ether. The problem with using it, is that it pisses off Gaia incredibly, so he prefers not to use it, unless truly necessary (like being trapped in Oscar's body, not yet able to completely use all his spells)

When Ozpin takes Pyrrha's body he takes over Argus, but due to the black hole bomb, is killed. Correction: Oz just uses the relic of choice.

Yang fighting Roman, she in fact, received a hint from Raven about his semblance. When they discussed the plan, Raven told her that if she couldn't figure it all by herself after getting that hint, then she was better off dead. It was similar to a KnK dialogue.

During her time in the Branwen tribe, Yang serves mostly for exposition, but we also know she is conducting a research into semblances (what leads way into her knowing about Qrow's semblance), Raven doubts it and says she didn't have what it took to be a researcher, but in any case, she helped her after Yang showed herself indignated. In the end of it all, Yang realizes (during the Hazel thing at heirs) that she really wasn't meant for all those things. Being an heir, following Raven's way, her orders, all those loses and sins. She begins to cry and rage as she destroys the research she knew would lead nowhere, and was also badly made. That's when she decides to go to Hazel.

The butcher of Branwen made the fall in applicants for the huntsman academies to be postponed for a few years (ending at the date of the prologue.)

Yang has her own workshop at Branwen tribe.

Raven hasn't been attacked by Ozpin yet, because he would like to reiterate just how hard is to find a woman, who's camp is protected by bounded fields, literally untreaceable unless you are near them, and the only point of reference you have is a whole continent, and doing all that while being both a council member, director, teacher, coordinating a shadow war, and making researches on magecraft so he didn't grow obsolete. Not only that, but Raven also had tons of decoys and loved to give them complicated and false leads.

All members of the branwen tribe have geiss' put in them. They cannot tell anything about the Branwen tribe to anyone.

Just a reminder, Jaune has a shit ton of magical energy because: Most of the ancient huntsman died in the war led against them, but his family was one of the few that survived. So, ever since then, since all of his family was comprised of huntsman, every generation, their magical circuits became advanced and stronger, compared to other families, who had at best three generations of practicing aura users/huntsman, until they did not wed a fellow huntsman, nor had kids who followed the path of war, or died.

"It used to be a saying in Salem's original world, that if the time of the world was put in a twenty-four hours clock, humans would have come into being thirty seconds before the clock struck midnight. So, tell me, what gives them the right to destroy it? What gives them the right to alter such a beautiful and full of mysteries place into something that is a shadow of its former self? Such imperfect beings destroying such a perfect existence, with all their own selfishness. It is disgusting really."

-Hazel.

Summer's semblance. Her origin is "forward", as all origins from those who have silver eyes need to somehow be involved with the eyes, her origin is better described as "To move forward no matter what". It can be described as manifesting as moving forward, doing whatever it takes to surpass all obstacles. In other words, when she is in a pinch, emotionally or otherwise, she will just look into getting past that thing no matter what. A good example was when she was on the hospital, filled with grief, for her it was the natural solution to just move past that grief, no matter what, so she created her own selfishness and revenge, to be able to move forward. This manifests in her Semblance, not super speed, but rather the ability to move past something. She uses this to move past people, when even though they are in a rope, she can just use her semblance to move past them in a blinding speed, delivering whatever attacks she needed to. With time, she created a technique, a special technique specialized to deal with killing, the most lethal technique that can be used by Summer Rose. She demonstrates this when she is fighting against Adam and Blake, they eventually get (during the counter in the police invasion.) into the top of some construction beams, she uses that semblance on Adam, however he manages to see through it (second time she was using, first one happened when she was dealing with them on the train.) and she just moves past him, with all the blades of her knifes snapping off (she fights mainly with agility and knifes, holding them between her fingers.). She is about to finish him with her reserve knifes, when she fails, her transplanted kidney suddenly acting up, and the flares of pain preventing her from moving. She ends up almost falling, and Adam and Blake run away.

Originally, the faunus and the humans were considered equal, created by the old gods, they seldom had conflict in name of their gods. However, with the addend of the brothers, and the lack of faunus in the creationist myth, they were considered a disgusting half-breed between the gods greatest creation (the superior humans) and animals. The humans sought to treat them as corruptions of the ideals like them deserved, like animals. But the faunus fought back, and so began the eternal fight of racism and slavery.

"Go ahead for us, and destroy that reality, that Garden of Sinners that is the world."

-Ruby to Shoko.

The four relics, after being accessed by the gates are locked away by their terrains. The relic of knowledge is locked away at the end of an endless desert, in a temple larger than life itself. The relic of destruction is in an underwater temple, although the water begins shallow at first, barely reaching half-way through your feet, in a few steps you can dive underwater, and after a lot of time, find the temple.

Raven can use her RM and access the relics, she claims that having maiden powers is a mere power up. She says that since two of the relics are useless (knowledge and destruction.) she doesn't go after them (goes after knowledge for the sake of it.), and the useful ones (creation and choice.), she cannot get into the Vale one, for obvious reasons, and the Atlas one was extremely well guarded.

When Raven is about to kill Hazel (explains the true power of her RM to him, just for the sake of it.), he is on the ground, unable to move, she just puts her hand over his face and utters "Glory to Mankind"

When Shoko is fighting Cinder, she follows through a sequence of attacks that leave Cinder's point exposed, however, that sequence also left her unable to reach the point, the time needed to cut though it (twist her body) would be too long, but then, she pulls out Cinder's weapon (the one she gave to her in Vale, and she just stored after she ran away.), and uses it to pierce Cinder (in the right hand and angulation, she didn't have to twist the body and with it the sword to cut across, she only had to twist the body and the short sword would pierce.), she says "Never fight without a reserve weapon" as it is what Cinder told her, after she said her fists would be more than enough.

Blake wins, because, when Raven absorbed her god powers, she also absorbed her connection to them, and in turn allowing the reverse into her body, consequently, Gaia was inside her. Because of that, the gods were able to put out their influence on her body through their link, and Gaia was able to break the marble from both the inside and outside. Proving that together, people make a stronger world than individually.

The way the black hole bombs work is: they collide two atoms of hydrogen, causing a fusion reaction, essentially creating a new, mini sun, and then use the gravity dust to enforce such gravity that beyond its normal life span, it would just end instantly and collapse into a black hole. Of course, the black hole barely having a few grams of mass (5g), it is minuscule (the size of the black hole? It is the same thing to an hydrogen atom, as an hydrogen atom is to the sun, in regards to size, of course.), and dies almost immediately, releasing all of its energy in an explosion three times bigger than Hiroshima and Nagazaki (Look, I know this seems weird, but the math is according, trust me, I got this from a kurzgesagt video.)

Most of the raw-materials that can be found and extracted in Remnant, are collected by fully automatized machines, except for dust, which machines just spontaneously broke whenever trying to mine them, for some unknown reason. This way, it is easy for most workers in remnant to be either in the service industry, or white-collar workers.

The reason Shoko still hesitates to deliver the killing blow to Cinder and Vermillion (in other words, doesn't defeat them immediately.) is because she is still hesitant. The girl she met on that dream, the girl she stole everything from, she would definitely die if she killed Vermillion, even if she was already dead. She realizes that midway through the fight, and Ruby's words echo in her head "live for us", she gains the determination she needs, and with the necessary support from Alaya, she destroys Cinder and Vermillion without difficulties.

Glynda fights in an exquisite manner. Since she loves to preach that magecraft is a science, not a tool for fighting, she doesn't really use destructive spells (although she could destroy Vale, or so she claims, since she is connected to Ozpin.). Actually, she uses spells based around her field of specialization, boundary fields. She is able to create them at will, with whichever effects she wishes. Layered ones above all, not only that, she is also able to freely change their inner workings. One second she might cast the ambient around them into a absolute zero state of being, the other, the space around them might be hotter than hell. She is also able to use fields to the same capacity as Araya. If she uses her origin, she is able to freely control fields, moving them, expanding and subtracting (although they seem to have intricate magical formulas in their borders when she does this.) and freely alter their formations and movement. So, all the time you give a step, the meaning and formation of the fields could've already changed. It is said that a Grimm could hack away at her aura for days, it would still be unable to even scratch her.

Her origin "Through the mind, control things." Wouldn't affect her life normally, but since she knew magecraft, it affected her by making her constantly prefer magecraft over any other method. Through discipline and will, however, she managed to suppress her origin whenever it acts up, and go through the logical choice. When she uses her semblance/aura, however, there's no way, she will just abuse magecraft.

When Cinder gets help from Neo and runs away from her combat with Glynda, they go to a place filled with civilians and guards fighting the Fang, so even if Glynda is able to follow them, she would be unable to destroy her with magecraft like before. Glynda notices this with her fields, and decides with ozpin to just retreat for the moment.

The reason Pyrrha is allowed to fight Cinder, instead of Ozpin and Glynda simply obliterating them as soon as they could, is because they wanted to see her (Pyrrha) in action.

The reason Atlesian summer is so weird, is because of the [true] Summer maiden, which just overtakes and gives the place a true facsimile of summer in the middle of a winter wasteland.

Ironwood kills all his scientists after the Black hole bombs are created, and keeps a single file of the process to create it in his drawer. Meeting the requirements to create one, while still not allowing anyone else to use them.

The reason Shoko manages to kill Tyrian in the Vault so easily and without headaches, was because she was receiving the support from Alaya. Since they were inside the Vault, and therefore, in a separate layer above the World, Alaya managed to squeeze through the consciousness of people inside (as there were only people inside) and then manifest and allow Shoko to see without problems. (JUST A REMINDER).

Raven's RM, cannot absorb anything TYPE related, as the concepts defer too much and she cannot change herself accordingly. She can copy the MEoDP, by merely replacing the switch from the enemy's head, to hers. She can change her body, and give it similar properties to those of a Servant if she ever fights one. She cannot steal paths to the root, ergo, true magic. If she uses the reduced form of her marble, she can take control of Gil's open portals, but nothing about the treasury, Ea or Enkidu. She cannot take control over Avalon. She can take control over any NP (weapon, armor) and things like God Hand, though some are forever away from her (like Avalon, Ea, Enkidu.), nor can she copy RMs like UBW, but the weapons brought fourth by it can definitely become hers once they are brought to reality. She also can't have control over tecniques, such as Nine Lives, however, if the technique in itself is an NP, she can take control over the NP and simulate the ability.

When Raven attacks Beacon, she decides that, to keep the battle and its combatants in town, and prevent everyone from escaping, it would be better for the barrier and ice to activate, since she is able to cut out of it with her sword, but still, even after it is deactivated, the winter maiden still made it snow there and in the surrounding area.

Raven already had the support of all of Mistral's councilman, except for Leo, who didn't know about her. When the day came, they marched into his office, claiming he was evicted from his position and was to be replaced by Raven Branwen, for the crime of corruption. They decide to execute him on the spot, which prompts him to fight. After the control is taken, the councilman turn Raven into the supreme ruler of Mistral, and becoming her vassals, under the promise of power and riches.

Remember the reason for Ironwood's fall. Whitley going mad, Watts fucking his city up, the Grimm disappearing and causing mass hysteria, the freezing of Vale, the breaking of Vacuo and its eventual fight against help, the Neo-Huntsman, the taking of Argus, Mistral being taken over by Raven and her dictatorship, her possible attacking Atlas, the war about to emerge between the nations. He is mad, worried about all the possible threats, the true maidens, the real maidens, the unknown variables (Whitley's possession.), the powers at play, the suffering of people, everyone denying peace. He breaks as he thinks about what people would obey, what would make them understand, as he looks into his drawer, he remembers, he has his bomb, didn't he? Such an impossible show of power… people would cower in fear of it, and through that fear, he could stop wars, the only one with that power. No one would go to war under the pretense of being gunned down by that power. A sacrifice would be needed, but in the end, that power, that immense power, the fear it would instill… there were no Grimm to be attracted to fear. His greatest enemy, Ozpin, if he was defeated now, it would give him plenty of time until he came back, for him to prepare to take him down, and the people of Argus were merely mindless drones now, perhaps he can even destroy a relic. He sends the order. And while he talks to Ozpin, he tells him about his decision, how the world could not stop for peace, so he would make them wish for it. With weight in his heart, he watches as the planes he sent with the bomb are slowly gunned down, the final one remains, it has the bomb, it reaches close, it is gunned down. The bomb, made out of the same materials as a black box, survives, it falls down, it explodes. Argus and the relic of choice are no more.

The true tragedy of the brother gods surrounds the fact that, they were manufactured. Every god is manufactured to a certain extent, but they were all born from faith, belief, need, given a reason, and powers to mold their own legends and control over their own layers. In contrast, however, they were created from the beginning with the sole objective of being created, they had no free will, the actions they believed to be theirs had already all been dictated from the beginning, two cursed beings whose very existence spelled the beginning of the end for their whole age, whose only actual free action was to be tricked by a witch. Taking away everything from all the others, being hated, having no control over their actions, two puppets with no free will, isolated to a small part of the reverse, left to Suffer as they saw their creations killing each other.

After Blake regains her strength, she manages to open a space large enough for the gods, using her own divine authority. One by one the gods came in and fought her (already thought off gods: Goddes of Faunus unleashes her beasts. The god that molded humanity unleashes a Golem as big as Salem is and fights her off, managing to reach a certain balance. The god of war opens a rend in there with his sword, and plunges it deep into Salem, having the god of Wisdom bind it to her, through his mighty authority. The brother of darkness manifests through the Gollem and absorbs the darkness Salem stole from him(Grimm), finishing it by opening a space for the god of light to unleash his attack on her.), in the end, with her golden hair and red eyes, kneeling in the ground, a sword on her back, chains binding her, Blake runs to her, her fist covered in purple flames, her own power and soul, and she pluges it deep into Salem.
It is said she died after the attack, forever unable to manifest trully again. Though she did try to possess Cinder, the woman's body was not perfect, so even with Crimson Moon's power, she was still mortal.

Remember, since Blake was chosen by the goddess of Fauns as a messiah, she was given an antler on her right side, it is green and shines. Sometimes her eyes shine green, and her body controls green fires, that are actually magical energy materialized.

The Butcher of Branwen, a monster who killed by the thousands. Although, due to his methods, they only managed to identify thirty of his kills as his. His identity was never revealed to the public, in fact, his existence used to be a mere rumor and legend a conspiracy theory, until he was caught and confirmed to be real. He confessed to have killed thousands, but the official number never went past thirty, the truth only being known to a few people. He was officially killed, but the true whereabouts of his body were never revealed, in fear of creating superstitions and attracting Grimm to the area, or possible cults surrounding the body and the man. He was the man who put Leo Leonhart so close to ultimate death (he was dead for a few seconds.) that he became a coward.

There's a scene when Whitley is talking to Penny, and they discuss how a demonic monster of the gods would look like. Penny describes a stark white beast, with the head of a lion, ten tails, those of a scorpion and with the form of centipedes, arms that are a grotesque bend between claws and pincers, a body as strong as a gorilla, but scaly, and full of pinty spikes. A quadrupedal beast, with wings of a bat. Standing over twenty meters tall, its red eyes shined. It would scream "GAO!" (Penny raises her arms and makes a scary face, quite the childish display. Which makes Whiltey laugh.) This is then used as the description for Whiltey's complete demon form. He asks her why white and not black, and she answers that its because she wanted to use his colors in her creation.

Just a reminder, the reason Shoko doesn't die when her heart is pierced is: Her brain still has oxygen, and her time in the memories are on the little time that remains with oxygen. After that, it is the pendant. Also, the world of memories slowly breaks apart the closer to the end the scene gets (to symbolize she is nearing her death.)

While Ozpin can remember and coexist with Pyrrha, not needing to fight for control over the body, since his soul was there since the beginning, having become an extension of her will (as two wills cannot exist in the same body, unless the other will is a derivation of the original). However, he doesn't even fight for the right of existence, Pyrrha just accepts it and doesn't manifest in any way. So, he just freely controls the body, and is able to remember everything (as his soul is already mature enough in that body.). He alters his appearance with magecraft, the red hair turns white, and the body looks like that of a regal woman, wearing a beautiful dress that very generously show her cleavage. She doesn't change this form no matter what, even when she takes over Argus (uses the crown of choice. Didn't use before because having them outside their vault would not be a good thing, but now that Salem's dead, it is all ok). However, when Ironwood releases the bomb, ozpin just realizes death is imminent and leaves her body before dying, his soul goes to the back-up, Oscar. Of course, since he got into Oscar with no previous preparation, he needs to fight for control over the mind, which causes a lot of pain for Oscar, an unwilling casualty, unlike Pyrrha which he could easily take control over, He almost fails to take over Oscar. Pyrrha on the other hand, since he left her body without dying, it triggered the Ciel effect, and she ended up alive after the bomb. However, she had no will to live, she had already given her body to the greater good. She had only one objective, return her immortal body to her master.

Eventually she is found by Shoko, Ren and Nora. By using her MEoDP, Shoko manages to subdue her (killing he vectors or the moving electrons, she says she is able to do this with ease since her eyes were once the Silver Eyes.), however, she does not stop, not until Ren and Nora jump her, with a hug, telling her she didn't have to give up anymore. They decide to help her, since they failed to do that and notice her pain back at Beacon. Shoko agrees, and leaves them to live happily in their house, taking care of Pyrrha. (note, at this point, Shoko doesn't have to follow her geiss, since at the Relic of Destruction's vault, she used her eyes to "kill the effect of the curse over her" but still left it there, like that, Ozpin would still think that she followed him, but she took her own decisions instead. She decided to betray Ozpin, and did not tell him about Pyrrha.) Pyrrha is only able to use MEoDP(not them) is because of Ozpin's resurrections, and develops them because she is able to control the electric charges of the atoms, so she is able to see the path in people through which their atomic form breaks the easiest, though she can only see it in humans, because she can only comprehend humans, as they had a similar composition, atomically speaking, to her. Unlike Shoko's which is the real deal and see lines everywhere.

Shoko got her scroll after buying it (stealing) from a local store after she ran from home, she knew her friend's scroll number, it was noted down and kept inside her imaginary space, although she believes the woman (Cinder) changed numbers. However, Cinder kept her old scroll, even if only to talk to Shoko.

Qrow, after the Raven invasion, disappears (deserts), and meets up with Yang by coincidence. He tells her all the work he had done was for the good of humanity. He doesn't give two fucks about Ozpin, in fact, he is quite disgusted by the man's actions, destroying timeline after timeline, using people as if objects, creating a world based on his vision of what was right. He says that after he was rescued from his self-loathing by Oz, by his years of destruction, he was shown a chance of redemption, of doing anything to save people. He continuously fought, doing everything to rid himself of sin. That was when he noticed the trap of the "greater good", the more you kill, the more you excuse yourself for killing, the more people you make happy, the more you excuse yourself for stepping over others. In the end, nothing would've changed, and you remain a killer like before. That was when he decided to end everything, both Salem and Ozpin, he carefully planned, he would patiently wait until Salem was dead, and then kill Ozpin, when he least expected. But it would be a death for good. He had planned and had the means.

Once, in his youth, he suffered a lot because of his semblance, and origin. His mother died in childbirth, many died because he couldn't control his semblance at first, ostracized and hated. But when you are young, you blame everyone but yourself, instead of accepting the blame for being a monster, being born as he was, he blamed the world, he thought that the world forced him to be like that, that it was the fate of the world that made him be an aberration. So he killed, he killed, he killed. Again and again and again. He believed that for each person killed, more would know what it was like to be him, and more would suffer, the price the world needed to pay. But in the end, when your rage and drive goes away, all that remains is sin. He killed by the thousands, a monster without comparison. He was the worst serial killer in the history of Remnant, never once caught. The Butcher of Branwen.

The methodology in which the kingdoms were created:
-Foreseeing the Mass migrations that would happen, Ozpin and Glynda decided to test and see which approach would be better for humanity to keep on growing.

Vale- A city built one above the other.
Atlas – A floating city,

Vacuo – A bunch of different groups sparwled around, never too big, never too small, anarchy, betting on the "if we are too spread out, there won't be enough joined negative feelings to attract Grimm.

Mistral – Abuse over the terrain.

There were other projects, such as mountain Glenn, trying to see if they could live underground.

The organization of settlements is similar to our world's social hierarchy.

They decided, in the end, that creating a massive, autosufficient colony of floating cities would be the best choice for a plethora of reasons. The main one being, it was easier to survive and prevent attacks high above. They could let the world below be consumed, while they survived in their cities in the sky.

The relic gates are maintained by perpetual motion engines (Gandr Curse).

After Jacques died (had an agreement helping Ozpin with his cities), Ozpin's plans are brought to a halt, and negotiations with Ironwood begin to falter. After Shoko kills Glynda, she picks the schematics and keeps it in her imaginary space. After its all over, she gives them to the Neo huntsman, of course, she keeps a copy for herself, as a token of friendship. She would've liked to access the black-hole bombs schematics, but they had already been burnt away.

-Yang has a geiss on her, preventing her from saying anything to Ozpin.

-To give a true understanding on how much OP Pyrrha truly is. Ozpin claims her to be a goddess, since she is able to freely control atoms, she can synthesize every element, create fire and light, attract thunder, complete telekinesis, and be a walking atom bomb. All this for a ridiculously low price (magical energy), and completely intuitive, normal, natural. So, even after Shoko points it out, that it is mere magecraft, as people could naturally do it all (no matter the effort or time needed), he claims that it all should be impossible complex thaumaturgy, and is instead, some intuitive and cheap single action spell, something like controlling the world as if a god. He wagers he would be able to reach the root with it.

-Ozpin considers modifying his cane to allow him to access only one of his lives at a time (to be able to access Pyrrha without having Gaia throw one hissy fit.), he thought about doing it before, but the time and effort needed were never worth it. But now, he considers it possible.

-Glynda considers using prisoners to generate energy in the floating cities.

-The god of War and the God of Wisdom.

Both hate each other.

After molding humans from clay, the god of wisdom blessed humans with knowledge, logic, the ability to move and think on their own. Yet, they were no more than machines, things that moved without feelings, an extension of the god's will. He claims that "independently from their own history and culture, reason is the same for all, and as they used their same capabilities to think, they all reached the same conclusion." And that "There were no emotions to blind or bind them, they were able to always make the correct choice, regardless of anything." He preaches that things are, they never change, but merely chowed different perspectives of themselves. No matter how much you 'changed' you were still you. Because of that "they followed no laws, yet they all acted the same way, as if following a code. They were, for a lack of a better word, free, condemned to be so. Autonomous, all free and all reaching the same conclusion, and acting on the same way." He claims that in the end, even if you're alone in the world, no one to validate your existence, you were still alive, regardless of anything, because you were you. For war and conflict to stop existing, people should deny their feelings, to put their own self outside the scale of judgement. No one would suffer if no one became emotionally attached and made all their choices based on reason. Deny their feelings, all their suffering, indignation, oppression, they were all meaningless and should be forgotten. To bind everything with his chains, for everything is, nothing could change when bound by it, because it was. The God of War. Enraged by the god of Wisdom's decision and actions. He hated what he did to humans, for him, they were naught but machines, building the world the God of Wisdom wished for, they were not free, but bound by the thing called reason, to have feelings and your own inner conflicts, to be able to think and act according to yourself, your true self born from your desires and feelings, something irrational, something that made you… you, not a machine identical to others. Enraged, he blew conflict into humans. From there, came emotions. Because conflict and change were synonym, they were interchangeable, as something changed, it was because of conflict. And what were emotions if not change and conflict? Conflict within he self, urges, desires, thoughts, all that knowledge. We were constantly and ever changing. With that, humans became unique, past the knowledge and command from the God of Wisdom, they were free, to pursue their own wishes and aspirations, follow their own will, their own contradictions and desires, everyone was unique, and everyone was conflict. War between man came, from opposing perspectives and conflicts, but it was fine by him, that was the nature of existence and change, war happened. You should never deny your own feelings, nor deny your suffering, putting it past you, for if you did, it was all meaningless, to follow your rationality above all, what was the meaning of that? To deny your feelings was to deny your self. Never ignore them, act upon them, your feelings are yourself, your indignation is your drive, what brings conflict and change, but those things by themselves are not bad, they are a part of life, preventing us from becoming lifeless. If no one's around, it nothing is around and you're by yourself, with no one to validate you, there's no meaning in existence, and you might as well not exist. His power, the severing swords of god, that cut everything, bring about all sort of change, for everything must keep moving.

In a war-like room, sitting in a throne of swords, he sits. He loves to scream about following your heart, rage for you know the truth has yet to reveal, fight because your ideals are within reach. Your feelings born from conflict, the conflict forged into you, follow it, for it make you, yourself.

The god of wisdom, a giant eye, covered in a regal eye lid, a purple iris. It stays in the middle of a stark white, enormous library.

The god of Wisdom claims that even if they suffered and were oppressed, they had no right to fight back. The moment they did so, they created a circle of hate, for humans too should be allowed to hate and fight back, if the Faunus could. So that's why, all their suffering and oppression, their hate, it is all worthless and should be thrown away, ignored because it didn't matter, the moment they acted upon it, they were wrong. Only when all dropped their weapons and emotions and though, stopping everything, the world would continue.

In layman terms. The War god is someone that would ascend through beast blood, and the Wisdom god is someone that would ascend through insight.

"My... life's meaning... The meaning... of being born... Merely destroying life will not win me approval... But if so... what use am I to the world...? It is painful... So painful. Why is life... so painful...? Why won't anyone... help me...? I don't need... this world... To eliminate all others and reside at the pinnacle of existence! Yet the battle never comes! This cursed cycle of duty and selfishness! None of us in this world are loved! This world has no need for us! There is only one solution..." ~Penny

In the Heirs arc, Hazel will destroy the Branwen Tribe, after they become aware of Yang and Raven's alliance, since they invaded Haven (in secret) to get to the Maiden's vault, and collect the relic of knowledge. Therefore, the tracker Ozpin put on Yang back when she was leaving Beacon flares up and Leo is notified about Yang and Raven, allowing Hazel to pinpoint their location. In the end, however, the sun is about to come up, so Hazel has to run. Raven begins to rage, and takes it out on Yang. This, and seeing her workshop, and research, and the death of Vernal, makes Yang go rouge, and not go after Hazel. She decides to just leave. She helps Raven because of Leo though.

In the end, however, Raven still proceeds with her plan to overtake Mistral, and after her and all the councilman march into Leo's room, demanding for her to become the ruler and him to be deposed, Hazel comes out, and the fight begins.

Yang fights Leonhart, they discuss about betrayal and hypocrisy, the fact that he was a coward that was given too much power, and the fact that she was a bitch who betrayed everyone, looking for a means to stay alive. They fight over the fact of who was in the right, and if she had any right to be mad at him for betraying her family, if she herself was betraying her own. In the end she wins, because regardless of hypocrisy and the differing situations, nothing can deny ones pain, for everyone is allowed to suffer.

Raven fights with Hazel, he defends the fact that, Humans has no right existing. As the closest who shared an ideal with Salem, he defends that humanity was a curse. While Raven defends that Humanity was not a curse on the earth, but rather, the planet itself created them, now it was its duty to bear their existence, regardless of their sins that made humans hate themselves, the right was theirs to keep progressing, as they were the strongest race (he did taunt her about it back in the tribe, saying "is this the power of the strongest species?" After killing everyone else. In the end she wins, for it was the fate of humans to overwhelm its planet, and become a space colonizing civilization.

Jaune, when fighting against the beast in The Valley. The situation seems lost, Summer is down, Shoko doesn't have the firepower to deal with the beast, and his mana is almost over... that is when he notices, he only learned one thing from Shoko, one thing, one simple thing he could do very well as a mix of origin, semblance and talent, transferring magical energy around. That's when he saw his true potential, and seized it—-! Running towards the beast, he put the sword Shoko modifies into a mystic code, and ran, that sword would amplify and store magical energy, his magical energy was ending but just barely. He baited the lazer attack, and took it himself. He defended it with his sword, and began absorbing it, the deconstruction of magical energy. Soon, his reserves were filled, but he kept going, soon, the sword was also filled, so he used the mana to reinforce himself and the sword, both reinforced to their Maximum extent, not a single inch of their bodies wasn't reinforced. He kept on taking the beam, and was almost filled to the brim again, the nerves in his hand were burnt, his body felt like a thousand shock waves ran through, his sword was shining hot, already hitting its max capacities a long time ago. He felt like dying, but did not stop. Everything he went through until, how people talked over his back, his uselessness, how he was only useful for having his internal organs used, he wouldn't give up now, not now nor ever, this wasn't about living the Arc legacy, it was about himself! Jaune! He took a step forward, but was going to fail, that's when Shoko dropped from the air (using the same spell as before, but using code:repeat to maximize its effects. She fell down on the beat's face, cracking up its mask and making the beam stop, which allowed Jaune to obliterate it with the combined mana he stored. He stood there as the sun shone down on him, standing still, he couldn't feel his hands, he couldn't move a centimeter of his body, but he was perfectly okay, he achieved it, not becoming a hero for the arc, but his own. Honestly, he would've achieved his dream, but happenstance only emboldened Shoko's belief that he would be able to wield the sword, so she kept pressing him, and his lack of pride kept him believing, which made him too dependent on the legacy, so when he was fighting Tyrian and losing, he ran to the relic, instead of standing his ground, and believing in the hero he was, for he knew no legacy could help, he ran towards it believing it to be his only chance of survival. And died.

Later, Ruby and Shoko talk about this, they talk about how he could've won, had he only realized what he achieved in The Valley, and stood his ground, he could've deconstructed the RM of the relic, and used the mana furnaces that kept it moving, and made an attack that rivaled that of the beast. But in the end, it was all Shoko's fault.

Ozpin used the magical circuits of all the dead ancient Huntsman to make the maiden crests.

The beast Ozpin transforms into is almost two kilometers, and as strong as an unofficial Archetype-Human.

Summer abuses the fact that she has a "vendetta" against Raven going on, to always ask how was the development in reaching her, so she could pass it to Raven later on.

The reason Raven trained Yang, was because she wanted an heir. She was sure enough she would basically never die, but accidents and unknown variables happened, in which case, she must have an heir ready, or a plan to come back to life. While the later was still something she hadn't figured out, the former was done, she congratulated herself over the act that she managed to turn Yang into a half decent, barely worth it, heir.

"A sensation as if the contents of the body are being exchanged. The usual nerves invert into circuits transmitting magical energy. He is not a human anymore, but a tool used to attain mystical power.

As if melting by the fingertips. No, to be filled by the fingertips. The mana he takes on is so concentrated that the original senses of the body are being repainted. To be filled is the same as to be destroyed. The powers that fills the body is pure magical energy, absorbed into the body, which has become a circuit, and transformed into a different form of magical energy. His body is nothing more than a circuit.

His body is burning hot.

An image of him being burnt into ash.

An image of all his bones breaking.

An image of his body dying.

As if being underwater.

He starts to sweat, it is as if his whole body was convulsing in pain, shocking his whole body.

The fifth element, said to be unperciveable by the human eye, is before him."

~Jaune against the beast of the valley.

Blake will have a chapter where she is in the territory of the goddess of love, and she is forced to live a happy life with Adam, until she accepts he died and literally kills him, while in tears, to end their love and move forward.

After Penny is set up on a special space, Winter leaves the room (her caretaker and coach.), and meets up with Whitley, waiting for his turn outside, he talks to her, receives the instruction, and then Winter pushes him to the ground with her shoulder, he calls her a whore, and she just leaves with a bad mood.

After the End, in the prologue, we get to know that the ice storm in Vale was not stopping, but in fact, growing. The true maidens seemed more aggressive after Slash Emperor and the cabe were activated.

Ozpin a used and triggered Salem (tricked her) into destroying the moon with him in their fight, both using all their powers. He has grown way stronger since, at least a hundred new extremely strong reincarnations.

Due to the manner both heat and semblances work, here's how Cinder's do:

By actualizing her origin upon the World, she uses magical energy, converting it to the transitory energy known as heat. That's why she needs to be in contact with something, to trade that energy with something else (because heat is the energy that trades between bodies), but she can also use it to energize the molecules in the air. It is the fact that this should need an obscene amount of Magical Energy that tips Glynda to thinking she is the fall maiden. She is able to overpower Glynda's freezing Boundary fields, because while they enact a rule within their boundaries, but she is materializing it upon the world (Cinder) meaning Glynda would need to use something akin to a RM to overpower her (it takes obsece amounts of mana for Conder to do. That.)

-The Neo-Huntsman that Blake wants to create, are not a militia group. They wish to be an acknowledged existence and entity. They want ranks, bases and orders. They want to be like the Jedi council and the United Nations at the same time.

-Reminder for WAR. The reason Raven just doesn't teleport and insta kill Yang, is because the blond has her marble fully and completely internalized, making her almost as if a hole in the reality known as the World. Of course, it made her shine like a sun, and her body to burn like a wildfire, but she could not be teleported to, as Raven needed a stable connection to the World to do that.

-Raven can teleport to just about anyone, it doesn't need to be a particularly strong or affectionate relation. For example, a servant that brings you tea every day, you can hate that person, love them, or be completely uncaring, them being nothing more than someone that gives you tea, someone you would kill and sacrifice without second thought. But it was still a relation, and she could still teleport to that person.

-Notes about the pantheon of gods:
-humans were molded by the god of forgery, molding them up from clay. However, it was the supreme god, the god of Sun, that breathed life into them. Absorbing the sun's powers, the clay dolls became alive. (Told this when she meets the sun god.)

-The god of forgery is a slave, trapped in the throne room of the god of Sun, because he was the one to try and bring fire to humans. (told this when she meets the Sun god)

-The god of War and the god of Wisdom are brothers. The only two kids that were born out of the chief god (Sun god.) and his wife, the goddess of Love. The God of War is the older one (to symbolize how humans, at first, had an almost null intellect, and much emotion, and then developed rationality as time went by.) (We are told this when Blake meets the Sun god, not the meaning, just that they are brothers.)

-the goddess of love, married to the Sun god, lived an unhappy life. Mothering only two children, and being cheated on every hour of the day. Once, her husband even fucked a dozen of girls in their bed, as she watched. (Told this when we meet the Sun god. Yes, this is him bragging.) Although, she is not broken, or monstrous, because of this. She had been deranged like she was from the beginning, and more than once tried to use her charms in the Sun god.

-When the sun god smells the fragrance of the goddess of love on her, he booms out laughing, saying how it was ironic. Back then, people sacrificed virgins, both man and woman, in her name, hopping to get even a slither of her attention, yet, she who achieved it, gave it no more than a disgusted glance.

-The goddess of faunus was one of the lovers of the sun god. More than once, she requested of him, in the middle of their pillow talk, for power for her species. So he granted them the ability to see at night. More than once she asked for more power for her species, so he granted them better reflexes. He wages that the reason Blake was even sent there was for her to gain more favors with himself.

-The faunus, originally a group of humans, enslaved and trapped, locked deep in an underground monument, forever digging, began to pray for her. They prayed and prayed, repeatedly, so, she eventually grew flattered and answered their prayers. She gave them the powers and parts of animals, so they gained their strength and vitality, to defeat their captors. Guided by a priest, the faunus got their freedom, and became a proud species under her rule ever since. (this is the origin story of faunus)

-Important to note: DO NOT make any mentions or allusions to rape in Blake and the goddess of Love affair. Just have the goddess say 'it was fun watching your suffering all that time'. And maybe have her caress Blake's face.

-The Sun god is actually made out of fire.

-The goddess of love is a seductive woman, her outfit barely covers her loins, and the rest is a pure and beautiful silk, emphasizing her form.

-The sun god comments that the god of war and the god of wisdom, if united, could probably defeat him.

-Note about Watts: He wishes to become the supreme existence for knowledge. Because of all the secrets in the root, the different concepts hidden away in other planets, the difference only beings above can comprehend. He is a scientist, and wishes for all answers, to solve every puzzle, and he knows the answer lays in power.

-Tyrian is a rather interesting character. He is aware he is mad, and is in fact quite smart. He is a prodigy, an absolute unit. He could achieve almost anything, so he began to wonder, what was the meaning of life. All life is born and eventually dies, everyone strives to be remembered, yet they'll one day be forgotten. If everyone, no matter who, is fated to that, then why do we live, why do we strive? There was only one answer. The end, death. We only live because we one day die. We only smile because one day we'll suffer. The ending was respite, the safe haven from the torture of life, constantly giving you happiness, only to take it away from you, like dangling a carrot in front of a pig. Everyone would die, life itself was suffering, death was pleasure. That's why he follows Salem, an existence beyond death, someone like that, suffering her whole life, yet being as strong as she is, something like that, it can be nothing more than a goddess. He works for her, for she is his goddess, and he kills people, to spare them from their pain. Of course, he is quite bad at it, so people end up getting a little messy… or is it, perhaps, he is just crazy?

Most of the People in Vacuo walk around on sand hovers.

-Ironwood claims they suddenly had a breakthrough with the black-hole bombs after Whitley's death (Salem killed by Blake, Alaya not being restrained). It is because Alaya gave them a leg-up, giving them the power to understand it all.

-Aoko and Zelretch, when deciding their research, chose the World of Remnant, because Alaya seemed inactive and yet overactive in there (reason: constantly trying to get back in and affect things, yet being barred by Salem.)

During Ironwood's argument with the other councilors in Heirs, the following are some of the passive aggressive comments:
-And let the military suck more of the economy than it already does? Go dreaming. ~chief of finances

-And risk a war? HAH, I'm not allowing this in a million years. ~Secretary of State

-Why don't we just move the police task from you, to the military? We clearly are more effective than you could ever hope to be. ~Ironwood to the head of the police.

-Ang dive more power to you? In your dreams. ~Chief of the police.

-Worried about re-elections, are we? ~someone to the representant of the people.

-I'll not allow this torture over the people. ~representant of the people over the suggestion of martial law.

-We cannot allow this to continue, that whole law was a mistake in the first place. ~representant of people over the recent riots, murders and terrorist attacks (Watts and Whitley.)

I believe I already went and talked a bit about Pyrrha's powers in this story, but just to clarify how it would actually work:

Now, let's establish one thing so that we are in the same page. First off, Pyrrha's semblance is polarity, which allows her to command the force of magnetism.

Now for everyone's favorite: physics. As you might not know, either because you didn't learn, don't care to remember, or didn't pay attention to your physics class, everything is formed from atom. Each atom has a core made out of protons and neutrons, and have electrons circulating over them in different layers. Simple right? Now let's get fussy.

Skipping over the quark section of atoms: Protons are particles charged positively, neutrons are particles charged neutrally, and electrons are charged negatively. Regardless of their mass, they affect each other according to each other's electric charge, therefore, despite being two thousand times lighter than a proton, an electron can neutralize it. And neutrons, as name suggest, don't affect the charge of the particle at all.

It is also important to note, while electrons can transit freely between atoms, protons and neutrons are trapped to themselves and do not move from an atom to another.

Therein comes the concept of polarity. When an atom has more protons than electrons, then it is considered positive. When they have the same number of protons and electrons, they neutralize each other, making the particle neutral. And when the atom has more electrons than protons, the electrons will neutralize the protons and a few will remain, making the atom negative.

This is where the common saying comes from, opposites attract each other. Yes, for those few that lived in a cave and didn't know, the saying comes from a physical principle. Atoms of different charges attract each other, therefore positive and negative attract each other, while those of the same charge, negative with negative and positive with positive, repel each other. Such is why magnets attract and repel each other.

In sum, everything is made out of atoms, which are made of electricity, which have charges, which attract or repel each other, and therefore, everything is made out of electricity.

Now, if you didn't know any of this up until now, you're probably trying to ask why, if everything follows those rules, everything isn't suddenly attracting each other.

Very well asked young padawan. You see, it is the principles of electrostatic, the conservation of charge. If a system is isolated, therefore it will not attract or repel anything, it will merely retain its charge and do nothing.

Now, you must be asking yourself, what it means to be isolated. It means it is not sharing charges with something else through the three methods. Those being: friction, contact and induction.

Beginning with friction. It happens when you rub two things together, and I don't mean that simply. To put it clearly, you could get the smoothest baby's face, it would still have more edges than a porcupine. When two things touch, it is because those little edges are brushing against each other, generating friction, which generates the conductivity of charge.

The second is contact, where two conductive materials touch each other, and their electrons travel from one to the other, hoping to reach the closes thing to an equal charge as possible.

The third is induction, where the pull of electrons is so strong the objects need not touch. But it is useful if they did so.

We must not forget another important thing. Every material has a different coefficient of conductivity, and electrical affinity. This is based on the number of free electrons they have. So, one with no free electrons will not have conductivity and be a pretty good insulator, while one with many free electrons will be a good conductor. Be weary though, if there is an electrical charge strong enough, even something that has no free electrons can be ionized.

As one last thing, that will be important moving on. Did you know, what is the place humans dump their electrons? After all, all those electronics around, they must generate a lot of electricity and could shock someone, isn't that right? Well, we have an out for that, many electronics have the third pin in their outlet exactly for that, we throw our excess electrons away, and they are guided through copper cables to our safe deposit of electrons. It is called Earth-chan. She is the largest number of electrons nearby. You can dump and take electrons from Earth-chan, she won't bat an eye. Such is the reason why, if you are electrically charged, DO NOT touch the ground, you will have electrical exchanges with Earth-chan, and you will die.

Tl;dr (and conclusion of this part.): Everything is made out of electrical charges, and things attract and repel each other based on those charges, be it positive charged or negative charged. There are three methods of charging something: friction, contact and induction. The earth is the biggest number of electrons around, from which we can take and give millions from and to, without worry.

To begin with it, her power, that is, polarity, is (sadly) used correctly in the show. I say sadly, because it means it is also used wrong. Had her power been merely named as 'magnetism' and she had some sort of telekinesis over metal, like a gender-bent magneto, it would be okay, but no, she is repeatedly said to have the power over polarity, which gives her control over magnetism. And she is seen using this power to its true extent, as in the episode 'the best day ever' she is seen manipulating non-magnetic metals, such as aluminum.

Now, I know that how much canon that episode is can be put in dispute, and is more akin to a fever dream Ruby had than an actual thing, but since there's no way to prove that, and therefore it would be a headcanon, we need consider it canon.

Therefore, we can consider that she is canonically controlling things' polarity to use magnetism.

To put it in simple terms (easier to understand with knowledge of the physics.): She is constantly injecting and taking electrons into and from things, so she can alter their electrical charge, taking them away from their isolated state, and therefore making them move in the direction she wants.

Now I'll explain this in detail.

First off, as you know, things with different charges attract each other, and only when they are together in a system. So, Pyrrha needs to begin a sharing of electrons between two things to make them fly towards each other, she does this, as seen many times, without touching things, therefore it is safe to assume she inducts things.

Since we cannot move protons and neutrons, she ins injecting and taking electrons. So, she picks up electrons, moves them to an established object of inducting, and depending on their level of conductivity (objects with high conductivity have their electrons spread around, while those with low, have their electrons stay in a general position in regards to the atom.), she needs to constantly make sure the electrons are pulling the right way, or just doing it once, and adjusting as time goes. All this so she can pull and push, by making objects positive and negative.

This can be seen in the black outlines, let's suppose that's what electrons in high amounts look like (it isn't.). While I believe unintentional, it serves as a good visual representation, as you can imagine them as amounts of electrons. The black outlines represent the electrons concentrated somewhere, the induction, her constantly controlling the charge of atoms around the things she wants.

While, if we consider she just has that much control over electrons, it is easy to believe she can somehow control her body not to equalize in charge with the object she is trading electrons with. But what we need to think about, is where she is pulling those electrons from. Surely, she could give her own, but that would need her to constantly make electrical exchanges with the earth, therefore she would receive electrical shocks every time she used her semblance… unless, she is taking the electrons from the largest reservoir in existence, and just using the Earth's (remnant's).

Okay, so she not only is using the induction method to create a system between two objects, constantly modulating the position of electrons through atomic layers, but also stealing from Remnant and using those electrons to energize things, so that she prevents herself form self-destructing from using her semblance.

Pretty simple, right? Well, this is where she turns into god.

You know that scene with the cans, in 'the best day ever.'? You know all that bending around? Relate that to everything I just mentioned above about how her semblance should work. Yes, can you just see, the enormous amount of energy being spent here? It would be easier for her to ionize the cans and Ruby, and just have them hit each other, but no, she moved each can individually, coordinating the electrons in each one.

You know the scene with the gears, in 'End of the Beginning'? You know how she lifted them up in the air, and kept them like that? You know how much of a waste of energy she was having? She could've just ionized the gears and Cinder, the gears would've flown towards her way faster.

Can you understand what this means? Pyrrha's semblance can wield an impossible amount of energy, and do an impossible amount of maneuvers, all the while her aura is still okay. She had already used her semblance previously in those fights, and even after she did those incredible displays, her aura was still there.

Her power is so cost effective, that it would've been easier to literally pull Cinder apart before she could move, skin her alive, take away all her visible organs, move her around like a rag doll. Remember, everything can be ionized if the electrical charge is strong enough.

Do you understand now? Everything is made out of electrical charges, and she can control those, in an impossibly cost-effective way. She can't just control metal, she can control the world. A volcano could be exploding behind her, she could just ionize the lava, make it go around her, or for all she cares, go to her opponent. Remember, everything is made out of electrical charges. And everything can be ionized if the electrical charge is strong enough.

Pyrrha could've prevented cinder from wielding even as single weapon (you would be surprised by how good a conductor glass is.) could've prevented any spell from hitting her, could've torn Cinder apart in seconds.

This is what I mean when I say she is god. She can control the world to her leisure as long as she wants, as long as her semblance continues as 'polarity' which gives way to 'magnetism'.

And I haven't even talked about her powers to conjure lighting. Screw that maiden and dust garbage, she can just summon lighting on her own.

You remember when I said that protons and neutrons couldn't travel between atoms, and were fixated to the core? I lied. They can, in fact be split under extreme circumstances. What happen when they do? Atom bombs. Now, her being able to do that to protons and neutrons is indeed a bit of a stretch I admit… unless, wasn't there someone who strengthened other's semblances?

Pyrrha and Jaune are not the best team because of a pairing, but because his semblance can allow her to become an ambulant nuke.

This is it, this is the ending of my notes, now, here, what should've been in the AN for the second chapter and the answers to the reviews as I promised.

In the AN, remember to complain about how you were hesitant about putting a Settlement like the one Shoko lived in as an excuse. But then say that since cities like that actually existed you just went "Meh", also complain about the fact that in Remnant, no settlement like (city Jaune forged the Mors 2.0) could exist, as it was not walled, seemed medieval, and would be overrun by Grimm in seconds. And how cities with more tecnological advancements would polarize other settlements with less technology, recieveing various satellite cities. Like, you know, in the real world. Furthermore, discuss the Fact that since the four kingdoms seem to curb their walls so dearly, and building stuff outside of them was suicide, and expanding the walls was even harder, the verticalization rates would be insane, and the creation of floating cities (even safer than walled ones) would be something way more common. But since the (creators didn't think about this), such rewriting is better done in a pure RWBY story, where it can be properly explored, I'll just go with the "It has yet to happen".

Complain about the legitimacy of Finn shots, and how the Wiki's wrong.

Also complain about the fact that Ironwood's semblance being a personality stupid and doesn't mash well with the Lore of the fic. It matches a bit, but not as his semblance. Also complain about Formula jamming being a thing, and how all huntsman were weak to that, and how Tyrian's semblance just got nerfed to a newbie spell. But you have something planned for him.

Answers:

To Zifryt: Haha, well, take care when reading the wiki, it serves as a good base for knowledge, but it is filled with headcanon, so be wary.
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To xfel: Yes, I suppose, it would've leaned more to the general Nasuverse side of things.
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To Lordus: Thank you for your detailed review and compliments, I'm truly glad that even if for a bit, you were able to appreciate my writing. All your theorizing and excitement has been answered, at the very least.
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To The Newbie Guest: Well, yes, the story is filled with monsters. I kinda wanted to write a story like that, where basically everyone is a threat, and everyone is impossibly selfish. And, as you might see in my notes, I had a (if rather contrived) series of explanations for Ruby's behavior. However, if you chose not to read through, a summarized version would be that: No memories and no allotted concept of mother and father, meaning that she knew what a parent was, and craved one, however, no one filled her concept of mother and father, so being told her parents died, while sad for the fact that someone, your parents, died, she didn't feel any particular ties to the situation, so it was all rather dull and only sad because of the situation. However, thanks to her origin and situation, allotting Aoko to the concept of mother was an unconscious and confused decision of someone who didn't know what was what (I believe I knida alluded to this a bit when writing the whole 'That was sand' and 'mother was a feeling' thing)
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To Kozaki09: Haha, well, they would surely appear, not just as soon as you were expecting. In my conception they were a bit too OP for the beginning of the story, and would take a lot of tension away, except for the part where the users almost die from using it, however, that wouldn't fit well to the whole character of Shoko/Ruby.
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To Prototype Gear: Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad my setting managed to be something special for a few people.
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To Pyroben851: Nope, while she is mostly associated with being his teacher, Aoko only met him two times (excluding Melty Blood), and their friendship bases off of "That one friendly kid I made a connection with by chance." Were I to bring more Nasu characters, they would be more connected to Aoko, like Zelretch, Alice, Soujuurou or Touko.
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Guest: Thanks for the kind words, and your theories have been answered… kinda. Well, most of it was right on the money, so congratulations!
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To saelinne: Well, yes, she could only do the things allowed by her RM, although they were way more than Shirou can do, she ended up a bit messed up in the head though.
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To TalonScythe: Thank you for all the kind words, I'm truly glad you liked my premise. I hope you at least liked what I put up with the notes.
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To Guest: Thank you for the kind words. Yes, she would've died in a normal circumstance (and it is in fact 50m), however, she managed to bullshit her way through.
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To all of you who read 'till here, I am truly sorry, my disappointment comes from the bottom of my heart, with myself above everything else. I hope this at least manages to give some of you some closure, since I know the feeling of never getting to know what was going to happen in a story.