Necromorphic Hero
Ok so from the looks of things everybody really liked chapter 1, only problem that seems to pop up so far from what people have said is the the issue of One for All killing hosts early.
Also to the user Kronarack45 who sent in this review: 1. Que sea Momo(porque es la única que parece capaz de entender el quirk de izuku) o una de las chicas 1B la razón es porque estoy cansado que siempre a Izuku lo emparejan con una de las chicas del 1A 2. Que Eri se salve, tarde o temprano no importa, pero que sea epico
I am sorry to say I do not speak this language and google translate was being unhelpful in the matter so I am sorry that what you have asked can't be addressed right now and if someone is able to translate this it would be greatly appreciated.
The votes are as follows so far:
Pairing:
Momo: 6 Melissa shield: 1 Mina: 2 Tsuyu: 1 Ochako: 2 Toga: 1 Jirou: 1 Someone from 1b: 1 Nobody: 1
Eri rescue status: Early: 9 Same as cannon: 2 Later: 1
Chapter 2: After school Questions
Izuku sighed softly as he waited at the gates for his cousin to arrive so they could take the train back together. Kinoko had recently moved in with him and his mum since her parents lived too far away to make travelling to school feasible. His father Hizashi Midoriya and his aunt Hanabi Kamori were siblings. His father had the quirk called molding in which he could control the speed at which microbes could grow from extremely fast to snails pace, he worked as a on site doctor at a oil rig near India where his quirk was more useful at stopping algae growing on the rig as opposed to fighting any flues the workers got. His aunt had the quirk spore which aloud her to control spores, her control was limited to how they moved however and she couldn't do much unless she was in the middle of a flower field, even then she could at best make a small cloud of spores. She worked as a botanist with her husband Kinrui at an indoor farm located on the east coast of Japan that grew most of the east side of the nation's vegetables and edible mushrooms. Kinrui had a quirk called Fungus that just aloud him to manipulate how a mushroom developed, from tall and skinny to rounded and flat, his only limitation was he couldn't make poisonous mushrooms edible or edible mushrooms poisonous.
"Oh, Midoriya, are you waiting for someone?" Momo asked as she walked over, her book bag tucked neatly under her arm as Iida followed her robotically. Shinsou sighed tiredly as he was physically dragged along by Ochako who had him by his wrist.
"Hey, green, wait up!" A girl's voice called before he could answer. Turning they quickly found Kinoko who was blushing while holding a bag upto her face and a girl with long ginger hair tied in a ponytail similar to Momo's who was with her. Behind them the ginger haired girl was dragging an unconscious blonde haired boy.
"Oh, hi Kinoko." Izuku smiled politely. "Are you okay?"
"Shroom." The brown haired girl muttered into her bag as her blush deepened.
"This ass was being a jerk to her." The ginger haired girl explained as she tugged the collar of the unconscious blonde. "Called her quirk villainous before I knocked him out."
"T-thankyou for helping my cousin." Izuku bowed politely with a blush of his own.
"Another one?" Shinsou sighed as he pinched the bridge of his nose. "Whatever, I need to get more cat food for tonight." He added as he walked off.
"I best be getting this idiot home too, I live next door to him." The ginger girl smiled as she too wandered away.
"I should be going to, I have to get dinner started." Ochako explained as she walked off with a cheerful smile. "See you tomorrow Midoriya, Yaoyoruzo!"
"Huh, I kind of expected everyone to hang around a talk more then that." Momo hummed to herself as she held her chin. "Thats how it always went on TV, was this, normal?"
"I have no idea honestly." Izuku muttered back nervously. As they continued on down the road. "Are you taking the train too?"
"Oh no, not really." Momo muttered with a blush. "My driver wanted to pick me up at the gates but I didn't want to show off or anything." She waved it off as they went through the alleyway that was a somewhat common shortcut to the train station. "So, hi, I'm momo." She smiled to the catatonic brunette who had been silently following them.
"Shroom." Kinoko muttered as she hugged her bag closer.
"Geeze, that guy must of been a real jerk to make her act like that." Izuku huffed in concern for his cousin. After all when you put up with bullying for most of your life due to the nature of your quirk you tended to end up one of a few ways, mentally unstable, thick skinned or a nervous wreck. Kinoko ended up the third where as much as izuku wanted to deny it he was probably the first, after all what kind of quirk makes you think painfully snapping your bones and ripping your internal organs to bits was a good thing?
"Oh, does she have the same quirk as you then?" Momo asked.
"Uh, oh no not really, I mean sort of." Izuku muttered. "Her quirk is a fair bit different to my onw but similar its actually ca-"
"I-its ok." Kinoko muttered cutting off Izuku's explanation as she stopped walking making the other to stop aswell. "I know what my quirk does and how bad things can go. I-its just i thought the bullying would stop once I left Tokyo."
"I AM HERE!..." Boomed a buff blonde man in a blue and red outfit making kinoko jump in fright and duck her head while momo and izuku spun around to face the pmman. His hair was styled like antennas as he dropped down from above, his fists clenched and at his hips, elbows and legs wide as he gave a million watt grin. "...TO TALK TO YOUNG MIDORIYA!"
Izuku could only let out a half excited, half nervous squeak as he gained an atomic blush and fell over backwards, a smile on his face.
"Ah geeze, I didn't expect him to faint." The blonde panicked as he went wide eyed in shock.
"All might?!" Momo cried aloud.
"THAT IS CORRECT YOUNG LADY!" the blonde laughed boisterously. "NOW I MUST SPEAK WITH YOUNG MIDORIYA!"
"He's not a villain." Momo frowned sternly. She herself had been accused by several heroes of the crime of counterfeiting currency since her quirk was creation and her parents were rich. As part of an agreement with the government she wasn't even aloud to carry and coins or cash on her at any times and she had to use cards for everything. It was entirely one of trust but given her quirk's potential to crash the economy it was necessary, much like the small and thankfully easily hidden radiation tracker on her leg, she had to wear it at all times to make sure she didn't make nuclear weaponry which was a concern brought up by the defence minister.
"BE THAT AS IT MAY YOUNG YAOYORUZO I STILL WISH TO TALK." All might stated confidently. Inside he was on the verge of having a panic attack. All heroes in the top 10 were given a list of high risk quirk users in the nearest hero school to their patrol locations for in the event of an out of control quirk and he had stupidly put it off until just a few hours ago. The high risk ones were Izuku Midoriya, Kinoko Kimori, Katsuki Bakugo, Momo Yaoyoruzo, Shoto Todoroki, Shinsou Aizawa and Mei Hatsume.
Some were quirk threat based dangers such as Izuku, Katsuki and Shinsou while Shoto, katsuki and Mei had personality issues that could lead to dangerous situations. Katuski had a massive ego and an anger problem, Mei had no inhibitions and Shoto had been abused but sadly since the head of child services was in Endevor's pocket there was little they could do for now. Momo and shinsou were the only two on the list who fell under economic danger with momo being able to make anything and shinsou being able to merely ask for something and it would be given to him.
"You better not hurt him." Kinoko frowned.
"I ASSURE YOU I AM- BLERG!"
End.
Remember the votes: When should eri be rescued and who is to be paired with Izuku.
If anyone knows how to translate that comment it would be greatly appreciated and you don't need to spam the translation, only one person putting it up will be fine.
