This is exactly what it sounds like. its the original version I wrote after Grammerly was done with my spelling errors. Again, comment. imma go for twenty five reviews and see what happens.We stood once more, blood gushing from our open wounds. The others are still talking. Why are they talking? No matter what, we can't agree. Then, a flash, and a blade appeared on the other side of my stomach.
"Ddraig, help me!" Our cry was desperate, broken. Then we remembered.
Ddraig was gone.
All of the voices were quiet. And then, for the first time since my personality fractured, I felt all of us agree.
We stood, one more time, more confident than before. We took a step forward. Out of our back, wings appeared.
"You just don't know when to quit, do you?" Shalba taunted. "Then again, you never were sane. I mean come on, Who would actually believe that every thought you have was controlled by different personalities? Sounds like you lost your marbles along time ago. Probably with that girl of yours I killed."
And then it happened.
We took one more step.
And as our foot touched the ground, our black wings began to shed like a snake, and in their place grew wings as white as snow.
In that one moment, we understood. I shouldn't be trying to suppress the voices. We should always speak our mind.
We began to glow, as a soft golden light began to overtake us. It felt a lot like her. Then we smiled.
"BREAK!" Came the legendary call.
Third person.
And when the light faded, Ise's fist was planted in Shalba's stomach. Blood came out of the mans mouth, but Ise looked completely healed.
"WHat, WHAT IS THIS POWER!" Shalba shouted in fear at the thing in front of him.
"We have created this form as the embodiment of that which we have lost. You took away our angel, so we fight on with her power. This is not a balance breaker, because we are the balance. And as for the name of our form, ANGEL GLOW" And with that, Ise charged the retreating Shalba Beelzebub.
what y'all think? should I include it in shi-shi, or should I write it its own fic?