Thank you for reading my first chapter. I can explain about hachi's eyes in this chapter. This story was a tricky one for me, English was not my native language.
Mystic eye of death perception :
This eye was a type of mystic eye that considered to be a myth even among supernaturals. (yes, they exist, heavy dxd and fate elements are the things I'm going to apply.). It's color was rainbow.
The Mystic Eyes of Death Perception can be called a circuit that opens up in the brain and eyes to allow the user to "perceive death," the conceptual "Death of an Existence,". Rather than "seeing," it is more like they are "observing" everything at a higher level.
Death" is invisible to normal people, only accessed through perceiving the natural flaws with overly strong spiritual sight by looking through channels that normal people cannot perceive.
This eye doesn't reach it's full power for hachiman because he have only one of those eyes. So he can't kill any living things, only hurt them but he can destroy non living things.
Now let's get to the story
Chapter 2
Hachiman hikigaya was now in shock and pain. Pain because of his broken hand. Heavy shock because neither the accident or because he helped someone eventhough he have his self proclaimed selfishness. He got to see something for the first time in his life. he saw an emotion he never expected to see in his life. He saw two girls trying to help him stay awake showing that emotions.
It was neither pity or disgust.
'it was concern and gratitude ' hachiman watched in awe even with the tears from the pain. He never expected in his life he would see it in another's person's face other than komachi.
Why, because hachiman was no one's favourite. No one's best friend. No one gave priority to him.
His parents always preferred komachi. It was open to everyone . Everyone say parents don't show favoritism to their children. But it was a blatent lie told by losers who never got to go outside.
His father threatened him to not get too close with komachi, he always thought it was a joke but one day his father hit him seeing he was carrying his sister on his back. His mother didn't even consoled him that day. On that day he cried to death and he got to hospital. But his parents just put him in the hospital. His parents only paid the money to take care of him and didn't even bothered to visit him. Seeing they didn't even try to help or understand him hachiman was very scared of outside . His only way of getting happiness was komachi and reading light novels. He didn't even know what he interested or what he was specialised in due to his introvert nature.
Despite all this he wanted to make friends and get a girlfriend until that middle school incident happened. It always leaves a scared.
In hospitalDespite being in untolerable pain, hachiman never went to slumber, his mind was still in awe by the emotions that directed to him by the two girls.
Suddenly he felt something moves inside his wounds. He can't see it, because he can't even move his eyelids. Something stops him from moving anything.
'It feels like someone stitching my wounds, but... It is impossible!' Hachiman thought to himself. Before he even finish his thoughts his wounds were healed and his broken bones were joined.
Hachiman was shocked by this. 'it was not... I mean it was definitely not normal, it is a dream, I want to pinch myself, but I can't do it. did the chuunibyou striked me again? .'
Hachiman tried to stand up. But suddenly his body becomes numb. 'I feel like like a docked boat '.
He didn't feel the bed or even his body. He can only hear what the doctors were saying.
Doctor: " did someone contact his parents or guardians"
Nurse: "we contacted them... But"
Doctor : "don't swallow the words, tell me, is it that bad?"
Nurse : "no, they... said they were busy, so they only send money for the treatment"
Doctor : "Are you saying there were parents like this! The boy was in a coma, it takes like minimum half month or more to wake up, what else did they say?"
Nurse : " T-they..."
Doctor : " they what?".
Nurse: " they said just finish his treatments and after he cured just send him home. "
Hachiman sighed sadly. It was not unexpected. But it was cruel to hear that they didn't even wanted to see him when he was in a coma.
Hachiman really felt tired to deal with that shit now. He then realized the reason why his mind was the thing only awake was due to his longing for seeing his parents love. After realizing that he didn't going to get it, his mind relaxed and he went to slumber.
In the dream:
Hachiman entered his dream space. The place where he see same dream everyday.
But he had no idea how that dream itself changed and how it was going to change him.
Hachiman saw something was different in his dream now. He was arrived in the dream's end. He was already in whatever that the place called. 'I think it was unlimited blade works'.
Hachiman now can completely see the place in 360 degrees. 'wait I can move inside'. He them saw the place the two persons were fighting. It looks like a desert but was a wasteland. It have many swords shoved into the land. But it feels like they was not belong to this place.
Now he saw the two men who was fighting and he listened to them. Hachiman saw that he was behind the white haired man and it seems he can't see the other person.
The white haired man seemed angry "you have to die shirou emiya, your ideals are my enemy." He then started to create something out of thin air 5 meters above his body. It as swords, not some swords. It was the biggest sword hachiman ever seen his life. The swords then launched itself to attack the other person.
But no impact was happened. Then he heard the other person speak. " I'm not the shirou emiya you want counter guardian. I'm neither a hero nor a saviour. I'm just a blacksmith who fused with this boy and became a pseudo servant. My name is shirou muramasa Emiya . Now scram, before I hurt you brat."
Hachiman was weirded out by the voice. It was a teenager's voice but the way he talks was like an old person. But shirou feels like he heard the voice. And he was how the person was talking similar to him. Only the voice was different. ' do I know him?' he thought with a hope of the teenager being his ancestor.
" hurt me, you was just a spirit fused with a boy. I will kill you now to end your ideals."
The counter guardian was very angry. He now produced two similar short swords in his hands.
Kanshou and bakuya
A name was appeared in front of the loner's eye. It was the information about the swords.
Hachiman was showered with information.
Hachiman learned that the swords were married I mean literally married'. He learned that the swords were made with the thought of nothing. The swords will always return to each other due to being created by the sacrifice of a couple.
' how! how did I know about that swords, I never learned and have no experience about swords. The informations suddenly flowed into my mind automatically, is it real!. I've only read in novels appraising weapons like this will happen, maybe it was a just a dream. So let' s see more'. Hachiman found a newfound sensation. He want to know more about this.
He then turned to see the man launched himself to the boy. Now, the counter guardian was aside, he can now see the other person. That person was a red haired boy.
He was shocked to see that the person have same red hair as him. That boy have well developed muscles. He wore a shoulder pad connected with his right underarm and it have a pouch. He also wore a traditional pant that tied with a ribbon cloth. ' he also have a katana' Hachiman jumped with excitement. He doesn't know why the red haired man made him like this. But he wasn't more of the excitement.
When the counter guardian attacked shirou just created a sword like the guardian and blocked it.
CLANK! (sword broke)
" you can use skills like me, but you didn't have the huge amount of mana like me, who was an servant also archer, I'm going to finish this" the now known as archer made his twin swords slightly long and now it look menacing.
Shirou just laughed, it was not a mocking laugh. It was the smile that give confidence to allys and terror to enemies. Hachiman only heard about this smile in the novels.
SWINGGG
Shirou unsheathed his katana. Hachiman was in awe that how clean and sharp it looks. He never seen a katana like this in his life.
Hachiman loved things in secret in his life. It was a secret even to his sister. First He loved cooking. But he stopped doing it when his 'parents' said komachi was better at cooking than him, so he should stop it. Hurt by their words he stopped cooking for them but he always cooked in secret without their knowing. Next he loved dragons, his favourite stories were always about Camelot legends and he loved tokugawa stories because of his third secret. It was swords. He had an hate and love relationship about it.
He then looked at the sheath, it have one hell of a name.
TSUMUGARI MURAMASA
' Is it the legendary sword that appears in stories and games'
It seems like the archer was petrified by the sword.
Archer : "bastard, where did you get the sword?..." Then he laughed. "Well it doesn't matter, you are just a pseudo servant, you are going to perish using something like that without an holy artifact. Emiya shirou died here".
Then shirou smirked " you know who my servant is right? , then you should also know what is inside me or I should say us?". Shirou said smugly.
Archer muttered angrily "Avalon".
Thus shirou begin to chant, archer ran to stop him, but when shirou begin to chant, a huge wave of blazing fire spread from him and started destroying every sword around him. Archer shielded him from summoning a shield called rho aias.
But that didn't help when muramasa started to chant
"I'm not the invincible swordsman,Jūbei,
I'm not the one praised as a master of espionage,Hanzō,
I'm not the renowned casterAbe no Seimei.
Why, out of all people, I, a swordsmith, was summoned.
For being unable to foresee that, this is your defeat.
Once seeking for the ultimate blade.
A blade of steel cutting no flesh, nor bones and neither life.
What I seek for is the clearance of resentment.
The cutting of bonds, fate and destiny.
That is, to free oneself from Karma.
Upon one's arrival are countless tools.
Carved over a thousand blades, forming a pile of swords.
This is the place where all paths cross.
This is the place where all desires flow.
This is the place where all deaths await
My whole life was for this single swing.
The heart of the blade is right here!
Take this, This is my Tsumukari Muramasa!!!".
Then shirou muramasa just singed his sword. Hachiman don't see what happened, but then
CRACKKK
The sky inside the reality marble broke down and at the same time he saw archer dissolving into thin air with a blue light.
Now the dream ended, hachiman was now found himself in a space surrounded by darkness.
His mind is full of what happened there.
"that was cool, can I do something like that, I have some powers right?". Hachiman asked himself.
"you can't". A voice said.
" I know, but it was cool and looked rea...l, wait! who are you?"
Hachiman turned to see it was shirou who seems somehow nervous.
"you are s~shirou right? , I have some weird power too, why can't I do it?" hachiman asked shirou which surprised hachiman himself. 'why am I asking a stranger and why I'm comfortable around him?.'
'"You can't, but you can do better things than me." shirou answered with the same nervousness.
' what is written this familiarity! , can I ask him?'. Hachiman decided to ask him.
" Do we know each other? , I don't know how to put it, but it seems i sense something between us." hachiman questioned shirou.
Hachiman never expected that answer, but what shirou answered made him confused and happy. " of course, you sensed, you are our son after all". Shirou dropped the bomb.
Hachiman never even imagined that louder sound would came from his mouth. But he did.
" WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT?" Hachiman loudly asked.
" I'm sorry, I'm your father, I can only tell you this, you can ask more in avalon, you are now travelling there, bye bye". Shirou vanished.
Hachiman tried to move, but then he saw he was being approached by a white dot far away. That dot became a circle and hachiman was suddenly swallowed by a white light. Hachiman suddenly fell asleep by the light.
(2 hours later)
Hachiman opened his eyes. He found himself in a bed of grass. " it seems I was asleep. Wait! How can I slept inside a dream? "
"Well let's look around" Hachiman looked around to see he was surrounded by a beautiful scenary. " is it heaven!" hachiman wondered.
"No young man, it was better than that place" a guy answered appearing out of nothing.
"who are you and why are you guys not appearing normally?" . Hachiman asked with mock anger at the white haired guy.
The man chuckled.
" my apologies prince, my name is Merlin. This place is the reverse side of the world, a Neverending utopia, the place where even many gods are prohibited to enter. Welcome to avalon"
Next chapter : what do you mean by mothers?
I've written chapter 2 successfully. I'm not giving unlimited blade works to hachiman.I planned on making him a healing sword master to a god because of his parentage.I also making a crossover with highschool dxd.Pairings and ideas can be suggested by anyone. I'm willing to read comments and develop myself. If you want to ask questions ask in the review section or dm me.So please write a review.
