AllTimeReader - i will be adding this in climax accident kese hua kyu hua kisne kiya kesse kiya kya ho raha ha sab ae ga :D
Single piece - random guess karke story bata di but I never mind as way of presenting, dialouge agge kya hoga climax interval sab mayne rakhta ha plot maximum story ka same hota ha or yarr ajj update nahi mila kya baat ha ?
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Dr.s - k..k..k..kya bola purvi ne
Acp nodded in no
Acp - wo..wo..kal aa rahi salukhe ghar aa rahai ha meri beti pehli bar
Dr.s - yeh toh khushi ki baat ha tum udas kyu ho
Acp - vo mujhe papa yah dad nahi bulato salukhe...
Dr.s - pradyuman honsla rakho dekhna ek din vo bolae gi
Acp - ek shart ha uski ek mokka dena chahti ha vo yeh sab vapiss ke liye..
Dr.s - kya ?
Acp - kisi ko raste par lana ha
Dr.s - matlab
Acp - pata nahi..yarr salukhe mera ek beta hospital mein or ek purvi ha mein kis taraf jau samjh nahi aa raha ha..
Dr.s - pradyuman purvi 10 saal baad lauti ha tujhe hakk dene cid mein se koi nahi janta usse na vo janti ha..toh cid wale teri madat nahi kar pae ge tumhe apni madat purvi ke mamle mein khud karni hogi or rahi baat daya ki toh daya ke liye hum ha team ha..
Acp - daya bhi mera beta ha salukhe..
Dr.s - pradyuman daya mere bhi bete jessa ha tum vishvass rakho meun ek doctor hu science par vishvass rakhta hu lekin there is power beyond science usse bhagwaan kehte ha...bhagwaan se prathna karo sab theek hoga or rona band karo beti aa rahi ha kal tumhari chehre par muskan rakho
Next day
A car stop up front of house..a girl got down and removed her goggles looked at the house and sighted she took out her phone and dialled..
In house
Acp - yarr m..m..mujhe n..n..nervous feel ho raha vo kesi hogi..kis par gayi hogi..
Dr.s - pradyuman teri beti ha tujh par gayi hogi
Acp - daya kesa ha ?
Dr.s - doctor se baat hogayi ha usse shaam ko hosh ae ga..freedy pass mein ha...
Suddenly acp phone rang
Acp - hello
Purvi - Mr pradyuman mein apke ghar ke bahar hu
Acp - beta yeh tumhara ghar ha andar ajao na
Purvi - no way i request ki app bahar ae or hum kai bahar baat kare..or mein ghar tabhi aungi jab kaam ho raha hoga
Acp - theek ha beta m..m..mein bahar ata hu..
He ran outside and found her daughter after many years standing in front of her eyes his eyes become teary seeing her..she was beautiful purvi down head and sighted
Purvi - bethiye andar app Cafe chalte ha
Acp sat with her in car..she started driving car..but acp was silently looking at her with small smile
Acp (pov) - bilkul mujh par gayi ha meri bachi...garv ha mujhe..meri bachi par..(to purvi ) purvi beta tum kaha rehti ho matlab kya karti ho
Purvi - study and internship together..maa ke ghar rehti hu mein..
Acp - (excited) tumhara sapna kya
purvi ignore the question acp felt hurt she stops the car..
Purvi got down acp followed her
in cafe
Purvi - Mr.pradyuman mujhe ek admi ko line par lana ha Gunda hai vo..
Acp shocked
Acp - kya hua beta kuch kaha kya usne naam mujhe arrest karwata hu usse kadi se kadi saza na di toh mera naam bhi pradyuman nahi beta..tumhe khraroch tak nahi ..(but he shocked listening something)
Purvi - I love him...shaadi karna chahti hu mein usse..
Acp - s..s..sh..sha...di..g..g..gu..Gunday s..s..se
Purvi - yes I love him and he also love me..but mein chahti hu usse line par lae app
Acp - (angrily) purvi mein tumhari shaadi ek gunday se yeh mein Hargiz nahi hone du ga sreh acp pradyuman ki beti ho tum or ek gunday se shaadi
Purvi (meaningful) - vo hi toh galati ha meri ki mein acp pradyuman ki beti hu mein kabhi aram se nahi reh sakti najane kon uthakar ACP ko blackmail karde app mujhe kabhi support nahi karasakte kyuki app ACP ha...kabhi time par nahi aa sakte kyuki app ACP ha
Acp - beta m..m..meri duty ha samjho
Purvi - humesha duty ai ha apki beech me..ek din bhi chahe Sunday chahe Monday.
ek baat kahu toh mein apke pass lotna nahi chahte thi lekin ladke ko mere pariwaar se milna tha isi liye mein yaha ai..kyuki agar mein usse kehti ki mein anath hu
Acp - (shock ) anath !! purvi mein zinda hu anath nahi ho tum
Purvi - maa ke baad anath hui hu mein samjhe app ek baar phone tak nahi kiya ha apne yaad ha hall chal tak nahi pucha mera
Acp - (down head) - vo darasal number nahi tha
Purvi - acp pradyuman number dhund pata apni beti ka..yehi karan ha yah app itne salo tak acp ki duty nibhate rahe yeh karan ha ki mein yaad nahi ai yeh karan ha
Acp - mene tumhe humesha yaad kiya ha purvi meri beti ho tum
Purvi - dekhiye Mr.pradyuman mera lover dikhne mein ek gunday ha or mera farz banta ha usse sharif banau..duniya ke samne or yeh kaam mein chahti hu app sikhae usse..as I have no one vo bhi akela ha anath ha koi seekhane wala nahi..
Acp - dekho purvi tum ek gunday se shaadi karo gi log kya kahe ge
Purvi - theek ha agar app nahi sikhana chahte ha toh koi baat nahi mein usse apne ghar lejati hu fir jab log kahe ge ki ek ladki ek gunday ke sath bina shaadi ke ek ghar mein reh rahi ha toh apko acha lage ga..
Acp - purvi samjho gunda ha vo
Purvi - gunda ha kyuki wo wese ilake wase pehrava, vesi bhasha bolta ha , harkate karta ha , badi badi phenkta ha yeh sab badal kar apko usse sahi rasta dikhana ha bus kyuki mujhe shaadi ke baad chaul nahi sheher mein rehna ha or vo bhi chahta ha ki vo apni zindagi sudhare lekin job or busy life style ke karan mein kar nahi paa rahi hu..isi liye agar app usse sahi raste par laa dete ha or meri shaadi ke liye ha boldete ha toh samj jaiye apko apki har galati ki maffi mil jae gi..or sare hakk bhi
Acp - m..m..mujhe waqt chahiye sochne ka..
Purvi got up
Purvi - fine jab soch le ge call karlijiye ga jaldi sochiye ga as I want him..to be my only bahut jaldi hath tham leta ha kisi or ka..isi liye shaadi karni ha usse mujhe
Acp - c..c..coffee toh pi lo
Purvi - coffee ab sirf tabhi piyu gi apke sath jab vo bhi sath mein ae ga