Chapter 1 welcome to the mayhem
I said that I would make the chapter taking place in the vytel festival however me and evolution-50
Decided to make it more original and different than the original Doomsday on Remnant so here it is on volume 6-7. Doomsday begins his path of destruction and here it is, his introduction to Remnant.
The damaged frigate floated through the cold vacuum, its hull burning through the planet's atmosphere.
On the planet's surface, a pack of Beowolves wandered along the plains, grunting and growling. Fearsome bipedal humanoid beasts with wolf skull-like heads and hellish orange eyes, the Beowolves were among the most dangerous, if not most abundant of the Grimm that haunted the planet. Looking up, they watched as the ship crashed, sending a shockwave as it exploded on impact, sending some of them scurrying away, throwing dust and debris into the air as the ship skidded.
Steel groaned as parts of it tore off.
When the dust settled and the Beowolves had recovered from their shock, the creatures curiously approached the wreckage, drawn by something within...
Meanwhile, elsewhere, a town bustled with activity.
People went about their lives as while a small group consisting of five girls and two boys wandered through a market, taking in the various sights and smells.
The leader of the group was a small girl with medium length black hair, her eyes silver in color.
Dressed in a long red cloak with a hood, her long-sleeved light gray shirt was lined with black belted cuffs near the ends of the sleeves.
Over top of the gray shirt itself was a black pinafore with two vertical lines of red stitching that made it resemble a corset, while a red skirt with a large black print of a rose emblem on the side and matching black tulle underneath complimented the ensemble, her legs and feet clad in black stockings with similarly colored boots.
"You seem to be in a good mood," Jaune, a tall youth with messy blonde hair and dark blue eyes, said beside her. Dressed in a black hoody with a white chest plate, blue jeans, black boots and an orange sash tied around his waist, he looked like a young knight or a young knight in training.
Ruby shrugged as she adjusted her red cloak.
"Well, today just seems like a nice day," she replied as she looked around.
"Yeah, I know what you mean, sis," the third member of their group, Yang, nodded to her right. Ruby's half-sister, Yang was a tall girl with long wavy blonde hair, her lilac eyes gleaming with amusement, her clothing casual, consisting of a brown jacket and black jeans. "I don't know, there's just something in the air, you guys. Can you feel it?"
The fourth member of this group, Weiss, a girl close to Ruby's height with long silver hair done in a ponytail and light blue eyes, clicked her tongue thoughtfully.
"I guess," she shrugged, looking down in annoyance as she raised up one of her grey wedge heels, spotting gum on the soles of her shoe.
The most elegantly dressed within the group, her short, glittering dress possessed a color gradation of gray blue to pale blue at the hem, with a sweetheart neckline and a white, tulle petticoat.
A white sash was wrapped multiple times around her waist, while over the outfit itself was a slightly sheer long-sleeved gray blue bolero fastened at the collar with a large sapphire broach that had three pendants dangling from it, the jewelry matching her sapphire drop earrings.
"You have to admit, Weiss, it is a nice change of pace," the fourth member of their group, Blake, spoke up.
The only Faunus member among them, Blake was average in height with long black hair, a heart-shaped face and a pair of cat ears at the top of her head, her wide amber eyes taking in everything around them.
Outside of a few people arguing here and there about prices, parking or whatever, people really seemed to be getting along, human and Faunus alike. She only wished that days were more like this for her people...
Her long white tailcoat fluttered in the breeze, the girl shivering slightly as she pulled the coat in over black crop top with diamond cutouts in the neckline.
"You okay, Blake?" Yang asked.
Blake nodded absentmindedly.
"Yeah, I should have gotten a warmer top on, that's all." Her eyes softened at the sight of everyone around them. "Aside from that, though, everything seems fine. No Grimm, no White Fang. No Salem..."
Yang nodded thoughtfully, then beamed. "I think today might be the start of a really good day!"
"Yeah!" Ruby grinned. "OOH, ice cream! Who wants to get ice cream?"
Nora and Ren only shook their heads, following their comrades as they tried to catch up with the overly energetic girl.
The Beowolves cautiously approached the smoking ruins, sniffing the debris. Hearing a crash, the creatures reared their heads, their ears perking up.
Snarling, the beasts bristled, barking loudly as a section of the hull was bent outward.
From inside, a rage-filled roar answered, the hull bending more and more with each impactful blow.
Packs of Beowolves gathered, snarling, barking and growling as the pounding grew louder, harder.
Finally, a spiky grey fist punched straight through the metal, causing the packs to go into a frenzy and lunge.
Smoke filled the sky as the air became punctuated with violent cracks and loud whimpers.
A lone Beowolf whined as it ran for dear life, looking over its spiked black shoulder as it sought to avoid the monster from the vessel.
It had watched its brethren being slaughtered, and now the demon was in pursuit.
It ran as long and as hard as it could, but this beast was gaining, and very quickly.
The Beowolf yelped as a strong hand grabbed him by the back of the neck and lifted it up into the air, the Grimm shrieking and whining as it was torn apart piece by bloody piece.
The air was still as the figure rose, his spiked fists tightening with rage.
Doomsday has come.
As the beast throw the cereus remains to a tree where it disintegrated along with the bloody body. He march to a city nearby and as the Ancient kryptoian monster roars he launch himself from the mountain and constantly leaping to the city island known as the former capital of Atlas 'Mantle'
Meanwhile
On the next morning after that. since learning from the relic of knowledge's avatar Jin about Ozpin and Salem's past as well as the fact that there's no suched things that can kill Salem. Everyone was horrified, disgusted, and angry about Ozpin of keeping this a secret all of it however, after a falling out with Ozpin, Team Rwby, Qrow and a mysterious elder lady journey with Oscar. To where the direction the train went it took hours to journey through the harsh cold climate until they found an abandon village where they decided to stay for the rest of the night and because of the blizzard. They soon discussed what to do when they go to Atlas, as Ruby goes to bed, Yang and Blake were at the garage as Yang works on her motorcycle "hey I want you to know that I'm leaving you back Beacon." " it ok Blake, I'm just glad to have your back here."
"what happen back at Beacon, I was scared, scared what Adam will do to you to make me suffer." Yang left out her hand to assured her "hey, it ok it just that I forgive you and I'm over it." Blake nodded in reassurance, "good, because I won't let anything happen to you." Said Blake which didn't sit well for Yang who storm off, saying "don't need you protecting me." She yelled and slammed the wooden door closed leaving Blake alone who felt ashamed of herself then she saw Adam in a cloak and she rub her eyes to see it's a illusion and he disappeared. She knows that only a matter of time till Adam get to her and Yang, unfortunately however she could shake the feeling that something else is looming a cold feeling a unnatural feeling something else, something far more powerful is here nearby and she couldn't shake a feeling of dread and a bit of fear.
Meanwhile at Salem and army of Grimm.
Salem have gotten world of untold destruction from the Grimm as they were attack by the beast in a crashed spaceship near Mantle and Atlas. She orders Hazel to investigate the crashed ship, via through the Grimm message that at as a two way call Salem then contacted Watts and Tyrians to alert them and proceed with cautioned as Hazel will reported to Salem as soon as he get confirmation of the crashed craft.
As the henchman Hazel, moves in thanks to the bulkhead ride he saw a great destruction of trees and saw an pale white chalk skinned individual with a punk leather jacket, he's also a imposing figure. As well as the ship. By the looks of it, it looks like a floating motorcycle. He tries to sneak into one of the trees when a twig snapped underneath.
This alerted the pale white skinned man who stopped scavenging the parts and done 'ah' and whistle to his motorcycle which its moved towards to and he grabbed a strange looking gun and turn to Hazel his eyes are red and he has black eyes marks on his face , he fired the gun and red bolt of energy was coming Hazel fast and Hazel done a barrel rolled in a split second to the left but exposed himself to the opening, no longer hiding in the shades or taking cover behind the trees he was reveal to Pale white man. He saw more red energy bolts firing at him and he rolled away just when the shooting cease he was ensnared by the Hook chain, has the hook also penetrated his skin Hazel groaned in pain but he got over it, pain is something he learns deal with it but he was pulled by the White chalk skin man. However, Hazel uses his own strength to pulled the chalked skin man toward him sending him flying towards Hazel who at the last second when the man got closed enough and with a little timing of his attack Hazel uppercut the chalk man. Which seem him fly hitting his floating motorcycle.
Hazel walked up to him then heard laugher that coming from the white chalk skinned man who got up and was laughing at Hazel as if amused. "who or what the hell are you." Said Hazel the Chalked man laughed then answer him. "named Lobo, and you just make this a little fun for me." Said the man now known as Lobo wrapped the chained around his arms and pulled out dual wielding Octagon shapes muzzle pistol from a hidden part of his jacket and fired red energies bolts at Hazel. Who dodges multiple Substantial shots, then Hazel quickly grabbed the lightning dust crystals and shoveled the pair into his arms and fired the bolt of yellow lightning bolts at Lobo but the chalked skinned man dodges them until one hit him in the chest as electricity surges with within him causing him go down in one knee.
This allows an opening Hazel needs to put an end to this he ran and tackle the man and started punches him repeatedly at the face. However, the man in white grabbed the punch right hand his left one, squeeze it, crushing the bones of his hand, twisting the right wrist as Hazel yelled in pain and finally Lobo delivers a more devastating and stronger punch at Hazel's face. Sending the man flying at several feet from the Crater. Hazel crushed straight to a tree, breaking it in half, he felt that his skull was fractured somewhat, several broken ribs cages when he hit the tree and he felt his aura dissipate. Then he heard a strange engine sound and then he realized its Lobo's motorcycle coming right him he saw the Mad man flying toward him and he barely dodges the motorcycle from hitting and smashing the remain of the tree Hazel struggle to get up, however The Mad man Lobo blast him with his Octagon shape muzzle blaster and the blast hit Hazel.
It blown a hole into the right shoulder deltoid causing the Salem's henchman to clutches his wound then another blast hits him at the left knee caps blown a hole in it. Causing Hazel to kneel on the right ok knees he looks up and saw the disappointment in Lobo's eyes and face "hmph, maybe you're not a challenge after all. Either way that teaches you to mess with the Main Man himself. So, I going to asked this once" Lobo said as he came walking at the crippled Hazel, he then grabbed a device and a hologram display a horrible looking monster with bony spikes on its shoulders, knees and having a bony bread and a hair ponytail. "Do you know where this bastish gone?"
Hazel looked at it for a sec then said "I was here to look for whoever cause the Crater and destroyed a nearby village that is across us." Lobo sighed putting the circular pad away to his jacket, "it's worth a try" he turn his back at Hazel then return his attention to him while aiming the blaster at him, "oh, I forgot one last thing." He fires the red bolt at Hazel head blowing a hole that big enough to reach his mouth, killing him instantly. As the corpse fell to the right side. Lobo laughed "ha, mess with the Main Man and get a laser to the face bastish."
He went to the Spacehog and then it lifts up to the air. Lobo sighed "well that didn't help, maybe I should have let alive long enough to tell to find the nearest city. It a good start now where I could find that bastish" Then a alarm rang was sound a few hundred miles away from the Crater. Lobo saw smokes coming to a nearby city which underneath a floating city and he could see a tremendous amount destroyed building and the whole city is burning. Lobo smiles "look like this, isn't hard after all. Ha, ha man it going a hell of a ride killing you Bastish." As the bounty hunter Flies in high speed to find the bounty
This Lobo has the voice from the superman: man of tomorrow animated movie, the look of his appearance and the appearance of his space hog in the DC Rebirth XM studio Statue that you could b it in the XM studio website, but be warned its a thousand bucks to buy it.
Also, I all his powers and abilities are mostly in Post-crisis and Rebirth. Anyways I need a little help and no I don't need a co-writer, but ideas of what I should be taking the direction of the story, since my co-writer Evolution-50 decided leave since he too busy with school work and other stories of his. He told me it was too much for him so I respect his wishes.
Anyway, I just need ideas of fight scenes between the Main man and the monster that killed superman as well as their fight against team Rwby and their allies. Also, Salem and her forces as well to really bring out the characters of both villains as well as making more believable. So happy April and remember help me identify mistake in my writing and construction criticism are welcome, but insults are not.