A/N : Rewrite coming on Saturday which is essentially tomorrow, I've been reading some of the reviews, and whilst some was encouraging, most of them were quite sad. So I'm going to get this out there, IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT, THEN DON'T READ IT! I will still be taking constructive criticism in fact, the reason for this rewrite is because I found one or two reviews that actually helped and brought me out to my senses, but the rest are just a bunch of bullshit so I hope you remember that I'm just doing this for fun so take that stick out of your ass.