Hello lovely readers!
I know this is NOT what you wanted but I've decided to make a major turn in writing. After re-reading My Mate in my old documents, I have decided to merge 'Creatures of the Night' with My Mate and create a bigger and better story.
Why am I doing this?
Although My Mate is a good story, it could become SO much better. The characters have so much potential that I just didn't meet and I feel like this story is capable of becoming so much more.
What would the re-write include?
1. Better Characters
-Bella won't be acting like a pathetic child
-We'll get a better insight into how covens work in the vampire world
-More feral and animalistic vampires
2. In-depth background stories
-How did Bella get captured?
-What was Edward like during the werewolf wars?
-Carlisle and the Voulturi's past
3. Vampires are getting a slight make-over!
-No more disproportionate vampires.
-They'll be able to understand humans but still cannot speak the language.
4. More time in captivity
-I want to explore the idea of Edward and Bella spending more time in captivity.
So with that being said, I need some help.
Should I rename the story to better fit the plot?
My Mate or Creatures of the Night. Or should I combine them?
My Mate Sage: Creatures of the Night.
Please let me know what you guys think! I am going to be working on the first few chapters so I can get them out to ya'll asap!
Thank you guys for being so patient with me!
Lots of love
Alyne
